ArisuKarin wrote:

marshall_racer wrote:

err, sorry, but the Timing seems alright to me ... not sure about it anyway ^^
and yes, big progress, but still alot work to do

On the Takio Beatmap its fine but on "ArisuKarin's Insane" and "Normal" and "Hard" Its off
BPM:125.20
Offset: 676
Slider Velocity: 1.40
Please just try it!!

CDFA wrote:

Welp, time to mod this awesome

Overall:
Claps on 2 and 4 generally fit for every song. This one included. This mod post will be done assuming that you hopefully add claps on the 2nd and 4th beat of every measure (unless unfitting). rly? please say you're kidding me D:

Arisu:
Your map is a little too blockular. A lot of patterns go in a straight line, and a lot of sliders are straight. Although straight is good sometimes, it'd be cool if there was a little more curving sliders and curving patterns.
00:21:818 (2) - Ugly slider D:. This might just be better like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/106721 yessir
00:50:943 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider. done
00:51:303 (3) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/106723 yup, good idea
00:55:138 (3) - This just needs a new idea. I don't like this slider at all D:. changed
01:15:514 (1) - Just make it a regular J slider or something, instead of what you're doing here. changed

Hard:
00:45:310 (2) - This slider isn't lopsided what does that mean? D: #modhelp is awesome :3, but it'd probably be nicer if you put more sliderpoints on it, so it looks a bit nicer~. ok

Easy:
00:27:571 (5) - This would be better as just a basic curved slider instead of whatever it is now. changed
00:45:310 (1) - I don't like this slider D:. But I guess you can keep it unless someone else complains. this slider was even suggested some pages ago lol
00:50:584 (1) - You could probably do a more proportionate slider here. nah
Did you seriously just copy the end of hard (or hard copied the end of easy) and added/removed notes? That's uncreative D:. Remap one of the two so they aren't too similar~. changed stuff on Easy, shouldn't look too similar now

Whee. *rolls*

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Do you have Ready and Go? The "Ready 1 2 3 Go" thing. Try to make the countdown more consistent by adding Ready? and Go image. It looks funny with my K-ON!! image with your dark image :3 K-ON!! ft. Metroid ... sounds awesome xD but i try to get make one
Change Taikobg to 800x600 or 1024x768 waiting for Rikers to provide his promised new one
And change your BG to 1024x768 k

Normal:
00:10:312 (1,1) - I don't like a note right after a spinner on easy. Think of a way different way to map without spinner? removed the first note after that spinner ... waiting for the first one bitching about that one xD
01:17:431 (1,1) - ^ ^

Hard:
01:21:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Don't like how the spacing goes for Hard. Maybe move them slightly closer? how close D:

Insane:
Nothing bothered me. yay

Good luck. surely needed

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
00:27:571 (5) - I don't know why.. but i saw it good like this XD interesting idea, done
I don't like how you used Whistles from 00:42:913 to 00:58:254 other modders suggestions, not my fault
Make somone check the Hitsound of this... /me dies

[Hard]
use Less Overlaps, make graphic better and most of the map don't folllow music whyyy D:

[ArisuKarin's Insane]
isn't following music that much too -.-", too much overmapped triplets and streams... it's playble and partly follows the music

kurohana wrote:

ok, my mod hi :3

[General]

nothing to say awesome

[Easy]

a circle after a spinner is a bit hard for easy... open AImod to check this changed with CDFA's mod

[Hard]

nothing to say ^^ awesome

[Insane]

00:30:927 (2) a bit confusing... you mean because it's hidden? well, changing it then ...
00:57:775 (6,7,8) spacing, set these 3 notes at the end of the slider 5, in the upper right corner you see yellow numbers, they must be prev:0,00x and next:0,00x
disable grid snap for it i just put them at the beginning of the slider, putting them precisely on the end of the slider is impossible for me D:

cant say anything to taiko how about Rikers' skin? :3

good luck and star ^^ thanks

RobotoRaccoon wrote:

Mod

General
• No Taiko Background? old one was bad, looking for a new one

[Easy]
• Just random slider art?
• HP -1 done
00:27:571 (5) - Isn't snapped on the grid nazi >_< ... but fixed :3
• Do you even have Gridsnap on? always
00:42:913 (1) - Make it a slider with less red waypoints? nah

[Hard]
• AR -1 no

[ArisuKarin's Insane]
• Tick Rate 2 k
• Maybe HP +1? yeah, sounds good

Star
Overall, a good map
Oh and something to me looks weird with the score numbers :\ hmmm ...

1. No BG on this diff?
2. 00:04:079(10)-Add a Kat here?To fit your previous pattern.
3. 00:11:511(24.26)-Big notes is not inappropriate here.Remove them seems better.
4. 00:33:342(146162)-I can't understand why you put a long stream here.A simple 1/2 notes are good enough here. (I prefer something like dkdkdkdkd)
5. 00:42:913(x)-Please snap the Kiai Time properly on 00:42:913!Also I think slider speed change is inappropriate,well,but it's fine during gameplay though.
6. 00:48:426(229-232)-I suggest you remove this 2-plet,It's extremely weird here,It doesn't fit the music.
7. 01:14:195(373.374)-Weird rhythm,better to add a note on 01:14:075-(I prefer k on it)
8. 02:09:689(277)-Kat here?
9. 02:10:887(284-286)-NO,Just NO,Don't make a tripet when the speed change start.It'll make confused during gamelay.
   My Ratting:(For reference only)
10. Rhythm:3.5/5
11. Patterns:3/5
12. Totally:6.5/10

kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request:
Here's my Taiko mod.

