yangzd88 wrote:

Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeecheck..Don't kd too

[EZ]
00:12:417 (6) - 对准1的位置(对准grid? Fix
01:04:417 (8) - 1 grids left Fix
01:11:417 (3) -

SPOILER

[attachment=0:9ec6e]1.png[/attachment:9ec6e]

Fix
01:33:417 (5) - remove finish. Fix
01:39:917 (1) - 这里不适合用spinner带过.. Fix

[IS]
01:49:417 - 从这以后的1/3真的很鬼畜 真的..缩短间距? X 縮短就不好玩了 :/
00:40:167 (5,6,7) -

SPOILER

[attachment=1:9ec6e]2.png[/attachment:9ec6e]

Fix

yangzd88 wrote:

[speeeecial]
00:15:917 (3) - 0.0xds+remove gdsnap?好像没对整齐
这里本来就没开grid呀<.<而且我觉得是对齐了……
00:26:417 - map了这个break?如果这个改了老许的难度也要这样..
感觉这个break不违和呀<.<……

00:54:167 (10) - 跳过头扭到腰了rofl
的确不是很好看<.<我是按照ds递增排的……至少布局上还过得去吧>.>

01:05:917 (1) - 音量减小减少这个slider的存在感.
已经降了2格了呀<.<嘛……再降一格好了……
01:37:917 (8) - 改成1/4 stream slider?
原来是1/4的<.<然后觉得没感觉……于是1/8了> < (其实我想把前面00:25:917 (7) 也改成1/8的xD

IceBeam wrote:

[Special]
Beginning kills half HP bar and that's bad.
I think it's ok because the beginning part is quite easy, and you can get HP back soon (before the lyrics begin.)
Anyway, if it really troubles a lot, I will try to reduce the HP drain rate.
Otherwise guests are fine to me.

• • Disable countdown since its unused

• • 00:13:917 (7) - Add a New Combo
  • 00:17:917 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 00:26:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 00:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 00:36:917 (4,1) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing. (spacing should be always consistent on easier difficulties)
  • 01:12:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:14:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:24:417 (3) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:28:417 (2) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:46:417 (3,4) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing.
  • 01:48:417 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:51:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:52:417 (2) - Add a New Combo

• • 00:13:417 (5) - Add a New Combo
  • 00:15:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 00:17:417 (1) - ^
  • 00:29:417 (1) - ^
  • 00:30:417 (2) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:36:417 (5) - ^
  • 01:40:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns
  • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)

• • 00:27:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns

• • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)

• • 00:27:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns
  • 01:40:000 (break) - ^

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

01:39:542 (1) - Unrankable spinner. It must gives a minimum of 3000 bonus point on auto to be rankable (your gives 2000).

1. It would be nice if you resize the BG to 1024x768, It might need some cropping, But you'll avoid the black bars.
2. Remove countdown on Easy, Normal and Insane (It's not used)

1. 00:09:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - In compare with the whole diff, this combo is too long, Use New Combo on (6)
2. 00:21:417 (1,2) - That's an ungly overlap, try this
3. 01:35:417 (8) - The repeat on this slider sounds off, Make this slider 1/1 long
   

1. 00:14:917 (6,1) - You should unstack this. (Color stacking)
2. 00:20:917 (4) - Use a vertical flip so this is not under the last slider.
3. 00:25:917 (4,1) - I still think color stacking looks ugly.
4. 01:31:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This combo is too long, I suggest using New Combo on (5).
5. 01:39:542 - I strongly suggest continue mapping here since you mapped this part on the other diffs including Easy.
6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.

1. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency between diffs finish this spinner here: 01:59:417

1. 00:10:917 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing regular.
2. 00:14:417 (2,3) - Fix Spacing
3. 00:26:417 (1,2,3) - This jumps are too random, reduce spacing or use regular spacing.
4. 00:32:167 (5,1) - Fix spacing, This doesn't look good if you do it with 2 circles only.
6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.

1. 01:54:417 (1,2,3) - Increase the volume for this notes.
2. To keep consitency between diffs finish this spinner here: 01:59:417

xxheroxx wrote:

[Kodomo's Special]

• • 00:27:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns
  • 01:40:000 (break) - ^
  sorry, i prefer to have some breaks in the beatmap.
  also i think these two are not bad anyway.

Gonzvlo wrote:

kodomo's Especial

1. 01:54:417 (1,2,3) - Increase the volume for this notes.
   fixed.
2. To keep consitency between diffs finish this spinner here: 01:59:417
   sorry, i think stopping at 01:58:417 is better.

