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IOSYS - Endless Tewi-ma Park [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 16 de octubre de 2012 at 12:51:30 p.m.

Artist: IOSYS
Title: Endless Tewi-ma Park
Source: Touhou
Tags: sewerty5 pokedigi Gabe Tewi Inaba usatei Tei ARM Toromi Reitaisai
BPM: 128
Filesize: 19419kb
Play Time: 02:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Gabe's Easy (1.89 stars, 121 notes)
  2. Hard (4.84 stars, 329 notes)
  3. Normal (2.94 stars, 164 notes)
  4. Poke's Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 714 notes)
  5. sewerty5's Insane (5 stars, 495 notes)
Download: IOSYS - Endless Tewi-ma Park
Download: IOSYS - Endless Tewi-ma Park (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my first betma :3 please re dowload added objects

skin by me

http://www.iosysos.com/


Easy by Gabe
Normal by me
Hard by me
Insane by sewerty5
Poke's Taiko Oni by pokedigi

Thanks happy30 for a better quality video

List of Mods.

SPOILER
  1. vivere
  2. Mushishigami
  3. Wiinter
  4. SakiK
  5. Livean
  6. _HydeSama_
  7. No_Gu
  8. KayeSara
  9. bossandy
  10. kurohana
  11. Kyouka sama
  12. _none
  13. Lucy-Kaede
  14. [Te][Amo]
  15. Kawayi Rika
  16. Asgard
  17. Gabex3
  18. DJNightmare
  19. Barney Stinson
  20. Scorpiour
  21. MMzz
  22. l1106188
  23. Roddie
  24. SkyDevil
  25. phonic
  26. B2IN
  27. -kevincela-
  28. Byakugan249
  29. DarknessAngel
  30. CDFA
  31. Regou
  32. Ayu
  33. Mystica
  34. ertyukjh010
  35. kanpakyin mod and taiko mod
  36. Teddiursa
  37. those
  38. Kurosanyan
  39. -Bakari-
  40. Flask
  41. xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
  42. Kiddo-Kun mod and taiko mod
  43. Saturos-fangirl
  44. Kei
  45. JudgeTheDude
  46. zeroclover
  47. Leorda mod an taiko mod
  48. mancusojuanmattos mod and taiko mod
  49. ikari_kyon
  50. CDFA
  51. Eirene
  52. Lizbeth
  53. Yasora
  54. Kitsunemimi
  55. Katty Pie
  56. DakeDekaane
vivere
Timing:

BPM: 128,000
Offset: 4.367


Luego de eso ve a Tming > Resnap All Notes

Suerte. :)

Edit: Olvide decirte que ese timing tiene que ir en las dos diffs.

Dejo star :)
Mushishigami
Hello there!

I like the song, so i'll try to help a little!

Easy:

-Just try not to break the tempo like you did at 00:16:997 or 00:39:028
-Maybe try to change the end pattern (like add a beat here and there..)

Hard:

I don't know if the actual part is supposed to be finished, but anyway...
-Some beats are not placed well, like 1/2/3 of the first combo (if you take 4 as the reference), 00:06:216 too close of the next beat, 0:17:231 with 6/7...
-Fast beats like at 00:09:262 should be spaced out like at 00:13:950
-00:20:278 first beat of each same pattern should be placed elsewhere till the others beats represent the "Tei tei!" :D


Hope you will continue this!

And i also hope you understand my english :D

te-tetete-tei! :!:
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
c:
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

Mushishigami wrote:

Hello there!

I like the song, so i'll try to help a little!

Easy:

-Just try not to break the tempo like you did at 00:16:997 or 00:39:028
-Maybe try to change the end pattern (like add a beat here and there..)

Hard:

I don't know if the actual part is supposed to be finished, but anyway...
-Some beats are not placed well, like 1/2/3 of the first combo (if you take 4 as the reference), 00:06:216 too close of the next beat, 0:17:231 with 6/7...
-Fast beats like at 00:09:262 should be spaced out like at 00:13:950
-00:20:278 first beat of each same pattern should be placed elsewhere till the others beats represent the "Tei tei!" :D


Hope you will continue this!

And i also hope you understand my english :D

te-tetete-tei! :!:

Thanks :)
nimi
Hey, modding as requested~

General
this song's bpm is definitely not 256 x.x and i don't see a reason to double the bpm in this case
shouldn't the source be Touhou?
your bg is on the wrong size D: (yeah, only one px) i resized it for you, if you want to use the file~ http://puu.sh/cDJC oh, and don't forget to make a full sub :)

[Easy]
the spacing in this diff is irregular D: you must use a regular spacing in easy diffs.
ignoring the spacing issues:
00:35:981 - unecessary break
00:50:512 (6) - new combo
01:07:856 - almost 20 seconds on a break? >< it's way too much.
uh, so much copy-pasting in this diff. i know lazy diffs are kinda boring to map, but srsly.. x_x

[Hard]
again, so much copy-pasted patterns and irregular spacing x.x make it more consistent
00:19:341 (2,3) - make this instead http://puu.sh/cDOG ?
00:21:216 (1,2) - something similar to the previous suggestion
00:44:184 (9) - new combo
01:05:278 (x) - add a note here?
01:28:716 (6) - new combo
01:47:466 (11) - ^
01:54:028 (7) - ^

[Hyde's Insane]
00:08:091 (2) - new combo?
00:21:919 (3) - stack properly with the end of 00:21:216 (1)
00:28:012 (1) - remove whistle? ._.
00:29:887 (1) - ^
00:46:528 (4) - stack properly with the end of 00:45:942 (2)
01:04:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - i know that ar makes it easier but those antijumps are kinda hard to read
01:06:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:14:770 - unecessary break

that's all. good luck with this mapset :)
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
Thanks for your help C:
SakiK
hi~ from modque

[general]
source is Touhou
delete tag touhou all diff

[Easy]
00:20:747 (5) -clap
00:21:216 (1) - add spinner 00:21:216 -00:22:622
00:35:747 (2) - ^
00:38:091 (1,2,3,4) - add clap end of sliders
00:43:247 (2) - clap
00:45:122 (4) - ^
00:45:591 (1,2,3,4) - add clap end of sliders
00:49:809 (6) - clap
00:50:747 (2) - ^
00:51:216 (3) - add clap reverse point
00:52:622 (1) - clap and 1grid right
00:53:091 (2) - add clap end of sliders
00:54:497 (4) - clap
00:54:966 (1) - add clap end of sliders
00:56:372 (3) - clap
00:58:247 (2) - ^
01:00:122 (2) - ^
01:01:059 (1) - ^
01:01:997 (3) - ^
01:02:466 (4) - add clap reverse point
01:04:809 (6) - clap
01:05:747 (2) - ^
01:06:216 (3) - add clap reverse point
01:15:591 (4) - finish
01:20:747 (1) - add circle here and move spinner01:21:216 (1) - here
01:26:372 (4) - add clap starting slider
01:27:309 (5) - clap
01:30:122 (2) - ^
01:52:622 (3) - ^
01:54:966 add circle

00:17:934 (1) - rm NC
00:19:341 (4) - NC
01:00:591 (3) - NC and Rm NC 01:01:059 (1) -
01:16:528 (5) - NC
01:31:997 (1) - Rm NC
01:32:466 (2) - NC
01:34:809 (1) - Rm NC
01:35:747 (1) - ^
01:36:216 (2) - NC
01:43:716 (5) - ^
01:49:809 (1) - Rm NC

[Hard]
00:05:278 (3) - stack 00:04:341 (1) -
00:17:466 (5) - NC
00:18:403 (1) - Rm NC
00:19:341 (2) - NC
00:28:716 (5) - ^
00:32:466 (7) - ^
00:36:098 (1) - move 00:36:216
00:43:716 (6) - NC
00:44:419 (1) - Rm NC
00:47:466 (7) - NC
00:51:216 (1) - stack 00:50:747 (4) -
00:56:841 (6) - NC
01:15:591 (6) - finish
01:30:591 (6) - NC
01:33:637 (5) - stack 01:33:169 (3) -
01:38:091 (6) - NC
01:43:950 (7) - ^
01:45:825 (4) - ^
01:51:919 (9) - stack 01:51:450 (7) -

that's all. fight~
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

SakiK wrote:

hi~ from modque

[general]
source is Touhou
delete tag touhou all diff

[Easy]
00:20:747 (5) -clap
00:21:216 (1) - add spinner 00:21:216 -00:22:622
00:35:747 (2) - ^
00:38:091 (1,2,3,4) - add clap end of sliders
00:43:247 (2) - clap
00:45:122 (4) - ^
00:45:591 (1,2,3,4) - add clap end of sliders
00:49:809 (6) - clap
00:50:747 (2) - ^
00:51:216 (3) - add clap reverse point
00:52:622 (1) - clap and 1grid right
00:53:091 (2) - add clap end of sliders
00:54:497 (4) - clap
00:54:966 (1) - add clap end of sliders
00:56:372 (3) - clap
00:58:247 (2) - ^
01:00:122 (2) - ^
01:01:059 (1) - ^
01:01:997 (3) - ^
01:02:466 (4) - add clap reverse point
01:04:809 (6) - clap
01:05:747 (2) - ^
01:06:216 (3) - add clap reverse point
01:15:591 (4) - finish
01:20:747 (1) - add circle here and move spinner01:21:216 (1) - here
01:26:372 (4) - add clap starting slider
01:27:309 (5) - clap
01:30:122 (2) - ^
01:52:622 (3) - ^
01:54:966 add circle

