Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. TAGS: Remove "Rozen", "Maiden" and "OST" , Those are already included in the source.
2. Lead In is different for Insane. (Just use 2000 for all the diffs)

Easy

1. 00:17:065 (1,2,3) - Try to move patterns around, this pattern is like "under" the last pattern. Something like this
2. 00:34:022 (2) - In my opinion , you should NOT use these kind of repeating sliders on Easy. Try this, You get the same effect and the slider is acceptable for easy. (The same suggestion for similar sliders)
3. 00:50:456 (1,2) - This slider placement is bit confusing for rookies, try this, It's easier to read and less confusing.
4. 01:07:152 (1,2) - The same situation about the 1/4 repeating sliders, Try making the slider "1/2" longer then add a repeat and remove (2). e.g.
5. 01:09:239 (1) - ^
6. 01:16:543 (2) - Read above (00:34:022)
7. 02:06:109 (1,2) - Since (2) is placed on 1/4 , It's a bit hard to hit on the right time, So I suggest to change (1) & (2) for a single slider, remember to make things as simple as possible for "Easy".

Normal

1. 00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make spacing consistent, The objects are placed at the same distance in the timeline, so use the same spacing for all of them.
2. 01:07:152 (1,2,3) - You should save 1/4 triplets for Hard and Insane. Repeating sliders are ok because those are easier to hit but I'm not too sure about this one. Even if the BPM 115 this is out of place imo.
3. 01:08:456 (5,6,1,2) - This pattern is too hard for normal imo, Uhm the object placement makes it even harder to play. If you won't change the pattern, at least change the way the objects are placed to something easier to read.

Hard

1. 01:12:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This sounds better like this, Try it.

Insane

1. 02:13:934 (1) - You used the same spinner for the other 3 diffs, try this for Insane.

Nice Hitsounds and Mapset~

Zelos wrote:

Easy:

00:14:456 (3,4) - move up by one grid point. spacing doesnt change to next note to much so its fine.

00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - not so sure this is easy material

01:08:456 (2,3,4,1) - ^

01:55:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Normal:

01:39:500 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - hell no these cannot be silenced.too long and well it sounds stupid.

Sorry cant star this yet till Insane is finished so i can mod it.

dont forget to kudosu if this was helpful.

arien666 wrote:

[General]
The source would be 'Rozen Maiden' [Just remove the word 'OST']

[Easy]
I saw some 1/2 streams on this diff but as this is [Easy], use any replacement if possible :3
00:58:283 (1) - Remove new combo
01:30:109 (1) - [Suggestion] Remove new combo?
01:38:456 (1) - Remove new combo

[Normal]
I won't say to change 1/4 holding slider but wonder about furture moddings about these sliders ;_;
00:17:065 (1) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid left?
00:58:543 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]
00:58:543 (1) - Remove new combo
01:36:891 (4,5,6) - I'm worried about this pattern since it might be on [Insane] imo ;_;

[Insane]
00:47:719 (7) - UNSNAPPED
[Suggestion] AR +1?
01:31:413 (7,8,9) - Not interesting jump ;_;

[31's Taiko]
01:33:109 (491) - don
01:37:283 (519) - don



Not much things but
wonder about patterns :3

Good luck XD



ps. HELL YEAH! my 4000th post <3
ps2. Star-symbol worth :3

wuliang wrote:

Oh yeah Battle of Rose

Giorgos wrote:

One important thing - yoir mp3 quality must be from 128 till 192 kbps. you have - 88 kbps.

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+20, resnap notes and timing points= =
for the 3 osu diffs (except Insane), they start with a single circle then a break... it's a bit weird. just start from 00:08:627 ?

[Easy]
01:28:975 (2) - new combo
01:38:366 (5) - ctrl+< is a better direction...= =

[Normal]
00:24:280 (3) - stack this with 4 but not 1&2
00:33:671 (1,2) - personally i won't support massive 1/4s in a Normal diff..
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5) - use a slider instead..? or not to stck them. after stacked it looks not so good.
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:36:540 (2,3,4,5) - ^

[Hard]
this diff is not as good as Insane... even Normal
AR+1
00:27:149 (4,5,6,7,8) - for example, 1/4 + long slider +1/4... not a good idea. i'd rather to follow a simple beat...in fact this diff is like a "half-made Insane", but just for it should be a Hard, the difficulty is turn down in some patterns... yeah that's what i feel.
00:46:453 (2,3) - don't stack them to kkep consistency with 00:54:801 (2,3)
01:12:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is beyond a Hard. sliders plz?
01:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6) - beyond hard again... maybe stack 2&3 with 4
01:34:453 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:36:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - even worse = =||| hard to read and hit (for a Hard at such a BPM)

[31's taiko]
00:42:801 (210,211,212,213,214) - ddkdd is better imo...
01:06:671 - add d?
02:13:193 (720) - k

[Insane]
00:29:236 (8,9,1) - 90 volume is enough ... it's a little loud.
00:39:149 - add a note? (then change this note and 00:39:410 (8) to N2 normal sound)
01:13:193 (15,1) - a reversed 1/8 slider would fit here?
01:28:975 (4,5) - a bit far for 1/4 even you use 2x BPM
02:00:410 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - oox oox (o=normal x=whistle), use soft hitsounds at 70~75 volume
this diff is nice.

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[Easy]

Nothing wrong here.

[Normal]

Same as above.

[Hard]

01:32:647 (4,5) - 4 Circles instead 2 sliders?
01:34:734 (4,5) - ^

[Insane]

Too many streams, but not an issue at all. Reconsider the 2x thing. I understand why you use this, but doesn't fit with the song at all.

