Happy New Year ~ jonathanlfj
from my queue ~
here my mod ~
[General]
[S.S.S Normal]
[Arianrhod Hard]
[Ao no Insane]
That's all ~
Is this really your first map? good map :3
I think it becomes very good map only by little improvement
ok~ Star☆ and good luck ~
from my queue ~
here my mod ~
[General]
- Song folder - hitcircle.bpm - What do you use this for? sorry,I can not understand it
- Timing - offset - It is not unified in all diff. ( Easy,Normal:BPM178 offset1098..BPM178 offset 28280, Hard,Insane:BPM178 offset1094..BPM178 offset28276) Plz unify it.
- Set Preview Point - Only Ao no Insane diff is different. Plz unify it. 88942⇒change 88943 ( from File ⇒Open .osu in Notepad )
SPOILER
- Please have a constant spacing of the DS (maybe you can use DS1.2x or 1.1x)
- 00:30:976 (1) - spacing too far
- 00:33:673 (1) - ^
- 00:36:369 (1) - ^
- 00:39:066 (1) - ^
- 00:44:459 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/c4DL
- 00:47:156 (1,2) - ^ same suggestion
- 01:10:751 (6) - remove clap to end of the slider
- 01:11:931 (1) - spacing too far
- 01:14:459 (4) - remove clap
- 01:20:358 (2,3) - ^
- 01:21:538 (4) - spacing too far
- 01:33:504 (1) - spacing too close
- 01:36:369 (1) - spacing too far
- 01:38:560 (4) - remove clap to start of the slider
- 01:39:740 (1) - spacing too far
- 01:47:156 (1) - ^
- 01:58:617 (1,2) - I think kick slider is difficult for a beginner. can you plz change something ?
- 02:07:212 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap. ( i like whistle here ! )
[S.S.S Normal]
SPOILER
- Please have a constant spacing of the DS (maybe you can use DS1.0x)
- 00:14:412 (5) - remove repeat.
- 00:47:662 (1) - spacing too far
- 00:54:572 (4,5) - spacing too far
- 00:55:246 (1) - ^
- 01:11:426 (4) - remove note.
- 01:11:763 - add note ?
- 01:14:628 (6) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
- 01:15:976 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern is difficult for a beginner. ><
- 01:19:515 (1) - spacing too far
- 01:21:538 (1,1) - I think this pattern is difficult for a beginner. ><
- 01:36:369 (1) - spacing too close
- 01:39:740 (1) - spacing too far
- 01:43:617 (8) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
- 01:44:291 (1) - spacing too far
- 01:47:830 (2) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
- 02:01:313 (1,2,3,4) - spacing too far
- 02:07:212 (3) - add whistle instead to clap
[Arianrhod Hard]
SPOILER
- 00:14:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/c4OU
- 00:37:377 (1) - this spinner start 00:37:545 and to 00:37:377 - add note
- 02:07:208 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap
[Ao no Insane]
SPOILER
- OD +1
- 00:14:408 (1) - spacing too far ( because rhythm is different from 00:13:734 (6,7), but DS is the same )
- 01:10:579 - add note
- 02:07:208 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap
That's all ~
Is this really your first map? good map :3
I think it becomes very good map only by little improvement
ok~ Star☆ and good luck ~