phonic wrote:

Hello~

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[Insane]

1. HP-1? OD-1? // I don't want score decrease
2. 00:13:216 (4,5,1,2) - I cover. How about what I move a little? // I asked some people, they didn't miss it. Bcuz there is color change.
3. 00:46:716 (4) - add new combo? // Fixed
4. 00:57:383 (4) - ^ // Many modders want it. Alright, fixed now :3
5. 01:06:550 (9) - ^ // No

[Hard]

1. HP-1 OD-1 // Nope
2. 00:46:716 (4) - add new combo? // Fixed
3. 00:57:383 (4) - ^ // ^
4. 01:25:716 (5) - ^ // No
5. Some placement resemble Insane // That's right

[Normal]

1. HP-1?
2. 00:12:049 (1) - Firstly it is finish // Whistle instead already
3. 00:37:716 (4) - add new combo? // No

[Easy]

1. 00:38:716 (4) - add new combo?
2. 00:46:716 (4) - I have a feeling that a timing is not correct
3. 00:49:383 (3) - add new combo?
4. 01:00:049 (3) - ^
   // Denied all

It is my favorite animated cartoon.
And your map is pleasant

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
make BG 800x600? // Why you modders obsess about resolution 800*600 and 1024*768?

[Easy]
awesome..nothing found..

[Normal]
nothing to say.. just feel some rhyme is kinda odd , like
00:28:054 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/8q4b ← I think this rhyme is much better
00:33:388 (1,2,3) - same as ^ , my rhyme maybe not good , but I think yours is kinda odd.. didn't follow the vocal or the music..
// I disagree. They follow drums but yours follows vocal mostly.

[Hard]
00:01:388 (1,2,3) - not on a line.. same as 00:01:721 (3,4,5) // On purpose
01:10:055 (1) - move it left a bit ? it is easier to let people realize there is a jump between 01:10:055 (1,2) imo // Well...
01:21:221 - add a note? // No

[Insane]
OD-1?
00:13:221 (4,5,1,2) - completely hidden sliders.. I think this is nearly unrankble.. move 1 and 2 away a bit plz // It's totally readable

[Insane]
OD-1?
nothing found.. just feel there are too many streams..

awesome map here
good luck

1. Looks fine~

1. 01:03:554 (x) - I think you shouldn't miss a note here because this is the highest pitch of this part,so I can't understand why you want to put the slider (2)- end at 01:03:388.May be don't don't do the symmetry here?I hope you can consider this.
2. 01:26:554 (1) - Hum?The only one 1/2 "click" in this diff?Probably remove it to consistent the difficulty?or use the spinner instead of it because this diff didn't have any spinner,so just put a spinner here to give a try to newbie ._.

1. 00:12:055 (1) - Consider a finish here?At the beginning of the slider because this is the first accent beat of the drum sound.By the way,ou don't need to remove the whistle ._<
2. 00:34:721 (2) - Remove the finish hitsound at the end of the slider?Because I think it doesn't fit the music here.

1. 00:37:721 (4) - Add a new combo here due to the combo chain is a bit longer than others combo,just add a new combo here to consistent it.
2. 00:51:721 (3) - I assme some newbie may play normal diff,so would you unstack this note from the end of (1) to make it more visible? (3)- is coved by slider (1)- 's combo burst.
3. 01:03:055 (3) - May be remove a reverse and than add a note at 01:03:554 - ? because I can't hear any drum sound/vocal/music at 01:03:721 - ,so add a note at 01:03:554 - is much reasonable.

1. 00:12:055 (1) - Consider a finish here?At the beginning of the slider because this is the first accent beat of the drum sound.By the way,ou don't need to remove the whistle ._<
2. 00:17:388 (1,2,3) - If I were you,I would add a whistle on the end of (1),(2) and the start of the (3).I think it sounds quite good after added >_<
3. 00:20:054 (1,2,3) - ^Same .

