hillaryzx wrote:

Hi, Darksonic... a bit mod to give

General

Pass...

Sekai's Easy

00:01:733(3) - don't mind shortening this slider to 02:312?
00:04:820(3) - same as above but end it at 05:399
00:25:861(2) - put finish at the end of the slider
01:15:442(2) - add finish here
01:18:317(2) - add finish at beginning of the slider..

Ignacio's Normal

00:21:909(2) - remove repeat here..

Dax's Hard

00:20:832(1) - add finish at the beginning of the slider
00:26:580(1) - ^
00:36:460(6) - add finish
01:18:317(1) - make this a curve slider, seems a bit ugly..

Ok, I'll take my leave....

hillaryzx wrote:

Dax's Hard
00:20:832(1) - add finish at the beginning of the slider Kk
00:26:580(1) - ^ Kk
00:36:460(6) - add finish lol The note already have a finish
01:18:317(1) - make this a curve slider, seems a bit ugly.. Changed.

hillaryzx wrote:

Hi, Darksonic... a bit mod to give

General

Pass...

Sekai's Easy

00:01:733(3) - don't mind shortening this slider to 02:312? No~
00:04:820(3) - same as above but end it at 05:399 ^
00:25:861(2) - put finish at the end of the slider ok~
01:15:442(2) - add finish here ^
01:18:317(2) - add finish at beginning of the slider.. ^

ErufenRito wrote:

General:

Revisa bien el timing, algunaas partes necesitan hasta unos +30ms Necesitaría saber que partes ;_;

Insane:

00:06:364 (4) - termina el slider en 00:06:653 - esta en 1/8 Fixed.
00:10:592 (5) - Extiende hasta 00:10:951, y borra el circulo Ok.
00:43:646 - Agrega circulo aqui, tal y como lo hiciste con 00:37:897 (8) - Ok.

Y... ya me aburri de modear, quizas luego lo termine, no me des kudosu

412,192,31251,2,0,B|448:232|428:284,1,100,2|0
336,248,31969,1,2
240,216,32329,2,0,B|219:268|255:308,2,100
248,116,33406,5,2
...
96,200,83346,2,0,B|84:136|120:96,1,100,2|0

l1106188 wrote:

[Insane]
00:40:233 (1,2) - I think this slider not look pretty . let it get beautiful Ok, done.
00:44:903 (3) - NC? Nope.
00:50:652 (5) - ^ Ok.
01:04:125 (1,2) - not look pretty . Fixed.
01:27:478 (2) - NC? Nope.

l1106188 wrote:

[sekai's Easy]
remove 00:42:321's bookmark

00:18:317 (2) - get it on 00:18:496 ?! nope~
00:31:251 (2,3,4,1) - get it like this ?! http://puu.sh/ig4U ^
00:58:915 (3,4) - (4)'s rotation is covered by (3) , let me can't see rotation . what? o.o"
01:02:508 (3,1) - let them cover completely ok~
01:05:023 (4,6) - let (4) cover completely (6)'s end ^
01:22:987 (1,2) - this ?! http://puu.sh/ig4W nope~

l1106188 wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
01:27:478 (2) - NC? Nope thanks :3

Odaril wrote:

Add a red line at 3266 - with same BPM.
The last red line needs +5 (that makes it 9340 offset) and use 166,950 BPM. Fixed.

Insane
There are lots of square patterns. Try coming up with nicer patterns so your map looks better ?
00:07:703 (1) - this spinner needs to end on the red line. Fixed.
01:00:532 (1,2) - for consistency with 00:57:658 (10,11) - make them a 2.66x jump. In any way, 4.14x is way too big and doesn't go with the rest of the map at all. I deleted the jump on 01:00:532, and put these notes in the center.
01:07:538 (4) - this slider is entirely covered by hitbursts from the stream Fixed.
01:11:131 (5,1) - that's quite extreme for a jump, and very surprising. At least reduce it Fixed.
01:13:287 (8,1) - surprising and unexpected jump, I thought they were 1/1 Reduced it.
01:14:544 (7,1) - same Nah, this one seems ok.
01:21:011 (3,1) - quite big jump again. flip 01:21:191 (1,2,3,4) - vertically to fix ? No, but I made a different pattern more easier.

Odaril wrote:

Dax's Hard
00:07:522 (1,1) - I can't let this go, the circle is unacceptably soon after the spinner (and very far from the center of the screen too), shorten the spinner ... huh... Is a hard.. the people don't cry for that =3= But If you say so.. Shorter 1/4 is ok Changed.

