Redesignated wrote:

All right, what's with people asking me to mod their maps when the maps are already so dang good? s(o_o)z

Seriously, though, these were fun to play and check, ahaha. I really didn't see any problems, or anything. Even AI Mod was mostly quiet. (Which is surprising, considering how it never shuts up at me (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻) Awesome work!

Also I'm sorry this was such a pathetic mod (ﾟдﾟ) I just really can't find anything that isn't good. I can mod another song of yours, if you want.

Gabex3 wrote:

Hi, from my Modding Queue ~ ♥

[General]
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG♥ I love your map♥
IT'S RAINING CARROTS. ~

[Hard]
You changed the Kiai Mode time on the Normal, but you didn't on your Hard !
01:42:233 : Clap
01:43:171 : Clap

1. Uncheck Letterbox During Breaks for there's a video.
2. Your SliderMultiplier in all diffs are wrong, please fix them to integer (1.1 1.9 2.3) in .osu file manually. I suppose that's because u change the timing before.
3. Kiai time suggestion: 01:39:890 - 01:54:890

1. I'm sorry but i cannot understand what ur SB code aiming for.... there's no such a file called "failbackground.jpg", and more, due to there's video, a full screen image will make ur video completely invisible from the middle of the song. Please fix it if u really need a storyboard, or delete the .osb file (i suppose u needn't osb)

1. You must add approachcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png and reversearrow.png to your skin set for there's hitcircle.png already.

1. Generally, ur sliders are too "hard", try to make them more smooth? move middle-node to the centre, and tail-node in the centre of circle, and then dont make the middle-node out of the slider border (most cases).
2. 00:16:921 (2,3,4,5,6) - make it to be a star? it's not looked well now.
3. 00:21:140 (1) - this spinner is to sudden, i suppose it's better to change to a slider + note like 00:19:265 (1,2) - .
4. 00:19:265 (1,2) - ^
5. 02:09:890 - I suppose it's better to end ur map here

1. 00:08:366 - add a note here to make a triplet?
2. 00:41:530 (1) - the beat here is weird. i suppose it's better to make a note at 00:41:530 - , and then a reverse slider 00:41:765 - 00:42:233.
3. 00:48:327 (11) - NC ?
4. 01:46:686 (6) - move to next red line, and also move (7) to next blue line

1. 00:19:382 (2) - remove it?
2. 00:21:257 (2) - ^
3. 00:34:733 (2) - Ctrl+r?
4. 01:00:280 (8) - remove?
5. 01:16:452 (3,4,5) - not a good stack, recommend to move them away
6. 01:21:126 - spinner start from here
7. 01:23:015 - with HP7, u should have a break here

Gabex3 wrote:

Try to Re-Full Submit, because it's kinda laggy at the moment. '-' ...
http://puu.sh/iGB8

/fixed.

+

Recheck

/Don't Kudo this.

[Normal]

00:23:483 : Clap
00:23:952 : Delete Clap
00:24:421 : clap
00:24:890 : Delete Clap
01:32:390 : ^
01:32:858 : Clap
01:33:796 : ^
01:39:421 : ^
01:47:390 : Delete Clap
01:47:858 : Clap
01:48:327 : Delete Clap
01:48:796 : Clap
01:53:718 : Delete Clap
01:55:358 : Clap
01:56:296 : ^
01:57:233 : ^
01:58:171 : ^
01:59:108 : ^
02:00:046 : ^
02:00:983 : ^
02:01:921 : ^
02:02:858 : ^
02:03:796 : ^
02:04:733 : ^
02:05:671 : ^
02:06:608 : ^
02:07:546 : ^
02:09:890 : Finish. '-' !

