DragonSparta wrote:

lolcules' Normal
00:37:214 (1) - Add a clap here Nah, this section isn't using claps at all, such sudden claps wouldn't sound good, whistles are enough.
00:38:714 (2) - ^

DragonSparta wrote:

Haku's Hard
Add some clap where the drum is playing like: I added it where Snare or Snap played
00:25:214 (5) - Add clap Finish-only fit better because: 1 - Clap will be covered by Finish, 2 - It add Taiko variety
02:14:780 (3) - Remove new combo I used that in other part
02:28:932 (3) - Too near to (2) well: 1 - Obviously Graphics motives, 2 - Antijump, 3 - Start And Stop like effect when playing
03:25:467 (1) - Instead of putting this near (1) , why not put it in front of (2) ? Blanket saying *you see me?*

Samah wrote:

[Insane]
Normally I don't pick on hitsounds, but I thought some of the patterns drew too much attention to themselves. Hitsounds are done well when you don't notice them.
Up to you of course.
00:52:102 (2,3,4) - Maybe remove the claps from 2 and 3, and remove the finish from 4.
00:54:727 (1) - Remove this clap?
00:55:852 (1,2) - Remove claps?
00:56:415 (4) through 00:59:040 (6) - This hitsound pattern doesn't really match the music.
01:59:682 (4,5) - Remove claps?
02:03:432 (1,2) - ^
03:07:268 (6,7) - ^
03:07:831 (10) - Add clap.
03:19:268 (2,3) - Remove claps.
03:23:018 (1,2) - ^

208,172,172745,1,0
208,172,172932,2,0,B|264:152|328:180|344:248|304:304,1,219.999993443489
297,321,173870,2,0,B|253:365|177:349|165:293,1,164.999995082617
256,192,175091,12,4,176206

p3n wrote:

[Easy]
There is one repeated part in each of the 3 KIAIs that feels strange. I wouldn't exactly call it "wrong timed" but after some testing I feel you should really do something here:

I took a look at it, and I was originally ignoring the lyrics and following just the trumpets. However, I think I worked something out for all 3 sections. First one's not the same as others rhythm wise, but the rest are your and lolcubes'.

I didn't do the hitsounds though, since all my hitsounds are based on what's in the map (and there's no cymbal crash there, regardless of how anyone "feels" about it). The claps are a bit more ambiguous, and I'm leaning more towards removing them altogether and using barcodes.

Samah wrote:

[Haku's Hard]
02:28:370 (2,3) - Spacing. Following voice, should be easier to read
03:24:706 (6,1) - This antijump plays strangely. ^

p3n wrote:

[Haku's Hard]
01:04:665 (X) - maybe add a note? ...feels weird to leave out this beat It's actually 1/8 after that point
02:28:932 (3) - ahhhhhhhhh y u no start slider on downbeat??? (start slider on big white tick @02:29:120) *running-in-circles-waving-arms* Maybe *starting an hoOola* i'm following the bass ?
02:28:370 (2) - ...and while you are at it just replace this circle (the one before the slider mentioned above...sorry for the random order) with a short 1x repeat slider to match the song: http://puu.sh/5xot it match the song in the way it is now, if you listen ( that single hit match the piano )
02:52:745 (6,7) - slider timing (and to some extent the starting point of the spinner) makes absolutely no sense to me (read: wrong timed). If you want to focus on the vocals here (good thing!) the two points to map are 02:53:120 and 02:53:870. Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/5xsC
(shorten and move spinner to 02:55:091 (keep ending as it was), use a circle where 02:52:745 (6) used to start and move the first slider (7 in picture) to 02:53:120, start the second slider (8 in picture) @02:53:870 and extend to 02:54:995) If you know what you are doing you can also use this code:

208,172,172745,1,0
208,172,172932,2,0,B|264:152|328:180|344:248|304:304,1,219.999993443489
297,321,173870,2,0,B|253:365|177:349|165:293,1,164.999995082617
256,192,175091,12,4,176206

