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No_Gu

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
- At the beginning the spacing changes quite unexpectably like 00:04:327 - it fits with some NCs as well ._. OK..add some NC
00:26:406 (10) - slider orientation adjustment
148,176,26406,2,0,B|228:248|228:248,1,85,2|0
K
00:31:125 (7,8,9,10) - better put them in unique spacing (make a rhombus) because you don't need to over-emphasize (9)K
00:34:496 (7) - remove clap here?I think it's fine..
00:45:956 (15) - NC as you've done before K
01:23:878 (7,8,13,14) - just feeling that they are placed quite randomlyhmm...random
02:00:451 (2) - removing clap here may fit the music betterK
02:28:428 (6) - tweeking the slider and notes a bit so it turns in a symmetrical wayK
192,128,148428,2,0,B|172:220|52:228|52:228,1,170,4|0
48,212,148850,1,0
24,216,148934,1,0
12,236,149018,1,0
02:44:608 (6,7) - slider shape adjustment
328,128,164608,2,0,B|284:152|272:192,1,85,2|0
336,244,164945,2,0,B|300:284|216:288|200:216,1,170,10|2
K
03:01:799 - need more variation other than simple stream without movement do a little change

slider shape could be better lol though I like how you use those hitsounds

[Normal+]
00:09:720 - no whistle as used last combo?K
00:51:349 (1,2) - This is very misleading, especially it's expected to be a normal diff.orz I moved all line once..So the mistake has appeared..
02:50:338 (4) - lol, just thought that the vocal may not fit this slider shapeI think it fits the drums..

[Easy]
00:08:203 (3) - NC here K
thx for mod
NatsumeRin
[Easy]
AR+1
00:09:214 (2) - 这个弄的和前面那个2一样会好吗。。虽然这里节奏确实不太适合Easy……
00:51:349 (1) - 我相信这个是无意的,但是绿线晚了一点不是么。。。
00:56:068 (1,1) - 这个就灾难了啊
02:04:158 - 加音?
02:08:203 (1) - 蛤

[Normal+]
01:08:708 (6,1) - 考虑直接并成一个slider?现在1开头那个音有点多余
02:19:495 (3,4) - 这段开始有很多类似这个的1/2-叠的1/1-1/2。。我猜你可能是有意的,但这在Normal里效果可能不是很好,建议再考虑下,后面不再提。

[TuHard]
HP-1?另外我还是不太习惯Hard就满天飞的感觉。。。
01:02:810 (4) - 这个slider位置怪。。。在那三下3/4下来后立刻就出去了的话后面重音的感觉就没了,个人看法。
01:04:833 (1,2,3) - 这不太好看,部分重叠的话如果只是一点一般都会给我这个感觉。。。
02:14:271 (4) - 和之前想说的一样
02:15:282 (1) - 这里听着更糟。。

[Insane]
01:01:462 (11) - 这个音按节奏,往后1/2会不会更好?而且之前一段跳的在我看来有点莫名其妙(无感觉。。)
01:24:721 (14) - ^
02:15:704 (1) - 既然是要消音就早那么点结束给人家个准备时间会比较好?
03:04:833 - 其他难度并没有这个break的,去掉?
03:27:080 (5,6,7) - 结尾平淡了,试举一例 puu.sh/gtSA

starred. 自己再仔细查遍线然后叫我
tutuhaha

NatsumeRin wrote:

[TuHard]
HP-1?另外我还是不太习惯Hard就满天飞的感觉。。。我错了.....
01:02:810 (4) - 这个slider位置怪。。。在那三下3/4下来后立刻就出去了的话后面重音的感觉就没了,个人看法。改了下
01:04:833 (1,2,3) - 这不太好看,部分重叠的话如果只是一点一般都会给我这个感觉。。。改了
02:14:271 (4) - 和之前想说的一样改了
02:15:282 (1) - 这里听着更糟。。改了
Download: Megpoid GUMI - Dokugaron -codealtered- (No_Gu) [TuHard].osu
Topic Starter
No_Gu

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Easy]
AR+1 K
00:09:214 (2) - 这个弄的和前面那个2一样会好吗。。虽然这里节奏确实不太适合Easy……K
00:51:349 (1) - 我相信这个是无意的,但是绿线晚了一点不是么。。。
00:56:068 (1,1) - 这个就灾难了啊
02:04:158 - 加音?还是线问题=_=
02:08:203 (1) - 蛤哭了

[Normal+]
01:08:708 (6,1) - 考虑直接并成一个slider?现在1开头那个音有点多余
02:19:495 (3,4) - 这段开始有很多类似这个的1/2-叠的1/1-1/2。。我猜你可能是有意的,但这在Normal里效果可能不是很好,建议再考虑下,后面不再提。重排了

