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Fujita Maiko - Nee (TV Size)

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GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

SakiK wrote:

as request

[General]

this song Hiiro no Kakera 's opening (Hisui no Sshizuku is game)
change sorce "Hiiro no Kakera"　Fixed
[Normal]

00:31:566 (2) - move x:264 y:229 and　Fixed
00:31:875 (3) - x:345 y:207　Fixed
00:48:267 (1) - suggestion　Fixed, I added another note though
01:16:411 (1) - should Close to the center、IMO　Fixed
01:25:999 (1) - end at 01:28:473 ?　?_?

[Hard]

00:29:710 (6) - NC?　Fixed
00:38:989 (1) - RmNC and NC 00:39:917 (2) - here　Nope, but thanks for your suggestion
00:43:628 (1) - ^ and NC 00:44:556 (3) - here　^
00:48:576 (4) - NC　Fixed
01:03:421 (1) - move x:348 y:256　Fixed
Arigato :D
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Overall
Remove 1st red section, add red section at 00:01:566
Remove 00:53:524 after doing the thing above. This is because the entire song is in 4/4, and you started the 1st timing section on the pick-up to the 1st measure.

Insane:
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Hard:
01:02:494 (5) - Make this into just two notes?

Normal:
01:16:411 (1) - Boring pattern! D:

swaq
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

CDFA wrote:

NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE　... :o

Overall
Remove 1st red section, add red section at 00:01:566
Remove 00:53:524 after doing the thing above. This is because the entire song is in 4/4, and you started the 1st timing section on the pick-up to the 1st measure.　I think the timing is fine, there are some maps doing the same thing. Perhaps, that's what I've done before, but after a long decision, the timing right now is what I came out with.

Hard:
01:02:494 (5) - Make this into just two notes?　Okay

Normal:
01:16:411 (1) - Boring pattern! D:　mmm ... no change, I don't want to make this Normal to be too hard

swaq
Thanks for your star and mod :3
winber1
4,520 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
TuInsane

00:18:267 (2) - Feels a lot more fitting with the music if this note was on the blue tick at 00:18:112 - . Obviuosly if you change this, you will also need to change the spacing a bit too
00:45:793 (4) - I would add a new combo here and remove the new combo at 00:46:102 (1) -
00:54:607 - adding a note here would flow better.
01:01:411 - ^ Fits better imo.
01:04:504 - ^

Hard

00:01:257 (2,4,6) - the sliderslide hitsounds on these sliders are kinda loud. Perhaps you could change the hitsounds (adding an empty sliderslide or something)
00:08:370 (1) - http://puu.sh/wNIH (Removed 00:08:370 (1) - and added a note at 00:08:679)
00:20:432 (5) - end slider on 00:20:587 - Also, i think it's better if you unstacked it
00:53:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - ehh... idk if i agree with this pattern very much Combos 3 and 4 just seem to have spacing that doesn't fit. I guess if you really like the pattern you can keep it, but I'd rather do something else. I mean you could make a square or something http://puu.sh/wNLx and http://puu.sh/wNLL
01:12:700 (4) - make this symmetrical to 01:10:535 (1) -

Normal

looks fine actually. though some small aesthetic issues that i could have pointed out, but those were just my personal opinions and didn't really feel i needed to tell you

small things. sorry for late mod
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

winber1 wrote:

Hard

00:01:257 (2,4,6) - the sliderslide hitsounds on these sliders are kinda loud. Perhaps you could change the hitsounds (adding an empty sliderslide or something)　Fixed
00:08:370 (1) - http://puu.sh/wNIH (Removed 00:08:370 (1) - and added a note at 00:08:679)　Fixed
00:20:432 (5) - end slider on 00:20:587 - Also, i think it's better if you unstacked it　Fixed
00:53:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - ehh... idk if i agree with this pattern very much Combos 3 and 4 just seem to have spacing that doesn't fit. I guess if you really like the pattern you can keep it, but I'd rather do something else. I mean you could make a square or something http://puu.sh/wNLx and http://puu.sh/wNLL　Fixed
01:12:700 (4) - make this symmetrical to 01:10:535 (1) - 　Fixed

Normal

looks fine actually. though some small aesthetic issues that i could have pointed out, but those were just my personal opinions and didn't really feel i needed to tell you　well ... I made some sliders silence :3

small things. sorry for late mod　It's okay, and thank you
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
  • General
  1. Seems clean. :3

  • Normal
  2. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937.

  3. 00:43:009 (5) - Put a new combo here then remove new combo on the next note to avoid getting (1)-combo.

  4. 00:52:906 (1) - Remove new combo here.

  5. 01:18:885 (1) - Same as above.

  • Hard
  1. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937.

