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Fujita Maiko - Nee (TV Size)

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GiNa
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GiNa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月26日 at 上午 10:10:51

Artist: Fujita Maiko
Title: Nee (TV Size)
Source: Hiiro no Kakera
Tags: opening Hisui no Shizuku tutuhaha LunarSakuya
BPM: 97
Filesize: 15250kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.41 stars, 162 notes)
  2. Normal (3.1 stars, 106 notes)
  3. Sakuya's Easy (1.16 stars, 67 notes)
  4. TuInsane (5 stars, 248 notes)
Download: Fujita Maiko - Nee (TV Size)
Download: Fujita Maiko - Nee (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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OP of 緋色の欠片 - ねぇ

Done
[Sakuya's Easy] 100% by LunarSakuya
[Normal] 100%
[Hard] 100%
[TuInsane] 100% by tutuhaha
Last edited by GiNa , edited 21 times in total.
tutuhaha
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tutuhaha
22来了！
spboxer3
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spboxer3
好. 我來了...

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. Tag不同 在22的diff少了tutuhaha的tag.
  2. Kiai建議一致 既然妳Normal和Insane的難度都設在同樣的kiai 我認為你應該設置一致 畢竟Normal也是你做的
  3. offset改成負值 object跑到offset前面了...

Normal



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:36:206 (1,2) -
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:52:907 (1) - 這個NC其實是多餘的 沒有必要在這邊加個NC對吧 既不是段落也不是combo太長了

Hard



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:00:949 (1) - 1ms的 unsnap... 不過說實話 這個AImod並沒有說出來...
  2. 00:03:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這是一整套的排列 但是感覺出現時機怪怪的... 因為在小節中間出現 而結尾也到下一個小節了... (00:02:804 - ,00:04:041 -,00:05:278 - 小節開始處)
  3. 00:35:587 (5) - [suggest]不如把這個move到00:35:432 - 然後在00:35:896 - 加個note 這樣排起來節奏比較不會那麼死板
  4. 00:48:577 (4,5,6,7) - 額...這個不能說不好 但是用slider reverse 作出3連拍 放在1/2開始感覺就是很彆扭...

Insane


  • 真少看到你用CS 5來做圖._.

    Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 多餘的綠線:
    00:16:412
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:14:556 (5,6,1) - [suggest]讓這個作出等間距? 讓5的結尾與6,1都呈現等間距吧. 現在1靠5的結尾太近了些
  2. 01:22:597 (1,2,3,4,5) - 是否是蓄意的. 我看到這個間距有慢慢減小的感覺...如果不是 那就排好些吧

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

加油吧~
GiNa
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GiNa
M-sp3's Mod

spboxer3 wrote:

好. 我來了...

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. Tag不同 在22的diff少了tutuhaha的tag.　Fixed
  2. Kiai建議一致 既然妳Normal和Insane的難度都設在同樣的kiai 我認為你應該設置一致 畢竟Normal也是你做的 　大哥你根本就說錯了，kiai有問題的是Hard啊，我還看了五分鐘受不了才用AIBat去check
  3. offset改成負值 object跑到offset前面了...　Fixed
[notice]

Normal



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:36:206 (1,2) - 　Fixed
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:52:907 (1) - 這個NC其實是多餘的 沒有必要在這邊加個NC對吧 既不是段落也不是combo太長了　I followed lyrics, so no changed

Hard

[list:6c7cf]

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
    1. 00:00:949 (1) - 1ms的 unsnap... 不過說實話 這個AImod並沒有說出來...　Fixed
    2. 00:03:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這是一整套的排列 但是感覺出現時機怪怪的... 因為在小節中間出現 而結尾也到下一個小節了... (00:02:804 - ,00:04:041 -,00:05:278 - 小節開始處) 　我看不懂你在說什麼，不過我還是fix了些東西
    3. 00:35:587 (5) - [suggest]不如把這個move到00:35:432 - 然後在00:35:896 - 加個note 這樣排起來節奏比較不會那麼死板　Fixed
    4. 00:48:577 (4,5,6,7) - 額...這個不能說不好 但是用slider reverse 作出3連拍 放在1/2開始感覺就是很彆扭...　Fixed
加油吧~　Okay
Melophobia
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Melophobia
As requested
[General]
i'd suggest you to mute sliderslide, it really sounds noisy

[Normal]
00:11:463 (1) - mute this spinner please (at least the end of this
00:42:391 (1) - remove newcombo
00:47:958 (3) - add whistle?
01:20:741 (1) - add finish at the end?