[Rikki-Don's Dark Taiko]
[*]00:11:511(24.26)-Big notes is not inappropriate here.Remove them seems better. I don't like how it sounds now.
[*]00:33:342(146162)-I can't understand why you put a long stream here.A simple 1/2 notes are good enough here. (I prefer something like dkdkdkdkd) To fit the music, sir. Unless someone else complains about this, I will not change it.
[*]00:48:426(229-232)-I suggest you remove this 2-plet Wha?
[*]02:10:887(284-286)-NO,Just NO,Don't make a tripet when the speed change start.It'll make confused during gamelay.
At least it doesn't have a billion speed changes like in some standard maps, shiiiit.

My Ratting:(For reference only)
[*]Rhythm:3.5/5
[*]Patterns:3/5
[*]Totally:6.5/10[/list]

SPOILER

This is close enough, amirite?

TristanShi wrote:

Oops! sorry i forgot to star this map last mod = =

Here comes the background for the taiko diff.

TS@TBRT

See my signature for BG extraction reminders


File dimension: 1024x768

marshall_racer wrote:

Oh thank you <3
edit : i see that this bg isn't compatible with the Taiko SB ... well, thanks anyway :3
edit 2 : ok, i see ... when done, i make a optional "SB Pack" in the description, but for now, i leave it as it is

TristanShi wrote:

marshall_racer wrote:

Oh thank you <3
edit : i see that this bg isn't compatible with the Taiko SB ... well, thanks anyway :3
edit 2 : ok, i see ... when done, i make a optional "SB Pack" in the description, but for now, i leave it as it is

Well, sorry that I didn't realized that the diff contains SB.

I have added the SB ver. BG in the previous post!

Please check it out!

marshall_racer wrote:

goddamn, why is everyone pooting complaining about the timing, it's on Time.
go and ask experts or redownload that new mp3 ... gosh ...

MercurialSpectre wrote:

My mod is here.

Samus *-*


Easy

1.44.040 (3) Remove, I suggest this.


Hard

00.25.893 (2): New Combo


ArisuKarin's Insane

00.50.334 at 00.58.254: This part sounds really good <3


I don't mod Taiko xD


Great song for a great game <3



Black Star.-

1. Skin: Certain elements are too big compared to the template skin size (which is kinda the maximum of allowed dimensions). I guess some small difference over the maximum is still kinda allowed if it's reasonable, but double size certainly isn't.
   
   click to see which ones

   followpoint.png is 64x64 while template skin has 32x32. You should resize this.
   score-0.png
   score-1.png
   score-2.png
   score-3.png
   score-4.png
   score-5.png
   score-6.png
   score-7.png
   score-8.png
   score-9.png All these are 55x46. The biggest element in template skin is 45x60 in this set, so it would be best if you could resize them a little. Also check how they look in game, it's like there is a very tiny border at each side of a number. Not too critical I think, but if you could resize them, would be great.
2. Diffs have different preview times: 4512 @Insane, 4514 @Easy, 4514 @Hard, 4563 @Taiko. Would be great if you could make them all the same.
3. All of your diffs are using 1.4 SV. I guess that's fine and it works, but I just can't figure out why would you want such velocity throughout the whole mapset heh.
4. Inconsistent kiai times throughout the diffs. I suppose guest diffs (and taiko) are allowed to have different kiai times, but your own ones must have them the same. First kiai in easy is slightly longer than the kiai in hard. You should make them the same.

1. Slightly overmapped, would be great if you could think of something interesting instead of those random triplets you see on occasion (00:08:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) for example, they don't really follow the music, not the notes 2,5 and 8).
2. 00:14:986 (2) - I strongly suggest to remove this note, it's the only note which makes this stream look like overmapped stuff. Doing so, the stream would cover the background music perfectly. I won't point out which notes to remove anymore, unless it's a complete stream we're talking about, people usually dislike that. ;x;
3. 00:58:015 (7) - I wonder why you chose to place a finish here instead of at 00:58:254 (8). To me, it sounds better having it on 8 instead.
4. 00:58:254 - Drag this break a little forward so it's like at this picture. This way you wouldn't get that fast pass/fail circle/cross and would feel better (atleast to me).
5. 01:15:034 - This had me wondering a little, why is there no note. I suggest you place a note here and at 01:15:274. This would make it more interesting.
6. 01:43:081 (1) - Don't think you need this new combo for anything. It doesn't really follow the music either.

1. 00:45:310 (2) - Remove finish at the end, it doesn't sound good and for people who play in the rhythm is kinda distracting.
2. 00:57:775 (1) - Maybe extend this slider all the way to 00:58:254 so it has 5 repeats? It would fit the music much better. You can start the spinner right after it as well without losing anything significant.
3. 01:08:802 (4) - I don't understand how you came up with your hitsounds patterns, but I would say a whistle here sounds good, better than without it atleast.
4. 01:25:102 (2,3) - I understand you wanted variety cause such a song is dull, but I found this confusing. If possible think of something else, I don't like how they end on blue ticks.
5. 01:27:020 (1,2) - ^
6. 02:01:539 (1) - Hmm, try normal finish here instead? Soft kinda feels weak after such a buildup.

1. 01:51:950 (3) - New combo? Just so it's more consistent with the combos in this area.
2. 01:53:868 (5) - ^
3. 01:57:703 (1) - This slider comes too soon after a spinner for an easy difficulty. To make things worse, it doesn't start near the middle of the screen. I suggest you remove the spinner before this and think of something else. ;x;
4. 02:01:539 (1) - Just like in hard, try normal finish here instead?

