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Kotera Kanako - Aoi Kiseki -Opening size- [Osu|Taiko]

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spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
sorry~for my request :(
I was mod at over 1 month...
and I don't have accept recheck._.
so I can't mod your map again
says sorry...
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

KeA Easy:
00:28:280(1) - too far near the middle. move it near the middle so make it easier for beginners and since this is an easy diff i dont think that beginners wont recover because the spinner and note r close to each other.
00:44:459(1) - make this a curved slider to make a blanket.
00:49:010(2) - Ctrl+H to make an easier path

S.S.S. Normal:
00:28:280(1) - like my suggestion on easy. its too far near the middle.
00:39:066(1) - ^
01:06:369(1) - try to make the it like (2). the look not the length. That's what she said
01:16:650 - add a circle?
01:22:044 - either add a circle or a repeat?
01:46:650(3,1) - spacing
01:58:122(2,3) - ^

Arianrhod Hard:
00:55:073(5) - remove the clap
01:48:163(6,7,8) - spacing

Ao no Insane:
no problems here

this is the best i can do. GL :D
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

KeA Easy:
00:28:280(1) - too far near the middle. move it near the middle so make it easier for beginners and since this is an easy diff i dont think that beginners wont recover because the spinner and note r close to each other.
00:44:459(1) - make this a curved slider to make a blanket.
00:49:010(2) - Ctrl+H to make an easier path oot learned a new trick

S.S.S. Normal:
00:28:280(1) - like my suggestion on easy. its too far near the middle.
00:39:066(1) - ^
01:06:369(1) - try to make the it like (2). the look not the length. That's what she said lololol
01:16:650 - add a circle?
01:22:044 - either add a circle or a repeat?
01:46:650(3,1) - spacing
01:58:122(2,3) - ^

Arianrhod Hard:
00:55:073(5) - remove the clap
01:48:163(6,7,8) - spacing

Ao no Insane:
no problems here

this is the best i can do. GL :D
Thanks for the mod ^_^
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
hi sorry for late mod >.<

Ao no Insane

- from 00:01:094 to 00:23:004, cant you feel the slow of the song is? the sliders are to fast, and 00:21:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is not so suitable
- uhg this custom clap >.< even with 60% volume is silent the song, and dont fit as well, you can decrease the volume of the hitsound or the time section, but it still would having the same silent effect
- as I dont like the custom hitsound I cant mod it =3=

00:12:554 (2) - new combo since it have different spacing
00:14:408 (1,2,3,4) - why less spacing? even with x0,3 spacing this sliders still being too fast
00:21:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - jumps on slow song part D:
00:28:276 - decrease the volume of this timing section please, the custom clap is silent the song
00:44:961 ~ 00:55:242 - here you have a nice chance to use x0,5 or x0,75 slider multiplier...
00:50:860 (5,6,7,8) - can you use a different placement? D:
01:06:365 ~ 01:21:197 - another slowdown


Arianrhod Hard

-same slowdown suggest from up
-many overlaps, copy paste of some objects and weird placement here, maybe you are saying "for make it harder"
00:15:925 (5,6,7,8) - cant listen what are following this notes
00:21:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - what o.o


S.S.S. Normal

- this looks nice, just some 3 repeats sliders may be confusing
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

ikari_kyon wrote:

hi sorry for late mod >.<

Ao no Insane

- from 00:01:094 to 00:23:004, cant you feel the slow of the song is? the sliders are to fast, and 00:21:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is not so suitable
- uhg this custom clap >.< even with 60% volume is silent the song, and dont fit as well, you can decrease the volume of the hitsound or the time section, but it still would having the same silent effect
- as I dont like the custom hitsound I cant mod it =3=
I've been trying different hitsounds lately but yeah...not an expert at it. If someone can suggest me a good hitsound then it will be good

00:12:554 (2) - new combo since it have different spacing
00:14:408 (1,2,3,4) - why less spacing? even with x0,3 spacing this sliders still being too fast I'm trying to make an object here that matchs the background
00:21:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - jumps on slow song part D:
00:28:276 - decrease the volume of this timing section please, the custom clap is silent the song
00:44:961 ~ 00:55:242 - here you have a nice chance to use x0,5 or x0,75 slider multiplier...
00:50:860 (5,6,7,8) - can you use a different placement? D:
01:06:365 ~ 01:21:197 - another slowdown


Arianrhod Hard

-same slowdown suggest from up
-many overlaps, copy paste of some objects and weird placement here, maybe you are saying "for make it harder"
00:15:925 (5,6,7,8) - cant listen what are following this notes
00:21:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - what o.o
k i will remap some parts of this

S.S.S. Normal

- this looks nice, just some 3 repeats sliders may be confusing
Thank you for the mod~~
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga
Happy New Year ~ jonathanlfj :)

