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Megurine Luka
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Breeze
Timing help:

BPM/Offset
132/444
132/20454
132/58655

Good luck
Topic Starter
S h i o n
Thank you Breeze :)
AoiX
IRC test&mod 8-)
SPOILER
11:13 <AoiX> : 适当使用蓝线节奏是不错啊,但是你用的太滥了
11:13 <S h i o n> : 还好吧?
11:13 <AoiX> : 而且很多地方都不合适那样的节奏
11:13 <S h i o n> : 我觉得用的蛮少的...
11:13 <S h i o n> : 比如
11:14 <AoiX> : ·00:05:587 (3) - 这个可以去掉,白线开始的三连基本都不合拍的
11:15 <AoiX> : 00:28:635 (1,2,3) - 不适合用蓝线摆
11:16 <AoiX> : 00:59:109 (2,3) - ^
11:17 <AoiX> : 01:27:064 (2,1) - 叠加
11:17 <S h i o n> : 59这个应该算自创节奏么= =
11:17 <S h i o n> : 叠加?
11:18 <AoiX> : 00:00:246 (1,2,3) - 这里最好不要重叠,实际玩的时候很难看
11:18 <AoiX> : 没重叠好
11:18 <AoiX> : 但是你的自创节奏看着其实是在凑combo
11:19 <S h i o n> : 00:00:246 (1,2,3) - 这里显示 x0.00了 怎么破..
11:19 <AoiX> : 00:15:928 (5,2) - 这两个再摆好点
11:19 <AoiX> : 这里的意思是让你不要叠加
11:20 <AoiX> : 因为有SL的存在,要把那个位移算进去考虑
11:20 <S h i o n> : k
11:22 <AoiX> : 01:12:745 (x) - 可以考虑加个circle
11:22 <AoiX> : 大致就这样
Trauma-
hello, timing check as requested in #modreqs

BPM 132

1st Offset: 482
2nd Offset: 6813

You don't need the other timing sections.

Also your map looked solid on the 1st view, i like the rythm.
Only thing that doesn't look nice to me are some of the slider shapes but i read you want to keep them and its your decission after all.

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
S h i o n

xDeaTHcOrEx wrote:

hello, timing check as requested in #modreqs

BPM 132

1st Offset: 482
2nd Offset: 6813

You don't need the other timing sections.

Also your map looked solid on the 1st view, i like the rythm.
Only thing that doesn't look nice to me are some of the slider shapes but i read you want to keep them and its your decission after all.

Good luck :)
Thank you ;)
kanpakyin
1. Offset: 506ms BPM: 132.80
2. Offset: 7,730ms BPM: 132.00
3. Offset: 58,663ms BPM: 132.00

Here.
Kotone
世界一初恋!!<3
Topic Starter
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karenying wrote:

世界一初恋!!<3
Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ... karenying ~
No_Gu
0 0居然一个星期了我才知道有人开了这图。。。
看样没GD了。射颗星闪人= =||
kirinoimouto22
E-eto, seems that this map hasn't a BG yet...if you haven't yet chosen a BG, you can use this, I have a lot of these pictures.


Melophobia
hi~

Normal
there are a lot of unsnaped notes, please resnap all notes~
00:30:911 (5) - add a clap to the end of this slider stead of whistle.
00:38:639 (2,3) - spacing
00:45:911 (2,3) - ^

Kiiwa's Hard
01:05:473 - add a note here
01:27:291 - add a note here


Insane

00:32:275 (1) - move this slider to 00:32:048 - and extend to 00:32:502 -
00:42:048 (2) - move the beginning of this slider to 00:42:275 -
01:04:572 (2,3) - these finishes are not fitting sound imo
01:20:935 (1,2,3) - this formation is really confusing and unexpected.

you should change it or at least add a new combo to (2)

good luck~
Copter-kun
Hello. As promised, a mod4mod

Normal
00:12:502 (4) - Doesn't sound right...
00:14:093 (2) - shorten this slider to the nearest white tick

Hard
00:55:116 to 00:55:798 feels empty. Should add notes/sliders

Insane
00:42:048 (2) - Could have been shaped better.
00:49:093 (4) - Add the custom hitsound, soft-hitclap here.
01:27:526 (2) - this slider shape is unreadable due to overlapping path, therefore it's not rankable. Reshape this to a readable slider.

