1. Level 1 (1.16 stars, 136 notes)
2. Level 3 (3.21 stars, 226 notes)
3. Level 6 (4.95 stars, 443 notes)
4. Nyaten (4.96 stars, 1001 notes)
5. Origin (4.9 stars, 694 notes)
6. Saten (5 stars, 898 notes)

dkun wrote:

ohi ~

Hard
00:25:601 (1) - This is a bit weird to read first time off.
00:26:886 (4) - This note feels off beat.
01:32:244 (4) - Stack at the end of 3, perhaps?
01:34:601 (1,2,1,2) - alternate the second 1,2, as in put 1 over the last combo's 2
01:58:601 (3) - New combo here, rather than 1?

Bakario wrote:

This is really 280 bpm?? you are sure sure sure? D:

Makar8000 wrote:

I think you should use 140 BPM with high SV for the harder difficulties

Also, offset should be ~2050ms (+20)

meiikyuu wrote:

Makar8000 wrote:

I think you should use 140 BPM with high SV for the harder difficulties

Also, offset should be ~2050ms (+20)

thanks , i changed the offset ~ ^^

As for the bpm change, your probably right.. but idk if there is a way to keep all the notes looking the same (unless increasing the sv can fix it easily)

Bakario wrote:

doble post,hi

http://puu.sh/ec9L

here's the mp3

Saten-san wrote:

00:52:868 - put the previewtime here?

the offset seems wrong. Did you forget to full submit? otherwise try Bakario offset suggestion

-----
working on my diff if you still wants it~~

Bakario wrote:

offset 2053 asd

Hi there. Here's your mod. <3

But before anything else, please change your map to WIP. Since you are not done yet.

GENERAL

1. Change your BPM to 140. Don't try to manipulate it. 280 BPM is Seriously stupid.

LEVEL 6

1. Overall Diff should be 5. You might want to change your diff name too.
   
   
2. Too loud hit sound. Please reduce by 10-15%.
   
   
3. 00:14:940 - Inconsistent spacing. Please move this a little bit away from the previous slider.
   
   
4. 01:00:368 - New combo.
   
   
5. 01:21:338 - Move the 3rd point of this slider at x:224 y:104.
   
   
6. 01:31:654 - Remove new combo.
   
   
7. 01:32:511 - ^
   
   
8. 01:33:368 - ^
   
   
9. 01:38:082 - New combo.
   
   
10. 01:39:582 - Remove new combo. Add new combo at 01:39:797.
    
    
11. 01:43:654 - Remove new combo. Add new combo at 01:44:940.
    
    
12. 01:48:368 - Inconsistent spacing. Please make the spacing for this combo equal.
    
    
13. 02:14:082 - New combo.

Philippines wrote:

Hi there. Here's your mod. <3

But before anything else, please change your map to WIP. Since you are not done yet.

GENERAL

1. Change your BPM to 140. Don't try to manipulate it. 280 BPM is Seriously stupid.

LEVEL 6

1. Overall Diff should be 5. You might want to change your diff name too.
   
   
2. Too loud hit sound. Please reduce by 10-15%.
   
   
3. 00:14:940 - Inconsistent spacing. Please move this a little bit away from the previous slider.
   
   
4. 01:00:368 - New combo.
   
   
5. 01:21:338 - Move the 3rd point of this slider at x:224 y:104.
   
   
6. 01:31:654 - Remove new combo.
   
   
7. 01:32:511 - ^
   
   
8. 01:33:368 - ^
   
   
9. 01:38:082 - New combo.
   
   
10. 01:39:582 - Remove new combo. Add new combo at 01:39:797.
    
    
11. 01:43:654 - Remove new combo. Add new combo at 01:44:940.
    
    
12. 01:48:368 - Inconsistent spacing. Please make the spacing for this combo equal.
    
    
13. 02:14:082 - New combo.

nekonomitsu wrote:

My mod. Sorry I took so long ^^;

SPOILER

[Level 6]