Little Suggestion :

01:53:015 / 01:53:483 / 01:53:952 / 01:54:421 : Clap?
02:08:015 / 02:08:483 / 02:08:952 / 02:09:421 : ^

[Hard]

00:42:233 : Clap
00:47:858 : ^
00:51:608 : ^
01:38:483 : ^
01:39:421 : ^

[general]
02:06:141 - audio volume (minus 5) // normal 45 , Insane 40

[Normal]
00:19:266 (1,3) - clap of slider head (as 00:11:766 (1) 00:13:641 (3) 00:19:266 (1) 00:21:141 (3) )

00:38:016 (1) - overlap

01:54:891 (1) - finish

[Hard]
00:07:547 (9) - delete finish(00:07:547) ,add finish(00:08:016)

00:23:016 (1) - finish

01:08:016 (1) - ^

[Insane]
nothing

good luck

Regou wrote:

From my modding queue xD
[Hard]
00:06:844 (5,6,7) - Ctrl+r
01:37:312 (3) - (Nazi) 1 grid down
01:51:375 (7) - NC
01:52:078 (1) - Delete NC
01:52:078 (1) - NC
02:07:312 (1) - Delete NC
02:09:891 (1) - ^
[Easy]
00:51:141 (6) - NC?
01:06:141 (5) - ^

That's all, good luck!

Ayu wrote:

From my modding queue~ Digimon!! xD

[Normal]
00:04:266 - 00:08:016 - I think this is a bit too much linear, use a pattern here.
00:37:999 - 00:41:297 - Use a different pattern here~
00:50:203 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.
01:27:703 (6,7,8) - ^
01:28:641 (1) - Work on this slider
01:30:516 (3) - ^
01:37:078 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.
01:38:953 (8,9,10) - ^
01:42:703 (6,7) - Use spacing here
01:53:953 (6,7,8) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.

[Hard]
01:17:391 (4) - Blanket this slider~
Didn't encounter any other problems although I would say that there are some linear parts in it, overall the beatmap is good and you should go for ranked~

Mystica wrote:

[Easy]
Cause diff looks.just change the [E] and [N] Title seems fine

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[Normal] fixed
02:04:266 (3,4) - make them more beauty

[Hard]
01:08:016 - may consider to use 0.7x fits more.Now a little speed up ok


Sweet and cute song yeah.....Good map

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Hello

[Gabe's Easy]

OD-1

[Normal]

Fine

[Hard]

01:56:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it Symmetry like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/294724

[sewerty5's Insane]

00:23:016 (1) - Finish?
00:39:891 (1) - Finish at beginner

Sorry, I cannot find a lot of problems.
That all

Gabex3 wrote:

Thanks ^ c:
http://puu.sh/qh8j

1. Some unrankable stuff:
   

   1. omboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767
   2. reversearrow.png's dimensions must be exactly 128x128

2. Skin: Since you have hitcircleoverlay so I guess you also need to add a sliderball to fit with that.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:13:641 (4) - How about add a new combo here because a new stanza is starting from here.
   2. 00:53:953 (2) - (Design) I think it would be better if you can make it parallel this with slider (1)- like this:
      
      Suggestion

      
      You might need to adjust the spacing after change.
   3. 00:55:828 (4) - ^Same.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:05:203 (2) - Would you remove the finish sound? It doesn't fit with the music.You can hear that it doesn't have a accent here.
   2. 00:05:203 (2) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?To fit with the music.
   3. 00:07:078 (4) - ^Same.
   4. 00:22:078 (4) - This part is quite soft so I don't think a finish is appropriate here.Probably change it to soft-whistle instead of it? Or you can just remove the finish.
   5. 01:08:016 - 01:24:891 (x) - Please don't do this.Please increase the volume here.It near inaudibility, some bats and mats may not accept this.
   6. 01:13:523 (1) - This spinner off the beats, please move this spinner to 01:13:641 - and end at 01:15:516 - .It fits the music more.
   7. 01:19:266 (3) - Probably a new combo here to fit with the music.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 00:38:016 (1,2,3) - (Bad gameplay) Inconsistent spacing between (2) and (3)- .Please fix the spacing for a better gameplay!
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:11:766 (1) - (Design) Probably make this slider resemble to 00:13:641 (3) - ?It looks more beautiful imo.
   2. 00:36:141 (1) - I would remove this spinner if I were you because the vocal is still singing here.A spinner shouldn't appear here.I think some notes or slider may more suitable.
   3. 00:53:016 (1) - (Design) oh..This slider was a bit ugly.The curve of this slider seems unbalance for me.I would make it like this:
      
      Suggestion

      
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:19:266 (1) - Please remove the finish at the beginning of the slider.It doesn't fit the music, I can't hear a exact accent point from the music.
   2. 00:21:141 (3) - ^Same
   3. 01:21:141 (1) - How about reduce the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner and remove the whistle as well?

