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Yousei Teikoku - The Creator

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meiikyuu
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meiikyuu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 24, 2013 at 1:08:44 PM

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: The Creator
Source: Mirai Nikki
Tags: saten saten-san lunarsakuya
BPM: 280
Filesize: 7908kb
Play Time: 03:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Level 1 (1.16 stars, 136 notes)
  2. Level 3 (3.21 stars, 226 notes)
  3. Level 6 (4.95 stars, 443 notes)
  4. Nyaten (4.96 stars, 1001 notes)
  5. Origin (4.9 stars, 694 notes)
  6. Saten (5 stars, 898 notes)
Download: Yousei Teikoku - The Creator
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Update 2/10/14: we got #2 on top 2013 maps. thanks for your support everyone

SPOILER
Level 1 = complete
Level 3 = complete by LunarSakuya
Level 6 =complete
Origin - complete

(Saten)
Saten = complete
Nyaten = complete

- bg and skin parts made by me

- 104 faves before rank
Last edited by meiikyuu , edited 221 times in total.
dkun
osu! Alumni
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dkun
ohi ~

Hard
00:25:601 (1) - This is a bit weird to read first time off.
00:26:886 (4) - This note feels off beat.
01:32:244 (4) - Stack at the end of 3, perhaps?
01:34:601 (1,2,1,2) - alternate the second 1,2, as in put 1 over the last combo's 2
01:58:601 (3) - New combo here, rather than 1?
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu

dkun wrote:

ohi ~

Hard
00:25:601 (1) - This is a bit weird to read first time off.
00:26:886 (4) - This note feels off beat.
01:32:244 (4) - Stack at the end of 3, perhaps?
01:34:601 (1,2,1,2) - alternate the second 1,2, as in put 1 over the last combo's 2
01:58:601 (3) - New combo here, rather than 1?
thanks a lot, it helped ~
Bakario
Bakario
This is really 280 bpm?? you are sure sure sure? D:
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu

Bakario wrote:

This is really 280 bpm?? you are sure sure sure? D:
yes im pretty sure its correct..?

i slowed down the sliders and such too
Makar
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Makar
I think you should use 140 BPM with high SV for the harder difficulties

Also, offset should be ~2050ms (+20)
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu

Makar8000 wrote:

I think you should use 140 BPM with high SV for the harder difficulties

Also, offset should be ~2050ms (+20)
thanks , i changed the offset ~ ^^

As for the bpm change, your probably right.. but idk if there is a way to keep all the notes looking the same (unless increasing the sv can fix it easily)
Makar
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Makar

meiikyuu wrote:

Makar8000 wrote:

I think you should use 140 BPM with high SV for the harder difficulties

Also, offset should be ~2050ms (+20)
thanks , i changed the offset ~ ^^

As for the bpm change, your probably right.. but idk if there is a way to keep all the notes looking the same (unless increasing the sv can fix it easily)
You could double the current SV and it should be fine.
star~
Bakario
Bakario
offset 2053 asd
Bakario
Bakario
doble post,hi

http://puu.sh/ec9L

here's the mp3
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu

Bakario wrote:

doble post,hi

http://puu.sh/ec9L

here's the mp3
changed it ^^ thanks
Saten
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Saten
00:52:868 - put the previewtime here?

the offset seems wrong. Did you forget to full submit? otherwise try Bakario offset suggestion

-----
working on my diff if you still wants it~~
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu

Saten-san wrote:

00:52:868 - put the previewtime here?

the offset seems wrong. Did you forget to full submit? otherwise try Bakario offset suggestion

-----
working on my diff if you still wants it~~
yeah sorry, i only did the regular upload ~ ill do full submission later tonight (i recently changed the mp3 too so that might've messed up the offset). and thanks alot, im still looking forward to your diff. ^^

Edit: updated map , should be fine now
Last edited by meiikyuu , edited 1 time in total.
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu

Bakario wrote:

offset 2053 asd
that was correct, but when i changed the mp3, the offset seemed to be 2083 now ~
Mythol
1,420 posts
Joined March 2011
Mythol
Hello meiikyuu~ :3

BPM - 280.13 maybe? (280 feels slightly off later in the song, starting around 01:53:031)

02:08:880 (1,2) - timing is off on these sliders
EDIT:scratch that^ (only if you switch it to the bpm I suggested)

