HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Kana]
All changes are applied here:
[attachment=0:3a2cf]Sakakibara Yui - Renai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.) (BinJip) [Hana].osu[/attachment:3a2cf]
Gameplay
(Gameplay related ideas)
01:35:349 (1,2) - Why? jump?here? in Easy? No.
Rhythmn
(Rhythmn-linked suggestions, mostly music-based)
00:03:410 (2) - it start in the red tick before(you can choose to make it 1/2 shorter too), (add a Whistle at the start for the bell) (graphic example)
00:06:234 (2) - ^
00:19:645 (1,2,3) - It doesn't follow the music well....

00:21:761 (1,2,3,4) - do this

01:08:195 (2) - Consider make it start the red tick before and make it longer

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Graphic
(Graphic Suggestion, could contain nazi)
00:12:233 (2) - You could use a little simmetry if you do this

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00:13:292 (1,2) - if you do ^, you could fix like this

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00:44:069 (2) - Like this to fix the waypoints and the blanket (grid 4 needed)

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00:43:713 (1,2,3) - Then position them like this, (you can disregard distance snap in times like this

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http://puu.sh/8x7V

00:49:767 (1,2) - Continue using curves like 00:49:055 (6) - ?
00:54:396 (3) - ^
00:58:669 (1,2,3) - Like this is better

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01:08:923 (1,2,3,1) - Fix like this

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01:12:408 (2,3) - Curvy :3

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01:14:723 (1,2,3) - (fixing suggestion, nothing more)

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01:16:644 (1,2) - ^

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Hitsounds
(Yeah, i do that too O.O)
00:25:645 (2) - Clap at End
00:27:761 (1) - Clap at Start

[Sakuya]
AR + 1, OD + 1
00:23:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Heart Power :!

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00:25:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spread that pattern

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00:44:247 (x) - Add Circle
00:43:713 (1,2,3,4) - Spread that Pattern

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http://puu.sh/8xYE

00:45:316 (x) - Add Circle
00:47:452 (4,1) - Ctrl + R, sound and flow better
01:19:316 (4) - Curvy's better, use a blanket or a wiggle

[Mayo]
00:38:550 (8) - as a blanket... feel better :3

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01:29:286 (4,5,6,7) - A compressed stream? it would be better than a stackstream
Why Sakuya and Mayo are so godly done in front of Hana? you didn't map Hana using much work...
01:31:845 (2,3,4,5,6) - Streamcurve

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01:43:492 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blanket 01:44:021 (6) - Start

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You didn't put that much effort in Hana, didn't you?

1. I doubt the timing is correct,you may need a timing expert to check it.
2. Please unify the lead in.

1. 00:12:233 (2) – A part of slider reverse was covered by (1)-‘s combo burst,I highly suggest to fix this.
2. 00:52:971 (2) - (Design)Would you make this slider more beautiful?The slider wasn't symmetry at all and the beginning of (3)- was placed under the end of (2)- some newbie may confused with this.Make sure to adjust the spacing after fix.
   
   Example

   
   
   

   88,67,52971,2,0,B|78:134|29:149|29:149|64:181|53:239|53:239|98:243|113:292,1,270

3. 01:28:316 (3) - Add a new combo here due to the length of the combo chain is longer than others.
4. 01:49:492 (1) - Listen to the music,I think this spinner should stop at 01:52:202 - ,it sounds much better than 01:52:383 -

1. 00:28:822 (2) - Remove this whistle please because you didn't put any whistle in this part so that would be a bit weird if you only put a whistle here.
2. 00:55:642 (1) - ^Same.
3. 01:00:433 (3) - Remove the finish at the beginning of the slider because it doesn't fit the music so much,I assme finish only putting on accent point.

1. 00:10:469 (1) - I think you shouldn't put a spinner here because you have mapped this part:00:07:645 - and that have the same melody like 00:10:469 - .
2. 00:33:410 (2) - (Design)Probably make this slider symmetry with (1)- ?Don't forget to adjust the spacing after change.
3. 00:45:138 (x) - I guess you should add a note here because you can heard a accent point here,so yea,add a note here would be nice :3
4. 01:49:492 (1) - Remove the finish at the beginning of the slider because it doesn't fit the music so much,I assme finish only putting on accent point.

1. 01:36:786 (1,2) - (Bad gameplay)The speed change was a liitle bit sudden,x1.5 is too fast but I think x1.2 is ok,at least some player can adapt the speed change and don’t forgot this is a hard ._.

1. 00:07:645 (6) - (Design)Probably unstack it but you can reduce the spacing between (5) and (6),btw,would you make this slider more symmetrical?
2. 00:12:233 (2,3,4,1) - A bit nazi here however this is a imperfect square T_T Would you make it more beactiful?
3. 00:14:174 (2,3) - (design)Would you make the slider type of these slider like (1.4)?It would looks better I think.
4. 01:04:845 (x) - I feel quite empty here because this is a high tide part of the sound so I guess you shouldn't let it empty like this,I think you should add a note.

1. 00:55:642 (1,1) - Change to Normal hitsound here?It will sound better if you do that.
2. 01:52:202 (3) - Add a finish here and then remove the finish at 01:52:383 (4) -

1. 00:38:550 (8) – (Bad gameplay)What’s happern here?The spacing is inconsistent with this whole part.Do you make it on purpose?It may cause a bad gameplay.
2. 00:56:532 (1,2) – (Bad gameplay)Meaningless speed change,here didn’t have any high pitch,hearable faster and it cannot showed a good effect.

