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Ivan Fillini feat.Miani - TU (Ivan Fillini Remix)

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Topic Starter
-Lennox-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Freitag, 15. April 2011 at 16:50:35

Artist: Miani
Title: Tu Vivi Nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix)
Tags: OnosakiHito
BPM: 138
Filesize: 3034kb
Play Time: 02:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,78 stars, 259 notes)
  2. Normal (2,66 stars, 125 notes)
  3. Ono's Taiko Oni (4,94 stars, 570 notes)
Download: Miani - Tu Vivi Nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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One of my favourite song :3

A map from me without a taiko diff from OnosakiHito isn't a map by me :D
wmfchris
[Genreal]
The mp3 quality is not enough, the rankable range is 128~192 kbps, please find a better mp3 :3

Try to resnap all notes by using grid level 3 to make the spacing better. When you're done, ask for rechecks :3

Thanks for modding on my maps, and star~
NF3
Trying SS on Hard.. D:
aesopl19193
[General]
You need a diff with difficulty below 3 stars to get it rank, make a easy?

[Hard]
nice.
some notes are too high so that they touch the HP bar, just feel odd
eg: 00:17:474 (3,4,5) -
00:25:082 (1) - clap at the end. remove finish
00:26:169 (3) - clap at start

[Normal]
same as hard, some notes are touching HP bar
fine.

Good song.
star
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

aesopl19193 wrote:

[General]
You need a diff with difficulty below 3 stars to get it rank, make a easy? Easy comes soon D:

[Hard]
nice.
some notes are too high so that they touch the HP bar, just feel odd
eg: 00:17:474 (3,4,5) -
00:25:082 (1) - clap at the end. remove finish
00:26:169 (3) - clap at start

Fixed

[Normal]
same as hard, some notes are touching HP bar
fine.

Fixed

Good song.
star
Thanks ^__^
NF3
A8mew
I would strongly recommend changing/removing the dark red color for the combo's.

Maybe its just me but with the majority of the background being black, its almost impossible to see the approach circles on the majority of the screen.

Starring since its an easy minor tweak, sorry I'm not more helpful.
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

A8mew wrote:

I would strongly recommend changing/removing the dark red color for the combo's.

Maybe its just me but with the majority of the background being black, its almost impossible to see the approach circles on the majority of the screen.

Starring since its an easy minor tweak, sorry I'm not more helpful.
Changed
Anto
:)
Sanji
I love this song, good job ;)
wmfchris
[general]
Tag the mappers that contributed to the guest diffs

[Hard]
00:20:517 (8) - right 1 grid
00:22:039 (1,2) - spacing?
00:30:300 (4,5) - clap at ending of (4), whistle instead of clap on (5)
00:55:952 - delete break
02:02:098 (x)excess timing section

[Hard]
no big problems...
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
Tag the mappers that contributed to the guest diffs

[Hard]
00:20:517 (8) - right 1 grid Fix'd
00:22:039 (1,2) - spacing? Fix'd
00:30:300 (4,5) - clap at ending of (4), whistle instead of clap on (5) done
00:55:952 - delete break yep
02:02:098 (x)excess timing sectiondone

[Hard]
no big problems...
Thanks chris~
Sallad4ever
Hi lenox

[General]
- set the offset to 82
- all diff should have the same tags, so put Freak3 to tags in normal and hard
- see this for a guide in making delicious slider ;)
- the kiai time is better in 01:13:126 do this for all diff. As a side note kiai looks better in heavy beat, so try to put it there

[Freak3's Easy]
00:24:430 (1) - this is covered by the score burst of previous notes (novice are really bad with this), move it somewhere else
00:26:604 (1) - remove the break after this spinner, it's too short
00:40:082 (5) - add NC (new combo) to this notes
00:47:039 (5) - ^
00:48:778 (1) - remove NC
00:50:517 (5) - add NC
00:52:691 (4) - ^
01:57:039 (1) - remove NC

