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Fujita Maiko - Nee (TV Size)

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GiNa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月26日 at 上午 10:10:51

Artist: Fujita Maiko
Title: Nee (TV Size)
Source: Hiiro no Kakera
Tags: opening Hisui no Shizuku tutuhaha LunarSakuya
BPM: 97
Filesize: 15250kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.41 stars, 162 notes)
  2. Normal (3.1 stars, 106 notes)
  3. Sakuya's Easy (1.16 stars, 67 notes)
  4. TuInsane (5 stars, 248 notes)
Download: Fujita Maiko - Nee (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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OP of 緋色の欠片 - ねぇ

Done
[Sakuya's Easy] 100% by LunarSakuya
[Normal] 100%
[Hard] 100%
[TuInsane] 100% by tutuhaha
tutuhaha
22来了!
spboxer3
好. 我來了...

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. Tag不同 在22的diff少了tutuhaha的tag.
  2. Kiai建議一致 既然妳Normal和Insane的難度都設在同樣的kiai 我認為你應該設置一致 畢竟Normal也是你做的
  3. offset改成負值 object跑到offset前面了...

Normal



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:36:206 (1,2) -
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:52:907 (1) - 這個NC其實是多餘的 沒有必要在這邊加個NC對吧 既不是段落也不是combo太長了

Hard



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:00:949 (1) - 1ms的 unsnap... 不過說實話 這個AImod並沒有說出來...
  2. 00:03:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這是一整套的排列 但是感覺出現時機怪怪的... 因為在小節中間出現 而結尾也到下一個小節了... (00:02:804 - ,00:04:041 -,00:05:278 - 小節開始處)
  3. 00:35:587 (5) - [suggest]不如把這個move到00:35:432 - 然後在00:35:896 - 加個note 這樣排起來節奏比較不會那麼死板
  4. 00:48:577 (4,5,6,7) - 額...這個不能說不好 但是用slider reverse 作出3連拍 放在1/2開始感覺就是很彆扭...

Insane


  • 真少看到你用CS 5來做圖._.

    Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 多餘的綠線:
    00:16:412
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:14:556 (5,6,1) - [suggest]讓這個作出等間距? 讓5的結尾與6,1都呈現等間距吧. 現在1靠5的結尾太近了些
  2. 01:22:597 (1,2,3,4,5) - 是否是蓄意的. 我看到這個間距有慢慢減小的感覺...如果不是 那就排好些吧

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

加油吧~
Topic Starter
GiNa
M-sp3's Mod

spboxer3 wrote:

好. 我來了...

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. Tag不同 在22的diff少了tutuhaha的tag. Fixed
  2. Kiai建議一致 既然妳Normal和Insane的難度都設在同樣的kiai 我認為你應該設置一致 畢竟Normal也是你做的  大哥你根本就說錯了,kiai有問題的是Hard啊,我還看了五分鐘受不了才用AIBat去check
  3. offset改成負值 object跑到offset前面了... Fixed
[notice]

Normal



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:36:206 (1,2) -  Fixed
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:52:907 (1) - 這個NC其實是多餘的 沒有必要在這邊加個NC對吧 既不是段落也不是combo太長了 I followed lyrics, so no changed

Hard

[list:6c7cf]

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
    1. 00:00:949 (1) - 1ms的 unsnap... 不過說實話 這個AImod並沒有說出來... Fixed
    2. 00:03:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這是一整套的排列 但是感覺出現時機怪怪的... 因為在小節中間出現 而結尾也到下一個小節了... (00:02:804 - ,00:04:041 -,00:05:278 - 小節開始處)  我看不懂你在說什麼,不過我還是fix了些東西
    3. 00:35:587 (5) - [suggest]不如把這個move到00:35:432 - 然後在00:35:896 - 加個note 這樣排起來節奏比較不會那麼死板 Fixed
    4. 00:48:577 (4,5,6,7) - 額...這個不能說不好 但是用slider reverse 作出3連拍 放在1/2開始感覺就是很彆扭... Fixed
加油吧~ Okay
Melophobia
As requested
[General]
i'd suggest you to mute sliderslide, it really sounds noisy

[Normal]
00:11:463 (1) - mute this spinner please (at least the end of this
00:42:391 (1) - remove newcombo
00:47:958 (3) - add whistle?
01:20:741 (1) - add finish at the end?

[Hard]
00:11:618 (1) - same as Normal
00:13:628 - add break time
00:35:277 (4) - add a repeat to this slider
00:47:958 (3) - 2 whistles are too much imo. remove it from end please
01:07:133 (7) - use same direction as 01:06:514 (6) -
01:21:360 (4) - add finish?

