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Hirano Aya - Bouken desho desho (TV Size)

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Ryuukun
476 posts
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Ryuukun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 19. August 2009 at 13:40:38

Artist: Hirano Aya
Title: Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size)
Source: Suzumiya Haruhi no Yuuutsu
Tags: Anime, Haruhi
BPM: 150
Filesize: 14152kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. 15,499 Loops (4,93 stars, 198 notes)
  2. Desho?! (3,59 stars, 101 notes)
  3. John Smith (4,73 stars, 257 notes)
  4. Kyon-kun, denwa~! (4,22 stars, 143 notes)
Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size)
Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is the opening to "Suzumiya Haruhi no Yuuutsu (????????)" also known as The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya.

[Desho!] by Ryuukun
[Kyon-kun, denwa~!] by Ryuukun
[15,499 Loops] by Alex0686
[John Smith] by DJPop

thanks~
Last edited by Ryuukun , edited 98 times in total.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
I am going to mod to mod this map with out the video because the video needs to be smaller.

Hard:
00:20:43 (5) - end a half note earlier
00:24:83 (8) - " "
00:25:83 (1,2,3) - why does this area have a greater spacing than insane
00:26:83 (5) - " "
00:26:83 (5,6,7) - why does this part have inconsistent spacing
01:02:42 (5,6,7) - inconsistent spacing
01:13:42 (3) - " "
01:23:02 (1) - end a whole note earlier

Insane:
00:20:43 (5) - end a half note earlier
00:24:83 (8) - " "
00:26:83 (5) - " "
00:31:83 (1) - distance from 10 is too large
00:39:03 (3,4) - put under 1,2 respectively
00:45:63 (7,8,9) - please have consistent spacing
00:49:03 (7) - put under 5
01:13:42 (6) - " "
01:23:02 (1) - end a whole note earlier

Hard is very similar to insane. I would suggest you differentiate the 2. Besides that, you should comb through both of your maps with distance snap because there seems to be quite a few spacing problems.
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
  1. 1. Capitalize the title: "Bouken Desho Desho."
    Full submit after.
  2. 2. Distance snap everything properly. The distance snap is poorly used.
I like this song a lot!
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun
i completely renewed both diffs.
they are now properly distance snaped.
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
Hard:
  1. 00:21:24 (6) - 1 level 3 grid left.
  2. 00:25:84 (1) - 1 level 3 grid right.
  3. 00:40:64 (9) - 1 level 3 grid left.
  4. 00:48:24 (5,6,7,8) - 1 level 3 grid left.
Normal:
  1. 00:14:24 (1) - Stack with fading (3)?
I'm tired.. sorry if I didn't do a good job with my modding..
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Rono_old
85 posts
Joined December 2008
Rono_old
Um...you forgot to full upload, or something, cuz I downloaded it and there were only the .osu files :o nor even the audio.
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
The map
Add Red,White, and Yellow to the combo colors and they would make the combo colors more Haruish..
you need hit sounds.

Normal
00:33:44 (6,7,8) - Add whistles please.
00:39:84 (6,7,8) - Same here.
00:41:24 (3,6,9) - Add a finish.
00:43:64 (3) - Add a finish.

Hard
It feels like normal but with smaller hitcircles..
Same finish and whistles like normal in the same spots.

I don't like the map that much.. and this was a great song.
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
About the video, would you want a direct rip from the DVD? It will probably go over the 20 MB limit a bit, but I doubt a BAT would request compression for something like that. Also, you forget the mp3. Full submit it again.
antony11
153 posts
Joined August 2008
antony11
hard
00:20:44 (5) - the end on slider is not place right

Good I like this song
Hold on my star
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Hard].osu
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun
modding the timing and the hitsounds is ok but not how i set the circles :P
Thank you anyway
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
Here's my difficulty~!
EDIT: Edited beatmap

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [animasks Difficulty].osu
GbL
332 posts
Joined February 2009
GbL
Nice music, SHY rocks.
+Star
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun
ok its online.
I wonder if i reall shall renew my 2 diffs?
Are they really that bad?
You decide guys.
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
00:46:216 - Set as preview point.

