theMikeAG wrote:

The return of the revenge of the vengeance of the dark, evil, no good, very bad, Samus.

~Normal~
00:06:477 (5,6) - Center these. done
01:08:322 (1,2,3,4,5) - These repeaters sound a little busy. The only claps you need should be on the front ends. nah, I think this pattern sounds ok
01:13:596 (2) - Could you adjust this slider so that it isn't touching the note? done
01:21:267 (1,2,3,4) - Add some claps to the ends. done
01:44:279 (1) - This doesn't fit. huh? How doesn't this fit?

~Hard~
00:42:913 (1) - This doesn't really fit.
01:44:279 (1) - Neither does this.
well, I tried some different patterns :/ I'll change the second one, dunno what to place for the first x3

~Insane~
00:10:071 (2) - Add whistle. done
00:11:990 (x) - Add note. done
00:15:824 (8) - Finish doesn't really fit. I guess as the finishing note of this Stream it kinda fits :/

I'll star you once I get the opportunity.

bomber34 wrote:

Nice Map :3
The only thing that sounds weird for me is this part on hard

1:58:183 and 2:00:100 : I would put those sliders 1/2 away so they are on 1:58:422 and 2:00:340


But it is up to you

I give you a Star ^^

bomber34 wrote:

Isn't the source Metroid Prime 2 : Echoes ?
(I know the 2 : echoes is in the tags but still ^^) see next quote

and what about adding Retro Studios to the tags because they were the developer? alrighty

Zelos wrote:

General:
Remove "2 Echoes" from source and add it to tags. (don't ask me why. its one of the most stupid rules I've ever heard of)

bomber34 wrote:

bomber34 wrote:

Isn't the source Metroid Prime 2 : Echoes ?
(I know the 2 : echoes is in the tags but still ^^)

and what about adding Retro Studios to the tags because they were the developer?

Edit: Why do you use the Taiko BG as preview picture? ^^

1. Vielleicht ein paar Inherited Points für's Volume setzen, damit nicht alles so eintönig ist von der Lautstärke her

1. 00:27:571 (5) - Ich würde den Kreis rund machen ;O
2. 00:42:913 (1) - Break zu diesem Slideranfang hier ziehen
3. 01:04:008 (1) - ^
4. 01:13:596 (2,3) - Ich weiß nicht ob's so gut ist die Slider mehr oder weniger in einer Normal Diff so zu überlappen D:
5. 01:17:431 (1,1) - Zu nah aneinander für eine Normal Diff
6. 01:28:938 (x) - Hier vielleicht 'nen Spinner setzen der bis 01:30:855 geht?
7. 01:40:444 (1) - Break zum Slideranfang ziehen
8. 01:44:279 (1) - Der Slider ist aus'm Takt.

1. 00:33:564 (1) - Würde ich auf den blauen Tick ziehen (also der direkt nach dem Slider (7) kommt)
2. 00:58:374 (1) - Wie wärs hier mit 2 Spinnern? Der erste geht bis 01:00:052 und der 2. von 01:00:172 bis 01:02:090
3. 01:02:569 (1,2,3) - Nicht ein bisschen zu krass für 'ne Hard Diff?
4. 01:19:349 (1,2,3,4) - Die Whistles passen nicht (es seidenn du machst sie soft)

1. AR -1
2. 00:58:254 (7) - Drag the break to the end of (7)
3. 01:38:405 (4,5) - Spacing?! Oo
4. 01:46:196 (5) - NC
5. How about mapping until 02:03:456? So that every diff ends at the same time?

