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Ivan Fillini feat.Miani - TU (Ivan Fillini Remix)

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Topic Starter
-Lennox-

MoonShade wrote:

Sry hat ein wenig gedauert mit dem Mod, weil ich mich noch um andere Dinge kümmern musste. Sehr schöne Map, dein Stil gefällt mir auch sehr gut, ich bin sicher dass du diese Map geranked kriegst, also streng dich an :3 Mach ich ^__^


Normal
00:26:197 (6) - neue combo? jop
01:04:458 (1) - 1 nach rechts jop

Hard
01:09:241 (4) - 1 nach unten jau
01:26:958 - circle platzieren und dann das ganze als stream Hmm, mehr streams bedeuten mehr streams... ach was red ich jap gemacht ^__^
02:01:415 (4) - da könnte noch mehr abstand zu 02:00:980 (3), wenn du willst jo hab bissl mehr genommen

01:55:328 ~ End - You seems use 1,5 BPM Adjustments, add warning using a SB? i have no idea how to make an sb D:
No Problem here, it's not that surprising so there is no need for an sb warning. Nevertheless, if you feel you need one, ask me :3

Das ist alles was ich finden konnte, also eher Kleinigkeiten. Ich hoffe das konnte dir trotzdem weiterhelfen.

Very nice Map, Star~
Ich bin nicht wirklich dafür das hier ne warnung her muss... danke für's moden :3
ShadowSoul
Huebscher Stil o: ich mag die map :D ~star
Yusu Aoi
hi^^
here's my suggestions ;)

Freak3's Easy:
00:26:747 maybe start this spinner on the next white tick and end it on 00:28:589?
00:38:806 (2,3) 2 grids left
01:12:937 repeat once more the previous slider, or add here a note?

Normal:
00:39:241 (3) 1 grid up, 1 grip right
00:42:719 what do You think about removing this spinner and add here a note with New combo? Add note at 00:43:154. Add note at 00:43:589 with finish? and add the spinner at 00:43:806 and end it at 00:45:328 with finish? ;)

01:20:545 maybe it would be better to remove this spinner and add notes like this?



Hard:
Nice ^^

Here's astar! ^^
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

ShiroKitty wrote:

hi^^
here's my suggestions ;)

Freak3's Easy:
00:26:747 maybe start this spinner on the next white tick and end it on 00:28:589?
00:38:806 (2,3) 2 grids left
01:12:937 repeat once more the previous slider, or add here a note?

Normal:
00:39:241 (3) 1 grid up, 1 grip right yep
00:42:719 what do You think about removing this spinner and add here a note with New combo? Add note at 00:43:154. Add note at 00:43:589 with finish? and add the spinner at 00:43:806 and end it at 00:45:328 with finish? ;) nah sorry ;_;

01:20:545 maybe it would be better to remove this spinner and add notes like this? yay! Sure thing



Hard:
Nice ^^

Here's astar! ^^
Thank you :D
James2250
-All difficulties end at a different point at the moment, try and go through and make them all end at the same point for the sake of consistency
-Keep the preferred skin the same on all difficulties

Freak3's Easy:
-I suggest that you increase the distance snap slightly,the notes are fairly clumped together at the moment which doesn't look good
-Odd to have a break very close to the start of the map
-Pretty high AR for the easiest difficulty
00:26:524 (1) - make this start and end on white ticks not blue ticks
00:34:893 (4) - the ending of this doesn't need to quite so quiet
00:45:328 (3,5) - you could align some more of these notes to make it look neater
00:56:632 (1,2,3) - try and avoid hidden repeats on easier difficulties
01:19:241 (3) - random whistle for this map
01:50:545 (1,2) - try and avoid overlaps like this as they don't look good while playing
01:58:806 (2,3,1,2) - finishes on repeats don't fit
Last kiai time on the spinner is random and I suggest you remove it

Normal:
Needs to have at least 1 break (especially seeing as hard has one)
00:36:632 (5) - same comment as the earlier difficulty
00:42:067 (7,1) - spread out more
00:45:763 (1,2) - stuff like this looks pretty strange when not aligned
01:52:719 (3,4) - too many finishes and doesn't fit enough with the song
01:08:371 (8) - add a clap to the end of this to follow your pattern
01:10:980 (4) - at points like this you seem to change the rhythm your claps are following, try and keep them all following the same basic rhythm if possible
01:23:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some claps here

