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Sakura Merry-Men - Aikotoba (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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S h i o n
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年10月23日 at 17:54:23

Artist: Sakura Merry-Men
Title: Aikotoba (TV Size)
Source: Sekai Ichi Hatsukoi
Tags: boys love yaoi ending kadokawa Kiiwa toejamms Megurine Luka KanaRin
BPM: 132.8
Filesize: 10554kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.94 stars, 242 notes)
  2. Kana's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 401 notes)
  3. Kiiwa's Hard (4.81 stars, 235 notes)
  4. Luka's Easy (2.14 stars, 94 notes)
  5. Normal (3.34 stars, 123 notes)
Download: Sakura Merry-Men - Aikotoba (TV Size)
Download: Sakura Merry-Men - Aikotoba (TV Size) (no video)
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history:
-2011
12/13 add soft-clap.wav added, 12/22 soft-slidertick2.wav added
12/23 BG added , thanks kirinoimouto22 for the nice BG :3
12/24 combo color changed
-2012
1/7 video added, thanks Francons and Weiren
1/9 combo color changed
2/15 new video from Weiren
3/24 Taiko (by KanaRin) added
Last edited by S h i o n , edited 67 times in total.
S h i o n
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ずっと伝（つた）えたいのは 届（とど）けたいのは ただ一(ひと)つのアイラブユー

zutto tsutae tainowa todoke tainowa tadahitotsu hitotsu no ai ra bu yu

送（おく）るのは ずっと君（きみ）だけに

okuru nowa zutto kimi dakeni



どうしようもない 止（と）められない　

dousyou monai tome rarenai

この感情（かんじょう）の名前（なまえ）なんて分（わ）からない

kono kannjyouno name nannte wakaranai

落（お）ち着（つ）かない 眠（ねむ）れない　

ochi tsuka nai nemure nai

もう何（な）にも头（あたま）に入（はい）らない

mou nanimo atamani hairanai



手（て）をぐっと伸（の）ばせば触（ふ）れそうな距离（きょり）で

tewo gutto nobaseba fure souna kyoride

ただそっと见（み）つめてる 心（こころ）が騒（さわ）いでる

tadasotto mitsume teru kokoroga sawai deru



ずっと伝（つた）えたいのは 届（とど）けたいのは ただ一つのアイラブユー

zutto tsutae tainowa todoke tainowa tada hitotsuno ai ra bu yu

「今（いま） 何时（なんじ）？」「调子（ちょうし）どうだい？」そんなんじゃなくてさ

ima nannji cyushi doudai sonn nann jyanaku tesa

いつも胸（むね）の中（なか）で叫（さけ）んでんだよ 呆（あき）れるほどアイラブユー

itsumo muneno nakade sakenn denndayo akireru hodo ai ra bu yu

送（おく）るのは ずっと君（きみ）だけに

okuruno wa zutto kimidakeni
KuronumaSawako
471 posts
Joined March 2011
KuronumaSawako
Finally! Finally decided to make this map \ o /
Good luck on this map, I'll be rooting for it to be ranked soon :D
(My english is horrible)
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka
前排占位
Breeze
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Breeze
Timing help:

BPM/Offset
132/444
132/20454
132/58655

Good luck
S h i o n
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Thank you Breeze :)
AoiX
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AoiX
IRC test&mod 8-)
SPOILER
11:13 <AoiX> : 适当使用蓝线节奏是不错啊，但是你用的太滥了
11:13 <S h i o n> : 还好吧?
11:13 <AoiX> : 而且很多地方都不合适那样的节奏
11:13 <S h i o n> : 我觉得用的蛮少的...
11:13 <S h i o n> : 比如
11:14 <AoiX> : ·00:05:587 (3) - 这个可以去掉，白线开始的三连基本都不合拍的
11:15 <AoiX> : 00:28:635 (1,2,3) - 不适合用蓝线摆
11:16 <AoiX> : 00:59:109 (2,3) - ^
11:17 <AoiX> : 01:27:064 (2,1) - 叠加
11:17 <S h i o n> : 59这个应该算自创节奏么= =
11:17 <S h i o n> : 叠加?
11:18 <AoiX> : 00:00:246 (1,2,3) - 这里最好不要重叠，实际玩的时候很难看
11:18 <AoiX> : 没重叠好
11:18 <AoiX> : 但是你的自创节奏看着其实是在凑combo
11:19 <S h i o n> : 00:00:246 (1,2,3) - 这里显示 x0.00了 怎么破..
11:19 <AoiX> : 00:15:928 (5,2) - 这两个再摆好点
11:19 <AoiX> : 这里的意思是让你不要叠加
11:20 <AoiX> : 因为有SL的存在，要把那个位移算进去考虑
11:20 <S h i o n> : k
11:22 <AoiX> : 01:12:745 (x) - 可以考虑加个circle
11:22 <AoiX> : 大致就这样
Trauma-
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Trauma-
hello, timing check as requested in #modreqs