* why not use whistles in Kiai time? it'll fit a lot with this song i think

[TuInsane]
* shouldnt it be "tuInsane"?
00:02:803 (4) - add whistle at the beginning
00:05:277 (6) - ^
00:05:896 (7) - ^
01:21:360 (3) - add finish?
01:23:215 (5) - default finish is better imo

really nice map, star
good luck GiNa~
S o r d a
[overall]:
  1. Nothing wrong here.
[TuInsane]:
  1. 00:15:174 (1) - beginning whistle
  2. 00:34:350 (2) - ^
[Hard]:
  1. 00:19:659 (2,3) - not stacked correctly
  2. 00:36:205 (1) - change to finish like insane diff
  3. 00:46:102 (1) - beginning finish
  4. 00:55:999 - how about this?
[Normal]:
  1. nice~
nice map Gina chan
Fight~
Topic Starter
GiNa
Melophobia's Mod

Melophobia wrote:

As requested
[General]
i'd suggest you to mute sliderslide, it really sounds noisy Okay, I will, after my tests though

[Normal]
00:11:463 (1) - mute this spinner please (at least the end of this Fixed
00:42:391 (1) - remove newcombo Fixed
00:47:958 (3) - add whistle? Fixed
01:20:741 (1) - add finish at the end? if you take off clap, you will see the finish doesn't fit

[Hard]
00:11:618 (1) - same as Normal Fixed
00:13:628 - add break time Fixed
00:35:277 (4) - add a repeat to this slider Fixed
00:47:958 (3) - 2 whistles are too much imo. remove it from end please Fixed
01:07:133 (7) - use same direction as 01:06:514 (6) -  what do you mean o.o ? No change for now
01:21:360 (4) - add finish? It will not fit either

* why not use whistles in Kiai time? it'll fit a lot with this song i think I will look into it later, even though I think I used some

really nice map, star
good luck GiNa~ Thank you for the star and mod <3
Sorda-chan's Mod

S o r d a wrote:

[overall]:
  1. Nothing wrong here.
[Hard]:
  1. 00:19:659 (2,3) - not stacked correctly Fixed
  2. 00:36:205 (1) - change to finish like insane diff Fixed
  3. 00:46:102 (1) - beginning finish Fixed
  4. 00:55:999 - how about this?  Fixed
[Normal]:
  1. nice~ Thanks >.<
nice map Gina chan
Fight~ Thank you, Sorda-chan <3
Arigato :D
Tenshi-nyan
Modding this, OK.

General
Why don't you use a silenced slider slide? Would be better imo.

Insane
Nothing really to say except that the way you did the hitsounds in the Kiai.. I don't like it. At all. It should follow the beat, but you do your own little thing - not good. But because you mapped the vocals instead of the instruments... well, it's hard to correctly place claps in this mapping style.

There are some missing claps, though - here you go:

00:57:854 (5) -
01:00:174 (4) - the repeat
01:07:751 (5) -
01:10:844 (1) -

Hard
The hitsounds are slightly too loud in the quiet sections. Lower the volume of all sections up to 00:36:205 - especially the one at 00:16:411 - needs to be more quiet. 30% max!

00:05:277 (6) - add New combo here and
00:05:587 (1) - remove it from here

Besides that, nothing to say really. No major faults, but the mapping isn't very exciting either.

Normal
Same volume sugggestions as hard

01:05:896 (1,2) - don't like the position of those. Flip them horizontally and adjust the spacing?
01:08:370 (1,2,3) - would be better if you unstack them

Nice normal.
Topic Starter
GiNa

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Modding this, OK.

General
Why don't you use a silenced slider slide? Would be better imo. I will, so don't worry, but probably next week

Hard
The hitsounds are slightly too loud in the quiet sections. Lower the volume of all sections up to 00:36:205 - especially the one at 00:16:411 - needs to be more quiet. 30% max! I think that's too low, so lower from 50% to 40%

00:05:277 (6) - add New combo here and Fixed
00:05:587 (1) - remove it from here Fixed

Besides that, nothing to say really. No major faults, but the mapping isn't very exciting either. I know ;_;

Normal
Same volume sugggestions as hard Done the same thing as Hard

01:05:896 (1,2) - don't like the position of those. Flip them horizontally and adjust the spacing? No change, sorry
01:08:370 (1,2,3) - would be better if you unstack them Fixed

Nice normal. Thank you
SakiK
as request

[General]

this song Hiiro no Kakera 's opening (Hisui no Sshizuku is game)
change sorce "Hiiro no Kakera"
[Normal]

00:31:566 (2) - move x:264 y:229 and
00:31:875 (3) - x:345 y:207
00:48:267 (1) - suggestion01:16:411 (1) - should Close to the center、IMO
01:25:999 (1) - end at 01:28:473 ?