1. 00:23:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) – This pattern may make confused to player because only (1.2.3)- are jump and you decrease the spacing immediately,add a new combo at 00:23:704 (4) – or rearrange it can fix it.
2. 00:47:986 (x) – Probably add a note here and stack it on 00:47:096 (2) - ?It can consistentthe overall difficult,you made so many jump in this part so I think you should add a jump here to consistent it.
3. 00:59:021 (3) – Add a new combo here?Due to the spacing change.

1. 00:34:822 (2) – Probably add a whistle here?Yeah,it sounds better after change.
2. 01:52:202 (3) - Add a finish here and then remove the finish at 01:52:383 (4) -

Leorda wrote:

merchat7's Nokia
* I feel the Approach Rate is kinda little bit slow. Try AR +1? ar is already 5, 6 is too high for normal imo.

00:46:740 (1) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar. And it's included to new guideline Move down a bit. Don't think it's unrankable through, and is very minor
01:10:492 (x) - Add note here for following vocal? Too many stacks (when notes are this close together on the timeline, I stack them) so no and you didn't suggest for similar patterns.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[merchat7's Nokia0]
00:18:410 (3) - Wiggle, seems funnier :3 Hm, ok why not?

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00:19:645 (2) - ^ ^
00:29:704 (3) - Curve it ? Done

kanpakyin wrote:

[General]

1. Please unify the lead in. This is not necessary, if diffs start at different time, you should be using different audio lead in.

[merchat7's Nokia]
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:10:469 (1) - I think you shouldn't put a spinner here because you have mapped this part:00:07:645 - and that have the same melody like 00:10:469 - . I like the spinner, it gives a nice transition to the next section.
2. 00:33:410 (2) - (Design)Probably make this slider symmetry with (1)- ?Don't forget to adjust the spacing after change. Was lazy here, fixed.
3. 00:45:138 (x) - I guess you should add a note here because you can heard a accent point here,so yea,add a note here would be nice :3 Too many notes close together in the timeline (1,2 are already 1 red tick apart). I want to leave most notes 1 white tick apart if possible.
4. 01:49:492 (1) - Remove the finish at the beginning of the slider because it doesn't fit the music so much,I assme finish only putting on accent point. I assume you mean spinner. I disagree because, this spinner is the last note of the song and a finish can also be used to "finish" the song. The drums at the end really fit with custom finish so I say it's fine.

I would like to say something here,I can see you placed the notes/sliders base on the lyris/vocal,so I would suggest don't only focus the vocal,you can try tolisten the drum/instrument to placing note,I guess that can make your map more fun.So yea,you can try this in your next map :3 Hm, well I wanted to try to make notes 1 white tick apart unless necessary since it doesn't look good unless stacked and lot of stack doesn't play well. I also find it weird to follow instrument when the vocal is more accented. For faster song especially, star rating can be quite high meaning less chance of me following the instrument, but I'll consider your suggestion for lower bpm songs. Don't think I'll change how I map my Normal through.

kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request:

[General]

1. I doubt the timing is correct,you may need a timing expert to check it.
2. Please unify the lead in.

[Hana]
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:12:233 (2) – A part of slider reverse was covered by (1)-‘s combo burst,I highly suggest to fix this. done
2. 00:52:971 (2) - (Design)Would you make this slider more beautiful?The slider wasn't symmetry at all and the beginning of (3)- was placed under the end of (2)- some newbie may confused with this.Make sure to adjust the spacing after fix. done
   
   Example

   
   
   

   88,67,52971,2,0,B|78:134|29:149|29:149|64:181|53:239|53:239|98:243|113:292,1,270

3. 01:28:316 (3) - Add a new combo here due to the length of the combo chain is longer than others. done
4. 01:49:492 (1) - Listen to the music,I think this spinner should stop at 01:52:202 - ,it sounds much better than 01:52:383 - done

Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)

1. 00:28:822 (2) - Remove this whistle please because you didn't put any whistle in this part so that would be a bit weird if you only put a whistle here. done
2. 00:55:642 (1) - ^Same. done
3. 01:00:433 (3) - Remove the finish at the beginning of the slider because it doesn't fit the music so much,I assme finish only putting on accent point. done

[Sakuya]
Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)

1. 01:36:786 (1,2) - (Bad gameplay)The speed change was a liitle bit sudden,x1.5 is too fast but I think x1.2 is ok,at least some player can adapt the speed change and don’t forgot this is a hard ._. done

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:07:645 (6) - (Design)Probably unstack it but you can reduce the spacing between (5) and (6),btw,would you make this slider more symmetrical? done
2. 00:12:233 (2,3,4,1) - A bit nazi here however this is a imperfect square T_T Would you make it more beactiful? done
3. 00:14:174 (2,3) - (design)Would you make the slider type of these slider like (1.4)?It would looks better I think. done
4. 01:04:845 (x) - I feel quite empty here because this is a high tide part of the sound so I guess you shouldn't let it empty like this,I think you should add a note. done

Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)

1. 00:55:642 (1,1) - Change to Normal hitsound here?It will sound better if you do that. done
2. 01:52:202 (3) - Add a finish here and then remove the finish at 01:52:383 (4) - done

[Mayo]
Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)