BPM 132

1st Offset: 482
2nd Offset: 6813

You don't need the other timing sections.

Also your map looked solid on the 1st view, i like the rythm.
Only thing that doesn't look nice to me are some of the slider shapes but i read you want to keep them and its your decission after all.

Good luck :)
S h i o n
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S h i o n

xDeaTHcOrEx wrote:

hello, timing check as requested in #modreqs

BPM 132

1st Offset: 482
2nd Offset: 6813

You don't need the other timing sections.

Also your map looked solid on the 1st view, i like the rythm.
Only thing that doesn't look nice to me are some of the slider shapes but i read you want to keep them and its your decission after all.

Good luck :)
Thank you ;)
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
1. Offset: 506ms BPM: 132.80
2. Offset: 7,730ms BPM: 132.00
3. Offset: 58,663ms BPM: 132.00

Here.
Kotone
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Kotone
世界一初恋!!<3
S h i o n
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S h i o n

karenying wrote:

世界一初恋!!<3
Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ... karenying ~
No_Gu
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No_Gu
0 0居然一个星期了我才知道有人开了这图。。。
看样没GD了。射颗星闪人= =||
kirinoimouto22
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kirinoimouto22
E-eto, seems that this map hasn't a BG yet...if you haven't yet chosen a BG, you can use this, I have a lot of these pictures.


Melophobia
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Melophobia
hi~

Normal
there are a lot of unsnaped notes, please resnap all notes~
00:30:911 (5) - add a clap to the end of this slider stead of whistle.
00:38:639 (2,3) - spacing
00:45:911 (2,3) - ^

Kiiwa's Hard
01:05:473 - add a note here
01:27:291 - add a note here


Insane
00:32:275 (1) - move this slider to 00:32:048 - and extend to 00:32:502 -
00:42:048 (2) - move the beginning of this slider to 00:42:275 -
01:04:572 (2,3) - these finishes are not fitting sound imo
01:20:935 (1,2,3) - this formation is really confusing and unexpected.

you should change it or at least add a new combo to (2)

good luck~
Copter-kun
399 posts
Joined February 2011
Copter-kun
Hello. As promised, a mod4mod

Normal
00:12:502 (4) - Doesn't sound right...
00:14:093 (2) - shorten this slider to the nearest white tick

Hard
00:55:116 to 00:55:798 feels empty. Should add notes/sliders

Insane
00:42:048 (2) - Could have been shaped better.
00:49:093 (4) - Add the custom hitsound, soft-hitclap here.
01:27:526 (2) - this slider shape is unreadable due to overlapping path, therefore it's not rankable. Reshape this to a readable slider.

Argh quite a short modding.
S h i o n
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S h i o n

Melophobia wrote:

hi~

Normal
there are a lot of unsnaped notes, please resnap all notes~ fixed
00:30:911 (5) - add a clap to the end of this slider stead of whistle.
00:38:639 (2,3) - spacing fixed
00:45:911 (2,3) - ^ fixed


Insane
00:32:275 (1) - move this slider to 00:32:048 - and extend to 00:32:502 - good idea, but i wanna keep it
00:42:048 (2) - move the beginning of this slider to 00:42:275 - yes, it sounds cool~
01:04:572 (2,3) - these finishes are not fitting sound imo fine to me D:
01:20:935 (1,2,3) - this formation is really confusing and unexpected.
you should change it or at least add a new combo to (2) NC added.

good luck~
Thanks ~

Copter-kun wrote:

Hello. As promised, a mod4mod

Normal
00:12:502 (4) - Doesn't sound right... oh fixed.
00:14:093 (2) - shorten this slider to the nearest white tickomg. How could they break...

