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Hirano Aya - Bouken desho desho (TV Size)

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K2J
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K2J
[Normal] and [Hard]
Fine.

[animasks Difficulty]
00:17:81 (1,2,3) - There's no music here. Why is this here? The notes immediately after don't fit very well, either, it feels like there should be a fourth note in each set, though that would obviously necessitate some jumps.
00:41:81 (3) - Maybe change the slider before so this is more obvious?
00:44:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - After this point, I thought all stacks were going to be streams, but since they aren't this sticks out like a sore thumb, especially since it's rhythm is so unusual (it's the bass, right?)
01:17:61 (5 endpoint,6,7) - Hitsounds?
01:25:21 (1) - What. If you're going to have this, extend it 3 whole notes when the fade ends.

[Alex's Difficulty]
There should probably be a few more hitsounds from 00:19:41 to 00:30:01, but that's preference.
01:09:61 (1) - SB a warning when going 4x the slider speed, please.
Be careful about ending stuff on the start of a spinner; even though it's certainly passable, it's not rankable.

[General Notes]
On some PCs (namely, mine) placing the volume at zero for a spinner gives off a popping sound. Might I suggest simply being very quiet, not entirely silent?
Alex's Difficulty has a couple of soft sections at the start; I like them. I recommend similar techniques on the other difficulties.
whymeman
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whymeman
[Normal] (Done)

You need to rensnap all notes in this map. They are "wondering" off in the timing chart. :o

[Hard] (Done)

00:55:41 (7,8,9) - Did the distance snap went up a bit around here? The spacing of the notes here are a bit different from the rest.....

[animasks Difficulty] (Done)

00:55:01 (6,7) - The tail ends of these sliders are slightly uneven.
01:23:01 (4) - Questionable finisher hitsound here....

[Alex's Difficulty] (Done)

00:36:41 (4) - This slider came just a bit short by 1/4. Make it exdend out 1/4 longer to fix this. (Though this may reqiure some rearrangement of the hitnotes... )
01:12:61 (16,1) - The timing of these two notes SHOULD NOT collide into each other. Please either: 1.) Delete one of the notes. -or- 2.) Readjust the timing between the two notes.
01:23:01 (3,1) - ^

My Stickynote: Not many problems listed here. The video looks great, and the timing sounds fine so far. Just make sure to double check the maps before asking for another person to mod this map again. I expect this map to be ranked soon so i'll give it a star.
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cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
[Alex's Difficulty]
There should probably be a few more hitsounds from 00:19:41 to 00:30:01, but that's preference.
01:09:61 (1) - SB a warning when going 4x the slider speed, please.
Be careful about ending stuff on the start of a spinner; even though it's certainly passable, it's not rankable.

Okay. :)

I was wondering about the spinner thing, I meant to ask first. :P Forgot though.

whymeman's fixes:

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu


Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
Finished. :)

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [DJPop's Difficulty].osu




cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
Aw, DJPop's difficulty sort of messes up the order. :P Nah it's cool. I would have mapped the beginning, but I didn't think I should.

And hell, my storyboarded flashes made that difficulty so much harder. >< My eyes, so much Kiai Time...

But fun :D As usual.
whymeman
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whymeman
Sorry if you had to re-edit the map again when I was posting. I normally post in progress of modding because often lose the post when the internet cuts off..... :o
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun

whymeman wrote:

[Normal] (Done)

You need to rensnap all notes in this map. They are "wondering" off in the timing chart. :o

fixed

[Hard] (Done)

00:55:41 (7,8,9) - Did the distance snap went up a bit around here? The spacing of the notes here are a bit different from the rest.....

fixed
Sleep Powder
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Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder

K2J wrote:

[Normal] and [Hard]
Fine.

[animasks Difficulty]
00:17:81 (1,2,3) - There's no music here. Why is this here? The notes immediately after don't fit very well, either, it feels like there should be a fourth note in each set, though that would obviously necessitate some jumps.
...there is music there....it fits in good as it is
00:41:81 (3) - Maybe change the slider before so this is more obvious? I like the slider how it is
00:44:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - After this point, I thought all stacks were going to be streams, but since they aren't this sticks out like a sore thumb, especially since it's rhythm is so unusual (it's the bass, right?)
adding another stream might make it too hard though...plus there was an increase in spacing before the stream...and that part of the song is what I'm trying to emphasize with the stream...the part before the ~bouken desho desho~ chorus part
01:17:61 (5 endpoint,6,7) - Hitsounds?
01:25:21 (1) - What. If you're going to have this, extend it 3 whole notes when the fade ends. I guess that works too even though I don't really like spinners that long
Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [animasks Difficulty].osu
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun
Everything is online and everything is the latest version.
Paulo8624
105 posts
Joined February 2009
Paulo8624
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by Paulo8624 , edited 1 time in total.
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
For Paulo's difficulty:

You don't really have to use soft sounds, but maybe that's just how you want it. I can't MAKE you change it, I'll just suggest. I used it only in some parts cause I don't like soft sounds. Also, I should SB a warning for those 2x sliders, but I'll wait until you're done.

Also: Just some weird patterns I just don't seem to like:

00:07:82 (1) - I thin you should end it at 00:11:020 or 00:10:220. It doesn't feel comfortable ending there.
00:50:62 (4,5,6) - Eh, it's okay, but too fast. :P
00:52:82 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This one just, I don't really like it at all.

Maybe: Lower the tick rate. Not really comfortable with it either.
Hopefully it'll fix it self later once you're done, but your difficulty shouldn't be right under Normal. :\

And Ryuukun, replace the play-skip with this one:

Sorry for so many changes and full uploads. :( But I thought maybe the no skip might have pissed some off, but spacebars works too, just to let you guys know. :)

The new osb i sent you should not do that weird stretch anymore, but that expanding effect is gone. :( Add it in again I guess :P with the sosdan and rainbow. :D

And again I update mine, sorry. :( But I just fixed somethings, and added somethings.
Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu

Paulo8624
105 posts
Joined February 2009
Paulo8624
Finally the map is complete. I fixed everything Alex pointed out, except the soft sounds. I think it fits more than the hard sounds.