Argh quite a short modding.
Topic Starter
S h i o n

Melophobia wrote:

hi~

Normal
there are a lot of unsnaped notes, please resnap all notes~ fixed
00:30:911 (5) - add a clap to the end of this slider stead of whistle.
00:38:639 (2,3) - spacing fixed
00:45:911 (2,3) - ^ fixed


Insane

00:32:275 (1) - move this slider to 00:32:048 - and extend to 00:32:502 - good idea, but i wanna keep it
00:42:048 (2) - move the beginning of this slider to 00:42:275 - yes, it sounds cool~
01:04:572 (2,3) - these finishes are not fitting sound imo fine to me D:
01:20:935 (1,2,3) - this formation is really confusing and unexpected.
you should change it or at least add a new combo to (2) NC added.

good luck~
Thanks ~

Copter-kun wrote:

Hello. As promised, a mod4mod

Normal
00:12:502 (4) - Doesn't sound right... oh fixed.
00:14:093 (2) - shorten this slider to the nearest white tickomg. How could they break...

Insane
00:42:048 (2) - Could have been shaped better. fixed
00:49:093 (4) - Add the custom hitsound, soft-hitclap here. nope
01:27:526 (2) - this slider shape is unreadable due to overlapping path, therefore it's not rankable. Reshape this to a readable slider. fixed

Argh quite a short modding.
Thank you~
L_P
from mod que
你的图不错,只给建议,没强制性质

insane
就觉得开始时可以试着用背景音乐map看看
00:03:894 (2,3) - 试试看让这个跟00:02:765 (5) - 这个重叠,比较好看
00:05:588 (3) - 没必要的一个note
00:06:379 (5) - 这个slider有盖一点没有盖一点,要不就整个tail在上面,不然就不要动到
00:22:048 (7) - curve 有一点难看
00:23:866 (3) - haha 少一个点反而更好看
00:31:366 (6) - yerr~
00:44:775 (2) - 这里真的真的需要加一个note
01:03:890 (1) - spacing不大一点吗
01:20:253 (4) - cancel finish, 下一个note才加

hard
00:17:730 (3,4,5,6) - 不排整齐一点吗
00:30:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这里可以用星星阵法
01:02:177 (4) - 不要重叠
AR7让我很想死

就这样咯。
Topic Starter
S h i o n

L_P wrote:

from mod que
你的图不错,只给建议,没强制性质

insane
就觉得开始时可以试着用背景音乐map看看
00:03:894 (2,3) - 试试看让这个跟00:02:765 (5) - 这个重叠,比较好看
00:05:588 (3) - 没必要的一个note好 去掉了
00:06:379 (5) - 这个slider有盖一点没有盖一点,要不就整个tail在上面,不然就不要动到 改了在上面的了
00:22:048 (7) - curve 有一点难看没觉得..
00:23:866 (3) - haha 少一个点反而更好看
00:31:366 (6) - yerr~ 恩? 这是啥意思..
00:44:775 (2) - 这里真的真的需要加一个note 暂时先不加, 这里和后面的2连相关的~
01:03:890 (1) - spacing不大一点吗 恩~
01:20:253 (4) - cancel finish, 下一个note才加

Kiiwa's Hard
00:17:730 (3,4,5,6) - 不排整齐一点吗
00:30:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这里可以用星星阵法
01:02:177 (4) - 不要重叠
AR7让我很想死 Hard的关系

就这样咯。
Thanks ~
witwist
纯支持,混脸熟,期待早日完成:)
shikyu
M4M~ some suggestions

[General]
so much unsnapped timing, fix it

[Normal]
00:20:002 (2) - add clap at slider's end
00:21:139 (3) - add clap at slider's start to keep consistence
00:54:548 (1) - RNC, this note isn't jump or placed at stanza
01:00:026 (3) - 1 grid up, so (4) can stacked at (2) properly
01:03:663 (1,2,3,4) - (3) overlapped by (2), I suggest this:
01:26:163 (4) - remove clap at slider's start, sounds weird

