1. 难度名改成Easy+
2. 00:04:464 (3) - 前面slider减少一个reverse, 这里加slider
3. 00:07:498 (3) - ^
4. 00:09:014 (5) - 提早1/2
5. 00:36:845 (3) - 放到(456,204)
6. 00:38:194 (2) - 拉平
7. 00:57:407 (2) - 1 grid up
8. 01:10:890 (5) - 这样 http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot135-2.jpg
9. 01:18:643 (4) - 放到(110,151)
10. 01:21:003 (3) - (424,112)
11. 02:07:857 (5) - 1 grid down
12. 02:45:947 (1) - how about this, http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot136-1.jpg
13. 02:59:767 (1) - 放到(104,140)

1. 01:24:036 (6) - 放到(348,280)
2. 01:24:542 (7,8) - slider
3. 02:04:486 (3) - 有点坑
4. 02:19:486 (2,3) - don't stack...
5. 02:34:520 (6) - 提前1/2?
6. 02:40:048 (5) - spacing?
7. 02:41:227 (2) - 往后1/2,,,
8. 03:16:115 (2) - no clap
9. 03:18:812 (2) - ^
10. 03:21:508 (2) - no clap at start
11. 03:22:351 (3,4) - 尾上clap
12. 03:23:362 (1) - 头尾clap

1. 00:32:295 (6,7) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot137-6.jpg
2. 00:33:980 (1,2) - ctrl+R 这里为什么要跳。。。。
3. 00:36:508 (4) - 1/2往后
4. 00:41:902 (1) - 拆成两个slider
5. 00:58:756 (1,2,3) - 为什么要跳。。。。 = =
6. 01:18:138 (1,2) - ctrl+r...
7. 01:53:025 (5) - 移到(324,272) 第二个点放在(304,328)
8. 02:39:205 (6) - 这个slider path看不清

1. 这难度比Shiiwa那个打起来舒服很多啊 分数差不多估计都刷这个了lol
2. 00:04:801 (3) - 放在(172,76)
3. 01:18:811 (4,5) - 这个滑条坏掉了=,= 上面貌似叠了个同tick的圈
4. 01:21:677 (1) - unrankable stack slider
5. 01:52:352 (2) - 尾上不要clap
6. 01:54:037 (3) - 头上no clap
7. 02:02:126 (3) - 尾上不要clap
8. 02:10:553 (6) - ctrl+r
9. 02:58:756 (6) - ^
10. 02:59:093 (7) - ^
11. 03:01:284 (5) - 这个滑条也坏掉了=,=

1. 这难度看起来还不错=w=
2. 00:43:924 (3) - ctrl+r
3. 00:44:261 (4) - ^
4. 00:59:935 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 空气人大好wwwww
5. 03:00:441 (5) - reverse略违和...

1. 把vocaloid和vocaloid2也加入tag吧。

1. 说实话并不是很赞成在easy里就用变速slider，不过感觉其实还不错，所以就请继续用吧！
2. 00:03:621 (2) - 第2轮折返之后好像没和音乐节奏对上，建议去掉折返，然后在00:04:295 - 到00:04:801 - 用折返slider。
3. 00:05:138 (3) - 建议向前移动到红线
4. 下一个combo和前面一样，感觉节奏乱了……建议你在前奏段干脆在长白线上做个circle，然后把note之间的间距拉大了用空拍填充，现在这里听着真心有点怪怪的
5. 00:24:374 (1) - 感觉应该结束在下一个白线。
6. 00:56:059 (4) - 这里也是感觉好像错位了？应该在后面红线？
7. 01:03:138 (6) - 这个感觉也该在后面红线？
8. 02:55:722 (4) - 感觉这个也似乎应该到白线
9. 03:05:160 - 感觉这个break有点不舒服，建议去掉吧

1. 00:05:307 - 感觉好像少个note，建议加上或者把slider延长到这里？
2. 00:05:981 - 同上，其实这里我觉得可以把后面的(2)挪过来～
3. 00:26:902 - 同样还是感觉少东西……
4. 00:36:003 (3) - 建议向前移动到白线
5. 02:19:654 - 这里。。测试的时候被坑了……加点东西吧……
6. 02:22:857 - 还是建议。。加个note什么的或者将slider节拍挪/拉到这里
7. 02:45:609 (6) - 建议延长到白线
8. 03:06:251 - break建议和easy一样。。

