thanks~

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

Thank you for the mod

I don't understand what you mean little stream. So no change >.<
But thank you for the mod

Request from queue~

[Easy]
00:20:514 (1) - Add finish on end?
00:50:925 (3) - Remove clap on end?

[Normal]
00:52:568 (5) - NC? To show that the beat has changed
01:05:719 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:11:473 (4) - NC here instead to show beat has changed
00:12:705 (5) - Maybe here too and your choice to remove or keep on 00:13:116 (1)
00:37:363 (5) - Move red point 2 grids up for better blanket.
00:39:007 (4) - NC for beat change
I feel that all 5-note streams can use lower spacing.

[S.S]
Hi star~ :>
00:16:404 (5) - Move first red point 3 grids up for better symmetry?
00:55:034 (6) - NC?
01:08:185 (6) - ^

[Yasora]
00:08:596 (2) - I feel this fits better on the next white tick
00:10:240 (2) - ^
00:28:527 (3,4) - Please add a note between these and move 4 to 00:28:733

Modded all 5 diffs because Star is a friend :>
GL~

thank you~

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

here comes my mod.

[S.S]
00:16:404 (5) - a little ugly to see
00:47:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - anti here not a ggod choice um.cause your higt sv
00:51:336 (2) - it's better not to hide it um
01:00:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:04:486 (2) - ^

[Yasora]
00:53:390 (6) - who about rhyme like this?
It seems that you can use more note to make changes.

Good map.

request from in-game

[overall]:

1. Fine

[Yasora]:

1. 00:08:493 (2) - doesn't fit music start slider 00:08:596 end is same
2. 00:10:137 (2) - ^ 00:10:240 end is same
3. 00:20:514 (4) - New combo
4. 00:41:062 (1) - Add whistle

[S.S]:

1. 00:14:760 (1) - end whistle
2. 00:15:993 (3) - whistle
3. last spinner volume I like Yasora diff Green line

[Hard]:

1. 00:11:781 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think Hard diff too Hard this suggestion change slider
2. 00:27:500 (9) - why slider waypoint have? maybe delete this also end finish

[Normal]:

1. Fine

[Easy]:

1. 01:06:541 (2) - Dont stack this easiest diff I dont like stack Beginner player too hard stack read
2. 01:13:938 (3) - ^
   

I like Accel world :3
Fight~

Modding from my queue.

Things that I think are important and need to be changed will be in red.
Things I think that are not necessary, but that I think make the map easier to read or more fun to play will be in blue.

Easy:

Normal:

Hard:

S.S:

Yasora diff seems like it will take a while, I'll come back and mod that one later when I have more time available.

So far good map, and good luck to you^^

thanks all

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

Thank you for the mod and the star guys. Fixed some

hello~:3

in game request.

General

I think credit yourself in creator's word is weird lol, i think no need to do that just guess diff's mapper is enough.

SS.

00:16:404 (5) - this shape is not perfect. just use only 1 red not 2.

00:28:938 (4,5) - ctrl r?
00:33:048 (2,3) - ctrl r?
00:47:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - at least new combo at 5 to warn player for split anti jump and non anti jump section
01:00:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:11:164 (4) - I guess this is overmap note . delete it or If you want to overmap you should add All 1/4 stream start form 01:10:651 (1) -
and end at 01:13:938 (1) -
01:13:938 (1) - Zigzag or curve slider suit more than straight slider


Yasora

00:42:294 (1,2) - NC 2 ?
01:13:938 (1) - extend this 1 return and use spinner same as SS diff?

Hard

00:31:610 (1,3) - how long you made this slider ? it look nice.but it's not perfect yet
to fix just delete 1 and copy 3 , ctrl H , rotate 90 anticlockwise , ctrl r , done.
01:06:336 (2,3) - why just note keep it circle at 2 and 3 start of slider?. even current is still not hard.
01:10:856 miss note?
01:13:938 (1) - i think this note no need to nc at all. it's very easy to read.

Normal

00:14:760 (1) - Curve slider more suit for soft vocal here.
01:10:240 add note

Easy

01:10:651 (2) - move 1 beat backward and add return then ctrl +r

Taiko

00:38:493 k?
01:13:425 k?

GL ranking.

Thank you for the mod regenz :3
Fixed some.
Hhe.. Don't worry about credit. Credit means the person that make that beatmap. So it including me. :3

And, Chata, thank you for the star, i will mod your map asap.

nothing fix in my diff ;_;
but thanks for mod /w\

[General]

Looks fine


[Easy]

No big problem


[Normal]

00:52:671-(4) move to x:256 y:88

00:52:568-(1) move to x:256 y:244

00:53:390-(2) ^


[Hard]

00:12:089-(2) move to x:256 y:168

00:12:397-(3) move to 00:12:294

00:12:705-(4) move to 00:12:603


[S.S]

Why the slider velocity is 2.50.