  2. The rest seems fine.

  • Insane
  1. OD and Approach Rate +1
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

Philippines wrote:

  • Normal
  2. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937.　Fixed

  3. 00:43:009 (5) - Put a new combo here then remove new combo on the next note to avoid getting (1)-combo.　Fixed

  4. 00:52:906 (1) - Remove new combo here.　Sorry, I followed lyrics, so no change

  5. 01:18:885 (1) - Same as above.　Fixed

  • Hard
  1. 00:11:618 (1) - Would be better if you end this spinner on 00:13:937.　Fixed

  2. The rest seems fine.
Thank you :D
kazumikos
393 posts
Joined February 2010
kazumikos
Hiya~ Shulin sent me here

[General]
SPOILER
  1. Timing seems fine to me but offset is wrong, set it 1,566 (this is when the 1st beat starts)
  2. delete offset at 53,525, this map only need 1 offset
fyi time sections cant be placed before offset, so delete them (in Hard and Normal diff), set offset above with S:C1
[TuInsane]
SPOILER
not much to point out lol, just some suggestions about hitsound
  1. 00:12:397 (5) - whistle?
  2. 00:53:222 (2) - finish
  3. 00:54:607 (x) - add note?
  4. 01:03:421 (1) - it would be nice if this finish was the default one
  5. 01:04:504 (x) - add note? or make slider?
  6. 01:23:215 (5) - use default finish?
also, imo, combos are quite long and.. not right.. o_o , for example nc can be put at 00:06:211 (8) - and 00:07:448 (3) - while remove nc at 00:06:521 (1) - and so on.. u might wanna check it
[Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:05:277 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:06:205 (4) - and 00:07:442 (7) - ?
  2. 00:11:463 (6) - use default finish for this one?
  3. 00:28:783 (5) - nc remove nc at 00:29:710 (1) -
  4. 00:53:216 (2) - remove whistle, add clap? it sounds better imo
  5. 01:03:112 (8) - clap at the start?
[Normal]
SPOILER
I just suggest u to reduce whistle in this diff. They are too much +_+ sound a bit messy imo

and.. that's it
good map and good luck ^^
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

kazumikos wrote:

Hiya~ Shulin sent me here

[General]
SPOILER
  1. Timing seems fine to me but offset is wrong, set it 1,566 (this is when the 1st beat starts)
  2. delete offset at 53,525, this map only need 1 offset　Well ... that's what I've done before. Anyways, changed both of them
fyi time sections cant be placed before offset, so delete them (in Hard and Normal diff), set offset above with S:C1　I know, it will give an error if I do so
[Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:05:277 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:06:205 (4) - and 00:07:442 (7) - ?　No
  2. 00:11:463 (6) - use default finish for this one?　Fixed
  3. 00:28:783 (5) - nc remove nc at 00:29:710 (1) - 　No
  4. 00:53:216 (2) - remove whistle, add clap? it sounds better imo　Okay
  5. 01:03:112 (8) - clap at the start?　No
[Normal]
SPOILER
I just suggest u to reduce whistle in this diff. They are too much +_+ sound a bit messy imo　I think it's okay, so no change

and.. that's it
good map and good luck ^^　Thanks
haha5957
1,433 posts
Joined July 2010
haha5957
Hi, this is modding from Dark Fang's queue

[General]
Offset 1566 => 1572 i suggest

Usually, my pattern suggestions are either related to shape, or feeling of the pattern unless I tell the specific reason.
Unless i call it unrankable, it's ignorable but I'm preety sure the suggestions can make the map better O.O/

[Normal]
00:34:349 (2) - previous notes have already gone through these spots.. maybe place somewhere else like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326679
00:38:679 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern doesnt look good O.O/
00:39:916 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't know how should i explain, but if you see it, It feels like patterns are "closed into" certain area.. idk how should i explain it,
for example, moving 00:41:153 (1,2) - this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326685) way makes me feel better
01:05:895 (1) - do you see how this overlaps with previous (2)? I don't this think this is good O.O/


[hard]
I think new combos are little bit long for the slow song. not a big problem; just sayin O.O/
01:22:287 (2,3) - I would say this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326692

[Insane]
00:03:267 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326696 this probably O.O
01:12:706 (6,7,8,9,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326697 this probably



good luck~
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
hi from our mod Q ^.^

INSANE

00:00:947 - nah >< this slider not sound here better delete it
00:33:576 - put this note on red tick
00:47:957 - prolong this slider to 00:48:421
00:54:607 - add note
00:58:318 - make this slider shorter and start on big white tick
01:00:792 - add note
01:04:504 - ^
01:08:215 - make this slider shorter and start on big white tick
01:25:689 - here better use volume 40% normal sound + finish

HARD

00:15:174 - finish better here a spinner
00:39:297(1,2,3) - unstack this notes
00:50:431(3,5) - stack better
01:25:844 - nah remove this spinner bcz final note here 01:25:689 . not think that something needs to be added after

NORMAL

00:15:174 - finish better here a spinner >.<
00:28:782 - make this slider so http://puu.sh/xhOO more roundish and symmetric ;)
00:31:566 - i think this better and easier for play http://puu.sh/xhPM
00:38:692(1,2,3,4) - it's it is difficult for game in this diff ;w; trade places 2 and 4 notes
00:44:864 - remove 1 repeat and add note on 00:45:483 (3 repeats it's difficult, beginners can get confused)
01:12:700 - replace on 1 note
01:16:411 - better replace on 2 sliders (same on 00:44:864)

what's all for me) good luck~~ :oops:
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
[Normal]
00:46:720 - add note here
01:23:834 (1,2,3) - try this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329011