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 01:32:391 (1,2,3) - (Bad gameplay) I can see a inconsistent spacing between (1.2.3)- .I'm not sure are you do this deliberately, but I highly suggest to remove that to make a better game flow here.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:36:141 (1) - Because the vocal are still singing so I'm not recommend a spinner here.Probably map this part with a soft hitsounds?
   2. 00:46:453 (4) - Some design thing here.I would make this slider parallel with (1)-.It would look much better then now imo. But it is up to you.
   3. 01:04:500 (2,3,4) - A design thing here again.How about place these notes and slider like this, you need to adjust the spacing of 01:05:437 (5,6) - if you change it.
      
      Recommendation

      
   4. 01:06:141 (1) - Same as 00:46:453-
   5. 01:23:250 (x) - Please remove the break please.There is no point add a break when the last part has heavier HP.
   6. 01:46:453 (5,6,7) - I didn't know why you placed a triplets here.It doesn't fit the music.I suppose something like simple 1/2 is enough.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:21:141 (1) - How about change the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner? It sounds much better with the music.
   2. I would like to say.You can use more soft hitsounds in this difficulty.It fits some places in this song.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 01:31:453 (5) - (bad gameplay) This 1/4 jump causes a really bad flow during gameplay because tit is not really suitable here.
   2. 01:43:172 (8) - ^Same.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:19:500 (2,3,4) - Probably align these notes?I found that it may looks better if you do this.
   2. 00:32:391 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same.Check the grid snap.It may helps you.
   3. 01:23:250 (x) - Please remove the break please.There is no point add a break when the last part has heavier HP.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:07:312 (6) - How about remove the finish sound here.It doesn't fit with the music because there is no accent point.
   2. 00:07:547 (7) - ^Same.
   3. 00:08:016 (1) - Then you can try a finish sound here.
   4. 00:27:937 (6) - Again remove the finish.
   5. 01:08:016 - 01:24:891 (x) - Please don't do this.Please increase the volume here.It near inaudibility, some bats and mats may not accept this.
   6. 01:21:141 (1) - How about reduce the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner?

1. 00:36:141 (1) - This short spinner doesn't fit the music and plays really awkward here!I highly suggest removing this spinner and use a big don instead of it.
2. 01:14:812 (6) - How about change it to kat?
3. 01:54:422 (1) - Would you extand this spinner to 01:54:891 - ?

kanpakyin wrote:

Request is taken from my queue.A cute song indeed.

[Gabe's Easy]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:13:641 (4) - How about add a new combo here because a new stanza is starting from here. Well, I think it's useless to add a New Combo there, because if I do this one, I must do it for the other.
   2. 00:53:953 (2) - (Design) I think it would be better if you can make it parallel this with slider (1)- like this:
      
      Suggestion

      
      You might need to adjust the spacing after change. Done.
      v I have to finish these. v
   3. 00:55:828 (4) - ^Same.
   5. Hitsound
      (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
      
      1. 00:05:203 (2) - Would you remove the finish sound? It doesn't fit with the music.You can hear that it doesn't have a accent here.
      2. 00:05:203 (2) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?To fit with the music.
      3. 00:07:078 (4) - ^Same.
      4. 00:22:078 (4) - This part is quite soft so I don't think a finish is appropriate here.Probably change it to soft-whistle instead of it? Or you can just remove the finish.
      5. 01:08:016 - 01:24:891 (x) - Please don't do this.Please increase the volume here.It near inaudibility, some bats and mats may not accept this.
      6. 01:13:523 (1) - This spinner off the beats, please move this spinner to 01:13:641 - and end at 01:15:516 - .It fits the music more.
      7. 01:19:266 (3) - Probably a new combo here to fit with the music.
      Apart of these.It looks very nice overall!
      
      That's it!