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song folder - hitcircle.bpm - What do you use this for? sorry,I can not understand it :(
  2. Timing - offset - It is not unified in all diff. ( Easy,Normal:BPM178 offset1098..BPM178 offset 28280, Hard,Insane:BPM178 offset1094..BPM178 offset28276) Plz unify it.
  3. Set Preview Point - Only Ao no Insane diff is different. Plz unify it. 88942⇒change 88943 ( from File ⇒Open .osu in Notepad )
[KeA Easy]
SPOILER
  1. Please have a constant spacing of the DS :( (maybe you can use DS1.2x or 1.1x)
  2. 00:30:976 (1) - spacing too far
  3. 00:33:673 (1) - ^
  4. 00:36:369 (1) - ^
  5. 00:39:066 (1) - ^
  6. 00:44:459 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/c4DL
  7. 00:47:156 (1,2) - ^ same suggestion
  8. 01:10:751 (6) - remove clap to end of the slider
  9. 01:11:931 (1) - spacing too far
  10. 01:14:459 (4) - remove clap
  11. 01:20:358 (2,3) - ^
  12. 01:21:538 (4) - spacing too far
  13. 01:33:504 (1) - spacing too close
  14. 01:36:369 (1) - spacing too far
  15. 01:38:560 (4) - remove clap to start of the slider
  16. 01:39:740 (1) - spacing too far
  17. 01:47:156 (1) - ^
  18. 01:58:617 (1,2) - I think kick slider is difficult for a beginner. can you plz change something ?
  19. 02:07:212 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap. ( i like whistle here ! :D )

[S.S.S Normal]
SPOILER
  1. Please have a constant spacing of the DS :( (maybe you can use DS1.0x)
  2. 00:14:412 (5) - remove repeat.
  3. 00:47:662 (1) - spacing too far
  4. 00:54:572 (4,5) - spacing too far
  5. 00:55:246 (1) - ^
  6. 01:11:426 (4) - remove note.
  7. 01:11:763 - add note ?
  8. 01:14:628 (6) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
  9. 01:15:976 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern is difficult for a beginner. ><
  10. 01:19:515 (1) - spacing too far
  11. 01:21:538 (1,1) - I think this pattern is difficult for a beginner. ><
  12. 01:36:369 (1) - spacing too close
  13. 01:39:740 (1) - spacing too far
  14. 01:43:617 (8) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
  15. 01:44:291 (1) - spacing too far
  16. 01:47:830 (2) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
  17. 02:01:313 (1,2,3,4) - spacing too far
  18. 02:07:212 (3) - add whistle instead to clap

[Arianrhod Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:14:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/c4OU
  2. 00:37:377 (1) - this spinner start 00:37:545 and to 00:37:377 - add note
  3. 02:07:208 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap

[Ao no Insane]
SPOILER
  1. OD +1
  2. 00:14:408 (1) - spacing too far ( because rhythm is different from 00:13:734 (6,7), but DS is the same )
  3. 01:10:579 - add note
  4. 02:07:208 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap

That's all ~

Is this really your first map? good map :3

I think it becomes very good map only by little improvement ;)

ok~ Star☆ and good luck ~ :oops:
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

kosiga wrote:

Happy New Year ~ jonathanlfj :)

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song folder - hitcircle.bpm - What do you use this for? sorry,I can not understand it :( It was automatically generated when i created the hitcircle...dont want to touch it until someone varify that it is useless
  2. Timing - offset - It is not unified in all diff. ( Easy,Normal:BPM178 offset1098..BPM178 offset 28280, Hard,Insane:BPM178 offset1094..BPM178 offset28276) Plz unify it.
  3. Set Preview Point - Only Ao no Insane diff is different. Plz unify it. 88942⇒change 88943 ( from File ⇒Open .osu in Notepad )
[KeA Easy]
SPOILER
  1. Please have a constant spacing of the DS :( (maybe you can use DS1.2x or 1.1x)
  2. 00:30:976 (1) - spacing too far
  3. 00:33:673 (1) - ^
  4. 00:36:369 (1) - ^
  5. 00:39:066 (1) - ^
  6. 00:44:459 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/c4DL
  7. 00:47:156 (1,2) - ^ same suggestion
  8. 01:10:751 (6) - remove clap to end of the slider
  9. 01:11:931 (1) - spacing too far
  10. 01:14:459 (4) - remove clap
  11. 01:20:358 (2,3) - ^
  12. 01:21:538 (4) - spacing too far
  13. 01:33:504 (1) - spacing too close
  14. 01:36:369 (1) - spacing too far
  15. 01:38:560 (4) - remove clap to start of the slider
  16. 01:39:740 (1) - spacing too far
  17. 01:47:156 (1) - ^
  18. 01:58:617 (1,2) - I think kick slider is difficult for a beginner. can you plz change something ?
  19. 02:07:212 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap. ( i like whistle here ! :D )

[S.S.S Normal]
SPOILER
  1. Please have a constant spacing of the DS :( (maybe you can use DS1.0x)
  2. 00:14:412 (5) - remove repeat.
  3. 00:47:662 (1) - spacing too far
  4. 00:54:572 (4,5) - spacing too far
  5. 00:55:246 (1) - ^
  6. 01:11:426 (4) - remove note.
  7. 01:11:763 - add note ?
  8. 01:14:628 (6) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
  9. 01:15:976 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern is difficult for a beginner. ><
  10. 01:19:515 (1) - spacing too far
  11. 01:21:538 (1,1) - I think this pattern is difficult for a beginner. ><
  12. 01:36:369 (1) - spacing too close
  13. 01:39:740 (1) - spacing too far
  14. 01:43:617 (8) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
  15. 01:44:291 (1) - spacing too far
  16. 01:47:830 (2) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
  17. 02:01:313 (1,2,3,4) - spacing too far
  18. 02:07:212 (3) - add whistle instead to clap