[Hard]
00:41:153 (1,2,3,4) - imperfect square
01:02:339 (4,5,6,7) - move to x:154 y:84

[TuInsane]
01:04:349 (3) - make a 1/4 slider here?
01:06:823 (3) - ^ same
01:23:292 (1) - add finish
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa
haha5957's Mod

haha5957 wrote:

Hi, this is modding from Dark Fang's queue

[General]
Offset 1566 => 1572 i suggest　No change, keep mines for now

Usually, my pattern suggestions are either related to shape, or feeling of the pattern unless I tell the specific reason.
Unless i call it unrankable, it's ignorable but I'm preety sure the suggestions can make the map better O.O/

[Normal]
00:34:349 (2) - previous notes have already gone through these spots.. maybe place somewhere else like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326679　Fixed
00:38:679 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern doesnt look good O.O/　Fixed
00:39:916 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't know how should i explain, but if you see it, It feels like patterns are "closed into" certain area.. idk how should i explain it,
for example, moving 00:41:153 (1,2) - this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326685) way makes me feel better 　Fixed
01:05:895 (1) - do you see how this overlaps with previous (2)? I don't this think this is good O.O/　Fixed

[hard]
I think new combos are little bit long for the slow song. not a big problem; just sayin O.O/　I try not to make them get over 10.
01:22:287 (2,3) - I would say this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326692　Fixed

good luck~
Katty Pie's Mod

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from our mod Q ^.^

HARD

00:15:174 - finish better here a spinner　I followed vocal
00:39:297(1,2,3) - unstack this notes　?_?
00:50:431(3,5) - stack better　Fixed
01:25:844 - nah remove this spinner bcz final note here 01:25:689 . not think that something needs to be added after　No change, I follow the sound

NORMAL

00:15:174 - finish better here a spinner >.<　I think the spinner will be too long and I follow the vocal
00:28:782 - make this slider so http://puu.sh/xhOO more roundish and symmetric ;) 　?_?
00:31:566 - i think this better and easier for play http://puu.sh/xhPM　?_? no change
00:38:692(1,2,3,4) - it's it is difficult for game in this diff ;w; trade places 2 and 4 notes　Fixed
00:44:864 - remove 1 repeat and add note on 00:45:483 (3 repeats it's difficult, beginners can get confused)　Fixed
01:12:700 - replace on 1 note　Fixed
01:16:411 - better replace on 2 sliders (same on 00:44:864)　Fixed

what's all for me) good luck~~ :oops:
Muya's Mod

Muya wrote:

[Normal]
00:46:720 - add note here　Fixed
01:23:834 (1,2,3) - try this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329011　Fixed

[Hard]
00:41:153 (1,2,3,4) - imperfect square　No change
01:02:339 (4,5,6,7) - move to x:154 y:84　Fixed
Fixed some hitsounds in 22's diff :3
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
hi there :)

Normal:

00:10:844 (4) - add finish on end?
01:20:741 (1) - remove whistle?

Hard:

00:06:514 (5) - add NC
00:46:102 (1) - add whistle on repeat?

TuInsane:

00:10:225 (5) - add whistle on start?
01:23:292 (1) - perhaps gradually fade out the volume like in other diffs?

nice map =w=
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
hi GiNa~
台灣人嗎? :>

[Hard]
01:21:978 (1,2) - 我覺得這兩個交換NC比較好 因為(2)要拉很久讓我slider break了 所以只要(2) NC 就好
01:25:071 - 恩 個人感覺這條綠線不需要. 40%聲音真的是剛剛好 沒有必要再更大聲 而且歌快聽完了, 所以鼓聲就不用變得大聲

[Normal]
00:52:906 (4) - 這個其實不用NC吧?
00:00:947 (1,2,3) - 我要抱怨的只有這個三連stack. 我的感覺是歌手唱得也只有一個字 "nee~" 把(1,2)合成一個slider更好. 節奏也不用疊得這麼模糊
00:23:215 (2,3) - ^這裡只是因為疊得太多會感覺有點模糊

Insane 我找不到東西 :<
圖很好~
沒有甚麼話好說~
Darksonic
Global Moderator
2,794 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Hello, mod from my queue.

Normal:

00:52:287 (3): Add Finish?

Hard:

00:06:514 (5): NC.
00:40:535 (3): Move it under the previous note to make it looks better. I suggest x:160 y:244.
00:52:287 (7): Same as Normal.
01:25:689 (1): This NC is unnecesary imo, remove it?

TuInsane:

00:18:885 (1): Remove NC.
00:19:349 (2): NC.
00:38:060 (3): If you use the same slider that you used on (1) this will look better, like this.
00:50:277 (2): Move it some grids up, in this case it looks bad for me if the previous slider touches it.
00:52:287 (1): Same as Normal/Hard.

