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IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
[Easy]
00:17:917 (1,1) - Change clap with finish.
00:26:417 - Finish.
00:34:899 - ^
00:38:417 (1) - Eh,spacing..try to move 00:36:917 (4) 1 grid left somehow if you still want to keep symmetria.
00:42:417 (1) - Finish?
00:50:417 - ^
00:58:417 - ^
01:08:417 (1) - ^
01:16:417 - ^
01:24:417 (3) - ^
01:32:417 - ^
01:40:417 (1) - ^
01:48:417 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:17:917 (3,1) - Change (3) to a clap and add finish to (1).
00:26:417 (1) - Finish.
00:42:417 (1) - ^
01:16:417 (3) - ^
01:24:417 - ^
01:32:417 - ^

[Insane]
00:17:917 (8,1) - Same stuff about clap and finish.
00:26:417 (1) - Finish.
00:50:417 (1) - ^
00:54:417 (1) - ^
00:58:417 (1) - ^
01:08:417 (1) - ^
01:16:417 (3) - ^
01:24:417 (9) - ^
01:32:417 - ^
01:48:417 (1) - ^

[Special]
Beginning kills half HP bar and that's bad.
Otherwise guests are fine to me.

Nice song and map.
Star~
kodomonoyume
243 posts
Joined June 2009
kodomonoyume

IceBeam wrote:

[Special]
Beginning kills half HP bar and that's bad.
I think it's ok because the beginning part is quite easy, and you can get HP back soon (before the lyrics begin.)
Anyway, if it really troubles a lot, I will try to reduce the HP drain rate.
Otherwise guests are fine to me.
thank you~
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,233 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>IceBeam

Fix some Thanks
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
:)
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
Good luck for this great song
and thanks for knowing this game<<<
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[General]

  • • Disable countdown since its unused
[Easy]

  • • 00:13:917 (7) - Add a New Combo
    • 00:17:917 (1) - Remove the New Combo
    • 00:26:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
    • 00:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
    • 00:36:917 (4,1) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing. (spacing should be always consistent on easier difficulties)
    • 01:12:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
    • 01:14:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
    • 01:24:417 (3) - Add a New Combo
    • 01:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
    • 01:28:417 (2) - Add a New Combo
    • 01:46:417 (3,4) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing.
    • 01:48:417 (4) - Add a New Combo
    • 01:51:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
    • 01:52:417 (2) - Add a New Combo

[Normal]

  • • 00:13:417 (5) - Add a New Combo
    • 00:15:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
    • 00:17:417 (1) - ^
    • 00:29:417 (1) - ^
    • 00:30:417 (2) - Add a New Combo
    • 01:36:417 (5) - ^
    • 01:40:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns
    • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)
[impossiblexu's Hard]

  • • 00:27:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns
[Insane]

  • • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)
[Kodomo's Special]

  • • 00:27:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns
    • 01:40:000 (break) - ^
miss_dior
miss_dior
why this not raked yet >_<
i love it and a star ;)
Kuroneko-sHerald
1,081 posts
Joined August 2008
Kuroneko-sHerald
Nice skin :D

[Insane]
01:39:542 (1) - Unrankable spinner. It must gives a minimum of 3000 bonus point on auto to be rankable (your gives 2000).
An easy way to fix is to remove 01:39:417 (5) - , move the spinner from 01:39:542 (1) - to 01:39:417 - and end it at 01:40:417 -

All other diffs are fine to me.

Star ~
Gonzvlo
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2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

01:39:542 (1) - Unrankable spinner. It must gives a minimum of 3000 bonus point on auto to be rankable (your gives 2000).
I thought the minimun was 2000

General
  1. It would be nice if you resize the BG to 1024x768, It might need some cropping, But you'll avoid the black bars.
  2. Remove countdown on Easy, Normal and Insane (It's not used)
Easy
  1. 00:09:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - In compare with the whole diff, this combo is too long, Use New Combo on (6)
  2. 00:21:417 (1,2) - That's an ungly overlap, try this
  3. 01:35:417 (8) - The repeat on this slider sounds off, Make this slider 1/1 long
Normal
  1. 00:14:917 (6,1) - You should unstack this. (Color stacking)
  2. 00:20:917 (4) - Use a vertical flip so this is not under the last slider.
  3. 00:25:917 (4,1) - I still think color stacking looks ugly.
  4. 01:31:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This combo is too long, I suggest using New Combo on (5).
  5. 01:39:542 - I strongly suggest continue mapping here since you mapped this part on the other diffs including Easy.
  6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.
impossiblexu's Hard
  1. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency between diffs finish this spinner here: 01:59:417
Insane
  1. 00:10:917 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing regular.
  2. 00:14:417 (2,3) - Fix Spacing
  3. 00:26:417 (1,2,3) - This jumps are too random, reduce spacing or use regular spacing.
  4. 00:32:167 (5,1) - Fix spacing, This doesn't look good if you do it with 2 circles only.
  6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.
kodomo's Especial
  1. 01:54:417 (1,2,3) - Increase the volume for this notes.
  2. To keep consitency between diffs finish this spinner here: 01:59:417
Good Job, Have a star.
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
SPOILER