[Normal]
the only problem in this diff are the combos and the notes near the end. Near the end of the song, the notes have different distance spacing from the beginning, it's kinda unexpected. As for the combo, try adding new combo each 1 or 2 stanza that way it'll be more organize

[Hard]
01:12:256 (1,2,3) - unstack these 3 notes?
wow this diff is fun~

Nice song and map, good luck with this :D
STAR
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi lenox

[General]
- set the offset to 82 yep
- all diff should have the same tags, so put Freak3 to tags in normal and hard yep
- see this for a guide in making delicious slider ;)^__^
- the kiai time is better in 01:13:126 do this for all diff. As a side note kiai looks better in heavy beat, so try to put it there ok done

[Normal]
the only problem in this diff are the combos and the notes near the end. Near the end of the song, the notes have different distance spacing from the beginning, it's kinda unexpected. As for the combo, try adding new combo each 1 or 2 stanza that way it'll be more organize done

[Hard]
01:12:256 (1,2,3) - unstack these 3 notes? yay!
wow this diff is fun~

Nice song and map, good luck with this :D
STAR
Thank you :3
Edit: Updated!
TTTTTTTTTTTT
tags :use lowercase letter is better

a bg.jpg should be 1024x768 or 800x600

the .osb file is useless

Freak3's Easy

fine

suggestions

00:32:256(2) - remove clap and add whistle
00:33:126(2) - ^
00:33:995(3) - ^
00:34:865(4) - whistle
00:38:126(5) - remove clap
00:38:343(5) - whistle
00:38:561(5) - remove clap
00:39:213(6) - remove clap and add whistle
00:40:082(1) - ^
00:40:952(1) - ^

Normal

fine

00:35:734(3) - move 1 grid right(lv3)
00:36:168(4) - ^

Hard

fine

01:58:126(3) - move 1 grid left(lv3)
01:58:343(4) - move 1 grid right and up(lv3)

3star
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

H-boy wrote:

tags :use lowercase letter is better

a bg.jpg should be 1024x768 or 800x600

the .osb file is useless

Freak3's Easy

fine

suggestions

00:32:256(2) - remove clap and add whistle
00:33:126(2) - ^
00:33:995(3) - ^
00:34:865(4) - whistle
00:38:126(5) - remove clap
00:38:343(5) - whistle
00:38:561(5) - remove clap
00:39:213(6) - remove clap and add whistle
00:40:082(1) - ^
00:40:952(1) - ^

Normal

fine

00:35:734(3) - move 1 grid right(lv3)
00:36:168(4) - ^

Hard

fine

01:58:126(3) - move 1 grid left(lv3)
01:58:343(4) - move 1 grid right and up(lv3)

3star



All done thank you! And thanks again for the kudo star!
NF3

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Freak3's Easy]
00:24:430 (1) - this is covered by the score burst of previous notes (novice are really bad with this), move it somewhere else
00:26:604 (1) - remove the break after this spinner, it's too short
00:40:082 (5) - add NC (new combo) to this notes
00:47:039 (5) - ^
00:48:778 (1) - remove NC
00:50:517 (5) - add NC
00:52:691 (4) - ^
01:57:039 (1) - remove NC
Fixed that

H-boy wrote:

Freak3's Easy

fine

suggestions

00:32:256(2) - remove clap and add whistle
00:33:126(2) - ^
00:33:995(3) - ^
00:34:865(4) - whistle
00:38:126(5) - remove clap
00:38:343(5) - whistle
00:38:561(5) - remove clap
00:39:213(6) - remove clap and add whistle
00:40:082(1) - ^
00:40:952(1) - ^
Also fixed

Download: Ivan Fillini feat.Miani - Tu vivi nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix) (lennox989) [Freak3's Easy].osu
Lunarhiro
...Nice beatmap ;D!
Mapper 31
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

samiljul wrote:

sorry :(
finally :D

Thank you
IceBeam
There's no BG at all in Easy and Normal.