That's all for me. Good luck~ :D
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa
pieguy's Mod

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there :)

Normal:

00:10:844 (4) - add finish on end?　Nope
01:20:741 (1) - remove whistle?　^

Hard:

00:06:514 (5) - add NC　Fixed
00:46:102 (1) - add whistle on repeat?　Fixed

TuInsane:

00:10:225 (5) - add whistle on start?　Fixed
nice map =w=
hoLysoup's Mod

hoLysoup wrote:

hi GiNa~
台灣人嗎? :>　嗯，台灣人 :)

[Hard]
01:21:978 (1,2) - 我覺得這兩個交換NC比較好 因為(2)要拉很久讓我slider break了 所以只要(2) NC 就好　Fixed
01:25:071 - 恩 個人感覺這條綠線不需要. 40%聲音真的是剛剛好 沒有必要再更大聲 而且歌快聽完了, 所以鼓聲就不用變得大聲　Fixed

[Normal]
00:52:906 (4) - 這個其實不用NC吧?　其實是跟著歌詞的，不過一堆人都叫我不要NC，我拿掉好了;w;
00:00:947 (1,2,3) - 我要抱怨的只有這個三連stack. 我的感覺是歌手唱得也只有一個字 "nee~" 把(1,2)合成一個slider更好. 節奏也不用疊得這麼模糊　Fixed
00:23:215 (2,3) - ^這裡只是因為疊得太多會感覺有點模糊　Fixed

Insane 我找不到東西 :<
圖很好~
沒有甚麼話好說~
Darksonic's Mod

Darksonic wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue.

Normal:

00:52:287 (3): Add Finish?　Fixed

Hard:

00:06:514 (5): NC.　Already NC
00:40:535 (3): Move it under the previous note to make it looks better. I suggest x:160 y:244.　Fixed
00:52:287 (7): Same as Normal.　Fixed
01:25:689 (1): This NC is unnecesary imo, remove it?　Fixed

TuInsane:

00:18:885 (1): Remove NC.　Fixed
00:19:349 (2): NC.　Fixed
00:52:287 (1): Same as Normal/Hard.　Fixed

That's all for me. Good luck~ :D
Thanks everyone :3
I only mentioned the ones I changed in 22's diff
@hoLysoup: Thank you for the star !
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Nice, nothing to say.
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

Mok wrote:

Nice, nothing to say.
Thank you for your star >_< !
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
嗨

General
- delete osb file if you feel like it xD
- Nice!! Beautiful video <3

Normal
00:00:947 (1) - NC? i have no idea lol, some maps have it and some don't
00:06:514 (2) - NC here instead of (1)
00:49:194 (2) - Curve upwards, feels better to play imo

Hard
00:30:947 (4) - Stack this at the end of (3), sounds like a nice transition with the song maybe :oops:
01:02:339 (4,5,6) - Claps on these, fits bg music

TuInsane
00:47:803 (2) - make the same distance between (1,3) because it's in the same combo http://puu.sh/yaOW
01:02:339 (5,6,7) - Claps on these to match bg music

Nice!! Good luck <3
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

LunarSakuya wrote:

嗨　妳好:3

General
- delete osb file if you feel like it xD　Maybe I will keep it for now
- Nice!! Beautiful video <3　I know right <3

Normal
00:00:947 (1) - NC? i have no idea lol, some maps have it and some don't　Nope, I try to avoid only 1 NC
00:06:514 (2) - NC here instead of (1)　Fixed
00:49:194 (2) - Curve upwards, feels better to play imo　Never thought of that, added and thank you !

Hard
00:30:947 (4) - Stack this at the end of (3), sounds like a nice transition with the song maybe :oops: 　Fixed
01:02:339 (4,5,6) - Claps on these, fits bg music　Sure !

TuInsane
00:47:803 (2) - make the same distance between (1,3) because it's in the same combo http://puu.sh/yaOW　Same opinion ad yours, fixed
01:02:339 (5,6,7) - Claps on these to match bg music　Done xD

Nice!! Good luck <3　Thank you for your mod and 2 stars, Lunar >_< !
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
TuInsane
00:06:205 (8) - new combo instead of
00:08:060 (5) - i'm not saying that its ugly, Its just oddly shaped D:
00:17:648 (1) - move here to improve flow?

and adjust the rest of the combo.
00:22:596 (1) - move closer to (5) for better flow?
00:30:483 (2) - same as previous "elbow" slider

Hard
01:25:689 (6) - new combo

Normal
00:23:215 (2,3,1) - not sure if this is okay for the easiest diff

Overall
Good map
Mara
4,906 posts
Joined November 2009
Mara
I say, you don't need ending spinners on Hard and Normal. It sounds better without them and then maps will end at the same time as Insane (01:25:689)
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

ouranhshc wrote:

TuInsane
00:06:205 (8) - new combo instead of 　Fixed
00:17:648 (1) - move here to improve flow?　Fixed

Hard
01:25:689 (6) - new combo　Fixed

Normal
00:23:215 (2,3,1) - not sure if this is okay for the easiest diff　I changed pattern, hope it's fine now

Overall
Good map　Thank you <3

LunaticMara wrote:

I say, you don't need ending spinners on Hard and Normal. It sounds better without them and then maps will end at the same time as Insane (01:25:689)　I followed the background sound, so no change
Thanks ^-^
y u c a
844 posts
Joined April 2009
y u c a
waaaaaaa finally Tv T !!
sry really really im late lazy baka yuca Tv T

General

you should put read line at 00:00:947 ?
2ha diff and your diff has different end time O.O should same i think