Insane
00:42:048 (2) - Could have been shaped better. fixed
00:49:093 (4) - Add the custom hitsound, soft-hitclap here. nope
01:27:526 (2) - this slider shape is unreadable due to overlapping path, therefore it's not rankable. Reshape this to a readable slider. fixed

Argh quite a short modding.
Thank you~
L_P
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Joined July 2011
L_P
from mod que
你的图不错，只给建议，没强制性质

insane
就觉得开始时可以试着用背景音乐map看看
00:03:894 (2,3) - 试试看让这个跟00:02:765 (5) - 这个重叠，比较好看
00:05:588 (3) - 没必要的一个note
00:06:379 (5) - 这个slider有盖一点没有盖一点，要不就整个tail在上面，不然就不要动到
00:22:048 (7) - curve 有一点难看
00:23:866 (3) - haha 少一个点反而更好看
00:31:366 (6) - yerr~
00:44:775 (2) - 这里真的真的需要加一个note
01:03:890 (1) - spacing不大一点吗
01:20:253 (4) - cancel finish, 下一个note才加

hard
00:17:730 (3,4,5,6) - 不排整齐一点吗
00:30:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这里可以用星星阵法
01:02:177 (4) - 不要重叠
AR7让我很想死

就这样咯。
S h i o n
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S h i o n

L_P wrote:

from mod que
你的图不错，只给建议，没强制性质

insane
就觉得开始时可以试着用背景音乐map看看
00:03:894 (2,3) - 试试看让这个跟00:02:765 (5) - 这个重叠，比较好看 好
00:05:588 (3) - 没必要的一个note好 去掉了
00:06:379 (5) - 这个slider有盖一点没有盖一点，要不就整个tail在上面，不然就不要动到 改了在上面的了
00:22:048 (7) - curve 有一点难看没觉得..
00:23:866 (3) - haha 少一个点反而更好看好
00:31:366 (6) - yerr~ 恩? 这是啥意思..
00:44:775 (2) - 这里真的真的需要加一个note 暂时先不加, 这里和后面的2连相关的~
01:03:890 (1) - spacing不大一点吗 恩~
01:20:253 (4) - cancel finish, 下一个note才加

Kiiwa's Hard
00:17:730 (3,4,5,6) - 不排整齐一点吗
00:30:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这里可以用星星阵法
01:02:177 (4) - 不要重叠
AR7让我很想死 Hard的关系

就这样咯。
Thanks ~
witwist
61 posts
Joined September 2011
witwist
纯支持,混脸熟,期待早日完成:)
shikyu
786 posts
Joined January 2011
shikyu
M4M~ some suggestions

[General]
so much unsnapped timing, fix it

[Normal]
00:20:002 (2) - add clap at slider's end
00:21:139 (3) - add clap at slider's start to keep consistence
00:54:548 (1) - RNC, this note isn't jump or placed at stanza
01:00:026 (3) - 1 grid up, so (4) can stacked at (2) properly
01:03:663 (1,2,3,4) - (3) overlapped by (2), I suggest this:
SPOILER
01:26:163 (4) - remove clap at slider's start, sounds weird

[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:23:184 (3) - remove clap at slider's end, not fit there
00:26:820 (1) - remove clap at slider's end
00:28:866 (2) - remove clap
00:55:457 (X) - add note? I hear there's drum sound here
01:09:337 (1) - remove finish
01:24:450 (1,1) - why NC here? there's no problem without it
01:24:791 (1) - remove whistle at first repeat
01:27:291 (X) - add note here

[Insane]
00:05:588 (3) - delete note, this part doesn't fit with three notes stream
00:15:798 (X) - add note here
00:16:707 (4) - delete this note

overall good, that's all
S h i o n
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S h i o n

shikyu wrote:

M4M~ some suggestions

[General]
so much unsnapped timing, fix it ok

[Normal]
00:20:002 (2) - add clap at slider's end
00:21:139 (3) - add clap at slider's start to keep consistence
00:54:548 (1) - RNC, this note isn't jump or placed at stanza fixed
01:00:026 (3) - 1 grid up, so (4) can stacked at (2) properly fixed
01:03:663 (1,2,3,4) - (3) overlapped by (2), I suggest this: changed pattern
01:26:163 (4) - remove clap at slider's start, sounds weird fixed some hitsounds

[Insane]
00:05:588 (3) - delete note, this part doesn't fit with three notes stream removed already
00:15:798 (X) - add note here no, it doesn't fit
00:16:707 (4) - delete this note no, but it fit the music

overall good, that's all
Thanks ~
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from myself

[normal]
00:03:216 (4) - 尾finish
00:00:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 感觉这段跟音乐下几个finish应该不错
00:07:509 (3) - 头finish
00:21:139 (3) - 全whistle
00:58:411 (1) - ^
01:03:865 (2) - clap应该在3的头上。
01:18:183 (1) - 尾finish
01:26:820 (1,2) - 这样，http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212457 觉得tick无声比较舒服
[Kiiwa]
00:27:730 (3) - 1 grid left (lv4)
00:55:116 - 00:55:798 a little empty
[insane]
00:06:379 (4) - 转几度别和3贴上

写一半点错地方全没了._.看有人mod了就先来骗颗Kud,大哥那难度还没到...
lol才发现跟你mutual了._.星星再来一发好了
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
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YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:01:861(3) - hmm try this: add a circle here but move the slider up by 2 ticks, and then end it at 00:02:765.
00:04:572 - add a circle?
00:07:734 - unsnapped timing point
00:31:820(5) - replace the whistle for a clap to continue the rhythm

Kiiwa's Hard:
00:00:280(1) - IMO this may look confusing. so try to rotate it like This
00:45:343(4,5) - move (4) 1 tick up, remove (5), end (4) till 00:45:684, and remove the clap at the end and add it at the beginning
00:52:616(4,5) - ^ 00:52:957
00:55:457 - add a circle?

Insane:
00:42:275(2) - make this smoother

this is the best i can do. GL :D
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Hello. I tried my best to find problems.

~Kiiwa's Hard~

00:16:366 (5) - Move this to x:119 y:40
00:22:730 (1) - Move this to x:237 y:97
00:26:593 (3) - Move this to x:165 y:323
00:27:275 (2) - Move this to x:193 y:95
00:27:730 (3) - Move this to x:257 y:220 because it's little bit irritating.
00:31:820 (2) - Move this to x:355 y:209
00:32:275 (3) - Move this to x:225 y:256

That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
Request from Queue

Aoi's Mod

General
  1. N/A
Insane
  1. 00:06:379 (4) - 左移两格。边缘有叠加不太好看
  2. 00:15:002 (4,1) - 在4的结尾或1上加clap，否则节奏听着不完整
  3. 01:27:526 (2) - 那个音是从01:27:746开始的，直接从白线一个滑条感觉略奇怪。可以用一个circle+滑条
Kiiwa's Hard
  1. 00:00:731 (1) - 和vocal完全不合
  2. 00:15:911 (3) - NC。提高辨识度
  3. 00:55:457 (x) - Add circle
  4. 01:24:791 (1) - reverse arrow会被分数遮挡。。。
  5. 01:27:291 (x) - Add circle
Normal
  1. 00:16:820 (5) - NC
腿
  1. 我要玩大哥的EZ（摔
&不来一发Mod么少年：http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26891
S h i o n
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S h i o n
To No_Gu

No_Gu wrote:

request from myself

[normal]
00:03:216 (4) - 尾finish
00:00:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 感觉这段跟音乐下几个finish应该不错..finish在长白线上,但是加不到那边,只有00:03:216 (4)能加到, 索性都不加了 不然有点奇怪...
00:07:509 (3) - 头finish fixed
00:21:139 (3) - 全whistle 头加了whistle, 尾finish.
00:58:411 (1) - ^
01:03:865 (2) - clap应该在3的头上。 fixed
01:18:183 (1) - 尾finish fixed
01:26:820 (1,2) - 这样，http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212457 觉得tick无声比较舒服 no~

