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Thank youxDeaTHcOrEx wrote:
hello, timing check as requested in #modreqs
BPM 132
1st Offset: 482
2nd Offset: 6813
You don't need the other timing sections.
Also your map looked solid on the 1st view, i like the rythm.
Only thing that doesn't look nice to me are some of the slider shapes but i read you want to keep them and its your decission after all.
Good luck
Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ... karenying ~karenying wrote:
世界一初恋!!<3
Thanks ~Melophobia wrote:
hi~
Normal
there are a lot of unsnaped notes, please resnap all notes~ fixed
00:30:911 (5) - add a clap to the end of this slider stead of whistle.
00:38:639 (2,3) - spacing fixed
00:45:911 (2,3) - ^ fixed
Insane
00:32:275 (1) - move this slider to 00:32:048 - and extend to 00:32:502 - good idea, but i wanna keep it
00:42:048 (2) - move the beginning of this slider to 00:42:275 - yes, it sounds cool~
01:04:572 (2,3) - these finishes are not fitting sound imo fine to me D:
01:20:935 (1,2,3) - this formation is really confusing and unexpected.
you should change it or at least add a new combo to (2) NC added.
good luck~
Thank you~Copter-kun wrote:
Hello. As promised, a mod4mod
Normal
00:12:502 (4) - Doesn't sound right... oh fixed.
00:14:093 (2) - shorten this slider to the nearest white tickomg. How could they break...
Insane
00:42:048 (2) - Could have been shaped better. fixed
00:49:093 (4) - Add the custom hitsound, soft-hitclap here. nope
01:27:526 (2) - this slider shape is unreadable due to overlapping path, therefore it's not rankable. Reshape this to a readable slider. fixed
Argh quite a short modding.
Thanks ~L_P wrote:
from mod que
你的图不错,只给建议,没强制性质
insane
就觉得开始时可以试着用背景音乐map看看
00:03:894 (2,3) - 试试看让这个跟00:02:765 (5) - 这个重叠,比较好看 好
00:05:588 (3) - 没必要的一个note好 去掉了
00:06:379 (5) - 这个slider有盖一点没有盖一点,要不就整个tail在上面,不然就不要动到 改了在上面的了
00:22:048 (7) - curve 有一点难看没觉得..
00:23:866 (3) - haha 少一个点反而更好看好
00:31:366 (6) - yerr~ 恩? 这是啥意思..
00:44:775 (2) - 这里真的真的需要加一个note 暂时先不加, 这里和后面的2连相关的~
01:03:890 (1) - spacing不大一点吗 恩~
01:20:253 (4) - cancel finish, 下一个note才加
Kiiwa's Hard
00:17:730 (3,4,5,6) - 不排整齐一点吗
00:30:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这里可以用星星阵法
01:02:177 (4) - 不要重叠
AR7让我很想死 Hard的关系
就这样咯。
Thanks ~shikyu wrote:
M4M~ some suggestions
[General]
so much unsnapped timing, fix it ok
[Normal]
00:20:002 (2) - add clap at slider's end
00:21:139 (3) - add clap at slider's start to keep consistence
00:54:548 (1) - RNC, this note isn't jump or placed at stanza fixed
01:00:026 (3) - 1 grid up, so (4) can stacked at (2) properly fixed
01:03:663 (1,2,3,4) - (3) overlapped by (2), I suggest this: changed pattern
01:26:163 (4) - remove clap at slider's start, sounds weird fixed some hitsounds
[Insane]
00:05:588 (3) - delete note, this part doesn't fit with three notes stream removed already
00:15:798 (X) - add note here no, it doesn't fit
00:16:707 (4) - delete this note no, but it fit the music
overall good, that's all
灰常感谢mod和连射3发!!No_Gu wrote:
request from myself
[normal]
00:03:216 (4) - 尾finish
00:00:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 感觉这段跟音乐下几个finish应该不错..finish在长白线上,但是加不到那边,只有00:03:216 (4)能加到, 索性都不加了 不然有点奇怪...
00:07:509 (3) - 头finish fixed
00:21:139 (3) - 全whistle 头加了whistle, 尾finish.