yangzd88 wrote:

[许哥]
00:08:417 (3,4,5,6) - 这个很不好认..1stPC以为这是3/4拍打出了50rofl Fixed
00:22:417 (1) - 能nazi一下这个不对称吗..lol Fixed
01:53:917 (1) - 好像是1/3.. 这个…我又放慢听了几遍 觉得还是1/4接近点

xxheroxx wrote:

[impossiblexu's Hard]

  • • 00:27:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns
I think add a break is better

Gonzvlo wrote:

impossiblexu's Hard
  1. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency between diffs finish this spinner here: 01:59:417
I think it's too long
Thank you very much~
抱歉 太懒了 :P
Download: fripSide - grand blue (kanpakyin) [impossiblexu's Hard].osu
kodomonoyume
243 posts
Joined June 2009
kodomonoyume

xxheroxx wrote:

[Kodomo's Special]
  • • 00:27:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns
    • 01:40:000 (break) - ^
    sorry, i prefer to have some breaks in the beatmap.
    also i think these two are not bad anyway.
thank you~

Gonzvlo wrote:

kodomo's Especial
  1. 01:54:417 (1,2,3) - Increase the volume for this notes.
    fixed.
  2. To keep consitency between diffs finish this spinner here: 01:59:417
    sorry, i think stopping at 01:58:417 is better.
thank you~
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,233 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

  • • Disable countdown since its unused
Fix

[Easy]

  • • 00:13:917 (7) - Add a New Combo
    • 00:17:917 (1) - Remove the New Combo
    • 00:26:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
    • 00:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
    • 00:36:917 (4,1) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing. (spacing should be always consistent on easier difficulties)
    • 01:12:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
    • 01:14:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
    • 01:24:417 (3) - Add a New Combo
    • 01:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
    • 01:28:417 (2) - Add a New Combo
    • 01:46:417 (3,4) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing.
    • 01:48:417 (4) - Add a New Combo
    • 01:51:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
    • 01:52:417 (2) - Add a New Combo
ALL Fix

[Normal]

  • • 00:13:417 (5) - Add a New Combo Fix
    • 00:15:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo Fix
    • 00:17:417 (1) - ^ Fix
    • 00:29:417 (1) - ^ Fix
    • 00:30:417 (2) - Add a New Combo Fix
    • 01:36:417 (5) - ^ Fix
    • 01:40:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns Fix
    • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)X unification with Hard and apecial
[Insane]
  • • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)X unification with Hard and apecial
Thanks >"<

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Insane]
01:39:542 (1) - Unrankable spinner. It must gives a minimum of 3000 bonus point on auto to be rankable (your gives 2000).
An easy way to fix is to remove 01:39:417 (5) - , move the spinner from 01:39:542 (1) - to 01:39:417 - and end it at 01:40:417 -
Well..2000 is Rankable

Gonzvlo wrote:

General
  1. It would be nice if you resize the BG to 1024x768, It might need some cropping, But you'll avoid the black bars.
  2. Remove countdown on Easy, Normal and Insane (It's not used)
Fix

Easy
  1. 00:09:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - In compare with the whole diff, this combo is too long, Use New Combo on (6)X
  2. 00:21:417 (1,2) - That's an ungly overlap, try thisX
  3. 01:35:417 (8) - The repeat on this slider sounds off, Make this slider 1/1 long X
Normal
  1. 00:14:917 (6,1) - You should unstack this. (Color stacking)X
  2. 00:20:917 (4) - Use a vertical flip so this is not under the last slider.Change some
  3. 00:25:917 (4,1) - I still think color stacking looks ugly.X
  4. 01:31:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This combo is too long, I suggest using New Combo on (5). Fix
  5. 01:39:542 - I strongly suggest continue mapping here since you mapped this part on the other diffs including Easy.Fix
  6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.
X