1. 00:38:550 (8) – (Bad gameplay)What’s happern here?The spacing is inconsistent with this whole part.Do you make it on purpose?It may cause a bad gameplay. done
2. 00:56:532 (1,2) – (Bad gameplay)Meaningless speed change,here didn’t have any high pitch,hearable faster and it cannot showed a good effect. done

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:23:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) – This pattern may make confused to player because only (1.2.3)- are jump and you decrease the spacing immediately,add a new combo at 00:23:704 (4) – or rearrange it can fix it. done
2. 00:47:986 (x) – Probably add a note here and stack it on 00:47:096 (2) - ?It can consistentthe overall difficult,you made so many jump in this part so I think you should add a jump here to consistent it. done
3. 00:59:021 (3) – Add a new combo here?Due to the spacing change. done

Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)

1. 00:34:822 (2) – Probably add a whistle here?Yeah,it sounds better after change. done
2. 01:52:202 (3) - Add a finish here and then remove the finish at 01:52:383 (4) - done

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84,96,52971,2,0,B|66:139|17:154|17:154|48:192|16:236|16:236|68:248|84:296,1,270

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KuronumaSawako wrote:

Hi
I Make a mod hope you like ^^

[Hana]

00:03:223(2) - End the slider in 00:03:939.
00:06:057(2) - End the slider in 00:06:763.
00:07:645(1) - ^ in 00:09:763.
00:20:351(2,3,1,2,3) - Start slider here, move note to 00:21:057, end next slider in 00:21:763, move note to 00:22:292 and add a note in 00:23:527. But it's a suggestion, not need to change exactly.
00:24:939(1): I see no reason to put a clap here ... another suggestion.
00:26:351(2): Same for 00:24:939.
00:27:763(1): ^
00:29:174(2): ^
00:30:586(1): ^
00:31:998(2): ^
01:08:198(2): End the slider in 01:08:551.
01:23:727: Add a note here.
01:32:551(1): Move slider here.
01:38:198: Start Spinner here.

[merchat7's Nokia]

00:00:233(1): What is this? O.o It would be advisable to put a spinner in place of the slider, but this is only a suggestion, the problem is where he was placed. Move the slider to 00:00:410 and end in 00:01:645. Sounds better.
00:10:116: Try this.

00:14:704(3): Move slider to here and end slider in 00:15:057.
00:13:645(1): No reason to put a clap here ... is a suggestion.
00:14:351(2): ^
00:15:057(3): ^
00:15:763(1): ^
00:16:469(3): ^
00:17:179(4): ^
00:25:998(3): Move slider to here and end slider in 00:26:351.
00:59:198: Add a note here.
00:59:227(6): End spinner in 00:59:094 and add a note in 01:00:443.
01:10:492: Add a note here.
01:11:021: End spinner in 01:11:198 and add a note in 01:11:727.
01:36:257(3,4): Move (3) here and (4) in 01:36:786. And add a note in 01:37:845.
01:38:198: Move Spinner to here.
01:41:021(1): No reason to put a finish here...another suggestion.
01:49:492: End spinner in 01:52:202.

[Mayo]

00:01:645: A suggestion, put a normal hit sound here, i think that would be good.
00:10:292(7): Remove clap here.
00:11:704(5): Another suggestion, put whistle here.
00:12:223(1): Only whistle would be great.
00:46:384(5): Remove clap.
00:46:740(6): ^

[Sakuya]

I have not found anything wrong ... just a one suggestion.

00:36:414(4): If you took this clap, I think it sounds better.

General

[*]1º: Leads-in for Hana and Misaki DS are different from other diffs, fix it.

I am not an experienced mapper, but here is my mod.
I hope you like it ^ ^

1. Song Setup - Audio-Lead in - Misaki DS 1500⇒change 2500 ( because start the same, but different from other )

1. Object isn't snapped - 47 errors ><; plz timing ⇒ Resnap All Notes
2. Please have a constant spacing of the DS
3. 00:20:351 (2) - slider end 00:20:880 ( vocal follow ) and remove 00:21:057 (3)
4. 00:29:527 (3) - add finish to end of the slider
5. 00:30:586 (1,2,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/byNw
6. 00:46:206 (4) - add NC and 00:46:562 - remove NC
7. 00:51:903 (1) - remove NC and 00:52:971 - add NC
8. 00:58:669 (1) - slider end 00:59:551
9. 01:00:433 (3) - slider start 01:00:610 end 01:00:963
10. 01:11:724 (3,1,2,3) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/byPS
11. 01:16:663 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/byQm
12. 01:23:015 (3) - slider end 01:23:551 and remove 01:23:727 (4)
13. 01:36:775 (4) - add NC
14. 01:38:198 (1) - spinner start 01:38:021
15. 01:46:655 (2) - add NC
16. 01:49:492 (1) - spinner end 01:52:202

1. 00:01:998 (2) - add NC
2. 00:43:713 (4) - ^
3. 00:58:669 (3) - slider end 00:59:198
4. 01:00:786 (1,2) - vocal follow suggestion http://puu.sh/byTi
5. 01:09:963 (3) - slider end 01:10:492
6. 01:12:080 (1,2) - same suggestion 01:00:786 (1,2)
7. 01:31:139 (4) - add NC
8. 01:31:845 (5) - slider end 01:32:198
9. 01:36:786 (4) - add NC
10. 01:37:845 - add note
11. 01:43:316 (1) - remove NC and 01:43:845 (2) - add NC
12. 01:49:492 (1) - spinner end 01:52:202