[Hard]
00:11:618 (1) - same as Normal
00:13:628 - add break time
00:35:277 (4) - add a repeat to this slider
00:47:958 (3) - 2 whistles are too much imo. remove it from end please
01:07:133 (7) - use same direction as 01:06:514 (6) -
01:21:360 (4) - add finish?

* why not use whistles in Kiai time? it'll fit a lot with this song i think

[TuInsane]
* shouldnt it be "tuInsane"?
00:02:803 (4) - add whistle at the beginning
00:05:277 (6) - ^
00:05:896 (7) - ^
01:21:360 (3) - add finish?
01:23:215 (5) - default finish is better imo

really nice map, star
good luck GiNa~
S o r d a
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S o r d a
[overall]:
  1. Nothing wrong here.
[TuInsane]:
  1. 00:15:174 (1) - beginning whistle
  2. 00:34:350 (2) - ^
[Hard]:
  1. 00:19:659 (2,3) - not stacked correctly
  2. 00:36:205 (1) - change to finish like insane diff
  3. 00:46:102 (1) - beginning finish
  4. 00:55:999 - how about this?
[Normal]:
  1. nice~
nice map Gina chan
Fight~
GiNa
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Topic Starter
GiNa
Melophobia's Mod

Melophobia wrote:

As requested
[General]
i'd suggest you to mute sliderslide, it really sounds noisy　Okay, I will, after my tests though

[Normal]
00:11:463 (1) - mute this spinner please (at least the end of this　Fixed
00:42:391 (1) - remove newcombo　Fixed
00:47:958 (3) - add whistle?　Fixed
01:20:741 (1) - add finish at the end?　if you take off clap, you will see the finish doesn't fit

[Hard]
00:11:618 (1) - same as Normal　Fixed
00:13:628 - add break time　Fixed
00:35:277 (4) - add a repeat to this slider　Fixed
00:47:958 (3) - 2 whistles are too much imo. remove it from end please　Fixed
01:07:133 (7) - use same direction as 01:06:514 (6) - 　what do you mean o.o ? No change for now
01:21:360 (4) - add finish?　It will not fit either

* why not use whistles in Kiai time? it'll fit a lot with this song i think　I will look into it later, even though I think I used some

really nice map, star
good luck GiNa~　Thank you for the star and mod <3
Sorda-chan's Mod

S o r d a wrote:

[overall]:
  1. Nothing wrong here.
[Hard]:
  1. 00:19:659 (2,3) - not stacked correctly　Fixed
  2. 00:36:205 (1) - change to finish like insane diff　Fixed
  3. 00:46:102 (1) - beginning finish　Fixed
  4. 00:55:999 - how about this? 　Fixed
[Normal]:
  1. nice~　Thanks >.<
nice map Gina chan
Fight~　Thank you, Sorda-chan <3
Arigato :D
Tenshi-nyan
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Tenshi-nyan
Modding this, OK.

General
Why don't you use a silenced slider slide? Would be better imo.

Insane
Nothing really to say except that the way you did the hitsounds in the Kiai.. I don't like it. At all. It should follow the beat, but you do your own little thing - not good. But because you mapped the vocals instead of the instruments... well, it's hard to correctly place claps in this mapping style.

There are some missing claps, though - here you go:

00:57:854 (5) -
01:00:174 (4) - the repeat
01:07:751 (5) -
01:10:844 (1) -

Hard
The hitsounds are slightly too loud in the quiet sections. Lower the volume of all sections up to 00:36:205 - especially the one at 00:16:411 - needs to be more quiet. 30% max!

00:05:277 (6) - add New combo here and
00:05:587 (1) - remove it from here

Besides that, nothing to say really. No major faults, but the mapping isn't very exciting either.

Normal
Same volume sugggestions as hard

01:05:896 (1,2) - don't like the position of those. Flip them horizontally and adjust the spacing?
01:08:370 (1,2,3) - would be better if you unstack them

Nice normal.
GiNa
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Topic Starter
GiNa

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Modding this, OK.

