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Mitsumune Shinkichi - Battle of Rose

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Topic Starter
haha5957
nah
removemma
Hard is so easy
Note color and bga color are similar, so I was confused
Rampart_old
good :)
Seren
Loved the map. Star~ :)
Cute Bunny
이지랑 노말 ㅇㅅㅇ;

[ Easy ]

00:00:630 (B) - 브레이크타임이 너무 길어요 ㅇㅅㅇ; 패턴을 추가했으면 함
00:51:239 (2,1) - 너무 가깝내요. 거리 떨구세요
00:57:761 (5,1) - 거리가 가까운건 물론 (5)는 상하반전 하시거나 새로운위치로 ㅇㅅㅇ
01:11:326 (1) - 좌표 x:120 y:80 로?
01:36:370 (1) - 좌표 x:112 y:232 로?
01:46:282 (3) - 좌표 x:312 y:176 로?
01:46:804 (1,2) - 재생각에는 거리를 주는것이 좋을것 같내요.
01:54:891 (B) - 여기도 패턴 추가했으면 좋갰내요. 또는, 브레이크 타임을 줄여보시는건...
02:06:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 개인적으로 재가 보기에는 이지난이도에서는 약간좀 어려울수도 있다고 봄. (1)(2)를 슬라이더로 바꾸시거나 다른 패턴으로 짜보시는건 어떨까요?

[ Normal ]

00:00:630 (B) - 이지와 동일
00:23:848 (x) - 이곳에 서클 추가?
01:54:891 (B) - 이지와 동일

나머지는 IRC로...

2번째맵 힘내센여 ㅇㅅㅇ;
STAR~
MoonShade
Easy
00:11:326 (1) - add clap (repeats, 00:19:674 (1) ...)
00:41:065 (2,2) - overlapping
00:51:239 (2,1) - overlapping, you should fix this one, e.g. try to put (1) more to the bottom
00:58:804 - add finish (slider end)
01:08:456 - place circle?
01:09:761 - ^
01:37:413 (5,1) - overlapping
01:46:804 (1) - spacing: too much distance to the previous circle
01:57:239 - map till this point, start break here?
02:06:109 (1,2) - you can make this a slider to make it easier to catch (2) bit it isn't necessary (repeats)

Normal
00:11:326 (2) - add clap (repeats like in easy)
00:18:109 (3) - remove clap (repeats: 01:49:935 (3) ...)
00:34:283 (2) - add clap (it's on the 2nd reverse arrow)
00:36:109 (2) - ^
00:37:935 (1,2) - one grid down
00:38:196 (2) - ^ (repeats)
00:53:065 (1) - add clap (reverse arrow)
00:58:804 - add finish (slider end)
01:07:152 (1,2,3) - make this a short reverse slider
01:07:674 - add circle
01:57:239 - place something here with a finish sound

Hard
00:16:543 (6,1) - place them in a horizontal line (place 1 more to the bottom)?
01:02:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know if they are necessary

Insane
01:02:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't know if they are necessary
01:09:239 (9,10,11) - shouldn't they be on the same place as 01:08:717 (7) slider end? it looks kind of ugly how they are placed at the moment
01:15:500 (1) - move the slider 3 grids to the left
01:45:239 (4) - slider looks unsymmetric
02:00:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know if they are necessary

Nice map, Star :3
nimi
Hello ^_^

General
The quality of the bg is so bad >__<"
I tried to make it look a little better, but I'm not really sure it worked. D: Anyways, I'll leave it here in case you want. ._.'
And oh, as soon as there are two green combo colours I suggest you to make the purple one in the middle of them, in the way it is now it can be a little confusing.

Easy
00:52:543 (1) - bad spacing D:

Hard
00:19:152 (1) - remove new combo
00:43:674 (4) - this silenced slider is a little silly imo D:

Insane
weird silenced notes lol (exeppt for 00:35:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) and 00:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) >_>)
01:09:109 (8,9,10,11) - 0 distance spacing?
01:11:848 (11) - new combo

Well, that's it. Nice map for a nice song, have a star.
thekillerhjkhjk
i'm somewhat flexible with the 120BPM rule

insane

00:35:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make better looking?

00:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same

01:09:239 (9,10,11) - just stack it all on one spot, like this its just ugly

hard

ok

normal

nice

easy

00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - place these more nicely

good map, star!
OzzyOzrock
Thanks for asking for a mod. :D

[Easy]

00:14:978 (1) - This spinner would probably be disorienting for new players, as there are notes to hit a beat after it. Maybe you could make it a nice U slider and lead it into the note?

00:50:456 (2,1) - The spacing of 2 and 1 is really close, which with this approach rate would be really confusing.

[Normal]

Looks a lot like easy o.o

I can't really find anything bad.

[Hard]

Looks like a Normal+ lol. Aaah, can't find anything wrong. ;;

[Insane]

00:16:413 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - This parts' hitsounds soung wrong.
01:08:717 (7,8,9,10,11) - Uhh..

Wow, uh, yeah, all I can do. ;;
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thx for your modding!


MoonShade wrote:

Easy
00:11:326 (1) - add clap (repeats, 00:19:674 (1) ...)
00:41:065 (2,2) - overlapping
00:51:239 (2,1) - overlapping, you should fix this one, e.g. try to put (1) more to the bottom
00:58:804 - add finish (slider end)
01:08:456 - place circle?
01:09:761 - ^
01:37:413 (5,1) - overlapping
01:46:804 (1) - spacing: too much distance to the previous circle
01:57:239 - map till this point, start break here?
02:06:109 (1,2) - you can make this a slider to make it easier to catch (2) bit it isn't necessary (repeats)

Normal
00:11:326 (2) - add clap (repeats like in easy)
00:18:109 (3) - remove clap (repeats: 01:49:935 (3) ...)
00:34:283 (2) - add clap (it's on the 2nd reverse arrow)
00:36:109 (2) - ^
00:37:935 (1,2) - one grid down
00:38:196 (2) - ^ (repeats)
00:53:065 (1) - add clap (reverse arrow)
00:58:804 - add finish (slider end)
01:07:152 (1,2,3) - make this a short reverse slider
01:07:674 - add circle
01:57:239 - place something here with a finish sound

Hard
00:16:543 (6,1) - place them in a horizontal line (place 1 more to the bottom)?
01:02:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know if they are necessary

Insane
01:02:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't know if they are necessary
01:09:239 (9,10,11) - shouldn't they be on the same place as 01:08:717 (7) slider end? it looks kind of ugly how they are placed at the moment
01:15:500 (1) - move the slider 3 grids to the left
01:45:239 (4) - slider looks unsymmetric
02:00:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know if they are necessary

Nice map, Star :3
Topic Starter
haha5957
고맙습니다 @@!


MakJang wrote:

이지랑 노말 ㅇㅅㅇ;

[ Easy ]

00:00:630 (B) - 브레이크타임이 너무 길어요 ㅇㅅㅇ; 패턴을 추가했으면 함 )=> 죄송합니다 도저히 엄두가 안나요..ㅠㅠ
00:51:239 (2,1) - 너무 가깝내요. 거리 떨구세요
00:57:761 (5,1) - 거리가 가까운건 물론 (5)는 상하반전 하시거나 새로운위치로 ㅇㅅㅇ
01:11:326 (1) - 좌표 x:120 y:80 로?
01:36:370 (1) - 좌표 x:112 y:232 로?
01:46:282 (3) - 좌표 x:312 y:176 로?

01:46:804 (1,2) - 재생각에는 거리를 주는것이 좋을것 같내요.
01:54:891 (B) - 여기도 패턴 추가했으면 좋갰내요. 또는, 브레이크 타임을 줄여보시는건... )=> ㅜㅜㅜㅜ
02:06:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 개인적으로 재가 보기에는 이지난이도에서는 약간좀 어려울수도 있다고 봄. (1)(2)를 슬라이더로 바꾸시거나 다른 패턴으로 짜보시는건 어떨까요? => 아무래도 반복이라서 괜찮을것 같기도..

[ Normal ]

00:00:630 (B) - 이지와 동일
00:23:848 (x) - 이곳에 서클 추가?
01:54:891 (B) - 이지와 동일

나머지는 IRC로...

