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winber1

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winber1 2011-02-01T23:39:23+00:00

Insane

00:02:456(1,2,3,4,5) - would it be a problem to move this whole pattern up one grid?
00:16:283(x) - add a note here? there's no music that let's the player know this stream start on a 1/4 beat(at for the first run). I guess it's fine though.
00:39:761(1,2,3,4,5) - i feel like you can do something more interesting than just stacking the notes
01:46:804(1) - move down 1 grid

Hard

01:13:674(2) - 1 grid up 1 left
01:47:587(4) - 1 right
01:47:848(5) - 1 right
01:49:152(2) - 1 down (and end slider in the same place as 01:47:326 [3rd combo of previous combo])

Normal

01:15:761(1) - I didn't expect this to be silent at all, and i think having sound here sounds better in my opinion
01:32:196(1,2,3,4,5) - maybe try making an interesting pattern instead of stacking... although it's fine the way it is
01:34:283(1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:36:370(1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:38:326(1) - this silence doesn't make sense to me. There's actually music in this 1/4 pattern, yet you still silence it.
01:44:717(1) - 1 left
01:55:674(x) - add note

Easy

01:15:761(1) - same as normal. I'd rather hear this note.

Very nice map

. couldn't find anything wrong... just patterns and such.

Star~

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-02-01T23:44:12+00:00

Done preety much of above, Thanks too all your modding!

I'm kinda sure about offset, and mp3 was 128kbps. (AND i couldnt find other mp3s

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Skyblue_old_1

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Skyblue_old_1 2011-02-02T03:08:13+00:00

어렵게 찾아낸 192kbps mp3 파일입니당~ http://puu.sh/QFC
꼭 랭크되시길. Star!

I-It's just 88kbps!

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-02-02T08:04:00+00:00

Thanks!

changed mp3 file

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2011-02-04T10:18:58+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+20, resnap notes and timing points= =
for the 3 osu diffs (except Insane), they start with a single circle then a break... it's a bit weird. just start from 00:08:627 ?

[Easy]
01:28:975 (2) - new combo
01:38:366 (5) - ctrl+< is a better direction...= =

[Normal]
00:24:280 (3) - stack this with 4 but not 1&2
00:33:671 (1,2) - personally i won't support massive 1/4s in a Normal diff..
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5) - use a slider instead..? or not to stck them. after stacked it looks not so good.
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:36:540 (2,3,4,5) - ^

[Hard]
this diff is not as good as Insane... even Normal
AR+1
00:27:149 (4,5,6,7,8) - for example, 1/4 + long slider +1/4... not a good idea. i'd rather to follow a simple beat...in fact this diff is like a "half-made Insane", but just for it should be a Hard, the difficulty is turn down in some patterns... yeah that's what i feel.
00:46:453 (2,3) - don't stack them to kkep consistency with 00:54:801 (2,3)
01:12:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is beyond a Hard. sliders plz?
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6) - beyond hard again... maybe stack 2&3 with 4
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:36:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - even worse = =||| hard to read and hit (for a Hard at such a BPM)

[31's taiko]
00:42:801 (210,211,212,213,214) - ddkdd is better imo...
01:06:671 - add d?
02:13:193 (720) - k

[Insane]
00:29:236 (8,9,1) - 90 volume is enough ... it's a little loud.
00:39:149 - add a note? (then change this note and 00:39:410 (8) to N2 normal sound)
01:13:193 (15,1) - a reversed 1/8 slider would fit here?
01:28:975 (4,5) - a bit far for 1/4 even you use 2x BPM
02:00:410 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - oox oox (o=normal x=whistle), use soft hitsounds at 70~75 volume
this diff is nice.

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-02-04T12:57:25+00:00

Thanks! mostly fixed

~~btw.. Isnt' it okay to have 1/4 holding slider? I know 1/4 is still fast.. but bpm is 115, and it's the holding slider..hmm.~~
Never mind, fixed them

NatsumeRin wrote:
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+20, resnap notes and timing points= =
for the 3 osu diffs (except Insane), they start with a single circle then a break... it's a bit weird. just start from 00:08:627 ?