[Arianrhod Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:14:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/c4OU
  2. 00:37:377 (1) - this spinner start 00:37:545 and to 00:37:377 - add note
  3. 02:07:208 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap

[Ao no Insane]
SPOILER
  1. OD +1 Someone who tested my beatmap said instead of OD increase AR by 1, so i did that instead
  2. 00:14:408 (1) - spacing too far ( because rhythm is different from 00:13:734 (6,7), but DS is the same )
  3. 01:10:579 - add note
  4. 02:07:208 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap

That's all ~

Is this really your first map? good map :3

I think it becomes very good map only by little improvement ;)

ok~ Star☆ and good luck ~ :oops:
Thank you for the mod and star~~ :)
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
[General]
  1. Remove hitcircle.pbm from folder
  2. Add custom section-fail.png
  3. Add (at least from template) custom reversearrow.png
[KeA Easy]
  1. 00:28:276 (1) - slider right after spinner, might be confusing for newbie players
  2. 00:44:455 (1) - make it like this
    Open
  3. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it
[S.S.S. Normal]
  1. 00:28:613 (2) - spacing error
  2. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it
[Arianrhod Hard]
  1. 00:41:422 (3) - move 2 grids right
[Ao no Insane]

I suggest AR-1

As the first map this is nice work :).
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Bass-chan wrote:

[General]
  1. Remove hitcircle.pbm from folder I'm guessing it has no use after all
  2. Add custom section-fail.png
  3. Add (at least from template) custom reversearrow.png
[KeA Easy]
  1. 00:28:276 (1) - slider right after spinner, might be confusing for newbie players its kinda hard to change now since it follows a specific pattern
  2. 00:44:455 (1) - make it like this
    Open
  3. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it
[S.S.S. Normal]
  1. 00:28:613 (2) - spacing error
  2. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it
[Arianrhod Hard]
  1. 00:41:422 (3) - move 2 grids right
[Ao no Insane]

I suggest AR-1 aite and i increased OD by 1 as the previous modder suggested

As the first map this is nice work :).
Thank you for the mod~~
Roddie
osu! Alumni
1,468 posts
Joined June 2009
Roddie
Hello.

General
  1. Include a spinner-osu png file, a spinner-spin.png file and a spinner-clear.png file. You need those to complete the spinner set, you know?
  2. I thought you said the hitcircle.PBM file has no usage? Why is it still there? ):
  3. Since you have you have a custom hitcircle, you got to have a SliderBorder included. This shows you how to do it.
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,60,60
    Combo2 : 58,252,58
    Combo3 : 162,119,81
    Combo4 : 199,197,197
    Combo5 : 154,252,252
    SliderBorder: 255,255,255
KeA Easy

  1. It's probably best to increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one.
  2. 00:39:062 (1, 2)-Sounds like there should be whistles on both of those sliders... Add them in. (:
  3. 01:09:736 (4, 5)-It's a good idea to remove those notes and replacing them with a slider starting from 01:09:736 to 01:10:242. It plays better like that in my opinion.
  4. 01:50:186 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here. Add one in. :D
S.S.S. Normal
  1. 01:21:534-Hmm... Remove new combo? o:
  2. 01:45:972-Not necessary to put a new combo here. So, remove it.
  3. 01:50:186 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here. Add one in. :D
Arianrhod Hard
  1. 01:53:219 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning? (:
Ao no Insane
  1. 01:53:219 (3)-Add a finish.
  2. 02:04:006 (1, 2)-Stack these properly on the end of the previous slider.
And that's about it. If you have any questions, feel free to reply back.

Good luck!
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

Roddie wrote:

Hello.

General
  1. Include a spinner-osu png file, a spinner-spin.png file and a spinner-clear.png file. You need those to complete the spinner set, you know?
  2. I thought you said the hitcircle.PBM file has no usage? Why is it still there? ):
  3. Since you have you have a custom hitcircle, you got to have a SliderBorder included. This shows you how to do it.
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,60,60
    Combo2 : 58,252,58
    Combo3 : 162,119,81
    Combo4 : 199,197,197
    Combo5 : 154,252,252
    SliderBorder: 255,255,255
got it

KeA Easy

  1. It's probably best to increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one.
  2. 00:39:062 (1, 2)-Sounds like there should be whistles on both of those sliders... Add them in. (:
  3. 01:09:736 (4, 5)-It's a good idea to remove those notes and replacing them with a slider starting from 01:09:736 to 01:10:242. It plays better like that in my opinion.
  4. 01:50:186 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here. Add one in. :D
S.S.S. Normal
  1. 01:21:534-Hmm... Remove new combo? o:
  2. 01:45:972-Not necessary to put a new combo here. So, remove it.
  3. 01:50:186 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here. Add one in. :D
Arianrhod Hard
  1. 01:53:219 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning? (:
Ao no Insane
  1. 01:53:219 (3)-Add a finish.
  2. 02:04:006 (1, 2)-Stack these properly on the end of the previous slider.
did some remapping so this issue is fixed

And that's about it. If you have any questions, feel free to reply back.