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Touhou - Iosys Tewis Mapaku To Endless Wi PV .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84891
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Tewi's Mapaku To Endless Wi
Artist:IOSYS
Creator:eLtigreXXx
Version:Gabe's Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:sewerty5 Tewi Inaba pokedigi gabex3

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-100,"[IOSYS] Endless Tewi-Ma Park.flv"
0,0,"BG4.png"
//Break Periods
2,83216,83331
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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152,232,113016,1,0
80,168,113484,1,8
56,264,113953,1,0
152,232,114422,1,8
248,232,114891,5,4

Gabex3 wrote:

^ Oh god, I can't edit it...
WHYYY.

Here's the diff ._. : http://puu.sh/qASQ

Teddiursa wrote:

Hope it will get Bubbled soon o3o

those wrote:

[Teddiursa's Easy]
HP2. HP1 is just a giveaway.
00:44:578 (4) - x:286 y:139 for better spacing. Right now you're too close by 0.1x, which is a lot consider you're mapping at 0.9x spacing.

Good luck :3

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General] fixed
If you would like, you can delete all your bookmarks to decrease the size of your .osz file by a little since you won't be needing them by the time this gets put on the server.
Consider "usatei" in your tags, since you have "usa" and "tei" separately.
You may want to properly centre yor reversearrow.png; right now it doesn't sit in the centre of the slider circle, and you can see this during gameplay. BGs are really cute ;3
taiko_bg.png isn't either 1024x768 or 800x600. You should fix that.
AIBat says comboburst.png cannot be larger than 500x767. It is currently 2 pixels too wide.
Kiai Times are inconsistent across all diffs.

[Normal] ok
01:38:016 (6) - New combo here.

[Hard]
-

Good luck :3

Meow, thnx.

1. vivere
2. Mushishigami
3. Wiinter
4. SakiK
5. Livean
6. _HydeSama_
7. No_Gu
8. KayeSara
9. bossandy
10. kurohana
11. Kyouka sama
12. _none
13. Lucy-Kaede
14. [Te][Amo]
15. Kawayi Rika
16. Asgard
17. Gabex3
18. DJNightmare
19. Barney Stinson
20. Scorpiour
21. MMzz
22. l1106188
23. Roddie
24. SkyDevil
25. phonic
26. B2IN
27. -kevincela-
28. Byakugan249
29. DarknessAngel
30. CDFA
31. Regou
32. Ayu
33. Mystica
34. ertyukjh010
35. kanpakyin
36. those
37. Teddiursa

kanpakyin wrote:

[Poke's Taiko]

1. 00:36:141 (1) - This short spinner doesn't fit the music and plays really awkward here!I highly suggest removing this spinner and use a big don instead of it.
2. 01:14:812 (6) - How about change it to kat?
3. 01:54:422 (1) - Would you extand this spinner to 01:54:891 - ?

That's it!

1. 00:36:141 (1) - I prefer not to put a big don on it, but a short spinner really makes the beatmap strange. I decide to just change the spinner to a slider, because the vocal here is a long syllable.
2. 01:14:812 (6) - In my opinion, changing it to kat seems not really fits the rhythm.Done
3. 01:54:422 (1) - Done

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

[General]
not okay You mad?

[Easy]
00:15:516 (1,2,3) - make this symmetrical ><
01:00:516 (1,2) - this shape?
01:02:391 (3,4) - ^
01:08:953 (2) - not perfectly symmetrical
01:16:453 (1) - do NOT use this slider for SOFT part ;_; make softer slider :O
01:26:766 (3,4) - this and you can make it better like this
01:28:641 (1,2,3) - MUST be symmetrical Why MUST IT BE SYMMETRICAL?!
01:36:141 (1,2) - not this sliders ;_; same as above
01:56:297 (3,4,5) - kinda ugly sliders ;_;
02:08:953 (6) - flip horizontally and move to x256 y56

[Normal]
i guess better to rename diffs like Gabex3's Normall and Easy What you mean ? It's not because the Star level is just 0.01 more than Normal that my diff must be Normal.
Look @ Normal & Easy. Normal is most more harder than Easy !

so.. Star!

ay6859 wrote:

wow Gabe

Random mod

or request from my mod queue ?

