圖不錯, 祝好運.
嗯谢了KanaRin wrote:
圖不錯, 祝好運.
148,176,26406,2,0,B|228:248|228:248,1,85,2|000:31:125 (7,8,9,10) - better put them in unique spacing (make a rhombus) because you don't need to over-emphasize (9)
192,128,148428,2,0,B|172:220|52:228|52:228,1,170,4|002:44:608 (6,7) - slider shape adjustment
48,212,148850,1,0
24,216,148934,1,0
12,236,149018,1,0
328,128,164608,2,0,B|284:152|272:192,1,85,2|003:01:799 - need more variation other than simple stream without movement
336,244,164945,2,0,B|300:284|216:288|200:216,1,170,10|2
thx for modwmfchris wrote:
[Insane]
- At the beginning the spacing changes quite unexpectably like 00:04:327 - it fits with some NCs as well ._. OK..add some NC
00:26:406 (10) - slider orientation adjustment148,176,26406,2,0,B|228:248|228:248,1,85,2|0K
00:31:125 (7,8,9,10) - better put them in unique spacing (make a rhombus) because you don't need to over-emphasize (9)K
00:34:496 (7) - remove clap here?I think it's fine..
00:45:956 (15) - NC as you've done before K
01:23:878 (7,8,13,14) - just feeling that they are placed quite randomlyhmm...random
02:00:451 (2) - removing clap here may fit the music betterK
02:28:428 (6) - tweeking the slider and notes a bit so it turns in a symmetrical wayK192,128,148428,2,0,B|172:220|52:228|52:228,1,170,4|002:44:608 (6,7) - slider shape adjustment
48,212,148850,1,0
24,216,148934,1,0
12,236,149018,1,0328,128,164608,2,0,B|284:152|272:192,1,85,2|0K
336,244,164945,2,0,B|300:284|216:288|200:216,1,170,10|2
03:01:799 - need more variation other than simple stream without movement do a little change
slider shape could be better lol though I like how you use those hitsounds
[Normal+]
00:09:720 - no whistle as used last combo?K
00:51:349 (1,2) - This is very misleading, especially it's expected to be a normal diff.orz I moved all line once..So the mistake has appeared..
02:50:338 (4) - lol, just thought that the vocal may not fit this slider shapeI think it fits the drums..
[Easy]
00:08:203 (3) - NC here K
Download: Megpoid GUMI - Dokugaron -codealtered- (No_Gu) [TuHard].osuNatsumeRin wrote:
[TuHard]
HP-1?另外我还是不太习惯Hard就满天飞的感觉。。。我错了.....
01:02:810 (4) - 这个slider位置怪。。。在那三下3/4下来后立刻就出去了的话后面重音的感觉就没了,个人看法。改了下
01:04:833 (1,2,3) - 这不太好看,部分重叠的话如果只是一点一般都会给我这个感觉。。。改了
02:14:271 (4) - 和之前想说的一样改了
02:15:282 (1) - 这里听着更糟。。改了
thx for modNatsumeRin wrote:
[Easy]
AR+1 K
00:09:214 (2) - 这个弄的和前面那个2一样会好吗。。虽然这里节奏确实不太适合Easy……K
00:51:349 (1) - 我相信这个是无意的,但是绿线晚了一点不是么。。。嗯
00:56:068 (1,1) - 这个就灾难了啊恩
02:04:158 - 加音?还是线问题=_=
02:08:203 (1) - 蛤哭了
[Normal+]
01:08:708 (6,1) - 考虑直接并成一个slider?现在1开头那个音有点多余好
02:19:495 (3,4) - 这段开始有很多类似这个的1/2-叠的1/1-1/2。。我猜你可能是有意的,但这在Normal里效果可能不是很好,建议再考虑下,后面不再提。重排了
[Insane]
01:01:462 (11) - 这个音按节奏,往后1/2会不会更好?而且之前一段跳的在我看来有点莫名其妙(无感觉。。)部分remap了
01:24:721 (14) - ^这个的话我觉得还是我的听起来比较顺耳
02:15:704 (1) - 既然是要消音就早那么点结束给人家个准备时间会比较好?恩提早1/2
03:04:833 - 其他难度并没有这个break的,去掉?好
03:27:080 (5,6,7) - 结尾平淡了,试举一例 puu.sh/gtSA 换了一个
starred. 自己再仔细查遍线然后叫我
UpKanaRin wrote:
fixed some form wmf's mod. thz
thxNatsumeRin wrote:
bubbled.
thx for mod very much.btw congratulations on BAT PromotionsSapphireGhost wrote:
Really old bubble, let's check it.