Good luck!
Thanks for the mod^_^ If you can please look over my insane diff again cause i remapped a portion of it.
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
hi
from my mod queue

General
AudioLeadIn is 1015 now please change just 1000
check Letterbox during breaks? you use break time.
KeA Easy
00:30:972 (1,2,3) - why not use spacing x1.2?
00:36:365 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:568 (4,5) - don't stack this
01:20:354 (2,3) - ^
01:38:556 (4) - spacing
01:43:781 (6) - please more down. this is hard to read
01:46:309 (3,4) - don't stack this

S.S.S. Normal
01:29:624 (3) - kick slider and 2 everse is difficult for beginners
01:36:365 (1) - ^
01:38:893 (3) -
01:40:410 (2) -

Arianrhod Hard
AR+1?
00:28:276 (1) - add finish?
00:33:669 (1) - ^
01:29:961 (4) - spacing
01:40:579 (4,5) - ^

Ao no Insane
00:02:273 (5) - end at 00:02:610 - ?
00:38:388 (1,5) -whistle? sound is too small
01:15:467 (3,7) - ^
01:27:517 (1) ~ sound is too small

that's all
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

Laurier wrote:

hi
from my mod queue

General
AudioLeadIn is 1015 now please change just 1000
check Letterbox during breaks? you use break time.
got it
KeA Easy
00:30:972 (1,2,3) - why not use spacing x1.2?
00:36:365 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:568 (4,5) - don't stack this
01:20:354 (2,3) - ^
01:38:556 (4) - spacing
01:43:781 (6) - please more down. this is hard to read
01:46:309 (3,4) - don't stack this
all done

S.S.S. Normal
01:29:624 (3) - kick slider and 2 everse is difficult for beginners
01:36:365 (1) - ^
01:38:893 (3) -
01:40:410 (2) -
~
Arianrhod Hard
AR+1? if i do that the star ratings will display a full 5 star which i wouldnt want to see
00:28:276 (1) - add finish? kind of awkward only this difficulty has finishes during those notes
00:33:669 (1) - ^ as said above
01:29:961 (4) - spacing
01:40:579 (4,5) - ^
done others
Ao no Insane
00:02:273 (5) - end at 00:02:610 - ?
00:38:388 (1,5) -whistle? sound is too small
01:15:467 (3,7) - ^
01:27:517 (1) ~ sound is too small the silence makes sense with the music suddenly fading
done
that's all
Thanks for your mod~~~
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
既然可以用中文那我就寫中文了-w-


General
  • - :( 用Normal-hitnormal當Normal set的clap...兩個同樣的音疊在一起的時候效果其實比用一個鼓音色來的差, 還有點爆音的跡象
    - sliderball製作成可以轉動的?


Easy
  • 00:12:554 (2,3,4,5) - 就算不是用在簡單難度, 類似這樣的排列+AR+節奏會讓人感到混亂...建議可以換一個比較容易讀的排列. 比如像你在Normal那樣的方式
    01:04:343 (3,4,5) - 和前面組成一個比較接近圓形的排列? http://puu.sh/eYqX , 另外(4)下clap-none
    01:07:208 (1) - 空拍後為了跟vocal而踩紅線讓人感覺沒有節奏感, 建議後移1/2拍
    01:29:624 (3,4,5) - 這種節奏更直觀一些: http://puu.sh/eYrS
    01:37:040 (2,3,4) - ^, (4)的長度可以保留
    01:47:826 (2,3,4) - ^



    Normal
    [list:969cc]- 類似這樣的低難度+vocal踩紅線來說, 我覺得用跟vocal的方式來map不太適合 T_T
01:02:489 (2) - 後移1/2拍
01:02:995 (3) - clap
01:04:849 (4,1) - clap-none-clap, 4的背景音和前面3個沒有不同, 為何clap要放在錯位呢 D:
01:11:422 (4) - 有點多餘的note, 加了這個變成非跟vocal的節奏, 但接著還是依照vocal來下note o.o 顯的違和



Hard
  • - 連續三個難度都是一樣的Circle size...囧!
    - AR可以提高1, 00:29:287 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這種排列可以看的清晰點...至於星數顯示並不是一個嚴重的問題, Diff spread主要是看圖的難度平不平衡, 而不是星數
00:22:498 (1,2,3,4) - 彎曲程度建議可以加強, 然後結尾往上提: http://puu.sh/eYut 移動起來比較舒服-w-
00:36:365 (1,2,3,4) - 目前的排列有點歪了: http://puu.sh/eYuM 改成正的四邊形吧 o.o: http://puu.sh/eYv7
01:04:849 (7,8) - 同Normal
01:21:534 (1) - 可以用一個低速slider再接01:22:208 (1)高速的
01:38:893 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 亂成一團了orz: http://puu.sh/eYwt



