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Ivan Fillini feat.Miani - TU (Ivan Fillini Remix)

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IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,958 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
There's no BG at all in Easy and Normal.

Add nickname of Taiko guest mapper to Tags everywhere.

[Easy]
00:38:126 (5,6,7) - It doesn't follow rhytm/lyrics/musics or whatever else.
I'd remove all these notes and use 00:38:995 (6) - 00:39:213 (7) - 00:39:430 (8) pattern.At least it follows lyrics.
00:46:604 - Add a note please,unless this space sounds really weird.
00:48:343 - ^
00:50:082 - ^
00:50:952 - ^
01:12:256 (1) - Huh,a jump? Fix distance.
02:01:821 (1) - So short -_-

[Normal]
AR is lower then in Easy,and when there're lots of object come at the same time,like in the final part,there's some mess on the screen.Really suggest you to increase it.
02:00:734 (1,1,1) - What a combo spam? Remove please.
02:02:255 (1) - Still fast weird spinner.

[Hard]
00:02:691 (1,1,1) - Yeah,combo spam isn't allowed anymore,remove please.
00:39:865 (1) - Remove NC.
02:02:800 (x) - Wth with Kiai? Disable it.
That distance changing in the very end was unexpected,believe me.

Good job.
Star~
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

IceBeam wrote:

There's no BG at all in Easy and Normal. Changed...

Add nickname of Taiko guest mapper to Tags everywhere. fix'd

[Normal]
AR is lower then in Easy,and when there're lots of object come at the same time,like in the final part,there's some mess on the screen.Really suggest you to increase it. changed
02:00:734 (1,1,1) - What a combo spam? Remove please. changed
02:02:255 (1) - Still fast weird spinner. removed

[Hard]
00:02:691 (1,1,1) - Yeah,combo spam isn't allowed anymore,remove please. yep..
00:39:865 (1) - Remove NC. changed
02:02:800 (x) - Wth with Kiai? Disable it. yea
That distance changing in the very end was unexpected,believe me. sorry but i dont want to change it :(

Good job.
Star~
thank you
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[31's Taiko]

tag 31's name!

some spinners can be added between some of the 1 bar breaks like 00:28:126?
Just a suggestion, patterns is pretty fine.

no kd
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
hi :)

General
  1. offset : 111 & resnap all note
  2. Preferred skin : Mah skin ??? change to the User's preference.
  3. 1st kiai start at 01:13:126 , end at 01:27:039 & 2nd kiai start at 01:54:865 , end at 02:01:821
Freak3's Easy
  1. 00:26:604 (1) - end at 00:28:778
  2. 00:29:648 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51292
  3. 00:38:126 (5) - add new combo
  4. 01:09:647 (1,2,3) - move at center
  5. 01:04:865 (3) - end at 01:05:734 & 01:06:604 (1) - start at 01:06:169
  6. 01:17:039 (2,3) - (3) is hidden in (2),
  7. 01:52:256 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51297
  8. 01:56:604 (1) - delete new combo
  9. 01:58:343 (1,2,3.1.2) - 2grid down
Normal
  1. 00:22:690 (7,1) - add new combo to (7) , (1) delete new combo
  2. 00:45:734 (1,2) - 1grid left
  3. 00:50:081 (1) - delete new combo, (2) add new combo
  4. 00:50:951 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1grid up
  5. 01:04:429 (1) - 1grid left
  6. 01:17:038 (7,1) - (7) add new combo , (1) delete
  7. 01:17:038 (7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51299
  8. 01:20:516 (1) - end at 01:23:125 , 01:22:690 (1) - start at 01:23:560
  9. 01:57:255 (1) - delete new combo
  10. 01:59:429 (1) - ^
  11. 01:59:864 (1) - ^
  12. 02:00:516 (2) - add new combo
  13. 02:01:386 (1) - delete new combo & http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51301
31's Taiko
  • i cant taiko mod
Hard
  1. AR -1
  2. 02:00:952 (3,4) - (4) is hidden in (3)
+star.
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

Muya wrote:

hi :)