Odaril wrote:

verdi's taiko oni:
ALL NOTES ARE UNSNAPPED
I know most taiko diffs are overmapped, but this is going too far. The streams don't make sense (both in their placement and the don and kat use). The beginning is way too slow and the speedup is too big (I don't even get why there's a speedup). I'd suggest to tone down the streams so the taiko fits better.
ok
Sorry but i don't want to change those streams, they fits with the map imo

agussdg wrote:

Insane:

00:31:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - y si lo pones arriba del otro cuando haces "el rombo" asi queda mas bunito y prolijo? :3 Originalmente estaban las notas una encima de la otra, pero en un mod me dijeron que las cambie, y yo creo que así queda un poco mejor.
01:12:412 (3,7,8) - confunde D: Se, lo cambié así nomas, ya lo arregle.
01:12:951 (6,7,8,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/iMgD asi? :B Ok.

Byakugan249 wrote:

General:
The lead in time is inconsistent. it has to be the same for each diff. set it to either 2000 or 2500. Ok.
since you changed the offset from Odaril's suggestion, re-snap all green lines. Oops, I forgot it D:, fixed.
The kiai time is inconsistent. it should be the same. Fixed.

Insane:
01:00:732 (2) - add a clap here? sounds nice IMO Ok.

MMzz wrote:

Sekai's Easy:

I didn't see anything bad placement wise, that part was good. Just some issues with combos I noticed. :3

00:13:652 (5) - add a finisher with that clap?
00:26:590 - add a note here? kinda like this: http://puu.sh/iYPG, then add new combo to the newly added note and remove new combo from 00:26:950 (1).
00:29:106 (1) - remove new combo
00:29:465 (2) - add new combo
00:30:903 (1) - remove new combo
00:32:340 (4) - add new combo
00:33:419 (1) - remove new combo
00:34:856 (1) - remove new combo
00:35:216 (2) - add new combo
00:43:481 (1) - remove new combo
00:43:841 (2) - add new combo
00:44:919 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:513 - maybe fill in the break with some notes?
01:14:748 (1) - remove new combo
01:15:467 (2) - add new combo
01:17:623 (1) - remove new combo
01:19:420 (1) - ^

Ignacio's Normal:

Nothing wrong as far as I saw, but why does it start later than all the other difficulties?

Dax's Hard:

Same as Sekai's diff, good note placement just some combo errors.

00:17:246 (1) - remove new combo
00:17:965 (3) - add new combo
00:19:582 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:903 (8) - add new combo
00:31:083 (1) - remove new combo
01:02:709 (1) - ^
01:03:967 (5) - add new combo
01:04:146 (1) - remove new combo
01:05:584 (1) - ^
01:13:490 (1) - ^
01:16:186 (5) - add new combo
01:16:366 (1) - remove new combo
01:17:623 (1) - ^
01:18:342 (3) - add new combo
01:23:374 (1) - remove new combo

Insane:

Looks fine.

Verdi's Taiko Oni:

Delete the .75 inheriting sections, it's already slow enough to get the effect you are aiming for.

For some reason all the notes after the kiai arn't matching up with the stanza lines, but play perfectly fine. WEIRD idk what to do about that.

Notes are fine, fun map verdi.

MMzz wrote:

Dax's Hard:
00:17:246 (1) - remove new combo Ok
00:17:965 (3) - add new combo Ok
00:19:582 (1) - remove new combo Ok
00:30:903 (8) - add new combo Ok
00:31:083 (1) - remove new combo Ok
01:02:709 (1) - ^ Ok
01:03:967 (5) - add new combo Ok
01:04:146 (1) - remove new combo Ok
01:05:584 (1) - ^ Ok
01:13:490 (1) - ^ Ok
01:16:186 (5) - add new combo Ok
01:16:366 (1) - remove new combo Ok
01:17:623 (1) - ^ Ok
01:18:342 (3) - add new combo Ok
01:23:374 (1) - remove new combo Ok

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Sorry for delay No problem xD.

[General]

Fixed that preview.

[Insane]

1. 01:20:499 (x): Add a note? No. it doesn't fit.

This is a good map, is really your first map? (Because my first maps is really bad...) Yes, it's my first one xD.

want to see this ranked and this map is in my favourites now. Thank you >w<

KuronumaSawako wrote:

[Dax's Hard]

1. 01:27:337 [b](x): Add a note? No thanks xd

Really nice Hard. yay~

ikari_kyon wrote:

[Dax's Hard]

1. 01:18:342 (1) - whistle al final del slider? Kk
2. 01:19:241 (2) - whistle? Kk

-Sekai- wrote:

ok i think I'll rename my diff to normal

ikari_kyon wrote:

[Insane]

1. 01:04:506 - supondre que aca no quisiste usar whistles Nop
2. 01:08:279 (7) - no whistle en el cuerpo del slider Ok.
3. 01:11:154 (5) - ↑ Ok.