You forgot Kiai Time in Normal? Or was that purposely?

Giving the star I promised.

And attaching my updated difficulty, with hit sounds now. also, I'm pretty sure I'm done with the storyboard, if you like it, use it, if not, then don't. I won't be offended. :) I'm going to use it for some of my own maps anyways. Maybe. :P

Also, here's a tip for iPhone users(I'm one myself), remove all the images(except the original background) and the video. This goes for people who don't want to use the storyboard too, just remove all the pictures except defaults.

And just don't set the skin to Haruhiism, I have a custom version here since you can't have the skin.ini in a song. :( So it's white. :) Also, remove the countdown. If you use this anyways. :P

Updated difficulty:Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu

And the storyboard: http://up.ppy.sh/files/storyboard.rar

Remove what you don't like, or don't add at all. And felel free to ask for anything else you have ideas for.

oh shit:


heehee, forgot that.

Just remove the -25 though.
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
K2J
872 posts
Here since the beginning
K2J
[Normal] and [Hard]
Fine.

[animasks Difficulty]
00:17:81 (1,2,3) - There's no music here. Why is this here? The notes immediately after don't fit very well, either, it feels like there should be a fourth note in each set, though that would obviously necessitate some jumps.
00:41:81 (3) - Maybe change the slider before so this is more obvious?
00:44:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - After this point, I thought all stacks were going to be streams, but since they aren't this sticks out like a sore thumb, especially since it's rhythm is so unusual (it's the bass, right?)
01:17:61 (5 endpoint,6,7) - Hitsounds?
01:25:21 (1) - What. If you're going to have this, extend it 3 whole notes when the fade ends.

[Alex's Difficulty]
There should probably be a few more hitsounds from 00:19:41 to 00:30:01, but that's preference.
01:09:61 (1) - SB a warning when going 4x the slider speed, please.
Be careful about ending stuff on the start of a spinner; even though it's certainly passable, it's not rankable.

[General Notes]
On some PCs (namely, mine) placing the volume at zero for a spinner gives off a popping sound. Might I suggest simply being very quiet, not entirely silent?
Alex's Difficulty has a couple of soft sections at the start; I like them. I recommend similar techniques on the other difficulties.
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
[Normal] (Done)

You need to rensnap all notes in this map. They are "wondering" off in the timing chart. :o

[Hard] (Done)

00:55:41 (7,8,9) - Did the distance snap went up a bit around here? The spacing of the notes here are a bit different from the rest.....

[animasks Difficulty] (Done)

00:55:01 (6,7) - The tail ends of these sliders are slightly uneven.
01:23:01 (4) - Questionable finisher hitsound here....

[Alex's Difficulty] (Done)

00:36:41 (4) - This slider came just a bit short by 1/4. Make it exdend out 1/4 longer to fix this. (Though this may reqiure some rearrangement of the hitnotes... )
01:12:61 (16,1) - The timing of these two notes SHOULD NOT collide into each other. Please either: 1.) Delete one of the notes. -or- 2.) Readjust the timing between the two notes.
01:23:01 (3,1) - ^

My Stickynote: Not many problems listed here. The video looks great, and the timing sounds fine so far. Just make sure to double check the maps before asking for another person to mod this map again. I expect this map to be ranked soon so i'll give it a star.
Last edited by whymeman , edited 1 time in total.
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
[Alex's Difficulty]
There should probably be a few more hitsounds from 00:19:41 to 00:30:01, but that's preference.
01:09:61 (1) - SB a warning when going 4x the slider speed, please.
Be careful about ending stuff on the start of a spinner; even though it's certainly passable, it's not rankable.

Okay. :)

I was wondering about the spinner thing, I meant to ask first. :P Forgot though.

whymeman's fixes:

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu


Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Finished. :)

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [DJPop's Difficulty].osu




cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
Aw, DJPop's difficulty sort of messes up the order. :P Nah it's cool. I would have mapped the beginning, but I didn't think I should.

And hell, my storyboarded flashes made that difficulty so much harder. >< My eyes, so much Kiai Time...