Add nickname of Taiko guest mapper to Tags everywhere.

[Easy]
00:38:126 (5,6,7) - It doesn't follow rhytm/lyrics/musics or whatever else.
I'd remove all these notes and use 00:38:995 (6) - 00:39:213 (7) - 00:39:430 (8) pattern.At least it follows lyrics.
00:46:604 - Add a note please,unless this space sounds really weird.
00:48:343 - ^
00:50:082 - ^
00:50:952 - ^
01:12:256 (1) - Huh,a jump? Fix distance.
02:01:821 (1) - So short -_-

[Normal]
AR is lower then in Easy,and when there're lots of object come at the same time,like in the final part,there's some mess on the screen.Really suggest you to increase it.
02:00:734 (1,1,1) - What a combo spam? Remove please.
02:02:255 (1) - Still fast weird spinner.

[Hard]
00:02:691 (1,1,1) - Yeah,combo spam isn't allowed anymore,remove please.
00:39:865 (1) - Remove NC.
02:02:800 (x) - Wth with Kiai? Disable it.
That distance changing in the very end was unexpected,believe me.

Good job.
Star~
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

IceBeam wrote:

There's no BG at all in Easy and Normal. Changed...

Add nickname of Taiko guest mapper to Tags everywhere. fix'd

[Normal]
AR is lower then in Easy,and when there're lots of object come at the same time,like in the final part,there's some mess on the screen.Really suggest you to increase it. changed
02:00:734 (1,1,1) - What a combo spam? Remove please. changed
02:02:255 (1) - Still fast weird spinner. removed

[Hard]
00:02:691 (1,1,1) - Yeah,combo spam isn't allowed anymore,remove please. yep..
00:39:865 (1) - Remove NC. changed
02:02:800 (x) - Wth with Kiai? Disable it. yea
That distance changing in the very end was unexpected,believe me. sorry but i dont want to change it :(

Good job.
Star~
thank you
wmfchris
[31's Taiko]

tag 31's name!

some spinners can be added between some of the 1 bar breaks like 00:28:126?
Just a suggestion, patterns is pretty fine.

no kd
Muya
hi :)

General
  1. offset : 111 & resnap all note
  2. Preferred skin : Mah skin ??? change to the User's preference.
  3. 1st kiai start at 01:13:126 , end at 01:27:039 & 2nd kiai start at 01:54:865 , end at 02:01:821
Freak3's Easy
  1. 00:26:604 (1) - end at 00:28:778
  2. 00:29:648 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51292
  3. 00:38:126 (5) - add new combo
  4. 01:09:647 (1,2,3) - move at center
  5. 01:04:865 (3) - end at 01:05:734 & 01:06:604 (1) - start at 01:06:169
  6. 01:17:039 (2,3) - (3) is hidden in (2),
  7. 01:52:256 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51297
  8. 01:56:604 (1) - delete new combo
  9. 01:58:343 (1,2,3.1.2) - 2grid down
Normal
  1. 00:22:690 (7,1) - add new combo to (7) , (1) delete new combo
  2. 00:45:734 (1,2) - 1grid left
  3. 00:50:081 (1) - delete new combo, (2) add new combo
  4. 00:50:951 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1grid up
  5. 01:04:429 (1) - 1grid left
  6. 01:17:038 (7,1) - (7) add new combo , (1) delete
  7. 01:17:038 (7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51299
  8. 01:20:516 (1) - end at 01:23:125 , 01:22:690 (1) - start at 01:23:560
  9. 01:57:255 (1) - delete new combo
  10. 01:59:429 (1) - ^
  11. 01:59:864 (1) - ^
  12. 02:00:516 (2) - add new combo
  13. 02:01:386 (1) - delete new combo & http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51301
31's Taiko
  • i cant taiko mod
Hard
  1. AR -1
  2. 02:00:952 (3,4) - (4) is hidden in (3)
+star.
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

Muya wrote:

hi :)

