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Aoyama Misao - Kimi no WIND SONG

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kosiga
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年9月24日 at 19:51:21

Artist: Aoyama Misao
Title: Kimi no WIND SONG
Source: Osu! Banchou 2
Tags: daito giken mythol
BPM: 134
Filesize: 5969kb
Play Time: 03:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4.99 stars, 542 notes)
  2. Hard (4.66 stars, 375 notes)
  3. Normal (2.84 stars, 217 notes)
Download: Aoyama Misao - Kimi no WIND SONG
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 15th map
青山 操
君の WIND SONG

[Normal]done
[Hard]done
[Collab]done by me and Mythol
[Lyrics]done

Collab memo:
start~00:14:918 by me and Mythol

00:14:918~00:34:619 by me

00:34:619~01:03:276 by Mythol

01:03:276~01:19:395 by me

01:19:395~01:33:724 by Mythol

01:33:724~01:51:858 by me

01:51:858~02:02:828 break time

02:02:828~02:20:291 by me

02:20:291~02:36:410 by Mythol

02:36:410~02:50:739 by me

02:50:739~end by Mythol
Mythol
offset +14!
Topic Starter
kosiga

Mythol wrote:

offset +14!
changed :3

thx~ ;)
h-728
from modreq

[General]
  • clear
[Normal]
  • clear
[Hard]
  • 00:40:902 (3) - rotate like this. I think it is better to approach with next circle.00:49:857 (3,1) - I feel this jump unnaturally. how about making jump between 00:50:305 (1) and 00:50:753 (2)?
    01:18:962 (2,3) - I think it is better not to stack these notes.
    02:29:932 (1,2) - this placement is not naturally. It's better to rotate 02:30:380 (2).
[Collab]
  • 01:17:618 (1) - SV 0.5x?
    01:45:156 - add note
    01:49:969 (1) - end at 01:51:648
    02:03:962 - add note
    02:04:074 - ^
    02:18:738 (2) - reduce the number of time to reverse, and replace with stream. I felt this slider a little confusing.
    02:32:842 (1) - end at 02:34:409
    02:34:745 (1) - star at 02:34:633
    02:40:678 - add note
    02:40:790 - add note?
nice song.
good luck
Topic Starter
kosiga

h-728 wrote:

from modreq

[General]
  • clear
[Normal]
  • clear
[Hard]
  • 00:40:902 (3) - rotate like this. I think it is better to approach with next circle. ok~fixed
    00:49:857 (3,1) - I feel this jump unnaturally. how about making jump between 00:50:305 (1) and 00:50:753 (2)? sorry, no change ><
    01:18:962 (2,3) - I think it is better not to stack these notes. fixed~
    02:29:932 (1,2) - this placement is not naturally. It's better to rotate 02:30:380 (2). ^
[Collab]
  • 01:17:618 (1) - SV 0.5x? This is intentional :3
    01:45:156 - add note no><
    01:49:969 (1) - end at 01:51:648 ok. all diff changed
    02:03:962 - add note no change
    02:04:074 - ^ ^
    02:18:738 (2) - reduce the number of time to reverse, and replace with stream. I felt this slider a little confusing. ^
    02:32:842 (1) - end at 02:34:409 i think better now double-spinner ><
    02:34:745 (1) - star at 02:34:633 ^
    02:40:678 - add note no change
    02:40:790 - add note? ^
nice song.
good luck
h-728 Thanks you for mod and star☆~ :oops:
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
[Inconsistency in Source:]
- [Collab] : Osu! Banchou 2 mythol ←delete this plz..