1. Nothing major, but the custom Don guy is covering the letter "D" in the background. Kinda looks weird. Up to you if you fix this, doubt anyone will care much.

lolcubes wrote:

Hey there, answering your request. \:D

[General]:

1. Skin: Certain elements are too big compared to the template skin size (which is kinda the maximum of allowed dimensions). I guess some small difference over the maximum is still kinda allowed if it's reasonable, but double size certainly isn't.
   
   click to see which ones

   followpoint.png is 64x64 while template skin has 32x32. You should resize this.
   score-0.png
   score-1.png
   score-2.png
   score-3.png
   score-4.png
   score-5.png
   score-6.png
   score-7.png
   score-8.png
   score-9.png All these are 55x46. The biggest element in template skin is 45x60 in this set, so it would be best if you could resize them a little. Also check how they look in game, it's like there is a very tiny border at each side of a number. Not too critical I think, but if you could resize them, would be great.
   removed scorenumbers, resized followpoint
2. Diffs have different preview times: 4512 @Insane, 4514 @Easy, 4514 @Hard, 4563 @Taiko. Would be great if you could make them all the same. gave them all a new pt
3. All of your diffs are using 1.4 SV. I guess that's fine and it works, but I just can't figure out why would you want such velocity throughout the whole mapset heh. it was my first map and i was new to mapping, i didn't even know that SV is that important ;_;
4. Inconsistent kiai times throughout the diffs. I suppose guest diffs (and taiko) are allowed to have different kiai times, but your own ones must have them the same. First kiai in easy is slightly longer than the kiai in hard. You should make them the same.

fixed

[ArisuKarin's Insane]:

1. Slightly overmapped, would be great if you could think of something interesting instead of those random triplets you see on occasion (00:08:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) for example, they don't really follow the music, not the notes 2,5 and 8).
2. 00:14:986 (2) - I strongly suggest to remove this note, it's the only note which makes this stream look like overmapped stuff. Doing so, the stream would cover the background music perfectly. I won't point out which notes to remove anymore, unless it's a complete stream we're talking about, people usually dislike that. ;x; wow, good idea
3. 00:58:015 (7) - I wonder why you chose to place a finish here instead of at 00:58:254 (8). To me, it sounds better having it on 8 instead. fixed
4. 00:58:254 - Drag this break a little forward so it's like at this picture. This way you wouldn't get that fast pass/fail circle/cross and would feel better (atleast to me). done
5. 01:15:034 - This had me wondering a little, why is there no note. I suggest you place a note here and at 01:15:274. This would make it more interesting. done
6. 01:43:081 (1) - Don't think you need this new combo for anything. It doesn't really follow the music either.

you're right, fixed

[Hard]:

1. 00:45:310 (2) - Remove finish at the end, it doesn't sound good and for people who play in the rhythm is kinda distracting. fixed
2. 00:57:775 (1) - Maybe extend this slider all the way to 00:58:254 so it has 5 repeats? It would fit the music much better. You can start the spinner right after it as well without losing anything significant. sounds good
3. 01:08:802 (4) - I don't understand how you came up with your hitsounds patterns me neither, but I would say a whistle here sounds good, better than without it atleast. forgot to hitsound that, fixed
4. 01:25:102 (2,3) - I understand you wanted variety cause such a song is dull, but I found this confusing. If possible think of something else, I don't like how they end on blue ticks. well, i personally like it
5. 01:27:020 (1,2) - ^ ^
6. 02:01:539 (1) - Hmm, try normal finish here instead? Soft kinda feels weak after such a buildup.

sounds pretty good

[Easy]:

1. 01:51:950 (3) - New combo? Just so it's more consistent with the combos in this area. yeah, makes sense
2. 01:53:868 (5) - ^ ^
3. 01:57:703 (1) - This slider comes too soon after a spinner for an easy difficulty. To make things worse, it doesn't start near the middle of the screen. I suggest you remove the spinner before this and think of something else. ;x; replaced the spinner with something different
4. 02:01:539 (1) - Just like in hard, try normal finish here instead?

yup

[Rikki-Don's Dark Taiko]:

1. Nothing major, but the custom Don guy is covering the letter "D" in the background. Kinda looks weird. Up to you if you fix this, doubt anyone will care much.

i heard people don't like it much anyway, but i keep it like that

I suppose that's it. Have you considered making a normal? Or atleast convert your easy into normal but still keeping it under 3 stars? I am usually against easy-hard-insane mapsets, they seem like you made easy so it follows the ranking guidelines for the map to be rankable instead of having a nice difficulty spread. Hard was just as hard as Insane though, probably has to do something with the save SV hehe.

Well the mapset looked solid, I didn't agree on some stuff but that's just me I guess. nope, it's not only you ;P
Solid maps, and good luck! Thanks The skin was really great @taiko btw. Rikers will be happy

Vortex wrote:

Hey marshall_racer

You can do it, if you want
Things you should do
Things you must do

EASY
00:18:462 (2,3,4) Slider instead of circles? no
01:45:718 (3) I think this should also end with a hitsound. uhhm ... it ends with a clap

At all, difficulty Easy is very good nothing more to say.

NORMAL+
00:45:310 (2) Slider is to long --> makes boring.nah, i'll keep it
00:55:378 (1) Remove new combo and add new combo here: 00:56:097 (4). yessir
01:04:487 (6) This slider doesn't look very nice Take care of the similarity of the Lines . i'll keep it

This map is also very nice keep workin'!


INSANE (Guest Diff)
00:19:900 (1) Make this slider more symmetrical. made it as symmetrical as possible now
01:14:555 - 01:15:274 (4,5,6) Make a distance between (4) and (5,6) --> should be a little jumper. nah
01:36:608 - 01:37:807 (5,6,7) Much of the same patterns = unnecessary and boring I think. Make some other patterns here. it was intended to be so :\

Overall, you can make your map harder without thinking alot about, because now its to easy for an Insane map I think
Example: You can put your slider velocity higher or something like this .