1. 00:12:055 (1) - Consider a finish here?At the beginning of the slider because this is the first accent beat of the drum sound.By the way,ou don't need to remove the whistle ._<
2. 01:08:221 , 01:08:554 (1) - Do you missing a slidertick2 here? o.o

1. 00:30:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern...I can see you did this pattern in hard at the same time!Could you change another pattern? T_T just make some different with hard.
2. 00:37:721 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think that could make this pattern look more nicer if you do this:
   
   Much jumpy

   

   22,105,37721,1,2
   106,158,37888,1,8
   58,235,38054,5,2
   181,203,38221,1,8
   97,342,38388,5,2
   255,248,38554,1,8

3. 01:14:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:30:721-
4. 01:26:554 (1,2) - ^...I can't understand why you want to make some pattern are similar to hard diff...

1. 00:12:055 (1) - Consider a finish here?At the beginning of the slider because this is the first accent beat of the drum sound.By the way,ou don't need to remove the whistle ._< also please make the volume to 70% like you do it in other diff?

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi!

[General]

1. Looks fine~

[Easy]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 01:03:554 (x) - I think you shouldn't miss a note here because this is the highest pitch of this part,so I can't understand why you want to put the slider (2)- end at 01:03:388.May be don't don't do the symmetry here?I hope you can consider this. // You make a great point. Fixed!
2. 01:26:554 (1) - Hum?The only one 1/2 "click" in this diff?Probably remove it to consistent the difficulty?or use the spinner instead of it because this diff didn't have any spinner,so just put a spinner here to give a try to newbie ._. // It's not too hard. I wanna keep the last slider in every diff. So, no.

Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)

1. 00:12:055 (1) - Consider a finish here?At the beginning of the slider because this is the first accent beat of the drum sound.By the way,ou don't need to remove the whistle ._< // I don't wanna add finish here
2. 00:34:721 (2) - Remove the finish hitsound at the end of the slider?Because I think it doesn't fit the music here. // No

[Normal]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:37:721 (4) - Add a new combo here due to the combo chain is a bit longer than others combo,just add a new combo here to consistent it. // No
2. 00:51:721 (3) - I assme some newbie may play normal diff,so would you unstack this note from the end of (1) to make it more visible? (3)- is coved by slider (1)- 's combo burst. // Fixed
3. 01:03:055 (3) - May be remove a reverse and than add a note at 01:03:554 - ? because I can't hear any drum sound/vocal/music at 01:03:721 - ,so add a note at 01:03:554 - is much reasonable. // OK

Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)

1. 00:12:055 (1) - Consider a finish here?At the beginning of the slider because this is the first accent beat of the drum sound.By the way,ou don't need to remove the whistle ._<
2. 00:17:388 (1,2,3) - If I were you,I would add a whistle on the end of (1),(2) and the start of the (3).I think it sounds quite good after added >_< // Nope
3. 00:20:054 (1,2,3) - ^Same .

[Hard]

Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)

1. 00:12:055 (1) - Consider a finish here?At the beginning of the slider because this is the first accent beat of the drum sound.By the way,ou don't need to remove the whistle ._<
2. 01:08:221 , 01:08:554 (1) - Do you missing a slidertick2 here? o.o // No, I don't.

[Insane]

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggeaaastion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:30:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern...I can see you did this pattern in hard at the same time!Could you change another pattern? T_T just make some different with hard. // Each diff have same patterns. I did it on purpose for unity.
2. 00:37:721 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think that could make this pattern look more nicer if you do this: // I had tried accelerating spacing before, but I couldn't find good formation. Yours is pretty good, so accepted. But without newcombo due to is not necessary. Thanks!
   
   Much jumpy

   

   22,105,37721,1,2
   106,158,37888,1,8
   58,235,38054,5,2
   181,203,38221,1,8
   97,342,38388,5,2
   255,248,38554,1,8

3. 01:14:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:30:721-
4. 01:26:554 (1,2) - ^...I can't understand why you want to make some pattern are similar to hard diff...

Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)

1. 00:12:055 (1) - Consider a finish here?At the beginning of the slider because this is the first accent beat of the drum sound.By the way,ou don't need to remove the whistle ._< also please make the volume to 70% like you do it in other diff? // Fixed volume only

yea,this mapset didn't contain any spinner ._. // Whatever

That's it, Pretty nice map,star'd

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

little things...