00:10:229- Remove NC
00:10:658-^
00:11:515-^
00:13:229-^
00:17:301-^
00:17:515-NC
00:19:229- ^
00:20:729-^
00:20:944- Remove NC
00:25:658-^
00:26:086-NC
00:41:515- Remove NC
00:43:444- NC
00:44:515- Remove NC
00:45:586- NC
00:46:015- Remove NC
00:47:086-^
00:47:944-NC
00:49:229- Remove NC
00:49:872- NC
00:58:444- Remove NC
01:03:801-^
01:05:515-^
01:08:944-^
01:09:801-NC
01:31:229-^
01:31:658-Remove NC
01:32:944-^
01:33:694- Delete Slider, add circle instead.Sounds better imo
01:35:515- Remove NC
01:37:229- ^
01:38:086-NC
01:41:515- ^
01:43:229-Remove NC
01:46:658-^
01:49:229(1)-Remove NC
01:50:729-NC
01:53:086- NC
01:53:515-Remove NC
01:55:229-NC
01:56:301-^
01:58:658-^
01:59:301-Remove NC
02:01:658- NC
02:02:944- Remove NC
02:05:086-NC
02:05:515- Remove NC
02:08:944- Remove NC
02:09:801- NC
02:14:944-^
02:42:586- Remove NC
02:43:658- ^
02:43:872- NC
02:45:801- Remove NC
02:46:229- NC
02:47:515- Remove NC
02:48:372- NC
02:49:229- Remove NC
02:50:086- ^
03:02:944- NC
03:06:586- Remove NC
03:08:515- NC
03:26:086- Add finish.

Nice map. I would have modded it earlier but when I was modding yours before, my computer crashed, and I was too mad to start over again But the mod is done now! Ignore anything you want.

meiikyuu wrote:

thank youu <3

1. consider to uncheck Letterbox During Breaks ?
2. Are you sure the bpm is 280 but not 140? generally it's not allowed to double the bpm without special reasons.
3. Just a remind : the maximum size of sb item is 800x600, and if it is pure-colour image, recommended size is 640x480

1. 00:07:229 (1) - i suppose two sliders here likes the beginning is better
2. 00:10:444 (3) - i'd like to choose a note and then slider instead for vocal.
3. 00:59:515 (5,6) - a slider maybe better?
4. 01:13:444 (4,5,6,7,8) - change here to a pure stream ?
5. 01:32:408 - add a note here?
6. 01:55:658 (3,4) - i'd like to apart them to follow the prev jump~
7. 02:09:801 (5) - consider to change the beat here?
   
8. 02:17:515 (1) - invisible reverse arrow :<

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue
and mod Origin diff only as u request

[Genenral]

1. consider to uncheck Letterbox During Breaks ?
2. Are you sure the bpm is 280 but not 140? generally it's not allowed to double the bpm without special reasons.
3. Just a remind : the maximum size of sb item is 800x600, and if it is pure-colour image, recommended size is 640x480

[Origin]

1. 00:07:229 (1) - i suppose two sliders here likes the beginning is better fixed
2. 00:10:444 (3) - i'd like to choose a note and then slider instead for vocal. fixed
3. 00:59:515 (5,6) - a slider maybe better? fixed
4. 01:13:444 (4,5,6,7,8) - change here to a pure stream ? fixed
5. 01:32:408 - add a note here? fixed
6. 01:55:658 (3,4) - i'd like to apart them to follow the prev jump~ i just reversed slider 4
7. 02:09:801 (5) - consider to change the beat here? im fine with how it is~
   
8. 02:17:515 (1) - invisible reverse arrow :< fixed ><

that's all and gl

K a Y e wrote:

Level 3
Umm.. Just my opinion about the breaks,

For me, the breaks are too long ><
Feels a bit boring when the break extends to the end.
You gotta put notes before it ends..before the spinner!
But the spinner works well for me~
Just a suggestion! Still, I won't force you to do this xD

meiikyuu wrote:

K a Y e wrote:

Level 3
Umm.. Just my opinion about the breaks,

For me, the breaks are too long ><
Feels a bit boring when the break extends to the end.
You gotta put notes before it ends..before the spinner!
But the spinner works well for me~
Just a suggestion! Still, I won't force you to do this xD

lol im not even close to done with level 3

Banana wrote:

Hi~ Banana here from my queue~

general

your all diff.s' kiai section should be the same, you may check it over for the level for app. have more kiai
i don't know do you deliberately make the level 3 and level 6 have a different beginning and ending time point, though it is recommended to make all diff.s' to be the same saten is a guest diff. (:

level 3

00:23:408 (2) - you make some of your sliders start at red ticks, and this map's vocal supposed to be bpm140, so newbies are forced to distinguish a blue tick on bpm140, seems to be too hard? thus i suggest you to make all notes start from white tick. try to follow the drum and make the rhythm near the vocal, just like you did in the latter part of this diff okay ill lessen the red ticks
----------for example: you can make sliders 00:24:372 to be this
--------------------------00:36:372 (1,2) - same rhythm here, and you may use this element many time XD fixed
02:05:515 (1) - 3/2 repeat slider here would be better

level 6

00:17:515 (1) - this stream here seems to be not suit the music, make it begin at 00:18:158 (4) can keep the pattern and goes well fixed ^^
00:45:586 (9) - at here, i suggest you make every sentence's frist two notes to be slider, in order to keep a consistancy to 00:43:444 (2,3) fixed
00:54:694 - follow the vocal here? sorry im keeping ><
01:28:872 (4) - repeat more than once is not good to me, may be split it to two sliders? fixed
03:05:515 (1,5) - it is a bit strange to follow the vocal and the drum at the same sentance..