Keep workin'

Kind regards
Vortex / ZantoLP

Behonkiss wrote:

Easy:
- 00:50:104 (1): Try changing the clap to a finish. done
- 01:46:197 (2): Maybe add a whistle to the whole thing to go along with the held note in the song? done

Normal+:
- You might want to have less note overlap on non-Hard/Insane difficulties. It can get disorienting. fixed

Insane:
- 01:07:843 (6): Make this a new combo instead of 01:08:083. done

MoonShade wrote:

Easy
00:16:065 (1) - use 2 waypoints to make this slider more beautiful noes

SPOILER

00:19:900 (1) - ^ noes
00:23:736 (1) - ^ (this slider may be ok though) ok is ok
00:27:571 (5) - e.g. nah

SPOILER

00:29:010 (6,1,2) -

SPOILER

ok
00:42:913 (1) and 00:45:310 (1) - overlapping fixed
01:25:102 (1) - make it more beautiful ok

Normal+
- Better than easy, but looks like a hard for me forget it :<
- Standard spacing 1,30 doesn't feel good, I would suggest that you should try 0,8-1,0 next time hmm ...
- Too many/hard jumps for a Normal+ in my opinion heh
00:23:736 (1) - use 2 waypoints to make this slider more beautiful noes
00:42:913 (1) - bake it more beautiful i won't bake anything >_>
00:44:111 (1,2) - 1 grid right yessir
00:45:310 (2) - what about this?

SPOILER

nah
00:56:097 (1) - should be in a vertical line to 00:55:618 (5) ok
00:56:816 (4,5) - should be on the same spot as 00:55:378 (4,5) ok
00:57:296 (6) -

SPOILER

ok
01:40:444 (1) - make it more beautiful no
01:42:362 (1) - use more waypoints here to make it rounder no

Insane
00:29:010 (7,8) - 1 grid left? ok
00:29:489 (1,2) - little overlapping on the top of the circle doesn't look so good fixed
00:34:763 (2) - ^ fixed
00:37:160 (1,2) - spacing (look at your pattern at 00:35:242 (1,2,3,4,5)) ok
00:37:639 (3) - 1 grid right
00:37:879 (4,5) - spacing
00:39:077 (1,2,3) - I don't think this is a very good idea, maybe you should try something different here nope
01:03:768 (4,5) - little overlapping fixed
01:04:966 (1,3) - overlapping obvious, duh

Nice taiko skin ^^

theMikeAG wrote:

Oooh, Dark Samus. Very Scary.

~General~
Isn't this song technically called "Darkness"? Eh, change it if you want, it is still Dark Samus' battle theme. If you're going to change it, be sure to consult this guide to avoid duplication. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

Your Offset is wrong. Change it to 675 and Snap objects to new timing. sounds kinda early imo, but k

Most of this song follows a 1-1-123 pattern. Sadly, none of the difficulties (even the guest difficulty) take advantage of this rhythm. You'll want to incorporate this rhythm into the song, or the beatmap won't fit nearly as well. sorry D:

Finally, the Score Numbers you're using aren't very good. They're too big and pretty ugly, so I'd remove them from the skin and full submit. they're not even in the folder D:

~Easy~
Meh, easy is easy.

~Normal+~
00:05:948 (7,8) - Overlap is kind of bad. yeah
00:13:908 (5,7) - Remove these notes (trust me, this follows the rhythm of the song). ok
00:15:297 (x) - Add a note here. ok
00:16:016 (1) - Get rid of repeat and place notes at 00:17:215 and 00:17:454. no
(I'll assume you know how to fix things from here. Follow the 1-1-123 pattern during the correct parts and this map will rock)
00:42:864 (1) - This slider needs fixing once you change the offset. fixed
01:02:520 (1,2,3) - This part doesn't fit the song at all. maybe, but i'll leave it
01:40:395 (1) - OW MY EARS. Please remove the slider whistles. OW. Also, this slider needs fixing too. nope and fixed

And that's my mod. Have a good day.

BakaHuang wrote:

hii mod time
just suggestions

[Easy]
01:19:349(1)-add one note?
01:46:179(2)-add whis on whole silder
01:57:073(1,1)-add whis on whole silders ;
01:59:621(1)-remove new combo

[Normal+]
00:13:140(2)-one grid down

[ArisuKarin's Insane]
01:15:993(1)-add whis
01:25:941(4,5)-remove whis on (4) , add whis on silder (5) 's head ; the same with others

BakaHuang wrote:

hii mod time
just suggestions

[Easy]
01:19:349(1)-add one note? no
01:46:179(2)-add whis on whole silder is already there
01:57:073(1,1)-add whis on whole silders ; ok
01:59:621(1)-remove new combo no

[Normal+]
00:13:140(2)-one grid down no

[ArisuKarin's Insane]
01:15:993(1)-add whis no
01:25:941(4,5)-remove whis on (4) , add whis on silder (5) 's head ; the same with others no

qilliam wrote:

The timing feels really off... i'm not pro timer but i suggest you ask for another player's opinion

I don't want to continue modding, there's a lot of stuff i don't like about the map. No kudosu.

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo Modding this song because of ur request.

Easy:
00:08:345(6) - 1 grid right, 18 grids up huh? how do i get the slider up there? x3
00:27:043(4,5) - spacing uhm ... ok
00:48:138(4) - 2 grids to the left for the end point of the slider. if u follow this fix the spacing for the next note. nope, sorry

Normal+:
01:04:438(6) - No need for that last point. take that out and extend the 2nd point. i redesigned it, but i kept the point

ArisuKarin's Insane:
01:15:465(1) - 2 grids to the right at the end point. ok
01:45:669(4) - 1 grid up ok

ok this is the best i can do. GL

marshall_racer wrote:

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo Modding this song because of ur request.