[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:23:184 (3) - remove clap at slider's end, not fit there
00:26:820 (1) - remove clap at slider's end
00:28:866 (2) - remove clap
00:55:457 (X) - add note? I hear there's drum sound here
01:09:337 (1) - remove finish
01:24:450 (1,1) - why NC here? there's no problem without it
01:24:791 (1) - remove whistle at first repeat
01:27:291 (X) - add note here

[Insane]
00:05:588 (3) - delete note, this part doesn't fit with three notes stream
00:15:798 (X) - add note here
00:16:707 (4) - delete this note

overall good, that's all
Topic Starter
S h i o n

shikyu wrote:

M4M~ some suggestions

[General]
so much unsnapped timing, fix it ok

[Normal]
00:20:002 (2) - add clap at slider's end
00:21:139 (3) - add clap at slider's start to keep consistence
00:54:548 (1) - RNC, this note isn't jump or placed at stanza fixed
01:00:026 (3) - 1 grid up, so (4) can stacked at (2) properly fixed
01:03:663 (1,2,3,4) - (3) overlapped by (2), I suggest this: changed pattern
01:26:163 (4) - remove clap at slider's start, sounds weird fixed some hitsounds

[Insane]
00:05:588 (3) - delete note, this part doesn't fit with three notes stream removed already
00:15:798 (X) - add note here no, it doesn't fit
00:16:707 (4) - delete this note no, but it fit the music

overall good, that's all
Thanks ~
No_Gu
request from myself

[normal]
00:03:216 (4) - 尾finish
00:00:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 感觉这段跟音乐下几个finish应该不错
00:07:509 (3) - 头finish
00:21:139 (3) - 全whistle
00:58:411 (1) - ^
01:03:865 (2) - clap应该在3的头上。
01:18:183 (1) - 尾finish
01:26:820 (1,2) - 这样,http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212457 觉得tick无声比较舒服
[Kiiwa]
00:27:730 (3) - 1 grid left (lv4)
00:55:116 - 00:55:798 a little empty
[insane]
00:06:379 (4) - 转几度别和3贴上

写一半点错地方全没了._.看有人mod了就先来骗颗Kud,大哥那难度还没到...
lol才发现跟你mutual了._.星星再来一发好了
YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:01:861(3) - hmm try this: add a circle here but move the slider up by 2 ticks, and then end it at 00:02:765.
00:04:572 - add a circle?
00:07:734 - unsnapped timing point
00:31:820(5) - replace the whistle for a clap to continue the rhythm

Kiiwa's Hard:
00:00:280(1) - IMO this may look confusing. so try to rotate it like This
00:45:343(4,5) - move (4) 1 tick up, remove (5), end (4) till 00:45:684, and remove the clap at the end and add it at the beginning
00:52:616(4,5) - ^ 00:52:957
00:55:457 - add a circle?

Insane:
00:42:275(2) - make this smoother

this is the best i can do. GL :D
DerekMcD
Hello. I tried my best to find problems.

~Kiiwa's Hard~

00:16:366 (5) - Move this to x:119 y:40
00:22:730 (1) - Move this to x:237 y:97
00:26:593 (3) - Move this to x:165 y:323
00:27:275 (2) - Move this to x:193 y:95
00:27:730 (3) - Move this to x:257 y:220 because it's little bit irritating.
00:31:820 (2) - Move this to x:355 y:209
00:32:275 (3) - Move this to x:225 y:256

That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.
AoiX
Request from Queue