Insane
  • - SV沒必要這麼高:( , 加上節奏基本都是1/2...看著就像circle和slider滿屏飛
00:03:622 (x) - 漏了一個音, Insane漏音是不可取的!
00:04:464 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建議音量漸降, 每3個note下降大概3~5%
00:15:082 (2,4) - 個人不太喜歡在純音段落出現這樣的變速....很破壞歌曲
00:22:835 (7,8) - spacing不和(1,2)對稱嗎? 如果要顯出什麼特別效果的話, 我覺得把note移到接近平的會好些 o.o http://puu.sh/eYxT (不過這看著spacing真奇怪XD)
00:38:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音量提高至58%左右
01:04:849 (1,2) - 同前面的難度
01:08:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡和後面的五連十分糟糕囧..和歌曲完全木有配合啊!
01:15:467 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同00:38:388
01:26:927 (4,5,6,7,8) - 不要降低音量, 背景音很強o-o
01:28:613 (T) - 30%>65%這差距挺大的..還是S跟N的切換...要不考慮一下把65%降低或者30%提高? 近乎無聲的連打接一個N-finish要人命呢 >_<



我等耳機黨表示聽完normal-hitnormal的clap有種說不出的不舒服感T.T
另外圖本身是正常發揮的程度, 不過節奏需要再加點創意, 純1/2聽著有點無聊

加油 :D
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

Pokie wrote:

既然可以用中文那我就寫中文了-w-


General
  • - :( 用Normal-hitnormal當Normal set的clap...兩個同樣的音疊在一起的時候效果其實比用一個鼓音色來的差, 還有點爆音的跡象
    - sliderball製作成可以轉動的?
找些高手问下去


Easy
  • 00:12:554 (2,3,4,5) - 就算不是用在簡單難度, 類似這樣的排列+AR+節奏會讓人感到混亂...建議可以換一個比較容易讀的排列. 比如像你在Normal那樣的方式
    01:04:343 (3,4,5) - 和前面組成一個比較接近圓形的排列? http://puu.sh/eYqX , 另外(4)下clap-none 别人的建议，个人也比较喜欢
    01:07:208 (1) - 空拍後為了跟vocal而踩紅線讓人感覺沒有節奏感, 建議後移1/2拍 不协调
    01:29:624 (3,4,5) - 這種節奏更直觀一些: http://puu.sh/eYrS
    01:37:040 (2,3,4) - ^, (4)的長度可以保留
    01:47:826 (2,3,4) - ^



    Normal
    [list:461d7]- 類似這樣的低難度+vocal踩紅線來說, 我覺得用跟vocal的方式來map不太適合 T_T
01:02:489 (2) - 後移1/2拍
01:02:995 (3) - clap
01:04:849 (4,1) - clap-none-clap, 4的背景音和前面3個沒有不同, 為何clap要放在錯位呢 D: 同上
01:11:422 (4) - 有點多餘的note, 加了這個變成非跟vocal的節奏, 但接著還是依照vocal來下note o.o 顯的違和



Hard
  • - 連續三個難度都是一樣的Circle size...囧!
    - AR可以提高1, 00:29:287 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這種排列可以看的清晰點...至於星數顯示並不是一個嚴重的問題, Diff spread主要是看圖的難度平不平衡, 而不是星數
狠下心改了。。。我的四星半T_T
00:22:498 (1,2,3,4) - 彎曲程度建議可以加強, 然後結尾往上提: http://puu.sh/eYut 移動起來比較舒服-w- 改成星星了
00:36:365 (1,2,3,4) - 目前的排列有點歪了: http://puu.sh/eYuM 改成正的四邊形吧 o.o: http://puu.sh/eYv7
01:04:849 (7,8) - 同Normal 同上
01:21:534 (1) - 可以用一個低速slider再接01:22:208 (1)高速的
01:38:893 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 亂成一團了orz: http://puu.sh/eYwt



Insane
  • - SV沒必要這麼高:( , 加上節奏基本都是1/2...看著就像circle和slider滿屏飛
00:03:622 (x) - 漏了一個音, Insane漏音是不可取的! 看在圆形slider的面子上放过我吧
00:04:464 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建議音量漸降, 每3個note下降大概3~5%
00:15:082 (2,4) - 個人不太喜歡在純音段落出現這樣的變速....很破壞歌曲 我是想画一个沙漏。。。没办法
00:22:835 (7,8) - spacing不和(1,2)對稱嗎? 如果要顯出什麼特別效果的話, 我覺得把note移到接近平的會好些 o.o http://puu.sh/eYxT (不過這看著spacing真奇怪XD) 改到面目全非了
00:38:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音量提高至58%左右
01:04:849 (1,2) - 同前面的難度 同上
01:08:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡和後面的五連十分糟糕囧..和歌曲完全木有配合啊!
01:15:467 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同00:38:388
01:26:927 (4,5,6,7,8) - 不要降低音量, 背景音很強o-o
01:28:613 (T) - 30%>65%這差距挺大的..還是S跟N的切換...要不考慮一下把65%降低或者30%提高? 近乎無聲的連打接一個N-finish要人命呢 >_<



我等耳機黨表示聽完normal-hitnormal的clap有種說不出的不舒服感T.T
另外圖本身是正常發揮的程度, 不過節奏需要再加點創意, 純1/2聽著有點無聊

加油 :D
没comment的就是遵从吩咐了
Thank you for the mod^_^
i will update a bit later...
尼玛考试伤不起呀orz
ok issues fixed
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
mjw5150
-random mod
B轨的曲子lol

[General]
所有难度的preview point都有几毫秒的偏差

[KeA Easy]
2.22 star......
01:07:208 (1,2) - 用1个折返slider代替这个note+slider?