Easy:
00:08:345(6) - 1 grid right, 18 grids up huh? how do i get the slider up there? x3Whoops i meant for the 2nd point of the slider
00:27:043(4,5) - spacing uhm ... ok
00:48:138(4) - 2 grids to the left for the end point of the slider. if u follow this fix the spacing for the next note. nope, sorry

Normal+:
01:04:438(6) - No need for that last point. take that out and extend the 2nd point. i redesigned it, but i kept the point

ArisuKarin's Insane:
01:15:465(1) - 2 grids to the right at the end point. ok
01:45:669(4) - 1 grid up ok

ok this is the best i can do. GL

thanks :3

1. Since you have a hit0 file, I guess you should also add the other hitbursts, since this ones might look odd depending on the player's skin (even if you get the template skin one here)
2. The count.png files are a bit bad cut >_< to fix this problem, you could use some black borders on them, like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   In case you wanna use it, here are the files: http://puu.sh/6kSS

1. 01:04:966 (1) - unecessary new combo

1. Even though this is a Normal+ diff, I think AR7 is way too fast (specially considering the other difficulty sets in this diff). Consider reducing it by 1 tick, or increase the others to make it proportional and call it Hard, since it plays more as a Hard than as a Normal+ anyways >_<
2. 00:14:147 (5) - new combo?

1. 00:41:953 (4) - new combo?
2. 00:56:336 (4) - ^
3. 00:57:895 (x) - add a note here?
4. 00:58:135 (x) - ^
5. 01:36:607 (1) - almost invisible slider orz

HellDawn wrote:

Normal+
Not normal+ please delete put hard no
Overal difficulty +2 ^
Hp Drain Rate +2 ^

00:48:426- spacing ok

Insane
Hp drain rate -1 no

Wiinter wrote:

Ohi, modding as requested~

General

1. Since you have a hit0 file, I guess you should also add the other hitbursts, since this ones might look odd depending on the player's skin (even if you get the template skin one here) ehh, if people are really complaining about it, i'll change it
2. The count.png files are a bit bad cut >_< to fix this problem, you could use some black borders on them, like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   In case you wanna use it, here are the files: http://puu.sh/6kSS

thanks :3

[Easy]

1. 01:04:966 (1) - unecessary new combo

fixed

[Normal+]

1. Even though this is a Normal+ diff, I think AR7 is way too fast (specially considering the other difficulty sets in this diff). Consider reducing it by 1 tick, or increase the others to make it proportional and call it Hard, since it plays more as a Hard than as a Normal+ anyways >_< no,it's a normal+, AR -1
2. 00:14:147 (5) - new combo?

ok

[ArisuKarin's Hard]

1. 00:41:953 (4) - new combo?
2. 00:56:336 (4) - ^
3. 00:57:895 (x) - add a note here?
4. 00:58:135 (x) - ^
5. 01:36:607 (1) - almost invisible slider orz

fixed everything
That's all. Hope it's useful

theMikeAG wrote:

The return of the revenge of the vengeance of the dark, evil, no good, very bad, Samus.

~Normal~
00:06:477 (5,6) - Center these. done
01:08:322 (1,2,3,4,5) - These repeaters sound a little busy. The only claps you need should be on the front ends. nah, I think this pattern sounds ok
01:13:596 (2) - Could you adjust this slider so that it isn't touching the note? done
01:21:267 (1,2,3,4) - Add some claps to the ends. done
01:44:279 (1) - This doesn't fit. huh? How doesn't this fit?

~Hard~
00:42:913 (1) - This doesn't really fit.
01:44:279 (1) - Neither does this.
well, I tried some different patterns :/ I'll change the second one, dunno what to place for the first x3

~Insane~
00:10:071 (2) - Add whistle. done
00:11:990 (x) - Add note. done
00:15:824 (8) - Finish doesn't really fit. I guess as the finishing note of this Stream it kinda fits :/

I'll star you once I get the opportunity.

bomber34 wrote:

Nice Map :3
The only thing that sounds weird for me is this part on hard

1:58:183 and 2:00:100 : I would put those sliders 1/2 away so they are on 1:58:422 and 2:00:340


But it is up to you

I give you a Star ^^

bomber34 wrote:

Isn't the source Metroid Prime 2 : Echoes ?
(I know the 2 : echoes is in the tags but still ^^) see next quote

and what about adding Retro Studios to the tags because they were the developer? alrighty

Zelos wrote:

General:
Remove "2 Echoes" from source and add it to tags. (don't ask me why. its one of the most stupid rules I've ever heard of)

bomber34 wrote:

bomber34 wrote:

Isn't the source Metroid Prime 2 : Echoes ?
(I know the 2 : echoes is in the tags but still ^^)

and what about adding Retro Studios to the tags because they were the developer?

Edit: Why do you use the Taiko BG as preview picture? ^^

1. Vielleicht ein paar Inherited Points für's Volume setzen, damit nicht alles so eintönig ist von der Lautstärke her

1. 00:27:571 (5) - Ich würde den Kreis rund machen ;O
2. 00:42:913 (1) - Break zu diesem Slideranfang hier ziehen
3. 01:04:008 (1) - ^
4. 01:13:596 (2,3) - Ich weiß nicht ob's so gut ist die Slider mehr oder weniger in einer Normal Diff so zu überlappen D:
5. 01:17:431 (1,1) - Zu nah aneinander für eine Normal Diff
6. 01:28:938 (x) - Hier vielleicht 'nen Spinner setzen der bis 01:30:855 geht?
7. 01:40:444 (1) - Break zum Slideranfang ziehen
8. 01:44:279 (1) - Der Slider ist aus'm Takt.