-Sekai- wrote:

ok i think I'll rename my diff to normal ._. and fixed some ~

ikari_kyon wrote:

ademas la [Normal] tiene un spacing exageradamente alto.
Por eso la [Easy] deberia ser mas simple, para compensar el diff spread

ikari_kyon wrote:

nunca pedi cambiar el nombre =v=

JauiPlaY wrote:

[Insane]
00:54:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - The sound volume may be too loud for me. Reduced it by 10%.

1. Remove the red line in 00:03:266 , because it already have in 00:00:190. So here unnecessary to need use it.

JauiPlaY wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
00:19:402 (6) - Nc. Kk
01:14:030 (8) - ^. No thanks..

nich95 wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
01:18:342 (1) - Add finish in the beginning of slider. Kk

nich95 wrote:

[General]

1. Remove the red line in 00:03:266 , because it already have in 00:00:190. So here unnecessary to need use it.

Ok.

[Insane]
00:31:622 (4) - Add NC Ok.
00:58:576 (2) - Remove finish Ok.
01:08:279 (7) - Add finish in beginning and end of slider. Ok.
01:26:249 (5) - Add NC Ok.

lovhin456 wrote:

General:
- Inconsistency in kiai times. Ignacio's Normal 1st kiai time ends at 01:03:607 while others at 01:01:092. And Sekai's Easy 2nd kiai time starts at 01:06:820 while others at 01:06:842 Ok, I fixed these.

Insane:
- Lots of unsnapped objects too

SPOILER

00:03:266 (1) - Unsnapped circle
00:03:651 (2) - Unsnapped circle
00:04:037 (3) - Unsnapped circle
00:04:423 (4) - Unsnapped circle
00:04:809 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start)
00:04:809 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end)
00:05:774 (1) - Unsnapped circle
00:05:967 (2) - Unsnapped circle
00:06:160 (3) - Unsnapped circle
00:06:353 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start)
00:06:353 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end)
00:06:932 (5) - Unsnapped circle
00:07:317 (6) - Unsnapped circle
00:07:510 (7) - Unsnapped circle
00:07:703 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start)

Are you sure that these notes are unsnapped?

SPOILER

lovhin456 wrote:

Dax's Hard:
- Fun! <3
- But I'm a little worried about the slider velocity, it seems a little high For a Hard ''Table'' Not much.. The difference between Insane and Hard are not the S.V, Are the jump in the insane ewe.. And is easy. I can FC My diff.. And im noob.. So.. XD
- Lots of unsnapped objects

SPOILER

00:03:266 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
00:03:266 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end)
00:04:037 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start)
00:04:037 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
00:04:809 (3) - Unsnapped circle
00:05:388 (4) - Unsnapped circle
00:05:774 (1) - Unsnapped circle
00:05:967 (2) - Unsnapped circle
00:06:160 (3) - Unsnapped circle
00:06:353 (4) - Unsnapped circle
00:06:546 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start)
00:06:546 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end)
00:07:317 (6) - Unsnapped circle
00:07:510 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start)
00:07:510 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end)
BUGS! - Si encuentran cosas unsnapped avisenme.. El AIMod & el AIBat no me dijieron nada x:

---Assault[K]--- wrote:

[Insane]
00:13:944 (2,3,4,5,6) : Stream can be closer Nope.
00:37:083 (2) : Move down 1 or 2 grid No, because there will be a spacing error then.
01:26:981 (1) : Remove finish Ok.

---Assault[K]--- wrote:

[Dax's]
Many spacing errors

---Assault[K]--- wrote:

[Sekai's]
00:06:450: Spinner too close to (4) maybe move to red tick? nope it's fine
01:21:194: (1) is too far from previous note (Move up 1 grid?) the spacing is the same with all notes, and there is no problem with this note~

winber1 wrote:

Dax's

00:41:685 (3) - http://puu.sh/kVni fits better imo well.. kk
00:47:435 (3) - i'd tell you do to something similar to above to follow the vocals, but it ruins symmetry a little :/ but it's still a consideration you can take, perhaps you can think of a different symmetry to make it work out. kk
01:13:490 (6) - new combo? to follow the echo kk
01:14:928 (6) - new combo and remove combo from next note kk
01:16:186 (1) - remove combo and add new combo t onext note kk
01:19:600 (3,4,5,1) - i'd decrease the spacing a little No thanks..
01:23:374 (5) - new combo kk

winber1 wrote:

Insane

00:03:277 (1) - I'd just be more consistent and place this with the other notes. LOL, how the heck does that note is there?, fixed.
00:07:715 (1) - end spinner on red line. Fixed.
00:22:098 (7,1) - this isn't the best use of anti-spacing imo. It's readable but it doesn't really fit. I won't change this one.
00:51:747 (1,2) - move down to here? http://puu.sh/kVjf just my opinion tho Ok.
00:55:341 - the hitnormal is kinda noisy and loud, maybe decrease volume? Ok, decreased by 10%.
00:57:677 (10) - new combo to emphasize jump? Nope.
01:18:342 (1) - would sound better if you ended 1/2 tick earlier and added a note after it imo. http://puu.sh/kVjW Ok.