General
  1. offset : 111 & resnap all note
  2. Preferred skin : Mah skin ??? change to the User's preference.
  3. 1st kiai start at 01:13:126 , end at 01:27:039 & 2nd kiai start at 01:54:865 , end at 02:01:821
All done



Normal
  1. 00:22:690 (7,1) - add new combo to (7) , (1) delete new combo
  2. 00:45:734 (1,2) - 1grid left
  3. 00:50:081 (1) - delete new combo, (2) add new combo
  4. 00:50:951 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1grid up
  5. 01:04:429 (1) - 1grid left
  6. 01:17:038 (7,1) - (7) add new combo , (1) delete
  7. 01:17:038 (7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51299
  8. 01:20:516 (1) - end at 01:23:125 , 01:22:690 (1) - start at 01:23:560
  9. 01:57:255 (1) - delete new combo
  10. 01:59:429 (1) - ^
  11. 01:59:864 (1) - ^
  12. 02:00:516 (2) - add new combo
  13. 02:01:386 (1) - delete new combo & http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51301

All done


31's Taiko
  • i cant taiko mod
ok :D

Hard
  1. AR -1 no sorry :(
  2. 02:00:952 (3,4) - (4) is hidden in (3)
ok done

+star.

Thanks for your mod :D
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi

General
1) The offset is diffrent on each diff!
2) Add "samiljul" in 31's Taiko, you seems forgot that
3) First kiai should be 01:13:154 ~ 01:27:067
4) Second kiai should be 01:54:893 ~ 02:01:850

Freak3's Easy
00:14:430 (1) - This spinner is short, extend it. Otherwise, beginner player couldn't complete the spinner metre
00:26:169 (4) - Remove whistle?
00:26:604 (1) - This spinner is short, extend it. Otherwise, beginner player couldn't complete the spinner metre
00:29:648 (1) - I think these slider is better, try yourself, it's neat slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51146
00:38:126 (5) - New combo?
00:59:648 (2) - Can you make it prettier? This slider kinda odd for me, IMO
01:04:865 (3) - Try make it slider like this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51147
01:40:952 (1) - Too far away from spinner, it could be beginner player can't reach that object during gameplay
01:47:908 (2) - New combo?
01:52:256 (3) - Too short for easy diff and it's inappropriate
01:53:126 (1) - New combo for fix the spinner bug
02:01:821 (1) - This spinner is short, extend it. Otherwise, beginner player couldn't complete the spinner metre

Normal
00:02:690 (4) - New combo?
00:42:038 (7) - Remove whistle?
00:42:690 (1) - ^
00:56:168 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
01:20:545 (1,1) - These 2 spinner are bit odd for me, can you remap those?

Hard
00:20:111 (6) - Remove clap?
00:26:197 (3) - Make symetric?
00:30:980 (5) - Not stack perfectly with 00:30:328 (4)
00:43:371 (5,6,7) - Too much finish hitsound >.<
01:13:589 (1,2,3,4) - This hitsound are odd, change something
01:17:067 (5,6,7,1) - ^
01:55:328 ~ End - You seems use 1,5 BPM Adjustments, add warning using a SB?

Nice song, but the song is end suddenly >.<
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

Leorda wrote:

Hi

General
1) The offset is diffrent on each diff!
2) Add "samiljul" in 31's Taiko, you seems forgot that
SPOILER


I cant do anything in his diff :(

3) First kiai should be 01:13:154 ~ 01:27:067
4) Second kiai should be 01:54:893 ~ 02:01:850

all done


Normal
00:02:690 (4) - New combo?
00:42:038 (7) - Remove whistle?
00:42:690 (1) - ^
00:56:168 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
01:20:545 (1,1) - These 2 spinner are bit odd for me, can you remap those?