Insane
  1. 00:10:917 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing regular.Fix
  2. 00:14:417 (2,3) - Fix SpacingFix
  3. 00:26:417 (1,2,3) - This jumps are too random, reduce spacing or use regular spacing.Fix
  4. 00:32:167 (5,1) - Fix spacing, This doesn't look good if you do it with 2 circles only.Fix
  6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.
X
Thanks
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
General
  • ● you should be Insane's 01:07:667 - this green line ? & 01:07:917 - add Normal custom1 whistle?
Easy
  • ● 00:52:417 (3) - 1grid down
Normal
impossiblexu's Hard
Insane
  • ● 00:16:667 (5,6) near
    ● 00:32:167 (5,1) ^
kodomo's Special
fine.



+ star~
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,233 posts
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Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Muya wrote:

General
  • ● you should be Insane's 01:07:667 - this green line ? & 01:07:917 - add Normal custom1 whistle?
Easy
  • ● 00:52:417 (3) - 1grid down
fix

Normal
impossiblexu's Hard
@impossiblexu

Insane
  • ● 00:16:667 (5,6) near X I think it is OK
    ● 00:32:167 (5,1) ^
X DS!
Thanks
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
aesopl19193
Nice!
I cannot find any problems
Good mapset and good song
star~ :)

走後門啊啊
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
Areas ~ sora ni utsusu kimi tono sekai ~ 要不要大写之类的 ._.

Insane AR-1 :o

great map 8-)
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
SPOILER

Muya wrote:

impossiblexu's Hard
All fixed~ Thank you very much~

Download: fripSide - grand blue (kanpakyin) [impossiblexu's Hard].osu
kanpakyin
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Topic Starter
kanpakyin

ignorethis wrote:

Areas ~ sora ni utsusu kimi tono sekai ~ 要不要大写之类的 ._. 問了kanopu= =說Sora要大寫

Insane AR-1 :o DONE

great map 8-)
Thanks
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
wait, before it get bubbled, a quick check through the map:

[General]
[kodomo's Special] set default skin as preferred skin but other diffs not
kiai时间略长,只有老许难度中间用了re-kiai手法,其他难度不加上吗?

[Easy]
01:02:417 (4) - new combo?
01:06:417 (3) - too loud at the last beat.

[Normal]
00:47:917 (2) - clap at first beat is missing..?

[impossiblexu's Hard]
00:25:292 (4) - clap maybe?
01:17:792 (5) - 是否挪后1/4会比较好(就叠在6上?)

[Insane]
00:32:167 (5,1) - 大丈夫?
01:23:792 (4,5,6) - nazi一下,这里难看了

[kodomo's Special]
fine.

不错.
kanpakyin
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Topic Starter
kanpakyin

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[kodomo's Special] set default skin as preferred skin but other diffs not
kiai时间略长,只有老许难度中间用了re-kiai手法,其他难度不加上吗?

[Easy]
01:02:417 (4) - new combo? FIX
01:06:417 (3) - too loud at the last beat. FIX

[Normal]
00:47:917 (2) - clap at first beat is missing..? FIX

[Insane]
00:32:167 (5,1) - 大丈夫? FIX
01:23:792 (4,5,6) - nazi一下,这里难看了 FIX
不错.
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
SPOILER

NatsumeRin wrote:

impossiblexu's Hard]
00:25:292 (4) - clap maybe? 感觉听上去有点乱
01:17:792 (5) - 是否挪后1/4会比较好(就叠在6上?) 好主意~
太谢谢你啦~

Download: fripSide - grand blue (kanpakyin) [impossiblexu's Hard].osu
kodomonoyume
243 posts
Joined June 2009
kodomonoyume

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[kodomo's Special] set default skin as preferred skin but other diffs not
my mistake, sorry for that >.>

>.< thank you~
Kurai
osu! Alumni
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Kurai
[Easy]
01:59:417 - Useless timing section

[Normal]
00:17:417 (4) - New combo ?
01:02:167 (6) - Better like http://puu.sh/IDG
01:55:417 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/4 earlier
01:58:917 - Useless timing section

[Insane]
01:55:417 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/4 earlier

[kodomo's Special]
00:35:167 (4) - Remove 1 reverse and move (2) 1/4 earlier
01:22:417 (6) - New combo
01:26:417 (7) - New combo

:3
kodomonoyume
243 posts
Joined June 2009
kodomonoyume

KuraiPettan wrote:

[kodomo's Special]
00:35:167 (4) - Remove 1 reverse and move (2) 1/4 earlier no, sorry~
01:22:417 (6) - New combo ok
01:26:417 (7) - New combo ok
thank you~
Last edited by kodomonoyume , edited 1 time in total.
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

Ehhh, nothing to mod...map is perfect x3.
Only thing is that on harder stages i can't see if i hit 100 or 300 >_> besides everything is awesome.
Star :D
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

KuraiPettan wrote:

[Easy]
01:59:417 - Useless timing section Fix

[Normal]
00:17:417 (4) - New combo ?Fix
01:02:167 (6) - Better like http://puu.sh/IDGFix
01:55:417 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/4 earlierX
01:58:917 - Useless timing sectionX

[Insane]
01:55:417 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/4 earlierX
Thanks
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
[Shalon]
Quite cool song.

[Easy]

00:17:917 (4) - I think finish is more cool than clap.
00:18:417 (1) - ^
00:53:417 (5) - right 1grid, and up 1grid
01:04:917 (1) - how about stack it with 01:02:417 (1) ?

[Normal]

01:28:917 (6) - how about stack it with 01:26:417 (2) ?
01:43:417 (4) - remove new combo
^01:46:417 (1) - (If you remove the former new combo, remove this too.)

impossiblexu's Hard

fine :D

Insane

map is cool, but... many notes are focused at center. It's not good to see..




good job ;)
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
>[Shalon]
Fix some :D
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Skin can be quite disturbing but the map looks good!
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Overall:
For all difficulties, hitsound is a bit too quiet, especially so in the first half. Consider volume up, particularly the clap hitsound.
At first I'd like to comment on intermittent clap hitsound, but after some investigation I think it's fine...

[Insane]
00:41:917 (3) - I was expecting a clap... but meh
01:42:417 (1,2,3) - too sudden I think

Other diffs are nicely done.
kodomo's diff is quite fun~


No need for kudosu for this post if you deem so
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

yongtw123 wrote:

Overall:
For all difficulties, hitsound is a bit too quiet, especially so in the first half. Consider volume up, particularly the clap hitsound.
At first I'd like to comment on intermittent clap hitsound, but after some investigation I think it's fine... Fix

[Insane]
00:41:917 (3) - I was expecting a clap... but mehFix
01:42:417 (1,2,3) - too sudden I think X I think it is OK
Thanks for mod
ignorethis
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ignorethis
bbl
KanaRin
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KanaRin
Star>w<
lkp
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lkp
hi
78AZAZ
10 posts
Joined May 2010
78AZAZ
我来了
Star_Dolphin
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Joined July 2010
Star_Dolphin
star
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Overall]

Rename "Normal-sliderslide.wav" & "Normal-sliderslide2.wav" to "normal-sliderslide.wav" & "normal-sliderslide2.wav". Remember to full submit after this fix.

[Difficulties]

[Insane]

It's highly not suggested to put a green line on the same place where is the offset. Change the offset to -583 and resnap everything, remember that you should do this on every difficulty.

That's all, after you've fixed I can rank.
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Rename "Normal-sliderslide.wav" & "Normal-sliderslide2.wav" to "normal-sliderslide.wav" & "normal-sliderslide2.wav". Remember to full submit after this fix. Fix

[Difficulties]

[Insane]

It's highly not suggested to put a green line on the same place where is the offset. Change the offset to -583 and resnap everything, remember that you should do this on every difficulty. Fix
Thanks ;)
and full upload >_<
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Look at the 1/3 notes on every diff, they're bad snapped, you should snap them manually >_<
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

osuplayer111 wrote:

Look at the 1/3 notes on every diff, they're bad snapped, you should snap them manually >_<
Done>_<
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Sorry but I've changed idea about ranking this, I'd like to see another BAT checking through the map before rank... hope you understand.

Re-Bubbled~
SamiPale
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SamiPale
没钱赚了 :(
Alace
osu! Alumni
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Alace
BPM 120 is so hard
hard,insane,kodo diffs are so good
ranked
JoJo
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JoJo
Congratulations~=w=
kodomonoyume
243 posts
Joined June 2009
kodomonoyume
8-)
eveless
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Joined April 2009
eveless
so fast
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
gratz :D
KanaRin
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KanaRin
gratz>w<
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
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kanpakyin
Thanks all www
Poppo
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Poppo
good!!:)
chiisai_tanuki
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chiisai_tanuki
Great :D
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