Wow, this song is really catchy~
[General]
• I think the last break on Normal and Hard are awkwardly placed and pretty useless seeing as it's near the end. The breaks on Yukiar is nice, I think you should follow them.
[Hard]
• 00:18:799 (1) - I would remove the clap on this note. It's kinda weird if (1) stands out more than (2)
• 00:35:449 (1) - Remove new combo on this note to stay consistent with 00:30:649 (4).
• 01:31:249 (4,5) - I say this would play better if it was not under (3). Try this:
• 01:51:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If I were you I would do Something like this to match the lyrics
• 01:59:449 (5) - Eh, this sounds like it has one note too many. I'd turn this into a hitcircle to fix that.
• 03:01:399 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Very awkward and frustrating pattern IMO. Change it up please. Try
[qinche]
• 00:27:199 (7) - New combo on this note to match 00:22:399 (1) -.
• 00:40:249 (1) - This note is spaced awkwardly and will trip people up on a first play through.
• 00:46:399 (6) - I'd stack this under (5) so it would be less frustrating to hit.
• 01:00:799 (7) - New combo on this note to match the lyrics better. Then move on to removing the new combo on 01:02:149 (1) - . Add a new combo on 01:03:199 (4) -. Then they live happily ever after (Because they match the lyrics/music better)
• 01:09:049 (5) - Here, I would move this a tad closer since it's pretty awkward to play as it is due to the weird flow. Try this on:
Everything else is fine as far as I can tell.
Have a star, good map.
SI BI RE RU!
[General]
• I think the last break on Normal and Hard are awkwardly placed and pretty useless seeing as it's near the end. The breaks on Yukiar is nice, I think you should follow them.
[Hard]
• 00:18:799 (1) - I would remove the clap on this note. It's kinda weird if (1) stands out more than (2)
• 00:35:449 (1) - Remove new combo on this note to stay consistent with 00:30:649 (4).
• 01:31:249 (4,5) - I say this would play better if it was not under (3). Try this:
• 01:51:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If I were you I would do Something like this to match the lyrics
• 01:59:449 (5) - Eh, this sounds like it has one note too many. I'd turn this into a hitcircle to fix that.
• 03:01:399 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Very awkward and frustrating pattern IMO. Change it up please. Try
[qinche]
• 00:27:199 (7) - New combo on this note to match 00:22:399 (1) -.
• 00:40:249 (1) - This note is spaced awkwardly and will trip people up on a first play through.
• 00:46:399 (6) - I'd stack this under (5) so it would be less frustrating to hit.
• 01:00:799 (7) - New combo on this note to match the lyrics better. Then move on to removing the new combo on 01:02:149 (1) - . Add a new combo on 01:03:199 (4) -. Then they live happily ever after (Because they match the lyrics/music better)
• 01:09:049 (5) - Here, I would move this a tad closer since it's pretty awkward to play as it is due to the weird flow. Try this on:
Everything else is fine as far as I can tell.
Have a star, good map.
SI BI RE RU!