Aoi's Mod

General
  1. N/A
Insane
  1. 00:06:379 (4) - 左移两格。边缘有叠加不太好看
  2. 00:15:002 (4,1) - 在4的结尾或1上加clap,否则节奏听着不完整
  3. 01:27:526 (2) - 那个音是从01:27:746开始的,直接从白线一个滑条感觉略奇怪。可以用一个circle+滑条
Kiiwa's Hard
  1. 00:00:731 (1) - 和vocal完全不合
  2. 00:15:911 (3) - NC。提高辨识度
  3. 00:55:457 (x) - Add circle
  4. 01:24:791 (1) - reverse arrow会被分数遮挡。。。
  5. 01:27:291 (x) - Add circle
Normal
  1. 00:16:820 (5) - NC
  1. 我要玩大哥的EZ(摔
&不来一发Mod么少年:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26891
Topic Starter
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To No_Gu

No_Gu wrote:

request from myself

[normal]
00:03:216 (4) - 尾finish
00:00:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 感觉这段跟音乐下几个finish应该不错..finish在长白线上,但是加不到那边,只有00:03:216 (4)能加到, 索性都不加了 不然有点奇怪...
00:07:509 (3) - 头finish fixed
00:21:139 (3) - 全whistle 头加了whistle, 尾finish.
00:58:411 (1) - ^
01:03:865 (2) - clap应该在3的头上。 fixed
01:18:183 (1) - 尾finish fixed
01:26:820 (1,2) - 这样,http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212457 觉得tick无声比较舒服 no~

[insane]
00:06:379 (4) - 转几度别和3贴上 fixed

写一半点错地方全没了._.看有人mod了就先来骗颗Kud,大哥那难度还没到...
lol才发现跟你mutual了._.星星再来一发好了
灰常感谢mod和连射3发!!

To Byakugan249:

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:01:861(3) - hmm try this: add a circle here but move the slider up by 2 ticks, and then end it at 00:02:765.
00:04:572 - add a circle?no, but thanks for those two ideas~
00:07:734 - unsnapped timing point ? what you mean
00:31:820(5) - replace the whistle for a clap to continue the rhythmno, but i added one on 00:30:457 (4) and remove one from (5)'s end

Insane:
00:42:275(2) - make this smoother fixed

this is the best i can do. GL :D
Thanks ~

To kokoroanime:

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. I tried my best to find problems.

~Kiiwa's Hard~

00:16:366 (5) - Move this to x:119 y:40
00:22:730 (1) - Move this to x:237 y:97
00:26:593 (3) - Move this to x:165 y:323
00:27:275 (2) - Move this to x:193 y:95
00:27:730 (3) - Move this to x:257 y:220 because it's little bit irritating.
00:31:820 (2) - Move this to x:355 y:209
00:32:275 (3) - Move this to x:225 y:256 Fixed some, and don't see much difference on others.

That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.
Thanks ~

To Ao2:

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

Aoi's Mod

General
  1. N/A
Insane
  1. 00:06:379 (4) - 左移两格。边缘有叠加不太好看 fixed 神nazi..
  2. 00:15:002 (4,1) - 在4的结尾或1上加clap,否则节奏听着不完整 clap added on end of 4
  3. 01:27:526 (2) - 那个音是从01:27:746开始的,直接从白线一个滑条感觉略奇怪。可以用一个circle+滑条 恩 本来我也是从那开始的 看了一个MOD后觉得这样比较好 ._>
Kiiwa's Hard
  1. 00:00:731 (1) - 和vocal完全不合 挺合呀。。
  2. 00:15:911 (3) - NC。提高辨识度 00:17:730 (3) - 参考这个= = 有MAT提出就改 ._.
  3. 00:55:457 (x) - Add circle will ask her later..
  4. 01:24:791 (1) - reverse arrow会被分数遮挡。。。被右上的分数..? 应该不太会.......
  5. 01:27:291 (x) - Add circle agree with you, but will also ask her advice...
Normal
  1. 00:16:820 (5) - NC NCed for 00:15:002 (3)
  1. 我要玩大哥的EZ(摔
&不来一发Mod么少年:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26891
卧槽 最后还搞个推销 膝盖中箭了...
BCI
Insane
01:27:518 (2) is not snapped ><
timing => resnap all notes

no kds please :D
star ^^
/me runs lol
kazumikos
Hiyo~ ^^

[Insane]