Normal

00:00:947 (1) - try this
00:03:730 (1) - delete it
00:47:029 (3) - dont stack here so that read easy for new player

Hard

00:01:875 (3) - try this
00:53:215 (2) - remove clap
01:10:844 (1) - try this
01:21:978 (5) -


2ha

00:53:988 (2) - try this?
00:57:081 (x) - add note here

good luck baka gina and 2ha~ :)
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

y u c a wrote:

waaaaaaa finally Tv T !!
sry really really im late lazy baka yuca Tv T　I was kidding, I will mod the map >_<

General

you should put red line at 00:00:947 ?　Nope ;w; P.S. yuca typo queen desu ne
2ha diff and your diff has different end time O.O should same i think　I think it's okay because 22's diff is guest diff dayo

Normal

00:00:947 (1) - try this　Nope
00:03:730 (1) - delete it　^
00:47:029 (3) - dont stack here so that read easy for new playerv　Fixed

Hard

00:01:875 (3) - try this　Fixed
00:53:215 (2) - remove clap　Fixed
01:10:844 (1) - try this　Fixed
01:21:978 (5) - 　Fixed

2ha

00:53:988 (2) - try this?　Okay
00:57:081 (x) - add note here　leave this to 22

good luck baka gina and 2ha~ :)
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
Here go

General
  • • Nothing wrong here
Normal
  • -- Looks nice
Hard
  • - 00:39:916 (2,3) - Spacing between these notes?
    - 00:51:050 (5) - If you follow the music, perhaps add a new combo here?
    - 00:55:998 (5) - Same ^
    - 01:05:895 (5) - ^
TuInsane
  • - 00:52:906 (1) - I think is better if you remove this new combo because is useless and doesn't fit well
Good luck
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

MoodyRPG wrote:

Here go

Normal
  • -- Looks nice　Thanks
Hard
  • - 00:39:916 (2,3) - Spacing between these notes?　This is a little anti-jump, so no change :3
    - 00:51:050 (5) - If you follow the music, perhaps add a new combo here?　Fixed
    - 00:55:998 (5) - Same ^　Fixed
    - 01:05:895 (5) - ^　Fixed
TuInsane
  • - 00:52:906 (1) - I think is better if you remove this new combo because is useless and doesn't fit well　I think she followed the vocal and also to show the spacing change
Good luck
Thank you for your mod !
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
Hi~ form PM xD
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this


SPOILER
Normal
01:25:998 (1) - move this spinnder 01:25:845 (1) - this time

Hard
01:25:689 (6) - distance
00:49:813 (3,1) - stack pefectly
01:02:803 (7) - move 1 gird up and 1 grid left
01:04:658 (3) - 2nd slider point move 2 grids right

TulInsane
00:26:463 (6) - add note?
00:08:834 (8) - how about chaning location like this? http://puu.sh/BdSn
00:31:102 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/BdRd
00:41:153 (1) - Remove whislte and add finish in front of slider

song is beautiful and beatmap is nice!
I think i forgot something....... star! good luck :D
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ form PM xD
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this


SPOILER
Normal
01:25:998 (1) - move this spinnder 01:25:845 (1) - this time 　Fixed

Hard
01:25:689 (6) - distance　This is a jump, so I think it's okay ?
00:49:813 (3,1) - stack pefectly　Fixed
01:02:803 (7) - move 1 gird up and 1 grid left　Fixed
01:04:658 (3) - 2nd slider point move 2 grids right　Fixed

TulInsane
00:26:463 (6) - add note?　What do you mean ... there's a note already D:
00:08:834 (8) - how about chaning location like this? http://puu.sh/BdSn　Fixed
00:31:102 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/BdRd　Nope
00:41:153 (1) - Remove whislte and add finish in front of slider　Fixed

song is beautiful and beatmap is nice!
I think i forgot something....... star! good luck :D　Thank you <333
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Alrighty let's get started :). mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun :P

[General]
How about an orange/reddish, combo color to match the background of the characters?
If you have it, add a soft-sliderslide file where it's silent. you can't hear the sound of the sliderslide. if you don't have that file, take this one.
hmm re-snap the green lines. they're off by 1ms.

[Normal]
The settings look like it'd be in an easy diff. Increase everything except the CS by 1. if this was an easy diff, i'd let it go.
00:04:040 (2,3) - make these notes curved sliders. for (2), you'll make a border for the previous and for (3), you'll blanket the previous slider. I think it flows a lot smoother during gameplay.
00:08:988 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of a square, how about a diamond? i think it'll be fun for beginners. i think the square pattern looks boring for the introduction to the song IMO.
00:21:359 (1) - add a whistle at the repeat arrow to match the piano. i'm guessing the whistles are not only for consistency, but it's to follow the piano.
00:23:834 (1) - same as above but at the end.
00:26:617 (2) - same as 00:21:359.
00:36:205 (1,2,3,4) - when i reached this pattern, i felt uncomfortable because of the direction it's taking. The way (2) is slanted in that direction made me feel uncomfortable. i don't feel the flow in this part at all. make this part curved sliders like this. it'll flow a lot smoother to the song, and i feel comfortable with the curved sliders in effect.
00:52:287 (3) - the finish seems too loud for me. add a timing point and reduce the volume to 35%.
01:25:844 (1) - extend the slider till 01:28:782. the long pause ends here.
hmm i think that if you can add a few more whistles, it'll go really nicely with the piano. go back to the song and add whistles to where the tone of the piano changes.