[Hard]

00:29:710 (6) - NC?
00:38:989 (1) - RmNC and NC 00:39:917 (2) - here
00:43:628 (1) - ^ and NC 00:44:556 (3) - here
00:48:576 (4) - NC
01:03:421 (1) - move x:348 y:256
Topic Starter
GiNa

SakiK wrote:

as request

[General]

this song Hiiro no Kakera 's opening (Hisui no Sshizuku is game)
change sorce "Hiiro no Kakera" Fixed
[Normal]

00:31:566 (2) - move x:264 y:229 and Fixed
00:31:875 (3) - x:345 y:207 Fixed
00:48:267 (1) - suggestion Fixed, I added another note though
01:16:411 (1) - should Close to the center、IMO Fixed
01:25:999 (1) - end at 01:28:473 ? ?_?

[Hard]

00:29:710 (6) - NC? Fixed
00:38:989 (1) - RmNC and NC 00:39:917 (2) - here Nope, but thanks for your suggestion
00:43:628 (1) - ^ and NC 00:44:556 (3) - here ^
00:48:576 (4) - NC Fixed
01:03:421 (1) - move x:348 y:256 Fixed
Arigato :D
Shohei Ohtani
NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Overall
Remove 1st red section, add red section at 00:01:566
Remove 00:53:524 after doing the thing above. This is because the entire song is in 4/4, and you started the 1st timing section on the pick-up to the 1st measure.

Insane:
k

Hard:
01:02:494 (5) - Make this into just two notes?

Normal:
01:16:411 (1) - Boring pattern! D:

swaq
Topic Starter
GiNa

CDFA wrote:

NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ... :o

Overall
Remove 1st red section, add red section at 00:01:566
Remove 00:53:524 after doing the thing above. This is because the entire song is in 4/4, and you started the 1st timing section on the pick-up to the 1st measure. I think the timing is fine, there are some maps doing the same thing. Perhaps, that's what I've done before, but after a long decision, the timing right now is what I came out with.

Hard:
01:02:494 (5) - Make this into just two notes? Okay

Normal:
01:16:411 (1) - Boring pattern! D: mmm ... no change, I don't want to make this Normal to be too hard

swaq
Thanks for your star and mod :3
winber1
TuInsane

00:18:267 (2) - Feels a lot more fitting with the music if this note was on the blue tick at 00:18:112 - . Obviuosly if you change this, you will also need to change the spacing a bit too
00:45:793 (4) - I would add a new combo here and remove the new combo at 00:46:102 (1) -
00:54:607 - adding a note here would flow better.
01:01:411 - ^ Fits better imo.
01:04:504 - ^

Hard

00:01:257 (2,4,6) - the sliderslide hitsounds on these sliders are kinda loud. Perhaps you could change the hitsounds (adding an empty sliderslide or something)
00:08:370 (1) - http://puu.sh/wNIH (Removed 00:08:370 (1) - and added a note at 00:08:679)
00:20:432 (5) - end slider on 00:20:587 - Also, i think it's better if you unstacked it
00:53:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - ehh... idk if i agree with this pattern very much Combos 3 and 4 just seem to have spacing that doesn't fit. I guess if you really like the pattern you can keep it, but I'd rather do something else. I mean you could make a square or something http://puu.sh/wNLx and http://puu.sh/wNLL
01:12:700 (4) - make this symmetrical to 01:10:535 (1) -

Normal

looks fine actually. though some small aesthetic issues that i could have pointed out, but those were just my personal opinions and didn't really feel i needed to tell you

small things. sorry for late mod
Topic Starter
GiNa

winber1 wrote:

Hard

00:01:257 (2,4,6) - the sliderslide hitsounds on these sliders are kinda loud. Perhaps you could change the hitsounds (adding an empty sliderslide or something) Fixed
00:08:370 (1) - http://puu.sh/wNIH (Removed 00:08:370 (1) - and added a note at 00:08:679) Fixed
00:20:432 (5) - end slider on 00:20:587 - Also, i think it's better if you unstacked it Fixed
00:53:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - ehh... idk if i agree with this pattern very much Combos 3 and 4 just seem to have spacing that doesn't fit. I guess if you really like the pattern you can keep it, but I'd rather do something else. I mean you could make a square or something http://puu.sh/wNLx and http://puu.sh/wNLL Fixed
01:12:700 (4) - make this symmetrical to 01:10:535 (1) -  Fixed

Normal

looks fine actually. though some small aesthetic issues that i could have pointed out, but those were just my personal opinions and didn't really feel i needed to tell you well ... I made some sliders silence :3

small things. sorry for late mod It's okay, and thank you
Cygnus
  • General
  1. Seems clean. :3

  • Normal
  1. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937.