31's Taiko:
Make sure the tags match the other difficulties
No major errors, looks good (looks odd where it ends though)

Hard:
Don't overuse finishes too much or they lose their purpose (examples like 00:34:024 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) are overdoing it. There are several places like this you could check into
01:06:197 (7) - new combo
01:06:197 (7,1) - jump here seems fairly random
01:12:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whistles don't fit
01:21:632 (1,2,1,2) - make this pattern neater if you can

Still needs some improvements to the mapset but it isn't looking too bad so far, call me back after fixes and I will star
Rukario
General:
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol.
- 31's Taiko is missing this tag: 'samiljul'.
- The combo colour values are across all the difficulties slightly different. Please open the .osu files in Notepad and make them the same.

Freak3's Easy:
I noticed a lot of short spinners and a lot of of them having notes prety shortly after them. I am gonna point out all the spinenrs that can still stay with minor modifications. Please look at the other spinners then and either a.) remove them or b.) map something instead of the spinner. Really not trying to be mean but it's really hard for beginner players to hit notes so short after a spinner.
00:26:524 (1) - Move this spinner back one 1/4 tick.
00:50:980 (2,3) - It'd be better if you switch those two. Fits better with the lyrics.
01:06:197 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick.
01:47:937 (2) - New combo?

Normal:
01:21:850 (1) - Such a shot spinner is still a bit bad in a Normal and you could easily map something else here because a spinner doesn't fit here much anyways.
01:54:024 (1) - ^ except please just remove this one. Way too short for a Normal diff. A long slider could work well here as a hint.


Other than that this looks pretty alright and nice^^
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
Rukarioman

SPOILER

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol.
- 31's Taiko is missing this tag: 'samiljul'.
- The combo colour values are across all the difficulties slightly different. Please open the .osu files in Notepad and make them the same.

Freak3's Easy:
I noticed a lot of short spinners and a lot of of them having notes prety shortly after them. I am gonna point out all the spinenrs that can still stay with minor modifications. Please look at the other spinners then and either a.) remove them or b.) map something instead of the spinner. Really not trying to be mean but it's really hard for beginner players to hit notes so short after a spinner.
00:26:524 (1) - Move this spinner back one 1/4 tick.
00:50:980 (2,3) - It'd be better if you switch those two. Fits better with the lyrics.
01:06:197 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick.
01:47:937 (2) - New combo?

Normal:
01:21:850 (1) - Such a shot spinner is still a bit bad in a Normal and you could easily map something else here because a spinner doesn't fit here much anyways.
01:54:024 (1) - ^ except please just remove this one. Way too short for a Normal diff. A long slider could work well here as a hint.


Other than that this looks pretty alright and nice^^
All done Thank you~

James2250

SPOILER
-All difficulties end at a different point at the moment, try and go through and make them all end at the same point for the sake of consistency
-Keep the preferred skin the same on all difficulties

Freak3's Easy:
-I suggest that you increase the distance snap slightly,the notes are fairly clumped together at the moment which doesn't look good
-Odd to have a break very close to the start of the map
-Pretty high AR for the easiest difficulty
00:26:524 (1) - make this start and end on white ticks not blue ticks
00:34:893 (4) - the ending of this doesn't need to quite so quiet
00:45:328 (3,5) - you could align some more of these notes to make it look neater
00:56:632 (1,2,3) - try and avoid hidden repeats on easier difficulties
01:19:241 (3) - random whistle for this map
01:50:545 (1,2) - try and avoid overlaps like this as they don't look good while playing
01:58:806 (2,3,1,2) - finishes on repeats don't fit
Last kiai time on the spinner is random and I suggest you remove it

Normal:
Needs to have at least 1 break (especially seeing as hard has one)
00:36:632 (5) - same comment as the earlier difficulty
00:42:067 (7,1) - spread out more
00:45:763 (1,2) - stuff like this looks pretty strange when not aligned
01:52:719 (3,4) - too many finishes and doesn't fit enough with the song
01:08:371 (8) - add a clap to the end of this to follow your pattern
01:10:980 (4) - at points like this you seem to change the rhythm your claps are following, try and keep them all following the same basic rhythm if possible
01:23:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some claps here

31's Taiko:
Make sure the tags match the other difficulties
No major errors, looks good (looks odd where it ends though)

