ay6859 wrote:

wow Gabe

Random mod

or request from my mod queue ?

General
Kiai Time doesn't same at every diff , please make it same . fixed
Gabex3's Easy

01:16:805 (x) - Useless inherited Point

01:17:039 (x) - ^

Normal

01:13:172 (2) - spacing D: done

01:30:047 (2) - ^ (too far from (1) ><) done

01:33:797 - ~ 01:39:422 - i think these parts are too hard to Normal ... all are notes >< hecho
well just a suggestion


Hard and Insane are fine ~

GL !

ay6859 wrote:

so hard by you or pokedigi ?

i think taiko by pokedigi ,so change "hard" to "taiko" in the Creator's Words .

ay6859 wrote:

wow Gabe Yes, I'm mean with my Bakari ♥

Random mod

or request from my mod queue ?

Gabex3's Easy

01:16:805 (x) - Useless inherited Point OMFG WAIT. I FORGOT TO PUT A SLIDER HERE. LOOOOOOOL.
01:17:039 (x) - ^

Gabe wrote:

Name change = Change the diff name ♥

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Nyaa~
You requested in my queue ~


[Normal]
- HP Drain Rate -1


[Hard]
- It's funny how you set distance spacing to 1.4 yet you space it as 1 xD
- HP Drain Rate +1
- Overall Difficulty +1
01:39:891 (1) - Place this where 01:38:484 (3) was.


Blehhh, this mod was useless. ;w;
Anyway, good luck and star !

And dont forget to change Gabe's name in creator's words ~

SliderBorder: 255,255,255

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Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Sorry for the delay.

[General]
* You seem to be missing the Slider Border code. You must have it to compliment your hitcircle skin set. Please add this under the [Colour] section:

SliderBorder: 255,255,255

Done
* I also noticed something else while fiddling around. The video offset is a tad late. Change it to -200ms please. Done

[Easy]

• 00:08:016 (1) - Add in a finish on this note to match with the music.
• 01:06:141 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note to match your combo pattern.
• 01:16:453 (2) - Manually add in a new combo on this slider. It's just a little combo bug.
• 01:08:953 (2,4,1) - These slider isn't really appealing visually. I recommend going with a normal arched slider:

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• 01:19:266 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how boxy this pattern is. I would change it to something more natural feeling, like this:

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Technically, nothing. It's just that at some points in the map it feels too linear and boxed. Re-arrange some of the notes and give it a more natural feel.

[Overall]

Pretty solid map set. Well balanced and plays well. Though I'm pretty disappointed because of the linear and boxy patterns. Try to smooth everything out and give it a natural feel.
Star for now, though no forums star. Should be good now. (:

Good luck.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Sorry for the delay.

[General]
* You seem to be missing the Slider Border code. You must have it to compliment your hitcircle skin set. Please add this under the [Colour] section:

SliderBorder: 255,255,255

done
* I also noticed something else while fiddling around. The video offset is a tad late. Change it to -200ms please. done

[Normal] done

• 00:41:766 (1,3) - Remove the awkward clap from the ends of these sliders. They don't really go with anything.
• 01:40:828 (3,4,6,7) - These stacks stop the flow in a weird/unnatural way. I also this it would fit the music better if you add in a note on 01:41:062 and 01:42:937 like this:

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[Overall]

Pretty solid map set. Well balanced and plays well. Though I'm pretty disappointed because of the linear and boxy patterns. Try to smooth everything out and give it a natural feel.
Star for now, though no forums star.

Good luck.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Sorry for the delay.

[Taiko]
* HP Drain, OD, and AR should be lowered to 5 (-2)

• 01:21:141 (1) - This spinner seems better when it ends on 01:23:016 -.
• 01:54:422 (1) - This spinner is way to short in my opinion. Get rid of it is what I say.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Gabe]
only thing to say, it'd be nice for there to be a break in here somewhere

[Normal]
a little light on the hitsounds throughout
Again, a break would be nice

[Hard]
00:18:797 (5,6) - D: you're evil lol. This is kind of hard to read - I had to play it 3x before i figured out where the missing note was
01:48:094 (3) - could you make this resemble the curve of 1 a little bit more, maybe c-v and rotate 1 to make it?
Again, a break you get the idea

[Taiko]
i only mod standard, sorry

[sewerty]
00:19:266 (1) - stack under the end of 9
Again, break

TBH this map is pretty much rankable as-is. I'd get a BAT on this asap.