[Link Removed]

You can change anything you like, if you think it's necessary.

Cya =D

Edit: I changed some spacing. It should be better now. =]
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tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
tieff
[Normal]
There's no any errors, but i think it's need more hitsounds.
00:32:616 (3) - Maybe clap or whistle here?
00:34:216 (8) - ^
00:35:816 (5,6) - Clap or whistle?
00:37:616 (5, 6) - ^

[Hard]
01:09:616 - 01:12:616
I think you need remove all hitsound and...
01:10:216 (4) - Clap, whistle or finish.
01:10:816 (1) - ^
01:11:416 (4) - ^
01:12:016 (1) - ^

[animask diff]
00:12:216 (x) - Maybe place note here?
00:15:416 (x) - ^
00:33:616 (1) - Jump?

[Alex diff] Heh, my name is Alex too ^^
00:11:816 (4) - Maybe clap here?
00:15:016 (3) - ^
00:28:216 (7) - *Nazy mod* Down and right 1 grid.

[DJPop diff]
All good.

Starred.
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun
fixed the parts you modded on my diffs
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
tieff's fixes:

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu

P.S. Ryuu, did you ever get it working right?
Ryuukun
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Ryuukun
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Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
There already is a jump there lol...it follows the same distance snap for the jumps.
So it technically is a jump...eh whatever.

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [animasks Difficulty].osu
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Damn man! so cool *__*
I think that is already aproved XD
*star* o/




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Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [RoxKyuubi hard].osu
Ryuukun
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Ryuukun

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Damn man! so cool *__*
I think that is already aproved XD
*star* o/




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hmm i would add it but that means more modding and that means more time to get it ranked.
hmm i will take a lock and think over it :P
Yuukari-Banteki
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Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
00:12:41 (5,5) - why are the two hitsounded differently when the melody is the same?
00:21:21 (6) - doesnt flow well
00:27:61 (6) - ^
00:31:81 (1) - hitsound?
00:33:21 (5) - whistle sounds weird
00:39:81 (6) - hitsound?
01:18:01 (2) - unintuitive + looks bad
hitsounds could use work


[Paulo]
00:07:22 (6,7,8) - whistles sound weird
...any particular reason the countdown counts down to the break and then says ACTION?
00:24:42 (1) - extend 1/2 beat and finish
00:28:82 (3) - finish does not belong
00:31:82 (1) - start with a hitsound?
00:33:62 (6) - whistles go on white ticks plz
00:44:42 (8) - kill the x.5bpm
00:46:82 (1) - whatthefuck
00:51:72 (2) - start 1/2 later
01:16:22 (3) - illegal slider (overlaps itself too much)
youre overusing whistles and underusing everything else :( and the bpm changes are ugh


[Hard]
00:17:41 (1) - finish
00:34:21 (9) - i was expecting a whistle
00:35:41 (2,4) - remove whistles
00:55:61 (8) - looks too close to 7
00:59:61 (7) - remove claps, end with finish
01:03:81 (1) - doesnt flow from 8
01:12:61 (4) - finish
01:19:81 (1) - ^


[animask]
00:12:41 (6) - start with a finish
00:23:61 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - what happened to the claps? they disappeared! AAAAAH!
00:31:81 (1) - hitsound
00:33:61 (1) - uh random jump?
00:44:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - if you could hitsound this that would be epic
00:55:01 (6,7) - stack ends
01:10:81 (7) - i would make this the new combo and put it on top of old 1 based on when the song moves
01:13:41 (1) - end with a finish or clap
01:23:01 (4) - last finish doesnt fit


[Alex]
00:25:01 (11) - end with a finish
00:41:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - consistant spacing within combo plz
00:42:01 (4) - finish these
00:55:41 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds?
01:16:21 (5) - end with finish
01:09:81 (3) - do not approve of 2xbpm
also inherit sections should start a tick or two before the note they intend to affect


[DJPop]
00:17:41 (3) - 1. why does this end on a blue tick 2. do not approve of .5 bpm 3. why is this silent
00:41:01 (4) - remove these claps or just move them i dont care but i dont like them in the middle when its the last note getting the emphasis
00:50:01 (2) - stack more neatly
00:56:41 (2) - ^
01:23:01 (1) - uh snap the end plz
also inherit sections should start before the note they intend to affect


have a star
Ryuukun
476 posts
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Topic Starter
Ryuukun
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Paulo8624
105 posts
Joined February 2009
Paulo8624
I will fix mine when i get home :D
DJPop
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DJPop
Suggestion... right? :?

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[DJPop]
00:17:41 (3) - 1. why does this end on a blue tick 2. do not approve of .5 bpm 3. why is this silent
Just a technique.
00:41:01 (4) - remove these claps or just move them i dont care but i dont like them in the middle when its the last note getting the emphasis
Disagree. (For me, claps = snares)
00:50:01 (2) - stack more neatly
00:56:41 (2) - ^
Fixed.
01:23:01 (1) - uh snap the end plz
Disagee, if I do that, it won't sync to the sound.
also inherit sections should start before the note they intend to affect
Some of them are Kiai.
Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [DJPop's Difficulty].osu
Paulo8624
105 posts
Joined February 2009
Paulo8624
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[animask]
00:12:41 (6) - start with a finish Okay
00:23:61 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - what happened to the claps? they disappeared! AAAAAH! Claps Return lol
00:31:81 (1) - hitsound kay
00:33:61 (1) - uh random jump? Its barely a jump
00:44:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - if you could hitsound this that would be epic is it epic now? lol
00:55:01 (6,7) - stack ends ....
01:10:81 (7) - i would make this the new combo and put it on top of old 1 based on when the song moves okay that works too
01:13:41 (1) - end with a finish or clap clap sounds hideous...finish
01:23:01 (4) - last finish doesnt fit deleted finish
Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [animasks Difficulty].osu
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ryuukun