General
Why don't you use a silenced slider slide? Would be better imo.　I will, so don't worry, but probably next week

Hard
The hitsounds are slightly too loud in the quiet sections. Lower the volume of all sections up to 00:36:205 - especially the one at 00:16:411 - needs to be more quiet. 30% max!　I think that's too low, so lower from 50% to 40%

00:05:277 (6) - add New combo here and　Fixed
00:05:587 (1) - remove it from here　Fixed

Besides that, nothing to say really. No major faults, but the mapping isn't very exciting either.　I know ;_;

Normal
Same volume sugggestions as hard　Done the same thing as Hard

01:05:896 (1,2) - don't like the position of those. Flip them horizontally and adjust the spacing?　No change, sorry
01:08:370 (1,2,3) - would be better if you unstack them　Fixed

Nice normal.　Thank you
SakiK
326 posts
Joined June 2010
SakiK
as request

[General]

this song Hiiro no Kakera 's opening (Hisui no Sshizuku is game)
change sorce "Hiiro no Kakera"
[Normal]

00:31:566 (2) - move x:264 y:229 and
00:31:875 (3) - x:345 y:207
00:48:267 (1) - suggestion
SPOILER
01:16:411 (1) - should Close to the center、IMO
01:25:999 (1) - end at 01:28:473 ?

[Hard]

00:29:710 (6) - NC?
00:38:989 (1) - RmNC and NC 00:39:917 (2) - here
00:43:628 (1) - ^ and NC 00:44:556 (3) - here
00:48:576 (4) - NC
01:03:421 (1) - move x:348 y:256
GiNa
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Topic Starter
GiNa

SakiK wrote:

as request

[General]

this song Hiiro no Kakera 's opening (Hisui no Sshizuku is game)
change sorce "Hiiro no Kakera"　Fixed
[Normal]

00:31:566 (2) - move x:264 y:229 and　Fixed
00:31:875 (3) - x:345 y:207　Fixed
00:48:267 (1) - suggestion　Fixed, I added another note though
01:16:411 (1) - should Close to the center、IMO　Fixed
01:25:999 (1) - end at 01:28:473 ?　?_?

[Hard]

00:29:710 (6) - NC?　Fixed
00:38:989 (1) - RmNC and NC 00:39:917 (2) - here　Nope, but thanks for your suggestion
00:43:628 (1) - ^ and NC 00:44:556 (3) - here　^
00:48:576 (4) - NC　Fixed
01:03:421 (1) - move x:348 y:256　Fixed
Arigato :D
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Overall
Remove 1st red section, add red section at 00:01:566
Remove 00:53:524 after doing the thing above. This is because the entire song is in 4/4, and you started the 1st timing section on the pick-up to the 1st measure.

Insane:
k

Hard:
01:02:494 (5) - Make this into just two notes?

Normal:
01:16:411 (1) - Boring pattern! D:

swaq
GiNa
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Topic Starter
GiNa

CDFA wrote:

NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE　... :o

Overall
Remove 1st red section, add red section at 00:01:566
Remove 00:53:524 after doing the thing above. This is because the entire song is in 4/4, and you started the 1st timing section on the pick-up to the 1st measure.　I think the timing is fine, there are some maps doing the same thing. Perhaps, that's what I've done before, but after a long decision, the timing right now is what I came out with.

Hard:
01:02:494 (5) - Make this into just two notes?　Okay

Normal:
01:16:411 (1) - Boring pattern! D:　mmm ... no change, I don't want to make this Normal to be too hard

swaq
Thanks for your star and mod :3
winber1
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Joined February 2010
winber1
TuInsane

00:18:267 (2) - Feels a lot more fitting with the music if this note was on the blue tick at 00:18:112 - . Obviuosly if you change this, you will also need to change the spacing a bit too
00:45:793 (4) - I would add a new combo here and remove the new combo at 00:46:102 (1) -
00:54:607 - adding a note here would flow better.
01:01:411 - ^ Fits better imo.
01:04:504 - ^

Hard

00:01:257 (2,4,6) - the sliderslide hitsounds on these sliders are kinda loud. Perhaps you could change the hitsounds (adding an empty sliderslide or something)
00:08:370 (1) - http://puu.sh/wNIH (Removed 00:08:370 (1) - and added a note at 00:08:679)
00:20:432 (5) - end slider on 00:20:587 - Also, i think it's better if you unstacked it
00:53:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - ehh... idk if i agree with this pattern very much Combos 3 and 4 just seem to have spacing that doesn't fit. I guess if you really like the pattern you can keep it, but I'd rather do something else. I mean you could make a square or something http://puu.sh/wNLx and http://puu.sh/wNLL
01:12:700 (4) - make this symmetrical to 01:10:535 (1) -