*facedesking* it do start at that point, the vocals. because I didn't want to map only-voice with a long slider ( because the voice here's is on a 1/6, that get things confusing in an Hard )


Some cosmetic stuff (nazi?) [/b]could be done (small allignments of circles/sliders) but nothing gamebreaking - up to you to polish it until you are satisfied imo.[/b] If those cosmetic stuff are nazi, then don't expect me to correct unsawable ( un-see-able) nazi

knjiga wrote:

Haku's hard:
00:46:477 (8,9,10) - move these to the right so they follow the path as with previous ones. Or you can move the 4,5,6,7 pattern to the left with some rotating maybe.
00:52:196 - this triplet feels somewhat weird, maybe remove (2) to make it just normal 1/2s. It's not, listen better

You may also wish to consider setting AR to 6. This will make HR really easy, but since DT is already easy enough it won't matter much for pure HR but, it will add a possibility of DT + HR + HD. but it will not help readability with my style of mapping that need 3+ ARs in Easies, 5+ in Normals, 7+ in Hards and 8+ in Insanes

ShadowLord wrote:

[Haku's Hard]

00:46:477 (8,9,10) - and 01:07:852 (2,3,4) - (and those similar to it in the diff) I had some trouble sight-reading this, even if its properly snapped. it plays a little weird, stacking them played a little nice IMO

00:48:915 (1,2,3,4) - this was nice to play and easy to sight read.

and that's pretty much it. Solid diff.

You're saying you have problem reading curved streams? it might be the skins, as I with my Raildex have no problems...

knjiga wrote:

Easy:
I'm of the opinion that nobody cares about AIBat difficulties or star rating, and took it to heart when making this, which is why there are 1/2 notes in the map. It's never more than 3, and easy players have 2 fingers they can use. If not, I could stream 80 BPM 4ths 8 years ago with one finger, before I even knew about rhythm games. Circle size can't be changed without messing up some of my patterns, so it would need a full remap with slider speed change too, which I don't want to do.

Insane:
Well, the one without claps (insane2) sounds better. then it's off to redo easy's hitsounds

AR 7 is too low, is this intentional? If not, 8 fits and plays much better. This change is really important since there are some weird jumps and antijumps that become less weird with AR 8. AR7 is perfect for this map. If you demand higher AR, then support a feature request or use hard rock, which will push it up to 9.8, or double time which will push it up to AR 9.

ShadowLord wrote:

[Hitsounding]

I really enjoyed lolcubes hitsounds on his diff. I think easy/hard/insane should use the same volume levels atleast, since its a touch to hard. But this is nothing major. I'm using virtually the same volume? In any case, lower your osu volume and turn up your speakers if it's too loud. I don't really like it when the hitsounds blend in so well I can't tell what I'm hitting. May as well be muted.

[Easy]
02:27:620 - It plays fine for me. I likewise understand where you're coming from, but the longs sliders don't fit with the part I am mapping (which is obviously the bass guitar).

02:58:831 (1,2,3) - Its the only 3 note (if you count the slider in) stack you have in the whole diff and was totally unexpected since this is around the end of the difficulty and I already got used to the 2 stacks.. Deleting 2 will remedy this and it still sounds great and plays nice. I can do this one.

[Insane]

01:50:682 (2,1) - On both test plays, this part got me. This distance is really harsh to sight-read. first time I missed, second time I hit it 50. This is my only real complaint. Dunno what happened here, got rid of jump; it wasn't on the other two.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[lolcubes' Normal]
01:37:290 (2) - Whoa there partner. Middle tick two lower. I didn't use caps.

Was that pointless? Of course
Does it make me a better person? Yes.

The way of the apple.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Haku's Hard]
02:28:932 (3) - Very possible to mistake this for an earlier note.
SOLUTION: Rotate it nicely like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156507

Ha Ha. Is he now.
HOW ACCEPTABLE.
.

