[genenal]
Unused Image:
comboburst-1.png
comboburst-0.png
comboburst-3.png
pause-overlay.jpg
comboburst-2.png
comboburst-4.png

Missing Skin:
cursortrail.png

00:00:693 - [Ao no Insane]:you can't use offset before any note~
(and if you change timing. you need let all diff has same timing)

you need resnap all note (all diff)




[KeA Easy]
※you need notify your spacing
00:59:663 (4,2) - need stack

[S.S.S. Normal]
01:46:535 (1) - Unsnapped slider
01:46:872 (2) - Unsnapped slider

[Arianrhod Hard]
00:22:266 (1,1) - so far spacing and too close rhythm. need fix it
00:39:119 (3,4) - stack it

[Ao no Insane]
00:36:928 (7,8) - stack
00:37:266 (8,9) - ^
01:01:367 (9) - unrank slider~
01:04:737 (1,2,3) - stack

ok~some tip: you need use grid(size3 or size4) to make any diff.
good luck~

spboxer3 wrote:

SPOILER

[genenal]
Unused Image:
comboburst-1.png
comboburst-0.png
comboburst-3.png
pause-overlay.jpg
comboburst-2.png
comboburst-4.png

**These are my comboburst elements, are they not showing up?**

Missing Skin:
cursortrail.png

00:00:693 - [Ao no Insane]:you can't use offset before any note~
(and if you change timing. you need let all diff has same timing)

**I don't get what you mean here. The previous modder told me to change to 693 offset and its all fine**

you need resnap all note (all diff)




[KeA Easy]
※you need notify your spacing
00:59:663 (4,2) - need stack

[S.S.S. Normal]
01:46:535 (1) - Unsnapped slider
01:46:872 (2) - Unsnapped slider

[Arianrhod Hard]
00:22:266 (1,1) - so far spacing and too close rhythm. need fix it
00:39:119 (3,4) - stack it

[Ao no Insane]
00:36:928 (7,8) - stack
00:37:266 (8,9) - ^
01:01:367 (9) - unrank slider~
01:04:737 (1,2,3) - stack

ok~some tip: you need use grid(size3 or size4) to make any diff.
good luck~

Thanks for your mod! Fixed most issues except "unused image" and offset, which I need a bit more explanation on.

I'm impressed that this is your 1st map.

Anyway, suggest you find a higher quality mp3 because this one sounds like you ripped it directly off the video, hence the muffling. If you use another mp3, the offset will likely change, when that happens you can call me back.

KeA Easy:

No claps here? I think they go rather well with the song.

I think the proximity in this map is a tad much. Can make things confusing for the player, but I suppose patience in reading the approach rate solves things.

Kind of debatable, but I would suggest you go over this difficulty and play it through by sightreading a little to see which patterns and notes are more intuitive so you can fix some potential issues with spacing since the Distance Snap is very textbook here.

- 01:30:187 (4) - Stack on slider.

S.S.S Normal:

Like KeA, devoid of claps. Once you go over the hitsound suggestions in the following difficulties. You can apply them here.

- 01:49:569 (1) - Spinner should end on - 01:52:603 -

Arianrhod Hard:

- 00:28:670 (4,5,6,7) - Looks neater and less confusing.

- 00:31:367 (4,5,6,7) - Do the same as above. Including all similar patterns/rhythm, eg. - 00:34:063 (4,5,6,7) -

- 00:53:951 (7) - Remove the claps. Put a clap on the beginning and end of the repeat slider instead.
( - 00:53:951 - & - 00:54:457 - )

- 01:00:019 (1,2,3) - Suggestion to use New Combo on (2 & 3) since this pattern make use of a perfect overlap.

- 01:01:873 (4) - Stack on the end of the previous slider.

- 01:03:389 (4) - Remove clap.

- 01:03:895 (6) - ^

- 01:04:232 (7) - ^

- 01:05:075 (2) - Add a clap.

01:20:917 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remove every single clap by mass-selection.

The clapping rhythm should be like this: 01:21:591 (1,2) - (1) should have no claps. While the beginning of (2) should receive a clap.

The order repeats itself. You can try variations of clapping style but make sure the claps don't land on the downbeat because that will disrupt the flow. Best to stick with what I wrote here.

- 01:26:647 (4,5) - Move somewhere else. Overlapping here is not pretty.

- 01:32:378 (7) - Remove this note.

- 01:43:164 (5) - ^

Ao no Insane:

Pattern-wise. Moderately clean and almost no bad overlapping. Rhythm is simple and you did not complicate anything, hitsound usage however, is a little misplaced.

- 00:44:176 (1) - Move the spinner to the previous red-tick on - 00:44:007 -

- 01:49:569 (1) - Remove the clap.

- 01:53:277 (6) - Remove the claps on the rest of the notes to come. Don't place them on White ticks here. It's terrible.

- 01:53:614 (8) & 01:54:288 (3) - Now, you place the claps on the White ticks here, rather than the previous examples.

Listen to the rhythm now and you'll catch on. Do the same for the rest of the notes you put claps on.

- 01:55:299 (1) - Clap on this particular repeat. From here on, consistent claps would be pretty nice.

- 01:57:996 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remove all the claps. Utilize the rhythm I mentioned earlier.