Paulo8624 wrote:

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Paulo]
00:07:22 (6,7,8) - whistles sound weird Fixed.
...any particular reason the countdown counts down to the break and then says ACTION? The SB isn't diff. specific. They match Animask's and both Ryuukun's, but doesn't match mine or DJPop's.
00:24:42 (1) - extend 1/2 beat and finish Fixed.
00:28:82 (3) - finish does not belong Fixed.
00:31:82 (1) - start with a hitsound? Fixed.
00:33:62 (6) - whistles go on white ticks plz Fixed.
00:44:42 (8) - kill the x.5bpm This was fully intentional as it's a held vocal, and I used 0,5x so that I wouldn't break the pattern.
00:46:82 (1) - whatthefuck What should I understand by this?.
00:51:72 (2) - start 1/2 later Fixed.
01:16:22 (3) - illegal slider (overlaps itself too much) Fixed (Sort of).
youre overusing whistles and underusing everything else :( and the bpm changes are ugh I can't help iif it matches for me.
[attachment=0:25e9d]Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Paulo8624's Adventure].osu[/attachment:25e9d]
are you sure you uploaded the right one?
when i put it in it doesn't say i shall update paulos diff.
please check if the currently uploaded version really the one is you just fixed.
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Normal]
01:09:61 (1,1,1) - I cant say off sync, but this sounds weird. move the repeats around or something.

[Paulo]
Nth.

[Hard]
Nth.

[animask]
01:16:61 (4) - Too far off from the "Parallerogram"[?] combo (1,2,3,4)
01:25:21 (1) - Seems kinda unnesserary(?)

[Rox]
Nth

[Alex]
Nth

[DJPop]
Nth
Ryuukun
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Ryuukun
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Maybe add a less depressing wallpaper for this happy song??

here are a few more fitting ones
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallp ... item75001/
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallp ... item70039/
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallp ... item68506/
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallp ... item61302/
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallp ... item26648/

:) stared

edit: aaaah~! old version
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mtmcl
mtmcl
I'm not sure if 8 difficulties is rankable. I personally think it should be rankable as long as the difficulty distribution includes easier and harder maps, but I'm going to have to talk to other BATs about it. I'll push to see it rankable though and check back later. (have a star though. from what I've seen, this is looking good)
Ryuukun
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Topic Starter
Ryuukun
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
RaisTF
208 posts
Joined October 2008
RaisTF
Some suggestions ^^' ALL with lvl3 grid
Normal:
looks cool, I SS'd it playing first time, so just nazi mod:
00:14:21 (1,2,3) - has the same timing as 00:11:01 (1,2,3)... so why spacing is different? 00:14:21 (1) - 1 grid left 00:15:01 (3) - 1 grid right
00:19:81 (2,3,4) - 1 grid down to align with 00:21:01 (5,1) and for simmetry =_=
00:24:81 (2,3) - 2 grids left to align with 00:23:41 (3) ?
01:09:61 (1) - I want to make this till 01:11:22 and replace 01:10:81 (1) to the 01:11:41 (1)... 01:12:01 (1) - looks right

Hard:
Another SS Oo
00:11:01 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks strange... maybe its better to make it the copy of 00:14:21 (1,2,3,4,5)?
00:31:81 (1,2) - timing between this is the same as between 00:30:81 (7,8)... so why the spacing is differebt? D:
00:34:21 (8,1) and 00:34:81 (2,3) - same...
00:39:01 (3) - this looks more like just making map more interesting but I dont know...

Paulo:
No SS т.т
00:20:42 (5) - I dont know why I want a circle here
00:21:22 (1) - I think two circles instead of that slider would soud better...
00:43:02 (2) - maybe sounds better without this?
00:43:42 (3) - this slider dounds strange... I think you should replace it with two circles 00:43:42 (3) and 00:43:62 (4) without 00:43:82 (5)...
Omg kial time X.x I cant mod this madness D:
01:09:62 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - looks cool o.o

Insane: =_=
00:14:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it should be the copy 00:11:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) which is done preety well
00:24:41 (7,8) - 1 grid up?
00:26:81 (5) - 1 grid left?
00:40:81 (1,2,3) - woah... its trap or mistake? Timig between 00:40:61 (9,1) and 00:40:81 (1,2) is the same but spacing so different D: not good...

Animasks':
Very good map, only two suggestions
00:37:71 (9) - looks cool but does it sound like that?
01:21:41 (6,7,8) - do you realy need this? maybe only 01:21:61 (6) ?