All done

Hard
00:20:111 (6) - Remove clap?
00:26:197 (3) - Make symetric?
00:30:980 (5) - Not stack perfectly with 00:30:328 (4)
00:43:371 (5,6,7) - Too much finish hitsound >.<
01:13:589 (1,2,3,4) - This hitsound are odd, change something
01:17:067 (5,6,7,1) - ^
01:55:328 ~ End - You seems use 1,5 BPM Adjustments, add warning using a SB? i have no idea how to make an sb D:

done

Nice song, but the song is end suddenly >.<
yea i know..

Thanks for the mod
NF3
13 posts
Joined March 2010
NF3
Everything in my diff should be fixed for now.

Download: Ivan Fillini feat.Miani - Tu vivi nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix) (lennox989) [Freak3's Easy].osu
MoonShade
487 posts
Joined February 2010
MoonShade
Sry hat ein wenig gedauert mit dem Mod, weil ich mich noch um andere Dinge kümmern musste. Sehr schöne Map, dein Stil gefällt mir auch sehr gut, ich bin sicher dass du diese Map geranked kriegst, also streng dich an :3

Easy
01:03:589 - circle plazieren
01:20:980 (4,5,6) - 1 nach unten
01:58:371 (1) - weso nicht auf die gleiche stelle wie 01:56:632 (1) ?

Normal
00:26:197 (6) - neue combo?
01:04:458 (1) - 1 nach rechts

Hard
01:09:241 (4) - 1 nach unten
01:26:958 - circle platzieren und dann das ganze als stream
02:01:415 (4) - da könnte noch mehr abstand zu 02:00:980 (3), wenn du willst
01:55:328 ~ End - You seems use 1,5 BPM Adjustments, add warning using a SB? i have no idea how to make an sb D:
No Problem here, it's not that surprising so there is no need for an sb warning. Nevertheless, if you feel you need one, ask me :3

Das ist alles was ich finden konnte, also eher Kleinigkeiten. Ich hoffe das konnte dir trotzdem weiterhelfen.

Very nice Map, Star~
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

MoonShade wrote:

Sry hat ein wenig gedauert mit dem Mod, weil ich mich noch um andere Dinge kümmern musste. Sehr schöne Map, dein Stil gefällt mir auch sehr gut, ich bin sicher dass du diese Map geranked kriegst, also streng dich an :3 Mach ich ^__^


Normal
00:26:197 (6) - neue combo? jop
01:04:458 (1) - 1 nach rechts jop

Hard
01:09:241 (4) - 1 nach unten jau
01:26:958 - circle platzieren und dann das ganze als stream Hmm, mehr streams bedeuten mehr streams... ach was red ich jap gemacht ^__^
02:01:415 (4) - da könnte noch mehr abstand zu 02:00:980 (3), wenn du willst jo hab bissl mehr genommen

01:55:328 ~ End - You seems use 1,5 BPM Adjustments, add warning using a SB? i have no idea how to make an sb D:
No Problem here, it's not that surprising so there is no need for an sb warning. Nevertheless, if you feel you need one, ask me :3

Das ist alles was ich finden konnte, also eher Kleinigkeiten. Ich hoffe das konnte dir trotzdem weiterhelfen.

Very nice Map, Star~
Ich bin nicht wirklich dafür das hier ne warnung her muss... danke für's moden :3
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
ShadowSoul
Huebscher Stil o: ich mag die map :D ~star
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
hi^^
here's my suggestions ;)

Freak3's Easy:
00:26:747 maybe start this spinner on the next white tick and end it on 00:28:589?
00:38:806 (2,3) 2 grids left
01:12:937 repeat once more the previous slider, or add here a note?

Normal:
00:39:241 (3) 1 grid up, 1 grip right
00:42:719 what do You think about removing this spinner and add here a note with New combo? Add note at 00:43:154. Add note at 00:43:589 with finish? and add the spinner at 00:43:806 and end it at 00:45:328 with finish? ;)

01:20:545 maybe it would be better to remove this spinner and add notes like this?



Hard:
Nice ^^

Here's astar! ^^
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

ShiroKitty wrote:

hi^^
here's my suggestions ;)

Freak3's Easy:
00:26:747 maybe start this spinner on the next white tick and end it on 00:28:589?
00:38:806 (2,3) 2 grids left
01:12:937 repeat once more the previous slider, or add here a note?