02:04:400 (5,6) - Reverse the clapping position. 6 should have a clap instead of 5.

That's it.

**I don't get what you mean here. The previous modder told me to change to 693 offset and its all fine**
00:00:693 - <-your offset
00:00:440 (1) - <-your first note...
I say you can't use offset (00:00:693 -) after any note (00:00:440 - )
so you can use negative offset (-00:00:657 - )
but you have change this offest. you need change all diff's offset~ understand? ((sorry. my English is very poor D:

No kd thx

Still working on this beatmap? Notice you haven't kudo the latest mod post which was 7 days ago.

If you are still working on it, forum pm me for the mod.

merchat7 wrote:

Still working on this beatmap? Notice you haven't kudo the latest mod post which was 7 days ago.

If you are still working on it, forum pm me for the mod.

sorry i didnt get a chance to work on it in the past weeks...school work has been pretty heavy.
will update very soon.

Here's your 1st star. Keep on going.

Faust wrote:

SPOILER

I'm impressed that this is your 1st map.

Anyway, suggest you find a higher quality mp3 because this one sounds like you ripped it directly off the video, hence the muffling. If you use another mp3, the offset will likely change, when that happens you can call me back.

KeA Easy:

No claps here? I think they go rather well with the song.

I think the proximity in this map is a tad much. Can make things confusing for the player, but I suppose patience in reading the approach rate solves things.

Kind of debatable, but I would suggest you go over this difficulty and play it through by sightreading a little to see which patterns and notes are more intuitive so you can fix some potential issues with spacing since the Distance Snap is very textbook here.

- 01:30:187 (4) - Stack on slider.

S.S.S Normal:

Like KeA, devoid of claps. Once you go over the hitsound suggestions in the following difficulties. You can apply them here.

- 01:49:569 (1) - Spinner should end on - 01:52:603 -

Arianrhod Hard:

- 00:28:670 (4,5,6,7) - Looks neater and less confusing.

- 00:31:367 (4,5,6,7) - Do the same as above. Including all similar patterns/rhythm, eg. - 00:34:063 (4,5,6,7) -

- 00:53:951 (7) - Remove the claps. Put a clap on the beginning and end of the repeat slider instead.
( - 00:53:951 - & - 00:54:457 - )

- 01:00:019 (1,2,3) - Suggestion to use New Combo on (2 & 3) since this pattern make use of a perfect overlap.

- 01:01:873 (4) - Stack on the end of the previous slider.

- 01:03:389 (4) - Remove clap.

- 01:03:895 (6) - ^

- 01:04:232 (7) - ^

- 01:05:075 (2) - Add a clap.

01:20:917 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remove every single clap by mass-selection.

The clapping rhythm should be like this: 01:21:591 (1,2) - (1) should have no claps. While the beginning of (2) should receive a clap.

The order repeats itself. You can try variations of clapping style but make sure the claps don't land on the downbeat because that will disrupt the flow. Best to stick with what I wrote here.

- 01:26:647 (4,5) - Move somewhere else. Overlapping here is not pretty.

- 01:32:378 (7) - Remove this note.

- 01:43:164 (5) - ^

Ao no Insane:

Pattern-wise. Moderately clean and almost no bad overlapping. Rhythm is simple and you did not complicate anything, hitsound usage however, is a little misplaced.

- 00:44:176 (1) - Move the spinner to the previous red-tick on - 00:44:007 -

- 01:49:569 (1) - Remove the clap.

- 01:53:277 (6) - Remove the claps on the rest of the notes to come. Don't place them on White ticks here. It's terrible.

- 01:53:614 (8) & 01:54:288 (3) - Now, you place the claps on the White ticks here, rather than the previous examples.

Listen to the rhythm now and you'll catch on. Do the same for the rest of the notes you put claps on.

- 01:55:299 (1) - Clap on this particular repeat. From here on, consistent claps would be pretty nice.

- 01:57:996 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remove all the claps. Utilize the rhythm I mentioned earlier.

02:04:400 (5,6) - Reverse the clapping position. 6 should have a clap instead of 5.

That's it.

Sorry for not being able to update for a long time. With these edits it looks and sounds much better!
P.S. I changed the mp3 file and had to redo the offset. Can you just check if the offset is good? Thank you~~

Faust wrote:

Here's your 1st star. Keep on going.

Thank you very much again~~~

As requested

[General]

- Kiai time should start at 01:28:943, don't see why you start it at the current place and end at 01:51:864 (don't understand why you end in the middle of a spinner.
- Preview point should be at 01:28:943 as well.
- Please keep end point the same for all diffs so either do a circle for 02:07:876 (Normal, Hard) or add spinner to Easy and Insane at that spot.
- If you're going to map this break at 01:52:369 for Insane, then map it for the other diffs as well. let beginners/casual player enjoy this part of the song as well and not just experienced player and this song isn't very long anyway so having no breaks is fine.
- Same with the beginning, if you're going to map it in Insane map it in the other diffs as well, the only time that it's fine to have a different begin / break time is when it's a guest diff imo.
- Combo colors are slightly different between diff, edit via notepad (File > open .osu in notepad), copy from one of the diff the combo colors, and paste it the other diffs.
- comboburst-1 & comboburst-2 exceed the 500px width limit, resize/crop so that it's lower than this. viewtopic.php?f=15&t=51694
- Just keep tick rate 1. 0.5x tick rate is unrankable now and I don't understand why you use slider tick 2 for Hard.
- Insane has an offset of 1339 which is different, not sure which timing is right so check it. Offset needs to be consistent between diffs in a mapset.
- I'll leave the timing check to someone, I'm not too good with timing, but it feel off to me.