00:16:404-(5) a little ugly...

00:19:692-(5) ^


[Yasora]

00:21:644-(2) I think you don't need to start the slider on the blue line,
you can change the slider same as 00:21:336-(1)

00:30:993-(6) to 00:31:199-(1) you don't think this big jump is strange?

00:33:459-(2),00:33:664-(1),00:33:870-(2) correct the ds.

00:37:586-(1) change to a note and no newcombo.

00:37:774 to 00:37:979 change to a slider.

01:01:199-(4) ctrl R ?

I think this diff's ds are chaos, please think it again.

Thank you for the mod. :3

Twice wrote:

I think this diff's ds are chaos, please think it again.

play it lol just using 1.7x ds :p that's still playable~
thanks

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

[General]
Please change the MP3 to better one. My ears are bleeding...
Its volume was raised too much.


[Yasora]
00:21:233 (7) - Delete? This circle doesn't fit music.
00:34:486 (1,2) - Could you change the rhythm? They are really awkward.
00:36:130 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:938 (1) - Add whistles?


[S.S]
00:39:007 (5) - Should be NC. Spacing was changed from this time. Or you have to fix spacing next note. It seems very confused.


[Hard]
Fine


[Normal]
00:07:363 (4,5,6) - Maybe they are a bit hard for normal skilled player to read the rhythm.
00:12:089 - Delete this offset
01:05:719 (5) - NC to be consistent with 00:52:568 (1). You'd better move position, if you add NC.


[Easy]
Fine


Good luck ;D

As requested, mod starts 16:25

[General]

- The mp3 is way too loud or I'm getting a different mp3. I have my volume quite low so when I say it's loud, it's very loud. Notice no modder mentions this so I'm slightly confused. Also the mp3 is clipping by atleast 11 decibels http://puu.sh/tMIQ Audacity is pretty accurate so far for clipping and just incase, notice that I didn't check the box, allow clipping so that's why audacity suggestion -11.2 dB on volume because that is when the audio doesn't clip anymore.

Just wondering about the mp3, can't mod hitsound because of this. 16:32

[Easy]

01:04:486 (3) - Copy 01:03:664 (2) - , ctrl+J & R and paste it here?

Nothing significant to mention 16:36, 4 mins

[Normal]

+1 hp/od for nicer difficulty jump to Hard?

00:22:157 (2) - Even through I said I can't really mod hitsound, this part, it's really noticeable that you didn't put hitsound at begin, should put whistle for the piano imo.
00:27:089 (3) - Miss this the first time, how about 1/1 repeating slider instead (remove two repeat, extend by 1/1)?

Don't see anything here iether 16:41 5mins

[Hard]

- Stream is really questionable due to low slider velocity(spacing for me is one thing that help me read stream and due to low slider velocity, the notes are closer together so I find myself almost always hitting stream too early and the approach rate doesn't help - I find it hard to stream in ar 7)and Normal wasn't very difficult. Consider removing. *Put my volume slightly higher and I can read it better, but still consider removing the longer stream since I don't think having stream when Normal isn't very hard will be good for difficulty spread.

00:11:781 (1,2,3) - Not a really nice rhythm to hit and for a Hard, don't think you should do this. Consider repeating slider instead
00:21:130 (5) - To be honest, I expected to see a repeat here

Nothing else, I guess. 16:51, 10mins

[S.S.]

Don't see anything 16:54 3mins

Recheck:
00:03:253 (1) - Jump here?
00:04:692 (7,8,1) - ^
00:24:931 (1,2,3) - I cannot agree with following the drum here when the song here is more vocal prominent, map with streams instead.
00:28:733 (3) - Should do jump on here too if you do it on (5)
00:31:199 (1) - Consider jump here
00:32:842 (1) - Same as 00:28:733
00:35:308 (3) - ^
00:38:082 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:24:931


I like how you did the part at kiai time, but cannot agree with the part (mention in my mod) where you follow the drum at all. 17:05, 8mins

[Yasora]

00:57:500 (1) - Do this? http://puu.sh/tMTZ

The overall idea is good, but if you really want to use 1.7x distant snap, why not just increase slider velocity. When you do this, every time you use a slider, it feel like there is a pause in the song and leads to an unnatural feeling when you transit from hit circle to slider. I really think you should readjust the map to a higher slider velocity. 16:57. 3mins

Cannot star yet due to a few questionable stuff and mp3, mp3 really affect quality of my mod, maybe a recheck is needed if you think it's necessary. Kept track of how long I mod each diff because trying to be lazier, but I guess not very accurate for this beatmap due to mp3.