Normal:
00:39:241 (3) 1 grid up, 1 grip right yep
00:42:719 what do You think about removing this spinner and add here a note with New combo? Add note at 00:43:154. Add note at 00:43:589 with finish? and add the spinner at 00:43:806 and end it at 00:45:328 with finish? ;) nah sorry ;_;

01:20:545 maybe it would be better to remove this spinner and add notes like this? yay! Sure thing



Hard:
Nice ^^

Here's astar! ^^
Thank you :D
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
-All difficulties end at a different point at the moment, try and go through and make them all end at the same point for the sake of consistency
-Keep the preferred skin the same on all difficulties

Freak3's Easy:
-I suggest that you increase the distance snap slightly,the notes are fairly clumped together at the moment which doesn't look good
-Odd to have a break very close to the start of the map
-Pretty high AR for the easiest difficulty
00:26:524 (1) - make this start and end on white ticks not blue ticks
00:34:893 (4) - the ending of this doesn't need to quite so quiet
00:45:328 (3,5) - you could align some more of these notes to make it look neater
00:56:632 (1,2,3) - try and avoid hidden repeats on easier difficulties
01:19:241 (3) - random whistle for this map
01:50:545 (1,2) - try and avoid overlaps like this as they don't look good while playing
01:58:806 (2,3,1,2) - finishes on repeats don't fit
Last kiai time on the spinner is random and I suggest you remove it

Normal:
Needs to have at least 1 break (especially seeing as hard has one)
00:36:632 (5) - same comment as the earlier difficulty
00:42:067 (7,1) - spread out more
00:45:763 (1,2) - stuff like this looks pretty strange when not aligned
01:52:719 (3,4) - too many finishes and doesn't fit enough with the song
01:08:371 (8) - add a clap to the end of this to follow your pattern
01:10:980 (4) - at points like this you seem to change the rhythm your claps are following, try and keep them all following the same basic rhythm if possible
01:23:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some claps here

31's Taiko:
Make sure the tags match the other difficulties
No major errors, looks good (looks odd where it ends though)

Hard:
Don't overuse finishes too much or they lose their purpose (examples like 00:34:024 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) are overdoing it. There are several places like this you could check into
01:06:197 (7) - new combo
01:06:197 (7,1) - jump here seems fairly random
01:12:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whistles don't fit
01:21:632 (1,2,1,2) - make this pattern neater if you can

Still needs some improvements to the mapset but it isn't looking too bad so far, call me back after fixes and I will star
Last edited by James2250 , edited 1 time in total.
Rukario
973 posts
Joined May 2009
Rukario
General:
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol.
- 31's Taiko is missing this tag: 'samiljul'.
- The combo colour values are across all the difficulties slightly different. Please open the .osu files in Notepad and make them the same.

Freak3's Easy:
I noticed a lot of short spinners and a lot of of them having notes prety shortly after them. I am gonna point out all the spinenrs that can still stay with minor modifications. Please look at the other spinners then and either a.) remove them or b.) map something instead of the spinner. Really not trying to be mean but it's really hard for beginner players to hit notes so short after a spinner.
00:26:524 (1) - Move this spinner back one 1/4 tick.
00:50:980 (2,3) - It'd be better if you switch those two. Fits better with the lyrics.
01:06:197 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick.
01:47:937 (2) - New combo?

Normal:
01:21:850 (1) - Such a shot spinner is still a bit bad in a Normal and you could easily map something else here because a spinner doesn't fit here much anyways.
01:54:024 (1) - ^ except please just remove this one. Way too short for a Normal diff. A long slider could work well here as a hint.


Other than that this looks pretty alright and nice^^
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
Rukarioman

SPOILER

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol.
- 31's Taiko is missing this tag: 'samiljul'.
- The combo colour values are across all the difficulties slightly different. Please open the .osu files in Notepad and make them the same.