2번째맵 힘내센여 ㅇㅅㅇ;
STAR~
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thx for modding~


Wiinter wrote:

Hello ^_^

General
The quality of the bg is so bad >__<"
I tried to make it look a little better, but I'm not really sure it worked. D: Anyways, I'll leave it here in case you want. ._.' Thanks.. but I'll keep mine :D
SPOILER
[attachment=0:0963d]Battle of rose.jpg[/attachment:0963d]
And oh, as soon as there are two green combo colours I suggest you to make the purple one in the middle of them, in the way it is now it can be a little confusing.

Easy
00:52:543 (1) - bad spacing D:

Hard
00:19:152 (1) - remove new combo
00:43:674 (4) - this silenced slider is a little silly imo D:

Insane
weird silenced notes lol (exeppt for 00:35:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) and 00:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) >_>)
01:09:109 (8,9,10,11) - 0 distance spacing?
01:11:848 (11) - new combo

Well, that's it. Nice map for a nice song, have a star.
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks!

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

i'm somewhat flexible with the 120BPM rule

insane

00:35:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make better looking?

00:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same

01:09:239 (9,10,11) - just stack it all on one spot, like this its just ugly

hard

ok

normal

nice

easy

00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - place these more nicely
good map, star!
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks~

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Thanks for asking for a mod. :D

[Easy]

00:14:978 (1) - This spinner would probably be disorienting for new players, as there are notes to hit a beat after it. Maybe you could make it a nice U slider and lead it into the note?

00:50:456 (2,1) - The spacing of 2 and 1 is really close, which with this approach rate would be really confusing.

[Normal]

Looks a lot like easy o.o

I can't really find anything bad.

[Hard]

Looks like a Normal+ lol. Aaah, can't find anything wrong. ;;

[Insane]

00:16:413 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - This parts' hitsounds soung wrong.
01:08:717 (7,8,9,10,11) - Uhh..

Wow, uh, yeah, all I can do. ;;
Mapper 31
gd

잘 만들어보려 애썼지만 꽤 ks보면이 되버린

Download: Mitsumune Shinkichi - Battle of Rose (haha5957) [31's Taiko].osu
nante
[General]
Current kiai time is too long:
01:21:761 (1) - end 1st kiai here
01:32:456 (2) - start 2nd kiai here

[Easy]
01:11:326 (1) - 2 grids left to go in line with previous 2 notes
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here
02:06:109 (1) - make a slider that ends on (2). Hitting 1/4 note in easy is a bit too hard
02:08:196 (1) - ^
02:10:283 (1) - ^
02:12:370 (1) - ^

[Normal]

01:07:152 (1,2,3) - either make it a repeating slider, or delete 2 and 3
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here

[Hard]
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here

[Insane]
00:33:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why chaning distance between streams? Don't do that. Same goes for the rest of the streams.


quite nice, star
Gonzvlo
General
  1. TAGS: Remove "Rozen", "Maiden" and "OST" , Those are already included in the source.
  2. Lead In is different for Insane. (Just use 2000 for all the diffs)
Easy
  1. 00:17:065 (1,2,3) - Try to move patterns around, this pattern is like "under" the last pattern. Something like this
  2. 00:34:022 (2) - In my opinion , you should NOT use these kind of repeating sliders on Easy. Try this, You get the same effect and the slider is acceptable for easy. (The same suggestion for similar sliders)
  3. 00:50:456 (1,2) - This slider placement is bit confusing for rookies, try this, It's easier to read and less confusing.
  4. 01:07:152 (1,2) - The same situation about the 1/4 repeating sliders, Try making the slider "1/2" longer then add a repeat and remove (2). e.g.
  5. 01:09:239 (1) - ^
  6. 01:16:543 (2) - Read above (00:34:022)
  7. 02:06:109 (1,2) - Since (2) is placed on 1/4 , It's a bit hard to hit on the right time, So I suggest to change (1) & (2) for a single slider, remember to make things as simple as possible for "Easy".
Normal
  1. 00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make spacing consistent, The objects are placed at the same distance in the timeline, so use the same spacing for all of them.
  2. 01:07:152 (1,2,3) - You should save 1/4 triplets for Hard and Insane. Repeating sliders are ok because those are easier to hit but I'm not too sure about this one. Even if the BPM 115 this is out of place imo.
  3. 01:08:456 (5,6,1,2) - This pattern is too hard for normal imo, Uhm the object placement makes it even harder to play. If you won't change the pattern, at least change the way the objects are placed to something easier to read.
Hard
  1. 01:12:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This sounds better like this, Try it.
Insane
  1. 02:13:934 (1) - You used the same spinner for the other 3 diffs, try this for Insane.
Nice Hitsounds and Mapset~
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks!