Normal

looks fine actually. though some small aesthetic issues that i could have pointed out, but those were just my personal opinions and didn't really feel i needed to tell you

small things. sorry for late mod
GiNa
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Topic Starter
GiNa

winber1 wrote:

Hard

00:01:257 (2,4,6) - the sliderslide hitsounds on these sliders are kinda loud. Perhaps you could change the hitsounds (adding an empty sliderslide or something)　Fixed
00:08:370 (1) - http://puu.sh/wNIH (Removed 00:08:370 (1) - and added a note at 00:08:679)　Fixed
00:20:432 (5) - end slider on 00:20:587 - Also, i think it's better if you unstacked it　Fixed
00:53:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - ehh... idk if i agree with this pattern very much Combos 3 and 4 just seem to have spacing that doesn't fit. I guess if you really like the pattern you can keep it, but I'd rather do something else. I mean you could make a square or something http://puu.sh/wNLx and http://puu.sh/wNLL　Fixed
01:12:700 (4) - make this symmetrical to 01:10:535 (1) - 　Fixed

Normal

looks fine actually. though some small aesthetic issues that i could have pointed out, but those were just my personal opinions and didn't really feel i needed to tell you　well ... I made some sliders silence :3

small things. sorry for late mod　It's okay, and thank you
Cygnus
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Cygnus
  • General
  1. Seems clean. :3

  • Normal
  2. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937.

  3. 00:43:009 (5) - Put a new combo here then remove new combo on the next note to avoid getting (1)-combo.

  4. 00:52:906 (1) - Remove new combo here.

  5. 01:18:885 (1) - Same as above.

  • Hard
  1. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937.

  2. The rest seems fine.

  • Insane
  1. OD and Approach Rate +1
GiNa
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Topic Starter
GiNa

Philippines wrote:

  • Normal
  2. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937.　Fixed

  3. 00:43:009 (5) - Put a new combo here then remove new combo on the next note to avoid getting (1)-combo.　Fixed

  4. 00:52:906 (1) - Remove new combo here.　Sorry, I followed lyrics, so no change

  5. 01:18:885 (1) - Same as above.　Fixed

  • Hard
  1. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937.　Fixed

  2. The rest seems fine.
Thank you :D
kazumikos
393 posts
Joined February 2010
kazumikos
Hiya~ Shulin sent me here

[General]
SPOILER
  1. Timing seems fine to me but offset is wrong, set it 1,566 (this is when the 1st beat starts)
  2. delete offset at 53,525, this map only need 1 offset
fyi time sections cant be placed before offset, so delete them (in Hard and Normal diff), set offset above with S:C1
[TuInsane]
SPOILER
not much to point out lol, just some suggestions about hitsound
  1. 00:12:397 (5) - whistle?
  2. 00:53:222 (2) - finish
  3. 00:54:607 (x) - add note?
  4. 01:03:421 (1) - it would be nice if this finish was the default one
  5. 01:04:504 (x) - add note? or make slider?
  6. 01:23:215 (5) - use default finish?
also, imo, combos are quite long and.. not right.. o_o , for example nc can be put at 00:06:211 (8) - and 00:07:448 (3) - while remove nc at 00:06:521 (1) - and so on.. u might wanna check it
[Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:05:277 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:06:205 (4) - and 00:07:442 (7) - ?
  2. 00:11:463 (6) - use default finish for this one?
  3. 00:28:783 (5) - nc remove nc at 00:29:710 (1) -
  4. 00:53:216 (2) - remove whistle, add clap? it sounds better imo
  5. 01:03:112 (8) - clap at the start?
[Normal]
SPOILER
I just suggest u to reduce whistle in this diff. They are too much +_+ sound a bit messy imo

and.. that's it
good map and good luck ^^
GiNa
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Topic Starter
GiNa

kazumikos wrote:

Hiya~ Shulin sent me here

[General]
SPOILER
  1. Timing seems fine to me but offset is wrong, set it 1,566 (this is when the 1st beat starts)
  2. delete offset at 53,525, this map only need 1 offset　Well ... that's what I've done before. Anyways, changed both of them
fyi time sections cant be placed before offset, so delete them (in Hard and Normal diff), set offset above with S:C1　I know, it will give an error if I do so
[Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:05:277 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:06:205 (4) - and 00:07:442 (7) - ?　No
  2. 00:11:463 (6) - use default finish for this one?　Fixed
  3. 00:28:783 (5) - nc remove nc at 00:29:710 (1) - 　No
  4. 00:53:216 (2) - remove whistle, add clap? it sounds better imo　Okay
  5. 01:03:112 (8) - clap at the start?　No
[Normal]
SPOILER
I just suggest u to reduce whistle in this diff. They are too much +_+ sound a bit messy imo　I think it's okay, so no change

and.. that's it
good map and good luck ^^　Thanks
haha5957
1,433 posts
Joined July 2010
haha5957
Hi, this is modding from Dark Fang's queue

[General]
Offset 1566 => 1572 i suggest

Usually, my pattern suggestions are either related to shape, or feeling of the pattern unless I tell the specific reason.
Unless i call it unrankable, it's ignorable but I'm preety sure the suggestions can make the map better O.O/

[Normal]
00:34:349 (2) - previous notes have already gone through these spots.. maybe place somewhere else like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326679
00:38:679 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern doesnt look good O.O/
00:39:916 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't know how should i explain, but if you see it, It feels like patterns are "closed into" certain area.. idk how should i explain it,
for example, moving 00:41:153 (1,2) - this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326685) way makes me feel better
01:05:895 (1) - do you see how this overlaps with previous (2)? I don't this think this is good O.O/


[hard]
I think new combos are little bit long for the slow song. not a big problem; just sayin O.O/
01:22:287 (2,3) - I would say this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326692

[Insane]
00:03:267 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326696 this probably O.O
01:12:706 (6,7,8,9,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326697 this probably



good luck~
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
hi from our mod Q ^.^

INSANE

00:00:947 - nah >< this slider not sound here better delete it
00:33:576 - put this note on red tick
00:47:957 - prolong this slider to 00:48:421
00:54:607 - add note
00:58:318 - make this slider shorter and start on big white tick
01:00:792 - add note
01:04:504 - ^
01:08:215 - make this slider shorter and start on big white tick
01:25:689 - here better use volume 40% normal sound + finish

HARD

00:15:174 - finish better here a spinner
00:39:297(1,2,3) - unstack this notes
00:50:431(3,5) - stack better
01:25:844 - nah remove this spinner bcz final note here 01:25:689 . not think that something needs to be added after

NORMAL

00:15:174 - finish better here a spinner >.<
00:28:782 - make this slider so http://puu.sh/xhOO more roundish and symmetric ;)
00:31:566 - i think this better and easier for play http://puu.sh/xhPM
00:38:692(1,2,3,4) - it's it is difficult for game in this diff ;w; trade places 2 and 4 notes
00:44:864 - remove 1 repeat and add note on 00:45:483 (3 repeats it's difficult, beginners can get confused)
01:12:700 - replace on 1 note
01:16:411 - better replace on 2 sliders (same on 00:44:864)

what's all for me) good luck~~ :oops:
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
[Normal]
00:46:720 - add note here
01:23:834 (1,2,3) - try this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329011

[Hard]
00:41:153 (1,2,3,4) - imperfect square
01:02:339 (4,5,6,7) - move to x:154 y:84

[TuInsane]
01:04:349 (3) - make a 1/4 slider here?
01:06:823 (3) - ^ same
01:23:292 (1) - add finish
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa
haha5957's Mod

haha5957 wrote:

Hi, this is modding from Dark Fang's queue

[General]
Offset 1566 => 1572 i suggest　No change, keep mines for now

Usually, my pattern suggestions are either related to shape, or feeling of the pattern unless I tell the specific reason.
Unless i call it unrankable, it's ignorable but I'm preety sure the suggestions can make the map better O.O/

[Normal]
00:34:349 (2) - previous notes have already gone through these spots.. maybe place somewhere else like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326679　Fixed
00:38:679 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern doesnt look good O.O/　Fixed
00:39:916 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't know how should i explain, but if you see it, It feels like patterns are "closed into" certain area.. idk how should i explain it,
for example, moving 00:41:153 (1,2) - this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326685) way makes me feel better 　Fixed
01:05:895 (1) - do you see how this overlaps with previous (2)? I don't this think this is good O.O/　Fixed