[Easy]
01:28:975 (2) - new combo
01:38:366 (5) - ctrl+< is a better direction...= =

[Normal]
00:24:280 (3) - stack this with 4 but not 1&2
00:33:671 (1,2) - personally i won't support massive 1/4s in a Normal diff..
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5) - use a slider instead..? or not to stck them. after stacked it looks not so good.
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:36:540 (2,3,4,5) - ^

[Hard]
this diff is not as good as Insane... even Normal
AR+1
00:27:149 (4,5,6,7,8) - for example, 1/4 + long slider +1/4... not a good idea. i'd rather to follow a simple beat...in fact this diff is like a "half-made Insane", but just for it should be a Hard, the difficulty is turn down in some patterns... yeah that's what i feel.
00:46:453 (2,3) - don't stack them to kkep consistency with 00:54:801 (2,3)
01:12:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is beyond a Hard. sliders plz?
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6) - beyond hard again... maybe stack 2&3 with 4
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:36:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - even worse = =||| hard to read and hit (for a Hard at such a BPM)

[31's taiko]
00:42:801 (210,211,212,213,214) - ddkdd is better imo...
01:06:671 - add d?
02:13:193 (720) - k

[Insane]
00:29:236 (8,9,1) - 90 volume is enough ... it's a little loud.
00:39:149 - add a note? (then change this note and 00:39:410 (8) to N2 normal sound)
01:13:193 (15,1) - a reversed 1/8 slider would fit here?
01:28:975 (4,5) - a bit far for 1/4 even you use 2x BPM
02:00:410 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - oox oox (o=normal x=whistle), use soft hitsounds at 70~75 volume
this diff is nice.

K3nsh1n_H1mur4

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K3nsh1n_H1mur4 2011-02-04T14:23:41+00:00

[Easy]

Nothing wrong here.

[Normal]

Same as above.

[Hard]

01:32:647 (4,5) - 4 Circles instead 2 sliders?
01:34:734 (4,5) - ^

[Insane]

Too many streams, but not an issue at all. Reconsider the 2x thing. I understand why you use this, but doesn't fit with the song at all.

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That's it.

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-02-05T03:25:53+00:00

Thanks for modding, but not really about Hard thing tho

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:
[Easy]

Nothing wrong here.

[Normal]

Same as above.

[Hard]

01:32:647 (4,5) - 4 Circles instead 2 sliders?
01:34:734 (4,5) - ^

[Insane]

Too many streams, but not an issue at all. Reconsider the 2x thing. I understand why you use this, but doesn't fit with the song at all.

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That's it.

Sakura

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Sakura 2011-02-05T15:13:27+00:00

[General]
All your colors are way too similar.
Considering how there are plenty instruments going twice as fast as the BPM tick rate on all difficulties should be 2.
I can barely hear slider ticks in certain sections on your difficulties consider getting a louder version of the tickrate sound for those sections? or increase the volume just for sliderticks?

[Insane]
The double BPM sections are too much, maybe you should try 1.7 or 1.8 instead, or in the worst case scenario 1.5 like the other speed up sections.
10. Offset: 33,560ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Unused / Repeated timing section.
20. Offset: 83,647ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Unused / Repeated timing section.

[Hard]
Remove unnecessary audio lead-in
01:07:082 ~ 01:21:169 - This section feels kinda inconsistent rythmically, rememebr to keep a constant rythm throughout similar sections, specially when the instrument you're mapping to doesnt change the rythm at all.

[Easy]
01:16:473 (2) - This and the previous slider are really similar, and it's hard to tell that this one has more repeats and may make many people trip, i recommend you use regular notes, or 2 sliders instead.