[Hard]
Maybe increase the HP and OD by 1 to put a bit of a challenge for players?
00:20:431 (5) - since you have a whistle at the end, extend the slider 1/4 more to follow the piano.
01:02:339 (4,5,6,7) - I think it'd be easier if you can replace the circles for 1/4 sliders to make it easier?
01:12:700 (5) - add a clap at the beginning for consistency purposes.
01:25:689 (6) - why did the spacing increase for this note? i doesn't make sense and this jump might surprise players. follow the DS for (3-5) and form a parallelogram so that it'd flow smoother during gameplay.
same comment about the whistles.

[TuInsane]
same as Hard about the diff settings.
00:36:205 (1) - the finish is too loud and I find it unfitting to the song. reduce the volume to either 20% or 30%. so that it wouldn't be that much of a distraction during gameplay/
00:24:761 (5) - make this slider look like the previous slider and Ctrl+R. i think it'll flow smoother during gameplay.
01:11:772 (4) - i see that you're blanketing the next slider, but make it symmetrical so that it'd blanket the next slider nicely.
01:15:483 (2) - hmm how about Ctrl+R and move the 2nd point to the left side? it should be like this. since this is an insane, it wouldn't hurt to add a jump here to challenge players.
same comment about the whistles, and do Ctrl+R on some parts of the 1/4 sliders like the one at 00:24:761. I think that it'll make the diff fun for players.

I guess that's it. Overall the custom claps before the kiai sound too loud for me. i highly suggest that you reduce the volume so that it doesn't cuase that much of a distraction for me and other players. anyways GL :D
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa
Byakugan249's Mod

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alrighty let's get started :). mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun :P

[General]
How about an orange/reddish, combo color to match the background of the characters?　I thought of that too, but no change for now
If you have it, add a soft-sliderslide file where it's silent. you can't hear the sound of the sliderslide. if you don't have that file, take this one.　I already got one, thanks !
hmm re-snap the green lines. they're off by 1ms.　Fixed

[Normal]
The settings look like it'd be in an easy diff. Increase everything except the CS by 1. if this was an easy diff, i'd let it go.　Fixed
00:04:040 (2,3) - make these notes curved sliders. for (2), you'll make a border for the previous and for (3), you'll blanket the previous slider. I think it flows a lot smoother during gameplay.　Fixed
00:08:988 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of a square, how about a diamond? i think it'll be fun for beginners. i think the square pattern looks boring for the introduction to the song IMO.　Fixed
00:21:359 (1) - add a whistle at the repeat arrow to match the piano. i'm guessing the whistles are not only for consistency, but it's to follow the piano.　Fixed
00:23:834 (1) - same as above but at the end.　Fixed
00:26:617 (2) - same as 00:21:359.　Fixed
00:36:205 (1,2,3,4) - when i reached this pattern, i felt uncomfortable because of the direction it's taking. The way (2) is slanted in that direction made me feel uncomfortable. i don't feel the flow in this part at all. make this part curved sliders like this. it'll flow a lot smoother to the song, and i feel comfortable with the curved sliders in effect.　Fixed
00:52:287 (3) - the finish seems too loud for me. add a timing point and reduce the volume to 35%.　Fixed
01:25:844 (1) - extend the slider till 01:28:782. the long pause ends here.　Fixed
hmm i think that if you can add a few more whistles, it'll go really nicely with the piano. go back to the song and add whistles to where the tone of the piano changes.　I added some more.

[Hard]
Maybe increase the HP and OD by 1 to put a bit of a challenge for players?　No change for HP
00:20:431 (5) - since you have a whistle at the end, extend the slider 1/4 more to follow the piano.　Fixed
01:02:339 (4,5,6,7) - I think it'd be easier if you can replace the circles for 1/4 sliders to make it easier?　No, due to the BPM, this shouldn't be hard to play
01:12:700 (5) - add a clap at the beginning for consistency purposes.　Fixed
01:25:689 (6) - why did the spacing increase for this note? i doesn't make sense and this jump might surprise players. follow the DS for (3-5) and form a parallelogram so that it'd flow smoother during gameplay.　Fixed
same comment about the whistles.　Done

[TuInsane]
same as Hard about the diff settings.　No change here for HP too
00:36:205 (1) - the finish is too loud and I find it unfitting to the song. reduce the volume to either 20% or 30%. so that it wouldn't be that much of a distraction during gameplay/　I decreased to 35%
00:24:761 (5) - make this slider look like the previous slider and Ctrl+R. i think it'll flow smoother during gameplay.　Fixed
01:11:772 (4) - i see that you're blanketing the next slider, but make it symmetrical so that it'd blanket the next slider nicely.　Fixed
01:15:483 (2) - hmm how about Ctrl+R and move the 2nd point to the left side? it should be like this. since this is an insane, it wouldn't hurt to add a jump here to challenge players.　Fixed
same comment about the whistles, and do Ctrl+R on some parts of the 1/4 sliders like the one at 00:24:761. I think that it'll make the diff fun for players.　Done again

I guess that's it. Overall the custom claps before the kiai sound too loud for me. i highly suggest that you reduce the volume so that it doesn't cuase that much of a distraction for me and other players. anyways GL :D　Thank you !
22 is a lazy ass, so I fix things for her.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hiii


[General]
* I don't think 2nd kiai time is fit to the song
* Remove OSB files, duh....