[insane]
00:06:379 (4) - 转几度别和3贴上 fixed

写一半点错地方全没了._.看有人mod了就先来骗颗Kud,大哥那难度还没到...
lol才发现跟你mutual了._.星星再来一发好了
灰常感谢mod和连射3发！！

To Byakugan249:

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:01:861(3) - hmm try this: add a circle here but move the slider up by 2 ticks, and then end it at 00:02:765.
00:04:572 - add a circle?no, but thanks for those two ideas~
00:07:734 - unsnapped timing point ? what you mean
00:31:820(5) - replace the whistle for a clap to continue the rhythmno, but i added one on 00:30:457 (4) and remove one from (5)'s end

Insane:
00:42:275(2) - make this smoother fixed

this is the best i can do. GL :D
Thanks ~

To kokoroanime:

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. I tried my best to find problems.

~Kiiwa's Hard~

00:16:366 (5) - Move this to x:119 y:40
00:22:730 (1) - Move this to x:237 y:97
00:26:593 (3) - Move this to x:165 y:323
00:27:275 (2) - Move this to x:193 y:95
00:27:730 (3) - Move this to x:257 y:220 because it's little bit irritating.
00:31:820 (2) - Move this to x:355 y:209
00:32:275 (3) - Move this to x:225 y:256 Fixed some, and don't see much difference on others.

That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.
Thanks ~

To Ao2:

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

Aoi's Mod

General
  1. N/A
Insane
  1. 00:06:379 (4) - 左移两格。边缘有叠加不太好看 fixed 神nazi..
  2. 00:15:002 (4,1) - 在4的结尾或1上加clap，否则节奏听着不完整 clap added on end of 4
  3. 01:27:526 (2) - 那个音是从01:27:746开始的，直接从白线一个滑条感觉略奇怪。可以用一个circle+滑条 恩 本来我也是从那开始的 看了一个MOD后觉得这样比较好 ._>
Kiiwa's Hard
  1. 00:00:731 (1) - 和vocal完全不合 挺合呀。。
  2. 00:15:911 (3) - NC。提高辨识度 00:17:730 (3) - 参考这个= = 有MAT提出就改 ._.
  3. 00:55:457 (x) - Add circle will ask her later..
  4. 01:24:791 (1) - reverse arrow会被分数遮挡。。。被右上的分数..? 应该不太会.......
  5. 01:27:291 (x) - Add circle agree with you, but will also ask her advice...
Normal
  1. 00:16:820 (5) - NC NCed for 00:15:002 (3)
腿
  1. 我要玩大哥的EZ（摔
&不来一发Mod么少年：http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26891
卧槽 最后还搞个推销 膝盖中箭了...
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
Insane
01:27:518 (2) is not snapped ><
timing => resnap all notes

no kds please :D
star ^^
/me runs lol
kazumikos
393 posts
Joined February 2010
kazumikos
Hiyo~ ^^

[Insane]
SPOILER
somehow i feel like u r placing nc quite randomly O_o
sorry if u really did it intentionally
00:08:184 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:08:639 (3) -
00:13:639 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:13:866 (2) -
00:14:548 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:15:002 (4) -
00:15:911 (1) - remove nc
00:16:820 (5) - nc, remove nc at 00:17:502 (1) -
00:43:184 (1) - remove nc
00:43:639 (3) - nc, 00:44:093 (1) - remove nc
00:50:457 (1,1) - remove nc, 00:50:911 (3) - nc
00:55:229 (1) - remove nc
00:56:820 (1) - ^
01:14:109 (1) - ^
01:21:382 (2) - this note should be at 01:21:268, follow the rhythm

[Kiiwa's Hard]
SPOILER
nothing much to say lol
00:00:506 - plz increase volume, kinda expect to hear a finish there
[Normal]
SPOILER
00:09:093 (5) - nc, remove nc at 00:09:548 (1) -
00:11:366 (3) - nc
00:13:639 (1) - remove nc, 00:15:002 (3) - nc
00:47:730 (4) - nc
01:27:956 - plz silent this tick