00:17:934 (1) - rm NC
00:19:341 (4) - NC
01:00:591 (3) - NC and Rm NC 01:01:059 (1) -
01:16:528 (5) - NC
01:31:997 (1) - Rm NC
01:32:466 (2) - NC
01:34:809 (1) - Rm NC
01:35:747 (1) - ^
01:36:216 (2) - NC
01:43:716 (5) - ^
01:49:809 (1) - Rm NC

[Hard]
00:05:278 (3) - stack 00:04:341 (1) -
00:17:466 (5) - NC
00:18:403 (1) - Rm NC
00:19:341 (2) - NC
00:28:716 (5) - ^
00:32:466 (7) - ^
00:36:098 (1) - move 00:36:216
00:43:716 (6) - NC
00:44:419 (1) - Rm NC
00:47:466 (7) - NC
00:51:216 (1) - stack 00:50:747 (4) -
00:56:841 (6) - NC
01:15:591 (6) - finish
01:30:591 (6) - NC
01:33:637 (5) - stack 01:33:169 (3) -
01:38:091 (6) - NC
01:43:950 (7) - ^
01:45:825 (4) - ^
01:51:919 (9) - stack 01:51:450 (7) -

that's all. fight~
Thanks C:
Livean
Theliveanddead's MOD
Como tu lo pediste aquí tienes hehehe disculpame que no te haya hecho la hard pero me modearon el map y tenia que aplicar los cambios lo antes posible si puedo te modeo la hard mañana
General:
SPOILER
La easy parece mas una normal que una easy te recomiendo que le cambies el nombre por Normal de resto veo que te esforzaste bastante aquí va mi mod pss
Recuerda que todos los mods son opcionales no es necesario que los tomes todos y las imágenes son meras recomendaciones o ejemplos tu puedes colocar tu map como tu quieras

Easy:
SPOILER
Como te dije esta diff debe llamarse Normal en ves de Easy…
00:09:497 (1) – acomoda este slider que quede asi http://puu.sh/cW0w
00:10:903 (1,2,3) – estas tres muévelas y el slider muévelo de esta forma algo como esto http://puu.sh/cW1R
00:13:247 (2) – que tal así http://puu.sh/cW2A así hace juego con el anterior
00:15:122 (4) – este 4 bájalo unos cuantos grids para que haga juego con el 2 anterior
00:15:591 (1) – has que este slider quede curvo alrededor del 4 anterior y dale overslap al 2 siguiente sobre el 4 anterior algo así http://puu.sh/cW40
00:24:497 (4) – has que este slider quede curvo con respecto a las notas siguientes asi http://puu.sh/cW52
00:30:591 (8) – has que quede curvo con respecto al 7 y has overslap y new combo con el 9 y que quede algo así http://puu.sh/cW6N
00:38:091 (1) – si lo vas a hacer recto hazlo recto, quita los vectores que no están haciendo nada si quieres hacer un “nudo” se usan es puntos rojos no blancos
00:45:591 (1,2) – que tal así? http://puu.sh/cW8k 00:47:466 (3,4) de la misma manera
00:50:512 (1) – quita este new combo pon una nota aquí 00:50:278 y pones el new combo aquí
00:54:966 (1,2) – podrían quedar así http://puu.sh/cWb6 .... Es que te soy sincero este map está demasiado moe como para colocarle solo sliders rectos… XD
01:13:247 (5, 6,7) – creo que quedaría mejor así http://puu.sh/cWoO
01:26:372 (4) – arregla este que quede curvo con respecto al 5
01:41:372 (1) – esta es similar al primer hit de todo el map? Si si lo es pss ya sabes que hacer XD arregla ese slider
01:47:466 (5) – que quede curvo con respecto al 6 podria ser así http://puu.sh/cWr2
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
ook estare revisando C:
-Hyde
General
No sé… La verdad me gusta más si el sonido es Normal ponlo así y baja el volumen a 40% en las dos dificultades http://puu.sh/d6H1
Deberías considerar hacer los slider más estéticos… La Hard no parece Hard (? No me gustó jugarla ~ Intenta aprender de otros mapas :3

Easy
00:09:523 (1) - Intenta mejorar ese slider por favor... Es necesario que quede bien estructurado, ya que, un slider mal hecho como consecuencia trae muchos dolores de cabeza en el futuro. Los grids que vayan a la misma distancia, procura que los puntos siempre estén al centro del círculo. Algo así http://puu.sh/d6E5
00:11:163 (3) - Esa nota no lleva ritmo, elimínala.
00:11:867 (1) - Quita el sonido "Finish" y en su lugar agrega un sonido "Clap". Y acomoda el slider para que quede más estético…
00:13:273 (2) - Qué tal agregar un Whistle?
00:13:742 (3) - Quita el Finish del inicio del slider y agrega un Clap. Más estético ese slider…
00:15:148 (4) - Qué tal un Whistle?
00:15:617 (1) - Arregla ese slider. Agrega un clap en el Reverse Arrow.
00:17:023 (2) - Agrega un Clap.
00:19:367 (1) - Un Clap al final del slider (?
00:20:538 - Agrega una nota ahí, ponle un Whistle.
00:20:773 (3) - Clap + Whistle.
00:23:117 (1) - Clap.
00:23:585 (2) - Quital el Clap.
00:24:054 (3) - Clap.
00:24:523 (4) - Quital el Clap del inicio del slider, agrega un Clap en el Reverse Arrow y al final del slider.
00:25:929 - Puedes agregar un slider que termine en 00:26:398 y agrega un Clap al final.
00:26:632 - Agrega una nota ahí. Que quede algo así http://puu.sh/d6RU
00:26:867 - New combo ahí. Y quita el Finish del inicio y agrégalo al final del slider. No olvides hacer más estético ese slider también .__.
00:28:273 (2) - Clap + Whistle (?
00:28:742 - Quita el Finish del inicio y agrégalo al final...
00:30:148 - Clap + Finish (?
00:30:617 - New combo. Y agrega un Finish al inicio del slider y un Clap en el Reverse Arrow.
00:32:023 - Remueve el New combo. Clap
00:34:367 - Agrega Clap al inicio del slider y Finish al final... Mejora ese slider.
00:35:773 (2) - Clap + Finish.
00:36:242 (1) – Whistle
00:38:117 (1) - Clap al final del slider
00:39:054 (2) - ^
00:39:992 (3) - ^
00:40:929 (4) - ^
Acomoda 1, 2, 3 y 4 de manera que se vean más jugables.
00:41:867 (1) - Finish al final del slider. Más estético ese slider~
00:43:273 (2) - Clap + Whistle
00:43:742 (3) - Finish al final del slider. Más estético ese slider ~
00:45:148 (4) - Clap + Whistle.
00:49:367 - New combo.
00:50:304 (1) - Remueve el New Combo.
00:50:538 (4) - Whitle y en: 00:50:773 - Clap + Whistle.
00:51:242 - New Combo.
00:51:242 (1) - Clap en el Reverse Arrow.
00:52:413 - Agrega una nota con Whistle.
00:52:648 (1) - Remueve el New Combo y ponle Clap + Whistle a esa nota.
00:53:117 - New Combo
00:56:867 - Finish al final del slider y hazlo más estético.
00:58:273 (2) - Clap + Whistle.
00:58:742 - Remueve el New Combo y al final del slider agrega Finish. Más estético por favor.
01:00:148 (2) - Clap + Whistle.
01:04:835 - New combo.
01:05:304 (1) - Remueve el New Combo.
01:07:413 - Agrega una nota con Whistle.
01:07:648 - Clap + Whistle.
01:08:117 - Agrega un Inheretid Point con el sonido Soft ~
01:09:054 – Clap.
01:09:992 - ^
01:10:929 - ^
01:11:867 - Whistle al inicio y Clap al final del slider ~
01:13:273 - Clap.
01:13:742 (3) - Whistle en todo el slider, simplemente selecciona el centro del slider ~
01:16:554 (1) - Clap al inicio y al final del slider... Whistle en el Reverse Arrow ~
01:21:242 (1) - Que el Spinner termine en: 01:22:648 y agrega un Clap.
01:23:117 - Agrega otro Spinner que termine en 01:24:523
01:23:117 - Agrega un Inheretid Point en el que bajes el volumen para que no se escuche el final del Spinner... 5% tal vez.
01:24:992 - Agrega un Inheretid Point ahora con tipo de sonido Normal y con el 40% de volumen.
01:41:398 - No lleva ritmo ese slider, quítalo y en su lugar agrega una nota ~
01:41:867 - Puedes agregar un slider que termine acá - 01:42:335 y no olvides el New combo ahí ~
01:50:773 - Remueve el New Combo.
01:51:242 – New combo
01:54:992 - Finish ~