RoxKyubi's:
The timing in this diff is strange and its hard to understand it with such spacing playing first time D: So please check out every note again...
00:20:01 (2,3,4) - too close to previous slider i think?
00:20:41 (5) - or this too far =_= 00:25:81 (2,3,4,5,6) - here is an example of good spacing for such timing
00:11:01 (1) - hmm... 1 grid left maybe?
00:37:39 (2) - ... I dont know why, but I want to move it to 00:37:19...
00:39:39 (5,1) - very big jump for this timing Oo
00:49:59 (1,2,3) - 2 grids up to align with 00:49:19 (2)
00:55:99 (3) - 1 grid right

Alex's:
00:13:21 (8) - 2 grids right and 1 up I think...
00:20:01 (2,3,4) - 1 grid right?
00:21:81 (2,3,4) - 1 grid up?
00:28:21 (7) - 1 grid right
00:28:61 (9) - this? (begin of the slider - 4 grids up and slider - 2 grids left and 1 down)
00:34:21 (6,7,8) - why dont you make it symmetry with 00:33:61 (3,4,5) ?
00:39:01 (2) - 1 down and 2 left?
00:52:41 (3) - 3 up and 2 left to make it looks like 00:52:81 (4,5) ?
01:05:81 (5,6) - 1 right and 1 down to make it looks like 01:05:01 (2,3) ?
01:06:81 (7) - 1 up to align with the end of previous slider?
01:09:81 (3) - wow, this is so suddenly xD
01:12:61 (16) - 3 down?
01:22:21 (2) - 3 left and then 01:23:01 (3) - 1 left

DJPop's:
I hope its perfect xD

Wow... I hope smth of that can be usefull D:
Anyway I realy enjoyed playing each diff, I hope it will be ranked. star~
Ryuukun
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Ryuukun

RaisTF wrote:

Some suggestions ^^' ALL with lvl3 grid
Normal:
looks cool, I SS'd it playing first time, so just nazi mod:
00:14:21 (1,2,3) - has the same timing as 00:11:01 (1,2,3)... so why spacing is different? 00:14:21 (1) - 1 grid left 00:15:01 (3) - 1 grid right
00:19:81 (2,3,4) - 1 grid down to align with 00:21:01 (5,1) and for simmetry =_=
00:24:81 (2,3) - 2 grids left to align with 00:23:41 (3) ?
01:09:61 (1) - I want to make this till 01:11:22 and replace 01:10:81 (1) to the 01:11:41 (1)... 01:12:01 (1) - looks right
fixed

Hard:
Another SS Oo
00:11:01 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks strange... maybe its better to make it the copy of 00:14:21 (1,2,3,4,5)?
00:31:81 (1,2) - timing between this is the same as between 00:30:81 (7,8)... so why the spacing is differebt? D:
00:34:21 (8,1) and 00:34:81 (2,3) - same...
00:39:01 (3) - this looks more like just making map more interesting but I dont know...
fixed (just did not fix 00:39:01 (3) )

Insane: =_=
00:14:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it should be the copy 00:11:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) which is done preety well
00:24:41 (7,8) - 1 grid up?
00:26:81 (5) - 1 grid left?
00:40:81 (1,2,3) - woah... its trap or mistake? Timig between 00:40:61 (9,1) and 00:40:81 (1,2) is the same but spacing so different D: not good...
sry D:

Anyway I realy enjoyed playing each diff, I hope it will be ranked. star~
ty
Paulo8624
105 posts
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Paulo8624

RaisTF wrote:

Paulo:
No SS т.т
00:20:42 (5) - I dont know why I want a circle here I... didn't understand D:
00:21:22 (1) - I think two circles instead of that slider would soud better... Fixed
00:43:02 (2) - maybe sounds better without this? Fixed
00:43:42 (3) - this slider dounds strange... I think you should replace it with two circles 00:43:42 (3) and 00:43:62 (4) without 00:43:82 (5)... Fixed
Omg kial time X.x I cant mod this madness D: I don't know if this is good or bad D:
01:09:62 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - looks cool o.othx :D
Okay, I give up. I'm going to upload it at media fire.

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?wuzli5tlfmi

get it here

PS: is there any special reason that you renamed the video without changing the .osu's?
Ryuukun
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Sleep Powder
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I think I made the ending better after following the 2nd suggestion I had.

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [animasks Difficulty].osu
GabrielRKF
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RaisTF wrote:

Some suggestions ^^' ALL with lvl3 grid
RoxKyubi's:
The timing in this diff is strange and its hard to understand it with such spacing playing first time D: So please check out every note again...
00:20:01 (2,3,4) - too close to previous slider i think? [fixed]
00:20:41 (5) - or this too far =_= [alright, fixed again XD]
00:25:81 (2,3,4,5,6) - here is an example of good spacing for such timing [ i made some changes here, see if u like it õ.o]
00:11:01 (1) - hmm... 1 grid left maybe? [ really? ok than ._.]
00:37:39 (2) - ... I dont know why, but I want to move it to 00:37:19... [ yeah, i think is better now ^__^]
00:39:39 (5,1) - very big jump for this timing Oo [surelly it is, fixed :3]
00:49:59 (1,2,3) - 2 grids up to align with 00:49:19 (2) [ok than ^^]
00:55:99 (3) - 1 grid right [but it won't take de symmetry? o.o]
ok ^^ all fixed =O

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [RoxKyuubi hard].osu
Ryuukun
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everything is up
+ made some more changes
acording to suggestions on Rox's diff
GabrielRKF
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Ryuukun, aren't gonna use the one that i fixed? ._.

well, u now what u'r gonna =]
Hanyuu
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animask's diff has no wallpaper

when i redownload the difficulties: Normal and Hard also are missing >:(
Ryuukun
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roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Ryuukun, aren't gonna use the one that i fixed? ._.

well, u now what u'r gonna =]
i did use that one oO


Edit:

thank you hanyuu
Mafiamaster
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animask's difficulty doesn't display the video. Reinsert the video.

That's all I found! Great job! It actually feels like I'm playing a different kind of osu due to the skin~

So much Kiai Time in DJPop's @_@ but I guess it's fine.
Ryuukun
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thanks i almost oversaw the video issue
cyanberryio
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OH CRAP! I forgot about this. D: So sorry, should have PM'd me. :P

I'll to the moddings and edit this post, just like to let you know I'm still here! :D
Ryuukun
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I have to ask someone of the mappers to make his version into a easy version.
This map is lacking one and i'm not sure about making a new diff for this map since its already unsure if
7 diffs are rankable.

otherwise i have to kick one and make an easy instead.
Last edited by Ryuukun , edited 1 time in total.
Mogsy
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I'm going to make a HUGE post when I come back from moving this weekend, just for fair warning.

