Twice wrote:

I think this diff's ds are chaos, please think it again.

play it lol just using 1.7x ds :p that's still playable~
thanks

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

[General]
Please change the MP3 to better one. My ears are bleeding...
Its volume was raised too much.


[Yasora]
00:21:233 (7) - Delete? This circle doesn't fit music.
00:34:486 (1,2) - Could you change the rhythm? They are really awkward.
00:36:130 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:938 (1) - Add whistles?


[S.S]
00:39:007 (5) - Should be NC. Spacing was changed from this time. Or you have to fix spacing next note. It seems very confused.


[Hard]
Fine


[Normal]
00:07:363 (4,5,6) - Maybe they are a bit hard for normal skilled player to read the rhythm.
00:12:089 - Delete this offset
01:05:719 (5) - NC to be consistent with 00:52:568 (1). You'd better move position, if you add NC.


[Easy]
Fine


Good luck ;D

As requested, mod starts 16:25

[General]

- The mp3 is way too loud or I'm getting a different mp3. I have my volume quite low so when I say it's loud, it's very loud. Notice no modder mentions this so I'm slightly confused. Also the mp3 is clipping by atleast 11 decibels http://puu.sh/tMIQ Audacity is pretty accurate so far for clipping and just incase, notice that I didn't check the box, allow clipping so that's why audacity suggestion -11.2 dB on volume because that is when the audio doesn't clip anymore.

Just wondering about the mp3, can't mod hitsound because of this. 16:32

[Easy]

01:04:486 (3) - Copy 01:03:664 (2) - , ctrl+J & R and paste it here?

Nothing significant to mention 16:36, 4 mins

[Normal]

+1 hp/od for nicer difficulty jump to Hard?

00:22:157 (2) - Even through I said I can't really mod hitsound, this part, it's really noticeable that you didn't put hitsound at begin, should put whistle for the piano imo.
00:27:089 (3) - Miss this the first time, how about 1/1 repeating slider instead (remove two repeat, extend by 1/1)?

Don't see anything here iether 16:41 5mins

[Hard]

- Stream is really questionable due to low slider velocity(spacing for me is one thing that help me read stream and due to low slider velocity, the notes are closer together so I find myself almost always hitting stream too early and the approach rate doesn't help - I find it hard to stream in ar 7)and Normal wasn't very difficult. Consider removing. *Put my volume slightly higher and I can read it better, but still consider removing the longer stream since I don't think having stream when Normal isn't very hard will be good for difficulty spread.

00:11:781 (1,2,3) - Not a really nice rhythm to hit and for a Hard, don't think you should do this. Consider repeating slider instead
00:21:130 (5) - To be honest, I expected to see a repeat here

Nothing else, I guess. 16:51, 10mins

[S.S.]

Don't see anything 16:54 3mins

Recheck:
00:03:253 (1) - Jump here?
00:04:692 (7,8,1) - ^
00:24:931 (1,2,3) - I cannot agree with following the drum here when the song here is more vocal prominent, map with streams instead.
00:28:733 (3) - Should do jump on here too if you do it on (5)
00:31:199 (1) - Consider jump here
00:32:842 (1) - Same as 00:28:733
00:35:308 (3) - ^
00:38:082 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:24:931


I like how you did the part at kiai time, but cannot agree with the part (mention in my mod) where you follow the drum at all. 17:05, 8mins

[Yasora]

00:57:500 (1) - Do this? http://puu.sh/tMTZ

The overall idea is good, but if you really want to use 1.7x distant snap, why not just increase slider velocity. When you do this, every time you use a slider, it feel like there is a pause in the song and leads to an unnatural feeling when you transit from hit circle to slider. I really think you should readjust the map to a higher slider velocity. 16:57. 3mins

Cannot star yet due to a few questionable stuff and mp3, mp3 really affect quality of my mod, maybe a recheck is needed if you think it's necessary. Kept track of how long I mod each diff because trying to be lazier, but I guess not very accurate for this beatmap due to mp3.

Good luck, minor edit to not overlap with ykcarrot's mod. End 17:09, 44mins, 5 diffs, tv size. Not accurate due to mp3 quality

The mp3 is too loud? Sorry then >.<
I have reduced the volume of the mp3 by now. Thank you for mentioning this.
And yes, thank you for the mod. Fixed some of ykcarrot mod and merchat mod

lowered the volume a bit :3

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Sekai's Taiko-Fly].osu

thanks all =3=

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

hi owo/

Easy
01:04:486 (3) - spacing
01:19:486 - use soft sound?
01:19:692 - why timing point here?