[Insane]
01:01:462 (11) - 这个音按节奏,往后1/2会不会更好?而且之前一段跳的在我看来有点莫名其妙(无感觉。。)部分remap了
01:24:721 (14) - ^这个的话我觉得还是我的听起来比较顺耳
02:15:704 (1) - 既然是要消音就早那么点结束给人家个准备时间会比较好?恩提早1/2
03:04:833 - 其他难度并没有这个break的,去掉?
03:27:080 (5,6,7) - 结尾平淡了,试举一例 puu.sh/gtSA 换了一个

starred. 自己再仔细查遍线然后叫我
thx for mod
Uploaded
KanaRin
Topic Starter
No_Gu

KanaRin wrote:

fixed some form wmf's mod. thz
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NatsumeRin
bubbled.
Topic Starter
No_Gu

NatsumeRin wrote:

bubbled.
thx
Scorpiour
围观神mapper又泡图
S h i o n
瞎了
Topic Starter
No_Gu
你们快自重
Lan wings
瞎了``神mapper又泡图了
SapphireGhost
Really old bubble, let's check it.

[General]
- The beatmap hasn't been uploaded correctly. When downloading I only got some of the difficulties (downloaded the rest individually), so please Full Submit the map and test it again.
- You could save around 400 KB of filesize by converting the background image to jpg.
- For all difficulties at 03:07:529, consider dragging the break to that point and having it start on that downbeat (all the other breaks start on a downbeat here).

[Insane]
02:50:170 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Putting a note under the last note of a stream can cause the player to accidentally hit that one early while still trying to hit the notes in the stream. Reversing (1) or putting it somewhere else might be a good idea.
03:00:451 (5) - A map with a very similar slider to this one was deemed unrankable for that reason. Though I don't completely agree with this, to be on the safe side I think it should be changed. Would you be okay with something like this?

[TuHard]
- For the [Hard] difficulty, this map has a lot of big jumps (over 2.00x) that I'd probably avoid. There are a lot of them, though, so at least it's consistent. Just a tip for the future, then. Map looked good in general!

[Normal+]
- The difficulty name [Normal+] usually isn't used anymore. Since this is a relatively difficult mapset, I'd rename it to [Normal].
02:04:495 (3) - The change in slider velocity and all the repeats might be confusing here, try to map this more intuitively.
02:14:102 (3,4,5,6) - The (3,4) stack might be sort of confusing at low AR, try moving (4,5,6) somewhere else?
02:15:113 (6) - It would be great if you could make the path for this slider more clear and less confusing, we want to avoid an unrank like what happened to Justice Breaker. Here's an example of how you could make it more readable.
02:39:214 (4) - ^
02:50:338 (4) - ^
03:01:124 (5) - ^
03:26:742 (1,2) - Because it's sort of hard to predict how many times (1) will repeat, maybe try to do this pattern without kicksliders?

[Easy]
02:12:922 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) shouldn't overlap, and (2) and (3) should be further apart to avoid confusion.
02:39:214 (4) -
02:46:293 (1) - Maybe move this one grid down to avoid overlap.
02:50:338 (4) - Another confusing slider.
03:23:708 (1,1) - This note definitely comes too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty, and newer players won't have time to recover. Maybe just have the spinner end at 03:26:743 and have the map end there, too?

That's all. Go ahead and forum PM for a re-check after fixes, let me know what you do/don't fix. Thanks!
wcx19911123
瞎了``神mapper又rank图了
Topic Starter
No_Gu

SapphireGhost wrote:

Really old bubble, let's check it.

[General]
- The beatmap hasn't been uploaded correctly. When downloading I only got some of the difficulties (downloaded the rest individually), so please Full Submit the map and test it again.hope everything goes well now T.T
- You could save around 400 KB of filesize by converting the background image to jpg.OK
- For all difficulties at 03:07:529, consider dragging the break to that point and having it start on that downbeat (all the other breaks start on a downbeat here).OK

[Insane]
02:50:170 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Putting a note under the last note of a stream can cause the player to accidentally hit that one early while still trying to hit the notes in the stream. Reversing (1) or putting it somewhere else might be a good idea.hmm.change in another way
03:00:451 (5) - A map with a very similar slider to this one was deemed unrankable for that reason. Though I don't completely agree with this, to be on the safe side I think it should be changed. Would you be okay with something like this?OK

[TuHard]
- For the [Hard] difficulty, this map has a lot of big jumps (over 2.00x) that I'd probably avoid. There are a lot of them, though, so at least it's consistent. Just a tip for the future, then. Map looked good in general!