Well I guess that's all, you should fix all the issues.

[Easy]

00:54:561 (4,5) - Stack like this are not nice to play at the current approach rate, please space it out.
01:02:482 (2,3) - I suggest doing a slider instead, this rhythm is a little hard to play for the easiest diff.
01:14:449 (4) - Don't do kick slider (repeating slider with more than one repeat) on the easiest diff. Do something else instead. Perhaps add a hit circle at 01:14:449 and a slider at 01:14:786 and end it at 01:15:460.
01:20:347 (2,3) - Similar to 01:02:482, feel a little difficult for the easiest diff.
01:31:977 (6) - Similar to 01:14:449, try something else. But this one isn't as bad as it points to the next note.
01:42:426 (5) - ^ please do something else.
02:07:201 (1,2,3) - Just do a repeating slider instead since this is the easiest diff.

Didn't mention the kick sliders at 01:58:606 since they play well enough. Pretty nice although I think more patterns could be simplify, feel a little too hard for Easy. Hitsound could be nicer, but I'll leave this to somewhere else. Slider as well.

[Normal]

+1 approach rate, current approach rate make the screen feel clustered and your note density is quite high.

00:41:752 (1,2) - Slider fit nicer with the instruments.
00:52:538 (1,2) - It's a better idea to do short repeating slider instead. This pattern feel too hard for a Normal.
00:53:213 (3,4) - ^
00:53:887 (5,6) - ^
01:08:718 (1) - This kick slider doesn't play very well at all, there's nothing really saying there's going to be another repeat so do something else.
01:21:527 (1) - I would remove a repeat, this next note play weird like this and it's probably too hard for Normal.
01:22:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would definitely try to rework this. Add slider/repeating slider to this part. Too many hit circles in a row imo and you can easily add sliders here.
01:31:977 (2) - I don't really like this at all, do a mix of slider+ hit circle seems nicer to me.
01:42:426 (2,3) - Very confusing to play, you have to guest how many repeats the sliders are going to have and you don't have much time to react at all.

Perhaps try to find a custom hitsound, clap doesn't really fit too well with how you did the hitsounding imo.

[Hard]

+1 ar please. Similar reason to Normal.

00:49:842 (1,2,3,4) - Curving all the slider give a nicer feel.
00:51:190 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:54:561 (7) - The way you place the note, the extra repeat is confusing. removing the repeat feel nicer.
00:59:280 (5,6) - If you're going to do this, do a slider, (5) plays weird since I can hear a note on the red tick so I thought I had to hit it earlier.
01:40:404 (3,4,5) - Space this out, this part just feel very clustered and stacking this make it feel even worse. Very hard to read with current approach rate as well.
01:42:426 (1,2,3,4) - Curving all the slider here give a nicer feel.

[Insane]
00:43:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is quite an annoying pattern to play, doing shorts sliders instead works better so (1,2) a slider, (3,4) a slider and etc.
02:03:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ if you do short sliders for above, I would do it here too for consistency.

This is a lot better than the other diffs. Nice job!

Well this is good if this is your first beatmap. It still need work, but I'm sure with enough mods you'll get there.

No star because of this and sorry for lazy mod since I don't really like the song (It may not look lazy, but it really is, I usually show you a screenshot of what I mean, but here I don't so that's what I mean and I ignore some minor issues as well.)

Good luck!

merchat7 wrote:

SPOILER

As requested

[General]

- Kiai time should start at 01:28:943, don't see why you start it at the current place and end at 01:51:864 (don't understand why you end in the middle of a spinner.
- Preview point should be at 01:28:943 as well.
- Please keep end point the same for all diffs so either do a circle for 02:07:876 (Normal, Hard) or add spinner to Easy and Insane at that spot.
- If you're going to map this break at 01:52:369 for Insane, then map it for the other diffs as well. let beginners/casual player enjoy this part of the song as well and not just experienced player and this song isn't very long anyway so having no breaks is fine.
- Same with the beginning, if you're going to map it in Insane map it in the other diffs as well, the only time that it's fine to have a different begin / break time is when it's a guest diff imo.
- Combo colors are slightly different between diff, edit via notepad (File > open .osu in notepad), copy from one of the diff the combo colors, and paste it the other diffs.
- comboburst-1 & comboburst-2 exceed the 500px width limit, resize/crop so that it's lower than this. viewtopic.php?f=15&t=51694
- Just keep tick rate 1. 0.5x tick rate is unrankable now and I don't understand why you use slider tick 2 for Hard.
- Insane has an offset of 1339 which is different, not sure which timing is right so check it. Offset needs to be consistent between diffs in a mapset.
- I'll leave the timing check to someone, I'm not too good with timing, but it feel off to me.

Well I guess that's all, you should fix all the issues.