Normal
00:07:671 (5,6) - change to slider? difficult to beginners
00:31:199 (6) - nazi 1grid down
01:15:386 -timing point...

Hard
nothing big problem
but it's too hard by hard diff
maybe OD-1 and HP-1?

S.S
00:21:027 (9) - delete. Does not meet the rhythm
01:19:486 - use soft sound
Yasora
00:21:027 (5) - delete.
00:32:226 (4) - use1/2 slider?
00:35:000 (2) - delete and 00:35:205 -00:35:308 add note?

thank you for the mod and the star Laurier <3
Most of them are fixed :3

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General
fine.

[Easy]
fine.

[Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
really big distance for a normal diff....
00:04:075 (4,5,6) - like these, I think this is a little difficult for a normal diff, but maybe just me.
others fine.

[Hard]
fine.

[Yasora]
fine.

[S.S]
fine. but seems I see a lot of copy and paste during the KIAI =_=


already good enough for me. of course no kudosu for my useless mod plz. good luck!

Hi there

[Easy]
00:56:678 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu and hitbursts. It makes more hidden for beginners while gameplay
01:10:240 (2) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts. So it's confusing for beginners while gameplay


[Normal]
* AR +1?

00:07:363 (4,5,6) - I think this pattern would be difficult for beginners who play this diff. Try replace with slider that repeating slider is snap at blue tick
00:27:089 (3) - Having too much repeating slider can makes confuse for beginners about when the slider is end


[Hard]
00:13:733 (2) - A slider with too much repeating slider can be boring for players. Consider to split into two slider


[Yasora]
00:35:205 - Add note here?


That's all I can find

thanks~

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

Fixed most of them. Thank you for the mod guys

From my queue----

[General]
- Don't know if it's my illusion or not, I think that [Yasora] 's BG quality is not really good with some clear colour grids and poorly treated boundaries. If possible, change it into another BG image? Accel world related pictures are largely available on the web.
- I'll also suggest to compress the two BG with ~0.5MB a bit :3
- 500 audio lead-in would be probably nice.

[S.S]
00:11:781 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing of (3) looks odd and a bit misleading, just for reference: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/314267
00:14:555 - some suggestions here: The music is transisting to a softer pace and here the drum sound has been fading out. You can use S (90/100%) here instead of N.
00:16:404 (5) - any alternative choice to place the sliders? Maybe you can make (2) curving more or positioning lower so that (5) can curve around (3,4) symmetricially.
00:19:486 - Feel like a note would work well here as you didn't place 1/1 breaks nearby.
00:29:555 (1) - Just a bit suggestion: you can tweek (1) so that (1,3,4) are in eq. spacing apparently. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/314288
00:50:925 (1,2) - their end differs by more than 1 pixels so I think you can stack them well.
01:04:075 (1,2) - ^
some copy&paste stuff in kiai?

[Yasora]
00:32:842 (1) - you can make it symmetrical:

400,232,32842,6,0,B|352:204|348:152|356:100|424:80,1,180,2|8

00:35:411 - Add a note here?
00:43:527 (5,6,2) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 makes stuffs in more accurate spacing&symmetrical.
00:58:733 (5) - NC here instead of the next note since this is the opening of sentence and notify the 0.0x 1 beat spacing.
01:09:007 (1) - Just a little thought here - using 0.5x / 0.75x slider to make a sudden slowing down effect?

I like the way you balance between the deafult N clap and N:C2 clap. :3

[Hard]
00:14:555 - same as [SS] I would suggest a softer hitsound for this 1/2 beat interval.
01:13:527 (3) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 to make it symmetrical

[Normal]
00:39:829 (1) - For normal I think this slider is a bit short even though there's no space to extend it. (A 4-beat ones is the minimum length imo like the next spinner)

[Easy]
01:07:363 - Same as normal, this spinner would be possibly too short.
01:13:527 (2) - A clap here responding to (1) sounds nice.

[Taiko]
00:01:610 - This one starts at a higher tone so k is preferred. Corresponding to 00:04:897 - I think K sounds better.
00:20:514 - the triplet here sounds mistimed as the drum combo in the music starts after this one. Try d kkdkd
00:36:130 - add finish
00:48:048 - ddkkd (lol in combo colour it is ddk but in fact it is dkd
01:08:596 - the tone is going up so kkddk / ddkdk / ddkkk sound nice.
01:14:349 - ends with d corresponding to the bass, start the spinner 1/2 after the stream because the fading out already started.

The biggest problem is that you have to place your finishes with a unique logic, i.e. if you place finish on a similar sentence, place finish in similar sentences whenever possible.