[S.S.S. Normal]
00:41:759 (3,4) - 感觉新人很难把握这里 3弄个折返 然后把4删掉?
01:48:163 (3) - 缩短1/2?这样才对的上vocal

[Arianrhod Hard]
00:41:759 (1,2,3) - 前面用的是1.0xDS 这里为什么忽然减小到0.5x?
01:39:230 (10) - 删掉这个note?感觉有点多余
01:46:983 (9) - 同上
01:57:770 (1,2,3) - 调整下间距?0.8x感觉太小了点 有点难读

[Ao no Insane]
01:07:208 (5) - 0.75xBPM段用个3.4xDS的大跳 不合适吧...
01:27:517 (1) - 删掉这个note?感觉后面那1串应该从01:27:601 (10) - 开始

给星 加油~
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

mjw5150 wrote:

-random mod
B轨的曲子lol

[General]
所有难度的preview point都有几毫秒的偏差 改offset的悲剧。。。改了88950

[KeA Easy]
2.22 star......有问题吗？
01:07:208 (1,2) - 用1个折返slider代替这个note+slider? 好

[S.S.S. Normal]
00:41:759 (3,4) - 感觉新人很难把握这里 3弄个折返 然后把4删掉?改了
01:48:163 (3) - 缩短1/2?这样才对的上vocal k

[Arianrhod Hard]
00:41:759 (1,2,3) - 前面用的是1.0xDS 这里为什么忽然减小到0.5x? 想画个大三角。。。算了
01:39:230 (10) - 删掉这个note?感觉有点多余 跟着鼓点走的
01:46:983 (9) - 同上 鼓点
01:57:770 (1,2,3) - 调整下间距?0.8x感觉太小了点 有点难读 ok

[Ao no Insane]
01:07:208 (5) - 0.75xBPM段用个3.4xDS的大跳 不合适吧... 缩短了
01:27:517 (1) - 删掉这个note?感觉后面那1串应该从01:27:601 (10) - 开始 删了note，前面改了slider。。。我自己都没法玩这个地方orz

给星 加油~
我了个去头一次有人主动加星。。。好感动T_T
谢啦~~
Achille
2 posts
Joined August 2011
Achille
Nice Beatmap! :)
Amyrina_old
Amyrina_old
Hello.
Sorry my poor english.
Normal
00:40:916 (2) -
↓
00:40:747 (2) -

I think this is good map.
Please do its best!
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Amyrina wrote:

Hello.
Sorry my poor english.
Normal
00:40:916 (2) -
↓
00:40:747 (2) -
well the slider fits the background music so...yeah no change

I think this is good map.
Please do its best!
still thanks for your consideration!
Kurosanyan
2,642 posts
Joined November 2009
Kurosanyan
No kudo for this of course.

[General]
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
-[KeA Easy] : 88943
Fix it please

[Kurosanyan's Taiko (fix it yourself it's okay)]
01:19:847 (24) - Unsnapped circle.
01:43:611 (10) - Unsnapped circle.
01:56:420 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:57:094 (10) - Unsnapped circle.

[S.S.S. Normal]
00:28:276 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.
00:44:961 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Kurosanyan wrote:

No kudo for this of course.
SPOILER
[General]
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
-[KeA Easy] : 88943 k
Fix it please

[Kurosanyan's Taiko (fix it yourself it's okay)] alrite fixed all
01:19:847 (24) - Unsnapped circle.
01:43:611 (10) - Unsnapped circle.
01:56:420 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:57:094 (10) - Unsnapped circle.

[S.S.S. Normal]
00:28:276 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly. k learned something new lol
00:44:961 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly. ^
fixed all. thanks again~~
P.S. u mean no kudos for your mod post rite? dont want to get such things wrong o_O
Kurosanyan
2,642 posts
Joined November 2009
Kurosanyan

jonathanlfj wrote:

P.S. u mean no kudos for your mod post rite? dont want to get such things wrong o_O
Of course, what else?
Alltur
530 posts
Joined July 2012
Alltur
From the queue..

Sorry I am slow modder even though my mod is not long and great XP..
All of my modding is suggestion unless indicated with Bold


[General]
Brown approach circle in normal diff might blend with the background making it unreadable.
The spinner meter is not really visible when playing.

[KeA Easy]
00:23:172 (1) - End spinner at 00:26:711? Ending it right before the new note can be hard to navigate after long spin.
00:34:343 (3) - Just curved slider would look better here.
01:15:467 (6) - NC
01:16:815 - RNC
02:07:545 (2) - Rather than three horizontally lined up for ending, I think it would look good if you put 2 little bit above than other notes, making an upside-down v-shape LINK

[Normal]
00:21:824 (1) - nazi. This might be hard for some users because of many repeating arrows; you may ignore this.
00:23:172 (1) - End spinner at 00:26:711? Ending it right before the new note can be hard to navigate after long spin.
01:16:141 (2) - It might get little bit hard, but add a note here?
01:17:995 - NC?

[Hard/Insane]
Unable to mod 4.50 stars or higher... sorry :(

Good luck with mapping! And here's a star for awesome map.
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

Akashi_S wrote:

From the queue..