1. A lo que agregaste un fail background, los botones de pausa y eso, deberias agregar tambien una imagen para pause-overlay.

• 
  I don't like very much sliders with 1 repeat such as 00:12:234 (2) and 00:14:109 (5) because this is a easy diff. I think that long sliders intead of short ones with repeat are more suitable.

1. 00:35:203 (2) - For some diversity with hitsounds, add a whistle here. Fits good with the vocals to me. All the diff sound very repetitive and boring only with claps and some finishes.
2. 00:37:078 (4) - ^
3. 00:57:703 (2) - ^
4. 00:59:578 (4) - ^
5. 01:05:203 (3) - ^
6. 01:07:078 (6) - ^
7. 01:27:703 (4) - ^ at the end and start of the slider.
8. 01:31:453 (4) - ^ at the end and start, not at the repeat.
9. 01:35:203 (6) - ^
10. 01:38:953 (5,6) - ^ Whistle to this 2 notes too.
11. 01:42:703 (4) - ^
12. 01:46:453 (2) - ^
13. 01:50:203 (4) - ^
14. 01:53:953 (5,6) - ^
    
    Pretty good diff. There's nothing that should be really changed here. It's fine as it is. I don't agree about so many short sliders with repeat, but that's just my personal opinion.

1. 01:23:016 - 5% de volumen en los samples es unrankable. Debes subirlo a 15% por lo menos (que es el mínimo aceptable).
   
   La verdad, no encontre nada que deba ser cambiado. Suena bien y se ve bien. Ya es rankeable tal cual está.

1. 00:07:547 (9) - Que tal si agregas un whistle aqui al comienzo del slider, pero al final no? También queda bien si le dejas whistle en el cuerpo del slider para que suene bien con el sonidito ese de fondo que se oye.
2. 01:23:016 - De nuevo el mismo problema con el volumen de samples.
3. 01:41:297 (1) - Este newcombo aqui no está bien en cuanto a tu pattern de combos. Como tus combos siguen la voz, deberías quitar este new combo y despues agregarselo a 01:41:531 (2).
4. 01:43:406 (5) - Lo mismo que arriba. Como cambia la voz, el new combo debería estar aqui así que agrega nc aqui y quita nc de 01:43:875 (1) para seguir siguiendo la voz.
5. 01:48:094 (1) - Este new combo es muy innecesario. Es además inconsistente con tus otros new combo. Te recomiendo que lo quites.
6. 01:50:906 (6) - Y, para seguir aun la voz, un nc aqui queda perfecto en mi opinión. Si haces esto, luego debes arreglar que en 01:51:844 (4) haya nc por consistencia y cambio de voz, y luego remover nc de 01:52:078 (1).
   
   No tengo ganas de escribir las sugerencias de whistle que le dije a Gabe en su Easy, pero checkea las que son desde el minuto 01:24:891 en adelante. Te sugiero todos esos whistles que le dije. En general la dificultad está muy bien. Solo tiene unos pequeños problemitas con new combos pero solo son detalles simples que se arreglan facil.

1. 00:07:547 (7) - Un whistle aqui suena bien con ese sonidito agudo de la canción.
2. 00:12:937 (7) - Agrega whistle en el comienzo y en el repeat. Suena muy bien con la canción y además da mas diversidad de hitsounds a tu dificultad.
3. 00:14:812 (7) - Whistles en el comienzo y final.
4. 01:23:016 - Unrankable 5% de volumen. Subilo a por lo menos 15%.~
5. 01:26:531 (10) - Agrega nc aqui y quita el nc en 01:26:766 (1) porque el cambio de voz se da en 01:26:531 (10), no en 01:26:766 (1).
6. 01:35:906 (9) - Nc aqui y quita el de 01:36:141 (1) por la misma razon que arriba.
7. 01:55:594 (6) - Nc aqui queda bien con la musica y para evitar combos largos.
   
   Muy buena diff en general~ No quiero escribir todas las sugerencias de whistle. De nuevo, fijate en lo que le puse a Gabe sobre whistles. Es exactamente lo mismo.

Kei wrote:

Hola! Modding in spanish as requested, but Gabe is from Canada so I'll mod his difficulty in English.

[General]

1. A lo que agregaste un fail background, los botones de pausa y eso, deberias agregar tambien una imagen para pause-overlay.

OK


[Normal] done

1. 01:23:016 - 5% de volumen en los samples es unrankable. Debes subirlo a 15% por lo menos (que es el mínimo aceptable).
   
