Hi~~~@@

Yukiar

Nice!!~~

Normal

AR+1?

01:16:099 (3) - 後面2個折返去掉Clap&Whistle 然後加Finish?? (改的話後面順便改改吧....)

Hard

01:17:449 & 01:17:599 - Add a note?

qinche

00:40:249 (1,2) - 間距.....?

What a nice map:3

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Star~~~!!@@

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi~~~@@

Yukiar

Nice!!~~

Normal

AR+1? 打Hr圈就小了 AR還是低一點好

01:16:099 (3) - 後面2個折返去掉Clap&Whistle 然後加Finish?? (改的話後面順便改改吧....) 疏忽了lol Clap+finish

Hard

01:17:449 & 01:17:599 - Add a note? nah 沒必要

qinche

00:40:249 (1,2) - 間距.....? 這應該是有意的?

What a nice map:3 thx:)

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Star~~~!!@@

thx mod~

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[qinche]
• 00:27:199 (7) - New combo on this note to match 00:22:399 (1) -. no, short combo like this isnt wise
• 00:40:249 (1) - This note is spaced awkwardly and will trip people up on a first play through.on purpose for those people who dont listen to music. i have had several test plays from good players and they all caught it
• 00:46:399 (6) - I'd stack this under (5) so it would be less frustrating to hit.thats a stress on the vocal
• 01:00:799 (7) - New combo on this note to match the lyrics better. Then move on to removing the new combo on 01:02:149 (1) - . Add a new combo on 01:03:199 (4) -. Then they live happily ever after (Because they match the lyrics/music better)again in this map im not changing combos for lyrics but rather to make them less confusing. flows better actually.
• 01:09:049 (5) - Here, I would move this a tad closer since it's pretty awkward to play as it is due to the weird flow. Try this on:

SPOILER

its paralleled, why else?

Breeze wrote:

General

1. Turn off letterbox of [qinche] diff.oops, its off now
   

qinche

1. 00:40:249 (1) - spacing confusingon purpose for those people who dont listen to music. i have had several test plays from good players and they all caught it
2. 00:58:399 (1) - Add soft finish?
3. 01:02:149 (1) - Spacing a bit close
4. 01:36:799 (7) - Soft finish?
5. 01:55:999 (9) - ^
6. 02:58:399 (2) - ^

and yes to all sound adjustments.

Download: Atoguru - Mr.Liar (sirjuyt) [qinche].osu

Breeze wrote:

SB

1. Lyric SB looked kinda blurry, but I guess you do that in purpose to fit this song, I feel black border and red font would be more better, just sayin

Anyway it's done so just let it go

Yukiar

1. Maybe rename this diff. to Yuki's Easy better? Be honest , I would change difficulty name to my own diff name just like qinche . This diff name is named before I named my own diff name
2. Circle Size+1? No bcz bpm and SV are not high so players have enough time to click the smaller notes imo
3. 00:48:799 (5) - Add finish? Add in the end of the slider
4. 01:46:399 (5) - ^ ^
5. 02:29:599 (1) - ^Add

Thx for recheck

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@sirjuyt: 換了diff name 的關係,記得把舊diff刪掉,並且加新diff後full-submit

Download: Atoguru - Mr.Liar (sirjuyt) [KomeiKi].osu

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

@sirjuyt: 換了diff name 的關係,記得把舊diff刪掉,並且加新diff後full-submit[/color]

OK. 更新好

Now it looked good enough for a bubble

Oh, it has been bubbled! Nice~

Breeze wrote:

Now it looked good enough for a bubble

oh yes. thank you Breeze

Thx you Breeze

I can't wait it gets ranked : )

[General]
Tick rate 4 sounds awesome on this song, but tick rate 2 is pretty good too.
03:03:199 - Having a note here would give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

[Storyboard]
All of your lyric images look really fuzzy and are a stark contrast compared to the sharpness of the bg image.

[Skin]
The comboburst image doesn't fit the BG's theme very well stylistically.

[KomeiKi]
00:31:999 (3) - This slider end doesn't sound intentional, but if it is, it doesn't sound too well trying to follow that lyric after following the main beat so much
01:17:599 - Extend the break to here.

02:03:199 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for this level of difficulty.
02:12:799 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:17:599 - Extend break to here
02:39:199 - ^
I really don't like the placement of that last break since you have a break, play for 20 seconds, and the map is over. It's kind of disruptive.

[Hard]
00:54:199 (2) - This played so much better for me

01:17:599 - Extend break to here
01:28:249 (4,5) - Kind of a tricky rhythm to stack
01:51:199 (1) - Something similar to the last suggestion would be cool
02:39:199 - Extend break to here
02:53:599 (1) - Same rhythm suggestion

[Taiko]
01:06:949 (1) - Aww, these k's would be so much more sexy as finishes (removing the ds) but then you'd have an overlapping one at 01:07:999 - Then again, if you raised the slider speed like you did for the second and third kiai... (hint hint)
All the quick 1/4's didn't feel very good for such a swingin' song.

[qinche]
00:12:799 (8) - aaah I keep missing this slider since it's hard to see from 00:11:449 (3) - 's hitburst
Tick rate 2 for this one if you do tick 4 for the others. The normal tick sound is a bit too loud for this.

Sexy song to map. <3

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 4 sounds awesome on this song, but tick rate 2 is pretty good too. Don’t like ticks sound much, I’d use 2 tick rate
03:03:199 - Having a note here would give a better feeling of resolution to the map. Ok. Sounds great.

[Storyboard]
All of your lyric images look really fuzzy and are a stark contrast compared to the sharpness of the bg image.