Kiddo-Kun

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Kiddo-Kun 2011-02-05T21:48:38+00:00

[Insane]
I'm not to fond of the silent circles.
I agree with Sakura about the speed ups. 2x is too much. At least put up a warning.
00:33:560 - Seems a though this section isn't in use. If I'm correct delete it.
01:23:647 - ^

[Hard]
Remove Lead-in
00:43:604 (3) - I don't see why you silence this. IMO it sounds better without it.
00:40:473 (2,3) - Maybe you can center them?

[Normal]
Remove Lead-in

[Easy]
Remove Lead-in

Starred.

Luvdic

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Luvdic 2011-02-05T21:55:49+00:00

General:

I'm not modding taiko, so...
The audio lead in is only necessary in your Insane diff, put them at 0 for the other difficulties

Insane:

I agree with sakura hana, 2x section is too much and way too unexpected. Try 1.30x then 1.60x instead.
Also, i really frown upon your silent hitsounds. Just look at your hard, it sounds 100% much better imo.

01:08:647 (7,8) - I recommend you to turn off grid snap, and properly space them

Hard:

01:14:778 - Consider adding a circle here, or extending your repeat slider to here.

Normal:

01:08:647 - Check timeline: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/54970 . I strongly suggest you to repattern it

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-02-06T05:24:27+00:00

Thanks for modding!

Some are done,

but

Insane sound => Circles arent silenced at ALL.

and I kinda want to keep my x2 things. I guess It's okay since it's 1.0=>1.5=>2.0 not 1.0=>2.0.

fitting to music - I guess I know more about this music though.. well, depends on, but I'll keep Mine

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2011-02-06T07:00:23+00:00

General:
- Song Folder: normal-hitclap.wav and normal-hitclap2.wav are exactly the same... delete one?
- In Insane, I thought some hitsounds were silenced as well! It's because of the normal-hitnormal.wav. Maybe you can change it to hitwhistle instead?
- Insane and 31's Taiko are the only diffs. with audio lead-in. Can you make it consistent throughout the diffs?

Luvdic

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Luvdic 2011-02-06T23:23:55+00:00

haha5957 wrote:
Insane sound => Circles arent silenced at ALL.

Oh well, then they are almost un noticeble. I am aware of that little hitsound that appears in some streams that have an almost un noticeable hitsound though.

haha5957 wrote:
and I kinda want to keep my x2 things. I guess It's okay since it's 1.0=>1.5=>2.0 not 1.0=>2.0.

And ill say it again, going 1.0 -> 1.3 -> 1.6 is better imo. But its your choice.

YGOkid8 wrote:
- Insane and 31's Taiko are the only diffs. with audio lead-in. Can you make it consistent throughout the diffs?

If you were to have read past mod posts, you would have noticed that they were asked to be removed because they are not necessary at all all thanks to the mapper that decided to make them inconsistent and decided to map earlier in insane. Lol, im so meanie ;D

Tanmak

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Tanmak 2011-02-07T09:36:30+00:00

HakuNoKaemi

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HakuNoKaemi 2011-02-07T17:24:52+00:00

[General]
Offset feel too off! try with 366ms ( +66 ), change it from the edit window selecting "Move arleady placed notes when changing offset/BPM"
the map is good >.< and i've arleady starred this >.<

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2011-02-07T21:32:50+00:00

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[General]
Offset feel too off! try with 366ms ( +66 ), change it from the edit window selecting "Move arleady placed notes when changing offset/BPM"
the map is good >.< and i've arleady starred this >.<

no that timing is wrong

anyway onto Design mod

since you said "fitting to music - I guess I know more about this music though.. well, depends on, but I'll keep Mine " i should be able to mod this properly and you instantly understand everything i say then

Easy

could you lower HP drain bit please since this is a easy ;p
00:37:865 (3) - new combo here to follow your pattern
00:39:691 (1,2) - i see here you are trying to follow the lead, the problem is for a easy it dont really work, by moving (1) back to 00:39:430 improves the flow of this part hugely

