wmfchris wrote:

[kodomo's special]
0:13:167 (2) stack with last combo's (2), though they're far enough but it's still visible :/
0:35:167 (4) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/45839
1:05:917 (1,1) considering this is a 1/4 slider so it's quite hard to perform a 4.28x jump. Think about that again, but it's up to you
1:58:417 (s) ...mute?~

wmfchris wrote:

0.5~1 sec of audio lead-in...maybe?
Try to unique the ending time between different diff.
.__.

[Insane] AR+1?fix
0:12:167 (2) left 1 grid lv4fix
0:13:667 (4,5,6) up 1 grid (lv3 or lv4), adjust position of (1)fix
0:23:917 (3) down 1 gridfix
0:26:667 (2,3) left 1 gridfix
0:59:667 (4) try to make the direction of slider perpendiculer to (3,5) lolI think it's Ok
1:05:167 (8,9,1) (8,9) up 1 grid, (1) down 1 gridfix

I see two short spinners in the two insane diffs, there're 2000bouns so theoratically rankable, but better aware of that.X

[Hard]
0:07:417 (1,2) looks better if not stacked
no spacing problem
@ impossiblexu

Sandpig wrote:

皮肤和颜色太瞎了喂。选combo colour的时候和BG保持一致的思路没问题，但是至少调整一下灰度和明度，太接近打着眼睛很累
配色苦手+皮肤苦手<.<……嘛...我改下吧~

为了MOD我换颜色了;_;
不好意思<.<

kodomo's Special

00:35:167 (4,5) - 尝试一下把4换成3个音的slider把5提前1/4拍(因为感觉00:35:667上的音有些多余) ，如果觉得5太长可以像后面那样多加一些NOTE
00:37:167 (4,5) - 同理
呃……我也觉得这里比较违和……可是改了好像也不怎么好<.<……先放着吧>.>

kodomo的DIFF不错
>//<谢谢~

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
0:07:417 (1,2) looks better if not stacked Fixed

Sandpig wrote:

还有现在3I rankable了吗？ 請看看Rank beatmap第一頁某bat的圖..

Insane

00:01:417 - 一开始的地方节奏还算密AR也挺高，但是排列显得小气了，适当加大一点间距(提高一点slider的速度?) （MOD到后面发现整张图的排列显得密了，偶尔有的几个JUMP也显得太突出了）Jump都修了修..我麻..Insane 苦手.這樣已經很好了..

其他没什么说的


Normal

有些我个人认为的小问题但是多打几次发现也无所谓

比如01:02:167 (6) - 换一个方向不要接触到下一个slider这种，有点nazi ._.
FIX

Easy

01:11:417 (3,4) - 用这种排列的话前边slider的尾巴保持和后边的头部Y坐标一致吧._.FIX



很模式化的图，不需要太多的MOD._.lol

yangzd88 wrote:

[EZ]
00:27:417 (5) - New combo Fix
01:07:917 (3) - clap Fix
01:16:917 (3,1) - 交换new combo Fix

[NM]
00:26:417 (5) - new combo Fix

[special]
00:48:167 (1,2) - 交换new combo Fix

Mod不出什么来..no kd plz

1. 把结束点统一到许哥的那里比较好 记得KIAI结束位置也要改动

1. 01:19:417 (3) - 这个箭头的方向 = = 稍微用shift移动下尾部

1. 01:54:417 (5) - new combo 之后可以考虑用x1.6的spacing snap

1. x1.5的1/3太鬼畜了...
2. 01:54:417 (1,2,3) - finish and finish-only

Colin Hou wrote:

[kodomo's Special]:

1. x1.5的1/3太鬼畜了...
   呃……改成1.2x就不好看了<.<再说有了前面4个slider的提示应该能确定节奏的……
2. 01:54:417 (1,2,3) - finish and finish-only
   改成finish,finish,whistle+finish了>.>

yangzd88 wrote:

Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeecheck..Don't kd too

[EZ]
00:12:417 (6) - 对准1的位置(对准grid? Fix
01:04:417 (8) - 1 grids left Fix
01:11:417 (3) -

SPOILER

[attachment=0:9ec6e]1.png[/attachment:9ec6e]

Fix
01:33:417 (5) - remove finish. Fix
01:39:917 (1) - 这里不适合用spinner带过.. Fix

[IS]
01:49:417 - 从这以后的1/3真的很鬼畜 真的..缩短间距? X 縮短就不好玩了 :/
00:40:167 (5,6,7) -

SPOILER

[attachment=1:9ec6e]2.png[/attachment:9ec6e]

Fix

yangzd88 wrote:

[speeeecial]
00:15:917 (3) - 0.0xds+remove gdsnap?好像没对整齐
这里本来就没开grid呀<.<而且我觉得是对齐了……
00:26:417 - map了这个break?如果这个改了老许的难度也要这样..
感觉这个break不违和呀<.<……

