-Bakari- wrote:

Eh.. I'm noob :<

General

There's some unsnapped timing-points

00:46:527
00:46:679
01:41:315
01:41:468
02:20:124
02:20:276
02:24:404
02:29:122

Fine... I resnapped those timing points.

hey.. maybe this colours.. :<

Combo1 : 45,45,45
Combo2 : 255,201,36
Combo3 : 251,183,68

I like the new combo color you suggested. Thanks (:

Easy
great diff <3

Normal
01:26:486 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/hdRc try this No.
01:33:334 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^

Hard
00:25:282 (6) - new combo? Nah.
00:35:697 (4,5,1) - not sure about NC here.. It's fine. Trust me.
00:45:969 (3,4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/hdT0 try this Nah.
01:39:897 (5,6,1) - not sure about NC.. It's fine like that.
01:46:745 (4) - new combo? Nah.
02:35:822 (6) - ^ ^

Insane
Nice <3
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eh.. >< you can ignore this short mod. i'm beginner :<
but i really love this map <3

1. 00:32:843 (1) - this slider's border is overlap with slider on 00:30:561 (2). That look weird imo. I suggest to change to another shape
2. 00:55:670 (3) - add new combo in here. In kiai time, usually adding new combo for give better effect. also, remove new combo in 00:56:811 (1), and add new combo again in 00:57:953.
3. 01:05:942 (1) - when I test this map, this slider is weird to look because in 01:07:654 (3), that slider isn't curve like this slider. I suggest to make same with (3), or (3) same with this.
4. 01:08:795 (4) - add new combo for combo pattern.
5. 01:40:182 (1) - spacing isn't consistent in here. please make consistent.
6. 01:47:030 (2) - add whistle in slider's beginning?
7. 02:46:950 (2) - same think as 00:55:670 (3)

1. 00:54:529 (5) - add new combo in here. same reason with 00:55:670 (3) in easy difficulty
2. 01:36:187 (3) - delete the whistle in slider's reverse, too many whistle in there so that make weird to heard imo
3. 01:49:313 (5) - same think as 00:54:529 (5)
4. 02:46:950 (2) - same as above

1. Unsnapped green timing points same with Normal diff
2. 00:24:854 (5) - add new combo?
3. 00:58:809 (2) - remove the clap in slider's end. not fit add clap in blue tick in here. that make the sound is weird when the play
4. 01:25:915 (2) - (nazi) this circle isn't stacked properly
5. 01:53:593 (2) - remove the clap in slider's end. same reason with 00:58:809 (2)
6. 02:02:723 (2) - same as above
7. 02:09:571 (3) - ^
8. 02:35:822 (6) - add new combo for combo pattern
9. 02:47:378 (6) - remove the clap?
10. 02:50:802 (4) - same as above
11. 02:57:222 (2) - sorry nazi again, but this circle isn't stacked properly

1. 00:23:570 (1) - remove finish in slider's beginning. I don't think that fit in there orz
2. 00:32:273 (6) - in here too, but in the end. also, remove clap in slider's body
3. 00:55:670 (5) - add new combo in here. for give better effect when kiai begin
4. 00:58:809 (2,3) - remove the clap. sound is weird to heard imo
5. 01:00:235 (1) - remove clap in slider's reverse.
6. 01:07:939 (2,3) - remove clap
7. 01:09:366 (1) - remove clap in slider's reverse.
8. 01:32:763 (2) - (nazi) stack it properly? more better to look when play imo
9. 01:50:454 (5) - in here again, add new combo. same reason with 00:55:670
10. 01:54:021 (3) - remove clap
11. 02:47:521 (5) - here, add new combo again for kiai begin

Yasora-chan wrote:

hi~ mod because m4m with me (:

Easy

Unsnapped green timing points:

1. 00:46:679
2. 01:41:468
3. 02:20:276
4. 02:24:404
5. 02:29:122

1. 00:32:843 (1) - this slider's border is overlap with slider on 00:30:561 (2). That look weird imo. I suggest to change to another shape Okay.
2. 00:55:670 (3) - add new combo in here. In kiai time, usually adding new combo for give better effect. Okay, fine. also, remove new combo in 00:56:811 (1) Sure, and add new combo again in 00:57:953. Nope.
3. 01:05:942 (1) - when I test this map, this slider is weird to look because in 01:07:654 (3), that slider isn't curve like this slider. I suggest to make same with (3), or (3) same with this. Nope. (:
4. 01:08:795 (4) - add new combo for combo pattern. Alright.
5. 01:40:182 (1) - spacing isn't consistent in here. please make consistent. Fixed.
6. 01:47:030 (2) - add whistle in slider's beginning? Nah.
7. 02:46:950 (2) - same think as 00:55:670 (3) No.

Normal

Unsnapped green timing points:

1. 00:46:669
2. 01:41:458
3. 02:20:266
4. 02:29:112
5. 03:05:923

1. 00:54:529 (5) - add new combo in here. same reason with 00:55:670 (3) in easy difficulty Nope.
2. 01:36:187 (3) - delete the whistle in slider's reverse, too many whistle in there so that make weird to heard imo I disagree.
3. 01:49:313 (5) - same think as 00:54:529 (5) No.
4. 02:46:950 (2) - same as above No.