nante wrote:

[General]
Current kiai time is too long:
01:21:761 (1) - end 1st kiai here
01:32:456 (2) - start 2nd kiai here

[Easy]
01:11:326 (1) - 2 grids left to go in line with previous 2 notes
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here
02:06:109 (1) - make a slider that ends on (2). Hitting 1/4 note in easy is a bit too hard
02:08:196 (1) - ^
02:10:283 (1) - ^
02:12:370 (1) - ^


[Normal]

01:07:152 (1,2,3) - either make it a repeating slider, or delete 2 and 3
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here

[Hard]
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here

[Insane]
00:33:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why chaning distance between streams? Don't do that. Same goes for the rest of the streams.


quite nice, star
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks~

Gonzvlo wrote:

General
  1. TAGS: Remove "Rozen", "Maiden" and "OST" , Those are already included in the source.
  2. Lead In is different for Insane. (Just use 2000 for all the diffs)
Easy
  1. 00:17:065 (1,2,3) - Try to move patterns around, this pattern is like "under" the last pattern. Something like this
  2. 00:34:022 (2) - In my opinion , you should NOT use these kind of repeating sliders on Easy. Try this, You get the same effect and the slider is acceptable for easy. (The same suggestion for similar sliders)
  3. 00:50:456 (1,2) - This slider placement is bit confusing for rookies, try this, It's easier to read and less confusing.
  4. 01:07:152 (1,2) - The same situation about the 1/4 repeating sliders, Try making the slider "1/2" longer then add a repeat and remove (2). e.g.
  5. 01:09:239 (1) - ^
  6. 01:16:543 (2) - Read above (00:34:022)
  7. 02:06:109 (1,2) - Since (2) is placed on 1/4 , It's a bit hard to hit on the right time, So I suggest to change (1) & (2) for a single slider, remember to make things as simple as possible for "Easy".
Normal
  1. 00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make spacing consistent, The objects are placed at the same distance in the timeline, so use the same spacing for all of them.
  2. 01:07:152 (1,2,3) - You should save 1/4 triplets for Hard and Insane. Repeating sliders are ok because those are easier to hit but I'm not too sure about this one. Even if the BPM 115 this is out of place imo.
  3. 01:08:456 (5,6,1,2) - This pattern is too hard for normal imo, Uhm the object placement makes it even harder to play. If you won't change the pattern, at least change the way the objects are placed to something easier to read.
Hard
  1. 01:12:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This sounds better like this, Try it.
Insane
  1. 02:13:934 (1) - You used the same spinner for the other 3 diffs, try this for Insane.
Nice Hitsounds and Mapset~
senaya
[General]
I think that hitsounds are too loud maybe. -1 tick for them and it will be fine. I tried -2 and it was too low already.

[Easy]
A challenging easy level I might say. But it looks good.

[Normal]
01:11:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this flatter and symmetrical like this http://puu.sh/Pgq ? It won't cause any spacing problems.
01:18:891 (3) - not trying to be nazi but maybe move this 1-2 grids up to make the line look better?

[Hard]
I like it. I thought that you can move 00:15:500 (3) down to make it look better but it seems like there is a pattern already so it's ok.

[Insane]
All those normal-hitnormal2 notes %)
Took me a while to get used to them, at first I thought that i miss the sliders or something :'(
Other than that it looks good.
artpiggo
late modding,sorry

Normal
01 38 196 distance is too far for normal, i think

Hard
01 13 022 maybe no clap (and just suggestion, it's too stack)
01 13 413 maybe finish sound
01 48 370 finish & clap, i think
01 56 717 ^

star
Aleks719
Insane
Your combo ups to 15. May be make it to ~8-9, where it possible.