[Easy]

00:54:561 (4,5) - Stack like this are not nice to play at the current approach rate, please space it out.
01:02:482 (2,3) - I suggest doing a slider instead, this rhythm is a little hard to play for the easiest diff.
01:14:449 (4) - Don't do kick slider (repeating slider with more than one repeat) on the easiest diff. Do something else instead. Perhaps add a hit circle at 01:14:449 and a slider at 01:14:786 and end it at 01:15:460.
01:20:347 (2,3) - Similar to 01:02:482, feel a little difficult for the easiest diff.
01:31:977 (6) - Similar to 01:14:449, try something else. But this one isn't as bad as it points to the next note.
01:42:426 (5) - ^ please do something else.
02:07:201 (1,2,3) - Just do a repeating slider instead since this is the easiest diff.

Didn't mention the kick sliders at 01:58:606 since they play well enough. Pretty nice although I think more patterns could be simplify, feel a little too hard for Easy. Hitsound could be nicer, but I'll leave this to somewhere else. Slider as well.

[Normal]

+1 approach rate, current approach rate make the screen feel clustered and your note density is quite high.

00:41:752 (1,2) - Slider fit nicer with the instruments.
00:52:538 (1,2) - It's a better idea to do short repeating slider instead. This pattern feel too hard for a Normal.
00:53:213 (3,4) - ^
00:53:887 (5,6) - ^
01:08:718 (1) - This kick slider doesn't play very well at all, there's nothing really saying there's going to be another repeat so do something else.
01:21:527 (1) - I would remove a repeat, this next note play weird like this and it's probably too hard for Normal.
01:22:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would definitely try to rework this. Add slider/repeating slider to this part. Too many hit circles in a row imo and you can easily add sliders here.
01:31:977 (2) - I don't really like this at all, do a mix of slider+ hit circle seems nicer to me.
01:42:426 (2,3) - Very confusing to play, you have to guest how many repeats the sliders are going to have and you don't have much time to react at all.

Perhaps try to find a custom hitsound, clap doesn't really fit too well with how you did the hitsounding imo.

[Hard]

+1 ar please. Similar reason to Normal.

00:49:842 (1,2,3,4) - Curving all the slider give a nicer feel.
00:51:190 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:54:561 (7) - The way you place the note, the extra repeat is confusing. removing the repeat feel nicer.
00:59:280 (5,6) - If you're going to do this, do a slider, (5) plays weird since I can hear a note on the red tick so I thought I had to hit it earlier.
01:40:404 (3,4,5) - Space this out, this part just feel very clustered and stacking this make it feel even worse. Very hard to read with current approach rate as well.
01:42:426 (1,2,3,4) - Curving all the slider here give a nicer feel.

[Insane]
00:43:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is quite an annoying pattern to play, doing shorts sliders instead works better so (1,2) a slider, (3,4) a slider and etc.
02:03:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ if you do short sliders for above, I would do it here too for consistency.

This is a lot better than the other diffs. Nice job!

Well this is good if this is your first beatmap. It still need work, but I'm sure with enough mods you'll get there.

No star because of this and sorry for lazy mod since I don't really like the song (It may not look lazy, but it really is, I usually show you a screenshot of what I mean, but here I don't so that's what I mean and I ignore some minor issues as well.)

Good luck!

Thank you very much~~

Ao no Insane
00:21:816 (1) - Delete it. No sound is here so it's unnecessary
00:33:661 (1,2) - a bit confusing
01:11:414 - add a note
01:31:807 - add a note as head of the following combos


Arianrhod Hard
00:14:737 (7) - add one note at 00:14:569 as new combo, coordinating its style with following ones
00:21:816 (1,2,3,4,1) - delay them by 1/2 rhythm
01:11:414 - add a note, or change the 01:11:245 (5) into a short slider


S.S.S. Normal
00:03:614 (3,4) - make them earlier by 1/2 rhythm, and double the length of the slider
00:21:816 (1,1) - delay them by 1/2 rhythm
01:11:245 (4) - delay it by 1/2 rhythm


KeA Easy
Nothing to mention, quite good

Thank you~~

Hi :3

This is a nice map for new mapper (better than my first map).
Also keep in mind that Distance Snap is a nice tool to use.
That's all I have for you, fight !

Heyo \o/

Go into timing setup, select all your timing points and move all selected offsets by +12. This should be a LOT better (at least from what I can play from on insane). I'll toss your map a mod once you do this, so don't KDS this post ;3.

From what I can tell from looking at it, problems are most likely dealing with hitsounds. I'll do a full mod when you fix the offset~

Yeah, Faust was right, this is a impressive map considering it is your first submitted.

i will update very soon.