- [Hard] : Osu! Banchou 2

- [Normal] : Osu! Banchou 2

[Inconsistency in Tags:]
- [Collab] : daito giken (you shoold add "mythol" to this diff as well)

- [Hard] : daito giken mythol

- [Normal] : daito giken mythol


[Normal]
00:23:887 (3) - some grids right
00:53:439 (3) - try to make the slider tail stack with the beginning of 00:51:648 (5)
01:14:932 (2) - I think that it only needs 3 points to make this slider
01:19:409 (1) - ^
02:38:215 (3) - ^
02:54:335 (1) - ^
02:55:230 (2) - ^
03:04:633 (3) - ^
01:40:006 (5) - the middle point 2 grids right
03:06:872 (1) - finish?


[Hard]
00:00:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not round,you may use ctrl+shift+D to make this better
00:27:917 (3) - not fit the music
01:01:723 (1) - suggest repeating only 1 time and add a note here 01:02:171 (yours is also okay)
01:16:499 (1) - use 1.40x spacing
01:22:320 (4) - try to stack with the beginning of 01:20:305 (3)


[Insane]
02:10:678 (2) - try not to cover 02:09:335 (5)
02:29:932 (6) - separate from 02:28:365 (2)
02:40:678 (2) - add a note?
02:42:021 (4) - ^
--------------------------------------------------
OK w , that's all
Wonderful Mapset
Good Luck
Topic Starter
kosiga

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
[Inconsistency in Source:]
- [Collab] : Osu! Banchou 2 mythol ←delete this plz..

- [Hard] : Osu! Banchou 2

- [Normal] : Osu! Banchou 2

[Inconsistency in Tags:]
- [Collab] : daito giken (you shoold add "mythol" to this diff as well)

- [Hard] : daito giken mythol

- [Normal] : daito giken mythol

orz... i'm BAKA... :( fixed


[Normal]
00:23:887 (3) - some grids right fixed
00:53:439 (3) - try to make the slider tail stack with the beginning of 00:51:648 (5) i think there is not a meaning even if I do it o.o
01:14:932 (2) - I think that it only needs 3 points to make this slider i think this is no problem.
01:19:409 (1) - ^
02:38:215 (3) - ^
02:54:335 (1) - ^
02:55:230 (2) - ^
03:04:633 (3) - ^
01:40:006 (5) - the middle point 2 grids right fixed
03:06:872 (1) - finish? add whistle :D


[Hard]
00:00:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not round,you may use ctrl+shift+D to make this better I did not know how to do this o.o thx. very good :3
00:27:917 (3) - not fit the music change it~
01:01:723 (1) - suggest repeating only 1 time and add a note here 01:02:171 (yours is also okay) sorry, no change >< Also want to hear other people's opinion. If this is difficult to say, consider the change~
01:16:499 (1) - use 1.40x spacing 01:16:947 (2) o.o? but no change =x=
01:22:320 (4) - try to stack with the beginning of 01:20:305 (3) no change


[Insane]
02:10:678 (2) - try not to cover 02:09:335 (5) sorry, no change>< I do not feel that this influences a play
02:29:932 (6) - separate from 02:28:365 (2) ask to mythol
02:40:678 (2) - add a note? I do not need >x<
02:42:021 (4) - ^ ^
--------------------------------------------------
OK w , that's all
Wonderful Mapset
Good Luck
Snowy Dream Thank you for mod~ :oops:
Mythol

kosiga wrote:

02:29:932 (6) - separate from 02:28:365 (2) ask to mythol
un-noticeable during play so no change o.o
Chewin
Hi kosiga, from my queue ;3

[General]
Fine ~

[Normal]
00:21:872 (6) - I think it's better if you remove this circle since this is the easiest diff
00:47:618 (3,1,2) - So hard for the easiest diff. I suggest you this rhythm, it's easier to play for beginners:

01:05:081 (3) - I'd increase the volume of this whistle till 100%, so the sound is consistent with 01:03:290 (1)
01:15:827 (1) - I'd reduce this spinner till 01:17:618 adding a finish. It fits better
02:27:245 (7) - Remove circle for the same reason
02:32:842 (1) - Reduce by 1/2
02:49:633 (4) - Remove circle
03:03:962 (1) - ^