Good luck, minor edit to not overlap with ykcarrot's mod. End 17:09, 44mins, 5 diffs, tv size. Not accurate due to mp3 quality

The mp3 is too loud? Sorry then >.<
I have reduced the volume of the mp3 by now. Thank you for mentioning this.
And yes, thank you for the mod. Fixed some of ykcarrot mod and merchat mod

lowered the volume a bit :3

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Sekai's Taiko-Fly].osu

thanks all =3=

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

hi owo/

Easy
01:04:486 (3) - spacing
01:19:486 - use soft sound?
01:19:692 - why timing point here?

Normal
00:07:671 (5,6) - change to slider? difficult to beginners
00:31:199 (6) - nazi 1grid down
01:15:386 -timing point...

Hard
nothing big problem
but it's too hard by hard diff
maybe OD-1 and HP-1?

S.S
00:21:027 (9) - delete. Does not meet the rhythm
01:19:486 - use soft sound
Yasora
00:21:027 (5) - delete.
00:32:226 (4) - use1/2 slider?
00:35:000 (2) - delete and 00:35:205 -00:35:308 add note?

thank you for the mod and the star Laurier <3
Most of them are fixed :3

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General
fine.

[Easy]
fine.

[Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
really big distance for a normal diff....
00:04:075 (4,5,6) - like these, I think this is a little difficult for a normal diff, but maybe just me.
others fine.

[Hard]
fine.

[Yasora]
fine.

[S.S]
fine. but seems I see a lot of copy and paste during the KIAI =_=


already good enough for me. of course no kudosu for my useless mod plz. good luck!

Hi there

[Easy]
00:56:678 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu and hitbursts. It makes more hidden for beginners while gameplay
01:10:240 (2) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts. So it's confusing for beginners while gameplay


[Normal]
* AR +1?

00:07:363 (4,5,6) - I think this pattern would be difficult for beginners who play this diff. Try replace with slider that repeating slider is snap at blue tick
00:27:089 (3) - Having too much repeating slider can makes confuse for beginners about when the slider is end


[Hard]
00:13:733 (2) - A slider with too much repeating slider can be boring for players. Consider to split into two slider


[Yasora]
00:35:205 - Add note here?


That's all I can find

thanks~

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

Fixed most of them. Thank you for the mod guys

From my queue----

[General]
- Don't know if it's my illusion or not, I think that [Yasora] 's BG quality is not really good with some clear colour grids and poorly treated boundaries. If possible, change it into another BG image? Accel world related pictures are largely available on the web.
- I'll also suggest to compress the two BG with ~0.5MB a bit :3
- 500 audio lead-in would be probably nice.

[S.S]
00:11:781 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing of (3) looks odd and a bit misleading, just for reference: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/314267
00:14:555 - some suggestions here: The music is transisting to a softer pace and here the drum sound has been fading out. You can use S (90/100%) here instead of N.
00:16:404 (5) - any alternative choice to place the sliders? Maybe you can make (2) curving more or positioning lower so that (5) can curve around (3,4) symmetricially.
00:19:486 - Feel like a note would work well here as you didn't place 1/1 breaks nearby.
00:29:555 (1) - Just a bit suggestion: you can tweek (1) so that (1,3,4) are in eq. spacing apparently. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/314288
00:50:925 (1,2) - their end differs by more than 1 pixels so I think you can stack them well.
01:04:075 (1,2) - ^
some copy&paste stuff in kiai?

[Yasora]
00:32:842 (1) - you can make it symmetrical:

400,232,32842,6,0,B|352:204|348:152|356:100|424:80,1,180,2|8

00:35:411 - Add a note here?
00:43:527 (5,6,2) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 makes stuffs in more accurate spacing&symmetrical.
00:58:733 (5) - NC here instead of the next note since this is the opening of sentence and notify the 0.0x 1 beat spacing.
01:09:007 (1) - Just a little thought here - using 0.5x / 0.75x slider to make a sudden slowing down effect?

I like the way you balance between the deafult N clap and N:C2 clap. :3

[Hard]
00:14:555 - same as [SS] I would suggest a softer hitsound for this 1/2 beat interval.
01:13:527 (3) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 to make it symmetrical

[Normal]
00:39:829 (1) - For normal I think this slider is a bit short even though there's no space to extend it. (A 4-beat ones is the minimum length imo like the next spinner)

[Easy]
01:07:363 - Same as normal, this spinner would be possibly too short.
01:13:527 (2) - A clap here responding to (1) sounds nice.