[hard]
I think new combos are little bit long for the slow song. not a big problem; just sayin O.O/　I try not to make them get over 10.
01:22:287 (2,3) - I would say this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326692　Fixed

good luck~
Katty Pie's Mod

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from our mod Q ^.^

HARD

00:15:174 - finish better here a spinner　I followed vocal
00:39:297(1,2,3) - unstack this notes　?_?
00:50:431(3,5) - stack better　Fixed
01:25:844 - nah remove this spinner bcz final note here 01:25:689 . not think that something needs to be added after　No change, I follow the sound

NORMAL

00:15:174 - finish better here a spinner >.<　I think the spinner will be too long and I follow the vocal
00:28:782 - make this slider so http://puu.sh/xhOO more roundish and symmetric ;) 　?_?
00:31:566 - i think this better and easier for play http://puu.sh/xhPM　?_? no change
00:38:692(1,2,3,4) - it's it is difficult for game in this diff ;w; trade places 2 and 4 notes　Fixed
00:44:864 - remove 1 repeat and add note on 00:45:483 (3 repeats it's difficult, beginners can get confused)　Fixed
01:12:700 - replace on 1 note　Fixed
01:16:411 - better replace on 2 sliders (same on 00:44:864)　Fixed

what's all for me) good luck~~ :oops:
Muya's Mod

Muya wrote:

[Normal]
00:46:720 - add note here　Fixed
01:23:834 (1,2,3) - try this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329011　Fixed

[Hard]
00:41:153 (1,2,3,4) - imperfect square　No change
01:02:339 (4,5,6,7) - move to x:154 y:84　Fixed
Fixed some hitsounds in 22's diff :3
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
hi there :)

Normal:

00:10:844 (4) - add finish on end?
01:20:741 (1) - remove whistle?

Hard:

00:06:514 (5) - add NC
00:46:102 (1) - add whistle on repeat?

TuInsane:

00:10:225 (5) - add whistle on start?
01:23:292 (1) - perhaps gradually fade out the volume like in other diffs?

nice map =w=
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
hi GiNa~
台灣人嗎? :>

[Hard]
01:21:978 (1,2) - 我覺得這兩個交換NC比較好 因為(2)要拉很久讓我slider break了 所以只要(2) NC 就好
01:25:071 - 恩 個人感覺這條綠線不需要. 40%聲音真的是剛剛好 沒有必要再更大聲 而且歌快聽完了, 所以鼓聲就不用變得大聲

[Normal]
00:52:906 (4) - 這個其實不用NC吧?
00:00:947 (1,2,3) - 我要抱怨的只有這個三連stack. 我的感覺是歌手唱得也只有一個字 "nee~" 把(1,2)合成一個slider更好. 節奏也不用疊得這麼模糊
00:23:215 (2,3) - ^這裡只是因為疊得太多會感覺有點模糊

Insane 我找不到東西 :<
圖很好~
沒有甚麼話好說~
Darksonic
Global Moderator
2,794 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Hello, mod from my queue.

Normal:

00:52:287 (3): Add Finish?

Hard:

00:06:514 (5): NC.
00:40:535 (3): Move it under the previous note to make it looks better. I suggest x:160 y:244.
00:52:287 (7): Same as Normal.
01:25:689 (1): This NC is unnecesary imo, remove it?

TuInsane:

00:18:885 (1): Remove NC.
00:19:349 (2): NC.
00:38:060 (3): If you use the same slider that you used on (1) this will look better, like this.
00:50:277 (2): Move it some grids up, in this case it looks bad for me if the previous slider touches it.
00:52:287 (1): Same as Normal/Hard.