SPOILER
somehow i feel like u r placing nc quite randomly O_o
sorry if u really did it intentionally
00:08:184 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:08:639 (3) -
00:13:639 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:13:866 (2) -
00:14:548 (1) - remove nc, nc at 00:15:002 (4) -
00:15:911 (1) - remove nc
00:16:820 (5) - nc, remove nc at 00:17:502 (1) -
00:43:184 (1) - remove nc
00:43:639 (3) - nc, 00:44:093 (1) - remove nc
00:50:457 (1,1) - remove nc, 00:50:911 (3) - nc
00:55:229 (1) - remove nc
00:56:820 (1) - ^
01:14:109 (1) - ^
01:21:382 (2) - this note should be at 01:21:268, follow the rhythm

[Kiiwa's Hard]
SPOILER
nothing much to say lol
00:00:506 - plz increase volume, kinda expect to hear a finish there
[Normal]
SPOILER
00:09:093 (5) - nc, remove nc at 00:09:548 (1) -
00:11:366 (3) - nc
00:13:639 (1) - remove nc, 00:15:002 (3) - nc
00:47:730 (4) - nc
01:27:956 - plz silent this tick

And.. that's that
Good luck ^^
spboxer3
from:AoiX & SP3‘s Modding ((其實我是隨機看的 不要打我lol

[general]

  1. kiai 需要一致~必須的
  2. 在offset可以用負的前提下~offset不該擺在note的後面

[Normal]

  1. 00:58:411 - 紅線需要和別的diff相同
  2. 00:03:216 (4) - NC (建議)
  3. 00:05:024 (1) - reNC (建議)
  4. 00:06:831 (2) - NC (建議)
  5. 00:16:820 (5) - NC 這邊不是建議...因為在最簡單的難度裡combo數不該這麼高 newcombo的其中一個目的是為了增加血量
  6. 00:25:002 (3) - ^
  7. 00:30:911 (5) - ^ 以及間距問題
  8. 00:47:730 (4) - NC
  9. 00:58:411 (1,2,3) - 間距
  10. 01:01:365 (4) - NC
  11. 01:03:638 (1,2,3) - 不均勻間距
  12. 01:10:683 (4) - NC
  13. 01:15:911 (4) - ^

[Kiiwa's Hard]

  1. 00:02:087 (5,1) - let them stack~
  2. 00:14:548 (5,1) - ^
  3. 00:41:820 (4,2) - ^
  4. 00:55:457 - Add 1 note?
  5. 01:12:973 (1,3) - stack problem
  6. 01:16:155 (3,1) - ^
  7. 01:18:882 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]

  1. 00:31:366 - 多餘的綠線
  2. 00:37:502 - ^
  3. 00:47:730 - ^
  4. 00:07:509 (2) - slider的結尾沒對在拍點上
  5. 00:43:639 (3) - ^
  6. 00:58:411 (1) - ^
  7. 01:27:518 (2) - 可以的話盡量彎好些

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

let's all

good lucky ;)
Megurine Luka
Topic Starter
S h i o n
Updated

Thanks modders and Luka ~ :3

spboxer3 wrote:

在offset可以用負的前提下~offset不該擺在note的後面 这个应该没问题吧~? 第一个NOTE都是slider
wmfchris
[General]
- There're some unsnapped time sections, make sure that they works properly and the current situation is expected hitsound effect.
- tag BL D:

[Insane]
Start kiai at 00:58:663 same as other diff
00:07:509 (2) - broken slider end
00:06:379 (4) - stack一起不好看 這樣00:14:320 (4) - remove clap
00:20:684 (1,2,3) - sudden jump without any notice from the song =/
00:40:911 (4,5,1) - 把(4,5,1)向下放 (1)做問號的點之類的?
00:43:639 (3) - broken slider end
00:58:411 (1) - broken slider end

