From my queue----
[General]
- Don't know if it's my illusion or not, I think that [Yasora] 's BG quality is not really good with some clear colour grids and poorly treated boundaries. If possible, change it into another BG image? Accel world related pictures are largely available on the web.
- I'll also suggest to compress the two BG with ~0.5MB a bit :3
- 500 audio lead-in would be probably nice.
[S.S]
00:11:781 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing of (3) looks odd and a bit misleading, just for reference:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31426700:14:555 - some suggestions here: The music is transisting to a softer pace and here the drum sound has been fading out. You can use S (90/100%) here instead of N.
00:16:404 (5) - any alternative choice to place the sliders? Maybe you can make (2) curving more or positioning lower so that (5) can curve around (3,4) symmetricially.
00:19:486 - Feel like a note would work well here as you didn't place 1/1 breaks nearby.
00:29:555 (1) - Just a bit suggestion: you can tweek (1) so that (1,3,4) are in eq. spacing apparently.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31428800:50:925 (1,2) - their end differs by more than 1 pixels so I think you can stack them well.
01:04:075 (1,2) - ^
some copy&paste stuff in kiai?
[Yasora]
00:32:842 (1) - you can make it symmetrical:
400,232,32842,6,0,B|352:204|348:152|356:100|424:80,1,180,2|8
00:35:411 - Add a note here?
00:43:527 (5,6,2) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 makes stuffs in more accurate spacing&symmetrical.
00:58:733 (5) - NC here instead of the next note since this is the opening of sentence and notify the 0.0x 1 beat spacing.
01:09:007 (1) - Just a little thought here - using 0.5x / 0.75x slider to make a sudden slowing down effect?
I like the way you balance between the deafult N clap and N:C2 clap. :3
[Hard]
00:14:555 - same as [SS] I would suggest a softer hitsound for this 1/2 beat interval.
01:13:527 (3) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 to make it symmetrical
[Normal]
00:39:829 (1) - For normal I think this slider is a bit short even though there's no space to extend it. (A 4-beat ones is the minimum length imo like the next spinner)
[Easy]
01:07:363 - Same as normal, this spinner would be possibly too short.
01:13:527 (2) - A clap here responding to (1) sounds nice.
[Taiko]
00:01:610 - This one starts at a higher tone so k is preferred. Corresponding to 00:04:897 - I think K sounds better.
00:20:514 - the triplet here sounds mistimed as the drum combo in the music starts after this one. Try d kkdkd
00:36:130 - add finish
00:48:048 - ddkkd (lol in combo colour it is ddk but in fact it is dkd
01:08:596 - the tone is going up so kkddk / ddkdk / ddkkk sound nice.
01:14:349 - ends with d corresponding to the bass, start the spinner 1/2 after the stream because the fading out already started.
The biggest problem is that you have to place your finishes with a unique logic, i.e. if you place finish on a similar sentence, place finish in similar sentences whenever possible.
Some hitsounds are nicely placed and I guess a bit more working is needed on the two insanes, good luck :3