DoKoLP wrote:

General

1. Vielleicht ein paar Inherited Points für's Volume setzen, damit nicht alles so eintönig ist von der Lautstärke her

[Normal]

1. 00:27:571 (5) - Ich würde den Kreis rund machen ;O ok
2. 00:42:913 (1) - Break zu diesem Slideranfang hier ziehen hoppla x3
3. 01:04:008 (1) - ^ ^
4. 01:13:596 (2,3) - Ich weiß nicht ob's so gut ist die Slider mehr oder weniger in einer Normal Diff so zu überlappen D: Odaril meinte es sei ok
5. 01:17:431 (1,1) - Zu nah aneinander für eine Normal Diff wie oft hier über sowas gestritten wurde ... is weg ^^
6. 01:28:938 (x) - Hier vielleicht 'nen Spinner setzen der bis 01:30:855 geht? ok
7. 01:40:444 (1) - Break zum Slideranfang ziehen x3
8. 01:44:279 (1) - Der Slider ist aus'm Takt.

wie jetzt? <.<

[Hard]

1. 00:33:564 (1) - Würde ich auf den blauen Tick ziehen (also der direkt nach dem Slider (7) kommt)
2. 00:58:374 (1) - Wie wärs hier mit 2 Spinnern? Der erste geht bis 01:00:052 und der 2. von 01:00:172 bis 01:02:090 jep
3. 01:02:569 (1,2,3) - Nicht ein bisschen zu krass für 'ne Hard Diff? 3 reverse slider? ka
4. 01:19:349 (1,2,3,4) - Die Whistles passen nicht (es seidenn du machst sie soft) soft, but still rough *rawr* ;D

[ArisuKarin's Insane]

1. AR -1 k
2. 00:58:254 (7) - Drag the break to the end of (7) ^
3. 01:38:405 (4,5) - Spacing?! Oo hehe, don't know what happened there x3
4. 01:46:196 (5) - NC k
5. How about mapping until 02:03:456? So that every diff ends at the same time? no,

So. Fertisch. Ich hoffe ich konnte helfen ;D
(Und sorry das es doch etwas länger gedauert hat)

marshall_racer wrote:

DoKoLP wrote:

[Normal]

1. 01:44:279 (1) - Der Slider ist aus'm Takt.

wie jetzt? <.< Ich meine damit den Reverse auf'm roten Tick. Der passt irgendwie nicht zum Rhythmus ;o
[/list]

Danke <33

IceBeam wrote:

hi hi there :3

delete Kenji Yamamoto - Dark Samus (marshall_racer) [Phish's Insane] from the song folder and add a link with a diff to creator's words okey dokey sir o/

also,remove 2 from Tags,we cannot search for tags having less then 3 characters k

all kiai sections are -1 mms earlier,fix it please fixed

[Normal]
HP Drain -2
OD -1

00:48:187 (4) - start it 1/1 later ok

[Hard]
00:08:394 (5,1) - a long gap between em' .-. add a note 00:09:833 to keep the rhytm on? fixed
00:58:374 (1) - extend this spinner up to the 01:00:172 and start next one from 01:00:292 ^
01:11:678 (1) - change to a slider please.. ^
01:28:938 (x) - drag a break here ^

[ArisuKarin's Insane]
Kiai is different here,consider to fix it no "guest Diff." exceptions?
it ends earlier then others..map to the 02:03:456? mapper left it like this :/

00:51:302 (3) - start this slider 1/1 later,leaving a note at 00:51:303. atm there's no rhytm at all k
00:55:137 (3) - nope,repeat is wrong,do as above ^
01:04:965 (1) - too close to previous object fixed
01:04:965 (1,2) - because of a new-discovered osu! bag,such moments are unrankable,as stacking doesn't occur during gameplay
move 01:05:445 (2) 1 grid down and right (lvl4) or change it in any other way fixed it differently

01:09:760 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:21:267 (x) - drag a break here k
01:32:772 (1,2,3,4) - again..zero stack leniency,make a manual stacking or change it fixed
01:36:607 (1,2,3) - that's odd,as the (4)-th symmetrical slider is missing sorry x3
01:55:065 (1) - too sudden and short,please change it to something else ok

[Taiko]
set audio lead-in to 1000 fixed

Loctav wrote:

[Normal]

Etwas linear platzierte Hitcircles machen die Map etwas eintönig. Versuch sie, etwas variabler anzuordnen.
generell sind die Hitsounds etwas seltsam, wirkt wie TaikOsu auf mich - und Taikosu is Unfug XD
Vielleicht solltest du auch mit dem Hitsound Volume rumspielen, dann wirken manche Hitsounds auch nicht so penedrant. ... ok