[Skin]
The comboburst image doesn't fit the BG's theme very well stylistically. well,if I can't find better one,I'll delete it

[KomeiKi]
00:31:999 (3) - This slider end doesn't sound intentional, but if it is, it doesn't sound too well trying to follow that lyric after following the main beat so much
01:17:599 - Extend the break to here.

02:03:199 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for this level of difficulty.
02:12:799 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:17:599 - Extend break to here Ok.
02:39:199 - ^ ^
I really don't like the placement of that last break since you have a break, play for 20 seconds, and the map is over. It's kind of disruptive.
But I want to do the break for echoing with 01:17:599~01:27:199. If it’s need, I’ll map.

[Hard]
00:54:199 (2) - This played so much better for me Yap. Do some change,

01:17:599 - Extend break to here Ok.
01:28:249 (4,5) - Kind of a tricky rhythm to stack I think it's ok.
01:51:199 (1) - Something similar to the last suggestion would be cool yees
02:39:199 - Extend break to here Ok.
02:53:599 (1) - Same rhythm suggestion ^^

[Taiko]
01:06:949 (1) - Aww, these k's would be so much more sexy as finishes (removing the ds) but then you'd have an overlapping one at 01:07:999 - Then again, if you raised the slider speed like you did for the second and third kiai... (hint hint)
All the quick 1/4's didn't feel very good for such a swingin' song.

[qinche]
00:12:799 (8) - aaah I keep missing this slider since it's hard to see from 00:11:449 (3) - 's hitburst
Tick rate 2 for this one if you do tick 4 for the others. The normal tick sound is a bit too loud for this.

Sexy song to map. <3 <3

yeah~
thank you checking the map, garven!

I think it's better now

Thx you Garven

(About the spinners , I have no idea to change it so I put them closer to the center . Wish it helps the beginners . )

Download: Atoguru - Mr.Liar (sirjuyt) [KomeiKi].osu

wow that was eh...unexpected... i dunno if i really should change it, no other had mentioned this part before...

also about the tick rate. the score spread is pretty good now, i would make it 2 at most (actually it doesnt do anything cuz i didnt use any long slider), 4 is indeed adding too many scores and is loud.

if you agree to these, then please let the mapper make the tick rate 2.

@sirj I'm still waiting to see if anything is going to happen here...

Aaah, sorry that I didn't act faster. Forgot about this because I got so many requests.

Garven wrote:

[Taiko]
01:06:949 (1) - Aww, these k's would be so much more sexy as finishes (removing the ds) but then you'd have an overlapping one at 01:07:999 - Then again, if you raised the slider speed like you did for the second and third kiai... (hint hint)
I have use K K K kd should fit good now.
All the quick 1/4's didn't feel very good for such a swingin' song. Deleted some and made them easier

Thank you once again for modding my Taiko diff Garven. Less people are doing this, so I'm pretty happy about it.
Waiting for coming mods from you~

Download: Atoguru - Mr.Liar (sirjuyt) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu

OnosakiHito wrote:

Aaah, sorry that I didn't act faster. Forgot about this because I got so many requests.

Garven wrote:

[Taiko]
01:06:949 (1) - Aww, these k's would be so much more sexy as finishes (removing the ds) but then you'd have an overlapping one at 01:07:999 - Then again, if you raised the slider speed like you did for the second and third kiai... (hint hint)
I have use K K K kd should fit good now.
All the quick 1/4's didn't feel very good for such a swingin' song. Deleted some and made them easier

Thank you once again for modding my Taiko diff Garven. Less people are doing this, so I'm pretty happy about it.
Waiting for coming mods from you~

~~~~~~

Okey Garven

I think this map is ok now

[Skin]
No comboburst change then? Ah well.

[KomeiKi]
03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

[Normal]
About the last break, it's not needed - just my opinion on the game play flow.

[qinche]
I am kind of perplexed with qinche's answer. I'm okay with the slider not being changed, but it seems like you're okay with the tick rate 2? Can we get this clarified please?
Also: 03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

Garven wrote:

[Skin]
No comboburst change then? Ah well.

[KomeiKi]
03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

[Normal]
About the last break, it's not needed - just my opinion on the game play flow.

[qinche]
I am kind of perplexed with qinche's answer. I'm okay with the slider not being changed, but it seems like you're okay with the tick rate 2? Can we get this clarified please?
Also: 03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

yup, im fine with tick rate 2 and adding a note at the end

Download: Atoguru - Mr.Liar (sirjuyt) [qinche].osu

Garven wrote:

[Skin]
No comboburst change then? Ah well. Ah? Mabye I should do a full submission, have deleted.
[KomeiKi]
03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

[Normal]
About the last break, it's not needed - just my opinion on the game play flow. Ok. Have mapped this part.

[qinche]
I am kind of perplexed with qinche's answer. I'm okay with the slider not being changed, but it seems like you're okay with the tick rate 2? Can we get this clarified please?
Also: 03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

- thanks Garven

Rebub~

神曲
RANKED

lol！！！！
Congratulations~~~~~~~~~~

恭喜了~第一張Ranked map~

Congratz you First beatmap rank

Congratz, sirjuyt !!

good map

I cant dl it :/

Breeze wrote:

神曲
RANKED

WOWWW

Thank you Breeze！

a- and thank you all ~

恭喜啦!!~~~~

Nice Map!!

finally ranked! congratulations

恭喜~终于等到这个歌ranked了~~！XDD

Congratulations~

really good song~

Congratulation~

Gratz~

這幾天都沒啥在看osu 現在才看到rank了

恭喜阿

what the song's name ?

I can't serach in internet.help ...

好曲子, 好图，好铺子。就是Ono's taiko oni 节奏有点怪怪的 还有xxxxo和x ooo x ooo x太坑了有木有