Some hitsounds are nicely placed and I guess a bit more working is needed on the two insanes, good luck :3

Thank you for the mod wmf.
All fixed in my diff, but easy. >.<

thanks ugyu /w\
here, new background. just replace it

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

Hi ~ Miya ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions




That's all ~ Amazing song and mapset ~ take you star ~

Good luck with rank ~

Thanks Rika, umm. I don't think that rythim is weird because i follow the drum sound at the back,
an about 01:06:541 (3)- i have already extended to that time >.<

Waiting for Star and Yasora response

fixed all
thanks /w\

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

something fixed

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [S.S].osu

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]

1. There are two background files for Taiko in the folder. Keep only the correct one and full submit.
2. Since you're doing it anyway, I'd throw in more inherited points to make the volume decrease at the end more gradual.

[Easy]

1. Given that this has almost the same number of circles as sliders, I'd drop OD down to 1.

[Normal]

1. 00:33:253 (3) - Perhaps flip this vertically? We just went up with (2), don't wanna have to start with going up again with (3).
2. 01:02:431 (7) - NC here instead of 01:02:842 (1) -

[Hard]

1. 00:32:431 (3) - Blanket looked off when I was playing, and when I checked, it actually was. Move the anchor to x:404 y:169.
2. 01:05:719 (5) - NC here instead of 01:05:925 (1) -

[Yasora]

1. Diff name doesn't say very much about the overall diff. "Yasora's Insane" seems more fitting.
2. Plays smoothly. My only concern is the small spacing between 00:42:089 (5,1) - despite the sv change. I still think spacing should match 00:41:678 (4,5) - .

[S.S]

1. Again, diff name doesn't say very much about the overall diff.
2. 00:16:404 (5) - This slider doesn't look very nice, and the length serves no purpose, and because it's this length, you've neglected a possible object at 00:17:637 - .
3. 00:19:692 (5) - This slider doesn't look very nice either, but what's worse is that this is just art, and the anchors are not made to be mapped to anything.
4. 00:27:397 (6,7) - Transition in the stream looks untidy.
5. 00:38:699 (4,5,6,1) - Spacing makes it hard to hear rhythm.
6. 00:47:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This was bad in Dreadnought, and this is bad here.
7. 00:49:281 (1,2) - The way (2) has to jerk back before going forward is a bit unappealing. Apply whatever fix to this you see fit - maybe just a simple move to the left a few units
8. 00:55:856 (1) - And you've just copy and pasted this next Kiai section. The fact that it's a pitch higher than the last is enough reason that it should be more intense. Consider remapping it.

[Sekai's Taiko-Fly]

1. What's "-Fly" doing in the diff name?
2. Use slider velocity 1.40
3. 00:11:473 (2,3,4,1,2,1,1,2,3) - Use the 3/4 rhythm with mostly finishes instead; the way you have it mapped right now seems like you completely disregarded the awesome bass.
4. 00:13:938 (1,1,1) - Make this a 1/4 kdddkdddd.
5. 00:21:952 - k
6. 00:22:363 - k
7. 00:22:979 (1) - Make D
8. 00:23:185 - k
9. 00:23:596 - k
10. 00:23:699 - k
11. 00:23:801 (1) - Make d
12. 00:24:418 - d
13. 00:24:623 (1,1,2,1,1) - Again, use the 3/4 rhythm to map it to the bass.
14. 00:27:089 (1,1,1,2,1) - Fill this in with 1/4. I'd just use ddkdddk.
15. 00:31:199 (2,3) - Pretty empty...
16. 00:43:733 - You shouldn't have breaks like this, especially in the Kiai section.
17. 01:14:760 (1) - End the slider the same time as the other diffs.

Good luck :3

Fixed everything in normal and hard, but not in easy
Thank you for the mod~

Oh yes, maybe you have the older version, i have deleted the double taiko bg.

I think you are true about the name for my diff.
here and thanks

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora's Insane].osu

Your map is good. I couldn't find any suggestions on your map. Sorry!

STAR~

thank you for your star BeatofIke

Hi~

Miya wrote:

Fenyo, i want standard mod :3 (You can ignore 1 diff if you want)

Easy:
Spacing error... Your distance spacing is x1,1... If you want the spacing is more limited, you should change it to x0,9 or x1,0

Normal:
00:18:048 (1,2,3) - (Personal opinion) I think it can be very separately for a normal.

Hard:
Good diff o.o

Insane:
00:35:103 (2,3,4,5) - Move (4) to x:488 y:80 and move (5) to x:460 y:120 http://puu.sh/vgvu
00:40:959 (8,1) - 1 grid right


Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good map, good luck~

Orz, it's just a setting, i use spacing 1.0x in my easy diff. Maybe it's accidentaly changed when i editing my beatmap and i don't make any change. And, i don't understand what you mean separately in normal diff.