KingsAL2 wrote:

[Insane]
02:36:245 (7) - New combo Did this
03:08:018 (1) - This 0.75 is useless. You can remove it It's a 0.67x and it's the exact same size as a 1/1 slider but the duration of a 3/2 slider, since the chorus starts 1/2 early.

[Haku's Hard]
00:54:165 (4) - Can be finish it's all =.=", it don't stay here
02:14:870 (1) - Remove new combo 01:07:290 (1,2,3,4) - ,plus As you surely seen, I did NC every word there
03:21:143 (3-2nd) - Finish also Say why? it's the 2nd nosense finish you suggest -.-"
03:29:206 (2) - ^ With this the 3rd
03:34:456 (1) - Remove new combo1:07:290 (1,2,3,4) - ,plus As you surely seen, I did NC every word there

4. Somehow letting people know that there is a jump (I don't really get this one, which is why it's last)

xsrsbsns wrote:

Some suggestions only:

[Easy]
this diff has higher AR and smaller circles than normal :V Lowered AR to match, but I made the map on cs4, and spacing isn't right on cs3.
01:44:040 (3) - add a finish to head I swear I fixed this before
02:12:620 (1) - add a finish?
02:31:557 (2,3) - i wouldn't do that. 3 more circles ahead too. changed 3 to a slider, which actually fits better
02:51:620 (2) - add a finish
03:08:018 (1) - where does this slider end? i think 03:08:581 is a lot better 2 green timing sections
Also I snuck in some hitnormals and fixed some timing sections that I saw. I think I accidentally used an old version or uploaded the wrong one.

[Insane]
00:21:651 (2) - not stacked correctly? or on purpose hmm may as well fix them. This was sort of bugging me
01:29:227 (2) - same as above
03:22:456 (1) - add new combo?

[Hard]
00:47:040 (1) - add a finish to head
00:54:165 (4) - add a finish
01:54:620 (1) - add a finish to head
03:06:518 (4) - add a finish to end
03:21:143 (3) - ^
03:29:206 (2) - add a finish

Useless Combo mod

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:41:790 - whistle No thanks. The vocal is coming a red tick before and after this spot, the whistle was used to mainly bring out the voice at parts.
03:16:831 - NC ? No thanks. The combo is following the vocals here, which starts just after this spot.
and soft hitclaps dont fit this song at all, i sugest you to remove them all ( or at least remove those claps which placed at the same note with wistle and finish sounds ( like this 01:53:870, 02:02:870) ( and reduce volume for each clap ) it sounds much better without claps.....
No thanks, I used claps to give a more rhythmic feeling to the music and I find it quite relaxing. The clap itself is kinda dry, and that's probably why it's probably not the best thing ever, but this works imo, so I won't change it.

Agkaemon wrote:

All suggestions. Mostly a bit of perfectionism, as it is very well done overall
[Insane]
00:56:790 (6) - This feels slightly unneccesary but I fear it'll break the pattern if you remove it. Hitsounds fix this.
00:58:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit too much beat for this part. Hitsounds fix this.
so these aren't a problem because of the hitsounds? I'm following the bass here in any case.
01:59:495 (3) - Instead of returning to (2) you could make it flow up and as a circle. not sure what you mean here, so I'll just move 1
02:56:768 (2,3,4) - These work, but they don't look pretty in my opinion, you can very likely enhance their positions. I compare to the following patterns such as 03:00:143 (3,4,5,6)changed the order a bit to make mah star

Agkaemon wrote:

All suggestions. Mostly a bit of perfectionism, as it is very well done overall

[Haku's Hard]
Small hitcircles. Annoying to me, a reason I skip maps, but it's mostly a personal issue to me.

Patterns in this one, while fine, are a bit too "square" so to speak, not as natural as the other difficulties. Mapping style, I guess.

00:49:665 (5,1,2) - is a bit cramped

00:53:602 (3,4,5,6) - A bit confusing

02:52:745 (6,7) - Emphasis in vocals, follows drums.

I didn't like this map for playing it myself. Tastes.
A few sections do not do justice to the Kiai.