Also, I'd say this DEFINITELY needs an Easy, way too many tougher difficulties that kinda bleed together already to be quite honest. 7 difficulties is really pushing it, especially when so many are similar in terms of style and difficulty.
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Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu
Ryuukun
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Ihave Rox making his Diff into a Easy since he was the last one submittet.
Its sad but neccessarry.
GabrielRKF
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well, here it is, ryuukun
i'm not so good at making Easy dificultys but i think its ok =/
sorry for taking too long XD

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [RoxKyuubi's Easy].osu
Mogsy
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Overall impressions:
4/7 difficulties, to be honest, I did not have much fun playing due to the incorrect rhythms being commonplace and due to the stupidity of gimmicks used.
3/7 were at least a bit of fun to play.
7/7 need serious work.

Update with the easy. THEN I'll mod that difficulty.

To be honest, 7 is far too much. I'd say 5 difficulties is still pushing it but is at least reasonable when compared to seven.

Now, I'll be delay-modding this, since I have a huge queue and a job. Expect Hard to be done tomorrow, when I get home from work.

Normal:
-00:17:41 (1) - Add a Finish.
-00:19:41 (1) - Remove the Clap.
-00:20:21 (3) - ^
-00:21:01 (5) - ^
-00:22:61 (3) - ^
-00:25:01 (3) - Replace Clap with a Finish.
-00:25:81 (1) - Remove the Clap.
-00:30:01 (4) - Add a New Combo mark and a Finish.
-00:30:41 (1,1) - Add Finishes to the endpoints of these.
-00:31:81 (1) - I totally disagree with the slowdown here. It seems rather random, considering the fact that it isn't repeated.
-00:38:21 (1) - This needs a Clap on the endpoint.
-00:41:61 (1) - Replace the Finish with a Clap.
-00:43:21 (1) - ^
-00:47:81 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:49:01 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:49:21 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:51:41 (1) - Remove the Clap.
-00:51:81 (2) - Clap goes here.
-00:52:21 (3) - Remove the Clap.
-00:52:41 (4) - Finish goes here.
-00:52:81 (5) - Last point needs a Finish.
-00:55:41 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark and the Finish.
-00:55:61 (2) - Add a New Combo mark.
-00:57:81 (1) - Remove the Clap.
-00:58:21 (2) - Add a Clap.
-00:58:61 (3) - Remove the Clap.
-00:58:81 (4) - Clap goes here.
-01:00:416 - Delete the break, insert beat with a Clap in same stack as 5,6.
-01:00:616 - Insert beat with Finish in same stack as 5,6,7. Reinput the break.
-01:07:41 (1) - The second beat of the slider should have the Clap, not the first and third.
-01:08:21 (2) - Remove the Clap.
-01:08:61 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-01:09:01 (2) - The Clap should be on the endpoint, not the starting point.
-01:09:61 (1,1,1,1,1) - The way this flows feels all wonky, mostly due to the first 1. You have it going for 2 beats and then have the other sliders start on a weirdly accented beat that is completely different from the song itself. Meaning fix it so it feels better (ideally, they should only flow for 1.5 beats each).
-01:12:616 - The beat here needs a Finish.
-01:13:01 (2,3) - These should have New Combo marks, if we're following the previously established numbering pattern. Also, remove the Whistles and replace them with Finishes. Then, on 3, remove the Finish from the endpoint, replace it with a Whistle, and put a Soft inherit section at 01:14:816.
-01:15:41 (1,2,3,4) - Put the Claps on the even beats instead of the odd, and on 4, instead of a Clap, have a Finish there.
-01:17:01 (1) - Clap goes on the second beat, not the first.
-01:19:81 (1) - Finish goes here.
-01:20:21 (2) - New Combo mark goes here, and the Clap goes on the second beat only, not the first.
-01:23:01 (1) - Whistle goes here.
konan-yoshi999
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Spierek
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Finally someone went and mapped it. Star'd.
sheshe816
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sheshe816
Would you like to add my difficulty?
I actually make beatmap for this song but I did't finish it.
My beatmap now is graveyarded. Have a look of it.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/6819
Ryuukun
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Spierek wrote:

Would you like to add my difficulty?
I actually make beatmap for this song but I did't finish it.
My beatmap now is graveyarded. Have a look of it.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/6819
i'm sorry.
i would but its just like Mogsworth said

Mogsworth wrote:

To be honest, 7 is far too much. I'd say 5 difficulties is still pushing it but is at least reasonable when compared to seven.
heartnetkung
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starred
lukewarmholiday
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Normal

Nothing, be more careful with repeating sliders though.

paulo diff

really hard to read the BPM change

animasks Difficulty
00:33:61 (1) - uneccesary jump, completely threw me off.

Only posted on diffs I had comments on.
GabrielRKF
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ryuukun, i made REALLY BIG changes on my diff, as you asked =]
oh, thats not the one that a sent to you, this one is a little bit easier
Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [RoxKyuubi's Easy].osu
konan-yoshi999
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:shock: there are so many stars! (i just wanted to say)
WolfCoder
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This map has sooo many difficulties and the skin makes the map feel a little busy. Other than that I think it's good to go, here's a star~
Mogsy
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Before I mod this again (which I promised that I would), I'd like to propose something:

Cut. Down. The. Number. Of. Difficulties.

Seven is too ridiculous IMO for a ranked map. Even five is pushing it. So, I'd suggest cutting 2-3 difficulties (a lot of them play the same exact way, tbqh, so it's for the best).
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Star
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Mogsy
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4 is good. Now it's time to continue modding. Sorry, 7 really was borderline. ;/

In general:
-00:46:816 - Set this as the preview point in all difficulties.