[Normal]
01:16:411 (1) - The sliderbody is overlapped by spinner-osu, so beginners are unable to see the path


[Hard]
* AR -1?

00:23:834 (3) - Add whistle at tail slider
00:28:782 (5) - ^
00:31:875 (3) - Add whistle


I can't find something wrong, I'm strongly sorry
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

Leorda wrote:

Hiii　Hello ~


[General]
* I don't think 2nd kiai time is fit to the song　I think it fits the vocal, but I just make it shorter so it will make more sense
* Remove OSB files, duh....　Okay


[Normal]
01:16:411 (1) - The sliderbody is overlapped by spinner-osu, so beginners are unable to see the path　I changed the position of it


[Hard]
* AR -1?　mmm ... maybe no, perhaps the OD is 6 already

00:23:834 (3) - Add whistle at tail slider　Fixed
00:28:782 (5) - ^　Fixed
00:31:875 (3) - Add whistle　Fixed


I can't find something wrong, I'm strongly sorry　Thank you !
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Yo GiNai~ Request from Forums PM~
　
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
　
[ General]
　
  1. soft-hitclap2的音效配這首聽起來怪怪的 試試這個 感覺百分百增加!! xD
  2. 01:18:267 ~ 01:23:215 - 其實這段kiai time沒什麼必要 有些多餘
　
[ Normal]
　
  1. SV1.4的Normal好少見 xD
  2. AR跟OD-1?
  3. 00:17:030 (3) - 這個sliderCtrl+J? 前面的12是從上往下 23是從下往上 所以slider用Ctrl+J會有更好的flow
  4. 00:19:504 (2) - 看你/妳的whistle下法是在每個white tick上面 所以這裡加個whistle
  5. 00:31:875 (3) - ^
  6. 00:34:349 (2) - ^
  7. 00:52:287 (3) - 這裡用finish聽起來總怪怪的 試試clap加whistle ( clap換過之後 )
  8. 01:08:679 (2) - 把著個circle移動到01:08:061 - 打起來比較順暢 但是其實沒差多少 只是把自己的feeling說出來而已
  9. 01:10:535 (2) - 如果上面的mod有改的話 把這個note刪除吧 也是單純覺得比較順暢
  10. 01:24:452 (2,3) - 2去掉一個repeat 把3刪除 做一個slider從01:25:071 ~ 01:25:689
　
[ Hard]
　
  1. 00:18:885 (1,2,3) - ( Nazi ) 沒stack好
  2. 00:23:524 (1) - 這裡刪除New Combo 然後在00:23:834 (3) - 加個New Combo , like 00:18:576 (6,1) -
  3. 00:28:782 (5,1) - Swap New Combo , Same reason as above
  4. 00:33:112 (1,2) - Swap New Combo
  5. 00:39:916 (2,3) - 中間也空的拍子變大但是spacing沒有變會讓人混淆,confusion 把spacing用大
  6. 00:52:287 (3) - Same as Normal
  7. 01:01:875 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這打起來不是很順暢 而且容易Miss 尤其是這種大spacing 節奏改成這樣吧
  8. 01:25:071 (4) - 如果要跟著音樂的話這個clap刪除比較好
　
[ TuInsane]
　
  1. 音量30%太小聲了 我只聽的到有加whistle的objects 40%開始才聽的清楚 建議加10%音量
  2. 看不出什麼東西 就是結尾不跟其他難度統一嗎?
　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
好歌阿好歌 這歌感覺真好 我喜歡!!! ( 順便再次謝謝妳幫我翻譯 xD )
給你很多星星s xDD Sorry for my poor mod!
Good Luck GiNa :3
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa
bossandy's Mod

bossandy wrote:

Yo GiNai~ Request from Forums PM~　My name is GiNa ... lol
　
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
　
[ General]
　
  1. soft-hitclap2的音效配這首聽起來怪怪的 試試這個 感覺百分百增加!! xD　Okay, done
  2. 01:18:267 ~ 01:23:215 - 其實這段kiai time沒什麼必要 有些多餘　I made the kiai longer instead
　
[ Normal]
　
  1. SV1.4的Normal好少見 xD
  2. AR跟OD-1?　Nope
  3. 00:17:030 (3) - 這個sliderCtrl+J? 前面的12是從上往下 23是從下往上 所以slider用Ctrl+J會有更好的flow　Fixed
  4. 00:19:504 (2) - 看你/妳的whistle下法是在每個white tick上面 所以這裡加個whistle　Fixed
  5. 00:31:875 (3) - ^　Fixed
  6. 00:34:349 (2) - ^　Fixed
  7. 00:52:287 (3) - 這裡用finish聽起來總怪怪的 試試clap加whistle ( clap換過之後 )　Fixed
  8. 01:08:679 (2) - 把著個circle移動到01:08:061 - 打起來比較順暢 但是其實沒差多少 只是把自己的feeling說出來而已　No change
  9. 01:10:535 (2) - 如果上面的mod有改的話 把這個note刪除吧 也是單純覺得比較順暢　^
  10. 01:24:452 (2,3) - 2去掉一個repeat 把3刪除 做一個slider從01:25:071 ~ 01:25:689　Fixed
　
[ Hard]
　
  1. 00:18:885 (1,2,3) - ( Nazi ) 沒stack好　Fixed
  2. 00:23:524 (1) - 這裡刪除New Combo 然後在00:23:834 (3) - 加個New Combo , like 00:18:576 (6,1) - 　Fixed
  3. 00:28:782 (5,1) - Swap New Combo , Same reason as above　Fixed
  4. 00:33:112 (1,2) - Swap New Combo　Fixed
  5. 00:39:916 (2,3) - 中間也空的拍子變大但是spacing沒有變會讓人混淆,confusion 把spacing用大　Anti-jump, so I made the spacing even smaller
  6. 00:52:287 (3) - Same as Normal
  7. 01:01:875 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這打起來不是很順暢 而且容易Miss 尤其是這種大spacing 節奏改成這樣吧　No, but I made it easier
  8. 01:25:071 (4) - 如果要跟著音樂的話這個clap刪除比較好　Nope
　
[ TuInsane]
　
  1. 音量30%太小聲了 我只聽的到有加whistle的objects 40%開始才聽的清楚 建議加10%音量　Fixed
  2. 看不出什麼東西 就是結尾不跟其他難度統一嗎?　It's alright, 22 is a guest, so no problem imo
　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
好歌阿好歌 這歌感覺真好 我喜歡!!! ( 順便再次謝謝妳幫我翻譯 xD )
給你很多星星s xDD Sorry for my poor mod!
Good Luck GiNa :3　Thanks for so many stars <3333 and no problem, just call me when you need me to translate something ! Btw, you mod isn't poor 8-)
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue
太抱歉了拖了一个月T.T

[Normal]
00:07:751 (2,1) - 这个稍微有点overlap
00:10:844 (4) - 尾whistle？
00:31:256 (1,2,3) - 看起来不够圆润
01:24:452 (2) - 我觉得这个可以降点音量然后和后面的听起来有点层次感

[Hard]
00:05:277 (1,2,3) - 这个三连听起来真不怎样。。
00:10:844 (5) - 你把这个放到和三水平对称的地方再改下形状应该会好点
00:16:411 - 00:35:586这段whistle太多了感觉有点吵了

[2ha]
01:08:215 (1,2,3,4) - 你想干啥
kiai那几个clap还不如不加
你真的没因为做着爽而overlap么.
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
Hi~

[TuInsane]
00:06:978 (4) - I think sounds better if you replace this by a single circle, fits better with the vocals.
01:00:947 (1) - add a repeat deleting 01:01:566 (2)
01:03:885 (2) - extend till next red tick deleting 01:04:349 (3)
01:06:359 (2) - same as above

[Hard]
01:02:803 (5) - start a slider here that end it at 01:03:112

[Normal]
Everything seems fine

Aww would be such a solid mapset with an Easy diff... >:

That's all for now

Consider adding an easy diff *runs*
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue
太抱歉了拖了一个月T.T

[Normal]
00:07:751 (2,1) - 这个稍微有点overlap　I moved 1, 1 grid down
00:10:844 (4) - 尾whistle？　Fixed
00:31:256 (1,2,3) - 看起来不够圆润　Fixed
01:24:452 (2) - 我觉得这个可以降点音量然后和后面的听起来有点层次感　Fixed

[Hard]
00:05:277 (1,2,3) - 这个三连听起来真不怎样。。　I followed vocal, so no change
00:10:844 (5) - 你把这个放到和三水平对称的地方再改下形状应该会好点　Fixed
00:16:411 - 00:35:586这段whistle太多了感觉有点吵了　Same structure as Normal, so no change

[2ha]
01:08:215 (1,2,3,4) - 你想干啥　我也不知道22想幹啥，no change
kiai那几个clap还不如不加　這個幾乎沒有modder指出，所以先keep著
你真的没因为做着爽而overlap么.　誰知道呢（聳肩）

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi~

[TuInsane]
00:06:978 (4) - I think sounds better if you replace this by a single circle, fits better with the vocals.　Fixed
01:00:947 (1) - add a repeat deleting 01:01:566 (2)　Fixed
01:03:885 (2) - extend till next red tick deleting 01:04:349 (3)　Fixed
01:06:359 (2) - same as above　Fixed
lazy busy 22

[Hard]
01:02:803 (5) - start a slider here that end it at 01:03:112　Fixed

[Normal]
Everything seems fine　Thanks

Aww would be such a solid mapset with an Easy diff... >:　I actually thought of this before xD

That's all for now

Consider adding an easy diff *runs*　Sure, I asked my dear friend to make a guest diff for me, I probably got her diff next week ! Thanks for your suggestion too 8-)
I'll try to fetch 22 asap, sorry for waiting. I fixed stuffs for her
LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya
Hope you like it, "me"^^

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