Normal
01:37:935 (6,1) - spacing (too far)

Easy
00:33:239 (3,1) - spacing (too far)
01:38:456 (1,1) - spacing (too far)
01:48:891 (1,2,3) - spacing (too close)
01:51:500 (1) - spacing (too far)

Good for me, star.
[Shalon]
[General]

Your map's mp3 files quality is so terrible. plz find moer good one.

remove the osb file.

[Easy]

00:11:848 (2) - make it more circular that can form symmetry with 00:09:761 (3)

00:14:456 (3) - left and up 1grid.

00:45:239 (2) - rounder slider will better than linear slider.

01:21:761 (1) - finish?

02:13:935 (1) - silience this slider.

[Normal]

fine, but I wonder,

00:42:370 (2,3,1,2,3) - why you use linear slider for this part? all of other sliders are rounder.(and that part is repeat so many times.)

[Hard]

00:11:196 - add note here or repeat one time again 00:10:804 (1)
00:19:646 - ^
00:52:935 - ^
01:43:022 - ^

02:13:935 (1) - silience.

interest mapping style.

[31's Taiko]

00:17:848 (80) - D?

00:27:370 (126) - K?

Cool.


star.
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Offset +6 ms?
[Easy]
00:39:767 (1) - move to 00:39:506 (1) -
00:40:549 (?) - add hit

nothing other to say
theowest
General:
Hmm. Nice beatmap.

Easy:
Couldn't find anything that big..

Normal:
00:17:065 Finish
00:25:413 Finish
00:58:804 Finish
01:15:500 Finish
01:48:891 Finish

Hard:
00:17:065 Finish
00:25:413 Finish
00:58:804 Finish
01:15:500 Finish
01:48:891 Finish
01:57:239 Add a finish beat

Insane:
Awesome work with the hitsounds! :D
I don't need to tell you to add any finish because it's already full of them. xD

Very nice beatmap! Star! :D
Vergence
Sorry about that :o
Easy
No major problems but this diff lacks of patterns

Normal
HP Drain and Overall Diff -1
00:48:370 (1) - Three grids up
00:49:413 (2) - ^
00:49:935 (3) ^ and One grid left
01:38:196 (1) - Too far from the previous note

Hard
Fine

Insane
HP Drain -1
Boring :o . Add some patterns
Topic Starter
haha5957
All Above /// Thanks to all!

Some of them are fixed, and some of them are not fixed.

Thanks for modding!
Zelos
Easy:

00:14:456 (3,4) - move up by one grid point. spacing doesnt change to next note to much so its fine.

00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - not so sure this is easy material

01:08:456 (2,3,4,1) - ^

01:55:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Normal:

01:39:500 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - hell no these cannot be silenced.too long and well it sounds stupid.

Sorry cant star this yet till Insane is finished so i can mod it.

dont forget to kudosu if this was helpful.
Topic Starter
haha5957
Oh god, the Silence was Mistake. and what do you mean by Finishing Insane?


Zelos wrote:

Easy:

00:14:456 (3,4) - move up by one grid point. spacing doesnt change to next note to much so its fine.

00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - not so sure this is easy material

01:08:456 (2,3,4,1) - ^

01:55:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Normal:

01:39:500 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - hell no these cannot be silenced.too long and well it sounds stupid.

Sorry cant star this yet till Insane is finished so i can mod it.

dont forget to kudosu if this was helpful.
arien666
[General]
The source would be 'Rozen Maiden' [Just remove the word 'OST']

[Easy]
I saw some 1/2 streams on this diff but as this is [Easy], use any replacement if possible :3
00:58:283 (1) - Remove new combo
01:30:109 (1) - [Suggestion] Remove new combo?
01:38:456 (1) - Remove new combo

[Normal]
I won't say to change 1/4 holding slider but wonder about furture moddings about these sliders ;_;
00:17:065 (1) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid left?
00:58:543 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]
00:58:543 (1) - Remove new combo
01:36:891 (4,5,6) - I'm worried about this pattern since it might be on [Insane] imo ;_;

[Insane]
00:47:719 (7) - UNSNAPPED
[Suggestion] AR +1?
01:31:413 (7,8,9) - Not interesting jump ;_;