Normal:
-00:20:41 (4,5) - Claps go here.
-00:22:61 (3) - Clap goes here.
-00:30:01 (1) - Replace the Clap with a Finish.
-00:31:21 (1) - Remove the Finish from the endpoint.
-00:38:21 (1) - Add a Whistle to the endpoint, remove the Clap.
-00:55:41 (5) - Remove the Finish.
-01:00:216 - Beat goes here.
-01:09:61 (1,1,1,1,1) - This should look like this rhythmically:

Reposition these so the flow can work, because you had the basic idea, just that the first slider had one too many repeats and the last one had one too few.
-01:22:41 (7) - Remove the Whistle.

animask's difficulty:
-Give this difficulty an actual name.
-00:17:81 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - My comments on this phrase:
^It just doesn't flow well. It feels overmapped and blah.
^00:18:916 definitely needs a beat.
-00:21:21 (5) - Remove the Whistle.
-00:21:61 (6) - Remove the Clap.
-00:21:81 (7) - Clap goes here.
-00:24:81 (7) - New Combo mark goes here, judging by the way you've mapped.
-00:25:21 (10) - Remove the Whistle, add a Clap.
-00:25:416 - Clicked beat with a Finish goes here.
-00:35:41 (2) - Remove the Whistle, that's just plain ugly.
-00:36:41 (4) - ^
-00:38:21 (1,2,3,4) - I won't offer specifics, but hitsounds here are ugly, change them.
-00:44:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Come on, given the context of the rest of your map, this is overmapped and unnecessary.
-00:49:21 (6,8) - These Whistles sound ugly, change them or get rid of them.
-00:50:81 (10) - Remove the Finish.
-00:53:81 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Remember the hitsound things I just mentioned? Keep them up here.
*-00:59:61 (6,1) - In between these is a better place to overmap a bit. Probably because something actually exists here.
-01:01:41 (2) - Remove the Finish.
-01:02:01 (5) - ^
-01:03:21 (7) - Add a Finish to the endpoint.
-01:05:21 (5) - Remove the Finish.
-01:05:61 (6) - ^
-01:09:81 (2) - Remove the Clap.
-01:10:21 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:10:41 (5,6) - Remove the Claps.
-01:10:81 (1,2,3) - This should follow the previous three spacing-wise and hitsound-wise (spacing being 1 by itself and 2,3 in a stack, hitsounds being a Clap on 1 and none on 2 and 3).
-01:11:41 (4,5,6) - ^
-01:11:41 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:12:01 (7,8,9) - 01:10:81.
-01:12:61 (10,11) - Remove the hitsounds, put a New Combo mark on 10.
-01:13:41 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark, put a Finish on its starting point and slider track, remove the Finish from the endpoint, and I'd do something about the endpoint in general, it's too loud.
-01:17:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Disgustingly overmapped.
-The phrase right after the one I just mentioned should maintain some sort of consistency. Not to mention it just doesn't flow well at all.
-01:21:81 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-01:22:21 (3) - ^
-01:22:61 (5) - ^. The finishes were too overpowering.
-The ending itself goes on for far too long IMO. Start 01:25:41 (1) 1/2 later and have it end on 01:29:416.

Alex's Difficulty:
-This needs an actual difficulty name.
-My only complaints about this are the hitsounds; they are in desperate need of an overhaul. I think you're creative enough to come up with new ones, but let me explain a few things.
-00:11:01 (1) - Starting on a Clap sounds atrocious here.
-00:13:21 (8,9) - These beats would need to maintain consistency with 7, so they would need to be Claps.
-00:13:81 (1,2,3,4,5) - The soft stuff feels out of place here.
-00:16:41 (7,8) - Maintain consistency with 6.
-00:19:01 (8) - I'd say to go back to Normal volume here.
-00:21:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Overusage of Finishes is simply too harsh right here.
-00:25:81 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
-00:40:81 (1) - This should start in a Normal sounding section, although I really like what you did here while mapping to the piano.
-I'm not really digging the chorus' hitsounds. Lay off the Finishes, hinthint.
-00:53:61 (7) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:55:41 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-01:15:41 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:17:01 (6) - ^
-01:20:21 (3) - ^
-01:23:21 (1) - End 1/2 later.

DJPop's Difficulty
-Needs an actual name.
-00:40:81 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.

Yep. That's it.
cyanberryio
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Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu

There's only 4 finishes in the chorus now, and I think they fit well. :)
Sleep Powder
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/me has been hitsound raped


Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [animasks Difficulty].osu
Ryuukun
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ok all fixed and all uploaded
DJPop
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@Ryuukun
Can you map Easy diff?
Normal is not easy enough imo.
Mogsy
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DJPop wrote:

@Ryuukun
Can you map Easy diff?
Normal is not easy enough imo.
I personally would have cut out Normal and kept Easy. :/
Ryuukun
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fine :{
But what i really don't like is that its going to have 3 Insane and one Easy then.
Basically its too easy for most players and too hard too.
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Ryuukun
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I'm going to turn my into easy and i want someone to turn his into normal.
Yuukari-Banteki
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[Normal]
00:31:81 (1) - no jumps in the lowest diff plz D:
00:38:21 (1) - illegal self-overlap
01:08:61 (3,4,1,1,1,1,1) - jumps aaaaaaa


[animask]
00:55:01 (6,7) - stack the endpoints


[Alex]
00:42:41 (5,6,7,8) - hard to read
00:46:01 (1) - NO


[DJPop]
00:50:01 (2) - move down a grid
00:56:41 (2) - move over a grid
01:23:01 (1) - end on white
cyanberryio
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu
DJPop
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Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[DJPop]
00:50:01 (2) - move down a grid
(1) and (2) are already had same distance from center.
00:56:41 (2) - move over a grid
^
01:23:01 (1) - end on white
Nazi rhythm D=
Gens
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[Overall]
- Background is waay too big! Resize it to 1024x768 or lower please.