General
  1. offset : 111 & resnap all note
  2. Preferred skin : Mah skin ??? change to the User's preference.
  3. 1st kiai start at 01:13:126 , end at 01:27:039 & 2nd kiai start at 01:54:865 , end at 02:01:821
All done



Normal
  1. 00:22:690 (7,1) - add new combo to (7) , (1) delete new combo
  2. 00:45:734 (1,2) - 1grid left
  3. 00:50:081 (1) - delete new combo, (2) add new combo
  4. 00:50:951 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1grid up
  5. 01:04:429 (1) - 1grid left
  6. 01:17:038 (7,1) - (7) add new combo , (1) delete
  7. 01:17:038 (7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51299
  8. 01:20:516 (1) - end at 01:23:125 , 01:22:690 (1) - start at 01:23:560
  9. 01:57:255 (1) - delete new combo
  10. 01:59:429 (1) - ^
  11. 01:59:864 (1) - ^
  12. 02:00:516 (2) - add new combo
  13. 02:01:386 (1) - delete new combo & http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51301

All done


31's Taiko
  • i cant taiko mod
ok :D

Hard
  1. AR -1 no sorry :(
  2. 02:00:952 (3,4) - (4) is hidden in (3)
ok done

+star.

Thanks for your mod :D
Leorda
Hi

General

1) The offset is diffrent on each diff!
2) Add "samiljul" in 31's Taiko, you seems forgot that
3) First kiai should be 01:13:154 ~ 01:27:067
4) Second kiai should be 01:54:893 ~ 02:01:850

Freak3's Easy
00:14:430 (1) - This spinner is short, extend it. Otherwise, beginner player couldn't complete the spinner metre
00:26:169 (4) - Remove whistle?
00:26:604 (1) - This spinner is short, extend it. Otherwise, beginner player couldn't complete the spinner metre
00:29:648 (1) - I think these slider is better, try yourself, it's neat slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51146
00:38:126 (5) - New combo?
00:59:648 (2) - Can you make it prettier? This slider kinda odd for me, IMO
01:04:865 (3) - Try make it slider like this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51147
01:40:952 (1) - Too far away from spinner, it could be beginner player can't reach that object during gameplay
01:47:908 (2) - New combo?
01:52:256 (3) - Too short for easy diff and it's inappropriate
01:53:126 (1) - New combo for fix the spinner bug
02:01:821 (1) - This spinner is short, extend it. Otherwise, beginner player couldn't complete the spinner metre


Normal
00:02:690 (4) - New combo?
00:42:038 (7) - Remove whistle?
00:42:690 (1) - ^
00:56:168 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
01:20:545 (1,1) - These 2 spinner are bit odd for me, can you remap those?

Hard
00:20:111 (6) - Remove clap?
00:26:197 (3) - Make symetric?
00:30:980 (5) - Not stack perfectly with 00:30:328 (4)
00:43:371 (5,6,7) - Too much finish hitsound >.<
01:13:589 (1,2,3,4) - This hitsound are odd, change something
01:17:067 (5,6,7,1) - ^

01:55:328 ~ End - You seems use 1,5 BPM Adjustments, add warning using a SB?

Nice song, but the song is end suddenly >.<
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

Leorda wrote:

Hi

General

1) The offset is diffrent on each diff!
2) Add "samiljul" in 31's Taiko, you seems forgot that

I cant do anything in his diff :(

3) First kiai should be 01:13:154 ~ 01:27:067
4) Second kiai should be 01:54:893 ~ 02:01:850

all done


Normal
00:02:690 (4) - New combo?
00:42:038 (7) - Remove whistle?
00:42:690 (1) - ^
00:56:168 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
01:20:545 (1,1) - These 2 spinner are bit odd for me, can you remap those?