Freak3's Easy:
I noticed a lot of short spinners and a lot of of them having notes prety shortly after them. I am gonna point out all the spinenrs that can still stay with minor modifications. Please look at the other spinners then and either a.) remove them or b.) map something instead of the spinner. Really not trying to be mean but it's really hard for beginner players to hit notes so short after a spinner.
00:26:524 (1) - Move this spinner back one 1/4 tick.
00:50:980 (2,3) - It'd be better if you switch those two. Fits better with the lyrics.
01:06:197 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick.
01:47:937 (2) - New combo?

Normal:
01:21:850 (1) - Such a shot spinner is still a bit bad in a Normal and you could easily map something else here because a spinner doesn't fit here much anyways.
01:54:024 (1) - ^ except please just remove this one. Way too short for a Normal diff. A long slider could work well here as a hint.


Other than that this looks pretty alright and nice^^
All done Thank you~

James2250

SPOILER
-All difficulties end at a different point at the moment, try and go through and make them all end at the same point for the sake of consistency
-Keep the preferred skin the same on all difficulties

Freak3's Easy:
-I suggest that you increase the distance snap slightly,the notes are fairly clumped together at the moment which doesn't look good
-Odd to have a break very close to the start of the map
-Pretty high AR for the easiest difficulty
00:26:524 (1) - make this start and end on white ticks not blue ticks
00:34:893 (4) - the ending of this doesn't need to quite so quiet
00:45:328 (3,5) - you could align some more of these notes to make it look neater
00:56:632 (1,2,3) - try and avoid hidden repeats on easier difficulties
01:19:241 (3) - random whistle for this map
01:50:545 (1,2) - try and avoid overlaps like this as they don't look good while playing
01:58:806 (2,3,1,2) - finishes on repeats don't fit
Last kiai time on the spinner is random and I suggest you remove it

Normal:
Needs to have at least 1 break (especially seeing as hard has one)
00:36:632 (5) - same comment as the earlier difficulty
00:42:067 (7,1) - spread out more
00:45:763 (1,2) - stuff like this looks pretty strange when not aligned
01:52:719 (3,4) - too many finishes and doesn't fit enough with the song
01:08:371 (8) - add a clap to the end of this to follow your pattern
01:10:980 (4) - at points like this you seem to change the rhythm your claps are following, try and keep them all following the same basic rhythm if possible
01:23:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some claps here

31's Taiko:
Make sure the tags match the other difficulties
No major errors, looks good (looks odd where it ends though)

Hard:
Don't overuse finishes too much or they lose their purpose (examples like 00:34:024 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) are overdoing it. There are several places like this you could check into
01:06:197 (7) - new combo
01:06:197 (7,1) - jump here seems fairly random
01:12:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whistles don't fit
01:21:632 (1,2,1,2) - make this pattern neater if you can

Still needs some improvements to the mapset but it isn't looking too bad so far, call me back after fixes and I will star

All done

Thanks
NF3
13 posts
Joined March 2010
NF3

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol. How do I do that? D:

Freak3's Easy:
I noticed a lot of short spinners and a lot of of them having notes prety shortly after them. I am gonna point out all the spinenrs that can still stay with minor modifications. Please look at the other spinners then and either a.) remove them or b.) map something instead of the spinner. Really not trying to be mean but it's really hard for beginner players to hit notes so short after a spinner.
00:26:524 (1) - Move this spinner back one 1/4 tick.
00:50:980 (2,3) - It'd be better if you switch those two. Fits better with the lyrics.
01:06:197 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick.
01:47:937 (2) - New combo?
Everything else should be fixed.^^

Download: Ivan Fillini feat.Miani - Tu vivi nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix) (lennox989) [Freak3's Easy].osu
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol.
I have done for you~
rrtyui
Former osu! Champion: 2014
744 posts
Joined May 2010
rrtyui
yey
ziin
2,632 posts
Joined January 2010
ziin
FILLINI

[general]
I'm getting offset 90, and that's still giving me 5 ms early.