Hard
Principalmente usa el Resnap All Notes, ya que, al parecer cambiaste el Timing y entonces las notas están ligeramente mal con el timing actual. Te diré unas cosas hehe ~ 1era: Intenta hacer más atractiva la dificultad para que sea… emm… Emocionante para los players que juegan éste tipo de dificultad, a mi parecer está demasiado sencilla y pues no me gustó mucho xP Así que te recomiendo que la mejores un poco… No seas flojo. 2da: Te recomiendo que sigas los ejemplos de Hits que te recomendé en la dificultad Easy, no te los volveré a repetir xD y 3ra: Suerte ~ La canción es Kawaii :3
00:11:867 (1) - Los players que juegan éste tipo de dificultad no se esperarán algo tan fácil (? Puedes agregar otra cosa en su lugar.
00:13:507 (4) - Esa nota no lleva ritmo.
00:19:367 (1) - De aquí hasta ---- 00:22:648, que son las notas 1, 2, 3, 4 y 5. ¿Quieres hacer una dificultad Normal? Mejora eso para que se vea como Hard.
00:26:867 (1) - Otra vez ese tipo de sliders xP. Mejora eso por favor.
00:28:507 (4) - Otra vez pusiste una nota sin ritmo, recomiendo que la elimines.
00:30:382 - ^
00:35:070 - Agrega una nota (?
00:43:507 - Sin ritmo, quítala.
00:51:007 - ^
00:52:882 - ^
01:06:124 (1) - Mueve el Spinner a el Tick Blanco de 01:06:242 para que termine en 01:07:648.
01:09:054 (2) - Recomiendo que pongas más estético el slider. ~
01:13:742 (5) - ^
01:32:257 (6) - Esa nota no lleva ritmo ~

Mucha suerte con tu mapa, como dije: "Muajaja No me gustó mucho para jugarla"; pero me gustó la canción y creo que seguro lo mejoras, solamente es de esforzarse un poquito :3 Te apoyaré más si me sigues dando eso ~ Top secret :$
No_Gu
request from my queue
touhou in tag is useless.it appeared in Source
color1 and 2 are too similar
you need a normal to keep this map diff spread
[easy]
00:11:372 (3) - clap
00:19:341 (1) - whistle instead of clap
01:30:591 (3) - remove clap
01:41:841 (1) - clap in the end

[hard]
00:08:559 (3,8) - clap
00:12:309 (3) - clap at the beginning
00:13:012 (5,6) - whistle
00:18:637 (4,5) - clap
00:27:309 (4) - clap
00:32:231 (6) - stack with 2
00:46:059 (2) - spacing
01:54:966 add a note with finish like easy
KayeSara
Here's my ignorable modding XD
[Easy]
Nothing to say, it's good enough

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:919 (1,3) - Reverse those two notes (click those two notes and use "ctrl+r")
  2. 00:08:325 (2,3,4,5) - making the shape like this
  3. 00:09:966 (1,2) - overlap those two objects
  4. 00:35:044 - I prefer add note here
  5. 00:56:606 (7,2) - overlap it perfectly
  6. 01:27:192 (2) - remove it, it doesn't make sense
  7. 01:29:301 (2) - ^
  8. 01:34:692 (2) - ^
  9. 01:36:801 (2) - ^
That's all ;) Good luck with your moe~song, And I'll give you a star when I get the KD
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
Thanks very much C:
bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~

    General :
  1. Delete .osb file because you don't have SB >_<
     
    Easy :
     
  2. 00:13:247 (2) - del clap
  3. 00:19:341 (1) - del whistle end
  4. 00:20:512 (2) - add whistle
  5. 00:34:341 (1) - del clap start
  6. 00:38:091 (1) - add finish start
  7. 01:05:278 (2,3,4) - You cna't change spacing on the easiest diff !!!
  8. 01:21:216 (1,1) - change to a spinner! and end at 01:24:028 plz~
  9. 01:25:434 (2,3) - spacing
  10. 01:46:997 (4) - ^
     
    Normal :
     
    This is WIP!!! don't has any hitsounds here...Ignote this diff!!!
     
    Hard :
     
  11. 00:14:887 (5,6) - add whistle both
     
    You must read~!
    red:I think it is unrankable issue. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.
--------------------------------------------------------
wow This map is still W.I.P!!!!! So just a fast check....
You need to check your hitsounds again and need more mod!!!
[ Z E R O ]
Nice map :)
Backfire
Can I make a taiko or an Insane Guest Diff? c:
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
thank you very much :"3
kurohana
thanks for your request ^^

[General]
kiai-time end at 01:08:093
delete .osb file in the song folder and full submit

[Easy]
only suggestion: set grid size to tiny (press G on the keyboard ^^)
there are some little spacing mistakes, with smaller grid size the spacing will be better
00:09:499 (1) - spacing
00:15:124 (4) - spacing
00:15:593 (1) - spacing
00:17:936 (4) - spacing
00:20:514 (2) - spacing
00:28:249 (2) - spacing
00:33:405 (5) - spacing
00:49:811 (2,3,4,5) - spacing
00:54:968 (4) - spacing
00:58:249 (2) - spacing
01:07:389 (5,6) - spacing
01:08:093 (1) - spacing
01:20:749 (3) - spacing
01:30:124 (2) - spacing
01:39:968 (1) - spacing

[Hard]
00:14:186 (3) - clap
00:20:514 (3) - whistle
00:22:389 (3) - whistle
00:23:561 (4) - clap
00:24:499 (8) - clap
00:28:014 (6,7) - whistle
00:29:186 (4) - clap
00:29:889 (6,7) - whistle
00:31:999 (5) - clap
00:34:811 (1) - clap
00:35:514 (4) - whistle
00:40:436 (4) - clap
00:41:374 (4) - clap
00:43:014 (3,4) - whistle
00:44:186 (3) - clap
00:46:061 (2) - clap
00:46:999 (5) - clap
00:47:936 (3) - clap
00:48:874 (4) - clap
00:50:514 (3,4) - whistle
00:52:389 (6,7) - whistle
00:54:499 (6) - clap
00:55:436 (4) - clap
00:58:014 (4,5) - whistle
00:59:186 (2) - clap
00:59:889 (4,5) - whistle
01:04:811 (3) - clap
01:05:514 (5,6) - whistle
01:25:436 (1) - clap
01:26:374 (5) - clap
01:28:718 (1) - 01:33:874 (11) - spacing mistakes, fix them
01:27:311 (2) - clap
01:28:249 (4) - clap
01:29:186 (1) - clap
01:30:124 (4) - clap
01:31:061 (3) - clap
01:31:999 (5) - clap
01:32:468 (6) - new combo
01:32:936 (7) - clap
01:33:874 (11) - clap
01:34:811 (2) - clap
01:35:749 (4) - clap
01:36:686 (1) - clap
01:37:624 (4) - clap
01:38:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
01:39:968 (1) - finish
01:40:436 (2) - clap
01:41:374 (4) - clap
01:42:780 (3) - clap
01:44:186 (2) - clap
01:44:655 (1) - remove new combo
01:45:124 (2) - clap
01:46:061 (2) - clap
01:46:999 (7) - clap
01:47:468 (1) - finish
01:47:936 (2) - clap
01:48:874 (4) - clap
01:49:811 (3) - clap
01:50:749 (5) - clap

cute song ^^ good luck for your first beatmap :D
write a pm is you have questions to my mod ^^
Kyouka sama
Irc mod~ good luck
_none_old
Can i made guset diff??
guest diff is already 30% ~

edit : guest diff's diffculty is crazy ): , that is a Extra
Mitsuneko
Couldn't really find anything wrong with it. I'll star this when I get KD later.
Sorry~


edit: I have a KD now O.o, so star~
Backfire
Forget my guests, I dunno what i'm doing ;w;
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

_none wrote:

Can i made guset diff??
guest diff is already 30% ~

edit : guest diff's diffculty is crazy ): , that is a Extra
ok :)
thank very much
_none_old

eLtigreXXx wrote:

_none wrote:

Can i made guset diff??
guest diff is already 30% ~

edit : guest diff's diffculty is crazy ): , that is a Extra
ok :)
thank very much
edit 2 : my guest diff is not finish~, i tried to already finish

edit 3 : Can you help me? i need to sound help, also my guest diff is not finish
so my guest diff is finish, you edit hitsound(add)
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
edit 2 : my guest diff is not finish~, i tried to already finish

edit 3 : Can you help me? i need to sound help, also my guest diff is not finish
so my guest diff is finish, you edit hitsound(add)
Yes, of course
_none_old
Finish~
my guest diff is really crazy :>
It's 700 Combo!!!

edit : this map not need note help
_none_old
MY Map Moding~

[_none's Crazy]

0:04:835 (4) - Clap
0:05:304 (3) - ^
0:05:656 (6) - ^
0:06:007 (7) - ^
0:06:685 (4) - ^
0:07:413 (4) - ^
0:07:999 (5) - Slider end note <- Finish
0:08:116 (1) - Clap
0:08:819 (5) - ^
0:09:053 (1),(3)~(5),(7) - ^
0:10:014 (1),(3),(5),(7) - ^
0:11:045 (2),(5) - ^
0:11:866 (1) y:280 , (1),(3),(5),(7) - Clap , (9) - Finish

i would finish my map, also you help me

edit

0:13:038 (1) - Clap
0:13:272 (1) - Finish
0:13:741 (1),(8) - Clap
0:14:913 (1) - ^
0:15:147 (1) - Finish
0:15:589 (1),(7) - Clap
0:16:553 (1),(7) - ^
0:18:311 (2),(4),(6),(8) - ^ , (5) x:300
0:19:366 (1),(5),(9) - ^

maybe more edit
Lucy-Kaede
Modding from my mod queue!

