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Sakura Merry-Men - Aikotoba (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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S h i o n
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S h i o n
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年10月23日 at 17:54:23

Artist: Sakura Merry-Men
Title: Aikotoba (TV Size)
Source: Sekai Ichi Hatsukoi
Tags: boys love yaoi ending kadokawa Kiiwa toejamms Megurine Luka KanaRin
BPM: 132.8
Filesize: 10554kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.94 stars, 242 notes)
  2. Kana's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 401 notes)
  3. Kiiwa's Hard (4.81 stars, 235 notes)
  4. Luka's Easy (2.14 stars, 94 notes)
  5. Normal (3.34 stars, 123 notes)
Download: Sakura Merry-Men - Aikotoba (TV Size)
Download: Sakura Merry-Men - Aikotoba (TV Size) (no video)
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history:
-2011
12/13 add soft-clap.wav added, 12/22 soft-slidertick2.wav added
12/23 BG added , thanks kirinoimouto22 for the nice BG :3
12/24 combo color changed
-2012
1/7 video added, thanks Francons and Weiren
1/9 combo color changed
2/15 new video from Weiren
3/24 Taiko (by KanaRin) added
Last edited by S h i o n , edited 67 times in total.
S h i o n
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ずっと伝（つた）えたいのは 届（とど）けたいのは ただ一(ひと)つのアイラブユー

zutto tsutae tainowa todoke tainowa tadahitotsu hitotsu no ai ra bu yu

送（おく）るのは ずっと君（きみ）だけに

okuru nowa zutto kimi dakeni



どうしようもない 止（と）められない　

dousyou monai tome rarenai

この感情（かんじょう）の名前（なまえ）なんて分（わ）からない

kono kannjyouno name nannte wakaranai

落（お）ち着（つ）かない 眠（ねむ）れない　

ochi tsuka nai nemure nai

もう何（な）にも头（あたま）に入（はい）らない

mou nanimo atamani hairanai



手（て）をぐっと伸（の）ばせば触（ふ）れそうな距离（きょり）で

tewo gutto nobaseba fure souna kyoride

ただそっと见（み）つめてる 心（こころ）が騒（さわ）いでる

tadasotto mitsume teru kokoroga sawai deru



ずっと伝（つた）えたいのは 届（とど）けたいのは ただ一つのアイラブユー

zutto tsutae tainowa todoke tainowa tada hitotsuno ai ra bu yu

「今（いま） 何时（なんじ）？」「调子（ちょうし）どうだい？」そんなんじゃなくてさ

ima nannji cyushi doudai sonn nann jyanaku tesa

いつも胸（むね）の中（なか）で叫（さけ）んでんだよ 呆（あき）れるほどアイラブユー

itsumo muneno nakade sakenn denndayo akireru hodo ai ra bu yu

送（おく）るのは ずっと君（きみ）だけに

okuruno wa zutto kimidakeni
KuronumaSawako
471 posts
Joined March 2011
KuronumaSawako
Finally! Finally decided to make this map \ o /
Good luck on this map, I'll be rooting for it to be ranked soon :D
(My english is horrible)
Megurine Luka
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Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
前排占位
Breeze
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Joined March 2009
Breeze
Timing help:

BPM/Offset
132/444
132/20454
132/58655

Good luck
S h i o n
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S h i o n
Thank you Breeze :)
AoiX
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Joined April 2010
AoiX
IRC test&mod 8-)
SPOILER
11:13 <AoiX> : 适当使用蓝线节奏是不错啊，但是你用的太滥了
11:13 <S h i o n> : 还好吧?
11:13 <AoiX> : 而且很多地方都不合适那样的节奏
11:13 <S h i o n> : 我觉得用的蛮少的...
11:13 <S h i o n> : 比如
11:14 <AoiX> : ·00:05:587 (3) - 这个可以去掉，白线开始的三连基本都不合拍的
11:15 <AoiX> : 00:28:635 (1,2,3) - 不适合用蓝线摆
11:16 <AoiX> : 00:59:109 (2,3) - ^
11:17 <AoiX> : 01:27:064 (2,1) - 叠加
11:17 <S h i o n> : 59这个应该算自创节奏么= =
11:17 <S h i o n> : 叠加?
11:18 <AoiX> : 00:00:246 (1,2,3) - 这里最好不要重叠，实际玩的时候很难看
11:18 <AoiX> : 没重叠好
11:18 <AoiX> : 但是你的自创节奏看着其实是在凑combo
11:19 <S h i o n> : 00:00:246 (1,2,3) - 这里显示 x0.00了 怎么破..
11:19 <AoiX> : 00:15:928 (5,2) - 这两个再摆好点
11:19 <AoiX> : 这里的意思是让你不要叠加
11:20 <AoiX> : 因为有SL的存在，要把那个位移算进去考虑
11:20 <S h i o n> : k
11:22 <AoiX> : 01:12:745 (x) - 可以考虑加个circle
11:22 <AoiX> : 大致就这样
Trauma-
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Trauma-
hello, timing check as requested in #modreqs

BPM 132

1st Offset: 482
2nd Offset: 6813

You don't need the other timing sections.

Also your map looked solid on the 1st view, i like the rythm.
Only thing that doesn't look nice to me are some of the slider shapes but i read you want to keep them and its your decission after all.

Good luck :)
S h i o n
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S h i o n

xDeaTHcOrEx wrote:

hello, timing check as requested in #modreqs

BPM 132

1st Offset: 482
2nd Offset: 6813

You don't need the other timing sections.

Also your map looked solid on the 1st view, i like the rythm.
Only thing that doesn't look nice to me are some of the slider shapes but i read you want to keep them and its your decission after all.

Good luck :)
Thank you ;)
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
1. Offset: 506ms BPM: 132.80
2. Offset: 7,730ms BPM: 132.00
3. Offset: 58,663ms BPM: 132.00

Here.
Kotone
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Kotone
世界一初恋!!<3
S h i o n
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S h i o n

karenying wrote:

世界一初恋!!<3
Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ... karenying ~
No_Gu
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No_Gu
0 0居然一个星期了我才知道有人开了这图。。。
看样没GD了。射颗星闪人= =||
kirinoimouto22
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kirinoimouto22
E-eto, seems that this map hasn't a BG yet...if you haven't yet chosen a BG, you can use this, I have a lot of these pictures.


Melophobia
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Melophobia
hi~

Normal
there are a lot of unsnaped notes, please resnap all notes~
00:30:911 (5) - add a clap to the end of this slider stead of whistle.
00:38:639 (2,3) - spacing
00:45:911 (2,3) - ^

Kiiwa's Hard
01:05:473 - add a note here
01:27:291 - add a note here


Insane
00:32:275 (1) - move this slider to 00:32:048 - and extend to 00:32:502 -
00:42:048 (2) - move the beginning of this slider to 00:42:275 -
01:04:572 (2,3) - these finishes are not fitting sound imo
01:20:935 (1,2,3) - this formation is really confusing and unexpected.

you should change it or at least add a new combo to (2)

good luck~
Copter-kun
399 posts
Joined February 2011
Copter-kun
Hello. As promised, a mod4mod

Normal
00:12:502 (4) - Doesn't sound right...
00:14:093 (2) - shorten this slider to the nearest white tick

Hard
00:55:116 to 00:55:798 feels empty. Should add notes/sliders

Insane
00:42:048 (2) - Could have been shaped better.
00:49:093 (4) - Add the custom hitsound, soft-hitclap here.
01:27:526 (2) - this slider shape is unreadable due to overlapping path, therefore it's not rankable. Reshape this to a readable slider.

Argh quite a short modding.
S h i o n
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S h i o n

Melophobia wrote:

hi~

Normal
there are a lot of unsnaped notes, please resnap all notes~ fixed
00:30:911 (5) - add a clap to the end of this slider stead of whistle.
00:38:639 (2,3) - spacing fixed
00:45:911 (2,3) - ^ fixed


Insane
00:32:275 (1) - move this slider to 00:32:048 - and extend to 00:32:502 - good idea, but i wanna keep it
00:42:048 (2) - move the beginning of this slider to 00:42:275 - yes, it sounds cool~
01:04:572 (2,3) - these finishes are not fitting sound imo fine to me D:
01:20:935 (1,2,3) - this formation is really confusing and unexpected.
you should change it or at least add a new combo to (2) NC added.

good luck~
Thanks ~

Copter-kun wrote:

Hello. As promised, a mod4mod

Normal
00:12:502 (4) - Doesn't sound right... oh fixed.
00:14:093 (2) - shorten this slider to the nearest white tickomg. How could they break...