Hard:
Don't overuse finishes too much or they lose their purpose (examples like 00:34:024 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) are overdoing it. There are several places like this you could check into
01:06:197 (7) - new combo
01:06:197 (7,1) - jump here seems fairly random
01:12:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whistles don't fit
01:21:632 (1,2,1,2) - make this pattern neater if you can

Still needs some improvements to the mapset but it isn't looking too bad so far, call me back after fixes and I will star

All done

Thanks
NF3

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol. How do I do that? D:

Freak3's Easy:
I noticed a lot of short spinners and a lot of of them having notes prety shortly after them. I am gonna point out all the spinenrs that can still stay with minor modifications. Please look at the other spinners then and either a.) remove them or b.) map something instead of the spinner. Really not trying to be mean but it's really hard for beginner players to hit notes so short after a spinner.
00:26:524 (1) - Move this spinner back one 1/4 tick.
00:50:980 (2,3) - It'd be better if you switch those two. Fits better with the lyrics.
01:06:197 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick.
01:47:937 (2) - New combo?
Everything else should be fixed.^^

Download: Ivan Fillini feat.Miani - Tu vivi nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix) (lennox989) [Freak3's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol.
I have done for you~
rrtyui
yey
ziin
FILLINI

[general]
I'm getting offset 90, and that's still giving me 5 ms early.

[easy]
00:29:676 (1) - here's a pretty slider for you
372,176,29676,6,0,B|372:72|256:16|140:72|140:176,1,360
00:37:937 (1,2,3) - don't put these in a straight line, it looks bad

[normal]
00:58:806 (3,1,2,3) - careful on corners and straight sliders, they look bad if the sliders don't have the right speed/length
01:55:328 (2) - ^

[insane]
looks fine
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

ziin wrote:

FILLINI yay!

[general]
I'm getting offset 90, and that's still giving me 5 ms early. ok


[normal]
00:58:806 (3,1,2,3) - careful on corners and straight sliders, they look bad if the sliders don't have the right speed/length
01:55:328 (2) - ^

All done~

[insane] [Hard]
looks fine

Thx~
Lunah_old
Italian song :D <3
Yuzeyun
Here is my mod (Earlier than you can expect, I was bored)

[Easy]
-Make sure you snap all the notes here.
-Slider tick 1

00:37:916 (5) - New combo
00:49:241 (5) - ^
01:01:850 (3) - ^
01:03:154 (6) - ^
01:14:003 (3) - ^
01:19:220 (3) or 01:20:959 (4) - ^

[Normal]
-Make sure you snap all the notes here.

00:04:893 (1) - Cancel combo
00:05:980 (2) - New combo
00:15:763 (4) - ^
00:17:502 (7) - ^
00:18:806 (1) - Cancel combo
00:24:458 (3) - New combo
00:40:110 (4) - ^
00:45:328 (4) - ^
00:45:763 (1) - Cancel Combo
01:02:719 (5) - New combo
01:04:458 (1) - Cancel
01:06:197 (3) - New
01:20:111 (5) - New
01:27:502 (7) - New
01:34:458 (5) - New
01:43:154 (5) - New
01:46:632 (5) - New
01:48:371 (7) - New

[31's Taiko]
Make sure to snap all the notes.

[Hard]
I don't find any problem.

Here is a star because I like the map and song

I think that the snapping problems are more an offset issue, but Hard seems in rtyhm o_o (or I did not have a look in it. If hard has a different offset, use it :) )
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
.
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

-Lennox- wrote:

Gezoda wrote:

Here is my mod (Earlier than you can expect, I was bored)

[Normal]
-Make sure you snap all the notes here.

00:04:893 (1) - Cancel combo
00:05:980 (2) - New combo
00:15:763 (4) - ^
00:17:502 (7) - ^
00:18:806 (1) - Cancel combo
00:24:458 (3) - New combo
00:40:110 (4) - ^
00:45:328 (4) - ^
00:45:763 (1) - Cancel Combo
01:02:719 (5) - New combo
01:04:458 (1) - Cancel
01:06:197 (3) - New
01:20:111 (5) - New
01:27:502 (7) - New
01:34:458 (5) - New
01:43:154 (5) - New
01:46:632 (5) - New
01:48:371 (7) - New

[31's Taiko]
Make sure to snap all the notes.

[Hard]
I don't find any problem.