GiNa wrote:

Hi :3

My Mod

[General]
-Diff names are confusing, do you have any guest? If no, changed the kiai time for all diffs, starts from 01:28:942, ends at 01:51:863.
-Take off “Letterbox during breaks” (song setup -> Storyboarding) because you have video.
-Stack Leniency 2 is unrankable, it must be higher than 3.
the names are game related so...yeah

[KeA Easy]
-Please use distance snap, 1.1x would be perfect, then adjust every notes you have right now.
00:21:816 (1) – this sounds late, move this to 00:22:490 and shorten it to 00:22:996, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/203182 isn't this the same as the other difficulties? I checked at 25% speed its quite on time...
00:28:268 (1,2,3) – overlapping doesn’t look good, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/203183m herer’s the code for them
112,88,28268,6,0,B|48:96|24:136|32:208,1,140
112,172,29279,1,0
112,256,29616,2,0,B|176:248|200:208|192:136,1,140,0|0
-There are so many overlapping notes after this, changed all of them and follow the spacing.
01:22:200 (1) – remove NC
01:21:526 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – I would say this pattern is hard to beginners, maybe changed all the sliders from 01:23:548 to something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/203186
01:26:245 (1) – shorten this to 01:27:593, do not add anything after this changed, a note directly after a spinner is hard for beginners.
01:30:796 (4) – don’t hide this under a slider in Easy
01:58:605 (5) – NC
02:06:694 (4) – NC
02:07:200 (1) – remove NC

[S.S.S. Normal]
-Spacing, 1.0x this time ?
-OD+1
No other big problems.

[Arianrhod Hard]
-HP+1, OD+1
-Spacing, maybe 1.0x too, jumps are okay in Hard tho, so you can keep some of them. I feel that 1.0x spacing is too jumpy...kept it at 0.8x
01:08:043 – add a note
02:06:863 (4) – NC

[Ao no Insane]
-OD+1
-Spacing, same as Hard yeah most of my spacing were already 1.0x...there are some special distance changes that i like which don't fit with the spacing...but this is insane so i think it should be fine.
00:32:144 (9) – NC
01:31:470 (11) – NC
01:31:975 (1) – remove NC
01:38:380 (9) – NC
01:42:256 (11) – NC
01:42:762 (1) – remove NC
01:45:796 (1) – NC
01:48:998 (11) – NC
02:06:863 (4) – NC
02:07:200 (1) – remove NC
Keep in mind that NC is for any pattern/spacing changed.

This is a nice map for new mapper (better than my first map).
Also keep in mind that Distance Snap is a nice tool to use.
That's all I have for you, fight !

Thank you for the mod! I actually didn't know how to fiddle around with distance snapping...still got lots of things to learn ^_^

Nyquill wrote:

Heyo \o/

Go into timing setup, select all your timing points and move all selected offsets by +12. This should be a LOT better (at least from what I can play from on insane). I'll toss your map a mod once you do this, so don't KDS this post ;3.

From what I can tell from looking at it, problems are most likely dealing with hitsounds. I'll do a full mod when you fix the offset~

Yeah, Faust was right, this is a impressive map considering it is your first submitted.

Timing fixed. Can't wait till holidays begin!

Whee~

Overall:
It's kinda silly how this is a supr srs song and your spinner is like "OMG BEACH PARTY LOOK AT THAT CAT SO MOE >ww<~".

Insane:
WOAH ROLLER COASTER RIDE THIS SV IS KINDA HIGH for the beginning
00:36:201 (3) - Not moe slider ;~;

Easy:
01:31:987 (6) - Not moe!

That's about it. Pretty cool stuff.

Thnks for mod and comment!

[General]
I would consider mapping the intro into this song risky, as the timing for it is terribly hard to get accurate. You seemed to do an find job at it, however, so it should be fine. But when there is time, get someone who is good at timing to check it again.

[Insane]
Intro feels lacking in hitsounds.
00:01:098 (1) - Whistle at start?
00:01:098 (1) - Whistle
'do these only if you add inherits that lower their volume after each 3 notes.
00:03:963 (10) - Whistle at end
00:04:805 (3) - Whistle
00:05:480 (6) - ^
00:06:154 (3) - ^
'/
00:11:884 (1) - Whistle
00:12:895 (3) - End of slider whistle yeah
00:13:738 (6) - ^
00:14:412 (1) - end of last repeat add whistle
00:15:086 (2) - Beginning of slider add whistle
00:21:996 (2,4,6,7,8) - Whistle
00:39:066 - Starting from here, add a clap on every 2nd and 4th beat until 00:44:965
00:49:347 (10,11,12) - Massively overmapped, consider removing the middle note.
00:56:426 (1,2,3) - Not sure if I agree with the usage of claps, if you want to be safe, just do what I suggested earlier and do claps every 2nd and 4th beat.
01:03:336 (1) - Music suggests jumps. And the spacing between the sliders feel awkward. Suggesting you change these to hitcircles instead http://puu.sh/btZ9 if you're comfortable with mapping jumps, you can do neat dangaard style jumps here too xD
01:09:235 (6,1) - Spacing here feels awkward, might want to move them away from each other (Move entire combos)
02:02:324 (2) - Missing a clap here.
02:04:010 (1) - Look at what I said for 01:03:336 (1)

What's great about the diff is that it feels fairly fun to play despite you are completely new to this. The weaknesses you should probably work on are spacing, hitsounds, and more elaborate patterns and jumps, none of which are not obtainable with more experience.

I wish you the best of luck on this map \o/

sorry~for my request
I was mod at over 1 month...
and I don't have accept recheck._.
so I can't mod your map again
says sorry...