Normal
your AR really needs to be +1 it feels way too slow for the speed and style of the map
00:21:169 (5) - new combo to follow the patterns your breaking
01:08:386 (4,5,1,2) - this pattern really does not flow with the map, first off it only half follows the guitar which makes this totally confusing to play for a normal, a timing pattern like this follows what you are flowing to much better, please really think about changing this

01:52:995 (5) - again new combo here because your breaking your pattern

Hard
00:43:082 (3) - kill the silent end on this slider, by having this end it helps to create a flow in the beat and improves the feels of the pattern
00:51:952 - feels totally empty at this spot and i really expected a note due to the clap hitsound style you are using, so i really advise to add a note at this point
01:08:126 - again by adding a note here you increase the playability of this pattern by a huge amount, as it is the spacing and shape make it feel like the (5,6,7) are a white tick pattern rather than a red tick pattern, but by adding a note here it becomes a lot more better to play
(suggestion) 01:12:300 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - it acceptable but this part dont really have a good flow, its like the pattern can't choose if it wants to follow the lead or the rhythm

Insane
i have to agree with the other mods over the slider speeds, but you seem to want to keep them, so nothing i can do over that xD

00:14:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ok i have to say this combo plays really bad, the main problems is the placement of (5) it just felt odd and i think you could do a much better placement for it, then the break to (6) also felt too long, for the map everytime i played i wanted to start the stream on 00:16:213 so i advise to add a note there
00:33:952 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i understand the reason behind this pattern and its a good idea, what i will say though is the first set of streams "loud note ones" needs abit less spacing, make the notes overlap abit, it gives it the same feel as the lead instrument then with fast but stiff movement, atm it feels too rash and spaced
01:02:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this played truely bad, the pattern of 2 note stacks makes the player want to do a (1/4 1/4 1/2) rhythm but yet its a (1/4 1/4 1/4) at least make this like a normal stream because atm it does play really bad :/
(suggestion) 01:23:256 (10) - i feel that this note needs more space
01:32:126 - same thing as before about the 2 different stream speeds, the first speed needs abit closer spacing to suit the feel and flow of the song
02:00:430 (6) - new combo to break up this pattern so you can feel the change onto using the main lead to follow

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everything i pointed out is pretty much stuff i really think need fixing since it keeps going away from the original feel the song has, i cant star untill i see your responce and which stuff you fix

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-02-09T02:56:06+00:00

Thanks for modding!

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[General]
Offset feel too off! try with 366ms ( +66 ), change it from the edit window selecting "Move arleady placed notes when changing offset/BPM"
the map is good >.< and i've arleady starred this >.<

I think current offset is ok.. (at least +66 doesn't feel ok to me

)

jericho2442 wrote:
~mods~

have done almost all of them, except for the x2 thing and making loud stream more closer.

Since the first loud sound is the main rhythm and the second is kind of fading out sound, isn't it ok to keep those far?
and I think the streams aren't that fast tho (x1.2 spacing with 2.16 SV for 115BPM isn't that far I guess..)

fast streams actually makes the map harder, and I think for insane of the map, that stream does make sense..
(sure I think it does fit music since it's the main rhythm + fading out rhythm)

If it's just kinda week suggestion, I wanna keep this since yeah, I like fast streams.

but both for x2 and that "fast first stream", If it feels like "unacceptable, too bad" to you , just tell me then.

In case that, I'll fix it.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2011-02-09T05:06:39+00:00

General
IMO end the kiai at 01:23:778.

Normal
01:15:691 (1) - The silence here doesn't fit.