[Hard]
01:08:663 (6) - NC and remove from 01:09:559 (1)
Nice o.o

[Collab]
01:31:947 (7) - Use NC here and remove from 01:32:842 (1)
01:44:484 (1) - Nazi but to improve this blanket move the 3rd waypoint to x:424 y:72

Awesome maps kosiga, star and good luck with rank >w<
Topic Starter
kosiga

Chewin wrote:

Hi kosiga, from my queue ;3

[General]
Fine ~

[Normal]
00:21:872 (6) - I think it's better if you remove this circle since this is the easiest diff ok~ fixed
00:47:618 (3,1,2) - So hard for the easiest diff. I suggest you this rhythm, it's easier to play for beginners: I hear the opinion of other people o.o hold your suggestions :D

01:05:081 (3) - I'd increase the volume of this whistle till 100%, so the sound is consistent with 01:03:290 (1) sorry, no change ><
01:15:827 (1) - I'd reduce this spinner till 01:17:618 adding a finish. It fits better I had to follow the vocal. but it is better than it~. change it
02:27:245 (7) - Remove circle for the same reason sorry, no change ><
02:32:842 (1) - Reduce by 1/2 change it~
02:49:633 (4) - Remove circle sorry, no change ><
03:03:962 (1) - ^ ^

[Hard]
01:08:663 (6) - NC and remove from 01:09:559 (1) sorry, no change >< . because I thought better to put it at the jump point here 8-)
Nice o.o

[Collab]
01:31:947 (7) - Use NC here and remove from 01:32:842 (1) i think it's fine x.x
01:44:484 (1) - Nazi but to improve this blanket move the 3rd waypoint to x:424 y:72 good :3 change~

Awesome maps kosiga, star and good luck with rank >w<
Chewin~ Thank you for mod & Star☆ >x<
congaan
http://puu.sh/JRCO
short irc mod for hard diff=w=
Topic Starter
kosiga

congaan wrote:

http://puu.sh/JRCO
short irc mod for hard diff=w=
thank youです =x=

:oops:
sospk0011
이 비트맵이 더 빨리 랭크될 것 같네요^^
Topic Starter
kosiga

sospk0011 wrote:

이 비트맵이 더 빨리 랭크될 것 같네요^^
감사합니다 :333
hibarirailwayz
from modding queues~
あくまで意見なのでよろしくお願いします。
[General]
無し。
[Normal]
01:10:454 (1) - 1grid右の方が、綺麗に見えるかも。
01:40:902 (1) - 1grid 左の方が次のサークルとのつなぎが多少良く見えるかな・・・?

[Hard]
02:39:335 (4,5) - 逆の方が個人的にはAIMしやすいですが、正直微妙なところですw

[Collab]
00:05:753 (1,2) - 1 grid 右の方が3番のスライダーとのつながりが良いと思います。
02:19:409 (3) - 2 grid 左の方が2番のスライダーとのつながりが綺麗かと。
02:44:820 (4) - 2 grid 下の方が前のスライダーとのつながりは綺麗かな。

殆ど欠点を見つけられませんでしたので、配置の微調整ばかりで申しわけない・・・
すばらしい譜面なので☆~

Good luck!!
Topic Starter
kosiga

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues~
あくまで意見なのでよろしくお願いします。
[General]
無し。
[Normal]
01:10:454 (1) - 1grid右の方が、綺麗に見えるかも。 fixed~
01:40:902 (1) - 1grid 左の方が次のサークルとのつなぎが多少良く見えるかな・・・? ^

[Hard]
02:39:335 (4,5) - 逆の方が個人的にはAIMしやすいですが、正直微妙なところですw 次のスライダーの流れから変えずにこのままにします =x=

[Collab]
00:05:753 (1,2) - 1 grid 右の方が3番のスライダーとのつながりが良いと思います。 fixed~
02:19:409 (3) - 2 grid 左の方が2番のスライダーとのつながりが綺麗かと。 ^
02:44:820 (4) - 2 grid 下の方が前のスライダーとのつながりは綺麗かな。 ^

殆ど欠点を見つけられませんでしたので、配置の微調整ばかりで申しわけない・・・
すばらしい譜面なので☆~

Good luck!!

hibarirailwayzさん mod&☆ありがとうございます~ :oops:
Mystica
here comes my mod.