Yo modding this map because of ur request

KeA Easy:
00:28:280(1) - too far near the middle. move it near the middle so make it easier for beginners and since this is an easy diff i dont think that beginners wont recover because the spinner and note r close to each other.
00:44:459(1) - make this a curved slider to make a blanket.
00:49:010(2) - Ctrl+H to make an easier path

S.S.S. Normal:
00:28:280(1) - like my suggestion on easy. its too far near the middle.
00:39:066(1) - ^
01:06:369(1) - try to make the it like (2). the look not the length. That's what she said
01:16:650 - add a circle?
01:22:044 - either add a circle or a repeat?
01:46:650(3,1) - spacing
01:58:122(2,3) - ^

Arianrhod Hard:
00:55:073(5) - remove the clap
01:48:163(6,7,8) - spacing

Ao no Insane:
no problems here

this is the best i can do. GL

Thanks for the mod ^_^

hi sorry for late mod >.<

Ao no Insane

- from 00:01:094 to 00:23:004, cant you feel the slow of the song is? the sliders are to fast, and 00:21:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is not so suitable
- uhg this custom clap >.< even with 60% volume is silent the song, and dont fit as well, you can decrease the volume of the hitsound or the time section, but it still would having the same silent effect
- as I dont like the custom hitsound I cant mod it =3=

00:12:554 (2) - new combo since it have different spacing
00:14:408 (1,2,3,4) - why less spacing? even with x0,3 spacing this sliders still being too fast
00:21:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - jumps on slow song part D:
00:28:276 - decrease the volume of this timing section please, the custom clap is silent the song
00:44:961 ~ 00:55:242 - here you have a nice chance to use x0,5 or x0,75 slider multiplier...
00:50:860 (5,6,7,8) - can you use a different placement? D:
01:06:365 ~ 01:21:197 - another slowdown


Arianrhod Hard

-same slowdown suggest from up
-many overlaps, copy paste of some objects and weird placement here, maybe you are saying "for make it harder"
00:15:925 (5,6,7,8) - cant listen what are following this notes
00:21:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - what o.o


S.S.S. Normal

- this looks nice, just some 3 repeats sliders may be confusing

Thank you for the mod~~

Happy New Year ~ jonathanlfj

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song folder - hitcircle.bpm - What do you use this for? sorry,I can not understand it
2. Timing - offset - It is not unified in all diff. ( Easy,Normal:BPM178 offset1098..BPM178 offset 28280, Hard,Insane:BPM178 offset1094..BPM178 offset28276) Plz unify it.
3. Set Preview Point - Only Ao no Insane diff is different. Plz unify it. 88942⇒change 88943 ( from File ⇒Open .osu in Notepad )

[KeA Easy]

[S.S.S Normal]

[Arianrhod Hard]

[Ao no Insane]

That's all ~

Is this really your first map? good map :3

I think it becomes very good map only by little improvement

ok~ Star☆ and good luck ~

kosiga wrote:

Happy New Year ~ jonathanlfj

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song folder - hitcircle.bpm - What do you use this for? sorry,I can not understand it It was automatically generated when i created the hitcircle...dont want to touch it until someone varify that it is useless
2. Timing - offset - It is not unified in all diff. ( Easy,Normal:BPM178 offset1098..BPM178 offset 28280, Hard,Insane:BPM178 offset1094..BPM178 offset28276) Plz unify it.
3. Set Preview Point - Only Ao no Insane diff is different. Plz unify it. 88942⇒change 88943 ( from File ⇒Open .osu in Notepad )

[KeA Easy]

SPOILER

1. Please have a constant spacing of the DS (maybe you can use DS1.2x or 1.1x)
2. 00:30:976 (1) - spacing too far
3. 00:33:673 (1) - ^
4. 00:36:369 (1) - ^
5. 00:39:066 (1) - ^
6. 00:44:459 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/c4DL
7. 00:47:156 (1,2) - ^ same suggestion
8. 01:10:751 (6) - remove clap to end of the slider
9. 01:11:931 (1) - spacing too far
10. 01:14:459 (4) - remove clap
11. 01:20:358 (2,3) - ^
12. 01:21:538 (4) - spacing too far
13. 01:33:504 (1) - spacing too close
14. 01:36:369 (1) - spacing too far
15. 01:38:560 (4) - remove clap to start of the slider
16. 01:39:740 (1) - spacing too far
17. 01:47:156 (1) - ^
18. 01:58:617 (1,2) - I think kick slider is difficult for a beginner. can you plz change something ?
19. 02:07:212 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap. ( i like whistle here ! )

[S.S.S Normal]

SPOILER

1. Please have a constant spacing of the DS (maybe you can use DS1.0x)
2. 00:14:412 (5) - remove repeat.
3. 00:47:662 (1) - spacing too far
4. 00:54:572 (4,5) - spacing too far
5. 00:55:246 (1) - ^
6. 01:11:426 (4) - remove note.
7. 01:11:763 - add note ?
8. 01:14:628 (6) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
9. 01:15:976 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern is difficult for a beginner. ><
10. 01:19:515 (1) - spacing too far
11. 01:21:538 (1,1) - I think this pattern is difficult for a beginner. ><
12. 01:36:369 (1) - spacing too close
13. 01:39:740 (1) - spacing too far
14. 01:43:617 (8) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
15. 01:44:291 (1) - spacing too far
16. 01:47:830 (2) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
17. 02:01:313 (1,2,3,4) - spacing too far
18. 02:07:212 (3) - add whistle instead to clap