All done

Hard
00:20:111 (6) - Remove clap?
00:26:197 (3) - Make symetric?
00:30:980 (5) - Not stack perfectly with 00:30:328 (4)
00:43:371 (5,6,7) - Too much finish hitsound >.<
01:13:589 (1,2,3,4) - This hitsound are odd, change something
01:17:067 (5,6,7,1) - ^

01:55:328 ~ End - You seems use 1,5 BPM Adjustments, add warning using a SB? i have no idea how to make an sb D:

done

Nice song, but the song is end suddenly >.<
yea i know..

Thanks for the mod
NF3
MoonShade
Sry hat ein wenig gedauert mit dem Mod, weil ich mich noch um andere Dinge kümmern musste. Sehr schöne Map, dein Stil gefällt mir auch sehr gut, ich bin sicher dass du diese Map geranked kriegst, also streng dich an :3

Easy
01:03:589 - circle plazieren
01:20:980 (4,5,6) - 1 nach unten
01:58:371 (1) - weso nicht auf die gleiche stelle wie 01:56:632 (1) ?

Normal
00:26:197 (6) - neue combo?
01:04:458 (1) - 1 nach rechts

Hard
01:09:241 (4) - 1 nach unten
01:26:958 - circle platzieren und dann das ganze als stream
02:01:415 (4) - da könnte noch mehr abstand zu 02:00:980 (3), wenn du willst
01:55:328 ~ End - You seems use 1,5 BPM Adjustments, add warning using a SB? i have no idea how to make an sb D:
No Problem here, it's not that surprising so there is no need for an sb warning. Nevertheless, if you feel you need one, ask me :3

Das ist alles was ich finden konnte, also eher Kleinigkeiten. Ich hoffe das konnte dir trotzdem weiterhelfen.

Very nice Map, Star~
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

MoonShade wrote:

Sry hat ein wenig gedauert mit dem Mod, weil ich mich noch um andere Dinge kümmern musste. Sehr schöne Map, dein Stil gefällt mir auch sehr gut, ich bin sicher dass du diese Map geranked kriegst, also streng dich an :3 Mach ich ^__^


Normal
00:26:197 (6) - neue combo? jop
01:04:458 (1) - 1 nach rechts jop

Hard
01:09:241 (4) - 1 nach unten jau
01:26:958 - circle platzieren und dann das ganze als stream Hmm, mehr streams bedeuten mehr streams... ach was red ich jap gemacht ^__^
02:01:415 (4) - da könnte noch mehr abstand zu 02:00:980 (3), wenn du willst jo hab bissl mehr genommen

01:55:328 ~ End - You seems use 1,5 BPM Adjustments, add warning using a SB? i have no idea how to make an sb D:
No Problem here, it's not that surprising so there is no need for an sb warning. Nevertheless, if you feel you need one, ask me :3

Das ist alles was ich finden konnte, also eher Kleinigkeiten. Ich hoffe das konnte dir trotzdem weiterhelfen.

Very nice Map, Star~
Ich bin nicht wirklich dafür das hier ne warnung her muss... danke für's moden :3
ShadowSoul
Huebscher Stil o: ich mag die map :D ~star
Yusu Aoi
hi^^
here's my suggestions ;)

Freak3's Easy:
00:26:747 maybe start this spinner on the next white tick and end it on 00:28:589?
00:38:806 (2,3) 2 grids left
01:12:937 repeat once more the previous slider, or add here a note?

Normal:
00:39:241 (3) 1 grid up, 1 grip right
00:42:719 what do You think about removing this spinner and add here a note with New combo? Add note at 00:43:154. Add note at 00:43:589 with finish? and add the spinner at 00:43:806 and end it at 00:45:328 with finish? ;)

01:20:545 maybe it would be better to remove this spinner and add notes like this?



Hard:
Nice ^^

Here's astar! ^^
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

ShiroKitty wrote:

hi^^
here's my suggestions ;)

Freak3's Easy:
00:26:747 maybe start this spinner on the next white tick and end it on 00:28:589?
00:38:806 (2,3) 2 grids left
01:12:937 repeat once more the previous slider, or add here a note?

