1. 15,499 Loops (4,93 stars, 198 notes)
2. Desho?! (3,59 stars, 101 notes)
3. John Smith (4,73 stars, 257 notes)
4. Kyon-kun, denwa~! (4,22 stars, 143 notes)

1. 1. Capitalize the title: "Bouken Desho Desho."
   Full submit after.
   
2. 2. Distance snap everything properly. The distance snap is poorly used.

1. 00:21:24 (6) - 1 level 3 grid left.
2. 00:25:84 (1) - 1 level 3 grid right.
3. 00:40:64 (9) - 1 level 3 grid left.
4. 00:48:24 (5,6,7,8) - 1 level 3 grid left.

1. 00:14:24 (1) - Stack with fading (3)?

whymeman wrote:

[Normal] (Done)

You need to rensnap all notes in this map. They are "wondering" off in the timing chart.

fixed

[Hard] (Done)

00:55:41 (7,8,9) - Did the distance snap went up a bit around here? The spacing of the notes here are a bit different from the rest.....

fixed

K2J wrote:

[Normal] and [Hard]
Fine.

[animasks Difficulty]
00:17:81 (1,2,3) - There's no music here. Why is this here? The notes immediately after don't fit very well, either, it feels like there should be a fourth note in each set, though that would obviously necessitate some jumps.
...there is music there....it fits in good as it is
00:41:81 (3) - Maybe change the slider before so this is more obvious? I like the slider how it is
00:44:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - After this point, I thought all stacks were going to be streams, but since they aren't this sticks out like a sore thumb, especially since it's rhythm is so unusual (it's the bass, right?)
adding another stream might make it too hard though...plus there was an increase in spacing before the stream...and that part of the song is what I'm trying to emphasize with the stream...the part before the ~bouken desho desho~ chorus part
01:17:61 (5 endpoint,6,7) - Hitsounds?
01:25:21 (1) - What. If you're going to have this, extend it 3 whole notes when the fade ends. I guess that works too even though I don't really like spinners that long

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Damn man! so cool *__*
I think that is already aproved XD
*star* o/




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My Pending Beatmaps:
Nico Nico Douga - Nico Nico Medley - Final Mix (Star Priority +3)

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[DJPop]
00:17:41 (3) - 1. why does this end on a blue tick 2. do not approve of .5 bpm 3. why is this silent
Just a technique.
00:41:01 (4) - remove these claps or just move them i dont care but i dont like them in the middle when its the last note getting the emphasis
Disagree. (For me, claps = snares)
00:50:01 (2) - stack more neatly
00:56:41 (2) - ^
Fixed.
01:23:01 (1) - uh snap the end plz
Disagee, if I do that, it won't sync to the sound.
also inherit sections should start before the note they intend to affect
Some of them are Kiai.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[animask]
00:12:41 (6) - start with a finish Okay
00:23:61 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - what happened to the claps? they disappeared! AAAAAH! Claps Return lol
00:31:81 (1) - hitsound kay
00:33:61 (1) - uh random jump? Its barely a jump
00:44:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - if you could hitsound this that would be epic is it epic now? lol
00:55:01 (6,7) - stack ends ....
01:10:81 (7) - i would make this the new combo and put it on top of old 1 based on when the song moves okay that works too
01:13:41 (1) - end with a finish or clap clap sounds hideous...finish
01:23:01 (4) - last finish doesnt fit deleted finish

Paulo8624 wrote:

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Paulo]
00:07:22 (6,7,8) - whistles sound weird Fixed.
...any particular reason the countdown counts down to the break and then says ACTION? The SB isn't diff. specific. They match Animask's and both Ryuukun's, but doesn't match mine or DJPop's.
00:24:42 (1) - extend 1/2 beat and finish Fixed.
00:28:82 (3) - finish does not belong Fixed.
00:31:82 (1) - start with a hitsound? Fixed.
00:33:62 (6) - whistles go on white ticks plz Fixed.
00:44:42 (8) - kill the x.5bpm This was fully intentional as it's a held vocal, and I used 0,5x so that I wouldn't break the pattern.
00:46:82 (1) - whatthefuck What should I understand by this?.
00:51:72 (2) - start 1/2 later Fixed.
01:16:22 (3) - illegal slider (overlaps itself too much) Fixed (Sort of).
youre overusing whistles and underusing everything else and the bpm changes are ugh I can't help iif it matches for me.