[Arianrhod Hard]

SPOILER

1. 00:14:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/c4OU
2. 00:37:377 (1) - this spinner start 00:37:545 and to 00:37:377 - add note
3. 02:07:208 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap

[Ao no Insane]

SPOILER

1. OD +1 Someone who tested my beatmap said instead of OD increase AR by 1, so i did that instead
2. 00:14:408 (1) - spacing too far ( because rhythm is different from 00:13:734 (6,7), but DS is the same )
3. 01:10:579 - add note
4. 02:07:208 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap

That's all ~

Is this really your first map? good map :3

I think it becomes very good map only by little improvement

ok~ Star☆ and good luck ~

Thank you for the mod and star~~

[General]

1. Remove hitcircle.pbm from folder
2. Add custom section-fail.png
3. Add (at least from template) custom reversearrow.png

[KeA Easy]

1. 00:28:276 (1) - slider right after spinner, might be confusing for newbie players
2. 00:44:455 (1) - make it like this
   
   Open

   
3. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it

[S.S.S. Normal]

1. 00:28:613 (2) - spacing error
2. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it

[Arianrhod Hard]

1. 00:41:422 (3) - move 2 grids right

[Ao no Insane]

I suggest AR-1

As the first map this is nice work .

Bass-chan wrote:

[General]

1. Remove hitcircle.pbm from folder I'm guessing it has no use after all
2. Add custom section-fail.png
3. Add (at least from template) custom reversearrow.png

[KeA Easy]

1. 00:28:276 (1) - slider right after spinner, might be confusing for newbie players its kinda hard to change now since it follows a specific pattern
2. 00:44:455 (1) - make it like this
   
   Open

   
3. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it

[S.S.S. Normal]

1. 00:28:613 (2) - spacing error
2. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it

[Arianrhod Hard]

1. 00:41:422 (3) - move 2 grids right

[Ao no Insane]

I suggest AR-1 aite and i increased OD by 1 as the previous modder suggested

As the first map this is nice work .

Thank you for the mod~~

Hello.

General

1. Include a spinner-osu png file, a spinner-spin.png file and a spinner-clear.png file. You need those to complete the spinner set, you know?
2. I thought you said the hitcircle.PBM file has no usage? Why is it still there? ):
3. Since you have you have a custom hitcircle, you got to have a SliderBorder included. This shows you how to do it.
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,60,60
   Combo2 : 58,252,58
   Combo3 : 162,119,81
   Combo4 : 199,197,197
   Combo5 : 154,252,252
   SliderBorder: 255,255,255

KeA Easy

1. It's probably best to increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one.
2. 00:39:062 (1, 2)-Sounds like there should be whistles on both of those sliders... Add them in. (:
3. 01:09:736 (4, 5)-It's a good idea to remove those notes and replacing them with a slider starting from 01:09:736 to 01:10:242. It plays better like that in my opinion.
4. 01:50:186 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here. Add one in.

S.S.S. Normal

1. 01:21:534-Hmm... Remove new combo? o:
2. 01:45:972-Not necessary to put a new combo here. So, remove it.
3. 01:50:186 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here. Add one in.

Arianrhod Hard

1. 01:53:219 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning? (:

Ao no Insane

1. 01:53:219 (3)-Add a finish.
2. 02:04:006 (1, 2)-Stack these properly on the end of the previous slider.

And that's about it. If you have any questions, feel free to reply back.

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod^_^ If you can please look over my insane diff again cause i remapped a portion of it.

hi
from my mod queue

General
AudioLeadIn is 1015 now please change just 1000
check Letterbox during breaks? you use break time.
KeA Easy
00:30:972 (1,2,3) - why not use spacing x1.2?
00:36:365 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:568 (4,5) - don't stack this
01:20:354 (2,3) - ^
01:38:556 (4) - spacing
01:43:781 (6) - please more down. this is hard to read
01:46:309 (3,4) - don't stack this

S.S.S. Normal
01:29:624 (3) - kick slider and 2 everse is difficult for beginners
01:36:365 (1) - ^
01:38:893 (3) -
01:40:410 (2) -

Arianrhod Hard
AR+1?
00:28:276 (1) - add finish?
00:33:669 (1) - ^
01:29:961 (4) - spacing
01:40:579 (4,5) - ^

Ao no Insane
00:02:273 (5) - end at 00:02:610 - ?
00:38:388 (1,5) -whistle? sound is too small
01:15:467 (3,7) - ^
01:27:517 (1) ~ sound is too small

that's all

Thanks for your mod~~~

既然可以用中文那我就寫中文了-w-


General

• - 用Normal-hitnormal當Normal set的clap...兩個同樣的音疊在一起的時候效果其實比用一個鼓音色來的差, 還有點爆音的跡象
  - sliderball製作成可以轉動的?