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Disable countdown since its unused

Fix

[Easy]

• • 00:13:917 (7) - Add a New Combo
  • 00:17:917 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 00:26:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 00:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 00:36:917 (4,1) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing. (spacing should be always consistent on easier difficulties)
  • 01:12:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:14:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:24:417 (3) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:28:417 (2) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:46:417 (3,4) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing.
  • 01:48:417 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:51:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:52:417 (2) - Add a New Combo

ALL Fix

[Normal]

• • 00:13:417 (5) - Add a New Combo Fix
  • 00:15:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo Fix
  • 00:17:417 (1) - ^ Fix
  • 00:29:417 (1) - ^ Fix
  • 00:30:417 (2) - Add a New Combo Fix
  • 01:36:417 (5) - ^ Fix
  • 01:40:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns Fix
  • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)X unification with Hard and apecial

[Insane]

• • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)X unification with Hard and apecial

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Insane]
01:39:542 (1) - Unrankable spinner. It must gives a minimum of 3000 bonus point on auto to be rankable (your gives 2000).
An easy way to fix is to remove 01:39:417 (5) - , move the spinner from 01:39:542 (1) - to 01:39:417 - and end it at 01:40:417 -

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. It would be nice if you resize the BG to 1024x768, It might need some cropping, But you'll avoid the black bars.
2. Remove countdown on Easy, Normal and Insane (It's not used)

Fix

Easy

1. 00:09:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - In compare with the whole diff, this combo is too long, Use New Combo on (6)X
2. 00:21:417 (1,2) - That's an ungly overlap, try thisX
3. 01:35:417 (8) - The repeat on this slider sounds off, Make this slider 1/1 long X
   

Normal

1. 00:14:917 (6,1) - You should unstack this. (Color stacking)X
2. 00:20:917 (4) - Use a vertical flip so this is not under the last slider.Change some
3. 00:25:917 (4,1) - I still think color stacking looks ugly.X
4. 01:31:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This combo is too long, I suggest using New Combo on (5). Fix
5. 01:39:542 - I strongly suggest continue mapping here since you mapped this part on the other diffs including Easy.Fix
6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.

X

Insane

1. 00:10:917 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing regular.Fix
2. 00:14:417 (2,3) - Fix SpacingFix
3. 00:26:417 (1,2,3) - This jumps are too random, reduce spacing or use regular spacing.Fix
4. 00:32:167 (5,1) - Fix spacing, This doesn't look good if you do it with 2 circles only.Fix
6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.

X

• ● you should be Insane's 01:07:667 - this green line ? & 01:07:917 - add Normal custom1 whistle?

• ● 00:52:417 (3) - 1grid down

• ● 01:02:167 (6) - http://puu.sh/GOi I like this.

• ● 00:20:417 (3) - http://puu.sh/GOv I like this.
  ● 01:53:167 (1,1) far

• ● 00:16:667 (5,6) near
  ● 00:32:167 (5,1) ^

Muya wrote:

General

• ● you should be Insane's 01:07:667 - this green line ? & 01:07:917 - add Normal custom1 whistle?

Easy

• ● 00:52:417 (3) - 1grid down

fix

Normal

• ● 01:02:167 (6) - http://puu.sh/GOi I like this.

impossiblexu's Hard

• ● 00:20:417 (3) - http://puu.sh/GOv I like this.
  ● 01:53:167 (1,1) far

@impossiblexu

Insane

• ● 00:16:667 (5,6) near X I think it is OK
  ● 00:32:167 (5,1) ^

X DS!

ignorethis wrote:

Areas ~ sora ni utsusu kimi tono sekai ~ 要不要大写之类的 ._. 問了kanopu= =說Sora要大寫

Insane AR-1 DONE

great map

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[kodomo's Special] set default skin as preferred skin but other diffs not
kiai时间略长,只有老许难度中间用了re-kiai手法,其他难度不加上吗?

[Easy]
01:02:417 (4) - new combo? FIX
01:06:417 (3) - too loud at the last beat. FIX

[Normal]
00:47:917 (2) - clap at first beat is missing..? FIX

[Insane]
00:32:167 (5,1) - 大丈夫? FIX
01:23:792 (4,5,6) - nazi一下,这里难看了 FIX
不错.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[kodomo's Special] set default skin as preferred skin but other diffs not

KuraiPettan wrote:

[kodomo's Special]
00:35:167 (4) - Remove 1 reverse and move (2) 1/4 earlier no, sorry~
01:22:417 (6) - New combo ok
01:26:417 (7) - New combo ok

KuraiPettan wrote:

[Easy]
01:59:417 - Useless timing section Fix

[Normal]
00:17:417 (4) - New combo ?Fix
01:02:167 (6) - Better like http://puu.sh/IDGFix
01:55:417 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/4 earlierX
01:58:917 - Useless timing sectionX

[Insane]
01:55:417 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/4 earlierX

yongtw123 wrote:

Overall:
For all difficulties, hitsound is a bit too quiet, especially so in the first half. Consider volume up, particularly the clap hitsound.
At first I'd like to comment on intermittent clap hitsound, but after some investigation I think it's fine... Fix

[Insane]
00:41:917 (3) - I was expecting a clap... but mehFix
01:42:417 (1,2,3) - too sudden I think X I think it is OK

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Rename "Normal-sliderslide.wav" & "Normal-sliderslide2.wav" to "normal-sliderslide.wav" & "normal-sliderslide2.wav". Remember to full submit after this fix. Fix

[Difficulties]

[Insane]

It's highly not suggested to put a green line on the same place where is the offset. Change the offset to -583 and resnap everything, remember that you should do this on every difficulty. Fix

osuplayer111 wrote:

Look at the 1/3 notes on every diff, they're bad snapped, you should snap them manually >_<