[Hard]
00:17:730 (3) - notes shouldn't be hidden under sliders. try to stack (3) on (1) and make (3,4,5,6,1) in regular shape
00:46:366 (2) - this is risky in touching the bottom?
00:58:411 (1) - broken slider end
01:13:222 (2,3) - UNRANKABLE STACKING no notes should be between during slider

就這個stacking就要死十萬遍了吧 我mod了3年還是第一遍看到

[Normal]
沒大問題 可是一堆whistle放在非高音的地方怪怪的 要不要修一下
Topic Starter
S h i o n

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- There're some unsnapped time sections, make sure that they works properly and the current situation is expected hitsound effect. ok
- tag BL D: 少于3个字母的tag word是搜不到结果的~

[Insane]
Start kiai at 00:58:663 same as other diff fixed
00:07:509 (2) - broken slider end fixed
00:06:379 (4) - stack一起不好看 這樣 fixed
00:14:320 (4) - remove clap 背景音里面有个明显的鼓声的 (5)也是~
00:20:684 (1,2,3) - sudden jump without any notice from the song =/ 咦。。我觉得这里跳很合适的..特别是一个小停顿之后=.=
00:40:911 (4,5,1) - 把(4,5,1)向下放 (1)做問號的點之類的?个人觉得不用了吧 因为那个大大的slider已经足够了 感觉不用再刻意去弄个点出来 D:
00:43:639 (3) - broken slider end fixed
00:58:411 (1) - broken slider end fixed


[Normal]
沒大問題 可是一堆whistle放在非高音的地方怪怪的 要不要修一下 嗯 是有点奇怪.. 改了几处


Thanks for mod ~!!

【EDIT】 Kiiwa's Hard > All fixed 01:13:222 (2,3) - 这个完全是个意外.. 现在好了..
DarkRingSystem
:) :)

【Hard】
01:13:435 (2) - 碉堡了DBL 不过我喜欢
wmfchris
難怪我一直搜不到V3 lol

話說很多人都會tag op ed啥的 我看了很久才發現boy love指BL <_<
異性戀才是王道!
DarknessAngel
你幫過我很多忙
於是我主動來給你MOD了XD

Luka's Easy

  1. 00:07:509 (3) - add finish ?
  2. 00:08:184 (4,1,2) - add new combo on (4)。remove new combo on (1)。add new combo on (2)
  3. 01:01:390 (1) - acoording [01:16:617],you need to add finish on the slider's tail
  4. 01:03:208 (1) - according [01:18:435],add finish on the slider's tail,please
  5. 01:08:890 (3) - add new combo
  6. 01:24:799 (2,3,4) - add finish on (2,3),remove finish on (4)
  7. 01:26:390 (3,4) - I think adding a slider at [01:25:708] and end at [01:26:390] instead can be better to play

Normal

  1. 00:03:216 (5) - 這裡聽起來很違和啊,我覺得這樣的節奏更好的(別看排列)
  2. 00:13:639 (1,2) - 去掉NC,然後在2加個
  3. 00:30:457 (5) - 這whistle不太好呢,刪掉如何?
  4. 00:30:911 (6) - 這slider的尾部少了什麼0.0
  5. 00:57:957 (2) - finish換成clap比較好聽
  6. 01:10:708 (1,3) - 把這個whistle移到 (3) 這個slider的尾部
  7. 01:22:299 (3) - 把slider的尾端的clap去掉

Kiiwa's Hard

  1. 00:00:280 (1,1) - I have no idea why you put these here
    they are not only look bad but also do not follow the vocal
    fix these,please orz
  2. 00:06:831 (1) - remove new combo
  3. 00:29:093 (3) - stack with [00:27:730] slider's head
  4. 00:45:684 (5) - It is really a bad idea that stack under the short slider
    put it here will be better to play
  5. 00:52:616 (4) - same as [00:45:684],please fix it
  6. 00:55:911 (1) - clap instead
  7. 01:15:140 (2) - ...too bad orz
  8. 01:19:799 (3) - move clap on the slider's tail to the head will be cool ~ >w<
  9. 01:23:435 (1) - It is not necessary that add a new combo here
  10. 01:24:458 (1) - it need more distance between this and last slider
    putting it here will fix this problem
    and please,remove this new combo,and also remove the next one
  11. 01:27:299 (x) - really need to add a note here
    try to make this
    they would follow the vocal well if you do this