1. 00:16:469 (8) - one grid right
2. 00:21:586 (4) - one grid down. x144,y160
3. 00:36:414 (5,6) - stack with 00:35:880 (4). grid x256,y150
4. 00:56:176 (6) - one grid left.
5. 01:33:080 (4) - remove note
6. 01:33:257 (4) - slider start 01:33:080 end 01:33:874

1. 00:20:527 (5,6) - DS 1.20x is better
2. 00:54:307 (5) - add NC

KuronumaSawako wrote:

[merchat7's Nokia]

00:00:233(1): What is this? O.o It would be advisable to put a spinner in place of the slider, but this is only a suggestion, the problem is where he was placed. Move the slider to 00:00:410 and end in 00:01:645. Sounds better. It's intend to follow the "wind" sound and I didn't do a spinner since it felt too short for me. About the shape, intend to be similar to a Christmas tree, this song remind me a lot of Christmas (with all the bell sounds). Will keep this.
00:10:116: Try this. I rather not map this, star rating is already high and I feel this spinner fit well enough.
00:14:704(3): Move slider to here and end slider in 00:15:057. Intentional to follow vocal, it's on a blue tick, but it's a slider so should be fine.
00:13:645(1): No reason to put a clap here ... is a suggestion. Unless the clap hitsound was change to be louder, will keep this for now.
00:14:351(2): ^ ^
00:15:057(3): ^ ^
00:15:763(1): ^ ^
00:16:469(3): ^ ^
00:17:179(4): ^ ^
00:25:998(3): Move slider to here and end slider in 00:26:351. Same as before.
00:59:198: Add a note here. Too many 1/2 notes next to each other doesn't play well, that's why it's like this.
00:59:227(6): End spinner in 00:59:094 and add a note in 01:00:443. Not sure what you mean here.
01:10:492: Add a note here. Same as before
01:11:021: End spinner in 01:11:198 and add a note in 01:11:727. Similar reason to before, too many 1/2 notes next to each other and by doing make this place feel quite empty.
01:36:257(3,4): Move (3) here and (4) in 01:36:786. And add a note in 01:37:845. No note at 01:37:845 to lead up nicer to the spinner, and I like current pattern as is.
01:38:198: Move Spinner to here. Following vocal, there is no hitsound at begin of spinner so it doesn't really matter if it doesn't start where the drum begins.
01:41:021(1): No reason to put a finish here...another suggestion. Seems fine to me.
01:49:492: End spinner in 01:52:202. Don't really agree sounds fine, but since Easy was changed, changed for here as well.

General

[*]1º: Leads-in for Hana and Misaki DS are different from other diffs, fix it. Remember that unless the difficulty start at the same place, they do not need to have same audio leadin.

amnb9280 wrote:

[merchat7's Nokia]
00:23:527 (5) - let the slider to the symmetric Made better.
01:31:845 (5) - Change the straight Want it to be the same as (3).

kosiga wrote:

[merchat7's Nokia]

1. 00:01:998 (2) - add NC Combo feel too short for me.
2. 00:43:713 (4) - ^ ^
3. 00:58:669 (3) - slider end 00:59:198 Change in a different way.
4. 01:00:786 (1,2) - vocal follow suggestion Done
5. 01:09:963 (3) - slider end 01:10:492 Change in a different way.
6. 01:12:080 (1,2) - same suggestion 01:00:786 (1,2) Done
7. 01:31:139 (4) - add NC Done
8. 01:31:845 (5) - slider end 01:32:198 Want to leave space before spinner.
9. 01:36:786 (4) - add NC Too short for me.
10. 01:37:845 - add note Same here, want to leave space before spinner.
11. 01:43:316 (1) - remove NC and 01:43:845 (2) - add NC I feel it make sense like this.
12. 01:49:492 (1) - spinner end 01:52:202 Change in earlier mod.

Like your suggestion for the part at kiai time

L_P wrote:

nokia
00:14:616 (3) - normal dont usually overlap like this(the head and tail), try other arrangement Hm, don't have a idea yet, I notice the next mod post have a suggestion on what to do so I'll take a look at that.
01:14:727 (1) - haha i found a slider which is not pretty enough Made better, not really easy to make a nice slider here I think.
01:18:080 (1) - ^ too (why? tired?) Can't believe I miss this one after self modding, don't remember what I was thinking at the time of mapping, been a long time since I've map this.

Mok wrote:

[Nokia]
00:13:292 (1,3) - Like this: http://puu.sh/bQJB Looks good, done.

Faust wrote:

Hi.

Seems you've gotten my 1'st mod post since I became a MAT.

First off, your mp3 sounds like a video-rip. Better for you to source for a better one, I'm sure it is available but if you have trouble with that I am willing to help.

Hana:

So all I have for this are simply "move 1 grid etc" which are not entirely useless, just small fry. I haven't overlooked anything, but if you decide you want to hear the very minor details, you can approach me again. maybe all done

Nokia:

One of the girl's name is Nokia? lol

Well, pretty much nothing to add on here.

- 00:37:126 (1) - Move this below the Y-axis. That way, it should be low enough to be intuitive.

- 01:48:080 (2) - Shift this note to - 01:47:904 - instead. Make sure the spacing is good enough.

Mayo:

I feel as if this is the actual Insane difficulty. Is it....? Yes it seem it is.