[Timing]
- The offset in [DJPop's Difficulty] is different from the rest, but I actually like it more. Anyway, offset must be the same on every difficulty.

[Skin]
- Pretty good job you did here. The only thing I can complain is the spinner-circle, seems like it's not well-centered (Maybe because it isn't a perfect circle?). But should be good as is.

[Kiai Time]
00:47:81 - Kiai time should start here. Also, try to regulate Kiai Time between all difficulties.

[Normal]
- Seems good, though I don't like the spacing "tricks" you applied here.

[animasks Difficulty]
- Change to "animask's Difficulty"?

[Alex's Difficulty]
00:42:41 (5,6,7) - Move up abit so (7) doesn't get offscreen?

[DJPop's Difficulty]
Everything's cool here.

~ ~ ~

I'm definitely NOT a fan of Haruhi, but I'm modding by priority, remember? And this song is short so is easier to mod
Mogsy
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Here's a comment: just give actual difficulty names to the collab mappers' difficulties. Sure, star values are there, but it lacks what type of difficulty it actually is. People won't just know from the mapper's name (well, unless it's DJPop, but yeah).
DJPop
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Compared to the note...
00:11:01 (1) on Alex's.
00:11:01 (1) on animasks'.
00:11:01 (1) on Normal.
00:11:01 (9) on mine.

All of them are placed on 11,016ms.
So the offset is not wrong even mine is set on the different time.
Ryuukun
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oh man i should get back to work.
Sorry for being a lazy ass lately.
Easy is almost done but i still have no Normal yet

Edit:
Easy done and renamed it to [Desho?!].
alvisto
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This is a song that I like very much, and the skin is nice too !

Starred ! :D
XepherX3
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XepherX3
[Desho?]
01:15:027() : this section sounds way too loud..turn the volume down (3rd from left sounds ok)

[animask's difficulty]
get rid of that spinner at the end looks pretty weird to keep playing there


^^ only error i found ^^
Symbolic
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The spinner is.. fkoavfjafosavmio :( Can you change it?

[Desho!]

00:31:84 (1) - Not sure if a slider that overlaps itself is still rankable, idc though, just pointing out. If I were you I would change it because many BATs will complain about it probably.


[animasks Difficulty]

I don't know if you noticed you forgot an ' at animask's, just telling you for if you didn't notice.

00:21:21 (5) - New combo goes here.
00:22:21 (1) - And remove this new combo, otherwise you have a new combo in the middle of a sentence.
01:21:61 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is a bit confusing because of the jumps, I didn't see them coming because they seem a bit out of place imo.
01:23:01 (6) - I would extend this to 01:25:216, then put the silent timing section for the spinner at 01:25:416.


[Alex's Difficulty]

00:18:916 (x) - I miss a note here, add it :(
00:47:71 (TIMING SECTION) - Put this timing section 1/4 later so that the fountain comes at the same time as when you click the first note of the chorus.


[DJPop's Difficulty]

00:11:81 (3,4) - Fix this spacing.
00:15:01 (3,4) - ^
01:17:41 (3,4) - ^
01:20:61 (3,4) - ^


I like this map and song very much ^^
The song seems somewhat familiar but I don't know from what :o
Anyways,
Starred *
Ryuukun
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Symbolic wrote:

The spinner is.. fkoavfjafosavmio :( Can you change it?

[Desho!]

00:31:84 (1) - Not sure if a slider that overlaps itself is still rankable, idc though, just pointing out. If I were you I would change it because many BATs will complain about it probably. until now, no one did^^
I even put in arrows there to show the player which way the slider is going.

I like this map and song very much ^^
The song seems somewhat familiar but I don't know from what :o
Anyways,
Starred *
DJPop
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Symbolic wrote:

[DJPop's Difficulty]
00:11:81 (3,4) - Fix this spacing.
00:15:01 (3,4) - ^
01:17:41 (3,4) - ^
01:20:61 (3,4) - ^
Can't fix, else I've to fix them by NotePad D:
Ryuukun
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I took out Animasks dif since he wouldn't answer me.
I replaced it with a Normal diff i made myself.
It should be fine now Mogs :)
cyanberryio
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well, I updated mine a bit. >_< (kiai fixed and beat added)

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [Alex's Difficulty].osu
And if it needs a name, I think Hard suffices, but it's a little much for that. >_> Lower the drain rate/overall difficulty if you must.

Oh shi-

KYON-KUN! DENWA~
Ryuukun
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How about a real name?
Something Haruhi related.
subarasikibuta
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minyeob
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[Desho]
lol Spacing is loooong. Just let you know.
00:24:84 (1) - This is the lowest difficulty:; Would you mind shortening it?
00:40:84 (1) - Jumping length is too long
47:240(kiai)-> Starting this kiai from 00:47:84 (2) is much better, IMO.
01:00:04 (1) - Same issue as 00:24:84 (1).

[Kyon-kun]
47:240(kiai)-> Same issue as "Desho". Starting this kiai from 00:47:84 (2) is much better, IMO.

Star for you~ ;)
Breeze
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Breeze
hi Ryuukun
sprry for the late mod
awesome map and SB!

here's some suggestions:

[Desho!]

great job, I really can't find anything wrong

[Kyon-kun, denwa~!]

  1. 00:21:040 (6) - add clap
  2. 00:27:440 (6) - ^
  3. 00:33:640 (1) - remove whistle
[Alex's diffculty]

  1. 00:40:716 (9) - delete it, looks too sudden
  2. 00:46:816 (1,2) - maybe a slider instead is better
[DJpop's diffculty]

  1. 00:31:216 (1-5) - too much claps, sounds a little boring
  2. 00:56:416 (2) - it's not overlapping with front slder, looks ugly

great map
stared!
and another kudosu star for you!
DJPop
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Fixed.