Insane
00:42:048 (2) - Could have been shaped better. fixed
00:49:093 (4) - Add the custom hitsound, soft-hitclap here. nope
01:27:526 (2) - this slider shape is unreadable due to overlapping path, therefore it's not rankable. Reshape this to a readable slider. fixed

Argh quite a short modding.
Thank you~
L_P
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L_P
from mod que
你的图不错，只给建议，没强制性质

insane
就觉得开始时可以试着用背景音乐map看看
00:03:894 (2,3) - 试试看让这个跟00:02:765 (5) - 这个重叠，比较好看
00:05:588 (3) - 没必要的一个note
00:06:379 (5) - 这个slider有盖一点没有盖一点，要不就整个tail在上面，不然就不要动到
00:22:048 (7) - curve 有一点难看
00:23:866 (3) - haha 少一个点反而更好看
00:31:366 (6) - yerr~
00:44:775 (2) - 这里真的真的需要加一个note
01:03:890 (1) - spacing不大一点吗
01:20:253 (4) - cancel finish, 下一个note才加

hard
00:17:730 (3,4,5,6) - 不排整齐一点吗
00:30:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这里可以用星星阵法
01:02:177 (4) - 不要重叠
AR7让我很想死

就这样咯。
S h i o n
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S h i o n

L_P wrote:

from mod que
你的图不错，只给建议，没强制性质

insane
就觉得开始时可以试着用背景音乐map看看
00:03:894 (2,3) - 试试看让这个跟00:02:765 (5) - 这个重叠，比较好看 好
00:05:588 (3) - 没必要的一个note好 去掉了
00:06:379 (5) - 这个slider有盖一点没有盖一点，要不就整个tail在上面，不然就不要动到 改了在上面的了
00:22:048 (7) - curve 有一点难看没觉得..
00:23:866 (3) - haha 少一个点反而更好看好
00:31:366 (6) - yerr~ 恩? 这是啥意思..
00:44:775 (2) - 这里真的真的需要加一个note 暂时先不加, 这里和后面的2连相关的~
01:03:890 (1) - spacing不大一点吗 恩~
01:20:253 (4) - cancel finish, 下一个note才加

Kiiwa's Hard
00:17:730 (3,4,5,6) - 不排整齐一点吗
00:30:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这里可以用星星阵法
01:02:177 (4) - 不要重叠
AR7让我很想死 Hard的关系

就这样咯。
Thanks ~
witwist
61 posts
Joined September 2011
witwist
纯支持,混脸熟,期待早日完成:)
shikyu
786 posts
Joined January 2011
shikyu
M4M~ some suggestions

[General]
so much unsnapped timing, fix it

[Normal]
00:20:002 (2) - add clap at slider's end
00:21:139 (3) - add clap at slider's start to keep consistence
00:54:548 (1) - RNC, this note isn't jump or placed at stanza
01:00:026 (3) - 1 grid up, so (4) can stacked at (2) properly
01:03:663 (1,2,3,4) - (3) overlapped by (2), I suggest this:
SPOILER
01:26:163 (4) - remove clap at slider's start, sounds weird

[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:23:184 (3) - remove clap at slider's end, not fit there
00:26:820 (1) - remove clap at slider's end
00:28:866 (2) - remove clap
00:55:457 (X) - add note? I hear there's drum sound here
01:09:337 (1) - remove finish
01:24:450 (1,1) - why NC here? there's no problem without it
01:24:791 (1) - remove whistle at first repeat
01:27:291 (X) - add note here

[Insane]
00:05:588 (3) - delete note, this part doesn't fit with three notes stream
00:15:798 (X) - add note here
00:16:707 (4) - delete this note

overall good, that's all
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