General
Kiai:
_none's crazy has an extra kiai time between 01:24:992 - 01:54:996
Consider removing this, or adding it to all other difficulties.
Kiai times must be the same in order for the mapset to be ranked :)

Easy
There are alot of unsnapped notes in this difficulty. (All of them infact)
Open timing>timing panel setup, and tick "snap objects to new timing" :)

01:20:773 (3) - Add a clap here.
01:21:242 (1) - I think you should end the spinner at 01:23:117.
01:53:117 (3,4,5,6) - I think this timeline suits much better :)


Hard
00:20:070 (x) - Add a note here?
00:21:945 (x) - Also add a note here?
01:53:468 (x) - Add a note here :)
^If you do this
You could make a pattern like this maybe?

_none's crazy
It's crazy alright.

Very overmapped, so I wont go and mod a whole lot of it, just tell you what I think:

I think that you should work some more sliders into this, nearly the whole song is just hit circles, and alot at that.
You should also lower the approach rate to either 7-8, and possibly lower the hp drain. At the speed, and hp drain currently if you miss a note, you would probably fail.

Actually, I noticed your using all your notes starting on blue ticks instead of white ticks. This is because you changed the bpm for the slider at the start:

Bpm/slider stuff


Delete both of these, and instead use a green timing point and change the slider velocity like such:



It should end up looking like this:



Notice how most of the combos start on long white ticks now?



This is MUCH better :D


sewerty5's Insane
00:42:804 (4,5) - You could remove (4), and start (5) at 00:42:804, ending at 00:43:273. (One big slider) Sounds okay to me ^^
01:03:898 (9) - Make this curved in the middle, instead of at the end:



Thats about it for now, goodluck!
_none_old
My map moding 2nd

_none's Crazy

0:07:062 - (2) x:76 y:192,(3) x:120 y:192,(4) x:360 y:192,
(5)slider fix,see my sreenshot

0:08:351 - (1) - Clap
0:09:054 - (4) - delet clap , (7) - clap
0:13:273 - (1) - Finish
0:13:742 - (1),(2),(3),(8) - Clap
0:15:148 - (1) - Finish
0:15:617 - (1),(4),(7) - Clap
0:16:554 - (1),(4),(7) - ^
0:17:492 - (1),(4),(7) - ^
0:18:312 - (2),(4),(6),(8) - ^
0:19:367 - (1),(3),(5),(7),(9) - ^
0:20:773 - (1) - Finish
0:21:242 - (1),(5),(7),(9) - Clap
0:22:648 - (1) - Finish
0:23:117 - (1),(3),(5),(7) - Clap
0:24:054 - (1),(7) - ^
0:24:992 - (1),(3) - ^
0:25:929 - (1),(2),(4) - ^ , (6) - Finish
0:26:881 - Note fix see screenshot , (1),(3),(5),(7) - Clap

0:28:273 - (1) - Finish
0:28:742 - (1),(5),(9) - Clap

my map compelet is a few days

Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
ok
_none_old
pleas my map add kiri time at 01:24:992~01:54:523
_none_old
my map moding 3rd,.. but mod is not apply

_none's Crazy

0:28:742 - (1),(5),(9) - Clap
0:30:148 - (1) - Finish
0:30:617 - (1),(7) - Clap
0:31:554 - (1),(7) - ^
0:32:492 - (1),(5) - ^
0:33:429 - (1),(5),(7) - ^
0:34:367 - (1),(5),(8) - ^ , (8) y:216
0:35:773 - (1) - Finish

i'm busy... because my guest diff is two , and my map
pokedigi
Excuse me, could I make a Taiko guest for this? :P This song very fits on Taiko.
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

pokedigi wrote:

Excuse me, could I make a Taiko guest for this? :P This song very fits on Taiko.
yes :)
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

_none wrote:

pleas my map add kiri time at 01:24:992~01:54:523


ok
Kryptogram
Modeare sus dificultades en español menos la de _none

Buenas ! Aca Esta Mi Mod Tarde :c

General:

- Los tags deben ser los mismos para TODAS las dificultades pon estos para la de _none

- The Kia in _none difficult must end here 01:54:522 (1) FIX IT

sewerty5 _none Tewi Inaba

- Creo que el sample volume deberia ser un poco mas alto para evitar ese bajo sonido incomodo :s

Easy

00:20:538 (2) - Elimina esta nota para mejorar la jugabilidad
00:21:242 (1) - Agrega whistle
00:26:867 (1) - Agrega clap al principio
00:28:742 (3) - ^
00:35:773 (2) - Agrega whistle
00:35:773 (2) - ^
00:38:117 (1) - Agrega clap al final
00:39:054 (2) - ^
00:40:460 (4) - Agrega clap
00:40:929 (5) - Agrega clap al final
00:54:992 (4) - ^
01:03:898 (6) - Agrega clap al principio
01:19:367 (2) - Agrega clap al final
01:20:773 (3) - Remueve clap
01:27:335 (5) - Agrega clap
01:41:398 (4) - ^

Hard

Supongo que esta bien

sewerty5's Insane

00:20:538 (7) - Agrega whistle
00:22:413 (7) - ^
00:28:038 (6) - ^
00:29:913 (6) - ^
00:35:304 (3) - Agrega whistle en el reverse arrow y el final
00:37:179 (3) - ^
01:08:117 (1) - Te sugiero que desde aca usa soft hitsounds i no normal porque es una parte suave

_none's crazy

Circle Size 4

Show more dedication to your mapset i know you can do it better

Esto se muy bien siendo tu primer mapa ! Espero Sea de Ayuda

Buena Suerte ! y Mi Estrella
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
muchas gracias :)
_none_old
my maps kiri time's sound change
SC:1 -> NC:1

edit : note fix 01:37:296

Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
none´s creazy sorry but i don't accept you difficulty :cry:
_none_old

eLtigreXXx wrote:

none´s creazy sorry but i don't accept you difficulty :cry:
and my 5 star's :(
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ eLtigreXXx ~ :)

M4M here ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[sewerty5's Insane]


  1. Oh, this is not high song,so not need high difficulty setting.
    AR-1 or 2, HP-2.
  2. 00:36:710 (2) - Ctrl+R flow much better.
  3. 01:25:812 (2) - Remove this note will be better.
  4. 01:40:812 (6) - ^
  5. 01:39:054 (9) - Remove a repeat in this slider.
  6. 02:09:054 (5) - Change a 1/2 repeat slider will be better with me.

That's all ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ eLtigreXXx ~ :)

M4M here ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[sewerty5's Insane]


  1. Oh, this is not high song,so not need high difficulty setting.
    AR-1 or 2, HP-2.
  2. 00:36:710 (2) - Ctrl+R flow much better.
  3. 01:25:812 (2) - Remove this note will be better.
  4. 01:40:812 (6) - ^
  5. 01:39:054 (9) - Remove a repeat in this slider.
  6. 02:09:054 (5) - Change a 1/2 repeat slider will be better with me.

That's all ~

Good luck ~ ;)
thank you very much :)
sewerty5
Asgard
sewerty5's insae
01:09:036 (3) - strange rhythm because you have unsnap inherited points


-18 plz...

Same as the above diff
move -18 inherited points

actually unsnap inherited points was not problem
but.. you must fix this
note and sound is strange because of unsnap inherited points
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
thank you very much that we served a lot :)
Redesignated
All right, what's with people asking me to mod their maps when the maps are already so dang good? s(o_o)z

Seriously, though, these were fun to play and check, ahaha. I really didn't see any problems, or anything. Even AI Mod was mostly quiet. (Which is surprising, considering how it never shuts up at me (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻) Awesome work!

Also I'm sorry this was such a pathetic mod (゚д゚) I just really can't find anything that isn't good. I can mod another song of yours, if you want.
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

Redesignated wrote:

All right, what's with people asking me to mod their maps when the maps are already so dang good? s(o_o)z

Seriously, though, these were fun to play and check, ahaha. I really didn't see any problems, or anything. Even AI Mod was mostly quiet. (Which is surprising, considering how it never shuts up at me (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻) Awesome work!