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [DJPop's Difficulty].osu
Mogsy
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Now I'm looking at this again. Whee.

General:
SPOILER
-Shouldn't all the difficulties for the same map have the same offset? Even if you don't start where the offset starts, consistency = good.

Desho!:
SPOILER
-00:12:24 (4) - Remove the Clap.
-00:15:44 (4) - ^
-00:17:44 (1) - Add a Finish.
-00:25:44 (5) - ^
-00:30:44 (2) - Put a Clap on the second point.
-00:31:24 (3) - Put a Clap on the second and third points.
-00:31:84 (1) - There should be a Clap on the endpoint. The Whistle followed by numerous Whistles sounds like garbage.
-00:38:24 (5) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:53:64 (1) - This feels really early. Like, 1/8 early. Move it and then put a Clap on the last point.
-00:56:04 (5) - Put a Clap on the last point.
-00:56:84 (6) - Remove the Clap from the second point and put it on the endpoint.
-01:00:64 (7) - Add a Finish.
-01:07:44 (1,2,3,4) - Suddenly switching from Claps to Whistles feels VERY awkward here. Fix that.
-01:13:44 (1) - Replace the Finish with a Whistle, this part needs to be more delicate to fit the delicate ending right there.
-01:15:44 (1,1,1) - Remove the Finishes, this part needs to be quieter, since it's a more delicate section.
-01:17:84 (4) - Remove the Clap.
-01:19:84 (1) - Add a Finish.
-01:21:04 (4) - Remove the Clap.
-01:23:04 (1) - Add a Whistle. It's a delicate enough hitsound for a delicate ending.

Kyon-kun, denwa~!
SPOILER
-00:12:24 (5) - Remove the Clap.
-00:15:44 (5) - ^
-00:17:44 (1) - Add a Finish.
-00:20:24 (4) - Add a Clap.
-00:21:04 (6) - ^
-00:21:84 (2) - ^
-00:24:84 (1) - Add a Finish.
-00:26:64 (4) - Add a Clap.
-00:27:44 (6) - ^
-00:28:24 (2) - ^
-00:30:44 (2) - Add a Clap to the second point.
-00:31:24 (3) - Add a Clap to the second and third points.
-00:31:84 (1) - Remove the Whistle from the endpoint, replace with a Clap.
-00:38:24 (1) - ^
-00:40:24 (3) - Add a Whistle.
-00:40:64 (4) - Add a Finish.
-00:53:64 (1) - Sounds 1/8 late to me, eh.
-00:56:04 (6) - Make the second point have a Clap.
-01:00:04 (1) - Add a Finish.
-01:03:84 (9) - ^
-01:06:84 (9) - ^
-01:13:44 (1) - Replace the Finish with a Whistle.
-01:15:44 (1,1,1) - Remove the Finishes.
-01:17:84 (5) - Remove the Clap.
-01:21:04 (5) - ^
-01:23:04 (1) - Add a Whistle.

Alex's Difficulty:
SPOILER
-Come up with an actual difficulty description. Be more imaginative, please. :P
-00:20:41 (4) - Remove the Finish, this is not the end of the phrase, and it sounds bad here.
-00:23:21 (7) - Add a Clap.
-00:29:41 (10) - ^
-00:49:21 (6) - Add a Whistle.
-00:50:01 (8) - ^
-00:52:41 (3) - ^
-00:53:01 (5) - ^
-00:53:21 (6) - ^
-00:55:61 (7) - ^
-00:56:41 (9) - ^ on all parts, remove the Finishes.
-00:58:81 (3) - Add a Whistle.
-00:59:61 (5) - ^
-01:02:81 (5) - Remove the Whistle from the endpoint.
-01:06:81 (7) - Remove the Whistle.
-01:15:01 (3) - Add a Whistle.

DJPop's Difficulty:
SPOILER
-More imaginative difficulty name, please?
Ryuukun
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Topic Starter
Ryuukun
Ok all fixed just Alex's diffs fixes and some more creative names for both maps left.
cyanberryio
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Joined August 2008
cyanberryio

Breeze wrote:

[Alex's diffculty]
00:40:716 (9) - delete it, looks too sudden Fine imo
00:46:816 (1,2) - maybe a slider instead is better Done~

Mogsworth wrote:

-Come up with an actual difficulty description. Be more imaginative, please. :P
ha, this is one of more older, less organized maps, barely realized. :P
All done except the above. :P Name is decided~ :P

Do you mind if I have my own background? >_> Just have to~ :P
(I'll post it in a bit!)

EDIT!!!

Download: 15,499 Loops.rar
I have a much more "OP Like" background, but I like this SO MUCH MORE! >_>

Updated:

Download: stuff!.rar

Nothing more after this :P
I forgot to save it. >_<

Download: Hirano Aya - Bouken Desho Desho (TV Size) (Ryuukun) [15,499 Loops].osu


Ryuukun
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Ryuukun
Up to date!
I think its ready for Ranking now.
Mogsy
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I think it's finally time to bubble this.
deepsea
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deepsea
The timing is inconsistent(offset 11016 and 11040)


Other than that I see nothing wrong.

Shining part in chorus made my eyes hurt. >_>

But I think that's my problem, my eyes are bad, you don't need to do anything.
DJPop
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deepsea wrote:

The timing is inconsistent(offset 11016 and 11040)
Which one is better?
deepsea
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deepsea

DJPop wrote:

deepsea wrote:

The timing is inconsistent(offset 11016 and 11040)
Which one is better?
11016 confirmed by Anekiou. >A<
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