- 00:09:057 (1,2) - Shift each of these 2 grids away from the Y-axis. done

- 00:36:414 (5,6) - Broken stack. Fix it here:

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done

- 00:58:491 (1,1) - Actually, this part I feel, needs a jump. Might want to copy - 00:57:957 (1,2) - and flip horizontally. More fun like this.

- 01:29:727 (1,2) - Here's a suggestion:

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done

- 01:30:433 (3,4) - If you liked what I did above, you can follow through for here as well.done

-01:51:661 (1,2,3) - Try a kick-slider instead a 1/4 triple hitcircle combo.done

Sakuya:

The one thing I notice straight-away about this difficulty is the seemingly lagging AR.
I'd suggest you use 8, because for the most part, your spacing can be convulated/cramped.

I think using AR8 allows the player to move more freely due to the less restrictive movement needed to shift the cursor over and hit notes due to low AR. AR 8 OD 7

In addition to having the level of challenge that an "Insane" difficulty should pose. I realize this is actually the "Hard" diff, but my suggestion on AR8 still stands, the rest of the settings can remain the same.

Mostly harmless suggestions you may/may not want to follow. It's a good difficulty.

- 00:36:414 (4) - Why not remove this and replicate the previous slider, and then flip it vertically instead? Placing it in center is odd I think.done

- 00:38:016 (6) - I think this drum hit is prominent enough to warrant a note, so I guess placing one below the slider would be good. done

Stacking it on the next note isn't good since the color is pale.

- 00:44:425 (4) - Hmm, shift this 1 grid left. Currently it does slightly cover up the following note.done

- 00:46:918 (2) - I'd advise you to stack this on (1) rather than leave it. A straight-forward 1-2 followed by another 1-2 stack plays nicer.done

- 00:54:663 (2) - Do not recommend you keep this.done

I think it is better for you to remove this, and place 2 1/2 notes instead because it's actually musically correct rather than what you have here currently.

- 01:05:727 (2,3) - Not such a great stacking place. Shift the 2 notes as per normal. Preferably to the left-side.done

- 01:12:610 (4) - This isn't symmetrical/identical to the previous one, so I suggest you copy and flip horizontally.done

- 01:37:139 (2) - Hmm, maybe you can copy the slider from - 01:36:786 (1) - and flip it vertically + horizontally for a nice jump.done

That's it.

Faust wrote:

[Nokia:

One of the girl's name is Nokia? lol Maybe wrong translation/romaji. Actually nevermind, http://www.img150.animecharactersdataba ... p?id=30429, can't verify it through since I never tried this game.

Well, pretty much nothing to add on here.

- 00:37:126 (1) - Move this below the Y-axis. That way, it should be low enough to be intuitive. Move down to be aligned with begin of slider (2)

- 01:48:080 (2) - Shift this note to - 01:47:904 - instead. Make sure the spacing is good enough. K, done

Leorda wrote:

* Your hitsound is barely to hear, try maximize the volume I actually don't like how the whistle sound at high volume (it sound like it's clipping) so that's why I didn't maximize volume.

Leorda wrote:

Annyeong

General
* Your hitsound is barely to hear, try maximize the volumedone
* I saw your BG seems quite flat, try find another one?
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/cFL1 done

Hana
* I feel this diff is lacks of hitsound o.o done

00:10:116 (2) - I don't like if this slider is overlapped by previous slider (Nazi) done
01:08:021 (2) - I think this slider is needs more wavy done


Mayo
00:38:372 (7,8) - Try making this pattern to http://puu.sh/cFJF for following instruments in music? done
01:36:786 (1,2) - This sudden fast slider can makes players go confusing done


Sakuya
* Why this SV is lower that Mayo? Mayo = Insane Sakuya = Hard

00:21:939 (3) - Spacing too close? done
01:45:433 (7) - Stack this with 01:44:021 (1)? (Nazi) done
01:47:374 (3) - Spacing too close? done


EDIT : whoops, since you didn't mod my map, I can't give you a bubble, sorry

P.S. I mod this map when I am very uncomfortable ;_; sorry

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Hi.

A re-check is in fact underway. I'm just going to continue it tomorrow.
Gonna try something new here, and you're my Ginnie Pig~
Instead of putting up the pictures, I will put up links.

General:

• Un-snapped notes on all diffs. Fix that please.
• I would just go ahead and make all the audio lead in times 2000 (2). It makes it consistent and fits well.
• Kiai time would be so much better if you start it on 00:58:845 and also here 01:10:139.

Hana:

• 00:12:409 (2,1) - Please don't stack these sliders. They are pretty confusing for an Easy diff.
• 01:08:198 (2) - I don't think this slider works well in an Easy. I would do this. It plays better.
• 01:19:315 (1,2) - This transition from red tick to white tick does not play very well. Change it to a slider like this
• 01:26:727 (1,2) - (1) does not really flow well into (2) in this pattern. I turn (1) so that it looks like this
• 01:41:197 (1) - This slider comes way too soon after the spinner. It does not give the player a chance to re-adjust their arm.

merchat7's Nokia:

• 00:00:410 (1) - Why don't you make this slider start on the red tick (00:00:580)? Because that is when that huge "woosh" sound starts
• 00:58:668 (2) - New combo on this note because it's the start of the kiai time (It would be the next note if you take my kiai suggestion)
• 01:32:022 (2) - Expand this note so that it ends on the red tick. I fits the music much better.