Sorry I am slow modder even though my mod is not long and great XP..
All of my modding is suggestion unless indicated with Bold


[General]
Brown approach circle in normal diff might blend with the background making it unreadable. deleted brown
The spinner meter is not really visible when playing. i made that based on a skin tutorial, so i think its fine t/51502

[KeA Easy]
00:23:172 (1) - End spinner at 00:26:711? Ending it right before the new note can be hard to navigate after long spin. kk
00:34:343 (3) - Just curved slider would look better here. aite
01:15:467 (6) - NC done
01:16:815 - RNC ^
02:07:545 (2) - Rather than three horizontally lined up for ending, I think it would look good if you put 2 little bit above than other notes, making an upside-down v-shape LINK fixed

[Normal]
00:21:824 (1) - nazi. This might be hard for some users because of many repeating arrows; you may ignore this. changed to longer slider with 3 repeats
00:23:172 (1) - End spinner at 00:26:711? Ending it right before the new note can be hard to navigate after long spin. done
01:16:141 (2) - It might get little bit hard, but add a note here? yeah it does get hard since the notes cluster, so keeping it as it is
01:17:995 - NC? i dont think NC fits well here...keeping it as it is

[Hard/Insane]
Unable to mod 4.50 stars or higher... sorry :(

Good luck with mapping! And here's a star for awesome map.
Thank you for the mod and star ^_^
JudgeTheDude
595 posts
Joined September 2011
JudgeTheDude
Here's my useless mod from my modding queue.

I checked Easy, Normal and Hard and I found nothing to report.
I just post it that you know I didn't forget your post in my modding queue.

Good luck with ranks.
KuronumaSawako
471 posts
Joined March 2011
KuronumaSawako
Mod requested in my queue.

[General]


  1. Looks good for me, and nice skin :)

[Easy]


  1. 01:28:633 (1,1): Is this intentional?
  1. 01:58:633 (1,1,1,1): ^
Diff looks good.

[S.S.S Normal]


  1. 00:21:828 (1,2): Just make this a one repeat slider...
    SPOILER
  1. 00:47:172 (4): Finish fits song too, but sounds too loud...Why not replace this finish by a whistle?
  1. 00:52:565 (1): Same suggestion as above, but apply this in slider beginning.
  1. 01:02:502 (1): Moving this slider to 01:02:340, will sound much better for me.
  1. 01:32:003 (6,1): Try this:
    SPOILER
  1. 01:45:992 (5,6,7): This spacing can confuse some normal players, try this spacing:
    SPOILER

Other two diffs looks fine to me.

Good Luck in ranking~
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_
Hi from my queue o/ Sorry for late

KeA Easy

01:03:857 (1) and 01:04:869 (1) - Maybe these new combos can be confusing in an easy diff... Remove them (Just a suggestion)
01:21:554 (3) NC?
01:59:307 (1) and 02:00:655 (1) - As I sid befove, these may be confusing...

S.S.S. Normal

00:21:828 (1) - What about replacing this with two 1/2 sliders?
01:32:003 (6) - The same ^
01:36:385 (8) - NC?
01:47:172 (8) - NC?

Arianrhod Hard

01:58:633 (1,2,3,4) I really don't like these sliders with 2 repeats...

Ao no Insane

01:32:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really confusing @.@ maybe you can make another pattern with these 8 circles

I can't find other, this is a good map, I also like the song. Star :3
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Mod requested in my queue.

[General]


  1. Looks good for me, and nice skin :)

[Easy]


  1. 01:28:633 (1,1): Is this intentional? yes
  1. 01:58:633 (1,1,1,1): ^ well fixed this one
Diff looks good.

[S.S.S Normal]


  1. 00:21:828 (1,2): Just make this a one repeat slider... made it two sliders
    SPOILER
  1. 00:47:172 (4): Finish fits song too, but sounds too loud...Why not replace this finish by a whistle? my older version had whistles, and i disliked it, so keeping the finish
  1. 00:52:565 (1): Same suggestion as above, but apply this in slider beginning. same as above
  1. 01:02:502 (1): Moving this slider to 01:02:340, will sound much better for me. alrite
  1. 01:32:003 (6,1): Try this:
    SPOILER
    done
  1. 01:45:992 (5,6,7): This spacing can confuse some normal players, try this spacing:
    SPOILER
    took a note out of stack instead. kinda hard to put a linear patter and maintain distance snap

Other two diffs looks fine to me.

Good Luck in ranking~

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue o/ Sorry for late

KeA Easy

01:03:857 (1) and 01:04:869 (1) - Maybe these new combos can be confusing in an easy diff... Remove them (Just a suggestion) alrite
01:21:554 (3) NC? i dont think a NC fits here based on previous NC patterns
01:59:307 (1) and 02:00:655 (1) - As I sid befove, these may be confusing... done as previous mod suggested also

S.S.S. Normal

00:21:828 (1) - What about replacing this with two 1/2 sliders? done
01:32:003 (6) - The same ^ did repeat slider and a note
01:36:385 (8) - NC? k
01:47:172 (8) - NC? k

Arianrhod Hard

01:58:633 (1,2,3,4) I really don't like these sliders with 2 repeats... changed, but i think it got harder...