And.. that's that
Good luck ^^
spboxer3
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spboxer3
from:AoiX & SP3‘s Modding ((其實我是隨機看的 不要打我lol

[general]

  1. kiai 需要一致~必須的
  2. 在offset可以用負的前提下~offset不該擺在note的後面

[Normal]

  1. 00:58:411 - 紅線需要和別的diff相同
  2. 00:03:216 (4) - NC (建議)
  3. 00:05:024 (1) - reNC (建議)
  4. 00:06:831 (2) - NC (建議)
  5. 00:16:820 (5) - NC 這邊不是建議...因為在最簡單的難度裡combo數不該這麼高 newcombo的其中一個目的是為了增加血量
  6. 00:25:002 (3) - ^
  7. 00:30:911 (5) - ^ 以及間距問題
  8. 00:47:730 (4) - NC
  9. 00:58:411 (1,2,3) - 間距
  10. 01:01:365 (4) - NC
  11. 01:03:638 (1,2,3) - 不均勻間距
  12. 01:10:683 (4) - NC
  13. 01:15:911 (4) - ^

[Kiiwa's Hard]

  1. 00:02:087 (5,1) - let them stack~
  2. 00:14:548 (5,1) - ^
  3. 00:41:820 (4,2) - ^
  4. 00:55:457 - Add 1 note?
  5. 01:12:973 (1,3) - stack problem
  6. 01:16:155 (3,1) - ^
  7. 01:18:882 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]

  1. 00:31:366 - 多餘的綠線
  2. 00:37:502 - ^
  3. 00:47:730 - ^
  4. 00:07:509 (2) - slider的結尾沒對在拍點上
  5. 00:43:639 (3) - ^
  6. 00:58:411 (1) - ^
  7. 01:27:518 (2) - 可以的話盡量彎好些

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

let's all

good lucky ;)
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka
搞定。

Download: Sakura Merry-Men - Aikotoba (TV Size) (S h i o n) [Luka's Easy].osu
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
S h i o n
Updated

Thanks modders and Luka ~ :3

spboxer3 wrote:

在offset可以用負的前提下~offset不該擺在note的後面 这个应该没问题吧~? 第一个NOTE都是slider
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[General]
- There're some unsnapped time sections, make sure that they works properly and the current situation is expected hitsound effect.
- tag BL D:

[Insane]
Start kiai at 00:58:663 same as other diff
00:07:509 (2) - broken slider end
00:06:379 (4) - stack一起不好看 這樣
SPOILER
00:14:320 (4) - remove clap
00:20:684 (1,2,3) - sudden jump without any notice from the song =/
00:40:911 (4,5,1) - 把(4,5,1)向下放 (1)做問號的點之類的?
00:43:639 (3) - broken slider end
00:58:411 (1) - broken slider end

[Hard]
00:17:730 (3) - notes shouldn't be hidden under sliders. try to stack (3) on (1) and make (3,4,5,6,1) in regular shape
00:46:366 (2) - this is risky in touching the bottom?
00:58:411 (1) - broken slider end
01:13:222 (2,3) - UNRANKABLE STACKING no notes should be between during slider

就這個stacking就要死十萬遍了吧 我mod了3年還是第一遍看到

[Normal]
沒大問題 可是一堆whistle放在非高音的地方怪怪的 要不要修一下
S h i o n
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Topic Starter
S h i o n

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- There're some unsnapped time sections, make sure that they works properly and the current situation is expected hitsound effect. ok
- tag BL D: 少于3个字母的tag word是搜不到结果的~

[Insane]
Start kiai at 00:58:663 same as other diff fixed
00:07:509 (2) - broken slider end fixed
00:06:379 (4) - stack一起不好看 這樣 fixed
00:14:320 (4) - remove clap 背景音里面有个明显的鼓声的 (5)也是~
00:20:684 (1,2,3) - sudden jump without any notice from the song =/ 咦。。我觉得这里跳很合适的..特别是一个小停顿之后=.=
00:40:911 (4,5,1) - 把(4,5,1)向下放 (1)做問號的點之類的?个人觉得不用了吧 因为那个大大的slider已经足够了 感觉不用再刻意去弄个点出来 D:
00:43:639 (3) - broken slider end fixed
00:58:411 (1) - broken slider end fixed


[Normal]
沒大問題 可是一堆whistle放在非高音的地方怪怪的 要不要修一下 嗯 是有点奇怪.. 改了几处


Thanks for mod ~!!