Guidelines wrote:

The number of maps by any mapper should not exceed the number of maps by the uploader: this means that if you have 2 diffs, no guest mapper can have more than 2 diffs; collaboration maps are exempt from this. Ask a BAT if you're unsure of who should upload the mapset.

Leorda wrote:

Hiii

General
* Your number of diff are few than guest mapper

Guidelines wrote:

The number of maps by any mapper should not exceed the number of maps by the uploader: this means that if you have 2 diffs, no guest mapper can have more than 2 diffs; collaboration maps are exempt from this. Ask a BAT if you're unsure of who should upload the mapset.

* Inconsistent timing section http://puu.sh/maO0
* Make sure the Audio Lead-In is consistent on each diff

Nice job

Darksonic wrote:

Casi 14 paginas tiene esto ya, mother of god no se rankeara nunca mas ;_________;

Darksonic wrote:

Casi 14 paginas tiene esto ya, mother of god no se rankeara nunca mas ;_________;

Kenezz wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
00:19:582 (2) - Considera empezar el combo aqui en vez de aqui 00:19:402. No lo considerare. Lo Hare. ewe Fixed.
00:35:216 (1) - Un whistle no vendría mal aquí, ahora se oye un poco vació. No siento que cambie mucho pero Igual xD Added.
00:46:716 (1) - Lo mismo que el punto anterior, se oye un poco vació, en este caso yo preferiría un finish. Added.
01:20:858 (4,5) - Te sugiero que en esta parte uses un espacio mas cerrado para evitar confusiones por el anterior slider con un sv reducido, http://puu.sh/nste, referido a la confusión por el aceleramiento del cursor y en el gameplay se sienten las notas disparadas, y bien, si quieres agregar algo jumpy te sugiero que lo hagas aquí 01:21:217 (1) pues inclusive la música lo sugiere. Solo lo de acercar notas ewe Kk.
01:24:182 (1) - El finish aquí se oye un poco mal, ademas de que la pista no lo sugiere adelante hay otras dos notas con finish y lo que hace este es opacar el sonido de los otros, eliminalo si quieres. Kk

Kenezz wrote:

[Insane]
00:31:622 (1) - Encuentro el new combo innecesario porque el patrón el básicamente el mismo y obviamente así es mas fácil leerlo.
00:51:747 (1) - Lo mismo que el punto anterior, elimina el new combo, ademas el combo es demasiado corto.
00:52:826 (2) - Elimina el finish del inicio, si quieres puedes cambiarlo por whistle para que no suene vacío.
00:56:779 (6) - Agrega un new combo para ser consitente con la siguiente parte (00:59:654 (1))
00:58:576 (2) - Missing clap al inicio.
01:00:552 (1) - Elimina el new combo, es totalmente innecesario.
01:05:224 (5) - La voz sugiere que el new combo debe iniciar aqui o aqui 01:05:045.
01:26:968 (1) - Cambia el whistle por un finish.
-Bien es todo, la diff no esta mal aunque podría ser mejor, algunas notas encimadas hacen que el espacio luzca un poco sucio pero podrías mejorarlo o/

Darksonic wrote:

todo fixeado, incluyendo la de Verdis.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Dax's Hard:

• 00:35:216 (1) - A finish here would fit rather well. Of course~ Kk
• 01:08:279 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note to stay consistent with 00:56:779 (5). Fixed.
• 01:18:342 (1,2,3) - Yeah, change this to 0.75x. The transition from normal to half speed it super weird. I think no.. Is normal. xD

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Hello~ Fulfilling a promise! (#modreq)

General:

• Insane has a later Audio Lead-in, since they all start at the same time, they should all be the same. Except for Normal (look bellow).

Insane:

• 00:06:943 (5,6,7) - These notes should be a little closer, jumps feel weird when they're slowed down.
• 00:42:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -This seems to be one big confusing mess. It will cause the majority of players to break their combos. Please re-arrange this pattern into something less frustrating and readable.

The only major problem I have with this difficulty is the constant use of patterns like this. Please avoid using patterns like this very often in the future, for they play pretty poorly.

DaxMasterix wrote:

Hello Kiddo. Im dax. Im in your list right? ;_; over 1 month ago... ;_; Some weeks you says ''You're 2 more up'' ;_; and now i think im are 20 more up ;_; awakening is crying

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Send me a PM, please.
I'll mod your map next, sorry I forgot.

Kenezz wrote:

Let's go!