Hello
sakuya
general: arrangement still bit messy, i would be glad if you equalize some spacing?
00:04:822 (1,2) - grid 2 right?current is a bit too crowded
00:09:939 (6,7) - grid 1 up
00:15:233 (1) - jump? make a clearer sight
00:17:351 (1) - delete head whistle, add another whistle at next slider's tail
00:54:663 (2,3,4) - weird rhythm, haha
01:00:610 (1,2,3) - make these equal spacing, either large or small....i dont see why only jump at slider3
01:06:257 (4) - aww this is the worst slider in this map
01:11:904 (1,4) - why dont make these sliders blanket the middle note
01:41:727 (3,4,5,6) - i feel like these could make some jumping
MAYA
00:06:233 (4) - you jump it because you wanna jump it?
00:38:550 (8) - your other sliders match and suits the music and lyrics pretty much, but this one is an exception...do you wanna keep it
01:16:316 (5) - really awkward to miss a strong beat...add a note or start a slider?
01:29:286 (4,5,6,7) - make it slider with repeats? this however is not the hardest diff.
01:51:661 (1,2,3) - slider? i heard the guitar string released sound, so maybe slider suits more
i enjoy playing this diff, oh
nokia
00:14:616 (3) - normal dont usually overlap like this(the head and tail), try other arrangement
01:14:727 (1) - haha i found a slider which is not pretty enough
01:18:080 (1) - ^ too (why? tired?)
nice map, nice song, nice video, hope to see it rank soon
sakuya
general: arrangement still bit messy, i would be glad if you equalize some spacing?
00:04:822 (1,2) - grid 2 right?current is a bit too crowded
00:09:939 (6,7) - grid 1 up
00:15:233 (1) - jump? make a clearer sight
00:17:351 (1) - delete head whistle, add another whistle at next slider's tail
00:54:663 (2,3,4) - weird rhythm, haha
01:00:610 (1,2,3) - make these equal spacing, either large or small....i dont see why only jump at slider3
01:06:257 (4) - aww this is the worst slider in this map
01:11:904 (1,4) - why dont make these sliders blanket the middle note
01:41:727 (3,4,5,6) - i feel like these could make some jumping
MAYA
00:06:233 (4) - you jump it because you wanna jump it?
00:38:550 (8) - your other sliders match and suits the music and lyrics pretty much, but this one is an exception...do you wanna keep it
01:16:316 (5) - really awkward to miss a strong beat...add a note or start a slider?
01:29:286 (4,5,6,7) - make it slider with repeats? this however is not the hardest diff.
01:51:661 (1,2,3) - slider? i heard the guitar string released sound, so maybe slider suits more
i enjoy playing this diff, oh
nokia
00:14:616 (3) - normal dont usually overlap like this(the head and tail), try other arrangement
01:14:727 (1) - haha i found a slider which is not pretty enough
01:18:080 (1) - ^ too (why? tired?)
nice map, nice song, nice video, hope to see it rank soon