Agkaemon wrote:

[lolcubes' Normal]
00:38:901 (1) - This spinner I'd feel it a bit better like a break; hard to decide
02:52:932 (4) - I know you can make this slider look better.
03:08:956 (2,3,4,5) - You might like making these following the vocals.

1. Tags :
   1. You have added "to aru" in the tags, however if someone search "to aru majutsu no index" in the game, he will not find your map. You shall add "majutsu no index" after "to aru" then (In all difficulties of course)
   2. Why "rimless" is in the tags, it's already in the title :/

1. Consider using Circle Size 3, Normal use CS3 and this diff CS4, It's kinda weird :/
2. About the other map settings, they are the same as in Normal and they are kinda high for an Easy. I'm fine with AR4, but you should reduce the OD and the HPdrain.
3. 00:28:214 - This spot needs a note because of the heavy note, besides you did it at 00:32:714 (2), so for consistency you have to something here.
4. 00:54:352 (4) - This slider is very confusing (only 1/2 after the previous slider and it's kinda sudden here), there is no actual reason to do this. Consider only mapping this beat 00:54:727.
5. 01:41:040 (3,1) - Intervert the new combo, (3) starts on a downbeat and it's where the vocals starts

1. I don't really like the circle size here, but it's your choice.
2. 00:38:901 (5) - You have silenced this circle, which is unrankable (because it's too confusing, etc.). Besides, there is no actual reson to have a note here, maybe to follow the vocals however this note is unexpected here and I strongly recommand you to remove it.
3. 00:45:821 (6) - I understand why you have added this circle here, but I don't really like this kind of patterns, besides the pattern is at the bottom of the screen which is kinda uncomforable to play :/
   I suggest you to remove this circle. It would be more playable and pleasant.

1. 02:56:206 to 03:05:206 - I'm ok with the previous jumps, but here the jumps are too big for a part which is slow !
2. 03:08:018 (1) - In my opinion, 0.75x ~ 0.80x flows better.
3. 03:16:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - his kind of patterns are really confusing when they are consecutive like this, when I testplayed it I was like "o.o where should I click now". consider rearranging this pattern or making it more readable please.
4. 03:34:456 (7) - A new combo is missing here ~

KuraiPettan wrote:

General :

1. Tags :
   1. You have added "to aru" in the tags, however if someone search "to aru majutsu no index" in the game, he will not find your map. You shall add "majutsu no index" after "to aru" then (In all difficulties of course)
   2. Why "rimless" is in the tags, it's already in the title :/

nobody's going to type out "to aru majutsu no index". I suppose it doesn't hurt to add it though. "rimless world" is the title of the song (fuchinashi is rimless or something like that, and sekai is world).


Easy :

1. Consider using Circle Size 3, Normal use CS3 and this diff CS4, It's kinda weird :/
2. About the other map settings, they are the same as in Normal and they are kinda high for an Easy. I'm fine with AR4, but you should reduce the OD and the HPdrain. I wanted to let easy mod not be so much of a joke.
3. 00:28:214 - This spot needs a note because of the heavy note, besides you did it at 00:32:714 (2), so for consistency you have to something here. yep
4. 00:54:352 (4) - This slider is very confusing (only 1/2 after the previous slider and it's kinda sudden here), there is no actual reason to do this. Consider only mapping this beat 00:54:727. changed to a slider
5. 01:41:040 (3,1) - Intervert the new combo, (3) starts on a downbeat and it's where the vocals starts standardized the combos at that part. I had a stupid reason for doing it before.

also changed around some stacks.