Normal:
00:39:241 (3) 1 grid up, 1 grip right yep
00:42:719 what do You think about removing this spinner and add here a note with New combo? Add note at 00:43:154. Add note at 00:43:589 with finish? and add the spinner at 00:43:806 and end it at 00:45:328 with finish? ;) nah sorry ;_;

01:20:545 maybe it would be better to remove this spinner and add notes like this? yay! Sure thing



Hard:
Nice ^^

Here's astar! ^^
Thank you :D
James2250
-All difficulties end at a different point at the moment, try and go through and make them all end at the same point for the sake of consistency
-Keep the preferred skin the same on all difficulties

Freak3's Easy:
-I suggest that you increase the distance snap slightly,the notes are fairly clumped together at the moment which doesn't look good
-Odd to have a break very close to the start of the map
-Pretty high AR for the easiest difficulty
00:26:524 (1) - make this start and end on white ticks not blue ticks
00:34:893 (4) - the ending of this doesn't need to quite so quiet
00:45:328 (3,5) - you could align some more of these notes to make it look neater
00:56:632 (1,2,3) - try and avoid hidden repeats on easier difficulties
01:19:241 (3) - random whistle for this map
01:50:545 (1,2) - try and avoid overlaps like this as they don't look good while playing
01:58:806 (2,3,1,2) - finishes on repeats don't fit
Last kiai time on the spinner is random and I suggest you remove it

Normal:
Needs to have at least 1 break (especially seeing as hard has one)
00:36:632 (5) - same comment as the earlier difficulty
00:42:067 (7,1) - spread out more
00:45:763 (1,2) - stuff like this looks pretty strange when not aligned
01:52:719 (3,4) - too many finishes and doesn't fit enough with the song
01:08:371 (8) - add a clap to the end of this to follow your pattern
01:10:980 (4) - at points like this you seem to change the rhythm your claps are following, try and keep them all following the same basic rhythm if possible
01:23:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some claps here

31's Taiko:
Make sure the tags match the other difficulties
No major errors, looks good (looks odd where it ends though)

Hard:
Don't overuse finishes too much or they lose their purpose (examples like 00:34:024 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) are overdoing it. There are several places like this you could check into
01:06:197 (7) - new combo
01:06:197 (7,1) - jump here seems fairly random
01:12:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whistles don't fit
01:21:632 (1,2,1,2) - make this pattern neater if you can

Still needs some improvements to the mapset but it isn't looking too bad so far, call me back after fixes and I will star
Rukario
General:
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol.
- 31's Taiko is missing this tag: 'samiljul'.
- The combo colour values are across all the difficulties slightly different. Please open the .osu files in Notepad and make them the same.

Freak3's Easy:
I noticed a lot of short spinners and a lot of of them having notes prety shortly after them. I am gonna point out all the spinenrs that can still stay with minor modifications. Please look at the other spinners then and either a.) remove them or b.) map something instead of the spinner. Really not trying to be mean but it's really hard for beginner players to hit notes so short after a spinner.
00:26:524 (1) - Move this spinner back one 1/4 tick.
00:50:980 (2,3) - It'd be better if you switch those two. Fits better with the lyrics.
01:06:197 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick.
01:47:937 (2) - New combo?

Normal:
01:21:850 (1) - Such a shot spinner is still a bit bad in a Normal and you could easily map something else here because a spinner doesn't fit here much anyways.
01:54:024 (1) - ^ except please just remove this one. Way too short for a Normal diff. A long slider could work well here as a hint.


Other than that this looks pretty alright and nice^^
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
Rukarioman

SPOILER

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol.
- 31's Taiko is missing this tag: 'samiljul'.
- The combo colour values are across all the difficulties slightly different. Please open the .osu files in Notepad and make them the same.