Insane

  1. 00:03:894 (2) - 這個節奏不符合啊,改成這樣吧(排列僅供參考)
  2. 00:14:320 (4) - 跟[00:12:957 (3)]的頭疊在一起
  3. 00:23:184 (2,3) - 在它們的頭上加whistle,因為你後面是這樣子的
  4. 00:38:411 (3) - 這頭上不加個whistle感覺音效有點空 ~ ww
  5. 00:57:275 (1,1) - 這種放置NC的方法跟Kiiwa很像呢,可是我不覺得這兩個有必要加NC,你們有些放法其實都濫用的,就算是為了好看也不能亂加,NC是為了加血還有幫助判斷用的,看你要不要跟Kiiwa說看看這個問題
  6. 01:19:344 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 老實說,連續兩個的whistle不是很好聽...
  7. 01:27:526 (1) - 在[01:27:526]的地方加一條音量很低的綠線,因為這球滑動的時候感覺有點吵ww,乾脆你把最後一條綠線移到這吧,這樣好多了

good song ~
and good luck ~
S.T.A.R ! :)
Topic Starter
S h i o n

DarknessAngel wrote:

你幫過我很多忙
於是我主動來給你MOD了XD 感激不尽..! XD

Normal

  1. 00:03:216 (5) - 這裡聽起來很違和啊,我覺得這樣的節奏更好的(別看排列) 嗯,好. 换了别的 差不多的节奏 前后都调整了下~
  2. 00:13:639 (1,2) - 去掉NC,然後在2加個 不了 现在这样也挺好的
  3. 00:30:457 (5) - 這whistle不太好呢,刪掉如何? fixed
  4. 00:30:911 (6) - 這slider的尾部少了什麼0.0 加了个稍轻的clap
  5. 00:57:957 (2) - finish換成clap比較好聽 fixed
  6. 01:10:708 (1,3) - 把這個whistle移到 (3) 這個slider的尾部 fixed
  7. 01:22:299 (3) - 把slider的尾端的clap去掉 fixed

Insane

  1. 00:03:894 (2) - 這個節奏不符合啊,改成這樣吧(排列僅供參考) 其实差不多吧~ 也为了不和前面重复了
  2. 00:14:320 (4) - 跟[00:12:957 (3)]的頭疊在一起 没太大必要
  3. 00:23:184 (2,3) - 在它們的頭上加whistle,因為你後面是這樣子的 fixed
  4. 00:38:411 (3) - 這頭上不加個whistle感覺音效有點空 ~ ww fixed
  5. 00:57:275 (1,1) - 這種放置NC的方法跟Kiiwa很像呢,可是我不覺得這兩個有必要加NC,你們有些放法其實都濫用的,就算是為了好看也不能亂加,NC是為了加血還有幫助判斷用的,看你要不要跟Kiiwa說看看這個問題 我也知道.. 这个暂且保留吧
  6. 01:19:344 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 老實說,連續兩個的whistle不是很好聽... fixed 各自去掉一个= =
  7. 01:27:526 (1) - 在[01:27:526]的地方加一條音量很低的綠線,因為這球滑動的時候感覺有點吵ww,乾脆你把最後一條綠線移到這吧,這樣好多了 fixed 在之中加了一个30%的过度

good song ~
and good luck ~
S.T.A.R ! :)
多谢mod&star !很有帮助~
Reiji-RJ
Hai, BL desu! D:

[General]

  1. 00:58:639 - why the first kiai starts here? Make the section with kiai-time here please 00:58:411 - :<
[Luca's Easy]

  1. 00:12:730 (5) - whistle to the end?
[Normal]

  1. 00:07:509 (1) - nc?
  2. 01:05:481 (4) - finish to the end
  3. 01:24:799 (3) - finish to the beginning
[Kiiwa's Hard]