00:58:411 (1) - ^
01:03:865 (2) - clap应该在3的头上。 fixed
01:18:183 (1) - 尾finish fixed
01:26:820 (1,2) - 这样,http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212457 觉得tick无声比较舒服 no~
[insane]
00:06:379 (4) - 转几度别和3贴上 fixed
写一半点错地方全没了._.看有人mod了就先来骗颗Kud,大哥那难度还没到...
lol才发现跟你mutual了._.星星再来一发好了
Thanks ~Byakugan249 wrote:
Yo modding this map because of ur request
Normal:
00:01:861(3) - hmm try this: add a circle here but move the slider up by 2 ticks, and then end it at 00:02:765.
00:04:572 - add a circle?no, but thanks for those two ideas~
00:07:734 - unsnapped timing point ? what you mean
00:31:820(5) - replace the whistle for a clap to continue the rhythmno, but i added one on 00:30:457 (4) and remove one from (5)'s end
Insane:
00:42:275(2) - make this smoother fixed
this is the best i can do. GL
Thanks ~kokoroanime wrote:
Hello. I tried my best to find problems.
~Kiiwa's Hard~
00:16:366 (5) - Move this to x:119 y:40
00:22:730 (1) - Move this to x:237 y:97
00:26:593 (3) - Move this to x:165 y:323
00:27:275 (2) - Move this to x:193 y:95
00:27:730 (3) - Move this to x:257 y:220 because it's little bit irritating.
00:31:820 (2) - Move this to x:355 y:209
00:32:275 (3) - Move this to x:225 y:256 Fixed some, and don't see much difference on others.
That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.
卧槽 最后还搞个推销 膝盖中箭了...AoiX wrote:
Request from Queue&不来一发Mod么少年:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26891Aoi's Mod
GeneralInsane
- N/A
Kiiwa's Hard
- 00:06:379 (4) - 左移两格。边缘有叠加不太好看 fixed 神nazi..
- 00:15:002 (4,1) - 在4的结尾或1上加clap,否则节奏听着不完整 clap added on end of 4
- 01:27:526 (2) - 那个音是从01:27:746开始的,直接从白线一个滑条感觉略奇怪。可以用一个circle+滑条 恩 本来我也是从那开始的 看了一个MOD后觉得这样比较好 ._>
Normal
- 00:00:731 (1) - 和vocal完全不合 挺合呀。。
- 00:15:911 (3) - NC。提高辨识度 00:17:730 (3) - 参考这个= = 有MAT提出就改 ._.
- 00:55:457 (x) - Add circle will ask her later..
- 01:24:791 (1) - reverse arrow会被分数遮挡。。。被右上的分数..? 应该不太会.......
- 01:27:291 (x) - Add circle agree with you, but will also ask her advice...
腿
- 00:16:820 (5) - NC NCed for 00:15:002 (3)
- 我要玩大哥的EZ(摔
spboxer3 wrote:
在offset可以用負的前提下~offset不該擺在note的後面 这个应该没问题吧~? 第一个NOTE都是slider
wmfchris wrote:
[General]
- There're some unsnapped time sections, make sure that they works properly and the current situation is expected hitsound effect. ok
- tag BL D: 少于3个字母的tag word是搜不到结果的~
[Insane]
Start kiai at 00:58:663 same as other diff fixed
00:07:509 (2) - broken slider end fixed
00:06:379 (4) - stack一起不好看 這樣 fixed
00:14:320 (4) - remove clap 背景音里面有个明显的鼓声的 (5)也是~
00:20:684 (1,2,3) - sudden jump without any notice from the song =/ 咦。。我觉得这里跳很合适的..特别是一个小停顿之后=.=
00:40:911 (4,5,1) - 把(4,5,1)向下放 (1)做問號的點之類的?个人觉得不用了吧 因为那个大大的slider已经足够了 感觉不用再刻意去弄个点出来 D:
00:43:639 (3) - broken slider end fixed
00:58:411 (1) - broken slider end fixed
[Normal]
沒大問題 可是一堆whistle放在非高音的地方怪怪的 要不要修一下 嗯 是有点奇怪.. 改了几处