1. 00:09:352 (7) - suggest to move back to next red line
2. 00:40:216 (5,6) - this stack is not feeling well....actually i'd like to make a star by 00:39:879 (3,4,5,6,1) -
3. 00:53:531 (5) - suggest to remove clap...noisy a bit
4. 02:19:823 (3) - i'd like to use only a note here
5. 02:27:744 (5,6,7,1) - confusing a bit here~
6. 02:46:115 (2) - suggest to remove it~
7. 02:55:890 (5) - reduce 1 repeat
8. 03:00:947 (6,1) - i really don't like this stack...consider to move (6) away from (1)?

1. 强烈建议AR+1，这么爽快的跳AR7太不爽了……要不是因为Hard我觉得AR9会更好呢～
2. 然后没什么别的了……。。。除了太难了我FC不了>.<

1. 00:45:104 (6) - 这里下个NC吧。。太长了……
2. 01:25:048 (1) - 这里我觉得从前面白线开始下个spinner收尾这段比较好……持续到01:27:070 -
3. 01:54:121 (11) - 还是建议NC……绿花花的一片太长了也不好看>.<
4. 02:00:609 (2,3) - 出现一点读图障碍……
5. 02:03:980 (4,5,6) - 这个0.5ds的anti-stream...略坑，不如干脆再做近点～
6. 02:06:508 (3,4) - 这里建议换成2个note，然后分别压在slider结尾的红线上
7. 02:40:385 (1) - 没有stack好，而且其实我是建议稍微挪开一点头部间距的～
8. 02:45:947 (1) - 建议删掉～感觉这里留个空拍比较有味道～
9. 02:46:958 (4) - 建议做成折返然后把后面slider依次向后挪半拍，然后把(8)变成一个Note，hitsounds位置不变
10. 最后的2个白线三连听着有点别扭……

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~ ( 就mod兩個diff吧 )
  
  General :

1. 嘆氣了...SB只有出現在Shiiwa吧 所以要只把他用在那個diff上啊 把.osb的SB代碼用記事本放進去 更扯的是 我沒看到那兩張圖片lol!!!
   　
   Insane :
   　
2. 00:07:750 (8,9) - 疊好吧
3. 00:31:284 (8) - spacing從這裡變大吧
4. 00:34:486 (7) - 結尾去clap聽起來比較好
5. 00:45:862 (14) - 用成2notes吧 這感覺不好
6. 01:03:980 (2,3,4,5) - 這節奏是怎樣... 一定會被其他人挑 改一下吧orz
7. 01:35:834 (1) - 就這一個spinner 前後面卻那麼多break的時間 感覺超不舒服的...
8. 02:15:694 (1,1) - 雖然是Insane 但是還是離中心太遠了 而且才1/2拍的時間移動
9. 03:26:733 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 結尾的話 擺在中間吧 像這樣 :
   
   SPOILER

   
   　
   Easy :
   　
10. 00:44:935 (1) - 不喜歡這弧度的slider 試試這個吧
    　
    

    364,232,44935,2,8,B|344:308|256:368|168:308|148:232,1,300,0|12

11. 02:45:947 (1) - ^
    　
    

    100,228,165947,6,0,B|136:320|256:388|376:320|412:228,2,400,10|10|6

    　
    
    務必要閱讀~!

    紅色:是我覺得unrankable的 藍色:建議 但個人認為要改的 黑色:就單純建議

A s g a r d wrote:

IRC modding~

Log

18:13 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : your mod is always helpful to my map >.<
18:13 <No_Gu> : Thank you><
18:13 <No_Gu> : I will do my best to mod your next map
18:13 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : lol~
18:13 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : i want be your friend XD
18:14 <No_Gu> : OK :3
18:14 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : Lol~
18:15 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : Let's stay close friends as we
18:15 <No_Gu> : Of course
18:25 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : No_Guuuuuu~~
18:25 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : i find error
18:25 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : in your map
18:25 *A_s_g_a_r_d is editing (Megpoid GUMI - Dokugaron -code:altered-)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42413]
18:25 <No_Gu> : where?
18:25 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : 00:37:608 (9) -
18:25 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : here
18:25 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : unsnap!
18:25 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : and
18:25 <No_Gu> : wow..I'm silly
18:25 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : http://puu.sh/eQzf
18:26 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : look
18:26 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : why Shiiwa diff has 2 timming point?
18:26 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : timing*
18:26 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : and in normal
18:26 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : 01:03:477 (1) - '
18:26 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : here
18:26 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : and 02:18:982 (2) - her
18:27 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : AImod has just 1 error
18:27 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : but AIBat say 2error
18:27 <No_Gu> : unsnap?
18:27 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : yes
18:27 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : 02:08:196 (1) -
18:27 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : look
18:27 <No_Gu> : ...
18:28 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : Next: Infinity
18:28 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : lol
18:28 <No_Gu> : I move all green lines in one time..
18:28 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : 01:03:477 (1) - unsnap end of slider
18:28 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : http://puu.sh/eQzH
18:29 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : can you see this?
18:29 <No_Gu> : So there are many error TAT
18:29 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : don't worry
18:30 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : 01:03:140 (4) - this note
18:30 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : prev is 1.65
18:30 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : in normal
18:31 <No_Gu> : Orz I use 1.25 x at 3
18:31 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : lol
18:31 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : oh do you know AIBat?
18:31 <No_Gu> : I know..
18:31 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : hmm.
18:32 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : used everytime if you make beatmap or change something
18:32 <No_Gu> : but I didn't have java installation
18:32 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : hmm..
18:32 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : oh
18:32 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : 02:18:982 (2) -
18:32 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : here
18:32 <No_Gu> : So I can't use AIBAT now..
18:32 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : unsnap end of slider
18:32 <No_Gu> : oh
18:33 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : why shiiwa has 2 timing points?
18:34 <No_Gu> : Orz my mistake
18:34 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : 02:18:982 (2) - this
18:34 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : oh in shiiwa
18:34 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : maybe 1 grid left
18:34 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : stack with00:39:882 (3) -
18:36 <No_Gu> : I'm not sure this..Shion isn't online now
18:36 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : hmm.
18:36 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : so i check another diff
18:36 <No_Gu> : OK
18:37 <No_Gu> : don't need to check tuhard
18:37 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : okay
18:38 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : insane
18:38 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : 01:17:635 (3) -
18:38 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : not matched with 01:16:961 (1) -
18:38 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : http://puu.sh/eQB4
18:39 <No_Gu> : It's hard to make perfect if I use 1.7 SV
18:39 <No_Gu> : this is not too bad :3
18:39 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : hmm.
18:42 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : expect 01:17:635 (3) insane is good XD
18:45 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : in easy
18:45 <No_Gu> : I'm going to have supper._.
18:45 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : 01:03:141 (6) - is this jump??
18:45 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : oh
18:46 <No_Gu> : you can write down what you find
18:46 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : okay
18:46 <No_Gu> : I will deal with them after supper\o/
18:57 <No_Gu> : OK I'm back
18:57 <No_Gu> : anything else?
18:58 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : no..
18:59 <No_Gu> : OK you can post to forum to have a kud><
18:59 <A_s_g_a_r_d> : >,<

NatsumeRin wrote:

offset:+7 (114) K
你最好去找个taiko，别太差的。现在的Insane在taiko玩起来并不怎么好。taiko在找了
我注意到你有时候喜欢在连打结尾放个1/4短slider，我也不知道你是不是有什么理由……但如果没必要的话note就好，毕竟对打击感有一定影响，都改成圈了..平常图没有这个习惯但是这次不知道为什么就顺手拉成slider了
在转角度做重叠或排形状时或许不必太刻意的去弄……有点僵硬？当然这话说的有点不腰疼，但是可能是我混到现在才慢慢感觉到的一事。
play和edit的视角毕竟不太一样……我觉得这图在感觉表达上做的不错了，实际玩起来却总感觉比看时稍微差了一点orz orz毕竟还是第一次用V家曲尝试这样的style
这歌第一次听确实不够亮，但其实挺耐听的…… 嘛

不要kud，我也先不留星标了，这还是一个总体性的东西不算mod。

No_Gu wrote:

NatsumeRin wrote:

offset:+7 (114) K
你最好去找个taiko，别太差的。现在的Insane在taiko玩起来并不怎么好。taiko在找了
我注意到你有时候喜欢在连打结尾放个1/4短slider，我也不知道你是不是有什么理由……但如果没必要的话note就好，毕竟对打击感有一定影响，都改成圈了..平常图没有这个习惯但是这次不知道为什么就顺手拉成slider了
在转角度做重叠或排形状时或许不必太刻意的去弄……有点僵硬？当然这话说的有点不腰疼，但是可能是我混到现在才慢慢感觉到的一事。
play和edit的视角毕竟不太一样……我觉得这图在感觉表达上做的不错了，实际玩起来却总感觉比看时稍微差了一点orz orz毕竟还是第一次用V家曲尝试这样的style
这歌第一次听确实不够亮，但其实挺耐听的…… 嘛

不要kud，我也先不留星标了，这还是一个总体性的东西不算mod。

bossandy wrote:

Baka Gu !!!! 你不知道我會做TK GD嗎!!!!????
/me slaps No_Gu

KanaRin wrote:

圖不錯, 祝好運.

148,176,26406,2,0,B|228:248|228:248,1,85,2|0

192,128,148428,2,0,B|172:220|52:228|52:228,1,170,4|0
48,212,148850,1,0
24,216,148934,1,0
12,236,149018,1,0

328,128,164608,2,0,B|284:152|272:192,1,85,2|0
336,244,164945,2,0,B|300:284|216:288|200:216,1,170,10|2

SPOILER

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
- At the beginning the spacing changes quite unexpectably like 00:04:327 - it fits with some NCs as well ._. OK..add some NC
00:26:406 (10) - slider orientation adjustment

148,176,26406,2,0,B|228:248|228:248,1,85,2|0

K
00:31:125 (7,8,9,10) - better put them in unique spacing (make a rhombus) because you don't need to over-emphasize (9)K
00:34:496 (7) - remove clap here?I think it's fine..
00:45:956 (15) - NC as you've done before K
01:23:878 (7,8,13,14) - just feeling that they are placed quite randomlyhmm...random
02:00:451 (2) - removing clap here may fit the music betterK
02:28:428 (6) - tweeking the slider and notes a bit so it turns in a symmetrical wayK

192,128,148428,2,0,B|172:220|52:228|52:228,1,170,4|0
48,212,148850,1,0
24,216,148934,1,0
12,236,149018,1,0

02:44:608 (6,7) - slider shape adjustment

328,128,164608,2,0,B|284:152|272:192,1,85,2|0
336,244,164945,2,0,B|300:284|216:288|200:216,1,170,10|2

K
03:01:799 - need more variation other than simple stream without movement do a little change

slider shape could be better lol though I like how you use those hitsounds

[Normal+]
00:09:720 - no whistle as used last combo?K
00:51:349 (1,2) - This is very misleading, especially it's expected to be a normal diff.orz I moved all line once..So the mistake has appeared..
02:50:338 (4) - lol, just thought that the vocal may not fit this slider shapeI think it fits the drums..

[Easy]
00:08:203 (3) - NC here K

NatsumeRin wrote:

[TuHard]
HP-1?另外我还是不太习惯Hard就满天飞的感觉。。。我错了.....
01:02:810 (4) - 这个slider位置怪。。。在那三下3/4下来后立刻就出去了的话后面重音的感觉就没了，个人看法。改了下
01:04:833 (1,2,3) - 这不太好看，部分重叠的话如果只是一点一般都会给我这个感觉。。。改了
02:14:271 (4) - 和之前想说的一样改了
02:15:282 (1) - 这里听着更糟。。改了

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Easy]
AR+1 K
00:09:214 (2) - 这个弄的和前面那个2一样会好吗。。虽然这里节奏确实不太适合Easy……K
00:51:349 (1) - 我相信这个是无意的，但是绿线晚了一点不是么。。。嗯
00:56:068 (1,1) - 这个就灾难了啊恩
02:04:158 - 加音？还是线问题=_=
02:08:203 (1) - 蛤哭了

[Normal+]
01:08:708 (6,1) - 考虑直接并成一个slider？现在1开头那个音有点多余好
02:19:495 (3,4) - 这段开始有很多类似这个的1/2-叠的1/1-1/2。。我猜你可能是有意的，但这在Normal里效果可能不是很好，建议再考虑下，后面不再提。重排了