Ao no Insane

01:32:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really confusing @.@ maybe you can make another pattern with these 8 circles remade pattern

I can't find other, this is a good map, I also like the song. Star :3
Thanks for the mods ^_^
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
i can see some improvement on the mapset, but ik you got the potential of getting this mapset ranked...for now here's a star ;)
Xierra
569 posts
Joined July 2011
Xierra
Heya, it's me from the Tiny Modding Queue!
I must say, your map looks sick! I'm seeing a lot of potential from this first map.

Since I'm a newbie modder, I can't spot any flaws! Every diff looks good to me. :o

General
I spot one .osb file in your folder. If you don't use Storyboards, then delete it.
I'm not really sure but I think you might need a Futsuu / Muzukashii for the Taiko diffs. t/92508

You deserve a star, mate. Thankfully I have one round of Star inside my pocket, so I'll shoot it. :D
Go, and I look forward to see this getting ranked. :)
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Xierra wrote:

Heya, it's me from the Tiny Modding Queue!
I must say, your map looks sick! I'm seeing a lot of potential from this first map.

Since I'm a newbie modder, I can't spot any flaws! Every diff looks good to me. :o

General
I spot one .osb file in your folder. If you don't use Storyboards, then delete it. i will delete it
I'm not really sure but I think you might need a Futsuu / Muzukashii for the Taiko diffs. t/92508 the beatmap was submitted like a year ago so it is excluded from the new rule

You deserve a star, mate. Thankfully I have one round of Star inside my pocket, so I'll shoot it. :D
Go, and I look forward to see this getting ranked. :)
thanks for your suggestion and star (and Byakugan249):)
CTB Fia
CTB Fia
Easy
Try to use distance snap to re-arrange your beats
all beats seems to be in place anyway
so it was PERFECT!!!

Normal
00:06:491 - fill it with notes
00:17:277 - this too

since it was >2 minutes i only mod 2 diff
anyway that's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!!
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

shojimeguro wrote:

Easy
Try to use distance snap to re-arrange your beats
all beats seems to be in place anyway
so it was PERFECT!!! tyty

Normal
00:06:491 - fill it with notes made it a slider repeat
00:17:277 - this too ^

I added notes at these locations for all other diffs so they have the same drain time

since it was >2 minutes i only mod 2 diff
anyway that's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!!
Thank you for the suggestions ^_^
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Leadin 用1500ms，1000有点不够

[KeA Easy]
00:27:958 (1) - finish?
00:33:351 (1) - ^
00:38:744 (1) - ^

[S.S.S. Normal]
00:04:804 (1,1) - 同Hard
00:15:591 (1,1) - ^
00:27:958 (1) - finish?
00:33:351 (1) - ^
00:38:744 (1) - finish on head?

[Arianrhod Hard]
00:04:804 (1,1) - remove NCs
00:15:591 (1,1) - ^
00:27:958 (1) - finish?
00:33:351 (1) - ^
00:38:744 (1) - finish on head?
01:37:227 (3) - add NC?

[Ao no Insane]
00:27:958 (1) - finish?
00:33:351 (1) - ^
00:38:744 (1) - finish on head?
00:46:834 (9) - 这个note用50%的N如何，或者把00:44:137 (1) - 换成75%的S. 其他难度也是一样
00:49:531 (1) - ^
00:52:227 (1) - ^
01:00:991 (5) - NC? 这里遮挡比较多
01:08:744 (5,5) - 我觉得用一次折返叠一个note更好
01:48:688 (5) - 不太好看，可以更弯一些
02:01:665 (5) - NC?
02:07:564 (3) - 移到中间？

That's all I can find. GL~
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

popner wrote:

01:48:688 (5) - 不太好看，可以更弯一些 我想要的是这个效果
SPOILER
除了这个其他的都fix了
多谢mod~~
Coro
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Coro
Taiko M4M~

All are suggestions unless in red.

[Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni]
- not sure what that extra timing point is for, if unnecessary, remove it
- try to use alternating colours next time, it makes life easier for modders :3

00:33:688 - kdd
00:38:070 - kkkdd
01:36:553 - kdd

Nice map~
Falcom Sound Team FTW~
Kurosanyan
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Joined November 2009
Kurosanyan

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko M4M~

All are suggestions unless in red.

[Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni]
- not sure what that extra timing point is for, if unnecessary, remove it It's not.
- try to use alternating colours next time, it makes life easier for modders :3 I use it now, but it's an old map

00:33:688 - kdd Ok
00:38:070 - kkkdd Nope, I hate this kind of pattern and it doesn't seems necessary
01:36:553 - kdd I prefer to keep kdk

Nice map~
Falcom Sound Team FTW~
To the mapper: Just remove the clap from this note 00:33:856 (3) - so I don't need to send you the map for just a small change.
jonathanlfj
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jonathanlfj
made some changes myself, all updated~
-xNaCLx-
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-xNaCLx-
Taiko M4M...

[Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni]

Just some ideas...just ignore it if you dont like it

the volume of the music is quite low...maybe you can adjust the volume a bit lower?Otherwise i can only hear the drum sound..

01:06:216 - k
01:08:238 - remove

the map is really great...i really love it.
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