[31's Taiko]
01:33:109 (491) - don
01:37:283 (519) - don



Not much things but
wonder about patterns :3

Good luck XD



ps. HELL YEAH! my 4000th post <3
ps2. Star-symbol worth :3
Ibuki Suika
Oh yeah Battle of Rose :)
Topic Starter
haha5957
모딩 고맙습니다 'ㅁ'ㅠ

Done everything except for "01:36:891 (4,5,6) - I'm worried about this pattern since it might be on [Insane] imo ;_;"
(think this is fine. 친구들한테 가끔 시켜보는데 이부분에서 미스나는 경우는 거의 없더라구요. 잘하는 애들이 아닌데도..



arien666 wrote:

[General]
The source would be 'Rozen Maiden' [Just remove the word 'OST']

[Easy]
I saw some 1/2 streams on this diff but as this is [Easy], use any replacement if possible :3
00:58:283 (1) - Remove new combo
01:30:109 (1) - [Suggestion] Remove new combo?
01:38:456 (1) - Remove new combo

[Normal]
I won't say to change 1/4 holding slider but wonder about furture moddings about these sliders ;_;
00:17:065 (1) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid left?
00:58:543 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]
00:58:543 (1) - Remove new combo
01:36:891 (4,5,6) - I'm worried about this pattern since it might be on [Insane] imo ;_;

[Insane]
00:47:719 (7) - UNSNAPPED
[Suggestion] AR +1?
01:31:413 (7,8,9) - Not interesting jump ;_;

[31's Taiko]
01:33:109 (491) - don
01:37:283 (519) - don



Not much things but
wonder about patterns :3

Good luck XD



ps. HELL YEAH! my 4000th post <3
ps2. Star-symbol worth :3
Topic Starter
haha5957
Oh Yeah 'a'@@@

wuliang wrote:

Oh yeah Battle of Rose :)
Topic Starter
haha5957
Okay myself! deserve pink star!


jking lol
wmfchris
[Taiko]
nicely done, I wonder why 1/3...?

[Insane]
00:01:935 (6) - down 1 grid
00:06:891 (2,3) - make it symmetrical, left 1 grid
00:14:978 (1) - left 2 grids + up 1 grid
00:38:226 (2,5) - down 1 grid?
00:41:065 (5) - finish
00:56:717 (1,2) - stack properly
01:18:630 (3) - up 1 grid
01:20:978 (11,12,13) - spacing

[Hard]
nice.

no problem for me for other diffs.

fabalous hitsound, nice music
star*2!
Mastodonio
One important thing - yoir mp3 quality must be from 128 till 192 kbps. you have - 88 kbps.

Normal:
00:23:848- It sounds better if you add here a circle.
00:48:891 - ^
00:56:196 - 4 grids up
01:52:022 - 1 grid down
01:55:674 - add a circle

Hard:
01:24:370 - add a circle here?
01:26:456 - ^
01:28:543 - ^
01:50:456 - ^

Insane:
00:16:543 - 00:17:065 - There are too much circles here and they're out of rhythm. Try to put not so much circles here
01:30:891 - 01:31:674 - the same thing ^

well,actually,nice map :)
Star!
Saten
Hard
00:46:804 (3) - Stack properly~ (Distance snapping 0.0x and disable Grid snapping)

Giorgos wrote:

One important thing - yoir mp3 quality must be from 128 till 192 kbps. you have - 88 kbps.
Take note that the new mp3 will have a different offset :3

Star~
Topic Starter
haha5957
Mp3 issue - ill try to find better one

other mods - most of them will be done when im back to PC.

Thanks to all!
Kamure
By Mod Request:

[Normal]
00:21:239 (5) - two grids to the right

This is just a suggestion, but maybe you can raise the volume in the kiai times or in the chorus?

Star!!
Hushu_old
Hello!!