Easy

• 00:12:554 (2,3,4,5) - 就算不是用在簡單難度, 類似這樣的排列+AR+節奏會讓人感到混亂...建議可以換一個比較容易讀的排列. 比如像你在Normal那樣的方式
  01:04:343 (3,4,5) - 和前面組成一個比較接近圓形的排列? http://puu.sh/eYqX , 另外(4)下clap-none
  01:07:208 (1) - 空拍後為了跟vocal而踩紅線讓人感覺沒有節奏感, 建議後移1/2拍
  01:29:624 (3,4,5) - 這種節奏更直觀一些: http://puu.sh/eYrS
  01:37:040 (2,3,4) - ^, (4)的長度可以保留
  01:47:826 (2,3,4) - ^
  
  
  
  Normal
  [list:969cc]- 類似這樣的低難度+vocal踩紅線來說, 我覺得用跟vocal的方式來map不太適合 T_T

01:02:489 (2) - 後移1/2拍
01:02:995 (3) - clap
01:04:849 (4,1) - clap-none-clap, 4的背景音和前面3個沒有不同, 為何clap要放在錯位呢 D:
01:11:422 (4) - 有點多餘的note, 加了這個變成非跟vocal的節奏, 但接著還是依照vocal來下note o.o 顯的違和



Hard

• - 連續三個難度都是一樣的Circle size...囧!
  - AR可以提高1, 00:29:287 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這種排列可以看的清晰點...至於星數顯示並不是一個嚴重的問題, Diff spread主要是看圖的難度平不平衡, 而不是星數

00:22:498 (1,2,3,4) - 彎曲程度建議可以加強, 然後結尾往上提: http://puu.sh/eYut 移動起來比較舒服-w-
00:36:365 (1,2,3,4) - 目前的排列有點歪了: http://puu.sh/eYuM 改成正的四邊形吧 o.o: http://puu.sh/eYv7
01:04:849 (7,8) - 同Normal
01:21:534 (1) - 可以用一個低速slider再接01:22:208 (1)高速的
01:38:893 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 亂成一團了orz: http://puu.sh/eYwt



Insane

• - SV沒必要這麼高:( , 加上節奏基本都是1/2...看著就像circle和slider滿屏飛

00:03:622 (x) - 漏了一個音, Insane漏音是不可取的!
00:04:464 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建議音量漸降, 每3個note下降大概3~5%
00:15:082 (2,4) - 個人不太喜歡在純音段落出現這樣的變速....很破壞歌曲
00:22:835 (7,8) - spacing不和(1,2)對稱嗎? 如果要顯出什麼特別效果的話, 我覺得把note移到接近平的會好些 o.o http://puu.sh/eYxT (不過這看著spacing真奇怪XD)
00:38:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音量提高至58%左右
01:04:849 (1,2) - 同前面的難度
01:08:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡和後面的五連十分糟糕囧..和歌曲完全木有配合啊!
01:15:467 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同00:38:388
01:26:927 (4,5,6,7,8) - 不要降低音量, 背景音很強o-o
01:28:613 (T) - 30%>65%這差距挺大的..還是S跟N的切換...要不考慮一下把65%降低或者30%提高? 近乎無聲的連打接一個N-finish要人命呢 >_<



我等耳機黨表示聽完normal-hitnormal的clap有種說不出的不舒服感T.T
另外圖本身是正常發揮的程度, 不過節奏需要再加點創意, 純1/2聽著有點無聊

加油

Thank you for the mod^_^
i will update a bit later...
尼玛考试伤不起呀orz
ok issues fixed

-random mod
B轨的曲子lol

[General]
所有难度的preview point都有几毫秒的偏差

[KeA Easy]
2.22 star......
01:07:208 (1,2) - 用1个折返slider代替这个note+slider?

[S.S.S. Normal]
00:41:759 (3,4) - 感觉新人很难把握这里 3弄个折返 然后把4删掉?
01:48:163 (3) - 缩短1/2?这样才对的上vocal

[Arianrhod Hard]
00:41:759 (1,2,3) - 前面用的是1.0xDS 这里为什么忽然减小到0.5x?
01:39:230 (10) - 删掉这个note?感觉有点多余
01:46:983 (9) - 同上
01:57:770 (1,2,3) - 调整下间距?0.8x感觉太小了点 有点难读

[Ao no Insane]
01:07:208 (5) - 0.75xBPM段用个3.4xDS的大跳 不合适吧...
01:27:517 (1) - 删掉这个note?感觉后面那1串应该从01:27:601 (10) - 开始

给星 加油~

我了个去头一次有人主动加星。。。好感动T_T
谢啦~~

Nice Beatmap!

Hello.
Sorry my poor english.
Normal
00:40:916 (2) -
↓
00:40:747 (2) -

I think this is good map.
Please do its best!

Amyrina wrote:

Hello.
Sorry my poor english.
Normal
00:40:916 (2) -
↓
00:40:747 (2) -
well the slider fits the background music so...yeah no change

I think this is good map.
Please do its best!

still thanks for your consideration!

No kudo for this of course.

[General]
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
-[KeA Easy] : 88943
Fix it please

[Kurosanyan's Taiko (fix it yourself it's okay)]
01:19:847 (24) - Unsnapped circle.
01:43:611 (10) - Unsnapped circle.
01:56:420 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:57:094 (10) - Unsnapped circle.

[S.S.S. Normal]
00:28:276 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.
00:44:961 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.