Insane :

1. 02:56:206 to 03:05:206 - I'm ok with the previous jumps, but here the jumps are too big for a part which is slow ! I exaggerated the jumps here because I really dislike when a "slow" part gets its spacing cut in half. This section is supposed to be intense. It's the transitional bridge into the last chorus and is supposed to be filled with emotion, and I tried to map that emotion with jumps. If you lessen the jumps it loses some of that feeling, and some of the difficulty. As far as I know, Border of Death is the only other map that does this, and while I didn't like the rhythms associated with it, I did like the feeling of the jumps there, which is what I'm trying to achieve here. I also don't think it's ridiculously hard, just something osu! is not used to. 4.0x may seem like a lot, but those are on sliders which don't break combo if you miss,
2. 03:08:018 (1) - In my opinion, 0.75x ~ 0.80x flows better. It's so it's the same length as a 1/2 slider. Confusing maybe, but it's insane.
3. 03:16:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - his kind of patterns are really confusing when they are consecutive like this, when I testplayed it I was like "o.o where should I click now". consider rearranging this pattern or making it more readable please. really? I thought this was pretty tame in comparison to the usual stack stack stack I see all the time. I'm going to leave it, because at least one person who modded it said they really liked it, and it is supposed to be insane (even though it's more of a hard+).
4. 03:34:456 (7) - A new combo is missing here ~ It's the same as the previous sections

KuraiPettan wrote:

[b]Haku's Hard :

1. I don't really like the circle size here, but it's your choice.
2. 00:38:901 (5) - You have silenced this circle, which is unrankable (because it's too confusing, etc.). Besides, there is no actual reson to have a note here, maybe to follow the vocals however this note is unexpected here and I strongly recommand you to remove it.
   I'm actually following a mix of drums and vocal (this represent the hitsound I inserted, the snap), anyway the volume of al section before the spinner is 30% now)
3. 00:45:821 (6) - I understand why you have added this circle here, but I don't really like this kind of patterns, besides the pattern is at the bottom of the screen which is kinda uncomforable to play :/
   I suggest you to remove this circle. It would be more playable and pleasant.
   Song-wise it is a 1/3 note, and making a slider end in 1/3 isn't a good idea, too just deleting it is even worser ( as the slider will and on nothing ) So the kinda used streamy note seemed the best idea, as the stream like this will follow the voice "trail", so, not deleting it

1. 01:04:290 (2,1) - not fan of note following slider so soon in easy.. maybe follow vocal instead? Edit: I meant to suggest combining both into one slider that follows vocal sorry~
2. 01:37:290 (1) - NC? and remove NC on 01:38:040 (3)
3. 02:05:870 (2,3) - same as above
4. 02:28:932 - 02:38:870 - a bit tricky rhythm here
5. 03:24:706 (2) - 1/2 later on timeline and respace

• ok cool

1. I'm not a fan of this circle size on hard.. it's smaller than insane too
2. this difficulty feels really cramped, it's harder for less experienced players to see small differences in spacing in order to tell rhythm apart
3. stacking the triplets or something would make them a lot easier to read
4. 00:45:821 (6,7,8,9,10) - I failed here on first playthrough since the spacing looked so similar to previous part.. and rhythm doesn't make sense to me
5. 02:44:870 (1,2,3) - stack?

1. 00:53:415 (2,3 / 4,5) - this is stretching it a bit, reduce spacing? to 2.0 atleast
2. 00:56:415 (4,5,6,7) - ^, this part is harder than the rest of your map aside from the end
3. 02:00:245 (8,1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 02:03:995 (4,5,6,7) - I just don't like how this plays
5. 02:43:370 (4,1) - this jump didn't feel right to me
6. 02:56:206 - 03:04:643 - spacing change here doesn't feel right on quiet section of song

silklash wrote:

~All suggestions~

Easy

1. 01:04:290 (2,1) - not fan of note following slider so soon in easy.. maybe follow vocal instead? why would the time matter?
2. 01:37:290 (1) - NC? and remove NC on 01:38:040 (3)
3. 02:05:870 (2,3) - same as above
4. 02:28:932 - 02:38:870 - a bit tricky rhythm here remapped
5. 03:24:706 (2) - 1/2 later on timeline and respace I wanted the finishes here