1. 00:33:564 (1) - Würde ich auf den blauen Tick ziehen (also der direkt nach dem Slider (7) kommt)
2. 00:58:374 (1) - Wie wärs hier mit 2 Spinnern? Der erste geht bis 01:00:052 und der 2. von 01:00:172 bis 01:02:090
3. 01:02:569 (1,2,3) - Nicht ein bisschen zu krass für 'ne Hard Diff?
4. 01:19:349 (1,2,3,4) - Die Whistles passen nicht (es seidenn du machst sie soft)

1. AR -1
2. 00:58:254 (7) - Drag the break to the end of (7)
3. 01:38:405 (4,5) - Spacing?! Oo
4. 01:46:196 (5) - NC
5. How about mapping until 02:03:456? So that every diff ends at the same time?

DoKoLP wrote:

General

1. Vielleicht ein paar Inherited Points für's Volume setzen, damit nicht alles so eintönig ist von der Lautstärke her

[Normal]

1. 00:27:571 (5) - Ich würde den Kreis rund machen ;O ok
2. 00:42:913 (1) - Break zu diesem Slideranfang hier ziehen hoppla x3
3. 01:04:008 (1) - ^ ^
4. 01:13:596 (2,3) - Ich weiß nicht ob's so gut ist die Slider mehr oder weniger in einer Normal Diff so zu überlappen D: Odaril meinte es sei ok
5. 01:17:431 (1,1) - Zu nah aneinander für eine Normal Diff wie oft hier über sowas gestritten wurde ... is weg ^^
6. 01:28:938 (x) - Hier vielleicht 'nen Spinner setzen der bis 01:30:855 geht? ok
7. 01:40:444 (1) - Break zum Slideranfang ziehen x3
8. 01:44:279 (1) - Der Slider ist aus'm Takt.

wie jetzt? <.<

[Hard]

1. 00:33:564 (1) - Würde ich auf den blauen Tick ziehen (also der direkt nach dem Slider (7) kommt)
2. 00:58:374 (1) - Wie wärs hier mit 2 Spinnern? Der erste geht bis 01:00:052 und der 2. von 01:00:172 bis 01:02:090 jep
3. 01:02:569 (1,2,3) - Nicht ein bisschen zu krass für 'ne Hard Diff? 3 reverse slider? ka
4. 01:19:349 (1,2,3,4) - Die Whistles passen nicht (es seidenn du machst sie soft) soft, but still rough *rawr* ;D

[ArisuKarin's Insane]

1. AR -1 k
2. 00:58:254 (7) - Drag the break to the end of (7) ^
3. 01:38:405 (4,5) - Spacing?! Oo hehe, don't know what happened there x3
4. 01:46:196 (5) - NC k
5. How about mapping until 02:03:456? So that every diff ends at the same time? no,

So. Fertisch. Ich hoffe ich konnte helfen ;D
(Und sorry das es doch etwas länger gedauert hat)

marshall_racer wrote:

DoKoLP wrote:

[Normal]

1. 01:44:279 (1) - Der Slider ist aus'm Takt.

wie jetzt? <.< Ich meine damit den Reverse auf'm roten Tick. Der passt irgendwie nicht zum Rhythmus ;o
[/list]

Danke <33

IceBeam wrote:

hi hi there :3

delete Kenji Yamamoto - Dark Samus (marshall_racer) [Phish's Insane] from the song folder and add a link with a diff to creator's words okey dokey sir o/

also,remove 2 from Tags,we cannot search for tags having less then 3 characters k

all kiai sections are -1 mms earlier,fix it please fixed

[Normal]
HP Drain -2
OD -1

00:48:187 (4) - start it 1/1 later ok

[Hard]
00:08:394 (5,1) - a long gap between em' .-. add a note 00:09:833 to keep the rhytm on? fixed
00:58:374 (1) - extend this spinner up to the 01:00:172 and start next one from 01:00:292 ^
01:11:678 (1) - change to a slider please.. ^
01:28:938 (x) - drag a break here ^

[ArisuKarin's Insane]
Kiai is different here,consider to fix it no "guest Diff." exceptions?
it ends earlier then others..map to the 02:03:456? mapper left it like this :/

00:51:302 (3) - start this slider 1/1 later,leaving a note at 00:51:303. atm there's no rhytm at all k
00:55:137 (3) - nope,repeat is wrong,do as above ^
01:04:965 (1) - too close to previous object fixed
01:04:965 (1,2) - because of a new-discovered osu! bag,such moments are unrankable,as stacking doesn't occur during gameplay
move 01:05:445 (2) 1 grid down and right (lvl4) or change it in any other way fixed it differently

01:09:760 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:21:267 (x) - drag a break here k
01:32:772 (1,2,3,4) - again..zero stack leniency,make a manual stacking or change it fixed
01:36:607 (1,2,3) - that's odd,as the (4)-th symmetrical slider is missing sorry x3
01:55:065 (1) - too sudden and short,please change it to something else ok

[Taiko]
set audio lead-in to 1000 fixed

Loctav wrote:

[Normal]

Etwas linear platzierte Hitcircles machen die Map etwas eintönig. Versuch sie, etwas variabler anzuordnen.
generell sind die Hitsounds etwas seltsam, wirkt wie TaikOsu auf mich - und Taikosu is Unfug XD
Vielleicht solltest du auch mit dem Hitsound Volume rumspielen, dann wirken manche Hitsounds auch nicht so penedrant. ... ok