Key:
Needs to be done
Should be done
Something to improve the beatmap
I liked this a lot so I pointed it out :D

General:
Please chenged the BPM to 114,95 and Offset to 338 - This is really a best choice!! And then fallow on with Timing > Resnap all notes!
Only if you've done that, try the fallowing fixes:

Easy:
1:15:762 - Sound like on 1:16:806
1:30:116 - This slider till 1:31:160 and then add a circle at 1:31:682
1:47:341 - Definitly a sound there, add a circle.
2:06:131 - Nice ending :)

Hard:
If the slider velocity is about twice as in easy, 2 tick rate would do better. Set 2tr?
example: 0:42:617, 0:43:400 - a TICK to be at these points.
0:10:777 - I would repeat this slider till 11:168
0:25:392 - Better if this slider goes till 0:25:914
0:26:305 - Move to 0:26:175 and make it a slider till 0:26:305
0:33:743 - Very nice ^^ - till 0:41:051
1:07:932 - Add a slider till 1:08:193
1:10:020 - Add a slider till 1:10:281
1:17:719 - Add a slider till 1:17:980
1:32:204 - Very nice! till 1:39:511

Insane:
Found nothing!
winber1
Insane

00:02:456(1,2,3,4,5) - would it be a problem to move this whole pattern up one grid?
00:16:283(x) - add a note here? there's no music that let's the player know this stream start on a 1/4 beat(at for the first run). I guess it's fine though.
00:39:761(1,2,3,4,5) - i feel like you can do something more interesting than just stacking the notes
01:46:804(1) - move down 1 grid

Hard


01:13:674(2) - 1 grid up 1 left
01:47:587(4) - 1 right
01:47:848(5) - 1 right
01:49:152(2) - 1 down (and end slider in the same place as 01:47:326 [3rd combo of previous combo])

Normal


01:15:761(1) - I didn't expect this to be silent at all, and i think having sound here sounds better in my opinion
01:32:196(1,2,3,4,5) - maybe try making an interesting pattern instead of stacking... although it's fine the way it is
01:34:283(1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:36:370(1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:38:326(1) - this silence doesn't make sense to me. There's actually music in this 1/4 pattern, yet you still silence it.
01:44:717(1) - 1 left
01:55:674(x) - add note

Easy

01:15:761(1) - same as normal. I'd rather hear this note.


Very nice map :D. couldn't find anything wrong... just patterns and such.

Star~
Topic Starter
haha5957
Done preety much of above, Thanks too all your modding!

I'm kinda sure about offset, and mp3 was 128kbps. (AND i couldnt find other mp3s :( )
Skyblue_old_1
어렵게 찾아낸 192kbps mp3 파일입니당~ http://puu.sh/QFC
꼭 랭크되시길. Star!

I-It's just 88kbps!
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks!

changed mp3 file
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+20, resnap notes and timing points= =
for the 3 osu diffs (except Insane), they start with a single circle then a break... it's a bit weird. just start from 00:08:627 ?

[Easy]
01:28:975 (2) - new combo
01:38:366 (5) - ctrl+< is a better direction...= =

[Normal]
00:24:280 (3) - stack this with 4 but not 1&2
00:33:671 (1,2) - personally i won't support massive 1/4s in a Normal diff..
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5) - use a slider instead..? or not to stck them. after stacked it looks not so good.
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:36:540 (2,3,4,5) - ^

[Hard]
this diff is not as good as Insane... even Normal
AR+1
00:27:149 (4,5,6,7,8) - for example, 1/4 + long slider +1/4... not a good idea. i'd rather to follow a simple beat...in fact this diff is like a "half-made Insane", but just for it should be a Hard, the difficulty is turn down in some patterns... yeah that's what i feel.
00:46:453 (2,3) - don't stack them to kkep consistency with 00:54:801 (2,3)
01:12:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is beyond a Hard. sliders plz?
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6) - beyond hard again... maybe stack 2&3 with 4
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:36:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - even worse = =||| hard to read and hit (for a Hard at such a BPM)

[31's taiko]
00:42:801 (210,211,212,213,214) - ddkdd is better imo...
01:06:671 - add d?
02:13:193 (720) - k

[Insane]
00:29:236 (8,9,1) - 90 volume is enough ... it's a little loud.
00:39:149 - add a note? (then change this note and 00:39:410 (8) to N2 normal sound)
01:13:193 (15,1) - a reversed 1/8 slider would fit here?
01:28:975 (4,5) - a bit far for 1/4 even you use 2x BPM
02:00:410 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - oox oox (o=normal x=whistle), use soft hitsounds at 70~75 volume
this diff is nice.
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks! mostly fixed

btw.. Isnt' it okay to have 1/4 holding slider? I know 1/4 is still fast.. but bpm is 115, and it's the holding slider..hmm.
Never mind, fixed them :D

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+20, resnap notes and timing points= =
for the 3 osu diffs (except Insane), they start with a single circle then a break... it's a bit weird. just start from 00:08:627 ?