  2. 00:43:009 (5) - Put a new combo here then remove new combo on the next note to avoid getting (1)-combo.

  3. 00:52:906 (1) - Remove new combo here.

  4. 01:18:885 (1) - Same as above.

  • Hard
  1. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937.

  2. The rest seems fine.

  • Insane
  1. OD and Approach Rate +1
Topic Starter
GiNa

Philippines wrote:

  • Normal
  1. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937. Fixed

  2. 00:43:009 (5) - Put a new combo here then remove new combo on the next note to avoid getting (1)-combo. Fixed

  3. 00:52:906 (1) - Remove new combo here. Sorry, I followed lyrics, so no change

  4. 01:18:885 (1) - Same as above. Fixed

  • Hard
  1. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937. Fixed

  2. The rest seems fine.
Thank you :D
kazumikos
Hiya~ Shulin sent me here

[General]
SPOILER
  1. Timing seems fine to me but offset is wrong, set it 1,566 (this is when the 1st beat starts)
  2. delete offset at 53,525, this map only need 1 offset
fyi time sections cant be placed before offset, so delete them (in Hard and Normal diff), set offset above with S:C1
[TuInsane]
SPOILER
not much to point out lol, just some suggestions about hitsound
  1. 00:12:397 (5) - whistle?
  2. 00:53:222 (2) - finish
  3. 00:54:607 (x) - add note?
  4. 01:03:421 (1) - it would be nice if this finish was the default one
  5. 01:04:504 (x) - add note? or make slider?
  6. 01:23:215 (5) - use default finish?
also, imo, combos are quite long and.. not right.. o_o , for example nc can be put at 00:06:211 (8) - and 00:07:448 (3) - while remove nc at 00:06:521 (1) - and so on.. u might wanna check it
[Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:05:277 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:06:205 (4) - and 00:07:442 (7) - ?
  2. 00:11:463 (6) - use default finish for this one?
  3. 00:28:783 (5) - nc remove nc at 00:29:710 (1) -
  4. 00:53:216 (2) - remove whistle, add clap? it sounds better imo
  5. 01:03:112 (8) - clap at the start?
[Normal]
SPOILER
I just suggest u to reduce whistle in this diff. They are too much +_+ sound a bit messy imo

and.. that's it
good map and good luck ^^
Topic Starter
GiNa

kazumikos wrote:

Hiya~ Shulin sent me here

[General]
SPOILER
  1. Timing seems fine to me but offset is wrong, set it 1,566 (this is when the 1st beat starts)
  2. delete offset at 53,525, this map only need 1 offset Well ... that's what I've done before. Anyways, changed both of them
fyi time sections cant be placed before offset, so delete them (in Hard and Normal diff), set offset above with S:C1 I know, it will give an error if I do so
[Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:05:277 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:06:205 (4) - and 00:07:442 (7) - ? No
  2. 00:11:463 (6) - use default finish for this one? Fixed
  3. 00:28:783 (5) - nc remove nc at 00:29:710 (1) -  No
  4. 00:53:216 (2) - remove whistle, add clap? it sounds better imo Okay
  5. 01:03:112 (8) - clap at the start? No
[Normal]
SPOILER
I just suggest u to reduce whistle in this diff. They are too much +_+ sound a bit messy imo I think it's okay, so no change

and.. that's it
good map and good luck ^^
 Thanks
haha5957
Hi, this is modding from Dark Fang's queue

[General]
Offset 1566 => 1572 i suggest

Usually, my pattern suggestions are either related to shape, or feeling of the pattern unless I tell the specific reason.
Unless i call it unrankable, it's ignorable but I'm preety sure the suggestions can make the map better O.O/

[Normal]
00:34:349 (2) - previous notes have already gone through these spots.. maybe place somewhere else like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326679
00:38:679 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern doesnt look good O.O/
00:39:916 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't know how should i explain, but if you see it, It feels like patterns are "closed into" certain area.. idk how should i explain it,
for example, moving 00:41:153 (1,2) - this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326685) way makes me feel better
01:05:895 (1) - do you see how this overlaps with previous (2)? I don't this think this is good O.O/


[hard]
I think new combos are little bit long for the slow song. not a big problem; just sayin O.O/
01:22:287 (2,3) - I would say this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326692

[Insane]
00:03:267 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326696 this probably O.O
01:12:706 (6,7,8,9,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326697 this probably



good luck~
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