Also I'm sorry this was such a pathetic mod (゚д゚) I just really can't find anything that isn't good. I can mod another song of yours, if you want.
xD
ok

thank :)
Aurele
Hi, from my Modding Queue ~ ♥

[General]
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG♥ I love your map♥
IT'S RAINING CARROTS. ~

[Hard]
You changed the Kiai Mode time on the Normal, but you didn't on your Hard !
01:42:233 : Clap
01:43:171 : Clap
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

Gabex3 wrote:

Hi, from my Modding Queue ~ ♥

[General]
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG♥ I love your map♥
IT'S RAINING CARROTS. ~

[Hard]
You changed the Kiai Mode time on the Normal, but you didn't on your Hard !
01:42:233 : Clap
01:43:171 : Clap
all fixed
thanks :)
update
DJNightmare
RABBITS AND CARROTS EVERYWHERE <Insert Rainbow Puke.jpg>

Red = Recommended
Blue = Suggestions
Green = Comments

[Normal]
Well done!~

[Hard]
00:19:265 (1) - Move < 1 Grid
00:34:265 (1) - Move Down 2 Grid
01:17:390 (4) - Move Down 1 Grid
01:41:296 (4) - Move Up 3 Grid and < 2 Grid
01:41:999 (2) - Move 2 Grid >

[sewerty5's Insane]
00:35:202 (3,1) - Awkward Spacing
00:48:093 (7) - Move Down 1 Grid
00:50:905 (8) - Move Up 2 Grid

Nice!~ =3
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
thanks C:
Barney Stinson
From my queue
Hey there.

Not bad for being your first map, maybe some patterns are too linear.

Normal: Maybe you have to fix something, like:
16:921: 2-3-4-5-6: Well, just try to make this pattern like: http://puu.sh/iE8v If you don't know how to do it catch me in game
31:921: 2-3-4-5-6-1: http://puu.sh/iE97 Like this. Call me if u want help

Hard
47:390: NC
Nothing more

Insane
Nothing to say, great job!
Hope to see this ranked soon!
Scorpiour
Hi there, mod from queue~~
and Sorry for late

Red color means unrankable staff or mistake which need to be fixed.
Black color means recommendations.

General:
  1. Uncheck Letterbox During Breaks for there's a video.
  2. Your SliderMultiplier in all diffs are wrong, please fix them to integer (1.1 1.9 2.3) in .osu file manually. I suppose that's because u change the timing before.
  3. Kiai time suggestion: 01:39:890 - 01:54:890
Storyboard:
  1. I'm sorry but i cannot understand what ur SB code aiming for.... there's no such a file called "failbackground.jpg", and more, due to there's video, a full screen image will make ur video completely invisible from the middle of the song. Please fix it if u really need a storyboard, or delete the .osb file (i suppose u needn't osb)
Skin:
  1. You must add approachcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png and reversearrow.png to your skin set for there's hitcircle.png already.
Normal:
  1. Generally, ur sliders are too "hard", try to make them more smooth? move middle-node to the centre, and tail-node in the centre of circle, and then dont make the middle-node out of the slider border (most cases).
  2. 00:16:921 (2,3,4,5,6) - make it to be a star? it's not looked well now.
  3. 00:21:140 (1) - this spinner is to sudden, i suppose it's better to change to a slider + note like 00:19:265 (1,2) - .
  4. 00:19:265 (1,2) - ^
  5. 02:09:890 - I suppose it's better to end ur map here :)
Hard:
  1. 00:08:366 - add a note here to make a triplet?
  2. 00:41:530 (1) - the beat here is weird. i suppose it's better to make a note at 00:41:530 - , and then a reverse slider 00:41:765 - 00:42:233.
  3. 00:48:327 (11) - NC ?
  4. 01:46:686 (6) - move to next red line, and also move (7) to next blue line
Insane:
  1. 00:19:382 (2) - remove it?
  2. 00:21:257 (2) - ^
  3. 00:34:733 (2) - Ctrl+r?
  4. 01:00:280 (8) - remove?
  5. 01:16:452 (3,4,5) - not a good stack, recommend to move them away
  6. 01:21:126 - spinner start from here
  7. 01:23:015 - with HP7, u should have a break here
that's all....tell the truth...i suppose this map need more mods.... good luck :)
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
thank :)
Aurele
Try to Re-Full Submit, because it's kinda laggy at the moment. '-' ...
http://puu.sh/iGB8

/fixed.

+

Recheck

/Don't Kudo this.

[Normal]

00:23:483 : Clap
00:23:952 : Delete Clap
00:24:421 : clap
00:24:890 : Delete Clap
01:32:390 : ^
01:32:858 : Clap
01:33:796 : ^
01:39:421 : ^
01:47:390 : Delete Clap
01:47:858 : Clap
01:48:327 : Delete Clap
01:48:796 : Clap
01:53:718 : Delete Clap
01:55:358 : Clap
01:56:296 : ^
01:57:233 : ^
01:58:171 : ^
01:59:108 : ^
02:00:046 : ^
02:00:983 : ^
02:01:921 : ^
02:02:858 : ^
02:03:796 : ^
02:04:733 : ^
02:05:671 : ^
02:06:608 : ^
02:07:546 : ^
02:09:890 : Finish. '-' !

Little Suggestion :

01:53:015 / 01:53:483 / 01:53:952 / 01:54:421 : Clap?
02:08:015 / 02:08:483 / 02:08:952 / 02:09:421 : ^

[Hard]

00:42:233 : Clap
00:47:858 : ^
00:51:608 : ^
01:38:483 : ^
01:39:421 : ^
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

Gabex3 wrote:

Try to Re-Full Submit, because it's kinda laggy at the moment. '-' ...
http://puu.sh/iGB8

/fixed.

+

Recheck

/Don't Kudo this.

[Normal]

00:23:483 : Clap
00:23:952 : Delete Clap
00:24:421 : clap
00:24:890 : Delete Clap
01:32:390 : ^
01:32:858 : Clap
01:33:796 : ^
01:39:421 : ^
01:47:390 : Delete Clap
01:47:858 : Clap
01:48:327 : Delete Clap
01:48:796 : Clap
01:53:718 : Delete Clap
01:55:358 : Clap
01:56:296 : ^
01:57:233 : ^
01:58:171 : ^
01:59:108 : ^
02:00:046 : ^
02:00:983 : ^
02:01:921 : ^
02:02:858 : ^
02:03:796 : ^
02:04:733 : ^
02:05:671 : ^
02:06:608 : ^
02:07:546 : ^
02:09:890 : Finish. '-' !

Little Suggestion :

01:53:015 / 01:53:483 / 01:53:952 / 01:54:421 : Clap?
02:08:015 / 02:08:483 / 02:08:952 / 02:09:421 : ^

[Hard]

00:42:233 : Clap
00:47:858 : ^
00:51:608 : ^
01:38:483 : ^
01:39:421 : ^
thank you very much for the help :)
Aurele
Your Welcome Tiger. '-'
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
C:
MMzz
Normal:

00:09:421 (1) - remove new combo
00:21:140 (1) - ^
00:23:015 (1) - add finisher sound?
00:38:483 (2) - add clap to keep consistancy
00:51:140 (1) - remove new combo
01:02:390 (5,6) - Try and fix this up a little, remove the reverse from 5, then move 6 back to where 5 ended originally. so it looks like this: http://puu.sh/iYhj THen add a beat after the end of 6 where 6 originally ended, and add a new combo on that beat.
01:15:515 (4) - add new combo
01:16:452 (1) - remove new combo
01:32:390 (1) - remove clap
01:38:015 (1) - remove new combo
01:41:765 (1) - ^
01:57:702 (1) - ^
01:58:640 (2) - add new combo

Hard:

00:06:140 (1) - remove new combo
00:06:843 (1) - ^
00:07:546 (1) - ^
00:08:249 (2) - add new combo
00:08:718 (5) - move this to x308, y148 on the grid.
00:38:483 (2) - add clap
00:39:421 (4) - ^
00:40:827 (1) - remove new combo
00:45:046 (6) - add clap
00:49:265 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:140 (1) - make the slider end at red tick?
01:40:593 (3,4,1) - remove the reverse on 3, then move 4 and 1 back together, so 4 is where 1 ended on the timeline and 1 is where 4 ended on the timeline, then add a beat under the end of 1 on the grid, remove the new combo off 1 and add a new combo to the newly added beawt.
01:43:171 (5,6) - delete 6 and then make 5 a 2 beat slider (like 6 is) so it ends where 6 would have started, then place a new beat where 6 would have ended and give it a new combo.
01:43:874 (1) - remove new combo if you did above.
01:45:046 (5,6) - do the same as I said before.
01:45:749 (1) - remove new combo if you did the above again.
01:48:796 (4,1) - the same as before again, and remove the new combo off the beat after.
01:50:671 (5,6) - ^
01:52:077 (1) - remove new combo
01:52:546 (2,3) - same as before.