Hard

1. Unsnapped green timing points same with Normal diff
2. 00:24:854 (5) - add new combo? Okay.
3. 00:58:809 (2) - remove the clap in slider's end. not fit add clap in blue tick in here. that make the sound is weird when the play No... Just no... You're not listening to drum set piece here, are you? ._.
4. 01:25:915 (2) - (nazi) this circle isn't stacked properly Fixed.
5. 01:53:593 (2) - remove the clap in slider's end. same reason with 00:58:809 (2) The same reason I say no to that.
6. 02:02:723 (2) - same as above ^
7. 02:09:571 (3) - ^ ^
8. 02:35:822 (6) - add new combo for combo pattern Nah.
9. 02:47:378 (6) - remove the clap? Nope.
10. 02:50:802 (4) - same as above ^
11. 02:57:222 (2) - sorry nazi again, but this circle isn't stacked properly

That's all
Sorry if my mod isn't helpful ><;;
anyway, good luck (:

ouranhshc wrote:

Hard
00:36:267 (2) - new combo? I'll just replace the note on 00:35:982 with a slider and have it end on 00:36:267.
00:54:243 (1,2) - I'm sensing that a jump might go well here Hm. You're right.
01:29:054 (5) - perhaps something like this: http://puu.sh/iiUb I like the idea but I'll use sliders instead. (:

everything else is fine

wcx19911123 wrote:

yo

[General]
why put a silenced applause.wav in song folder? I think the default one is better Nope. Leaving the applause silent is pretty fitting.
offset=16861(-4) is better to me Yea, you're right.

[Easy]
03:06:067 - spinner start at here? The spinner would appear too soon. And that's not something ideal on an Easy difficulty.

[Normal]
01:26:486 (2,3) - I suggest change this to slider , or 5 circles in a row makes it too hard to play as Normal diff Okay, you're right on that one. Rearranged.
01:33:334 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:37:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it a prefect pentagon? I'll leave it as it is really.

[Hard]
oh god the SV is too high.. So? A slider velocity of 2.50 is fine for this BPM. Plus this works very well.
HD-1 plz , it is too high as a Hard diff Very well.
02:10:427 (1,2,3,4,5) - move this right and down a bit plz , the spacing from previous slider is wrong when playing
this diff's pattern feel kinda mess to meI'll just create a 1/4 repeat slider on this. , I think symmetry pattern is good to fit this kind of songs o.o It depends on what mapping style.

[Naraku's Insane]
HD-1 or OD-1? now difficulty setting is kinda high imo Okay, I'll just decrease the HP Drain Rate by 1.
00:21:287 (1,2,3) - this sliders play kinda odd to me , I suggest short sldiers start at white/red beat line. try move 00:22:143 (4) - to 00:21:287 - , and move the 3 sldiers to 00:21:430 - ? Nah. I seem to like what he had done here.
00:22:999 (4,5) - if you want to follow vocal better , slider first and circle later naraku, wcx is right. It actually fits very well, man. naraku, I'll rearrange it for you.
01:49:883 (1,2,3,4) - this jumps seems too huge imo.. This seems alright to me.
02:49:803 (1) - move it up a bit? it is nearly out of the screen Hm... It looks okay to me to be honest. I'll leave it as it is.
02:51:230 (4) - ^ ^
nice diff

that's all
good luck

Kat25 wrote:

Hi! First time modding, hope I can help. And nice song, glad someone is mapping it

Anyway, to make it easier to search for this song, you should mention the language is English, and mention what genre it is (I guess either 'rock' or 'other' would be most accurate). I can't do that. BAT members can only categorize songs.

Easy
Easy was ok, I think. I found it a little boring, but I'm pretty sure that's just because I like harder songs. Boring?

Normal
00:19:444 - I think it might be good to have two notes here (on both 'one' and 'thing') Yea, you're right on that one. I'll add a note there.

Hard
It's...pretty hard. osu! says it's a five star difficulty, and it feels that hard too. Maybe make it easier or rename it (Hard+ maybe?). What? you're expecting my difficulty to be a walk in a park? Nah, man. What's wrong with a little challenge? I'll leave my difficulty as it is.
00:35:932 - Two notes would be better than three here, since the lyrics are two syllables ('the waves') Nah, I disagree.

Insane
Insane - is insane. I didn't notice any errors, but I was just watching it because it was too hard for me (well, it IS an insane difficulty).

Anyway, good work!

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* There is some unsnapped inherited timing points in each diff. You might want to check it and snap it Alright.


[Easy]
00:32:839 (1) - Make a slider like this to make a good blanket combo? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/317926 Got that fixed and it looks much better now.
00:39:687 (1) - Remove new combo? I'm sure its fine like that because the new combo there is following the lyrics pretty well in my opinion.
00:54:525 (1,2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this may be hidden for them Yea, you're right. Arranged those two objects and the ones after.
01:53:303 (4) - Replace with slider? It seems empty for me if you keep it.... I'll leave it as it is for now. I'm sure its fine like that.
02:02:434 (3) - ^ ^


[Normal]
* AR +1? Yea, you're right.


[Hard]
01:42:889 (4) - Add clap at head slider? Nah.
01:44:601 (1) - Why clap? It's because it sounds like there should be a clap here. So, I added it in and that sounds just about right.


[Naraku's Insane]
00:27:703 (3,4) - This note is touch the HP Bar Doesn't look that bad really. I'll leave it as it is.
01:02:229 (4) - ^ ^


Good job, then

Kenezz wrote:

Hey
Kenezz's SuperBakamod~

[Easy]
01:11:645 (2) - Nothing important and nazi, move the third control point 3~4 grids to the right to make the slider most curly.
Alright. Looks a lot better.
03:06:349 (1) - Change the start of this spinner like the others diffs, yeah is a easy diff but is 1/2 of distance and no 1/4. Very well. If you say so.

Omg that's all, very clean map u3u!!
Good Luck~

Narufable wrote:

omg i was waiting for this beatmap and this day *-* yey >w< :,3 ♥

Azure_Kite wrote:

My girlfriend left me because I was the ultimate fan of Linkin Park.

but in the end, it doesn't even matter.