But fun :D As usual.
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Sorry if you had to re-edit the map again when I was posting. I normally post in progress of modding because often lose the post when the internet cuts off..... :o
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun

whymeman wrote:

[Normal] (Done)

You need to rensnap all notes in this map. They are "wondering" off in the timing chart. :o

fixed

[Hard] (Done)

00:55:41 (7,8,9) - Did the distance snap went up a bit around here? The spacing of the notes here are a bit different from the rest.....

fixed
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder

K2J wrote:

[Normal] and [Hard]
Fine.

[animasks Difficulty]
00:17:81 (1,2,3) - There's no music here. Why is this here? The notes immediately after don't fit very well, either, it feels like there should be a fourth note in each set, though that would obviously necessitate some jumps.
...there is music there....it fits in good as it is
00:41:81 (3) - Maybe change the slider before so this is more obvious? I like the slider how it is
00:44:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - After this point, I thought all stacks were going to be streams, but since they aren't this sticks out like a sore thumb, especially since it's rhythm is so unusual (it's the bass, right?)
adding another stream might make it too hard though...plus there was an increase in spacing before the stream...and that part of the song is what I'm trying to emphasize with the stream...the part before the ~bouken desho desho~ chorus part
01:17:61 (5 endpoint,6,7) - Hitsounds?
01:25:21 (1) - What. If you're going to have this, extend it 3 whole notes when the fade ends. I guess that works too even though I don't really like spinners that long
Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [animasks Difficulty].osu
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun
Everything is online and everything is the latest version.
Paulo8624
105 posts
Joined February 2009
Paulo8624
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by Paulo8624 , edited 1 time in total.
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
For Paulo's difficulty:

You don't really have to use soft sounds, but maybe that's just how you want it. I can't MAKE you change it, I'll just suggest. I used it only in some parts cause I don't like soft sounds. Also, I should SB a warning for those 2x sliders, but I'll wait until you're done.

Also: Just some weird patterns I just don't seem to like:

00:07:82 (1) - I thin you should end it at 00:11:020 or 00:10:220. It doesn't feel comfortable ending there.
00:50:62 (4,5,6) - Eh, it's okay, but too fast. :P
00:52:82 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This one just, I don't really like it at all.

Maybe: Lower the tick rate. Not really comfortable with it either.
Hopefully it'll fix it self later once you're done, but your difficulty shouldn't be right under Normal. :\

And Ryuukun, replace the play-skip with this one:

Sorry for so many changes and full uploads. :( But I thought maybe the no skip might have pissed some off, but spacebars works too, just to let you guys know. :)

The new osb i sent you should not do that weird stretch anymore, but that expanding effect is gone. :( Add it in again I guess :P with the sosdan and rainbow. :D

And again I update mine, sorry. :( But I just fixed somethings, and added somethings.
Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu

Paulo8624
105 posts
Joined February 2009
Paulo8624
Finally the map is complete. I fixed everything Alex pointed out, except the soft sounds. I think it fits more than the hard sounds.

[Link Removed]

You can change anything you like, if you think it's necessary.

Cya =D

Edit: I changed some spacing. It should be better now. =]
Last edited by Paulo8624 , edited 1 time in total.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
[Normal]
There's no any errors, but i think it's need more hitsounds.
00:32:616 (3) - Maybe clap or whistle here?
00:34:216 (8) - ^
00:35:816 (5,6) - Clap or whistle?
00:37:616 (5, 6) - ^

[Hard]
01:09:616 - 01:12:616
I think you need remove all hitsound and...
01:10:216 (4) - Clap, whistle or finish.
01:10:816 (1) - ^
01:11:416 (4) - ^
01:12:016 (1) - ^

[animask diff]
00:12:216 (x) - Maybe place note here?
00:15:416 (x) - ^
00:33:616 (1) - Jump?

[Alex diff] Heh, my name is Alex too ^^
00:11:816 (4) - Maybe clap here?
00:15:016 (3) - ^
00:28:216 (7) - *Nazy mod* Down and right 1 grid.

[DJPop diff]
All good.

Starred.
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun
fixed the parts you modded on my diffs
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
tieff's fixes:

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu

P.S. Ryuu, did you ever get it working right?
Ryuukun
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Ryuukun
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