[General]
- The beatmap hasn't been uploaded correctly. When downloading I only got some of the difficulties (downloaded the rest individually), so please Full Submit the map and test it again.hope everything goes well now T.T
- You could save around 400 KB of filesize by converting the background image to jpg.OK
- For all difficulties at 03:07:529, consider dragging the break to that point and having it start on that downbeat (all the other breaks start on a downbeat here).OK
[Insane]
02:50:170 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Putting a note under the last note of a stream can cause the player to accidentally hit that one early while still trying to hit the notes in the stream. Reversing (1) or putting it somewhere else might be a good idea.hmm.change in another way
03:00:451 (5) - A map with a very similar slider to this one was deemed unrankable for that reason. Though I don't completely agree with this, to be on the safe side I think it should be changed. Would you be okay with something like this?OK
[TuHard]
- For the [Hard] difficulty, this map has a lot of big jumps (over 2.00x) that I'd probably avoid. There are a lot of them, though, so at least it's consistent. Just a tip for the future, then. Map looked good in general!
[Normal+]
- The difficulty name [Normal+] usually isn't used anymore. Since this is a relatively difficult mapset, I'd rename it to [Normal].want to follow NatsumeRin's Shinkaron and this diff has many 1/2 beats and there are 1.4x spacingduring kiai time ..I think normal+ is better
02:04:495 (3) - The change in slider velocity and all the repeats might be confusing here, try to map this more intuitively.OK
02:14:102 (3,4,5,6) - The (3,4) stack might be sort of confusing at low AR, try moving (4,5,6) somewhere else?
02:15:113 (6) - It would be great if you could make the path for this slider more clear and less confusing, we want to avoid an unrank like what happened to Justice Breaker. Here's an example of how you could make it more readable.orz OK
02:39:214 (4) - ^^
02:50:338 (4) - ^^
03:01:124 (5) - ^^and also chenged the rhythm...
03:26:742 (1,2) - Because it's sort of hard to predict how many times (1) will repeat, maybe try to do this pattern without kicksliders?OK
[Easy]
02:12:922 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) shouldn't overlap, and (2) and (3) should be further apart to avoid confusion.OK
02:39:214 (4) - OK
02:46:293 (1) - Maybe move this one grid down to avoid overlap.OK
02:50:338 (4) - Another confusing slider.orz follow the confused BGM
03:23:708 (1,1) - This note definitely comes too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty, and newer players won't have time to recover. Maybe just have the spinner end at 03:26:743 and have the map end there, too?I prefer shorting this spinner 1/1
That's all. Go ahead and forum PM for a re-check after fixes, let me know what you do/don't fix. Thanks!
跟隊的..S h i o n wrote:
瞎了``神mapper又rank图了
Okay, ex is correct... the inheriting section changing the slider velocity needs to be snapped so the slider can work correctly.ex666830 wrote:
Easy 有note重疊
00:56:068 (1,1) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274021
anyway you're mine tookarenying wrote:
anyway you are mine
D: I'm not allowing about this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!No_Gu wrote:
anyway you're mine tookarenying wrote:
anyway you are mine
don't worry you are mine tookanpakyin wrote:
D: I'm not allowing bout this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
come with me=3= I will let you play with JoJo~kanpakyin wrote:
D: I'm not allowing about this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
why not come to my hougong like bakaying?kanpakyin wrote:
D: I'm not allowing about this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
haha It got once unranked..please re-play to get your ranked scoreAnimefan wrote:
Odd, I completed this map like 10 hours ago but it says I haven't got a score
我多善良_Kiva wrote:
叫你不送分 你看被黑了吧
谢pokie姐/Pokie wrote:
恭喜=w=