[Normal]
HP-1,AR-1 // Nope
why add break? // Break for not skilled player. It's based on guideline.

[Easy]
why add break?

nice

1. Timing: I felt that your offset was kinda late by ~10ms. Additionally, the song actually starts where you placed your first note and that would be the correct offset, which means offset 1379.

1. Note: The times are slightly different cause I already changed the offset for this diff.
2. 01:03:961 - I think this timing section makes the volume too low. Try 70~75%? I can't really hear the drum hitsound with 60.
3. 01:18:544 (6) - New combo and then remove the NC from next note? Follows the music better and makes the map more consistent too (check this for example: 01:23:879 (1,2,3))
4. 01:19:878 (1) - Whistle at the start? You used it at 01:19:379 (4) which is kinda the same drum located here as well. (you used it at 01:25:212 (1) too)

1. 01:03:971 - Same thing, raise the volume a little please.
2. 01:19:888 (4) - Whistle at start? (same reason like insane, plus you used it at 01:25:221 (4))

1. 01:03:971 - Raise the volume, like I suggested in other diffs.
2. 01:01:388 (1,2,3,4) - I think this could be a little too hard for a normal. If you intend to keep it this way, atleast make the note 4 distance snapped instead of stacked, this would be less confusing imo (but it would kinda ruin the pattern ><). Alternatively, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   It still follows the music nicely and is more appropriate for a normal in my opinion.
3. 01:19:888 (2) - Same thing about the whistle, add it maybe?

1. 00:26:638 - I think 50% volume is too low here.
2. 00:38:721 (4) - Whistle at start?
3. 01:03:971 - Raise the volume please.
4. 01:19:388 (2) - Whistle at the arrow? (same suggestion like in other diffs)

lolcubes wrote:

Hey ykcarrot!

[General]

1. Timing: I felt that your offset was kinda late by ~10ms. Additionally, the song actually starts where you placed your first note and that would be the correct offset, which means offset 1379. // Let's go with middle(-5ms). BTW I don't use that point to avoid timing point overlap.

[Insane]

1. Note: The times are slightly different cause I already changed the offset for this diff.
2. 01:03:961 - I think this timing section makes the volume too low. Try 70~75%? I can't really hear the drum hitsound with 60. // Removed timing point. It's 70 now.
3. 01:18:544 (6) - New combo and then remove the NC from next note? Follows the music better and makes the map more consistent too (check this for example: 01:23:879 (1,2,3)) // Well... I wanna leave it as it is due to appearance.
4. 01:19:878 (1) - Whistle at the start? You used it at 01:19:379 (4) which is kinda the same drum located here as well. (you used it at 01:25:212 (1) too) // You're right

[Hard]

1. 01:03:971 - Same thing, raise the volume a little please. // Fixed
2. 01:19:888 (4) - Whistle at start? (same reason like insane, plus you used it at 01:25:221 (4)) // Fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:03:971 - Raise the volume, like I suggested in other diffs. // Fixed
2. 01:01:388 (1,2,3,4) - I think this could be a little too hard for a normal. If you intend to keep it this way, atleast make the note 4 distance snapped instead of stacked, this would be less confusing imo (but it would kinda ruin the pattern ><). Alternatively, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   It still follows the music nicely and is more appropriate for a normal in my opinion. // Fixed appropriately
3. 01:19:888 (2) - Same thing about the whistle, add it maybe? // Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:26:638 - I think 50% volume is too low here. // Fixed
2. 00:38:721 (4) - Whistle at start? // No
3. 01:03:971 - Raise the volume please. // Fixed
4. 01:19:388 (2) - Whistle at the arrow? (same suggestion like in other diffs) // Fixed

That's all, just some minor tweaks and an offset fix.

lolcubes wrote:

I would suggest to reduce hpdrain and OD by 1 in Hard. It's kinda Insane-ish atm, and there is alot of stuff to click, so it could be a little too hard.