OK, rebubbled
Thank you :3Breeze wrote:
OK, rebubbled
>>01:16:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - To add more whistles should be better because of piano sound. Hum, add to (4)?Suzully wrote:
前回は日本語で書きましたが、僕らは英語で書かないといけないとのことなので今回は英語で書きます。
もしわからない部分がありましたら聞いてください。
[Easy][Normal]
- 01:18:219 (2) - Just nazi though, move it below by some grids. It will look more beautiful.
[Hard]
- 00:20:492 (4) - Refer to 01:33:219 (5). It's better to add claps.
- 00:50:492 (4) - Too loud...as Breeze said, you should turn the volume down to 40% here.
- 00:57:764 (5) - ^
- 01:05:037 (4) - ^
- 01:14:810 (4) - Add finish too.
- 01:55:946 (5) - Same as 00:50:492 (4).
- 02:03:219 (4) - ^
- 02:10:492 (4) - Why no clap here?
- 02:25:946 (1,2,3,4) - Make these notes consistent with ones before first KIAI. This means, adding finishes.
- 02:47:310 (2) - Add a finish to the end.
- 03:04:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 02:25:946 (1,2,3,4).
- 03:24:582 (4) - Clap.
- 03:48:219 (1) - Add a finish to the end.
[Insane]
- 01:05:946 (1) - Seems you forgot to add a clap.
- 01:09:128 (8) - ^
- 01:26:855 (5) - ^
- 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to add claps to all of these notes to follow the strong sound in the back.
- 02:09:583 (1) - Using 0.50xSV gets the player confused a bit. 0.75x is enough and making good effect on playing in my opinion.
- 02:45:946 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4).
- 02:49:128 (5) - Finiiiiiish \:D/
- 03:10:946 (5) - ^
- 03:39:582 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4).
- 03:40:946 (6) - Add a finish to the end.
- 03:48:673 (1) - ^ to the top.
修正が終わったら呼んでください。
- 00:20:492 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to add claps to all of these notes to follow the strong sound in the back.
- 01:13:901 (3) - Add a finish to the top of slider to follow a cymbal?
- 01:14:810 (5) - ^ if you fixed above, add to this too.
- 01:15:719 (7) - ^
- 01:16:628 (10) - As different point from above, add a finish. It fits the music.
** if you fixed stuff above, please fix same stuff after them too. **
** 02:25:946 to 02:29:355, and, 03:04:128 to 03:07:537 **
** And please fix ones on other diffs as well. **- 01:16:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - To add more whistles should be better because of piano sound. Hum, add to (4)?
- 01:18:446 (8,9) - Since there is no sound in the back at 01:18:674, a whistle should be added to (8), not (9).
- 01:20:037 (9) - Clap? Or finish? Be consistent with 02:32:764 (5).
- 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4) - Same reason as 00:20:492 (1,2,3,4), add claps.
- 02:17:765 (1,2,3) - Not fit the music. Try to change a pattern like below.
- 02:45:946 (1,2,3,4) - As you know.
- 02:47:310 (3) - Add finish to the end.
- 03:12:310 (1) - Replace whistle with finish.
- 03:39:582 (1,2,3,4) - Yes.
- 03:48:673 (1) - Replace whistle with finish.
- 03:54:128 (1,2) - Since there is a cymbal sound in the back, add finish to the top of both slider?
うーんなんで修正し忘れちゃうんだろう・・・毎回すみませんSuzully wrote:
合ってます。
あといくつか修正し忘れている点と勘違いされている点があるので
[Insane]
01:16:628 (10) - finish
02:25:946 - ここからのfinish。1サビ前のパートと同様に。
03:04:128 - 同じく。
[Hard]
01:05:946 (1) - clapは終端です。
[Normal]
02:03:219 (4) - 40%
02:24:583 (4) - 終端にclap
02:26:628 (2,6) - finish
03:04:810 (2,6) - ^
Thank you Suzully-san!!!Suzully wrote:
Made many fixes but almost were related with the hitsound so no big effect on the map. It's fine for me to rank this directly.
Ranked!
Quilt wrote:
congratulations
Sonez wrote:
Grats
Akemi_Homura wrote:
Congratz~~! :3
Thank you!!alacat wrote:
1st ranked おめでとうございます!
LunarSakuya wrote:
Quilt wrote:
congratulations
Thank you ScorpiourScorpiour wrote:
nice job for first rank :>
congrats
yay~ ranked ranked :3AcceleratorRUS wrote:
lol finally its ranked congratz 。゚(゚^∀^゚)゚。
vizzy wrote:
Congrats! Great map.
xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:
Congrats ~ >w<
Thank youuu!<3phonic wrote:
Congrats \:D/