[Easy]
01:28:975 (2) - new combo
01:38:366 (5) - ctrl+< is a better direction...= =

[Normal]
00:24:280 (3) - stack this with 4 but not 1&2
00:33:671 (1,2) - personally i won't support massive 1/4s in a Normal diff..
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5) - use a slider instead..? or not to stck them. after stacked it looks not so good.
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:36:540 (2,3,4,5) - ^

[Hard]
this diff is not as good as Insane... even Normal
AR+1
00:27:149 (4,5,6,7,8) - for example, 1/4 + long slider +1/4... not a good idea. i'd rather to follow a simple beat...in fact this diff is like a "half-made Insane", but just for it should be a Hard, the difficulty is turn down in some patterns... yeah that's what i feel.
00:46:453 (2,3) - don't stack them to kkep consistency with 00:54:801 (2,3)
01:12:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is beyond a Hard. sliders plz?
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6) - beyond hard again... maybe stack 2&3 with 4
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:36:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - even worse = =||| hard to read and hit (for a Hard at such a BPM)

[31's taiko]
00:42:801 (210,211,212,213,214) - ddkdd is better imo...
01:06:671 - add d?
02:13:193 (720) - k

[Insane]
00:29:236 (8,9,1) - 90 volume is enough ... it's a little loud.
00:39:149 - add a note? (then change this note and 00:39:410 (8) to N2 normal sound)
01:13:193 (15,1) - a reversed 1/8 slider would fit here?
01:28:975 (4,5) - a bit far for 1/4 even you use 2x BPM
02:00:410 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - oox oox (o=normal x=whistle), use soft hitsounds at 70~75 volume
this diff is nice.
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
[Easy]

Nothing wrong here.

[Normal]

Same as above.

[Hard]

01:32:647 (4,5) - 4 Circles instead 2 sliders?
01:34:734 (4,5) - ^

[Insane]

Too many streams, but not an issue at all. Reconsider the 2x thing. I understand why you use this, but doesn't fit with the song at all.

-------------------------------------------------

That's it.
Topic Starter
haha5957
Thanks for modding, but not really about Hard thing tho :D

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[Easy]

Nothing wrong here.

[Normal]

Same as above.

[Hard]

01:32:647 (4,5) - 4 Circles instead 2 sliders?
01:34:734 (4,5) - ^

[Insane]

Too many streams, but not an issue at all. Reconsider the 2x thing. I understand why you use this, but doesn't fit with the song at all.

-------------------------------------------------

That's it.
Sakura
[General]
All your colors are way too similar.
Considering how there are plenty instruments going twice as fast as the BPM tick rate on all difficulties should be 2.
I can barely hear slider ticks in certain sections on your difficulties consider getting a louder version of the tickrate sound for those sections? or increase the volume just for sliderticks?

[Insane]
The double BPM sections are too much, maybe you should try 1.7 or 1.8 instead, or in the worst case scenario 1.5 like the other speed up sections.
10. Offset: 33,560ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Unused / Repeated timing section.
20. Offset: 83,647ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Unused / Repeated timing section.


[Hard]
Remove unnecessary audio lead-in
01:07:082 ~ 01:21:169 - This section feels kinda inconsistent rythmically, rememebr to keep a constant rythm throughout similar sections, specially when the instrument you're mapping to doesnt change the rythm at all.

[Easy]
01:16:473 (2) - This and the previous slider are really similar, and it's hard to tell that this one has more repeats and may make many people trip, i recommend you use regular notes, or 2 sliders instead.
Kiddo-Kun
[Insane]
I'm not to fond of the silent circles.
I agree with Sakura about the speed ups. 2x is too much. At least put up a warning.
00:33:560 - Seems a though this section isn't in use. If I'm correct delete it.
01:23:647 - ^

[Hard]
Remove Lead-in
00:43:604 (3) - I don't see why you silence this. IMO it sounds better without it.
00:40:473 (2,3) - Maybe you can center them?


[Normal]
Remove Lead-in

[Easy]
Remove Lead-in

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