  1. 00:00:506 (T) - volume up, to make finish audible
  2. 00:00:280 (1,1) - ugly D:
  3. 01:08:435 (2) - ^ >< try to make something like this:
  4. 01:24:003 (1,1) - move the first (1) further D:
  5. 01:27:299 (x) - add a note?
[Insane]

  1. 01:00:253 (5) - finish?
  2. 01:02:072 (6) - ^
  3. 01:14:799 (3) - ^
  4. 01:16:617 (3) - ^
eikkaleyd
From Anshi and eikka's modding queue.
Yeah总算有时间MOD了OTZ

[Luka's Easy]
00.32.275 (3) 我觉得朝下会比较好看
00.57.275 (3,4,1) 试试这样

01.05.935 加个圈或者让slider变长吧?

[Normal]
00.11.366 (3) 弯曲的不够好看,要左右对称
00.30.911 (6) ^

[Kiiwa's Hard]
00.29.093 (3) 按照蓝线来reserve很奇怪,还是按照红线来比较好吧
00.30.684 (1-5) 没排好的五边形呢。。


[Insane]
00.58.184 加一个circle?
01.07.526 ^

Good luck~

希望有空的话,来MOD我的图的说w
Topic Starter
S h i o n

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hai, BL desu! D:

[General]

  1. 00:58:639 - why the first kiai starts here? Make the section with kiai-time here please 00:58:411 - :< fixed
[Normal]

  1. 00:07:509 (1) - nc? fixed, also NCed 00:03:216 (1)
  2. 01:05:481 (4) - finish to the end fixed
  3. 01:24:799 (3) - finish to the beginning fixed
Kiiwa's reply here if you wanna know.
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[Insane]

  1. 01:00:253 (5) - finish?this way is kinda loud finish imo.. so sorry to those four.
  2. 01:02:072 (6) - ^
  3. 01:14:799 (3) - ^
  4. 01:16:617 (3) - ^
To eikkaleyd:
我的部分除了这个, 00.58.184 加一个circle 别的都改了~

Thank you two for mod~
Megurine Luka

DarknessAngel wrote:

你幫過我很多忙
於是我主動來給你MOD了XD

[notice]

Luka's Easy

  1. 00:07:509 (3) - add finish ? fixed
  2. 00:08:184 (4,1,2) - add new combo on (4)。remove new combo on (1)。add new combo on (2) 按重音走吧
  3. 01:01:390 (1) - acoording [01:16:617],you need to add finish on the slider's tail 不需要:3 按照节奏上来说这里的clap应该就在slidertick上
  4. 01:03:208 (1) - according [01:18:435],add finish on the slider's tail,please^
  5. 01:08:890 (3) - add new combofixed
  6. 01:24:799 (2,3,4) - add finish on (2,3),remove finish on (4) 23加了fin
  7. 01:26:390 (3,4) - I think adding a slider at [01:25:708] and end at [01:26:390] instead can be better to play现在这样也不错啦

Reiji-RJ wrote:

[Luca's Easy]

  1. 00:12:730 (5) - whistle to the end?nope

eikkaleyd wrote:

[Luka's Easy]
00.32.275 (3) 我觉得朝下会比较好看差不多啦
00.57.275 (3,4,1) 试试这样
fixed
01.05.935 加个圈或者让slider变长吧?后面的节奏听起来会怪怪的
Download: Sakura Merry-Men - Aikotoba (TV Size) (S h i o n) [Luka's Easy].osu
DarknessAngel

Megurine Luka wrote:

[notice]

Luka's Easy

  1. 01:01:390 (1) - acoording [01:16:617],you need to add finish on the slider's tail 不需要:3 按照节奏上来说这里的clap应该就在slidertick上 我不懂你在說什麼,我說的是slider的尾巴喔
  2. 01:26:390 (3,4) - I think adding a slider at [01:25:708] and end at [01:26:390] instead can be better to play现在这样也不错啦 新手不會喜歡這樣的排法


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