Hard
00:19:082 (1) - Shouldn't this repeat one more time? [Based on 00:10:734 (1,2)]
00:44:126 (1) - Repeat once more?
00:52:473 (1) - ^
01:15:691 (1) - The silence here doesn't fit.
01:42:560 (1) - Repeat once more?
01:50:908 (1) - ^
[Alternatively, you can just make 00:10:734 (1) have one less repeat instead of repeating the other sliders]

Insane
Huh is it just me or is this the only diff that uses that almost silent normal-hitnormal ?
Also, I don't think that hitnormal is a good idea. It blends too much with the music in some parts - almost as if it's silent.
00:21:169 -> 00:24:691 - I like the idea of the shifting slider speeds, but maybe the shift is way too fast? Perhaps you can lessen 1.5x to 1.2 and 2.00x to 1.4x? This applies to all slider speed shifts.
01:03:821 (8) - [nazi] Stack this properly

I'm not also liking the 1/4 stream spacing changes. (Example: 01:16:473 is spaced farther than 01:10:734 when they're both the same volume)

SamiPale

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SamiPale 2011-02-10T04:39:04+00:00

Hi, sorry for the delay. Just some suggestions

[Normal]
00:29:517(1) - Finish? Since it's a lonely circle
00:58:213(6,7) - Align with (3)?
01:08:647(1) - Missed clap?
02:06:430(2,2,2,2) - Circle on blue tick IMO it's a bit hard to beginner, but you have used slider change at Easy @.@

[Insane]
01:39:520(T) - Make sure your KIAI sections are snaped on ticks
Nice Insane

Other diff ok to me
Insane's speed change is ok to me, I didn't get any miss at those fast sliders at the 1st play

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-02-15T04:46:46+00:00

I'm kinda confused since I really wanna keep x2.0 thing, and 4 MATs are saying don't

I really wanna keep my hit-normal2 but 4 MATs are saying it's not good

maybe graveyarding this is my last solution...yeah thanks for those whove modded this map!

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2011-02-15T07:52:36+00:00

haha5957 wrote:
maybe graveyarding this is my last solution

...solution, are you kidding me? =.=
that totally makes sense. because a custom hitsound is unrankable, you're going to just let your map grave. why don't you just change it and compensate your map to that? it's not that hard...

Zorlok_

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Zorlok_ 2011-02-15T13:17:07+00:00

From me and wowshakhov. ^^

wowshakhov

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wowshakhov 2011-02-15T13:18:20+00:00

Saten

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Saten 2011-02-16T02:09:01+00:00

The timing is kinda off
Maybe because of the mp3 change~

Anyway, try Offset: 373

Nvm :3

Last edited by Saten 2011-02-16T19:25:08+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-02-16T02:22:03+00:00

I remember I was using near that before mp3 change, but 300 fits now for me, thanks though@

Saten-san wrote:
The timing is kinda off
Maybe because of the mp3 change~

Anyway, try Offset: 373

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-02-16T02:22:57+00:00

Okay.

Normal-Hitnormal2 is now replaced with soft whistle.

It sounds bit weird but I guess this worked..

not graving this for now

Zelos

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Zelos 2011-02-17T23:46:22+00:00

Ur offset sounded off.

and i did redownload.

I got 358 offset. dont forget to resnap

Insane:

00:21:227 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - err this speed up and volume change dont play well. i suggest you keep the volume constant and that you SB in a warning for speed up if you keep it.

00:56:705 (1,2,3) - ugly volume change but speed ups i dont really mind here. they play random but this one is okay i guess.

Also a lot of your long 1/4th streams are slightly unevenly spaced. (im a nazi like that)

It looks better than last time. heres my star now.

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-03-18T12:22:30+00:00

Oh yeah finally graveyarded LOL.

Woll revive this after 280 days

ise77777

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ise77777 2011-06-20T12:47:10+00:00

KayeSara

KayeSara 2011-07-09T10:10:16+00:00

nice map~ don‘t give up~

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-12-25T04:09:33+00:00

Finally revived after 280 days@@ I'll keep going on with this

Lami

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Lami 2011-12-25T09:44:21+00:00

[Easy]

00:45:169 - 슬라이더 모양을 좌우 대칭으로 바꾸는건 어떨까요?
01:24:821 - ""

[Normal]

전체적으로 좀 쉬워요 좀 더 난이도를 올리는게 어떨까요

[Hard]

대략 하드치고는 인세인에 비해 너무 쉽다고 생각해요 난이도를 좀 더 올려보세요
AR도 7정도로 올리시고 중간중간 비어있는 부분에 단타를 더 찍으신다던가..