[easy]
00:29:676 (1) - here's a pretty slider for you
372,176,29676,6,0,B|372:72|256:16|140:72|140:176,1,360
00:37:937 (1,2,3) - don't put these in a straight line, it looks bad

[normal]
00:58:806 (3,1,2,3) - careful on corners and straight sliders, they look bad if the sliders don't have the right speed/length
01:55:328 (2) - ^

[insane]
looks fine
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

ziin wrote:

FILLINI yay!

[general]
I'm getting offset 90, and that's still giving me 5 ms early. ok


[normal]
00:58:806 (3,1,2,3) - careful on corners and straight sliders, they look bad if the sliders don't have the right speed/length
01:55:328 (2) - ^

All done~

[insane] [Hard]
looks fine

Thx~
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
Italian song :D <3
Yuzeyun
7,650 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Here is my mod (Earlier than you can expect, I was bored)

[Easy]
-Make sure you snap all the notes here.
-Slider tick 1

00:37:916 (5) - New combo
00:49:241 (5) - ^
01:01:850 (3) - ^
01:03:154 (6) - ^
01:14:003 (3) - ^
01:19:220 (3) or 01:20:959 (4) - ^

[Normal]
-Make sure you snap all the notes here.

00:04:893 (1) - Cancel combo
00:05:980 (2) - New combo
00:15:763 (4) - ^
00:17:502 (7) - ^
00:18:806 (1) - Cancel combo
00:24:458 (3) - New combo
00:40:110 (4) - ^
00:45:328 (4) - ^
00:45:763 (1) - Cancel Combo
01:02:719 (5) - New combo
01:04:458 (1) - Cancel
01:06:197 (3) - New
01:20:111 (5) - New
01:27:502 (7) - New
01:34:458 (5) - New
01:43:154 (5) - New
01:46:632 (5) - New
01:48:371 (7) - New

[31's Taiko]
Make sure to snap all the notes.

[Hard]
I don't find any problem.

Here is a star because I like the map and song

I think that the snapping problems are more an offset issue, but Hard seems in rtyhm o_o (or I did not have a look in it. If hard has a different offset, use it :) )
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
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Last edited by -Lennox- , edited 1 time in total.
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

-Lennox- wrote:

Gezoda wrote:

Here is my mod (Earlier than you can expect, I was bored)

[Normal]
-Make sure you snap all the notes here.

00:04:893 (1) - Cancel combo
00:05:980 (2) - New combo
00:15:763 (4) - ^
00:17:502 (7) - ^
00:18:806 (1) - Cancel combo
00:24:458 (3) - New combo
00:40:110 (4) - ^
00:45:328 (4) - ^
00:45:763 (1) - Cancel Combo
01:02:719 (5) - New combo
01:04:458 (1) - Cancel
01:06:197 (3) - New
01:20:111 (5) - New
01:27:502 (7) - New
01:34:458 (5) - New
01:43:154 (5) - New
01:46:632 (5) - New
01:48:371 (7) - New

[31's Taiko]
Make sure to snap all the notes.

[Hard]
I don't find any problem.

Here is a star because I like the map and song

I think that the snapping problems are more an offset issue, but Hard seems in rtyhm o_o (or I did not have a look in it. If hard has a different offset, use it :) )
All done.. thank you^^
NF3
13 posts
Joined March 2010
NF3

Gezoda wrote:

[Easy]
00:37:916 (5) - New combo
00:49:241 (5) - ^
01:01:850 (3) - ^
01:03:154 (6) - ^
01:14:003 (3) - ^
01:19:220 (3) or 01:20:959 (4) - ^
Fixed~

Download: Ivan Fillini feat.Miani - Tu vivi nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix) (-Lennox-) [Freak3's Easy].osu
Raimon
295 posts
Joined December 2010
Raimon
Love it Star for you :D
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,436 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
IRC modded.


Good maps.

star.
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Small IRC mod

have a star :3
SapphireGhost
osu! Alumni
2,618 posts
Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
[Normal]
01:03:133 (2,3) - I think this could look nicer. Try something like this.
[Hard]
00:13:350 (1) - Even for a jump, this spacing is confusing.

