[General]*I would suggest you to add a little skin that I used too for my Rozen Maiden's Map.
This:
(The result will be something like
thisand this:
http://puu.sh/bzxb. Don't forget to credit "XepherX3" for the hitcircle. :3
In addition, siriru made a Rozen Maiden's skin as well. You can find it in the "skinning" section of the site.
*Offset: +5ms, because it sounds a bti off at the end! (Don't forget to Resnap All Notes in this case)
[haha5957]00:08:386 (x) One of the main hitcircle of the map should be put here, same thing here 00:08:517 (x); the reason is quite fair, here it starts the main instrument of the song. (maybe add them and stack those on the next (1)'s start?)
01:07:082 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Whops, a bit confusing in my opinion, due to 1/3's placements. What if you introduce in a better way the electric guitar?
Starting from 01:06:821, try this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206330oh and I'd remove a repeat from 01:07:604 (2) in order to avoid the little jump with the next 1/3 "stream" (since there is a radical change of BPM, it would be a bit unintuitive for the player. Speaking through images, I suggest you to do something like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/20633101:13:213 (x) - This part feels really "empty" during playing. What if you add a hitcircle here? (Little suggestion in order to avoid huge jumps:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206334)
02:13:995 (1) - Please silence this spinner at the end (a soft section with 5% volume would be enough at the end of it)
[31's Taiko]No problems, I found it quite enjoyable :3