[Insane]

1:23:256 - 연타부분이 모인만큼 노트가 많이 구석으로 쏠렸네요 슬라이더랑 묶어서 같이 좀 내리시는건 어떨지
2:05:456 - end : 난이도에 비해 점수가 너무 적게 나오는거같네요 슬라이더보다는 단타를 넣으시는게 어떨까요[*][*][*]

Ibuki Suika

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Ibuki Suika 2011-12-25T11:48:41+00:00

haha5957 wrote:
Finally revived after 280 days@@ I'll keep going on with this

wait this map 280days too

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2011-12-26T04:54:11+00:00

Hi ~ haha5957 ~

Mod time for PM In-game ~

Just like you said only mod last diff ~

[haha5957]

AR-1,because not high music and low BPM.
00:33:430 (8) - Remove whistle.
01:08:300 (1,1,1,1,1) - don't used short NC.
01:39:691 - Unwanted Add break time to here,Delete pls.
01:55:082 (1,1,1,1) - don't used short NC.
01:57:169 (1) - Add finish.

That' all ~ Nice BGM ~

Good luck ~

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-12-26T10:37:02+00:00

Thanks~

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Armin

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Armin 2011-12-26T11:25:12+00:00

[General]

*I would suggest you to add a little skin that I used too for my Rozen Maiden's Map.
This:

(The result will be something like this
and this: http://puu.sh/bzxb. Don't forget to credit "XepherX3" for the hitcircle. :3
In addition, siriru made a Rozen Maiden's skin as well. You can find it in the "skinning" section of the site.

*Offset: +5ms, because it sounds a bti off at the end! (Don't forget to Resnap All Notes in this case)

[haha5957]

00:08:386 (x) One of the main hitcircle of the map should be put here, same thing here 00:08:517 (x); the reason is quite fair, here it starts the main instrument of the song. (maybe add them and stack those on the next (1)'s start?)
01:07:082 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Whops, a bit confusing in my opinion, due to 1/3's placements. What if you introduce in a better way the electric guitar?
Starting from 01:06:821, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206330
oh and I'd remove a repeat from 01:07:604 (2) in order to avoid the little jump with the next 1/3 "stream" (since there is a radical change of BPM, it would be a bit unintuitive for the player. Speaking through images, I suggest you to do something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206331
01:13:213 (x) - This part feels really "empty" during playing. What if you add a hitcircle here? (Little suggestion in order to avoid huge jumps: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206334)
02:13:995 (1) - Please silence this spinner at the end (a soft section with 5% volume would be enough at the end of it)

[31's Taiko]

No problems, I found it quite enjoyable :3

mercury2004

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mercury2004 2011-12-26T15:50:30+00:00

I'll get this done as soon as possible

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-05-31T09:30:51+00:00

I'll just go with my hard (since mercury didn't gave me his guest diff for some reason) and...

ok, The Long Marathon for this map continues!

Dark Fang

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Dark Fang 2012-05-31T14:50:14+00:00

HAI~ HAI~
Let's mod~

Red : must fix or Unrankable
Bold : should fix

[General]

SPOILER

.osb 파일 안쓰는데 삭제하신다면 좋겟습니다.
키아이타임 불일치 왠만하면 통일해주시기바랍니다.
스타레이팅 3.0 미만의 난이도가 있어야합니다. 이지(~~인지 노말인지~~)난이도를 약간 쉽게 수정해보시는건 어떤가요?