That's mostly all. Have a star!
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

SapphireGhost wrote:

[Normal]
01:03:133 (2,3) - I think this could look nicer. Try something like this. Nah ><
[Hard]
00:13:350 (1) - Even for a jump, this spacing is confusing. ok!

That's mostly all. Have a star!
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
heya.

Hard
00:27:698 (6) - 2 grids down?
01:08:568 (2) - der slider kann besser aussehen.... am besten du copy pasta den hier 01:22:481 (7) -

Normal
00:30:307 (1,2,3,4,5) - Finds dieser part spielt sich n bissl komisch...
01:04:872 (4) - leichter spacing fehler, nach links gehts nimmer also am besten etwas nach unten

Hmm ja das wars...
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

heya.

Hard
00:27:698 (6) - 2 grids down? k
01:08:568 (2) - der slider kann besser aussehen.... am besten du copy pasta den hier 01:22:481 (7) - k

Normal
00:30:307 (1,2,3,4,5) - Finds dieser part spielt sich n bissl komisch... Mhh.. ich finde der spielt sich perfekt.
01:04:872 (4) - leichter spacing fehler, nach links gehts nimmer also am besten etwas nach unten k

Hmm ja das wars...
galvenize
919 posts
Joined June 2010
galvenize
[General]

Unused .osb file, delete and full submit.

[Hard]

00:13:350 (1) - Remove new combo
00:12:698 (4) - Add new combo
01:12:046 (6) - New combo
01:12:263 (1) - remove new combo
01:13:133 (1) - Add finish

That's all.
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

galvenize wrote:

[General]

Unused .osb file, delete and full submit.
Re-Download and check it again. There is no unused .osb file ><
[Hard]

00:13:350 (1) - Remove new combo yes
00:12:698 (4) - Add new combo yes
01:12:046 (6) - New combo no
01:12:263 (1) - remove new combo no
01:13:133 (1) - Add finish yes

That's all.
Thx
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
♥
xXxHolicxXx
6 posts
Joined September 2010
xXxHolicxXx
Pretty nice map, i like it
NecroAngel
1 post
Joined April 2011
NecroAngel
nice nice map :D :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
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Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
:)
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Ich bin stolz auf dich

Title: Miani - Tu Vivi Nell'Aria (Ivan Fillini Remix)

overall:
the way this song ends is pretty.. awkward. I think you just cut off the mp3 at some point? Because at the very end of the mp3 you still have a beep sound for a few milliseconds. :<

Hard:
00:27:698 (6) - The repeat is really hard to see because of (4)'s hitburst.
01:08:568 (2) - ugly <3

Normal:
8===D

THIS IS THE REMIX
OF IVAN
FILLINI
FILLINI
FILLINI
FILLINI
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember that all of these are suggestions (bold lines being the main issues that should really be fixed).
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
Adding a third diff would make the map a lot better...
The mp3 really isn't loud... I think it would be better to find a louder mp3.
I have an offset of 98. Remember to resnap all objects.

Normal
There are parts that I think are too hard for a Normal diff... Especially since it's the easiest in the mapset, it's made for new players to play.
(nazi) 00:12:706 (2,3,4) - space them perfectly ? (turn grid snap off)
00:22:054 (5) - This should have a clap on the second beat.
00:22:706 (1,2,3) - These claps are offbeat compared to the claps before. It makes them sound weird.
00:57:489 (1,2,3) - This is an example of what I think is too hard. I've seen many new players get confused on slider patterns like that, or sliderbreaking because they couldn't hit with the right rhythm...
01:05:750 - There should be a note here I think, leaving this blank makes it sound weird.
01:17:924 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:57:489 -
01:48:793 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:57:489 -
01:51:402 (1,2,3,4) - Same except I strongly suggest you changed it ;_;
01:56:619 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as 01:51:402 -

Hard
Nothing to say, this was quite fun to play.
Xeno_old
120 posts
Joined June 2009
Xeno_old
Test played it a few times. I like it. Good job.