Freak3's Easy:
I noticed a lot of short spinners and a lot of of them having notes prety shortly after them. I am gonna point out all the spinenrs that can still stay with minor modifications. Please look at the other spinners then and either a.) remove them or b.) map something instead of the spinner. Really not trying to be mean but it's really hard for beginner players to hit notes so short after a spinner.
00:26:524 (1) - Move this spinner back one 1/4 tick.
00:50:980 (2,3) - It'd be better if you switch those two. Fits better with the lyrics.
01:06:197 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick.
01:47:937 (2) - New combo?

Normal:
01:21:850 (1) - Such a shot spinner is still a bit bad in a Normal and you could easily map something else here because a spinner doesn't fit here much anyways.
01:54:024 (1) - ^ except please just remove this one. Way too short for a Normal diff. A long slider could work well here as a hint.


Other than that this looks pretty alright and nice^^
All done Thank you~

James2250

SPOILER
-All difficulties end at a different point at the moment, try and go through and make them all end at the same point for the sake of consistency
-Keep the preferred skin the same on all difficulties

Freak3's Easy:
-I suggest that you increase the distance snap slightly,the notes are fairly clumped together at the moment which doesn't look good
-Odd to have a break very close to the start of the map
-Pretty high AR for the easiest difficulty
00:26:524 (1) - make this start and end on white ticks not blue ticks
00:34:893 (4) - the ending of this doesn't need to quite so quiet
00:45:328 (3,5) - you could align some more of these notes to make it look neater
00:56:632 (1,2,3) - try and avoid hidden repeats on easier difficulties
01:19:241 (3) - random whistle for this map
01:50:545 (1,2) - try and avoid overlaps like this as they don't look good while playing
01:58:806 (2,3,1,2) - finishes on repeats don't fit
Last kiai time on the spinner is random and I suggest you remove it

Normal:
Needs to have at least 1 break (especially seeing as hard has one)
00:36:632 (5) - same comment as the earlier difficulty
00:42:067 (7,1) - spread out more
00:45:763 (1,2) - stuff like this looks pretty strange when not aligned
01:52:719 (3,4) - too many finishes and doesn't fit enough with the song
01:08:371 (8) - add a clap to the end of this to follow your pattern
01:10:980 (4) - at points like this you seem to change the rhythm your claps are following, try and keep them all following the same basic rhythm if possible
01:23:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some claps here

31's Taiko:
Make sure the tags match the other difficulties
No major errors, looks good (looks odd where it ends though)

Hard:
Don't overuse finishes too much or they lose their purpose (examples like 00:34:024 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) are overdoing it. There are several places like this you could check into
01:06:197 (7) - new combo
01:06:197 (7,1) - jump here seems fairly random
01:12:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whistles don't fit
01:21:632 (1,2,1,2) - make this pattern neater if you can

Still needs some improvements to the mapset but it isn't looking too bad so far, call me back after fixes and I will star

All done

Thanks
NF3

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol. How do I do that? D:

Freak3's Easy:
I noticed a lot of short spinners and a lot of of them having notes prety shortly after them. I am gonna point out all the spinenrs that can still stay with minor modifications. Please look at the other spinners then and either a.) remove them or b.) map something instead of the spinner. Really not trying to be mean but it's really hard for beginner players to hit notes so short after a spinner.
00:26:524 (1) - Move this spinner back one 1/4 tick.
00:50:980 (2,3) - It'd be better if you switch those two. Fits better with the lyrics.
01:06:197 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick.
01:47:937 (2) - New combo?
Everything else should be fixed.^^

Download: Ivan Fillini feat.Miani - Tu vivi nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix) (lennox989) [Freak3's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
- Freak3' Easy has a skin preference "Mah Skin". Please remove that lol.
I have done for you~
rrtyui
yey
ziin
FILLINI

[general]
I'm getting offset 90, and that's still giving me 5 ms early.