Insane

1. 00:53:415 (2,3 / 4,5) - this is stretching it a bit, reduce spacing? to 2.0 atleast
2. 00:56:415 (4,5,6,7) - ^, this part is harder than the rest of your map aside from the end
3. 02:00:245 (8,1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 02:03:995 (4,5,6,7) - I just don't like how this plays
5. 02:43:370 (4,1) - this jump didn't feel right to me fixed
6. 02:56:206 - 03:04:643 - spacing change here doesn't feel right on quiet section of song commented on this earlier

some inconsistencies made it really hard for me to read first playthrough

Garven wrote:

'sup ziin

[General]
You may want to full submit. I didn't get the Normal on a fresh download. argh

[Storyboard]
Some of the images you chose to use vary so much stylistically that it's very jarring to see as they pass by. Mainly looking at d, q, and r. Some of the images look really aliased blown up to full screen too.
Map was made when 800x600 was max SB size. Technically it still is. surprising though to see that there's a lot of new stuff, so I'm going to be replacing the SB images in the near future.

[Easy]
00:41:040 (1) - Eew, whistle on slider slide. There are others too. I just don't like them since whenever they try to actually accent something in the music, it just sounds like static instead.
00:42:540 (1) - This new combo really needed? (both these apply to copy/paste later on) no, but is any new combo ever needed? 1st maps the first part, 2nd maps the echo by backup voices. I did this in insane, wanted to do something similar here.
01:04:290 (2) - The transition from the soft slider slides to the normal slider slide here sounds kinda eh.
02:52:182 (2) - I know you can see the slider after the hit burst is gone, but it just kind of looks like tacky placement the way it is now. I love easy fixes like this
03:08:018 (1) - Really nice effect here. Only thing that bugged me was the spacing from the 2 -> this. Felt a little too close. I swear this is an osu bug. It is too close.

sliders have never bothered me so I'm going to leave them.

[Insane]
Some of the spacing felt kinda wonky since the jumps didn't feel very natural to me. This usually occurred on the 1/2 rhythms such as 03:29:393 (5,1) - where there wasn't an easily evident reason behind it beyond just an instrument change or something, though 00:59:602 (1,2,3) - was a little tricky too. It ended up me watching the circles for the rhythms instead of kicking back and enjoying the music and map. It's not your normal jump map. I threw in jumps to accent notes, and you'll note there's very few jumpstreams like you'll find in a lot of siriru style maps (just one per kiai rather than every 4th measure). All the jumps are natural for me, mostly because my style is different and stepmania-based.

silklash wrote:

~All suggestions~

Haku's Hard

1. I'm not a fan of this circle size on hard.. it's smaller than insane too It's an hard, and won't change CS
2. this difficulty feels really cramped, it's harder for less experienced players to see small differences in spacing in order to tell rhythm apart There is a contradiction, as Hard isn't meant to be played by players with no experience
3. stacking the triplets or something would make them a lot easier to read while killing almost all the "walking" effect and the graphic i want to give? hell no.
4. 00:45:821 (6,7,8,9,10) - I failed here on first playthrough since the spacing looked so similar to previous part.. and rhythm doesn't make sense to me Haku's rhythmn explanation funtime! : 00:45:821 (6) It's a VOICE note (Ta), 00:45:915 (7) Other than the "me" it fall a bass in the start and the faint cymbal at the end,00:46:477 (8,9,10) it follow the voice "trail", changed with a slider anyway
5. 02:44:870 (1,2,3) - stack? Doesn't if follow the music better like this? Chi(1)-ga(2,3)