That's all for me. Good luck~ :D
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa
pieguy's Mod

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there :)

Normal:

00:10:844 (4) - add finish on end?　Nope
01:20:741 (1) - remove whistle?　^

Hard:

00:06:514 (5) - add NC　Fixed
00:46:102 (1) - add whistle on repeat?　Fixed

TuInsane:

00:10:225 (5) - add whistle on start?　Fixed
nice map =w=
hoLysoup's Mod

hoLysoup wrote:

hi GiNa~
台灣人嗎? :>　嗯，台灣人 :)

[Hard]
01:21:978 (1,2) - 我覺得這兩個交換NC比較好 因為(2)要拉很久讓我slider break了 所以只要(2) NC 就好　Fixed
01:25:071 - 恩 個人感覺這條綠線不需要. 40%聲音真的是剛剛好 沒有必要再更大聲 而且歌快聽完了, 所以鼓聲就不用變得大聲　Fixed

[Normal]
00:52:906 (4) - 這個其實不用NC吧?　其實是跟著歌詞的，不過一堆人都叫我不要NC，我拿掉好了;w;
00:00:947 (1,2,3) - 我要抱怨的只有這個三連stack. 我的感覺是歌手唱得也只有一個字 "nee~" 把(1,2)合成一個slider更好. 節奏也不用疊得這麼模糊　Fixed
00:23:215 (2,3) - ^這裡只是因為疊得太多會感覺有點模糊　Fixed

Insane 我找不到東西 :<
圖很好~
沒有甚麼話好說~
Darksonic's Mod

Darksonic wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue.

Normal:

00:52:287 (3): Add Finish?　Fixed

Hard:

00:06:514 (5): NC.　Already NC
00:40:535 (3): Move it under the previous note to make it looks better. I suggest x:160 y:244.　Fixed
00:52:287 (7): Same as Normal.　Fixed
01:25:689 (1): This NC is unnecesary imo, remove it?　Fixed

TuInsane:

00:18:885 (1): Remove NC.　Fixed
00:19:349 (2): NC.　Fixed
00:52:287 (1): Same as Normal/Hard.　Fixed

That's all for me. Good luck~ :D
Thanks everyone :3
I only mentioned the ones I changed in 22's diff
@hoLysoup: Thank you for the star !
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Nice, nothing to say.
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

Mok wrote:

Nice, nothing to say.
Thank you for your star >_< !
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
嗨

General
- delete osb file if you feel like it xD
- Nice!! Beautiful video <3

Normal
00:00:947 (1) - NC? i have no idea lol, some maps have it and some don't
00:06:514 (2) - NC here instead of (1)
00:49:194 (2) - Curve upwards, feels better to play imo

Hard
00:30:947 (4) - Stack this at the end of (3), sounds like a nice transition with the song maybe :oops:
01:02:339 (4,5,6) - Claps on these, fits bg music

TuInsane
00:47:803 (2) - make the same distance between (1,3) because it's in the same combo http://puu.sh/yaOW
01:02:339 (5,6,7) - Claps on these to match bg music

Nice!! Good luck <3
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

LunarSakuya wrote:

嗨　妳好:3

General
- delete osb file if you feel like it xD　Maybe I will keep it for now
- Nice!! Beautiful video <3　I know right <3

Normal
00:00:947 (1) - NC? i have no idea lol, some maps have it and some don't　Nope, I try to avoid only 1 NC
00:06:514 (2) - NC here instead of (1)　Fixed
00:49:194 (2) - Curve upwards, feels better to play imo　Never thought of that, added and thank you !

Hard
00:30:947 (4) - Stack this at the end of (3), sounds like a nice transition with the song maybe :oops: 　Fixed
01:02:339 (4,5,6) - Claps on these, fits bg music　Sure !

TuInsane
00:47:803 (2) - make the same distance between (1,3) because it's in the same combo http://puu.sh/yaOW　Same opinion ad yours, fixed
01:02:339 (5,6,7) - Claps on these to match bg music　Done xD

Nice!! Good luck <3　Thank you for your mod and 2 stars, Lunar >_< !
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
TuInsane
00:06:205 (8) - new combo instead of
00:08:060 (5) - i'm not saying that its ugly, Its just oddly shaped D:
00:17:648 (1) - move here to improve flow?

and adjust the rest of the combo.
00:22:596 (1) - move closer to (5) for better flow?
00:30:483 (2) - same as previous "elbow" slider

Hard
01:25:689 (6) - new combo

Normal
00:23:215 (2,3,1) - not sure if this is okay for the easiest diff

Overall
Good map
Mara
4,906 posts
Joined November 2009
Mara
I say, you don't need ending spinners on Hard and Normal. It sounds better without them and then maps will end at the same time as Insane (01:25:689)
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