[easy]
00:29:676 (1) - here's a pretty slider for you
372,176,29676,6,0,B|372:72|256:16|140:72|140:176,1,360
00:37:937 (1,2,3) - don't put these in a straight line, it looks bad

[normal]
00:58:806 (3,1,2,3) - careful on corners and straight sliders, they look bad if the sliders don't have the right speed/length
01:55:328 (2) - ^

[insane]
looks fine
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

ziin wrote:

FILLINI yay!

[general]
I'm getting offset 90, and that's still giving me 5 ms early. ok


[normal]
00:58:806 (3,1,2,3) - careful on corners and straight sliders, they look bad if the sliders don't have the right speed/length
01:55:328 (2) - ^

All done~

[insane] [Hard]
looks fine

Thx~
Lunah_old
Italian song :D <3
Yuzeyun
Here is my mod (Earlier than you can expect, I was bored)

[Easy]
-Make sure you snap all the notes here.
-Slider tick 1

00:37:916 (5) - New combo
00:49:241 (5) - ^
01:01:850 (3) - ^
01:03:154 (6) - ^
01:14:003 (3) - ^
01:19:220 (3) or 01:20:959 (4) - ^

[Normal]
-Make sure you snap all the notes here.

00:04:893 (1) - Cancel combo
00:05:980 (2) - New combo
00:15:763 (4) - ^
00:17:502 (7) - ^
00:18:806 (1) - Cancel combo
00:24:458 (3) - New combo
00:40:110 (4) - ^
00:45:328 (4) - ^
00:45:763 (1) - Cancel Combo
01:02:719 (5) - New combo
01:04:458 (1) - Cancel
01:06:197 (3) - New
01:20:111 (5) - New
01:27:502 (7) - New
01:34:458 (5) - New
01:43:154 (5) - New
01:46:632 (5) - New
01:48:371 (7) - New

[31's Taiko]
Make sure to snap all the notes.

[Hard]
I don't find any problem.

Here is a star because I like the map and song

I think that the snapping problems are more an offset issue, but Hard seems in rtyhm o_o (or I did not have a look in it. If hard has a different offset, use it :) )
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
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Topic Starter
-Lennox-

-Lennox- wrote:

Gezoda wrote:

Here is my mod (Earlier than you can expect, I was bored)

[Normal]
-Make sure you snap all the notes here.

00:04:893 (1) - Cancel combo
00:05:980 (2) - New combo
00:15:763 (4) - ^
00:17:502 (7) - ^
00:18:806 (1) - Cancel combo
00:24:458 (3) - New combo
00:40:110 (4) - ^
00:45:328 (4) - ^
00:45:763 (1) - Cancel Combo
01:02:719 (5) - New combo
01:04:458 (1) - Cancel
01:06:197 (3) - New
01:20:111 (5) - New
01:27:502 (7) - New
01:34:458 (5) - New
01:43:154 (5) - New
01:46:632 (5) - New
01:48:371 (7) - New

[31's Taiko]
Make sure to snap all the notes.

[Hard]
I don't find any problem.

Here is a star because I like the map and song

I think that the snapping problems are more an offset issue, but Hard seems in rtyhm o_o (or I did not have a look in it. If hard has a different offset, use it :) )
All done.. thank you^^
NF3

Gezoda wrote:

[Easy]
00:37:916 (5) - New combo
00:49:241 (5) - ^
01:01:850 (3) - ^
01:03:154 (6) - ^
01:14:003 (3) - ^
01:19:220 (3) or 01:20:959 (4) - ^
Fixed~

Download: Ivan Fillini feat.Miani - Tu vivi nell'aria (Ivan Fillini Remix) (-Lennox-) [Freak3's Easy].osu
Raimon
Love it Star for you :D
TheVileOne
IRC modded.


Good maps.

star.
Luneko
Small IRC mod

have a star :3
SapphireGhost
[Normal]
01:03:133 (2,3) - I think this could look nicer. Try something like this.
[Hard]
00:13:350 (1) - Even for a jump, this spacing is confusing.

That's mostly all. Have a star!
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