[collab]
00:50:305 (4) - some grid up
00:55:118 (4,5) - change a place?cause there no any part like that
01:45:156 - add a note feels well
02:18:290 (4,1,2) - a little confuse about snap for this part
02:29:708 (5,6,7) - ^
02:40:678 - add a note

[Hard]
00:41:350 (4) - a little hard for a hard diff

other seems fine
Star
Topic Starter
kosiga

Mystica wrote:

here comes my mod.

[collab]
00:50:305 (4) - some grid up
00:55:118 (4,5) - change a place?cause there no any part like that
01:45:156 - add a note feels well fixed
02:18:290 (4,1,2) - a little confuse about snap for this part ok. changed
02:29:708 (5,6,7) - ^
02:40:678 - add a note sorry, no change ><

[Hard]
00:41:350 (4) - a little hard for a hard diff ok. change it~

other seems fine
Star
other ask to mythol :D

Mystica~ Thanks for the mod and star☆~ :oops:
wmfchris
[Collab]
00:17:171 (2) - comparing with (1) there's weak drum beat in the music. Consider a whistle?
00:48:514 (5) - Try (268,24)? Don't see the point to use different spacing for (4,5,6).
01:46:499 - feel like the placement looks a bit odd. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389715 ?
02:42:469 (4) - how about moving to (224,132)? Currently the "right angled triangle" arrangement looks odd in the spacing shift, but move there allows (4,1,2,3,4,5) to look like the vertices of a pentagon.

[Hard]
00:10:454 (5) - like (4) last combo whistle on both ticks?
01:16:947 (2) - what's going on with the 1.1x spacing while the rest is 1.4x? moving to (256,140) looks better.
03:06:872 - there's a clear bass sound in the music but the spinner can't express that sound well. Add a note before spinner?

[Normal]
01:48:066 - how about merging these two sliders considering this is a normal?

In overall the notes are well placed, though the music sometimes sounds odd when there's two equivalent sentences, one with acccents while one without them -w- but you're following the song well.
Topic Starter
kosiga

wmfchris wrote:

[Collab]
00:17:171 (2) - comparing with (1) there's weak drum beat in the music. Consider a whistle? I think no need.. orz
00:48:514 (5) - Try (268,24)? Don't see the point to use different spacing for (4,5,6). ask to mythol~
01:46:499 - feel like the placement looks a bit odd. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389715 ? I was not conscious of a starform. ok~ change it~
02:42:469 (4) - how about moving to (224,132)? Currently the "right angled triangle" arrangement looks odd in the spacing shift, but move there allows (4,1,2,3,4,5) to look like the vertices of a pentagon. looks good~ change~

[Hard]
00:10:454 (5) - like (4) last combo whistle on both ticks? no need whistle ><
01:16:947 (2) - what's going on with the 1.1x spacing while the rest is 1.4x? moving to (256,140) looks better. ok~ change it~
03:06:872 - there's a clear bass sound in the music but the spinner can't express that sound well. Add a note before spinner? ^

[Normal]
01:48:066 - how about merging these two sliders considering this is a normal?  sliders=spinners o.o? Probably it does not merge ><; because kiaitime in the middle of the spinner. If you feel short spinner, this spinner that is available starting from 01:47:171. do not change it now =w=

In overall the notes are well placed, though the music sometimes sounds odd when there's two equivalent sentences, one with acccents while one without them -w- but you're following the song well.
sorry, for late :(

Thanks for mod~~ :oops:
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