Why is stack leniency so low? Stuff like 01:20:040 (1,2) - isn't stacking correctly. Notes like this aren't meant to stack anyway, and even stacking won't help much (the fact the hitburst cover it it's default skin related moreover). I'll manually stack if it's unavoidable(say where)
Same commentary on soft whistle slider slides bluh It happen i can't hear them as the volume of hitsounds is lower than music and the is hearable only with high volume on hitsounds and lower song volume
00:45:821 (6) - Is this rhythms really necessary? hear it better, the "tame ni" start here, or better, start a bit before on 1/3
02:01:557 (3) - This slider feels awkward in the overall feel of the rhythms you have set up here. more because you can't hear 02:01:182 (2,3,4,5) rhythmn better and see how it's following the snaps
02:28:370 (2,1) - Spacing is a little dodgy here. There was something similar earlier in the map, but it didn't bug me as much as this one did. Eh. Early clicker or impatient player, in 02:27:620 (1,2,1) you couldn't see it was following the bass
02:52:745 (6,7) - I'm not really sure what you're trying to follow in the music here. the end of 6 have a snap, hear better
03:25:456 (1,2) - That's just cruel to place so far into a slow song like this. Sense-having antijump have sense, There is a false stop in the instrumental.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Insane]
00:41:040 (1) - Missing new combo.
01:48:620 (1) - Missing new combo. Argh spinners
03:16:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't see any reason for the triplets to go back and forth? it's not like there's a bigger timing distance between 1,3 than 3,2 and so on, and don't seem to go with the music either.
I've had comments that it's awesome, and I've had comments that it doesn't make sense. To me it fits because of the pattern mostly, but also because it's jump jump normal x3. Where we feel jumps is not always the same from person to person either. I'm not a fan of jump combos personally. Also note I did a similar pattern in the beginning, where it was just slider stacked note x3. The 2nd time through I did the complete opposite. It's all to create some variety

[Easy]
Feels a bit fast for a song that is pretty calm. Try a slower slider speed (probably around 0.7) I hate slow easies. Easy typically has a low SV, big circles, and godawful overlaps. I feel I did a good job avoiding that. The only overlaps are the 1/2 after slider notes which are clear as day (since they overlap just a little bit). I'm also not convinced that newbies need to FC a map on their first try. The map's plenty easy to pass, which is the important thing.
03:19:081 (3) - It could be problematic that the hitburst at this slider end isnt gone by the time the player has to hit the slider start, and easy shouldn't have any blind notes. fixed
I dunno, the patterns look a bit too complex for an Easy map, but i'd be writing a wall of text if i were to point out each, so i'll mostly be happy if you avoid stacking double notes.
AIMod lists them all since it's technically "normal" difficulty for less than 200 ms objects, however I didn't stack any of these notes (on purpose). If I have to remove them, I'd rather up the difficulty and call it normal. Since that's obviously not a good idea, I wouldn't feel right without removing them all, which ruins 03:08:018 (1,2) - in my eyes.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Haku's Hard]
02:52:745 (6) - Feels like it should start at: 02:52:995 instead.
02:53:495 (7) - Feels like it should start at: 02:53:870 instead.
02:54:338 (1) - Spinner can be removed if you fix the above, tho they need to be fixed as it follows the music better.

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Here, "nee" is a romanization of ねー, is that the as ねえ? Great storyboard by the way.

I don't write the lyrics. I just report them

Consider adding custom colours.　This is a personal decision. I want the player to choose the best colors for them.
Add "railgun" to tags? This isn't railgun, it's raildex. It would be a lie to put in railgun.

[Easy]
00:52:290 (1) - RNC
00:53:040 (3) - NC
Either way I'm going to have a disproportionate number of beats per combo. In this song I mapped mostly to the lyrics and phrases, and I hope that it came out that way, even though this would normally be good advice

[lolcubes' Normal]
02:51:620 (1) - Seeing how this part is leading into the breakdown, consider extending this slider to 02:52:370? Conveniently, you can add a clap that you're missing on this beat :3
this makes a really long "stream" that I didn't like for normal.
Good luck :3

Garven wrote:

Eew forgot about all those whistles on sliderslides, haha. Sorry, I'm used to them now to the point that I like them (including the normal sliderslides on normal and easy). I suppose in an ideal situation I'd replace slidernormal with whatever, but I wanted this map to be completely customizable (though haku chose to break that ). If it really does bother you on many different maps more than just mine, I would recommend replacing your default sliderslides.
[Easy]
03:23:768 (1,2) - Easily avoidable overlap done.