多谢mod&star !很有帮助~DarknessAngel wrote:
你幫過我很多忙
於是我主動來給你MOD了XD 感激不尽..! XDNormal
- 00:03:216 (5) - 這裡聽起來很違和啊,我覺得這樣的節奏更好的(別看排列) 嗯,好. 换了别的 差不多的节奏 前后都调整了下~
- 00:13:639 (1,2) - 去掉NC,然後在2加個 不了 现在这样也挺好的
- 00:30:457 (5) - 這whistle不太好呢,刪掉如何? fixed
- 00:30:911 (6) - 這slider的尾部少了什麼0.0 加了个稍轻的clap
- 00:57:957 (2) - finish換成clap比較好聽 fixed
- 01:10:708 (1,3) - 把這個whistle移到 (3) 這個slider的尾部 fixed
- 01:22:299 (3) - 把slider的尾端的clap去掉 fixed
Insane
- 00:03:894 (2) - 這個節奏不符合啊,改成這樣吧(排列僅供參考) 其实差不多吧~ 也为了不和前面重复了
- 00:14:320 (4) - 跟[00:12:957 (3)]的頭疊在一起 没太大必要
- 00:23:184 (2,3) - 在它們的頭上加whistle,因為你後面是這樣子的 fixed
- 00:38:411 (3) - 這頭上不加個whistle感覺音效有點空 ~ ww fixed
- 00:57:275 (1,1) - 這種放置NC的方法跟Kiiwa很像呢,可是我不覺得這兩個有必要加NC,你們有些放法其實都濫用的,就算是為了好看也不能亂加,NC是為了加血還有幫助判斷用的,看你要不要跟Kiiwa說看看這個問題 我也知道.. 这个暂且保留吧
- 01:19:344 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 老實說,連續兩個的whistle不是很好聽... fixed 各自去掉一个= =
- 01:27:526 (1) - 在[01:27:526]的地方加一條音量很低的綠線,因為這球滑動的時候感覺有點吵ww,乾脆你把最後一條綠線移到這吧,這樣好多了 fixed 在之中加了一个30%的过度
good song ~
and good luck ~
S.T.A.R !
To eikkaleyd:Reiji-RJ wrote:
Hai, BL desu! D:
[General][Normal]
- 00:58:639 - why the first kiai starts here? Make the section with kiai-time here please 00:58:411 - :< fixed
Kiiwa's reply here if you wanna know.
- 00:07:509 (1) - nc? fixed, also NCed 00:03:216 (1)
- 01:05:481 (4) - finish to the end fixed
- 01:24:799 (3) - finish to the beginning fixed
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[Insane]
- 01:00:253 (5) - finish?this way is kinda loud finish imo.. so sorry to those four.
- 01:02:072 (6) - ^
- 01:14:799 (3) - ^
- 01:16:617 (3) - ^
DarknessAngel wrote:
你幫過我很多忙
於是我主動來給你MOD了XD
[notice]Luka's Easy
- 00:07:509 (3) - add finish ? fixed
- 00:08:184 (4,1,2) - add new combo on (4)。remove new combo on (1)。add new combo on (2) 按重音走吧
- 01:01:390 (1) - acoording [01:16:617],you need to add finish on the slider's tail 不需要:3 按照节奏上来说这里的clap应该就在slidertick上
- 01:03:208 (1) - according [01:18:435],add finish on the slider's tail,please^
- 01:08:890 (3) - add new combofixed
- 01:24:799 (2,3,4) - add finish on (2,3),remove finish on (4) 23加了fin
- 01:26:390 (3,4) - I think adding a slider at [01:25:708] and end at [01:26:390] instead can be better to play现在这样也不错啦
Reiji-RJ wrote:
[Luca's Easy]
- 00:12:730 (5) - whistle to the end?nope
Download: Sakura Merry-Men - Aikotoba (TV Size) (S h i o n) [Luka's Easy].osueikkaleyd wrote:
[Luka's Easy]
00.32.275 (3) 我觉得朝下会比较好看差不多啦
00.57.275 (3,4,1) 试试这样
fixed
01.05.935 加个圈或者让slider变长吧?后面的节奏听起来会怪怪的
Megurine Luka wrote:
[notice]Luka's Easy
- 01:01:390 (1) - acoording [01:16:617],you need to add finish on the slider's tail 不需要:3 按照节奏上来说这里的clap应该就在slidertick上 我不懂你在說什麼,我說的是slider的尾巴喔
- 01:26:390 (3,4) - I think adding a slider at [01:25:708] and end at [01:26:390] instead can be better to play现在这样也不错啦 新手不會喜歡這樣的排法