General
Kiai Time doesn't same at every diff , please make it same . fixed
Gabex3's Easy

01:16:805 (x) - Useless inherited Point

01:17:039 (x) - ^

Normal

01:13:172 (2) - spacing D: done

01:30:047 (2) - ^ (too far from (1) ><) done

01:33:797 - ~ 01:39:422 - i think these parts are too hard to Normal ... all are notes >< hecho
well just a suggestion


Hard and Insane are fine ~

GL !

ay6859 wrote:

so hard by you or pokedigi ?

i think taiko by pokedigi ,so change "hard" to "taiko" in the Creator's Words .

ay6859 wrote:

wow Gabe Yes, I'm mean with my Bakari ♥

Random mod

or request from my mod queue ?

Gabex3's Easy

01:16:805 (x) - Useless inherited Point OMFG WAIT. I FORGOT TO PUT A SLIDER HERE. LOOOOOOOL.
01:17:039 (x) - ^

Gabe wrote:

Name change = Change the diff name ♥

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Nyaa~
You requested in my queue ~


[Normal]
- HP Drain Rate -1


[Hard]
- It's funny how you set distance spacing to 1.4 yet you space it as 1 xD
- HP Drain Rate +1
- Overall Difficulty +1
01:39:891 (1) - Place this where 01:38:484 (3) was.


Blehhh, this mod was useless. ;w;
Anyway, good luck and star !

And dont forget to change Gabe's name in creator's words ~

SliderBorder: 255,255,255

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Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Sorry for the delay.

[General]
* You seem to be missing the Slider Border code. You must have it to compliment your hitcircle skin set. Please add this under the [Colour] section:

SliderBorder: 255,255,255

Done
* I also noticed something else while fiddling around. The video offset is a tad late. Change it to -200ms please. Done

[Easy]

• 00:08:016 (1) - Add in a finish on this note to match with the music.
• 01:06:141 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note to match your combo pattern.
• 01:16:453 (2) - Manually add in a new combo on this slider. It's just a little combo bug.
• 01:08:953 (2,4,1) - These slider isn't really appealing visually. I recommend going with a normal arched slider:

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• 01:19:266 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how boxy this pattern is. I would change it to something more natural feeling, like this:

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Technically, nothing. It's just that at some points in the map it feels too linear and boxed. Re-arrange some of the notes and give it a more natural feel.

[Overall]

Pretty solid map set. Well balanced and plays well. Though I'm pretty disappointed because of the linear and boxy patterns. Try to smooth everything out and give it a natural feel.
Star for now, though no forums star. Should be good now. (:

Good luck.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Sorry for the delay.

[General]
* You seem to be missing the Slider Border code. You must have it to compliment your hitcircle skin set. Please add this under the [Colour] section:

SliderBorder: 255,255,255

done
* I also noticed something else while fiddling around. The video offset is a tad late. Change it to -200ms please. done

[Normal] done

• 00:41:766 (1,3) - Remove the awkward clap from the ends of these sliders. They don't really go with anything.
• 01:40:828 (3,4,6,7) - These stacks stop the flow in a weird/unnatural way. I also this it would fit the music better if you add in a note on 01:41:062 and 01:42:937 like this:

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[Overall]

Pretty solid map set. Well balanced and plays well. Though I'm pretty disappointed because of the linear and boxy patterns. Try to smooth everything out and give it a natural feel.
Star for now, though no forums star.

Good luck.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Sorry for the delay.

[Taiko]
* HP Drain, OD, and AR should be lowered to 5 (-2)

• 01:21:141 (1) - This spinner seems better when it ends on 01:23:016 -.
• 01:54:422 (1) - This spinner is way to short in my opinion. Get rid of it is what I say.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Gabe]
only thing to say, it'd be nice for there to be a break in here somewhere

[Normal]
a little light on the hitsounds throughout
Again, a break would be nice

[Hard]
00:18:797 (5,6) - D: you're evil lol. This is kind of hard to read - I had to play it 3x before i figured out where the missing note was
01:48:094 (3) - could you make this resemble the curve of 1 a little bit more, maybe c-v and rotate 1 to make it?
Again, a break you get the idea

[Taiko]
i only mod standard, sorry

[sewerty]
00:19:266 (1) - stack under the end of 9
Again, break

TBH this map is pretty much rankable as-is. I'd get a BAT on this asap.