Circle Size -1

00:27:571 (5) - ugly slider hmm ... :/
00:42:913 (1) - replace whistle with finish ok
00:45:310 (1) - ugly slider+ nope
00:50:584 (2) - eww, you misuse whistles. how? <.<
00:53:940 (1,2,3) - finish(no whistle), none, whistle
00:55:378 (5,6,7) - ^
00:56:337 (1,2,3) - ^ done
01:25:102 (1) - ugly slider o.o
01:40:444 (1) - this whistle really sucks
01:42:362 (1) - ^
01:46:197 (2) - ^
01:48:115 (1) - ^ why
01:49:553 (2) - finish ok
01:50:032 (1) - this whistle really sucks, too
01:57:703 (1) - ^
01:59:621 (1) - ^ again, why?

[Hard]

00:23:736 (1) - create a 90° bow, looking far better (by creating my control points) k
01:11:678 (3) - ugly slider suggestions?
01:21:267 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this pattern more symmetric by reshaping the sliders meh, I guess it's ok like this :/
01:44:279 (1,2,3,4) - pretty overmapped with this kick sliders is it?
01:57:703 (1,2) - why so linear? changed
01:59:621 (1,2) - ^ ^

[ArisuKarin's Insane]

You should place triplets and streams closer together like http://puu.sh/atYF (or maybe with x0.9 distance snapping)
In general you should shape the sliders more like bows. Everything is so edgy or straight D:

00:10:790 (4,5,6) - is it just me or is THIS triplet different from the previous one? nope, they're copied from the previous triplets
00:15:824 (8) - make the stream don't ne so edgy with this 8 ok
00:50:584 (1,2,3,4) - time/add the objects like this http://puu.sh/atZ8 - replace objects then
00:54:418 (1,2,3,4) - ^ no and no, I like the rhthym
01:17:430 (5) - New combo? ok
01:28:937 (5) - ^ ^

[Rikki-Don's Dark Taiko]
Lol, nice skin. But why is the Circle Size so high? (even if it doesn't matter - but why? XD)
But nice Taiko at all.

First of all, always keep the volume at the same level, please.(60% or maybe increase it to 70%). This is very distracting in Taiko.
00:04:079 (10) - kat?
00:54:419 (273,274,275) - kkd?

Loctav wrote:

[Rikki-Don's Dark Taiko]
Lol, nice skin. Why thank you.
But why is the Circle Size so high? (even if it doesn't matter - but why? XD)

ShadowSoul wrote:

Normal
00:27:571 (5) - New Combo
00:29:489 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:117 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:596 (2) - Add NC

Other Diffs look fine <3
Just may change some sliders in Hard .. Ugly Sliders

Rikers wrote:

Loctav wrote:

[Rikki-Don's Dark Taiko]
Lol, nice skin. Why thank you.
But why is the Circle Size so high? (even if it doesn't matter - but why? XD)

I...have no idea, actually lol.
Unless Marshmallow changed some stuff.. o 3o

Rikers wrote:

Maybe I'll work on it a little.

..or maybe not.

DiamondCrash wrote:

Normal;

00:29:010 (2) - Clap.
01:04:008 (1) - Clap on the end.
01:13:596 (1) - Take the clap off the start.

Hard;

Approach Rate: +1
01:07:364 (1,3) - I don't think these really fit. It's up to you if you want to change them, but I'd have them 1/4 shorter if it was me.
01:23:185 (5,6) - Spacing.


Taiko;

00:00:733 (1) - Not snapped.

ArisuKarin wrote:

You deleted my Difficulty

18:12 <Broetchen8441> : 00:22:777 (5) - so ugly imo :<
18:13 <marshall_racer> : geh es posten verdammt x.x
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214460
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : do it like this
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : use approach circle to align with
18:15 <marshall_racer> : goddamnit post it ó.ó
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : i will
18:16 <Broetchen8441> : 00:33:444 (1) - change spinner's end volume?
18:16 <Broetchen8441> : 30% sounds fine imo
18:17 <Broetchen8441> : 00:45:310 (2) - 2 times repeat is kinda long, ya know? shorten down by 1 arrow & do smth. else about i t
18:17 <Broetchen8441> : *it
18:17 <Broetchen8441> : 00:49:385 (1) - people will bitch about it bcuz starts on red tick
18:18 <Broetchen8441> : so replace previous combo's 6 wiz 1x-reverse-slider
18:19 <Broetchen8441> : 00:50:584 (4) - can't you try on finding another shape & shorten it down on just 1 white tick length?
18:19 <Broetchen8441> : like using 2 1x-reverse-sliders instead
18:20 <Broetchen8441> : 01:13:596 (3,5) - how u dare raping mah eyes wiz dat shapes? D:
18:20 <Broetchen8441> : cut .mp3's end
18:21 <Broetchen8441> : oh, nvm, taiko continues
18:22 <Broetchen8441> : i suggest you to put the taiko-files as an aditional download and not include them in the map itself
18:22 <marshall_racer> : ...
18:22 <Broetchen8441> : TEEHEE

- Rikkukun - wrote:

I love this song! **

Stefan wrote:

wtf it's in WIP

how dare uu

Rikers wrote:

Ohhhhh boyyyyy this map

I reeeeally wanna just go back and redo this whole thing
Is it possible to rename diffs after submitting
it's been years since I've been around >.> <.<
Skin is cool but I think you should remove it and link it to puush or something