One thing you can do is this

make Lead-in time 5 seconds ( force it in .osu file )

[General]
AudioLeadIn: 5000

The epilepsy warming fades just in time then and doesn't overlap with start of maps.
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember that all of these are suggestions (bold lines being the main issues that should really be fixed).
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
Adding a third diff would make the map a lot better... I don't really want it.. ><
The mp3 really isn't loud... I think it would be better to find a louder mp3. No.. i don't change anything on the mp3. I have many problems yesterday with the fucking mp3. And btw the mp3 is loud enough imo :o
I have an offset of 98. Remember to resnap all objects. ok

Normal
There are parts that I think are too hard for a Normal diff... Especially since it's the easiest in the mapset, it's made for new players to play.
(nazi) 00:12:706 (2,3,4) - space them perfectly ? (turn grid snap off)
00:22:054 (5) - This should have a clap on the second beat.
00:22:706 (1,2,3) - These claps are offbeat compared to the claps before. It makes them sound weird.
00:57:489 (1,2,3) - This is an example of what I think is too hard. I've seen many new players get confused on slider patterns like that, or sliderbreaking because they couldn't hit with the right rhythm...
01:05:750 - There should be a note here I think, leaving this blank makes it sound weird.
01:17:924 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:57:489 -
01:48:793 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:57:489 -
01:51:402 (1,2,3,4) - Same except I strongly suggest you changed it ;_;
01:56:619 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as 01:51:402 -

All done

Hard
Nothing to say, this was quite fun to play. \:D/


Thx >w<
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,865 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
RAWR! Speed mapping, what a short request. xD
It's a easy map and dosen't include any issues.
Please delete the SB in the Taiko diff. like everytime. :3



Download: Miani - Tu Vivi Nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix) (-Lennox-) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
?

-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
xD <3
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Some IRC Modding.

- Adjusted the Audio Lead-In to 2000 on every difficulty.
- Changed the Background Colour to Black on every difficulty.
- Removed the Letterbox during breaks on osu! Standard difficulties.

Ranked~
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

osuplayer111 wrote:

Some IRC Modding.

- Adjusted the Audio Lead-In to 2000 on every difficulty.
- Changed the Background Colour to Black on every difficulty.
- Removed the Letterbox during breaks on osu! Standard difficulties.

Ranked~

\:D/
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,865 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
CONGRATULATION!!! :D
THank you osuplayer. :3
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,858 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Yaahay italian song! :D
Gratz :D
Sallad4ever
2,941 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
oh it's ranked~
that took a very long time. Congratz~
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
thx o/
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Eh, I like the Gabry Ponte ft. Miani version better.
Good map thou :P
Magicphoenix
2,142 posts
Joined April 2010
Magicphoenix
Of Iva Fillini
Fillini
fillini...
Zaggeh
6 posts
Joined April 2011
Zaggeh
I don't get it, sorry I'm kinda new and stuff. But why isn't this beatmap approved? I just downloaded it as part of beatmap pack 137 and when I cleared it it said it wasn't approved, even though according to this thread it should be. I thought all the beatmaps distributed in the packs were ranked, and I kinda like the song so I'd hate to delete it. :-(
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
lol the map is definatly RANKED and not APPROVED.
Zaggeh
6 posts
Joined April 2011
Zaggeh
I don't really understand what all that means, sorry. All I know is that right now when I play it there's no ranking statistics/leaderboard at the end, it doesn't affect my overall score and says that it is unapproved, and when I look at it in the beatmap pack listings it doesn't show up as cleared. It's the only song I've ever played that has had that problem.
Zaggeh
6 posts
Joined April 2011
Zaggeh
Nevermind. I got it working. Turns out the version that was distributed with Beatmap Pack 347 was an older version. Updating it fixed it. I'm not sure how those beatmap packs at http://osu.ppy.sh/p/packlist work but you might want to contact the person in charge of them and ask them to update it so you don't have a bunch of confused newbies like me.
raziK_old
9 posts
Joined April 2009
raziK_old
good map !
marshallracer
1,608 posts
Joined December 2010
marshallracer
uhhhh ... why does it need to update directly after downloading the map?
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