1. A lo que agregaste un fail background, los botones de pausa y eso, deberias agregar tambien una imagen para pause-overlay.

• 
  I don't like very much sliders with 1 repeat such as 00:12:234 (2) and 00:14:109 (5) because this is a easy diff. I think that long sliders intead of short ones with repeat are more suitable.

1. 00:35:203 (2) - For some diversity with hitsounds, add a whistle here. Fits good with the vocals to me. All the diff sound very repetitive and boring only with claps and some finishes.
2. 00:37:078 (4) - ^
3. 00:57:703 (2) - ^
4. 00:59:578 (4) - ^
5. 01:05:203 (3) - ^
6. 01:07:078 (6) - ^
7. 01:27:703 (4) - ^ at the end and start of the slider.
8. 01:31:453 (4) - ^ at the end and start, not at the repeat.
9. 01:35:203 (6) - ^
10. 01:38:953 (5,6) - ^ Whistle to this 2 notes too.
11. 01:42:703 (4) - ^
12. 01:46:453 (2) - ^
13. 01:50:203 (4) - ^
14. 01:53:953 (5,6) - ^
    
    Pretty good diff. There's nothing that should be really changed here. It's fine as it is. I don't agree about so many short sliders with repeat, but that's just my personal opinion.

1. 01:23:016 - 5% de volumen en los samples es unrankable. Debes subirlo a 15% por lo menos (que es el mínimo aceptable).
   
   La verdad, no encontre nada que deba ser cambiado. Suena bien y se ve bien. Ya es rankeable tal cual está.

1. 00:07:547 (9) - Que tal si agregas un whistle aqui al comienzo del slider, pero al final no? También queda bien si le dejas whistle en el cuerpo del slider para que suene bien con el sonidito ese de fondo que se oye.
2. 01:23:016 - De nuevo el mismo problema con el volumen de samples.
3. 01:41:297 (1) - Este newcombo aqui no está bien en cuanto a tu pattern de combos. Como tus combos siguen la voz, deberías quitar este new combo y despues agregarselo a 01:41:531 (2).
4. 01:43:406 (5) - Lo mismo que arriba. Como cambia la voz, el new combo debería estar aqui así que agrega nc aqui y quita nc de 01:43:875 (1) para seguir siguiendo la voz.
5. 01:48:094 (1) - Este new combo es muy innecesario. Es además inconsistente con tus otros new combo. Te recomiendo que lo quites.
6. 01:50:906 (6) - Y, para seguir aun la voz, un nc aqui queda perfecto en mi opinión. Si haces esto, luego debes arreglar que en 01:51:844 (4) haya nc por consistencia y cambio de voz, y luego remover nc de 01:52:078 (1).
   
   No tengo ganas de escribir las sugerencias de whistle que le dije a Gabe en su Easy, pero checkea las que son desde el minuto 01:24:891 en adelante. Te sugiero todos esos whistles que le dije. En general la dificultad está muy bien. Solo tiene unos pequeños problemitas con new combos pero solo son detalles simples que se arreglan facil.

1. 00:07:547 (7) - Un whistle aqui suena bien con ese sonidito agudo de la canción.
2. 00:12:937 (7) - Agrega whistle en el comienzo y en el repeat. Suena muy bien con la canción y además da mas diversidad de hitsounds a tu dificultad.
3. 00:14:812 (7) - Whistles en el comienzo y final.
4. 01:23:016 - Unrankable 5% de volumen. Subilo a por lo menos 15%.~
5. 01:26:531 (10) - Agrega nc aqui y quita el nc en 01:26:766 (1) porque el cambio de voz se da en 01:26:531 (10), no en 01:26:766 (1).
6. 01:35:906 (9) - Nc aqui y quita el de 01:36:141 (1) por la misma razon que arriba.
7. 01:55:594 (6) - Nc aqui queda bien con la musica y para evitar combos largos.
   