Mayo:

• 00:36:591 (5,6) - Expand the distances between these notes. It seems pretty confusing, you should make it obvious that it is an anti-jump.
• 00:58:846 (2,1) - Confusing spacing. I would stack (2) under 00:58:668 (1) and make it a simple jump. It plays a lot better that way.
• 01:34:140 (1) - This short spinner is way too short and takes a lot away from game play. I would do something like this, it plays a lot better.
• 01:39:434 (1) - For better flow, I would put the note around this area.

Sakuya:
• 00:38:193 (6,1) - It would play/flow better if you did something like this
• 00:39:795 (4,5) - These two notes don't sound very good. Remove the claps to match the music.
• 00:57:689 (1) - The silence feels weird. I would bring up the volume.

Overall:
Nice map you got here. I see great improvements in Hana. It's crawling closer to ranking, but I want to see more mod posts on this.
Great job.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

General:
• I would just go ahead and make all the audio lead in times 2000 (2). It makes it consistent and fits well. Still don't agree with this, if a diff starts at diff time, you should always use diff audio lead-in for the diffs imo, don't see a point in making it consistent just to be consistent.

merchat7's Nokia:

• 00:00:410 (1) - Why don't you make this slider start on the red tick (00:00:580)? Because that is when that huge "woosh" sound starts I want it to start right when you can hear the first woosh sound which is here and it is consistent with Sakuya and Mayo (where the spinner begin).
• 00:58:668 (2) - New combo on this note because it's the start of the kiai time (It would be the next note if you take my kiai suggestion) I would like to avoid one note combos for this map as when I mapped this, I tried to avoid one note combos so it would make combos a bit inconsistent.
• 01:32:022 (2) - Expand this note so that it ends on the red tick. I fits the music much better. You mean white? Well, I guess I'lll extend it by 1/2 to follow drums since lot of people say this and it make sense for me now that I think about it.

Cilvery wrote:

01:29:374 - remove finish instead to add whistle Done
01:32:021 - add finish Don't hear bass drum here (finish sound like bass drum)
01:32:374 - remove finish Bass drum plays here

haha5957 wrote:

[Merchat's Normal]
00:14:874 (3) - I don't think this slider is placed/or plays well because it doesnt nicely overlap previous slider.Fine imo, won't be noticeable in gameplay as (1) fade out by the time you have to hit this slider
rest of them seems fine o.o/

lepidopodus wrote:

Misaki DS
- 이 난이도 이름으로 태고맵인거 파악이 잘 안될지도.
빈집형이 캐릭터 맞춰 바꾼거라 뭐 저는 할 말이 없네요
- 나는 미연시곡 모딩은 별로 안 좋아해요. 거유는 바람직하지만 여기는 기숙사라서 좀 쑥쓰럽네요.
♥
- 구성은 괜찮은 듯? 뭐 이리저리 꼬집는 스타일은 아니고 어차피 기본 패턴 위주라서 그냥 몇가지 제안만.
00:02:175 (1) ~ 00:07:822 (43) - 시작부분은 쿠레나이를 연상시키는군요, 아무튼 뒤에 드럼이 쿵짝거리니까 이것도 괜찮기는 하지만 다른 소리들로 패턴 맞춰보는 것도 시도해보는게 좋을지도. 뭐 당장 생각나는 예시로는 ddd k ddd k 이런 것을 시도해 본다거나... (물론 여기 바꾸면 2번째 키아이 같이 바꿔주어야 하겠지만.)
조금... 바꿔봤습니다
00:07:116 (36) - 캇?
ok
00:09:234 (51,52,53,54) - d d k D이 나을수도 있음.
이 부분은 d d k D으로, 두번째 키아이부분은 d k k D으로 바꿔봤어요
00:13:469 (82) ~ 00:36:057 (228) - 이쪽 부분은 가볍게 전개하는 부분인데 큰 노트가 너무 많이 들어갔다는 느낌도 적잖아 있네요. (이 파트 후반부야 뭐 다음 파트 넘어가는 부분이니 환기 차원에서 좀 들어가는 것도 좋지만요.) 그리고 드럼 쿵짝거려서 동캇 거리는거 적절하기는 한데, 중간중간에 다른 소리에 기반을 둬서 변형을 좀 시도하는 것도 좋을 듯? (무리하면 뒷부분이 죽으니 주의. 그냥 간단한 패턴을 가지고 티만 나게 살짝 바꿔 봐요.)
큰동 몇개 빼고 뒤에 드럼소리를 이용해 약간 변형했습니다. 음...
00:24:057 (150,151,152,153,154,155) - kkd kkd이나 kkddk이나 아무튼 그런거?
음.. kkddk!
00:53:505 (310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318) - 이쪽 부분 잘 들어보면 더블렛 패턴(dd, dk, kd, kk) 넣을 구석이 있답니다. 예를 들어서 d-d-kd--d--dd--dd---k-d-라거나...
뒤에 깔짝깔작거리는 2 2 2 소리 그대로 넣으면 너무 박자가 애매해져서... 일단 d-d-kd-dd-kdd--dk-d-dkd 로 바꿔봤는데 별로 그렇게 마음에 쏙 들지는 않네요...
01:09:963 (414) - 여기 키아이 끊었다가 다시 켜주는거, 해주려면 티 안나게 1ms 간격으로 타이밍 섹션 조절하거나 아니면 그냥 안하는게 나을지도.
저번에 태고맵 관련 스레드 보니까 반짝키아이는 하지말라고 하더군요... 뭐 나중에 태클걸릴바에 그냥 지워버리겠습니다
01:14:022 (448,449,450) - 뒷 마디에 dkk dkk dkk...이 있어서 이 부분이 뒤에 붙어버리는 느낌이네요, 다른 패턴을 시도해 보는게?
9스트림을 5 3으로 나누고 패턴 좀 변경해봤습니다.
01:21:081 (500) - 스트림 좀 더 늘려도 될 듯? 여기 동으로 바꾸고 동 2개 추가는 선택사항. 그게 내려가는 느낌인데 캇으로 끝나니 좀 그렇네요.
전에 만들때 보컬만 듣고 넣었던 것 같네요. ddddkkkkdkd 으로 바꿔보았습니다
01:21:434 (501) - 키아이는 여기서 끕시다. 마디 단위로 해주는게 좋아요.
ok