Here is a star because I like the map and song

I think that the snapping problems are more an offset issue, but Hard seems in rtyhm o_o (or I did not have a look in it. If hard has a different offset, use it :) )
All done.. thank you^^
NF3

Gezoda wrote:

[Easy]
00:37:916 (5) - New combo
00:49:241 (5) - ^
01:01:850 (3) - ^
01:03:154 (6) - ^
01:14:003 (3) - ^
01:19:220 (3) or 01:20:959 (4) - ^
Fixed~

Download: Ivan Fillini feat.Miani - Tu vivi nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix) (-Lennox-) [Freak3's Easy].osu
Raimon
Love it Star for you :D
TheVileOne
IRC modded.


Good maps.

star.
Luneko
Small IRC mod

have a star :3
SapphireGhost
[Normal]
01:03:133 (2,3) - I think this could look nicer. Try something like this.
[Hard]
00:13:350 (1) - Even for a jump, this spacing is confusing.

That's mostly all. Have a star!
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

SapphireGhost wrote:

[Normal]
01:03:133 (2,3) - I think this could look nicer. Try something like this. Nah ><
[Hard]
00:13:350 (1) - Even for a jump, this spacing is confusing. ok!

That's mostly all. Have a star!
Tenshi-nyan
heya.

Hard
00:27:698 (6) - 2 grids down?
01:08:568 (2) - der slider kann besser aussehen.... am besten du copy pasta den hier 01:22:481 (7) -

Normal
00:30:307 (1,2,3,4,5) - Finds dieser part spielt sich n bissl komisch...
01:04:872 (4) - leichter spacing fehler, nach links gehts nimmer also am besten etwas nach unten

Hmm ja das wars...
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

heya.

Hard
00:27:698 (6) - 2 grids down? k
01:08:568 (2) - der slider kann besser aussehen.... am besten du copy pasta den hier 01:22:481 (7) - k

Normal
00:30:307 (1,2,3,4,5) - Finds dieser part spielt sich n bissl komisch... Mhh.. ich finde der spielt sich perfekt.
01:04:872 (4) - leichter spacing fehler, nach links gehts nimmer also am besten etwas nach unten k

Hmm ja das wars...
galvenize
[General]

Unused .osb file, delete and full submit.

[Hard]

00:13:350 (1) - Remove new combo
00:12:698 (4) - Add new combo
01:12:046 (6) - New combo
01:12:263 (1) - remove new combo
01:13:133 (1) - Add finish

That's all.
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

galvenize wrote:

[General]

Unused .osb file, delete and full submit.
Re-Download and check it again. There is no unused .osb file ><
[Hard]

00:13:350 (1) - Remove new combo yes
00:12:698 (4) - Add new combo yes
01:12:046 (6) - New combo no
01:12:263 (1) - remove new combo no
01:13:133 (1) - Add finish yes

That's all.
Thx
BounceBabe
xXxHolicxXx
Pretty nice map, i like it
NecroAngel
nice nice map :D :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
OnosakiHito
:)
Larto
Ich bin stolz auf dich

Title: Miani - Tu Vivi Nell'Aria (Ivan Fillini Remix)

overall:
the way this song ends is pretty.. awkward. I think you just cut off the mp3 at some point? Because at the very end of the mp3 you still have a beep sound for a few milliseconds. :<

Hard:
00:27:698 (6) - The repeat is really hard to see because of (4)'s hitburst.
01:08:568 (2) - ugly <3

Normal:
8===D

THIS IS THE REMIX
OF IVAN
FILLINI
FILLINI
FILLINI
FILLINI
Shiro
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember that all of these are suggestions (bold lines being the main issues that should really be fixed).
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
Adding a third diff would make the map a lot better...
The mp3 really isn't loud... I think it would be better to find a louder mp3.
I have an offset of 98. Remember to resnap all objects.

Normal
There are parts that I think are too hard for a Normal diff... Especially since it's the easiest in the mapset, it's made for new players to play.
(nazi) 00:12:706 (2,3,4) - space them perfectly ? (turn grid snap off)
00:22:054 (5) - This should have a clap on the second beat.
00:22:706 (1,2,3) - These claps are offbeat compared to the claps before. It makes them sound weird.
00:57:489 (1,2,3) - This is an example of what I think is too hard. I've seen many new players get confused on slider patterns like that, or sliderbreaking because they couldn't hit with the right rhythm...
01:05:750 - There should be a note here I think, leaving this blank makes it sound weird.
01:17:924 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:57:489 -
01:48:793 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:57:489 -
01:51:402 (1,2,3,4) - Same except I strongly suggest you changed it ;_;
01:56:619 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as 01:51:402 -

Hard
Nothing to say, this was quite fun to play.
Xeno_old
Test played it a few times. I like it. Good job.