origin

00:22:229 (4,5) - slider arrows here are not clear, make them to this? fixed
00:42:479 - add a 1/2 slider here? ok ill try for now
00:47:515 (5,6) - music here is different form it at (4), so i think it is not suit to use another slider here, may be change it to two stacked circle? fixed, i put 2 cricles but not stacked
01:30:801 (8) - spacing here is somewhat confusing.. fixed
02:26:729 (1,2,3) - i think these sliders are not suit at here fixed

this level plays fun XD thanks ♥

level for APP.. (i can't pass it ;_;) ;_;
~waiting for saten-san to fix :3

02:41:301 - make this spinner end here and use clap
03:08:301 (4) - maybe two circles? you use three sliders to follow vocal and here is not vocal, so it is a bit strange to me
sorry for can't find more

ErufenRito wrote:

Hello

[General:]

There are unused files in your song's folder, check them out and remove them and do a full submit ok
Edit: yes i know the SB folder is not needed, but i'll have to deal with it later because someone needs it

[Saten:] (saten-san will fix , so wait~)

Use AR10? I could play it better with AR10 to be honest. inb4 drama and people throwing food to me pls no ;_;

00:08:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There are no beats in 1/3th in the music, all the beats are in 1/2th if anything you should map them to 1/4th, and you shouldn't use the wrong snap.
00:23:729 (4) - Previous combo burst covers the repeat
00:28:872 (1,2,3,4) - With the way that you have overmapped this diff so far, I really expected streams in 1/4th here too
00:56:729 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is waaaaaaaaaaaay too overmapped and unfitting, I recommend taking the notes in 1/4th out
01:35:729 (2) - This slider is pretty much invisible with the combo burst from previous objects...
02:03:586 (1) - Covered repeat
02:52:229 (2) - Move it to 02:52:122 -
02:53:086 (5) - Start it at 02:52:979 - and end it at 02:53:301 -
02:54:372 (7) - I highly suggest you to remove it
02:55:658 (4) - Same as 02:53:086 (5) -
02:56:515 (6) - Same as 02:53:086 (5) -
03:14:729 (1) - Covered repeat

[Origin:]

01:30:801 (8) - Move it farther away from previous object fixed

[Level 3:]

One of your combo color doesnt exactly match the combo colour of your other diffs; o_o..

00:55:229 (4) - Extend so it ends at 00:55:872 - and then delete 00:56:086 (5) - fixed
00:59:944 - Add note fixed
01:30:801 (4) - Delete, it's not really necessary imo ok i guess
02:11:086 (2) - Start at 02:10:979 sorry, trying to reduce notes on red ticks
02:32:944 (1,2,3,1,2) - Try something more like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/318005 Of course, you can position the way you want, what's important here are the objects placement in the timeline, what I mean is that you can even try something like this http://puu.sh/v4oF . Also, you should do this everytime you see this same rhyme such as 02:58:658 (1,2,3) -

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

[*]General

-consistency in kiai time (suggestion)
- consistency in combo color (essential) if you're referring to the app map..then i think its fine, theres no rule for this i believe

[*]LV3

First 00:46:658 - I think it would be better to make this slider end at 00:47:194
Then 00:47:944 (1) (2) (3) (4) - move 1/2 left like shown below
[attachment=0:b9490]1.jpg[/attachment:b9490]
Next 00:49:015 - +1 repeat

00:51:801 - Extend to 00:53:515,It feel empty if you don't add a note at the beginning of the kiai time.
Then add finish hitsound at here

00:54:372 - add a new combo
02:42:372 - ^
02:51:801 - ^

[*]LV6

00:51:694 - move to 00:51:801
00:55:229 - Make this slider like 00:58:658

[*]Origin

00:02:087 - This green timing is unnecessary you can use red timing to change custom hitsound type
01:34:511 - del the circle

Good luck!