SPOILER
17:34 <Mythol> : meiikyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
17:34 <meiikyuu> : mytholl ~
17:35 <Mythol> : 03:15:582 (8) -
17:35 <Mythol> : you need to fix this troll spacing
17:35 <Mythol> : lolll
17:35 <meiikyuu> : wuhh
17:35 <meiikyuu> : lol k
17:35 <meiikyuu> : u mean the slider shouuld be further away?
17:35 <Mythol> : 7 and 8
17:35 <Mythol> : are troll spacing
17:35 <Mythol> : lol
17:36 <meiikyuu> : o
17:36 <Mythol> : http://puu.sh/eGA0
17:36 <Mythol> : try that?
17:36 <meiikyuu> : ok ^^ ty
17:36 <Mythol> : 03:17:511 (3,4,5) -
17:36 <Mythol> : these too lol
17:37 <Mythol> : oh wells
17:37 <Mythol> : I'll just mod it later
17:37 <Mythol> : is it complete?
17:37 <meiikyuu> : this level yeah ~
17:37 <Mythol> : o.o
17:37 <meiikyuu> : updating noww
17:37 <Mythol> : wait
17:37 <Mythol> : I'll just post on your thread now
17:37 <Mythol> : lol
17:38 <Mythol> : maybe I can find more
17:38 <meiikyuu> : ok ^^ thanks a lott
17:39 <meiikyuu> : if u updated it like just now, can u check what the offest says?
17:39 <Mythol> : 2083
17:39 <meiikyuu> : ok good.. :3

cool map! :D
Cygnus
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Joined December 2011
Cygnus
Hi there. Here's your mod. <3
But before anything else, please change your map to WIP. Since you are not done yet.
GENERAL
  1. Change your BPM to 140. Don't try to manipulate it. 280 BPM is Seriously stupid.
LEVEL 6
  1. Overall Diff should be 5. You might want to change your diff name too.

  2. Too loud hit sound. Please reduce by 10-15%.

  3. 00:14:940 - Inconsistent spacing. Please move this a little bit away from the previous slider.

  4. 01:00:368 - New combo.

  5. 01:21:338 - Move the 3rd point of this slider at x:224 y:104.

  6. 01:31:654 - Remove new combo.

  7. 01:32:511 - ^

  8. 01:33:368 - ^

  9. 01:38:082 - New combo.

  10. 01:39:582 - Remove new combo. Add new combo at 01:39:797.

  11. 01:43:654 - Remove new combo. Add new combo at 01:44:940.

  12. 01:48:368 - Inconsistent spacing. Please make the spacing for this combo equal.

  13. 02:14:082 - New combo.
[/quote]
Saten
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Saten
MY diff~♪ For approval

And the correct BPM is actually 280


Please add these hitsounds as well:
http://puu.sh/ePDy
http://puu.sh/ePDz

Edit: don't forget to change the offset I mentioned :3

Download: Yousei Teikoku - The Creator (meiikyuu) [Saten].osu
Verdisphena
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Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
-33 to offset PLEASE
Saten
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Saten
You mean -23 right? o.o (2037ms)

sounds better to me

Download: Yousei Teikoku - The Creator (meiikyuu) [Saten].osu
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu
ok i changed it ~

saten, thats an updated attachment right? xd
nvm, everythings updated now
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu

Philippines wrote:

Hi there. Here's your mod. <3
But before anything else, please change your map to WIP. Since you are not done yet.
GENERAL
  1. Change your BPM to 140. Don't try to manipulate it. 280 BPM is Seriously stupid.
LEVEL 6
  1. Overall Diff should be 5. You might want to change your diff name too.

  2. Too loud hit sound. Please reduce by 10-15%.

  3. 00:14:940 - Inconsistent spacing. Please move this a little bit away from the previous slider.

  4. 01:00:368 - New combo.

  5. 01:21:338 - Move the 3rd point of this slider at x:224 y:104.

  6. 01:31:654 - Remove new combo.

  7. 01:32:511 - ^

  8. 01:33:368 - ^

  9. 01:38:082 - New combo.

  10. 01:39:582 - Remove new combo. Add new combo at 01:39:797.

  11. 01:43:654 - Remove new combo. Add new combo at 01:44:940.

  12. 01:48:368 - Inconsistent spacing. Please make the spacing for this combo equal.

  13. 02:14:082 - New combo.
[/quote]

done ^^ thanks ~
KirisameTempest
21 posts
Joined August 2011
KirisameTempest
level 6
01:50:729 (8) - slider feels wierd
only thing i really thought was wrong/didnt feel right :P
good job keep it up
Mitsuneko
325 posts
Joined July 2011
Mitsuneko
My mod. Sorry I took so long ^^;

[Level 6]