   La verdad, no encontre nada que deba ser cambiado. Suena bien y se ve bien. Ya es rankeable tal cual está.

[Hard]

1. 00:07:547 (9) - Que tal si agregas un whistle aqui al comienzo del slider, pero al final no? También queda bien si le dejas whistle en el cuerpo del slider para que suene bien con el sonidito ese de fondo que se oye.ok
2. 01:23:016 - De nuevo el mismo problema con el volumen de samples.ok
3. 01:41:297 (1) - Este newcombo aqui no está bien en cuanto a tu pattern de combos. Como tus combos siguen la voz, deberías quitar este new combo y despues agregarselo a 01:41:531 (2).ok
4. 01:43:406 (5) - Lo mismo que arriba. Como cambia la voz, el new combo debería estar aqui así que agrega nc aqui y quita nc de 01:43:875 (1) para seguir siguiendo la voz.ok
5. 01:48:094 (1) - Este new combo es muy innecesario. Es además inconsistente con tus otros new combo. Te recomiendo que lo quites.ok
6. 01:50:906 (6) - Y, para seguir aun la voz, un nc aqui queda perfecto en mi opinión. Si haces esto, luego debes arreglar que en 01:51:844 (4) haya nc por consistencia y cambio de voz, y luego remover nc de 01:52:078 (1).ok
   
   No tengo ganas de escribir las sugerencias de whistle que le dije a Gabe en su Easy, pero checkea las que son desde el minuto 01:24:891 en adelante. Te sugiero todos esos whistles que le dije. En general la dificultad está muy bien. Solo tiene unos pequeños problemitas con new combos pero solo son detalles simples que se arreglan facil.

El mapa ya podria ser rankeado así como está. Espero que consigas un MAT pronto y lo rankees. Buena suerte!

Kei wrote:

Hola! Modding in spanish as requested, but Gabe is from Canada so I'll mod his difficulty in English.

[Gabe's Easy]

• 
  I don't like very much sliders with 1 repeat such as 00:12:234 (2) and 00:14:109 (5) because this is a easy diff. I think that long sliders intead of short ones with repeat are more suitable. Well, there's lots of Short and Reverse sliders, & I think it sounds better with them.

1. 00:35:203 (2) - For some diversity with hitsounds, add a whistle here. Fits good with the vocals to me. All the diff sound very repetitive and boring only with claps and some finishes. Sounds good.
2. 00:37:078 (4) - ^ For this one, I will say no. Because the song sounds more relax on this circle, so it's better with the finish.
3. 00:57:703 (2) - ^
4. 00:59:578 (4) - ^
5. 01:05:203 (3) - ^
6. 01:07:078 (6) - ^
7. 01:27:703 (4) - ^ at the end and start of the slider. Good v
8. 01:31:453 (4) - ^ at the end and start, not at the repeat.
9. 01:35:203 (6) - ^
10. 01:38:953 (5,6) - ^ Whistle to this 2 notes too.
11. 01:42:703 (4) - ^
12. 01:46:453 (2) - ^
13. 01:50:203 (4) - ^
14. 01:53:953 (5,6) - ^
    
    Pretty good diff. There's nothing that should be really changed here. It's fine as it is. I don't agree about so many short sliders with repeat, but that's just my personal opinion.

01:28:641 (1) Why didn't you put a "11" instead of starting a new combo ? This is a bit strange to start a combo here
01:30:281 (9) The combo could start here
01:56:531 (6) Same here

00:10:476 A note just between the 2 and the 3 could sound better ^^
01:04:031 Same here, a note here could sound good

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my Modding queue
Sorry for the little Nazi Modding, but it was hard to fine something wrong ^^"

sewerty5's Insane

01:28:641 (1) Why didn't you put a "11" instead of starting a new combo ? This is a bit strange to start a combo here
01:30:281 (9) The combo could start here
01:56:531 (6) Same here

Hard

00:10:476 A note just between the 2 and the 3 could sound better ^^ ok
01:04:031 Same here, a note here could sound good

The rest was good

As always: not that much, but it's always that ^^
Good luck with the ranking ^^

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my Modding queue
Sorry for the little Nazi Modding, but it was hard to fine something wrong ^^"

sewerty5's Insane

01:28:641 (1) Why didn't you put a "11" instead of starting a new combo ? This is a bit strange to start a combo here
01:30:281 (9) The combo could start here
01:56:531 (6) Same here

Hard

00:10:476 A note just between the 2 and the 3 could sound better ^^
01:04:031 Same here, a note here could sound good