[Red Rose]

SPOILER

01:45:691 (3) - Ctrl + R 해보시는게 어떤가요?
Fine~~~~

[Black Rose]

SPOILER

01:15:560 - Unrankable, Hitsound volume is 0%
01:16:473 (3) - 이노트를 01:15:430 이것과 대칭이 되게두시면 어떤가요?
01:54:038 (3) - 혼동이 오기쉬운 패턴. 왠만하면 수정좀!

[5957 Rose]

SPOILER

OD -1? '3'
00:19:604 (4,6) - 슬라끝을 곂쳐보는건어떰 어차피 내의견은 똥이니 무시해도되요

내게 모욕감을 주엇어.

My mod is not helpful.
but I try my best

Have a good time

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jieusieu

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jieusieu 2012-05-31T14:52:01+00:00

스타 패기에 지러부리것소;

[Red Rose]
00:44:126 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330218 난 이 모양이 좋습니다

[Black Rose]
00:56:648 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330201 이건 어떤가여
01:35:256 (5) - 디스탠스 맞추는게 좀 더 통일성 있을듯
01:54:039 (3) - 01:54:560 (4) - 와 타이밍을 바꿔보는건?

[5957 style]
00:11:778 (1,2) - 이걸 00:12:300 (3) - 이 슬라이더랑 겹치게 놓지 말아요!
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330222 이런 느낌?
01:56:908 - 여기에 노트를 추가하는게 어떨까요
01:57:039 - ^

킁킁 어디서 똥모딩의 냄새가 나는군.

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-05-31T15:06:27+00:00

jieusieu wrote:
스타 패기에 지러부리것소;

[Red Rose]
00:44:126 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330218 난 이 모양이 좋습니다
=> 단호한 거절입니다(?)

[Black Rose]
00:56:648 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330201 이건 어떤가여
=>ok
01:35:256 (5) - 디스탠스 맞추는게 좀 더 통일성 있을듯
=> 그보다 전 실제로 클릭해야 하는 서클들의 거리를 맞췄습니당
01:54:039 (3) - 01:54:560 (4) - 와 타이밍을 바꿔보는건?
=> ok~

[5957 style]
00:11:778 (1,2) - 이걸 00:12:300 (3) - 이 슬라이더랑 겹치게 놓지 말아요!
=> ok
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330222 이런 느낌?
01:56:908 - 여기에 노트를 추가하는게 어떨까요
01:57:039 - ^
=> no~!~!!~ㅋㅋㅋ

킁킁 어디서 똥모딩의 냄새가 나는군.

thanks~

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haha5957

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haha5957 2012-05-31T15:06:27+00:00

Dark Fang wrote:
HAI~ HAI~
Let's mod~

Red : must fix or Unrankable
Bold : should fix

[General]

SPOILER
.osb 파일 안쓰는데 삭제하신다면 좋겟습니다.
키아이타임 불일치 왠만하면 통일해주시기바랍니다.
스타레이팅 3.0 미만의 난이도가 있어야합니다. 이지(~~인지 노말인지~~)난이도를 약간 쉽게 수정해보시는건 어떤가요?
=> EDIT : ok~
=> ok
=> ok

[Red Rose]

SPOILER
01:45:691 (3) - Ctrl + R 해보시는게 어떤가요?
=>아니용 굼벵이 패턴 귀요미이
Fine~~~~

[Black Rose]

SPOILER
01:15:560 - Unrankable, Hitsound volume is 0%
=> ok ㅠ.ㅠ
01:16:473 (3) - 이노트를 01:15:430 이것과 대칭이 되게두시면 어떤가요?
=> 그러면 좋겠지만 그.. 아래쪽 패턴과의 어울림을 위해 이렇게 배치했습니당
01:54:038 (3) - 혼동이 오기쉬운 패턴. 왠만하면 수정좀!
=> ok

[5957 Rose]

SPOILER
OD -1? '3'
00:19:604 (4,6) - 슬라끝을 곂쳐보는건어떰 어차피 내의견은 똥이니 무시해도되요
=> 저쪽 방향으로 나갈거고 저쪽에 패턴이 있을거라는걸 암시?하기 위해 일부러 안겹친거에용 'ㅁ'/

내게 모욕감을 주엇어.