Well, thank you for moding~

Why didn't you submit Taiko diff and ranked together? :/


~Easy~
- Shouldn't have stacks in easy diff, notes can be covered by hitburst and hard for newbie players to read
- Change sample S:C2 to S
00:39:418 (1) - silence its hitsound
00:57:911 (3) - remove clap at the end
01:04:486 (3) - ^
01:13:527 (2) - add finish

~Normal~
- Change sample S:C2 to S
00:39:418 (1) - silence its hitsound
01:12:705 (3) - add finish at the end

~Hard~
- Change sample S:C2 to S
00:11:473 (4) - NC
00:11:781 (1) - no NC
00:12:705 (4) - NC
00:13:116 (1) - no NC
00:41:267 (1,2) - use soft hitsound
00:42:294 - add timing and set volume to 30% or 40%
01:13:527 (3) - add finish
01:10:856 (1) - add clap
01:11:473 (3,4) - move 1/4 left and add clap
01:13:116 (1,2) - ^
01:13:527 (3) - add finish
01:13:938 (4) - use 1/8 snap and fade in volume (soft → loud) , use soft hitsound, end with normal hitsound

~Yasora's Insane~
- I think the maximum volume should be 60%, like other diffs
00:07:363 (4) - end on left blue tick (00:07:671) and add note on white tick
00:11:678 (2) - use 1/4 slider
01:05:925 (2) - remove clap
01:06:027 (3) - add clap at start
01:09:623 (2,3) - remove clap
01:10:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try pattern below, sounds better to me (you can change into circle/slider as you wish)
claps on 01:10:856 - , 01:11:062 - , 01:11:370 - , 01:11:575 - , 01:11:883 - , apply to 2nd pattern too, except (6)

01:13:527 (6) - remove clap
01:13:938 (1) - use 1/8 snap and fade in volume (soft → loud)
01:14:349 (2) - use normal hitsound

~S.S~
00:16:404 (5) - looks weird... try making U slider or curved-out slider (current is curved-in)
00:41:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - use soft hitsound

DJPop wrote:

Why didn't you submit Taiko diff and ranked together? :/ Because Sekai want to delete her diff, but include it on creator words


~Easy~
- Shouldn't have stacks in easy diff, notes can be covered by hitburst and hard for newbie players to read ok
- Change sample S:C2 to S ok
00:39:418 (1) - silence its hitsound I feel it doesn't necesary, since the normal sounds really fit with the rythim on the back
00:57:911 (3) - remove clap at the end not consistant with previous clap
01:04:486 (3) - ^ ^
01:13:527 (2) - add finish no cymbal sound here, so it doesn't fit with finish sound >.<

~Normal~
- Change sample S:C2 to S ok
00:39:418 (1) - silence its hitsound no
01:12:705 (3) - add finish at the end no

~Hard~
- Change sample S:C2 to S ok
00:11:473 (4) - NC
00:11:781 (1) - no NC
00:12:705 (4) - NC
00:13:116 (1) - no NC ^all fixed
00:41:267 (1,2) - use soft hitsound ok
00:42:294 - add timing and set volume to 30% or 40% ok, but set to 50% because it's too low imo
01:13:527 (3) - add finish no
01:10:856 (1) - add clap ok
01:11:473 (3,4) - move 1/4 left and add clap sounds weird to me, no
01:13:116 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:13:527 (3) - add finish you repeat the same suggestion >.<
01:13:938 (4) - use 1/8 snap and fade in volume (soft → loud) , use soft hitsound, end with normal hitsound ok

~S.S~ Since Star Stream is busy, i will take care his diff
00:16:404 (5) - looks weird... try making U slider or curved-out slider (current is curved-in) I don't think it's weird for both of us. Sorry, no change here
00:41:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - use soft hitsound ok

thank you DJPop :3

done
thanks djpop owo)b

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora's Insane].osu

~Hard~
01:11:473 (3,4) - no claps is fine, but should be moved 1/4 left to sync with drums
01:13:116 (1,2) - ^

~Yasora's Insane~
01:12:294 (1) - add clap at the end to make sound same as 01:10:651 (1) -

done owo

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora's Insane].osu

....
>.<
thank you very much <3

Did some little changes in Normal and in tags.

Ranked ~ !

congratz~

pro ~

Congrats ~

00:35:103 (2,3,4,5,6) - lol

haha to quick GZ

Oh my that was quick D:. congratz on the rank Miya-chan :3