00:54:167 (10) - 跳过头扭到腰了rofl
的确不是很好看<.<我是按照ds递增排的……至少布局上还过得去吧>.>

01:05:917 (1) - 音量减小减少这个slider的存在感.
已经降了2格了呀<.<嘛……再降一格好了……
01:37:917 (8) - 改成1/4 stream slider?
原来是1/4的<.<然后觉得没感觉……于是1/8了> < (其实我想把前面00:25:917 (7) 也改成1/8的xD

IceBeam wrote:

[Special]
Beginning kills half HP bar and that's bad.
I think it's ok because the beginning part is quite easy, and you can get HP back soon (before the lyrics begin.)
Anyway, if it really troubles a lot, I will try to reduce the HP drain rate.
Otherwise guests are fine to me.

• • Disable countdown since its unused

• • 00:13:917 (7) - Add a New Combo
  • 00:17:917 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 00:26:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 00:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 00:36:917 (4,1) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing. (spacing should be always consistent on easier difficulties)
  • 01:12:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:14:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:24:417 (3) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:28:417 (2) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:46:417 (3,4) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing.
  • 01:48:417 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:51:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:52:417 (2) - Add a New Combo

• • 00:13:417 (5) - Add a New Combo
  • 00:15:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 00:17:417 (1) - ^
  • 00:29:417 (1) - ^
  • 00:30:417 (2) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:36:417 (5) - ^
  • 01:40:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns
  • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)

• • 00:27:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns

• • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)

• • 00:27:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns
  • 01:40:000 (break) - ^

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

01:39:542 (1) - Unrankable spinner. It must gives a minimum of 3000 bonus point on auto to be rankable (your gives 2000).

1. It would be nice if you resize the BG to 1024x768, It might need some cropping, But you'll avoid the black bars.
2. Remove countdown on Easy, Normal and Insane (It's not used)

1. 00:09:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - In compare with the whole diff, this combo is too long, Use New Combo on (6)
2. 00:21:417 (1,2) - That's an ungly overlap, try this
3. 01:35:417 (8) - The repeat on this slider sounds off, Make this slider 1/1 long
   

1. 00:14:917 (6,1) - You should unstack this. (Color stacking)
2. 00:20:917 (4) - Use a vertical flip so this is not under the last slider.
3. 00:25:917 (4,1) - I still think color stacking looks ugly.
4. 01:31:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This combo is too long, I suggest using New Combo on (5).
5. 01:39:542 - I strongly suggest continue mapping here since you mapped this part on the other diffs including Easy.
6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.

1. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency between diffs finish this spinner here: 01:59:417

1. 00:10:917 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing regular.
2. 00:14:417 (2,3) - Fix Spacing
3. 00:26:417 (1,2,3) - This jumps are too random, reduce spacing or use regular spacing.
4. 00:32:167 (5,1) - Fix spacing, This doesn't look good if you do it with 2 circles only.
6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.

1. 01:54:417 (1,2,3) - Increase the volume for this notes.
2. To keep consitency between diffs finish this spinner here: 01:59:417

xxheroxx wrote:

[Kodomo's Special]

• • 00:27:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns
  • 01:40:000 (break) - ^
  sorry, i prefer to have some breaks in the beatmap.
  also i think these two are not bad anyway.

Gonzvlo wrote:

kodomo's Especial

1. 01:54:417 (1,2,3) - Increase the volume for this notes.
   fixed.
2. To keep consitency between diffs finish this spinner here: 01:59:417
   sorry, i think stopping at 01:58:417 is better.

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Disable countdown since its unused

Fix

[Easy]

• • 00:13:917 (7) - Add a New Combo
  • 00:17:917 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 00:26:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 00:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 00:36:917 (4,1) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing. (spacing should be always consistent on easier difficulties)
  • 01:12:917 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:14:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:24:417 (3) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:27:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:28:417 (2) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:46:417 (3,4) - I don't like this "jump": fix the spacing.
  • 01:48:417 (4) - Add a New Combo
  • 01:51:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo
  • 01:52:417 (2) - Add a New Combo

ALL Fix

[Normal]

• • 00:13:417 (5) - Add a New Combo Fix
  • 00:15:417 (1) - Remove the New Combo Fix
  • 00:17:417 (1) - ^ Fix
  • 00:29:417 (1) - ^ Fix
  • 00:30:417 (2) - Add a New Combo Fix
  • 01:36:417 (5) - ^ Fix
  • 01:40:000 (break) - Remove this break and add some patterns Fix
  • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)X unification with Hard and apecial

[Insane]

• • 01:55:417 (1) - End this spinner here 01:59:417 (white tick)X unification with Hard and apecial