[Normal+]
- The difficulty name [Normal+] usually isn't used anymore. Since this is a relatively difficult mapset, I'd rename it to [Normal].want to follow NatsumeRin's Shinkaron and this diff has many 1/2 beats and there are 1.4x spacingduring kiai time ..I think normal+ is better
02:04:495 (3) - The change in slider velocity and all the repeats might be confusing here, try to map this more intuitively.OK
02:14:102 (3,4,5,6) - The (3,4) stack might be sort of confusing at low AR, try moving (4,5,6) somewhere else?
02:15:113 (6) - It would be great if you could make the path for this slider more clear and less confusing, we want to avoid an unrank like what happened to Justice Breaker. Here's an example of how you could make it more readable.orz OK
02:39:214 (4) - ^^
02:50:338 (4) - ^^
03:01:124 (5) - ^^and also chenged the rhythm...
03:26:742 (1,2) - Because it's sort of hard to predict how many times (1) will repeat, maybe try to do this pattern without kicksliders?OK

[Easy]
02:12:922 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) shouldn't overlap, and (2) and (3) should be further apart to avoid confusion.OK
02:39:214 (4) - OK
02:46:293 (1) - Maybe move this one grid down to avoid overlap.OK
02:50:338 (4) - Another confusing slider.orz follow the confused BGM
03:23:708 (1,1) - This note definitely comes too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty, and newer players won't have time to recover. Maybe just have the spinner end at 03:26:743 and have the map end there, too?I prefer shorting this spinner 1/1

That's all. Go ahead and forum PM for a re-check after fixes, let me know what you do/don't fix. Thanks!
thx for mod very much.btw congratulations on BAT Promotions
Lan wings
瞎了``神mapper又rank图了
S h i o n
瞎了``神mapper又rank图了
KanaRin

S h i o n wrote:

瞎了``神mapper又rank图了
跟隊的..
Topic Starter
No_Gu
...你们一群快自重
NatsumeRin
as Sapphire said... then ok rebubble.
SapphireGhost
Somehow, some objects got unsnapped... so resnap all notes for all difficulties. I think it should be okay after that.
Topic Starter
No_Gu
I was so worried that I became careless....
OK resnap all unsnaped objects and resnaped all kiai line and SV-change line
update
SapphireGhost
Re-check the snapping and everything is in place now. The map has nice flow and patterns, congratulations.
Topic Starter
No_Gu
Thank you very much >//<
tutuhaha
液!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
恭喜~
Stefan
Megpoid <333
fanzhen0019
恭喜 XD
kanpakyin
恭喜阿! 歌和圖都真心不錯
Kotone
you are mine
eikkaleyd
← ← 神mapper又rank图了,嫉妒恨
phonic
Congrats! o3o
ex666830
Easy 有note重疊

00:56:068 (1,1) -

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274021
Scorpiour
神麻婆又rank
Suzully
Congraz!
SapphireGhost

ex666830 wrote:

Easy 有note重疊

00:56:068 (1,1) -

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274021
Okay, ex is correct... the inheriting section changing the slider velocity needs to be snapped so the slider can work correctly.
This should be a quick re-rank after No_Gu is back online. Sorry about all of this...
Aoko
xD Yeah, when it was ranked, I went o-o why is it not ranked anymore? Please snap it >wwwww<~ So hard to play .__. The easy bec. of this.

Edit : How will you give kudos to ex since his post is exempt of kudosu? o-o
It was helpful, anyway.
LKs
oops this mistake shouldn't have occurred.

congrts on coming re-raank
Topic Starter
No_Gu
hahaha really careless...
anyway..sorry for this stupid wrong
fixed and update
Breeze
checked and nothing found
Rebubbled

The last fake note in [Insane] diff scared me /o/
SapphireGhost
Alright, playtested [Easy] again and checked with AIBat. The other difficulties had no changes since last time and I trust Breeze, so this can be safely re-ranked now. Thanks for your patience, everyone.
suzutsukikanade
yay re-ranked!
Topic Starter
No_Gu
really sorry about my mistake...
Anyway.finally it get re-rank.thx for everyone's support
Kotone
anyway you are mine
Topic Starter
No_Gu

karenying wrote:

anyway you are mine
anyway you're mine too
Aoko
>wwwwwwww<~~ Congratz again!
kanpakyin

No_Gu wrote:

karenying wrote:

anyway you are mine
anyway you're mine too
D: I'm not allowing about this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kotone

kanpakyin wrote:

D: I'm not allowing bout this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
don't worry you are mine too
Nymph

kanpakyin wrote:

D: I'm not allowing about this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
come with me=3= I will let you play with JoJo~
Topic Starter
No_Gu

kanpakyin wrote:

D: I'm not allowing about this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
why not come to my hougong like bakaying?
miss_master_old
独我論,
Animefan_old
Odd, I completed this map like 10 hours ago but it says I haven't got a score
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Animefan wrote:

Odd, I completed this map like 10 hours ago but it says I haven't got a score
haha It got once unranked..please re-play to get your ranked score
_Kiva
叫你不送分 你看被黑了吧
Topic Starter
No_Gu

_Kiva wrote:

叫你不送分 你看被黑了吧
我多善良
Pokie
恭喜=w=
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Pokie wrote:

恭喜=w=
谢pokie姐/
GeNJiii_old
♥ that song!
Grableuchte
I played it on "TuHard" and totally like this varied map. challenging to play and always interesting
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