【EDIT】 Kiiwa's Hard > All fixed 01:13:222 (2,3) - 这个完全是个意外.. 现在好了..
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DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
:) :)

【Hard】
01:13:435 (2) - 碉堡了DBL 不过我喜欢
wmfchris
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wmfchris
難怪我一直搜不到V3 lol

話說很多人都會tag op ed啥的 我看了很久才發現boy love指BL <_<
異性戀才是王道!
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
你幫過我很多忙
於是我主動來給你MOD了XD

Luka's Easy

  1. 00:07:509 (3) - add finish ?
  2. 00:08:184 (4,1,2) - add new combo on (4)。remove new combo on (1)。add new combo on (2)
  3. 01:01:390 (1) - acoording [01:16:617],you need to add finish on the slider's tail
  4. 01:03:208 (1) - according [01:18:435],add finish on the slider's tail,please
  5. 01:08:890 (3) - add new combo
  6. 01:24:799 (2,3,4) - add finish on (2,3),remove finish on (4)
  7. 01:26:390 (3,4) - I think adding a slider at [01:25:708] and end at [01:26:390] instead can be better to play

Normal

  1. 00:03:216 (5) - 這裡聽起來很違和啊，我覺得這樣的節奏更好的(別看排列)
  2. 00:13:639 (1,2) - 去掉NC，然後在2加個
  3. 00:30:457 (5) - 這whistle不太好呢，刪掉如何？
  4. 00:30:911 (6) - 這slider的尾部少了什麼0.0
  5. 00:57:957 (2) - finish換成clap比較好聽
  6. 01:10:708 (1,3) - 把這個whistle移到 (3) 這個slider的尾部
  7. 01:22:299 (3) - 把slider的尾端的clap去掉

Kiiwa's Hard

  1. 00:00:280 (1,1) - I have no idea why you put these here
    they are not only look bad but also do not follow the vocal
    fix these,please orz
  2. 00:06:831 (1) - remove new combo
  3. 00:29:093 (3) - stack with [00:27:730] slider's head
  4. 00:45:684 (5) - It is really a bad idea that stack under the short slider
    put it here will be better to play
  5. 00:52:616 (4) - same as [00:45:684],please fix it
  6. 00:55:911 (1) - clap instead
  7. 01:15:140 (2) - ...too bad orz
  8. 01:19:799 (3) - move clap on the slider's tail to the head will be cool ~ >w<
  9. 01:23:435 (1) - It is not necessary that add a new combo here
  10. 01:24:458 (1) - it need more distance between this and last slider
    putting it here will fix this problem
    and please,remove this new combo,and also remove the next one
  11. 01:27:299 (x) - really need to add a note here
    try to make this
    they would follow the vocal well if you do this

Insane

  1. 00:03:894 (2) - 這個節奏不符合啊，改成這樣吧(排列僅供參考)
  2. 00:14:320 (4) - 跟[00:12:957 (3)]的頭疊在一起
  3. 00:23:184 (2,3) - 在它們的頭上加whistle，因為你後面是這樣子的
  4. 00:38:411 (3) - 這頭上不加個whistle感覺音效有點空 ~ ww
  5. 00:57:275 (1,1) - 這種放置NC的方法跟Kiiwa很像呢，可是我不覺得這兩個有必要加NC，你們有些放法其實都濫用的，就算是為了好看也不能亂加，NC是為了加血還有幫助判斷用的，看你要不要跟Kiiwa說看看這個問題
  6. 01:19:344 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 老實說，連續兩個的whistle不是很好聽...
  7. 01:27:526 (1) - 在[01:27:526]的地方加一條音量很低的綠線，因為這球滑動的時候感覺有點吵ww，乾脆你把最後一條綠線移到這吧，這樣好多了

good song ~
and good luck ~
S.T.A.R ！ :)
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