You want to make sure you don't start off a new stanza with the end of a slider, it messes up combos.

sewerty5's Insane:

00:16:452 (1) - remove new combo
00:18:327 (1) - ^
00:23:952 (1) - ^
00:38:952 (1) - ^
00:46:452 (1) - ^
00:53:952 (1) - ^
01:02:155 (1) - ^
01:02:390 (3) - add new combo
01:25:593 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:530 (1) - make this 3 notesstacked and add new combo to the last one.
01:28:405 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:640 (3) - add new combo
01:29:811 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:280 (2) - ^
01:30:515 (3) - add new combo
01:33:093 (1) - remove new combo
01:34:030 (1) - ^
01:34:265 (3) - add new combo
01:35:905 (1) - remove new combo
01:36:140 (3) - add new combo
01:36:960 (1) - remove new combo
01:38:015 (5) - add new combo
01:41:530 (1) - make this 3 notes stacked and add new combo to the last one.
01:49:030 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:265 (3) - add new combo
01:52:780 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:015 (3) - add new combo
01:53:952 (1) - remove new combo
01:56:530 (1) - ^
01:56:765 (2) - add new combo
02:04:147 (1) - remove new combo
02:04:265 (2) - add new combo
02:05:788 (1) - remove new combo
02:06:140 (4) - add new combo
02:06:725 (1) - remove new combo

Sorry for the combo nazi'ing lol

Good map overall, fun~
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
thank :)
Loneight
Request from my modding queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[General]
Why movie have volume ? lol

[Normal]
00:19:265 (1,2) - distance
00:23:952 (3,4) - ^
00:51:140 (6) - NC?
01:02:390 (5) - add clap at end?
01:03:327 (6) - remove clap at start and add clap at end if you follow ^
01:11:765 (1,2,3) - not pretty . QAQ
02:09:890 (6) - add finish ?


[Hard]
00:06:140 (5) - NC?
00:49:265 (6) - ^
01:52:077 (1) - not pretty ?!

[sewerty5's Insane]
00:17:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - so straight , let it curve a little?
00:23:015 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ and I don't like this line
01:39:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^


good song
and sorry to my poor English
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
thank c:
Roddie
Add +1 to the offset. which should be 2,266. Experiment with it. If that is the correct offset, don't forget to resnap all notes, timing points (green lines) and the preview points.
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
thank fixed
Shizuroh
Mod-Mod-Moddd x3

TEEWIIIII :3

Normal
00:34:266 I somehow think this should be a little bit closer o_o

Hard
00:06:844 euhm somehow i think circle 5 should switch places with circle 7
00:21:141 Remove clap and put clap at the end of the slider x3
01:41:297 can this be somewhere else placed instead of the end of the slider?

Sewerty5's Insane
00:50:437 Circle 6 7 and 8 looks so bad :c change it?
00:57:703 Put circle 6 higher or put slider 7 lower to make 6 and 7 on the same height
01:23:601 Put break away ^^ Gives special effect
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
thank :)
phonic
As your request from my queue

NC = Add New Combo.
RNC = Remove New Combo.

[Normal]

  1. 00:38:016 (1) - Add finish
  2. 00:53:016 (1) - Add finish to the head of this slider
  3. 01:08:016 (1) - Add finish
  4. 01:19:266 (3) - NC
  5. 01:21:141 (1) - Remove clap and add whistle
  6. 01:24:891 (1) - Add finish
  7. 01:39:891 (1) - ^
  8. 01:47:391 (1) - Add finish to the head of this slider
  9. 02:09:891 (6) - Remove clap

[Hard]

  1. 00:38:016 (1) - Add finish to the head of this slider
  2. 00:53:016 (1) - Add finish
  3. 01:02:859 (6) - 1grid left
  4. 01:06:141 (1) - Add whistle
  5. 01:21:141 (1) - Go this spin until 01:23:016
  6. 01:24:891 (1) - Add finish
  7. 01:32:391 (1) - 1grid up (I think that I should stack this slider to 01:30:984 (3))
  8. 01:54:891 (5) - NC

[sewerty5's Insane]

  1. 00:38:016 (1) - Add finish
  2. 00:53:016 (1) - Add finish to the head of this slider
  3. 01:08:016 (1) - Add finish
  4. 01:23:016 (x) - volume 20%~5% is good
  5. 01:24:891 (1) - Add finish
  6. 01:39:891 (1) - ^
  7. 01:47:391 (1) - ^
  8. 01:53:953 (9) - NC
  9. 02:08:953 (5) - Add finish to the tail of this slider
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
fixed :)
B2IN
[general]
02:06:141 - audio volume (minus 5) // normal 45 , Insane 40
[Normal]
00:19:266 (1,3) - clap of slider head (as 00:11:766 (1) 00:13:641 (3) 00:19:266 (1) 00:21:141 (3) )

00:38:016 (1) - overlap

01:54:891 (1) - finish
[Hard]
00:07:547 (9) - delete finish(00:07:547) ,add finish(00:08:016)

00:23:016 (1) - finish

01:08:016 (1) - ^

[Insane]
nothing


good luck 8-) :D 8-)
-kevincela-
Hi~

General


  1. The patterns aren't that great - I feel that many notes were placed in a casual position. Try to make these patterns better,and fix eventually some alligniments with other notes.

[Normal]


  1. 00:11:766 (1) - 1 grid right
  2. 01:28:641 (1) - 1 grid down and 2 grids left

[Hard]


  1. 02:09:891 - Why don't you map this until here,like the other diffs?
  2. 00:47:391 (7) - New combo
  3. 00:48:328 (1) - Remove New combo
  4. 00:49:266 (6) - New combo
  5. 01:02:859 (6) - Allign it with the slider 5 by placing it 1 grid left
  6. 01:25:125 (2) - ^
  7. 01:26:531 (1) - Place it here:
  8. 01:28:641 (5) - New combo

[sewerty5's Insane]


  1. 00:49:734 (3) - 1 grid it
  2. 00:49:969 (4) - Allign this with the note 3
  3. 01:25:828 (7,8,9,10,11) - This stream is quite ugly,try to change this into something else
  4. 01:43:172 (6) - Well,this jump can be confused,since you haven't used any jumps before that. Try to lower the jump a bit.
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
thank you very much
fixed :)
YTYuyu
sorry about the delay. i was on #modreqs modding other peoples' maps.

General:
The title is supposed to be IOSYS - Tewi's Mapaku To Endless Wi. you forgot an Apostrophe on Tewis

Normal:
00:11:766 (1) - why is the clap at the beginning? it ruins the consistency you're following. it's better if you replace it for a finish.
00:13:641 (3) - ^
00:19:266 (1) - ^
00:21:141 (3) - ^
00:26:766 (1) - ^
00:28:641 (3) - ^
00:34:266 (1) - move the finish at the beginning instead of the end? it sounds weird when the finish is at the end.
00:38:016 (1) - this will make it hard to see for players as the hitburst covers this note. suggest that you move it below but make sure it's near the middle so that it'd be fully visible for players and easy to see
00:41:766 (1) - same as 00:11:766 but just add a finish
00:43:641 (3) - ^
00:56:766 (1) - ^
00:58:641 (3) - same as 00:34:266
I don't want to mention all this i'm sure you get the idea

Hard:
00:31:922 (5,6) - putting these notes looks boring because you're going back and forth. i suggest that you move it like this so that it'd look like a triangle.
00:41:766 (1) - hmm to challenge players, how about making this repeat once and adding a circle?
00:49:266 (10) - make this a NC because of new lyrics
01:03:328 (7) - same as 00:41:766
01:23:367 - remove the break here since you don't have it on the normal diff.
01:30:984 (3) - move this circle up so that (1,2,3) would like a triangle or in other words stack this on (4) at the previous combo. if you do this, then move (4) so that it'd look like a diamond.
01:48:094 (3) - ooh this slider looks ugly. can you curve it nicer?
01:49:031 (1) - ^
01:49:734 (3) - ^

swerety5's Insane:
00:19:500 (2) - I don't like the overlapping here. it'd look better if you can stack this on the end of (10) at the previous combo.
00:32:391 (1) - same as 01:48:094
00:48:094 (7) - make this look the same as (8). this one looks ugly.
00:58:406 (8) - remove this note because it looks like it isn't following anything.
01:05:437 (5) - make this look the same as (1). it looks nicer if you do so.
01:13:641 (5) - hmm IMO this looks boring because of the number of repeats. to make it fun how about replacing this kick slider for 4 circles and a jump?
01:23:367 - same as hard
01:34:031 (11) - make this a NC because of new lyrics.
01:34:266 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above.
01:41:531 (11) - ^
01:41:766 (1) - same as 01:34:266
01:49:031 (10) - same as 01:34:031
01:49:266 (1) - same as 01:34:266
02:01:453 (7) - same as 01:13:641
02:08:953 (5) - ^

This is the best I can do. GL :D
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
thank you very much :3
DarknessAngel
request from ★(o゚∀`从'∀゚o)★-Gamu- and D.N.Angel's Modding Queue ~ :)
sorry,I'm 9 days late lol


Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice


General

  1. move this beatmap to "Pending Map",please - -

swewerty5's Insane

  1. 00:34:031 (9) - why didn't you stack it with [00:33:328 (5)] ?
  2. good stream ~ \:D/

Hard

  1. 01:04:266 (1) - place the note with correct distance snap,move it to (x:408 y:340)

Normal

  1. AR + 1 will be fine for me
  2. 00:08:953 (2) - wrong spacing
  3. 00:26:766 (1) - remove finish on the slider's tail,it doesn't fit the song at all
  4. 00:28:641 (3) - ^


I think it is time to look for some MAT to mod your map
good map & so cute a song ~
S.T.A.R ! !
good luck ~

:)
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
thank you very much :)
Shohei Ohtani
PROCRASTINATION FOR DAYS

Overall:
DAT MP3 ENDING. Edit it (or ask someone to edit it) so it doesn't cut randomly at the end, but like, fades out.
Tick Rate 2?