[attachment=0:25e9d]Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Paulo8624's Adventure].osu[/attachment:25e9d]

RaisTF wrote:

Some suggestions ^^' ALL with lvl3 grid
Normal:
looks cool, I SS'd it playing first time, so just nazi mod:
00:14:21 (1,2,3) - has the same timing as 00:11:01 (1,2,3)... so why spacing is different? 00:14:21 (1) - 1 grid left 00:15:01 (3) - 1 grid right
00:19:81 (2,3,4) - 1 grid down to align with 00:21:01 (5,1) and for simmetry =_=
00:24:81 (2,3) - 2 grids left to align with 00:23:41 (3) ?
01:09:61 (1) - I want to make this till 01:11:22 and replace 01:10:81 (1) to the 01:11:41 (1)... 01:12:01 (1) - looks right
fixed

Hard:
Another SS Oo
00:11:01 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks strange... maybe its better to make it the copy of 00:14:21 (1,2,3,4,5)?
00:31:81 (1,2) - timing between this is the same as between 00:30:81 (7,8)... so why the spacing is differebt? D:
00:34:21 (8,1) and 00:34:81 (2,3) - same...
00:39:01 (3) - this looks more like just making map more interesting but I dont know...
fixed (just did not fix 00:39:01 (3) )

Insane: =_=
00:14:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it should be the copy 00:11:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) which is done preety well
00:24:41 (7,8) - 1 grid up?
00:26:81 (5) - 1 grid left?
00:40:81 (1,2,3) - woah... its trap or mistake? Timig between 00:40:61 (9,1) and 00:40:81 (1,2) is the same but spacing so different D: not good...
sry D:

Anyway I realy enjoyed playing each diff, I hope it will be ranked. star~
ty

RaisTF wrote:

Paulo:
No SS т.т
00:20:42 (5) - I dont know why I want a circle here I... didn't understand D:
00:21:22 (1) - I think two circles instead of that slider would soud better... Fixed
00:43:02 (2) - maybe sounds better without this? Fixed
00:43:42 (3) - this slider dounds strange... I think you should replace it with two circles 00:43:42 (3) and 00:43:62 (4) without 00:43:82 (5)... Fixed
Omg kial time X.x I cant mod this madness D: I don't know if this is good or bad D:
01:09:62 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - looks cool o.othx

RaisTF wrote:

Some suggestions ^^' ALL with lvl3 grid
RoxKyubi's:
The timing in this diff is strange and its hard to understand it with such spacing playing first time D: So please check out every note again...
00:20:01 (2,3,4) - too close to previous slider i think? [fixed]
00:20:41 (5) - or this too far =_= [alright, fixed again XD]
00:25:81 (2,3,4,5,6) - here is an example of good spacing for such timing [ i made some changes here, see if u like it õ.o]
00:11:01 (1) - hmm... 1 grid left maybe? [ really? ok than ._.]
00:37:39 (2) - ... I dont know why, but I want to move it to 00:37:19... [ yeah, i think is better now ^__^]
00:39:39 (5,1) - very big jump for this timing Oo [surelly it is, fixed :3]
00:49:59 (1,2,3) - 2 grids up to align with 00:49:19 (2) [ok than ^^]
00:55:99 (3) - 1 grid right [but it won't take de symmetry? o.o]

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Ryuukun, aren't gonna use the one that i fixed? ._.

well, u now what u'r gonna =]

Spierek wrote:

Would you like to add my difficulty?
I actually make beatmap for this song but I did't finish it.
My beatmap now is graveyarded. Have a look of it.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/6819

Mogsworth wrote:

To be honest, 7 is far too much. I'd say 5 difficulties is still pushing it but is at least reasonable when compared to seven.