One thing you can do is this

make Lead-in time 5 seconds ( force it in .osu file )

[General]
AudioLeadIn: 5000

The epilepsy warming fades just in time then and doesn't overlap with start of maps.
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember that all of these are suggestions (bold lines being the main issues that should really be fixed).
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
Adding a third diff would make the map a lot better... I don't really want it.. ><
The mp3 really isn't loud... I think it would be better to find a louder mp3. No.. i don't change anything on the mp3. I have many problems yesterday with the fucking mp3. And btw the mp3 is loud enough imo :o
I have an offset of 98. Remember to resnap all objects. ok

Normal
There are parts that I think are too hard for a Normal diff... Especially since it's the easiest in the mapset, it's made for new players to play.
(nazi) 00:12:706 (2,3,4) - space them perfectly ? (turn grid snap off)
00:22:054 (5) - This should have a clap on the second beat.
00:22:706 (1,2,3) - These claps are offbeat compared to the claps before. It makes them sound weird.
00:57:489 (1,2,3) - This is an example of what I think is too hard. I've seen many new players get confused on slider patterns like that, or sliderbreaking because they couldn't hit with the right rhythm...
01:05:750 - There should be a note here I think, leaving this blank makes it sound weird.
01:17:924 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:57:489 -
01:48:793 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:57:489 -
01:51:402 (1,2,3,4) - Same except I strongly suggest you changed it ;_;
01:56:619 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as 01:51:402 -

All done

Hard
Nothing to say, this was quite fun to play. \:D/


Thx >w<
OnosakiHito
RAWR! Speed mapping, what a short request. xD
It's a easy map and dosen't include any issues.
Please delete the SB in the Taiko diff. like everytime. :3




Download: Miani - Tu Vivi Nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix) (-Lennox-) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Larto
?

Topic Starter
-Lennox-
xD <3
Andrea
Some IRC Modding.

- Adjusted the Audio Lead-In to 2000 on every difficulty.
- Changed the Background Colour to Black on every difficulty.
- Removed the Letterbox during breaks on osu! Standard difficulties.

Ranked~
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

osuplayer111 wrote:

Some IRC Modding.

- Adjusted the Audio Lead-In to 2000 on every difficulty.
- Changed the Background Colour to Black on every difficulty.
- Removed the Letterbox during breaks on osu! Standard difficulties.

Ranked~

\:D/
OnosakiHito
CONGRATULATION!!! :D
THank you osuplayer. :3
-kevincela-
Yaahay italian song! :D
Gratz :D
Sallad4ever
oh it's ranked~
that took a very long time. Congratz~
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
thx o/
Mianki
Eh, I like the Gabry Ponte ft. Miani version better.
Good map thou :P
Magicphoenix
Of Iva Fillini
Fillini
fillini...
Zaggeh
I don't get it, sorry I'm kinda new and stuff. But why isn't this beatmap approved? I just downloaded it as part of beatmap pack 137 and when I cleared it it said it wasn't approved, even though according to this thread it should be. I thought all the beatmaps distributed in the packs were ranked, and I kinda like the song so I'd hate to delete it. :-(
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
lol the map is definatly RANKED and not APPROVED.
Zaggeh
I don't really understand what all that means, sorry. All I know is that right now when I play it there's no ranking statistics/leaderboard at the end, it doesn't affect my overall score and says that it is unapproved, and when I look at it in the beatmap pack listings it doesn't show up as cleared. It's the only song I've ever played that has had that problem.
Zaggeh
Nevermind. I got it working. Turns out the version that was distributed with Beatmap Pack 347 was an older version. Updating it fixed it. I'm not sure how those beatmap packs at http://osu.ppy.sh/p/packlist work but you might want to contact the person in charge of them and ask them to update it so you don't have a bunch of confused newbies like me.
raziK_old
good map !
marshallracer
uhhhh ... why does it need to update directly after downloading the map?
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