   Muy buena diff en general~ No quiero escribir todas las sugerencias de whistle. De nuevo, fijate en lo que le puse a Gabe sobre whistles. Es exactamente lo mismo.

Kei wrote:

Hola! Modding in spanish as requested, but Gabe is from Canada so I'll mod his difficulty in English.

[General]

1. A lo que agregaste un fail background, los botones de pausa y eso, deberias agregar tambien una imagen para pause-overlay.

OK


[Normal] done

1. 01:23:016 - 5% de volumen en los samples es unrankable. Debes subirlo a 15% por lo menos (que es el mínimo aceptable).
   
   La verdad, no encontre nada que deba ser cambiado. Suena bien y se ve bien. Ya es rankeable tal cual está.

[Hard]

1. 00:07:547 (9) - Que tal si agregas un whistle aqui al comienzo del slider, pero al final no? También queda bien si le dejas whistle en el cuerpo del slider para que suene bien con el sonidito ese de fondo que se oye.ok
2. 01:23:016 - De nuevo el mismo problema con el volumen de samples.ok
3. 01:41:297 (1) - Este newcombo aqui no está bien en cuanto a tu pattern de combos. Como tus combos siguen la voz, deberías quitar este new combo y despues agregarselo a 01:41:531 (2).ok
4. 01:43:406 (5) - Lo mismo que arriba. Como cambia la voz, el new combo debería estar aqui así que agrega nc aqui y quita nc de 01:43:875 (1) para seguir siguiendo la voz.ok
5. 01:48:094 (1) - Este new combo es muy innecesario. Es además inconsistente con tus otros new combo. Te recomiendo que lo quites.ok
6. 01:50:906 (6) - Y, para seguir aun la voz, un nc aqui queda perfecto en mi opinión. Si haces esto, luego debes arreglar que en 01:51:844 (4) haya nc por consistencia y cambio de voz, y luego remover nc de 01:52:078 (1).ok
   
   No tengo ganas de escribir las sugerencias de whistle que le dije a Gabe en su Easy, pero checkea las que son desde el minuto 01:24:891 en adelante. Te sugiero todos esos whistles que le dije. En general la dificultad está muy bien. Solo tiene unos pequeños problemitas con new combos pero solo son detalles simples que se arreglan facil.

El mapa ya podria ser rankeado así como está. Espero que consigas un MAT pronto y lo rankees. Buena suerte!

Kei wrote:

Hola! Modding in spanish as requested, but Gabe is from Canada so I'll mod his difficulty in English.

[Gabe's Easy]

• 
  I don't like very much sliders with 1 repeat such as 00:12:234 (2) and 00:14:109 (5) because this is a easy diff. I think that long sliders intead of short ones with repeat are more suitable. Well, there's lots of Short and Reverse sliders, & I think it sounds better with them.

1. 00:35:203 (2) - For some diversity with hitsounds, add a whistle here. Fits good with the vocals to me. All the diff sound very repetitive and boring only with claps and some finishes. Sounds good.
2. 00:37:078 (4) - ^ For this one, I will say no. Because the song sounds more relax on this circle, so it's better with the finish.
3. 00:57:703 (2) - ^
4. 00:59:578 (4) - ^
5. 01:05:203 (3) - ^
6. 01:07:078 (6) - ^
7. 01:27:703 (4) - ^ at the end and start of the slider. Good v
8. 01:31:453 (4) - ^ at the end and start, not at the repeat.
9. 01:35:203 (6) - ^
10. 01:38:953 (5,6) - ^ Whistle to this 2 notes too.
11. 01:42:703 (4) - ^
12. 01:46:453 (2) - ^
13. 01:50:203 (4) - ^
14. 01:53:953 (5,6) - ^
    
    Pretty good diff. There's nothing that should be really changed here. It's fine as it is. I don't agree about so many short sliders with repeat, but that's just my personal opinion.