00:10:229- Remove NC
00:10:658-^
00:11:515-^
00:13:229-^
00:17:301-^
00:17:515-NC
00:19:229- ^
00:20:729-^
00:20:944- Remove NC
00:25:658-^
00:26:086-NC
00:41:515- Remove NC
00:43:444- NC
00:44:515- Remove NC
00:45:586- NC
00:46:015- Remove NC
00:47:086-^
00:47:944-NC
00:49:229- Remove NC
00:49:872- NC
00:58:444- Remove NC
01:03:801-^
01:05:515-^
01:08:944-^
01:09:801-NC
01:31:229-^
01:31:658-Remove NC
01:32:944-^
01:33:694- Delete Slider, add circle instead.Sounds better imo
01:35:515- Remove NC
01:37:229- ^
01:38:086-NC
01:41:515- ^
01:43:229-Remove NC
01:46:658-^
01:49:229(1)-Remove NC
01:50:729-NC
01:53:086- NC
01:53:515-Remove NC
01:55:229-NC
01:56:301-^
01:58:658-^
01:59:301-Remove NC
02:01:658- NC
02:02:944- Remove NC
02:05:086-NC
02:05:515- Remove NC
02:08:944- Remove NC
02:09:801- NC
02:14:944-^
02:42:586- Remove NC
02:43:658- ^
02:43:872- NC
02:45:801- Remove NC
02:46:229- NC
02:47:515- Remove NC
02:48:372- NC
02:49:229- Remove NC
02:50:086- ^
03:02:944- NC
03:06:586- Remove NC
03:08:515- NC
03:26:086- Add finish.


Nice map. I would have modded it earlier but when I was modding yours before, my computer crashed, and I was too mad to start over again :| But the mod is done now! Ignore anything you want.
meiikyuu
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Topic Starter
meiikyuu

nekonomitsu wrote:

My mod. Sorry I took so long ^^;

SPOILER
[Level 6]

00:10:229- Remove NC
00:10:658-^
00:11:515-^
00:13:229-^
00:17:301-^
00:17:515-NC
00:19:229- ^
00:20:729-^
00:20:944- Remove NC
00:25:658-^
00:26:086-NC
00:41:515- Remove NC
00:43:444- NC
00:44:515- Remove NC
00:45:586- NC
00:46:015- Remove NC
00:47:086-^
00:47:944-NC
00:49:229- Remove NC
00:49:872- NC
00:58:444- Remove NC
01:03:801-^
01:05:515-^
01:08:944-^
01:09:801-NC
01:31:229-^
01:31:658-Remove NC
01:32:944-^
01:33:694- Delete Slider, add circle instead.Sounds better imo
01:35:515- Remove NC
01:37:229- ^
01:38:086-NC
01:41:515- ^
01:43:229-Remove NC
01:46:658-^
01:49:229(1)-Remove NC
01:50:729-NC
01:53:086- NC
01:53:515-Remove NC
01:55:229-NC
01:56:301-^
01:58:658-^
01:59:301-Remove NC
02:01:658- NC
02:02:944- Remove NC
02:05:086-NC
02:05:515- Remove NC
02:08:944- Remove NC
02:09:801- NC
02:14:944-^
02:42:586- Remove NC
02:43:658- ^
02:43:872- NC
02:45:801- Remove NC
02:46:229- NC
02:47:515- Remove NC
02:48:372- NC
02:49:229- Remove NC
02:50:086- ^
03:02:944- NC
03:06:586- Remove NC
03:08:515- NC
03:26:086- Add finish.
Nice map. I would have modded it earlier but when I was modding yours before, my computer crashed, and I was too mad to start over again :| But the mod is done now! Ignore anything you want.
its okay! ^_^ thank u very much for the mod!
Gasaiyuno-chan
77 posts
Joined January 2012
Gasaiyuno-chan
I want collab!
meiikyuu
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Topic Starter
meiikyuu
that would be nice but dont think theres any more room for that.. :o thank you though
Aoko
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Joined June 2011
Aoko
Youseiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!! >~< Good luck with this map. ♥♥ Good job Meiikyuu :D
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu
thank youu <3
Aoko
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Joined June 2011
Aoko

meiikyuu wrote:

thank youu <3
^~^
I still think there is space for collab.
I think a Normal and Hard Difficulty would be good though.
Enough with the Insanes! :'(
meiikyuu
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Topic Starter
meiikyuu
lol theres only going to be one insane (excluding saten's diff.) in the end. "Origin" diff. is staying and "creator" diff. is leaving most likely :)
Wishy
2,974 posts
Joined September 2010
Wishy
[Saten]

Change hit-colors 1 and 5 to something brighter. As you know your insane maps make most players just delete the background for a better visibility, these hit-colors make those hits using them very hard to see with a plain black background. And as you know, your maps are sometimes really tricky, which added to the previous point makes this quite a pain to play. Linked this to two friends, and both had to put a grey background, of course I did the same.

02:39:908 (1) - The pause after this spinner feels really weird, like I wasn't expecting it at all. Thought it was because I never played the map, but after several plays I still find that break just unfitting, I'd suggest mapping it.

03:01:979 (4) - Stack with 03:01:872 (3) - I'd say. This breaks the consequent symmetric pattern you created, plus 03:01:979 (4) - is damn hard to see under that slider. If you don't want stacking you could just place it below or something. No need to make it like I say though, all I feel is that it breaks the symmetry coming after.

That's all I pointed out to be honest, there are many other points I'd say changing, like those sliders repeating over them-selves for a few times but that's just how you map and that's why your maps are unique as they are. Hope this gets ranked since it's really damn fun.

Gonna edit this post if I find anything else.
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