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Insane]
01:39:542 (1) - Unrankable spinner. It must gives a minimum of 3000 bonus point on auto to be rankable (your gives 2000).
An easy way to fix is to remove 01:39:417 (5) - , move the spinner from 01:39:542 (1) - to 01:39:417 - and end it at 01:40:417 -

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. It would be nice if you resize the BG to 1024x768, It might need some cropping, But you'll avoid the black bars.
2. Remove countdown on Easy, Normal and Insane (It's not used)

Fix

Easy

1. 00:09:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - In compare with the whole diff, this combo is too long, Use New Combo on (6)X
2. 00:21:417 (1,2) - That's an ungly overlap, try thisX
3. 01:35:417 (8) - The repeat on this slider sounds off, Make this slider 1/1 long X
   

Normal

1. 00:14:917 (6,1) - You should unstack this. (Color stacking)X
2. 00:20:917 (4) - Use a vertical flip so this is not under the last slider.Change some
3. 00:25:917 (4,1) - I still think color stacking looks ugly.X
4. 01:31:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This combo is too long, I suggest using New Combo on (5). Fix
5. 01:39:542 - I strongly suggest continue mapping here since you mapped this part on the other diffs including Easy.Fix
6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.

X

Insane

1. 00:10:917 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing regular.Fix
2. 00:14:417 (2,3) - Fix SpacingFix
3. 00:26:417 (1,2,3) - This jumps are too random, reduce spacing or use regular spacing.Fix
4. 00:32:167 (5,1) - Fix spacing, This doesn't look good if you do it with 2 circles only.Fix
6. 01:55:417 (1) - To keep consitency: finish this spinner here: 01:59:417 like you did on Easy.

X

• ● you should be Insane's 01:07:667 - this green line ? & 01:07:917 - add Normal custom1 whistle?

• ● 00:52:417 (3) - 1grid down

• ● 01:02:167 (6) - http://puu.sh/GOi I like this.

• ● 00:20:417 (3) - http://puu.sh/GOv I like this.
  ● 01:53:167 (1,1) far

• ● 00:16:667 (5,6) near
  ● 00:32:167 (5,1) ^

Muya wrote:

General

• ● you should be Insane's 01:07:667 - this green line ? & 01:07:917 - add Normal custom1 whistle?

Easy

• ● 00:52:417 (3) - 1grid down

fix

Normal

• ● 01:02:167 (6) - http://puu.sh/GOi I like this.

impossiblexu's Hard

• ● 00:20:417 (3) - http://puu.sh/GOv I like this.
  ● 01:53:167 (1,1) far

@impossiblexu

Insane

• ● 00:16:667 (5,6) near X I think it is OK
  ● 00:32:167 (5,1) ^

X DS!

ignorethis wrote:

Areas ~ sora ni utsusu kimi tono sekai ~ 要不要大写之类的 ._. 問了kanopu= =說Sora要大寫

Insane AR-1 DONE

great map

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[kodomo's Special] set default skin as preferred skin but other diffs not
kiai时间略长,只有老许难度中间用了re-kiai手法,其他难度不加上吗?

[Easy]
01:02:417 (4) - new combo? FIX
01:06:417 (3) - too loud at the last beat. FIX

[Normal]
00:47:917 (2) - clap at first beat is missing..? FIX

[Insane]
00:32:167 (5,1) - 大丈夫? FIX
01:23:792 (4,5,6) - nazi一下,这里难看了 FIX
不错.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[kodomo's Special] set default skin as preferred skin but other diffs not

KuraiPettan wrote:

[kodomo's Special]
00:35:167 (4) - Remove 1 reverse and move (2) 1/4 earlier no, sorry~
01:22:417 (6) - New combo ok
01:26:417 (7) - New combo ok

KuraiPettan wrote:

[Easy]
01:59:417 - Useless timing section Fix

[Normal]
00:17:417 (4) - New combo ?Fix
01:02:167 (6) - Better like http://puu.sh/IDGFix
01:55:417 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/4 earlierX
01:58:917 - Useless timing sectionX

[Insane]
01:55:417 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/4 earlierX

yongtw123 wrote:

Overall:
For all difficulties, hitsound is a bit too quiet, especially so in the first half. Consider volume up, particularly the clap hitsound.
At first I'd like to comment on intermittent clap hitsound, but after some investigation I think it's fine... Fix

[Insane]
00:41:917 (3) - I was expecting a clap... but mehFix
01:42:417 (1,2,3) - too sudden I think X I think it is OK

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Rename "Normal-sliderslide.wav" & "Normal-sliderslide2.wav" to "normal-sliderslide.wav" & "normal-sliderslide2.wav". Remember to full submit after this fix. Fix

[Difficulties]

[Insane]

It's highly not suggested to put a green line on the same place where is the offset. Change the offset to -583 and resnap everything, remember that you should do this on every difficulty. Fix

osuplayer111 wrote:

Look at the 1/3 notes on every diff, they're bad snapped, you should snap them manually >_<