01:28:641 (1) Why didn't you put a "11" instead of starting a new combo ? This is a bit strange to start a combo here
01:30:281 (9) The combo could start here
01:56:531 (6) Same here

00:10:476 A note just between the 2 and the 3 could sound better ^^
01:04:031 Same here, a note here could sound good

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my Modding queue
Sorry for the little Nazi Modding, but it was hard to fine something wrong ^^"

sewerty5's Insane

01:28:641 (1) Why didn't you put a "11" instead of starting a new combo ? This is a bit strange to start a combo here
01:30:281 (9) The combo could start here
01:56:531 (6) Same here

Hard

00:10:476 A note just between the 2 and the 3 could sound better ^^ ok
01:04:031 Same here, a note here could sound good

The rest was good

As always: not that much, but it's always that ^^
Good luck with the ranking ^^

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my Modding queue
Sorry for the little Nazi Modding, but it was hard to fine something wrong ^^"

sewerty5's Insane

01:28:641 (1) Why didn't you put a "11" instead of starting a new combo ? This is a bit strange to start a combo here
01:30:281 (9) The combo could start here
01:56:531 (6) Same here

Hard

00:10:476 A note just between the 2 and the 3 could sound better ^^
01:04:031 Same here, a note here could sound good

The rest was good

As always: not that much, but it's always that ^^
Good luck with the ranking ^^

1. too much guest

1. 00:23:016 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - move up this pattern, far from 00:24:891 (1,2,3,4) -
2. 00:56:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern better similiar as 00:58:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
3. good stream and kickslider

• HARD
  
  

1. very fun hidden pattern, but some note not stacked beautiful
2. SPOILER

   

1. fine

1. fine

Leorda wrote:

Oh hi there

[Poke's Taiko]
00:36:131 (173) - I discuss with kanpakyin, and this short yellow slider are not recommended for taiko diff. So you have to change it right now
01:31:912 (50) - ^
01:46:912 (151) - ^

@Leo: Hey Leo, wait for me. I want to provide a mod to this map since looks interesting
@eltigre: Hoy cuando llegue a casa (dentro de unas 7 hs mas o menos) te hare un mod completo. Arregla lo que Leo menciono en su mod y mandame un PM o hablame in-game, despues de mi mod tenes libertad de llamar a Leo, ESPERAME PLEASE!!!

Hagamos esto

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

A lot of time without mention this kind of things about combos xD. I think that this mean that this difficulty is good enough

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340,236,88631,6,0,B|340:300|268:300,1,110.000000596046,0|8
176,264,89568,1,0
96,204,90037,1,8

Una muy buena dificultad tienes aqui

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Video,0,"[IOSYS] Endless Tewi-Ma Park.flv"

No hay mas nada que decir. Este map luce muy bien, muy buen trabajo has hecho, principalmente porque es tu primer map
Debo dejar Estrella y te deseo la mejor de las suertes con este map

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Poke's Taiko:]

--> Looking the difficulty of this Taiko, In my opinion deserves a Oni in the title. (Poke's Taiko Oni)
--> I don't like how to play the Video in this difficulty, doesn't work fine is a bit confuse at the hour to 'Click' on the notes. Remove this Line from the .osu Notepad to delete the Video in this difficulty (I also think that you need to do full submit but on another difficulty to don't have any problem with the 'Whitout Video' Link. For example, delete the Video and then you need to go to the Insane difficulty to do Full Submit)

Video,0,"[IOSYS] Endless Tewi-Ma Park.flv"

Mod Info:

d= don (Normal Hitsound)
k= kat/katsu (Clap/Whistle Hitsound)
D= Big Don (Finish Hitsound)
K= Big Kat/Katsu (Clap/Whistle + Finish Hitsound)

00:36:131 (173): Totally agree with Leo and KPY, this 1/2 Slider doesn't work fine on a Taiko Difficulty, is kinda 'weird' to do that when you are playing the map. To be sincere I think that works better a 3-plet, try with a kdd, this give a better flow in my opinion
01:31:912 (50): Again this Slider, in this case you can fix the problem just changing this Slider to a don here. Looking that it's a dense Taiko map, you can give a little break to the players on here, also I can listen this pause in the music
01:46:912 (151): Same as above, but in this case you can use a Big Don since the Vocal Stop is a bit higher

Nice, but Why you did not map to the end of the song? You have a nice rhythm to a Taiko map, really. You should consider that, but it's just an appreciation by me