Used Korean since KDS isn't that good at English. (Well and for me, it would be easier to mod in Korean, to be honest.)
Call me again if you want to. I might mod more if I see this again.

[General]

[Hana]

[merchat7's Nokia]

[Mayo]

[Sakuya]

Kitsuneko wrote:

[merchat7's Nokia]

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Clear

Hitsounding

1. 00:07:815 (1,2) - Add finish to both slider's head. Add only to the first slider, the second slider isn't back up by drums so I don't think it sound good on it.
2. 01:36:962 (4) - Add whistle to slider start and end, then remove whistle from 01:37:315. Put finish in earlier mod at begin I use whistle to emphasize vocal here and I think the way she say "go" is, well different from the rest of the song so I want to emphasize it with whistle. I thin emphasize will be lost if I add whistle to end as well.

Mapping

1. 01:19:844 - I suggest slider 01:19:844 - 01:20:374 (or 01:20:197). that break is long a little for me. Hm 4.3 star rating, really pushing the limit of a normal, but I'll consider this.
   nice Normal diff~ Thanks

1. Taiko Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Difficulty names
   Difficulty names must be taiko specific, but don't need to contain it's difficulty rating self (e.g. Taiko, Taiko Oni, Taiko Muzukashii). Guest difficulties may contain the mapper's name.

   So using "Misaki DS" is unrankable now.

1. 00:09:756 (55) - How about changing this to big kat? It sounds much better.
2. 00:13:462 (83) - I would like to change it to kat if I were you. It can make the pattern more fluently during gameplay.
3. 00:20:874 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - 2-4 plets sound weird and play awkward here. Probably try xx xx x x here?
4. 00:24:050 (154,155,156,157,158) - I would place ddkkd if I were you or remove the stream and then put simple 1/2 here.
5. 01:45:962 (66) - Big kat?
6. 01:49:668 (1) - How about moving this spinner to 01:49:852 - and end at 01:51:840 - , and then put a note at 01:49:672 - with a kat sound.

01:49:668 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
01:51:840 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:51:840 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:52:202 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:382 (3) - Unsnapped circle.

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi.Random Taiko modding.

[General]

1. Taiko Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Difficulty names
   Difficulty names must be taiko specific, but don't need to contain it's difficulty rating self (e.g. Taiko, Taiko Oni, Taiko Muzukashii). Guest difficulties may contain the mapper's name.

   So using "Misaki DS" is unrankable now. binjip already fixed it @w@

[Misaki DS]

1. 00:09:756 (55) - How about changing this to big kat? It sounds much better. no change
2. 00:13:462 (83) - I would like to change it to kat if I were you. It can make the pattern more fluently during gameplay. Why? The sound is going down at that point.
3. 00:20:874 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - 2-4 plets sound weird and play awkward here. Probably try xx xx x x here? no c.
4. 00:24:050 (154,155,156,157,158) - I would place ddkkd if I were you or remove the stream and then put simple 1/2 here. ^
5. 01:45:962 (66) - Big kat? ^
6. 01:49:668 (1) - How about moving this spinner to 01:49:852 - and end at 01:51:840 - , and then put a note at 01:49:672 - with a kat sound. hmm.... ^

ok, that's it.

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
yeah, it's suggested to add "taiko" to the difficulty name... :3
-remove letterbox during breaks binjip already fixed it too x3;
01:49:672 - it's recommended to add a note before slider starts slider...? spinner...? btw, no fix
not much to complain, it followed the drum well.

484,232,10639,6,0,B|256:372|28:228,1,480,2|2

Chewin wrote:

[merchat7's Nokia]
00:00:492 (1) - This slider should to star 1/4 after, I mean 00:00:492 Hmmm, I start here for consistency with spinners on other diff. Also slider ticks would look ugly doing this so I keep this for now. If there is a really big problem, I may just change to a spinner.
00:34:109 (3) - Fix this shape moving the second waypoint 1 grid up k fixed
00:41:755 (1,2) - Move (1) to x:200 y:148 so you can move the 00:42:467 (2) to x:436 y:148 making a blanket with 00:40:865 (3) Hmm, I actually want to do something else here so did that instead. Basically, I want (1) to point to (2) (redownload when this diff get update for a clear idea of what I mean)
Nice diff Ty

1. you make diffs some useless green line please delete all you need choose use green line

1. 00:35:874 (3) - Add new combo cuz start slow part
2. 00:53:149 (4) - add finish
3. 01:01:668 (3) - beginner custom whistle

1. 00:34:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think its strange jump useing spacing 1.5 or 1.0

1. Nice*

1. why you some change spacing? i think newbie player will be confused
2. nothing to say this diff well...