Insane:
01:00:516 (1) - Notably unsymmetrical.
02:09:891 (7) - Add finish

Hard:
Go through this diff and finish the hitsounding. It's mostly good, but there's sometimes parts where you'll just kinda go "whoops no hitsounds" (ie. The end)
01:28:641 (1) - Add clap on end of slider

Easy:
01:32:391 (1) - Add clap on repeat of slider
01:43:641 (1) - Unsymmetrical. Idunno, maybe I'm just fishing for stuff, but probably move the center sliderpoint to your left. a bit until it's even.

Nicely made map, especially if its your first. Star for you.
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
:) fixed
Regou
From my modding queue xD
[sewerty5's Insane]
00:07:312 (6) - New combo here as it's a sudden jump
00:26:766 (1) - Ugly.
00:36:141 (1) - Don't overlap it on 00:35:203 (3). Also the spacing seems not correct.
01:31:453 (5) - Delete the finish hitsound.
[Hard]
00:06:844 (5,6,7) - Ctrl+r
01:37:312 (3) - (Nazi) 1 grid down
01:51:375 (7) - NC
01:52:078 (1) - Delete NC
01:52:078 (1) - NC
02:07:312 (1) - Delete NC
02:09:891 (1) - ^
[Easy]
00:51:141 (6) - NC?
01:06:141 (5) - ^

That's all, good luck!
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

Regou wrote:

From my modding queue xD
[Hard]
00:06:844 (5,6,7) - Ctrl+r
01:37:312 (3) - (Nazi) 1 grid down
01:51:375 (7) - NC
01:52:078 (1) - Delete NC
01:52:078 (1) - NC
02:07:312 (1) - Delete NC
02:09:891 (1) - ^
[Easy]
00:51:141 (6) - NC?
01:06:141 (5) - ^

That's all, good luck!
I made some changes
thank you very much :)
pokedigi
Download: IOSYS - Tewi's Mapaku To Endless Wi (eLtigreXXx) [Poke's Taiko].osu


Sorry for your waiting. My Taiko diff :P

Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
cC:
thanks :3
Aurele
Oh btw, add "pokedigi gabex3" to the tags.
kthnx.
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
ok :)
Ayu
From my modding queue~ Digimon!! xD

[Normal]
00:04:266 - 00:08:016 - I think this is a bit too much linear, use a pattern here.
00:37:999 - 00:41:297 - Use a different pattern here~
00:50:203 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.
01:27:703 (6,7,8) - ^
01:28:641 (1) - Work on this slider
01:30:516 (3) - ^
01:37:078 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.
01:38:953 (8,9,10) - ^
01:42:703 (6,7) - Use spacing here
01:53:953 (6,7,8) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.

[Hard]
01:17:391 (4) - Blanket this slider~
Didn't encounter any other problems although I would say that there are some linear parts in it, overall the beatmap is good and you should go for ranked~
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

Ayu wrote:

From my modding queue~ Digimon!! xD

[Normal]
00:04:266 - 00:08:016 - I think this is a bit too much linear, use a pattern here.
00:37:999 - 00:41:297 - Use a different pattern here~
00:50:203 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.
01:27:703 (6,7,8) - ^
01:28:641 (1) - Work on this slider
01:30:516 (3) - ^
01:37:078 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.
01:38:953 (8,9,10) - ^
01:42:703 (6,7) - Use spacing here
01:53:953 (6,7,8) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.

[Hard]
01:17:391 (4) - Blanket this slider~
Didn't encounter any other problems although I would say that there are some linear parts in it, overall the beatmap is good and you should go for ranked~
Thanks :)
Mystica
Here comes my mod.

[Normal]
02:04:266 (3,4) - make them more beauty

[Easy]
Cause diff looks.just change the [E] and [N] Title seems fine

[Hard]
01:08:016 - may consider to use 0.7x fits more.Now a little speed up

[Insane]
Nothing~

Sweet and cute song yeah.....Good map
Aurele

Mystica wrote:

[Easy]
Cause diff looks.just change the [E] and [N] Title seems fine
Whut? o3o
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[Normal] fixed
02:04:266 (3,4) - make them more beauty

[Hard]
01:08:016 - may consider to use 0.7x fits more.Now a little speed up ok


Sweet and cute song yeah.....Good map
thanks
ertyukjh010


Hello :)

[Gabe's Easy]

OD-1

[Normal]

Fine

[Hard]

01:56:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it Symmetry like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/294724

[sewerty5's Insane]

00:23:016 (1) - Finish?
00:39:891 (1) - Finish at beginner

Sorry, I cannot find a lot of problems.
That all :)
Aurele
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Hello :)

[Gabe's Easy]

OD-1

[Normal]

Fine

[Hard]

01:56:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it Symmetry like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/294724

[sewerty5's Insane]

00:23:016 (1) - Finish?
00:39:891 (1) - Finish at beginner

Sorry, I cannot find a lot of problems.
That all :)
thanks :)

Gabex3 wrote:

Thanks ^ c:
http://puu.sh/qh8j
updated :3
kanpakyin
Request is taken from my queue.A cute song indeed.

[General]
  1. Some unrankable stuff:
    1. omboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767
    2. reversearrow.png's dimensions must be exactly 128x128
  2. Skin: Since you have hitcircleoverlay so I guess you also need to add a sliderball to fit with that.
[Gabe's Easy]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:13:641 (4) - How about add a new combo here because a new stanza is starting from here.
    2. 00:53:953 (2) - (Design) I think it would be better if you can make it parallel this with slider (1)- like this:
      You might need to adjust the spacing after change.
    3. 00:55:828 (4) - ^Same.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:05:203 (2) - Would you remove the finish sound? It doesn't fit with the music.You can hear that it doesn't have a accent here.
    2. 00:05:203 (2) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?To fit with the music.
    3. 00:07:078 (4) - ^Same.
    4. 00:22:078 (4) - This part is quite soft so I don't think a finish is appropriate here.Probably change it to soft-whistle instead of it? Or you can just remove the finish.
    5. 01:08:016 - 01:24:891 (x) - Please don't do this.Please increase the volume here.It near inaudibility, some bats and mats may not accept this.
    6. 01:13:523 (1) - This spinner off the beats, please move this spinner to 01:13:641 - and end at 01:15:516 - .It fits the music more.
    7. 01:19:266 (3) - Probably a new combo here to fit with the music.
Apart of these.It looks very nice overall!

[Normal]
  1. Issue/unrankable stuff
    (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
    1. 00:38:016 (1,2,3) - (Bad gameplay) Inconsistent spacing between (2) and (3)- .Please fix the spacing for a better gameplay!
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:11:766 (1) - (Design) Probably make this slider resemble to 00:13:641 (3) - ?It looks more beautiful imo.
    2. 00:36:141 (1) - I would remove this spinner if I were you because the vocal is still singing here.A spinner shouldn't appear here.I think some notes or slider may more suitable.
    3. 00:53:016 (1) - (Design) oh..This slider was a bit ugly.The curve of this slider seems unbalance for me.I would make it like this:
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:19:266 (1) - Please remove the finish at the beginning of the slider.It doesn't fit the music, I can't hear a exact accent point from the music.
    2. 00:21:141 (3) - ^Same
    3. 01:21:141 (1) - How about reduce the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner and remove the whistle as well?
[Hard]
  1. Issue/unrankable stuff
    (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
    1. 01:32:391 (1,2,3) - (Bad gameplay) I can see a inconsistent spacing between (1.2.3)- .I'm not sure are you do this deliberately, but I highly suggest to remove that to make a better game flow here.
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:36:141 (1) - Because the vocal are still singing so I'm not recommend a spinner here.Probably map this part with a soft hitsounds?
    2. 00:46:453 (4) - Some design thing here.I would make this slider parallel with (1)-.It would look much better then now imo. But it is up to you.
    3. 01:04:500 (2,3,4) - A design thing here again.How about place these notes and slider like this, you need to adjust the spacing of 01:05:437 (5,6) - if you change it.
    4. 01:06:141 (1) - Same as 00:46:453-
    5. 01:23:250 (x) - Please remove the break please.There is no point add a break when the last part has heavier HP.
    6. 01:46:453 (5,6,7) - I didn't know why you placed a triplets here.It doesn't fit the music.I suppose something like simple 1/2 is enough.
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 01:21:141 (1) - How about change the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner? It sounds much better with the music.
    2. I would like to say.You can use more soft hitsounds in this difficulty.It fits some places in this song.
[sewerty5's Insane]
  1. Issue/unrankable stuff
    (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
    1. 01:31:453 (5) - (bad gameplay) This 1/4 jump causes a really bad flow during gameplay because tit is not really suitable here.
    2. 01:43:172 (8) - ^Same.
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:19:500 (2,3,4) - Probably align these notes?I found that it may looks better if you do this.
    2. 00:32:391 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same.Check the grid snap.It may helps you.
    3. 01:23:250 (x) - Please remove the break please.There is no point add a break when the last part has heavier HP.
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:07:312 (6) - How about remove the finish sound here.It doesn't fit with the music because there is no accent point.
    2. 00:07:547 (7) - ^Same.
    3. 00:08:016 (1) - Then you can try a finish sound here.
    4. 00:27:937 (6) - Again remove the finish.
    5. 01:08:016 - 01:24:891 (x) - Please don't do this.Please increase the volume here.It near inaudibility, some bats and mats may not accept this.
    6. 01:21:141 (1) - How about reduce the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner?
[Poke's Taiko]
  1. 00:36:141 (1) - This short spinner doesn't fit the music and plays really awkward here!I highly suggest removing this spinner and use a big don instead of it.
  2. 01:14:812 (6) - How about change it to kat?
  3. 01:54:422 (1) - Would you extand this spinner to 01:54:891 - ?
That's it!
Aurele