[Insane]
01:01:462 (11) - 这个音按节奏，往后1/2会不会更好？而且之前一段跳的在我看来有点莫名其妙（无感觉。。）部分remap了
01:24:721 (14) - ^这个的话我觉得还是我的听起来比较顺耳
02:15:704 (1) - 既然是要消音就早那么点结束给人家个准备时间会比较好？恩提早1/2
03:04:833 - 其他难度并没有这个break的，去掉？好
03:27:080 (5,6,7) - 结尾平淡了，试举一例 puu.sh/gtSA 换了一个

starred. 自己再仔细查遍线然后叫我

KanaRin wrote:

fixed some form wmf's mod. thz

NatsumeRin wrote:

bubbled.

SapphireGhost wrote:

Really old bubble, let's check it.

[General]
- The beatmap hasn't been uploaded correctly. When downloading I only got some of the difficulties (downloaded the rest individually), so please Full Submit the map and test it again.hope everything goes well now T.T
- You could save around 400 KB of filesize by converting the background image to jpg.OK
- For all difficulties at 03:07:529, consider dragging the break to that point and having it start on that downbeat (all the other breaks start on a downbeat here).OK

[Insane]
02:50:170 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Putting a note under the last note of a stream can cause the player to accidentally hit that one early while still trying to hit the notes in the stream. Reversing (1) or putting it somewhere else might be a good idea.hmm.change in another way
03:00:451 (5) - A map with a very similar slider to this one was deemed unrankable for that reason. Though I don't completely agree with this, to be on the safe side I think it should be changed. Would you be okay with something like this?OK

[TuHard]
- For the [Hard] difficulty, this map has a lot of big jumps (over 2.00x) that I'd probably avoid. There are a lot of them, though, so at least it's consistent. Just a tip for the future, then. Map looked good in general!

[Normal+]
- The difficulty name [Normal+] usually isn't used anymore. Since this is a relatively difficult mapset, I'd rename it to [Normal].want to follow NatsumeRin's Shinkaron and this diff has many 1/2 beats and there are 1.4x spacingduring kiai time ..I think normal+ is better
02:04:495 (3) - The change in slider velocity and all the repeats might be confusing here, try to map this more intuitively.OK
02:14:102 (3,4,5,6) - The (3,4) stack might be sort of confusing at low AR, try moving (4,5,6) somewhere else?
02:15:113 (6) - It would be great if you could make the path for this slider more clear and less confusing, we want to avoid an unrank like what happened to Justice Breaker. Here's an example of how you could make it more readable.orz OK
02:39:214 (4) - ^^
02:50:338 (4) - ^^
03:01:124 (5) - ^^and also chenged the rhythm...
03:26:742 (1,2) - Because it's sort of hard to predict how many times (1) will repeat, maybe try to do this pattern without kicksliders?OK

[Easy]
02:12:922 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) shouldn't overlap, and (2) and (3) should be further apart to avoid confusion.OK
02:39:214 (4) - OK
02:46:293 (1) - Maybe move this one grid down to avoid overlap.OK
02:50:338 (4) - Another confusing slider.orz follow the confused BGM
03:23:708 (1,1) - This note definitely comes too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty, and newer players won't have time to recover. Maybe just have the spinner end at 03:26:743 and have the map end there, too?I prefer shorting this spinner 1/1

That's all. Go ahead and forum PM for a re-check after fixes, let me know what you do/don't fix. Thanks!

S h i o n wrote:

瞎了``神mapper又rank图了

ex666830 wrote:

Easy 有note重疊

00:56:068 (1,1) -

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274021

karenying wrote:

anyway you are mine

No_Gu wrote:

karenying wrote:

anyway you are mine

anyway you're mine too

kanpakyin wrote:

D: I'm not allowing bout this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kanpakyin wrote:

D: I'm not allowing about this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kanpakyin wrote:

D: I'm not allowing about this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Animefan wrote:

Odd, I completed this map like 10 hours ago but it says I haven't got a score

_Kiva wrote:

叫你不送分 你看被黑了吧

Pokie wrote:

恭喜=w=