Also, hais I'm back kinda not really

1. 00:26:133 (2,3,4,1) - mach mal ein richtiges square,hehe (ctrl+shift+r oder ctrl+.)
2. 00:27:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - das zickzack pattern ist net gleichmäßig. Schieb mal (4,5) über (2,3) oder umgekehrt, oder (1,2) über (3,4)
3. 00:30:927 (6) - how about gleichmäßiges spacing (4y nach unten)
4. 00:48:187 (7) - müsste eigentlich 4x nach links sein oder?
5. 00:50:584 (1) - sähe gleichmäßig besser aus. hab hier mal nen gleichmäßigen slider gemacht, den du noch um 13° drehen musst :p

   374,192,50704,6,0,B|327:152|327:152|256:97|184:152|184:152|137:192,2,280

   (einfach unter [HitObjects] einfügen)
6. 01:27:979 (2) - soll das auf dem repeat den clap haben o.O
7. 01:42:362 (1) - passt visuell überhaupt nicht da imo

1. 00:05:518 (5,6,7) - die nach untern verschieben, so dass es auch horizontal symmetrisch ist?
2. 00:14:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - iwie stört mich der 5er-stream ;_; zu overmapped iwie
3. 00:19:900 (1) - stack mal das slider-ende ordentlich mit 00:21:339 (3)
4. 00:46:509 (3) - fänds besser wenns ctrl+g wär, auch wenn das ds drunter leidet
5. 00:49:385 (4) - da ist ne whislte zu viel aufm slider-ende. find die whistles generell etwas weird
6. 01:15:514 (5,6) - wie wärs damit http://puu.sh/rhBJe/4dcb357835.jpg

phaZ wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:26:133 (2,3,4,1) - mach mal ein richtiges square,hehe (ctrl+shift+r oder ctrl+.) ehh, ist doch eins, halt nur schräg D:
2. 00:27:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - das zickzack pattern ist net gleichmäßig. Schieb mal (4,5) über (2,3) oder umgekehrt, oder (1,2) über (3,4) ayy
3. 00:30:927 (6) - how about gleichmäßiges spacing (4y nach unten) 8 passt vom spacing her besser
4. 00:48:187 (7) - müsste eigentlich 4x nach links sein oder? Ich wüsste nicht wieso, spacing ist korrekt und es ist in meinen Augen halbwegs ordentlich blanketed (ist das ein Wort?)
5. 00:50:584 (1) - sähe gleichmäßig besser aus. hab hier mal nen gleichmäßigen slider gemacht, den du noch um 13° drehen musst :p

   374,192,50704,6,0,B|327:152|327:152|256:97|184:152|184:152|137:192,2,280

   (einfach unter [HitObjects] einfügen) Ich danke <#
6. 01:27:979 (2) - soll das auf dem repeat den clap haben o.O Mich selber hat der nicht wirklich gestört, hab den aber mal weggemacht wenn er nicht passt
7. 01:42:362 (1) - passt visuell überhaupt nicht da imo hab's (hoffentlich zum guten hin) geändert

[Hard]

1. 00:05:518 (5,6,7) - die nach untern verschieben, so dass es auch horizontal symmetrisch ist? ayy
2. 00:14:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - iwie stört mich der 5er-stream ;_; zu overmapped iwie Ich hab die 2 entfernt, ist so das beste was mir auf anhieb eingefallen ist xd
3. 00:19:900 (1) - stack mal das slider-ende ordentlich mit 00:21:339 (3) ich hab's versucht xd
4. 00:46:509 (3) - fänds besser wenns ctrl+g wär, auch wenn das ds drunter leidet Ich persönlich find's so besser
5. 00:49:385 (4) - da ist ne whislte zu viel aufm slider-ende. find die whistles generell etwas weird ich mag whistles und claps Hab's aber entfernt
6. 01:15:514 (5,6) - wie wärs damit http://puu.sh/rhBJe/4dcb357835.jpg

ayy

gut hab eigentlich nur rum genazit . Gut! könnte vllt beim hitsounden helfen noch, wenns dir nicht zu 100% im moment gefällt Ja, bitte!

marshallracer wrote:

This map has been a meme since its submission

Rikers wrote:

marshallracer wrote:

This map has been a meme since its submission

Oh boy, has it really? ovò

viptwo wrote:

Sup

[Hard]

00:11:271 (3,4,5,6,1) - rotate those by -26° and adjust them so it looks a little more polished and triangle-y yes
00:21:099 (2,3,4) - unsure how i feel about this but i would refrain from hiding a circle behind a slidertrackchanged the pattern a bit
00:22:537 (9) - a little close to 00:22:058 (6,7,8) - , just move it a little further right and then stack 00:22:777 (10) - this ones end onto 00:19:900 (1) - reverse point changed due to previous pattern change
00:24:455 (2) - blanket maybe? yes
00:27:571 (1) - sloppy blanket, shame on you ):
00:32:366 (5) - grrr ^ ;_;
01:11:678 (3) - weird bezier, give the part after the hard angle a little bit of a better curve so it doesnt look so out of place since this is pretty much the only bezier you use (aside from 01:50:032 (1) - ) guess I made it better somehow
01:26:780 (1,2,3) - what's up with the spacing here? comparing to 01:24:863 (1,2,3) - it's way off and i dont see why it should be bigger. Consistency, my friend Idk what happened ): changed it though
01:53:868 (1) - uncomfortably close to 01:52:909 (5) - maybe just make the curve go downwards and sort of "blanket" 01:52:909 (5) - and then just mirror the thing again fixed


[Normal]

00:16:065 (1) - sloppy blanket grrrr FIXED
01:08:322 (1,2,3,4) - i'd rather have these start on 01:07:843 - to avoid sliderends on a big white tick fixed


6 YEARS GOD DAMN

Anyways this is looking very much ready, so, good luck!