[Taiko]
00:01:610 - This one starts at a higher tone so k is preferred. Corresponding to 00:04:897 - I think K sounds better.
00:20:514 - the triplet here sounds mistimed as the drum combo in the music starts after this one. Try d kkdkd
00:36:130 - add finish
00:48:048 - ddkkd (lol in combo colour it is ddk but in fact it is dkd
01:08:596 - the tone is going up so kkddk / ddkdk / ddkkk sound nice.
01:14:349 - ends with d corresponding to the bass, start the spinner 1/2 after the stream because the fading out already started.

The biggest problem is that you have to place your finishes with a unique logic, i.e. if you place finish on a similar sentence, place finish in similar sentences whenever possible.

Some hitsounds are nicely placed and I guess a bit more working is needed on the two insanes, good luck :3

Thank you for the mod wmf.
All fixed in my diff, but easy. >.<

thanks ugyu /w\
here, new background. just replace it

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

Hi ~ Miya ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions




That's all ~ Amazing song and mapset ~ take you star ~

Good luck with rank ~

Thanks Rika, umm. I don't think that rythim is weird because i follow the drum sound at the back,
an about 01:06:541 (3)- i have already extended to that time >.<

Waiting for Star and Yasora response

fixed all
thanks /w\

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

something fixed

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [S.S].osu

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]

1. There are two background files for Taiko in the folder. Keep only the correct one and full submit.
2. Since you're doing it anyway, I'd throw in more inherited points to make the volume decrease at the end more gradual.

[Easy]

1. Given that this has almost the same number of circles as sliders, I'd drop OD down to 1.

[Normal]

1. 00:33:253 (3) - Perhaps flip this vertically? We just went up with (2), don't wanna have to start with going up again with (3).
2. 01:02:431 (7) - NC here instead of 01:02:842 (1) -

[Hard]

1. 00:32:431 (3) - Blanket looked off when I was playing, and when I checked, it actually was. Move the anchor to x:404 y:169.
2. 01:05:719 (5) - NC here instead of 01:05:925 (1) -

[Yasora]

1. Diff name doesn't say very much about the overall diff. "Yasora's Insane" seems more fitting.
2. Plays smoothly. My only concern is the small spacing between 00:42:089 (5,1) - despite the sv change. I still think spacing should match 00:41:678 (4,5) - .

[S.S]

1. Again, diff name doesn't say very much about the overall diff.
2. 00:16:404 (5) - This slider doesn't look very nice, and the length serves no purpose, and because it's this length, you've neglected a possible object at 00:17:637 - .
3. 00:19:692 (5) - This slider doesn't look very nice either, but what's worse is that this is just art, and the anchors are not made to be mapped to anything.
4. 00:27:397 (6,7) - Transition in the stream looks untidy.
5. 00:38:699 (4,5,6,1) - Spacing makes it hard to hear rhythm.
6. 00:47:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This was bad in Dreadnought, and this is bad here.
7. 00:49:281 (1,2) - The way (2) has to jerk back before going forward is a bit unappealing. Apply whatever fix to this you see fit - maybe just a simple move to the left a few units
8. 00:55:856 (1) - And you've just copy and pasted this next Kiai section. The fact that it's a pitch higher than the last is enough reason that it should be more intense. Consider remapping it.

[Sekai's Taiko-Fly]

1. What's "-Fly" doing in the diff name?
2. Use slider velocity 1.40
3. 00:11:473 (2,3,4,1,2,1,1,2,3) - Use the 3/4 rhythm with mostly finishes instead; the way you have it mapped right now seems like you completely disregarded the awesome bass.
4. 00:13:938 (1,1,1) - Make this a 1/4 kdddkdddd.
5. 00:21:952 - k
6. 00:22:363 - k
7. 00:22:979 (1) - Make D
8. 00:23:185 - k
9. 00:23:596 - k
10. 00:23:699 - k
11. 00:23:801 (1) - Make d
12. 00:24:418 - d
13. 00:24:623 (1,1,2,1,1) - Again, use the 3/4 rhythm to map it to the bass.
14. 00:27:089 (1,1,1,2,1) - Fill this in with 1/4. I'd just use ddkdddk.
15. 00:31:199 (2,3) - Pretty empty...
16. 00:43:733 - You shouldn't have breaks like this, especially in the Kiai section.
17. 01:14:760 (1) - End the slider the same time as the other diffs.

Good luck :3

Fixed everything in normal and hard, but not in easy
Thank you for the mod~

Oh yes, maybe you have the older version, i have deleted the double taiko bg.

I think you are true about the name for my diff.
here and thanks

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora's Insane].osu

Your map is good. I couldn't find any suggestions on your map. Sorry!

STAR~