kanpakyin wrote:

Request is taken from my queue.A cute song indeed.

[Gabe's Easy]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:13:641 (4) - How about add a new combo here because a new stanza is starting from here. Well, I think it's useless to add a New Combo there, because if I do this one, I must do it for the other.
    2. 00:53:953 (2) - (Design) I think it would be better if you can make it parallel this with slider (1)- like this:
      You might need to adjust the spacing after change. Done.
    3. 00:55:828 (4) - ^Same.
    4. Hitsound
      (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
      1. 00:05:203 (2) - Would you remove the finish sound? It doesn't fit with the music.You can hear that it doesn't have a accent here.
      2. 00:05:203 (2) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?To fit with the music.
      3. 00:07:078 (4) - ^Same.
      4. 00:22:078 (4) - This part is quite soft so I don't think a finish is appropriate here.Probably change it to soft-whistle instead of it? Or you can just remove the finish.
      5. 01:08:016 - 01:24:891 (x) - Please don't do this.Please increase the volume here.It near inaudibility, some bats and mats may not accept this.
      6. 01:13:523 (1) - This spinner off the beats, please move this spinner to 01:13:641 - and end at 01:15:516 - .It fits the music more.
      7. 01:19:266 (3) - Probably a new combo here to fit with the music.
      Apart of these.It looks very nice overall!

      That's it!
Good, I fixed some things... but I can't fix then all at the moment, since I have to go back in classes.

What I did so far
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Touhou - Iosys Tewis Mapaku To Endless Wi PV .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84891
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Tewi's Mapaku To Endless Wi
Artist:IOSYS
Creator:eLtigreXXx
Version:Gabe's Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:sewerty5 Tewi Inaba pokedigi gabex3

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-100,"[IOSYS] Endless Tewi-Ma Park.flv"
0,0,"BG4.png"
//Break Periods
2,83216,83331
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
4266,468.75,4,1,1,40,1,0
5555,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
6141,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
7547,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
38015,-100,4,1,1,40,0,1
68015,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,20,0,0
69305,-133.333333333333,4,1,1,30,0,0
69539,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,20,0,0
72117,-133.333333333333,4,1,1,30,0,0
72351,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,20,0,0
76805,-133.333333333333,4,1,1,30,0,0
77039,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,20,0,0
84890,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
99890,-100,4,1,1,40,0,1
114890,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 187,119,119
Combo2 : 255,185,255
Combo3 : 136,236,247
Combo4 : 254,172,112

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Aurele
^ Oh god, I can't edit it...
WHYYY.

Here's the diff ._. : http://puu.sh/qASQ
Topic Starter
KokoroStudiox3
SPOILER

kanpakyin wrote:

Request is taken from my queue.A cute song indeed.

[General] OK
  1. Some unrankable stuff:
    1. omboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767
    2. reversearrow.png's dimensions must be exactly 128x128
  2. Skin: Since you have hitcircleoverlay so I guess you also need to add a sliderball to fit with that.
[Gabe's Easy]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:13:641 (4) - How about add a new combo here because a new stanza is starting from here.
    2. 00:53:953 (2) - (Design) I think it would be better if you can make it parallel this with slider (1)- like this:
      You might need to adjust the spacing after change.
    3. 00:55:828 (4) - ^Same.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:05:203 (2) - Would you remove the finish sound? It doesn't fit with the music.You can hear that it doesn't have a accent here.
    2. 00:05:203 (2) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?To fit with the music.
    3. 00:07:078 (4) - ^Same.
    4. 00:22:078 (4) - This part is quite soft so I don't think a finish is appropriate here.Probably change it to soft-whistle instead of it? Or you can just remove the finish.
    5. 01:08:016 - 01:24:891 (x) - Please don't do this.Please increase the volume here.It near inaudibility, some bats and mats may not accept this.
    6. 01:13:523 (1) - This spinner off the beats, please move this spinner to 01:13:641 - and end at 01:15:516 - .It fits the music more.
    7. 01:19:266 (3) - Probably a new combo here to fit with the music.
Apart of these.It looks very nice overall!

[Normal] ALL DONE
  1. Issue/unrankable stuff
    (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
    1. 00:38:016 (1,2,3) - (Bad gameplay) Inconsistent spacing between (2) and (3)- .Please fix the spacing for a better gameplay!
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:11:766 (1) - (Design) Probably make this slider resemble to 00:13:641 (3) - ?It looks more beautiful imo.
    2. 00:36:141 (1) - I would remove this spinner if I were you because the vocal is still singing here.A spinner shouldn't appear here.I think some notes or slider may more suitable.
    3. 00:53:016 (1) - (Design) oh..This slider was a bit ugly.The curve of this slider seems unbalance for me.I would make it like this:
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:19:266 (1) - Please remove the finish at the beginning of the slider.It doesn't fit the music, I can't hear a exact accent point from the music.
    2. 00:21:141 (3) - ^Same
    3. 01:21:141 (1) - How about reduce the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner and remove the whistle as well?
[Hard] ALL DONE
[ list][*]Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. 01:32:391 (1,2,3) - (Bad gameplay) I can see a inconsistent spacing between (1.2.3)- .I'm not sure are you do this deliberately, but I highly suggest to remove that to make a better game flow here.
[*]Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:36:141 (1) - Because the vocal are still singing so I'm not recommend a spinner here.Probably map this part with a soft hitsounds?
  2. 00:46:453 (4) - Some design thing here.I would make this slider parallel with (1)-.It would look much better then now imo. But it is up to you.
  3. 01:04:500 (2,3,4) - A design thing here again.How about place these notes and slider like this, you need to adjust the spacing of 01:05:437 (5,6) - if you change it.
  4. 01:06:141 (1) - Same as 00:46:453-
  5. 01:23:250 (x) - Please remove the break please.There is no point add a break when the last part has heavier HP.
  6. 01:46:453 (5,6,7) - I didn't know why you placed a triplets here.It doesn't fit the music.I suppose something like simple 1/2 is enough.
[*]Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
  1. 01:21:141 (1) - How about change the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner? It sounds much better with the music.
  2. I would like to say.You can use more soft hitsounds in this difficulty.It fits some places in this song.
[/list]

[sewerty5's Insane]
  1. Issue/unrankable stuff
    (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
    1. 01:31:453 (5) - (bad gameplay) This 1/4 jump causes a really bad flow during gameplay because tit is not really suitable here.
    2. 01:43:172 (8) - ^Same.
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:19:500 (2,3,4) - Probably align these notes?I found that it may looks better if you do this.
    2. 00:32:391 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same.Check the grid snap.It may helps you.
    3. 01:23:250 (x) - Please remove the break please.There is no point add a break when the last part has heavier HP.
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:07:312 (6) - How about remove the finish sound here.It doesn't fit with the music because there is no accent point.
    2. 00:07:547 (7) - ^Same.
    3. 00:08:016 (1) - Then you can try a finish sound here.
    4. 00:27:937 (6) - Again remove the finish.
    5. 01:08:016 - 01:24:891 (x) - Please don't do this.Please increase the volume here.It near inaudibility, some bats and mats may not accept this.
    6. 01:21:141 (1) - How about reduce the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner?
[Poke's Taiko]
  1. 00:36:141 (1) - This short spinner doesn't fit the music and plays really awkward here!I highly suggest removing this spinner and use a big don instead of it.
  2. 01:14:812 (6) - How about change it to kat?
  3. 01:54:422 (1) - Would you extand this spinner to 01:54:891 - ?
That's it!
thanks kanpakyin :)
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