My mod is not helpful.
but I try my best

Have a good time

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haha5957

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haha5957 2012-05-31T15:12:29+00:00

5957 Rose => Bloody Rose for the consistency on difficulty name

redone some stuffs 'o'/ hope It's little more better then how it was!

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-06-01T17:11:32+00:00

Helllo ~ haha5957 ~

Random check beatmap ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Add 'OST' in tags.
You are missing add 'approachcircle.png and hitcircleoverlay.png',pls add this(don't forgot full submit).
Since you're using a custom hitcircle skin, it's strongly recommended that you enforce a sliderborder code in your osu file, under [colour] events:
```
SliderBorder : 255,255,255(any RGB value you want)
```

[Bloody Rose]

01:07:082 - Add finish,sound much better.
02:05:517 - ^
01:08:300 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove too short new combo,confused play here.
01:14:386 (5) - This should be 1/3, not 1/2.
02:13:995 (1) - Remove finish and mute end point.
02:13:992 - Unsanpped green line.

[Black Rose]

HP,OD+1 much better.
00:47:649 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:30:039 (2,3) - Should change like this rhythm.
01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
00:42:039 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
01:40:473 (1) - ^
02:13:995 (1) - Same as Bloody Rose.

[Red Rose]

Too low setting for HP, so +2 will be better.
01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
02:13:865 - Change same parttern likes other diff.

That's all ~ Nice BGM ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-06-01T17:23:23+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Helllo ~ haha5957 ~

Random check beatmap ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[General]
Add 'OST' in tags.
You are missing add 'approachcircle.png and hitcircleoverlay.png',pls add this(don't forgot full submit).
Since you're using a custom hitcircle skin, it's strongly recommended that you enforce a sliderborder code in your osu file, under [colour] events:
SliderBorder : 255,255,255(any RGB value you want)
[Bloody Rose]

01:07:082 - Add finish,sound much better.
02:05:517 - ^
01:08:300 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove too short new combo,confused play here.
01:14:386 (5) - This should be 1/3, not 1/2.
02:13:995 (1) - Remove finish and mute end point.
02:13:992 - Unsanpped green line.

[Black Rose]

HP,OD+1 much better.
00:47:649 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:30:039 (2,3) - Should change like this rhythm.
01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
00:42:039 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
01:40:473 (1) - ^
02:13:995 (1) - Same as Bloody Rose.

[Red Rose]

Too low setting for HP, so +2 will be better.
01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
02:13:865 - Change same parttern likes other diff.

That's all ~ Nice BGM ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

thanks o.o//

everything is done o.o/

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-06-02T00:40:53+00:00

OK ~ everything looks fine now ~

Here we go :3

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-06-02T03:08:41+00:00

thanks!!!!!

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-06-02T12:59:23+00:00

[General]

You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" in your folder. Make sure to add it and do a full submission.

[Black Rose]

00:30:039 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing here it's kind of confusing.

[Bloody Rose]

00:29:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:30:039 (2) - New combo.
00:57:692 (5) - This slider looks pretty weird to me. Also, it's not perfectly symmetrical.
01:34:213 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:473 (2) - New combo.
01:56:126 (1) - Remove new combo.

Sorry but I have to pop this for now ><

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-06-02T13:08:13+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
[General]

You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" in your folder. Make sure to add it and do a full submission.

[Black Rose]

00:30:039 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing here it's kind of confusing.

[Bloody Rose]

00:29:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:30:039 (2) - New combo.
00:57:692 (5) - This slider looks pretty weird to me. Also, it's not perfectly symmetrical.
01:34:213 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:473 (2) - New combo.
01:56:126 (1) - Remove new combo.

Sorry but I have to pop this for now ><