S o r d a wrote:

from queue
sorry for delay

[overall]:

1. you make diffs some useless green line please delete all you need choose use green line

[Sakuya]:

1. 00:35:874 (3) - Add new combo cuz start slow part
2. 00:53:149 (4) - add finish
3. 01:01:668 (3) - beginner custom whistle

[Mayo]:

1. 00:34:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think its strange jump useing spacing 1.5 or 1.0

[merchat7's Nokia]:

1. Nice*

[Easy]:

1. why you some change spacing? i think newbie player will be confused
2. nothing to say this diff well...

good luck with ranked~

Fenya wrote:

Hi hi~

Hana:
00:47:274 (1,2,3) - Spacing D:
00:57:422 (2) - Why jump?

merchat7's Nokia:
00:22:286 (2) - 1 grid up?
00:34:109 (3) - Put like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/352740 ? I think looks better o.o

Mayo:
00:49:055 (1) - 1 grid left?

Sakuya:
Fine \o\

That's all, sorry for my nazi mod
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~

Flask wrote:

Hi there ~ Request from CLANNAD Modding queue~

[Mayo]
01:23:374 (8,9) - like this ? (a little bit change on (9))

01:44:197 (6) - move down 5 gird (or more) (gird level4)

[Sakuya]
00:41:755 (1) - how about this ?

00:44:603 (4) - ctrl+H then move back ? (suggestion)
01:13:492 (4,5) - this ?

That's all i can find , GL !

arien666 wrote:

Seems okay on things :3
(Fixed unsnapped things of Mayo diff)



meow :3

Aleks719 wrote:

General
i'm not at home, can't check timing, will make it a bit later
Names of diffs kinda strange, i couldn't understand what does it mean. As example, Mayo diff harder than Sakuya, but places lower, so.. better rename with usual names

Sakuya
00:37:304 (3,4,5,6) - try this direction : http://puu.sh/14E0W. imo, makes flow more constant and avoids strange jump between 3 and 4
00:47:274 (3,1,2) - kinda hard to read for the 1st time. unstack?

Hana
Tickrate 2 would be better here
01:29:727 (5) - put nc here, from next note?
01:46:844 (1) - make it symmetrical? :S

Aleks719 wrote:

aaand timing:

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:13:478 (1) - Now this is way too soon after a spinner. Try to give 3-4 white ticks before adding a new note please.
01:36:266 (1) - New combo

1. 00:46:058 (3) - Since you probably moved 00:47:307 (1) to the red line when the lastest mod, consider to shorten this slider to 00:46:593. It becomes easier to read them.

• 
  Only what I worry about is the big gap of difficulty setting between Normal and Hard. Please increase HP/OD by 1.

1. 00:40:879 (8) - Move this further a bit from (7) to make spacing consistent in the same combo.
2. 01:20:207 (x) - Add a note here? It can follow both of the vocal and the drum.

1. 00:18:066 (4) - Gameplay isn't that good here because this note is hidden a bit by the previous note. Hum, how about fixing (2) and (4) a bit like the below example?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:360 (5) - Kinda misleading. I expected the next triple is at 00:32:890 when playing :/ Just shorten this slider to 00:32:713 and add a note circle at 00:32:890? Gameplay will become better imo.
3. 00:44:450 (2) - It can be played but too narrow spacing looks weird. Rather, stack with (1) perfectly?
4. 00:48:910 (6) - Add a newcombo to this rather than 00:49:088 (1). Being on the downbeat is better and here's symmetric formation will get emphasized.
5. 01:32:031 (5) - Add a newcombo to clarify the spacing change.
6. 01:49:149 (1,2,3,4) - I felt something wrong. To follow the bass, I think they should be like this.
   

Suzully wrote:

Hi.

[Easy]

1. 00:46:058 (3) - Since you probably moved 00:47:307 (1) to the red line when the lastest mod, consider to shorten this slider to 00:46:593. It becomes easier to read them.

[Normal]

• 
  Only what I worry about is the big gap of difficulty setting between Normal and Hard. Please increase HP/OD by 1.

[Hard]

1. 00:40:879 (8) - Move this further a bit from (7) to make spacing consistent in the same combo.
2. 01:20:207 (x) - Add a note here? It can follow both of the vocal and the drum.

[Insane]

1. 00:18:066 (4) - Gameplay isn't that good here because this note is hidden a bit by the previous note. Hum, how about fixing (2) and (4) a bit like the below example?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:360 (5) - Kinda misleading. I expected the next triple is at 00:32:890 when playing :/ Just shorten this slider to 00:32:713 and add a note circle at 00:32:890? Gameplay will become better imo.
3. 00:44:450 (2) - It can be played but too narrow spacing looks weird. Rather, stack with (1) perfectly?
4. 00:48:910 (6) - Add a newcombo to this rather than 00:49:088 (1). Being on the downbeat is better and here's symmetric formation will get emphasized.
5. 01:32:031 (5) - Add a newcombo to clarify the spacing change.
6. 01:49:149 (1,2,3,4) - I felt something wrong. To follow the bass, I think they should be like this.