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That's it.

haha5957 wrote:

Insane sound => Circles arent silenced at ALL.

haha5957 wrote:

and I kinda want to keep my x2 things. I guess It's okay since it's 1.0=>1.5=>2.0 not 1.0=>2.0.

YGOkid8 wrote:

- Insane and 31's Taiko are the only diffs. with audio lead-in. Can you make it consistent throughout the diffs?

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Offset feel too off! try with 366ms ( +66 ), change it from the edit window selecting "Move arleady placed notes when changing offset/BPM"
the map is good >.< and i've arleady starred this >.<

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Offset feel too off! try with 366ms ( +66 ), change it from the edit window selecting "Move arleady placed notes when changing offset/BPM"
the map is good >.< and i've arleady starred this >.<

jericho2442 wrote:

~mods~

haha5957 wrote:

maybe graveyarding this is my last solution

Saten-san wrote:

The timing is kinda off
Maybe because of the mp3 change~

Anyway, try Offset: 373

haha5957 wrote:

Finally revived after 280 days@@ I'll keep going on with this

jieusieu wrote:

스타 패기에 지러부리것소;

[Red Rose]
00:44:126 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330218 난 이 모양이 좋습니다
=> 단호한 거절입니다(?)


[Black Rose]
00:56:648 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330201 이건 어떤가여
=>ok
01:35:256 (5) - 디스탠스 맞추는게 좀 더 통일성 있을듯
=> 그보다 전 실제로 클릭해야 하는 서클들의 거리를 맞췄습니당
01:54:039 (3) - 01:54:560 (4) - 와 타이밍을 바꿔보는건?
=> ok~

[5957 style]
00:11:778 (1,2) - 이걸 00:12:300 (3) - 이 슬라이더랑 겹치게 놓지 말아요!
=> ok
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330222 이런 느낌?
01:56:908 - 여기에 노트를 추가하는게 어떨까요
01:57:039 - ^
=> no~!~!!~ㅋㅋㅋ

킁킁 어디서 똥모딩의 냄새가 나는군.

Dark Fang wrote:

HAI~ HAI~
Let's mod~

Red : must fix or Unrankable
Bold : should fix

[General]

SPOILER

.osb 파일 안쓰는데 삭제하신다면 좋겟습니다.
키아이타임 불일치 왠만하면 통일해주시기바랍니다.
스타레이팅 3.0 미만의 난이도가 있어야합니다. 이지(인지 노말인지)난이도를 약간 쉽게 수정해보시는건 어떤가요?

=> EDIT : ok~
=> ok
=> ok


[Red Rose]

SPOILER

01:45:691 (3) - Ctrl + R 해보시는게 어떤가요?
=>아니용 굼벵이 패턴 귀요미이
Fine~~~~

[Black Rose]

SPOILER

01:15:560 - Unrankable, Hitsound volume is 0%
=> ok ㅠ.ㅠ
01:16:473 (3) - 이노트를 01:15:430 이것과 대칭이 되게두시면 어떤가요?
=> 그러면 좋겠지만 그.. 아래쪽 패턴과의 어울림을 위해 이렇게 배치했습니당
01:54:038 (3) - 혼동이 오기쉬운 패턴. 왠만하면 수정좀!

=> ok

[5957 Rose]

SPOILER

OD -1? '3'
00:19:604 (4,6) - 슬라끝을 곂쳐보는건어떰 어차피 내의견은 똥이니 무시해도되요

=> 저쪽 방향으로 나갈거고 저쪽에 패턴이 있을거라는걸 암시?하기 위해 일부러 안겹친거에용 'ㅁ'/

내게 모욕감을 주엇어.

My mod is not helpful.
but I try my best

Have a good time

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Helllo ~ haha5957 ~

Random check beatmap ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'OST' in tags.
2. You are missing add 'approachcircle.png and hitcircleoverlay.png',pls add this(don't forgot full submit).
   
3. Since you're using a custom hitcircle skin, it's strongly recommended that you enforce a sliderborder code in your osu file, under [colour] events:
   

   SliderBorder : 255,255,255(any RGB value you want)

[Bloody Rose]

1. 01:07:082 - Add finish,sound much better.
2. 02:05:517 - ^
3. 01:08:300 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove too short new combo,confused play here.
4. 01:14:386 (5) - This should be 1/3, not 1/2.
5. 02:13:995 (1) - Remove finish and mute end point.
6. 02:13:992 - Unsanpped green line.

[Black Rose]

1. HP,OD+1 much better.
2. 00:47:649 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
3. 00:30:039 (2,3) - Should change like this rhythm.
   
4. 01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
5. 00:42:039 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
6. 01:40:473 (1) - ^
7. 02:13:995 (1) - Same as Bloody Rose.

[Red Rose]

1. Too low setting for HP, so +2 will be better.
2. 01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
3. 02:13:865 - Change same parttern likes other diff.

That's all ~ Nice BGM ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" in your folder. Make sure to add it and do a full submission.

[Black Rose]

00:30:039 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing here it's kind of confusing.

[Bloody Rose]

00:29:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:30:039 (2) - New combo.
00:57:692 (5) - This slider looks pretty weird to me. Also, it's not perfectly symmetrical.
01:34:213 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:473 (2) - New combo.
01:56:126 (1) - Remove new combo.

Sorry but I have to pop this for now ><

Kurai wrote:

I wanted to rank it ! D;