The rest was good

As always: not that much, but it's always that ^^
Good luck with the ranking ^^

1. too much guest

1. 00:23:016 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - move up this pattern, far from 00:24:891 (1,2,3,4) -
2. 00:56:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern better similiar as 00:58:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
3. good stream and kickslider

• HARD
  
  

1. very fun hidden pattern, but some note not stacked beautiful
2. SPOILER

   

1. fine

1. fine

Leorda wrote:

Oh hi there

[Poke's Taiko]
00:36:131 (173) - I discuss with kanpakyin, and this short yellow slider are not recommended for taiko diff. So you have to change it right now
01:31:912 (50) - ^
01:46:912 (151) - ^

@Leo: Hey Leo, wait for me. I want to provide a mod to this map since looks interesting
@eltigre: Hoy cuando llegue a casa (dentro de unas 7 hs mas o menos) te hare un mod completo. Arregla lo que Leo menciono en su mod y mandame un PM o hablame in-game, despues de mi mod tenes libertad de llamar a Leo, ESPERAME PLEASE!!!

Hagamos esto

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

A lot of time without mention this kind of things about combos xD. I think that this mean that this difficulty is good enough

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340,236,88631,6,0,B|340:300|268:300,1,110.000000596046,0|8
176,264,89568,1,0
96,204,90037,1,8

Una muy buena dificultad tienes aqui

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Video,0,"[IOSYS] Endless Tewi-Ma Park.flv"

No hay mas nada que decir. Este map luce muy bien, muy buen trabajo has hecho, principalmente porque es tu primer map
Debo dejar Estrella y te deseo la mejor de las suertes con este map

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Poke's Taiko:]

--> Looking the difficulty of this Taiko, In my opinion deserves a Oni in the title. (Poke's Taiko Oni)
--> I don't like how to play the Video in this difficulty, doesn't work fine is a bit confuse at the hour to 'Click' on the notes. Remove this Line from the .osu Notepad to delete the Video in this difficulty (I also think that you need to do full submit but on another difficulty to don't have any problem with the 'Whitout Video' Link. For example, delete the Video and then you need to go to the Insane difficulty to do Full Submit)

Video,0,"[IOSYS] Endless Tewi-Ma Park.flv"

Mod Info:

d= don (Normal Hitsound)
k= kat/katsu (Clap/Whistle Hitsound)
D= Big Don (Finish Hitsound)
K= Big Kat/Katsu (Clap/Whistle + Finish Hitsound)

00:36:131 (173): Totally agree with Leo and KPY, this 1/2 Slider doesn't work fine on a Taiko Difficulty, is kinda 'weird' to do that when you are playing the map. To be sincere I think that works better a 3-plet, try with a kdd, this give a better flow in my opinion
01:31:912 (50): Again this Slider, in this case you can fix the problem just changing this Slider to a don here. Looking that it's a dense Taiko map, you can give a little break to the players on here, also I can listen this pause in the music
01:46:912 (151): Same as above, but in this case you can use a Big Don since the Vocal Stop is a bit higher

Nice, but Why you did not map to the end of the song? You have a nice rhythm to a Taiko map, really. You should consider that, but it's just an appreciation by me

Leorda wrote:

I and eLtigreXXx did discuss about title song, and he fixed the title for correction. No kds

Bubbled

P.S. I would like to hunt Tewi for my lunch.....

eLtigreXXx wrote:

;^;

fixed

228,272,107381,6,0,B|200:228|228:180,1,90,4|0
296,228,107849,1,8
368,192,108084,2,0,B|392:240|360:292,2,90

Chewin wrote:

Hi, from my queue :3

[General]
taiko_bg.png is 875x767. You should to use one 800x600, 1024x768 ok
What about to rename the insane diff in "sewerty5's Lunatic"?

[Normal]
k

[Hard] all done
00:11:756 (6) - NC here and remove from 00:11:990 (1) for consistency
01:47:381 (1,2,3) - Improve this blanket plz: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/366416

228,272,107381,6,0,B|200:228|228:180,1,90,4|0
296,228,107849,1,8
368,192,108084,2,0,B|392:240|360:292,2,90

01:53:943 (1) - Remove NC
01:59:099 (2) - Improve the overlap
02:06:131 (5) - NC here and remove from 02:07:302 (1)

[sewerty5's Insane]
00:38:943 (9) - New combo
00:46:443 (6) - ^
00:53:943 (5) - ^

lolmap

Good luck with rebubble and rank :3