Circle Size -1

00:27:571 (5) - ugly slider hmm ... :/
00:42:913 (1) - replace whistle with finish ok
00:45:310 (1) - ugly slider+ nope
00:50:584 (2) - eww, you misuse whistles. how? <.<
00:53:940 (1,2,3) - finish(no whistle), none, whistle
00:55:378 (5,6,7) - ^
00:56:337 (1,2,3) - ^ done
01:25:102 (1) - ugly slider o.o
01:40:444 (1) - this whistle really sucks
01:42:362 (1) - ^
01:46:197 (2) - ^
01:48:115 (1) - ^ why
01:49:553 (2) - finish ok
01:50:032 (1) - this whistle really sucks, too
01:57:703 (1) - ^
01:59:621 (1) - ^ again, why?

[Hard]

00:23:736 (1) - create a 90° bow, looking far better (by creating my control points) k
01:11:678 (3) - ugly slider suggestions?
01:21:267 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this pattern more symmetric by reshaping the sliders meh, I guess it's ok like this :/
01:44:279 (1,2,3,4) - pretty overmapped with this kick sliders is it?
01:57:703 (1,2) - why so linear? changed
01:59:621 (1,2) - ^ ^

[ArisuKarin's Insane]

You should place triplets and streams closer together like http://puu.sh/atYF (or maybe with x0.9 distance snapping)
In general you should shape the sliders more like bows. Everything is so edgy or straight D:

00:10:790 (4,5,6) - is it just me or is THIS triplet different from the previous one? nope, they're copied from the previous triplets
00:15:824 (8) - make the stream don't ne so edgy with this 8 ok
00:50:584 (1,2,3,4) - time/add the objects like this http://puu.sh/atZ8 - replace objects then
00:54:418 (1,2,3,4) - ^ no and no, I like the rhthym
01:17:430 (5) - New combo? ok
01:28:937 (5) - ^ ^

[Rikki-Don's Dark Taiko]
Lol, nice skin. But why is the Circle Size so high? (even if it doesn't matter - but why? XD)
But nice Taiko at all.

First of all, always keep the volume at the same level, please.(60% or maybe increase it to 70%). This is very distracting in Taiko.
00:04:079 (10) - kat?
00:54:419 (273,274,275) - kkd?

Loctav wrote:

[Rikki-Don's Dark Taiko]
Lol, nice skin. Why thank you.
But why is the Circle Size so high? (even if it doesn't matter - but why? XD)

ShadowSoul wrote:

Normal
00:27:571 (5) - New Combo
00:29:489 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:117 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:596 (2) - Add NC

Other Diffs look fine <3
Just may change some sliders in Hard .. Ugly Sliders

Rikers wrote:

Loctav wrote:

[Rikki-Don's Dark Taiko]
Lol, nice skin. Why thank you.
But why is the Circle Size so high? (even if it doesn't matter - but why? XD)

I...have no idea, actually lol.
Unless Marshmallow changed some stuff.. o 3o

Rikers wrote:

Maybe I'll work on it a little.

..or maybe not.

DiamondCrash wrote:

Normal;

00:29:010 (2) - Clap.
01:04:008 (1) - Clap on the end.
01:13:596 (1) - Take the clap off the start.

Hard;

Approach Rate: +1
01:07:364 (1,3) - I don't think these really fit. It's up to you if you want to change them, but I'd have them 1/4 shorter if it was me.
01:23:185 (5,6) - Spacing.


Taiko;

00:00:733 (1) - Not snapped.

ArisuKarin wrote:

You deleted my Difficulty

18:12 <Broetchen8441> : 00:22:777 (5) - so ugly imo :<
18:13 <marshall_racer> : geh es posten verdammt x.x
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214460
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : do it like this
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : use approach circle to align with
18:15 <marshall_racer> : goddamnit post it ó.ó
18:15 <Broetchen8441> : i will
18:16 <Broetchen8441> : 00:33:444 (1) - change spinner's end volume?
18:16 <Broetchen8441> : 30% sounds fine imo
18:17 <Broetchen8441> : 00:45:310 (2) - 2 times repeat is kinda long, ya know? shorten down by 1 arrow & do smth. else about i t
18:17 <Broetchen8441> : *it
18:17 <Broetchen8441> : 00:49:385 (1) - people will bitch about it bcuz starts on red tick
18:18 <Broetchen8441> : so replace previous combo's 6 wiz 1x-reverse-slider
18:19 <Broetchen8441> : 00:50:584 (4) - can't you try on finding another shape & shorten it down on just 1 white tick length?
18:19 <Broetchen8441> : like using 2 1x-reverse-sliders instead
18:20 <Broetchen8441> : 01:13:596 (3,5) - how u dare raping mah eyes wiz dat shapes? D:
18:20 <Broetchen8441> : cut .mp3's end
18:21 <Broetchen8441> : oh, nvm, taiko continues
18:22 <Broetchen8441> : i suggest you to put the taiko-files as an aditional download and not include them in the map itself
18:22 <marshall_racer> : ...
18:22 <Broetchen8441> : TEEHEE

- Rikkukun - wrote:

I love this song! **

Stefan wrote:

wtf it's in WIP

how dare uu

Rikers wrote:

Ohhhhh boyyyyy this map

I reeeeally wanna just go back and redo this whole thing
Is it possible to rename diffs after submitting
it's been years since I've been around >.> <.<
Skin is cool but I think you should remove it and link it to puush or something

Also, hais I'm back kinda not really

1. 00:26:133 (2,3,4,1) - mach mal ein richtiges square,hehe (ctrl+shift+r oder ctrl+.)
2. 00:27:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - das zickzack pattern ist net gleichmäßig. Schieb mal (4,5) über (2,3) oder umgekehrt, oder (1,2) über (3,4)
3. 00:30:927 (6) - how about gleichmäßiges spacing (4y nach unten)
4. 00:48:187 (7) - müsste eigentlich 4x nach links sein oder?
5. 00:50:584 (1) - sähe gleichmäßig besser aus. hab hier mal nen gleichmäßigen slider gemacht, den du noch um 13° drehen musst :p

   374,192,50704,6,0,B|327:152|327:152|256:97|184:152|184:152|137:192,2,280

   (einfach unter [HitObjects] einfügen)
6. 01:27:979 (2) - soll das auf dem repeat den clap haben o.O
7. 01:42:362 (1) - passt visuell überhaupt nicht da imo

1. 00:05:518 (5,6,7) - die nach untern verschieben, so dass es auch horizontal symmetrisch ist?
2. 00:14:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - iwie stört mich der 5er-stream ;_; zu overmapped iwie
3. 00:19:900 (1) - stack mal das slider-ende ordentlich mit 00:21:339 (3)
4. 00:46:509 (3) - fänds besser wenns ctrl+g wär, auch wenn das ds drunter leidet
5. 00:49:385 (4) - da ist ne whislte zu viel aufm slider-ende. find die whistles generell etwas weird
6. 01:15:514 (5,6) - wie wärs damit http://puu.sh/rhBJe/4dcb357835.jpg

phaZ wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:26:133 (2,3,4,1) - mach mal ein richtiges square,hehe (ctrl+shift+r oder ctrl+.) ehh, ist doch eins, halt nur schräg D:
2. 00:27:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - das zickzack pattern ist net gleichmäßig. Schieb mal (4,5) über (2,3) oder umgekehrt, oder (1,2) über (3,4) ayy
3. 00:30:927 (6) - how about gleichmäßiges spacing (4y nach unten) 8 passt vom spacing her besser
4. 00:48:187 (7) - müsste eigentlich 4x nach links sein oder? Ich wüsste nicht wieso, spacing ist korrekt und es ist in meinen Augen halbwegs ordentlich blanketed (ist das ein Wort?)
5. 00:50:584 (1) - sähe gleichmäßig besser aus. hab hier mal nen gleichmäßigen slider gemacht, den du noch um 13° drehen musst :p

   374,192,50704,6,0,B|327:152|327:152|256:97|184:152|184:152|137:192,2,280

   (einfach unter [HitObjects] einfügen) Ich danke <#
6. 01:27:979 (2) - soll das auf dem repeat den clap haben o.O Mich selber hat der nicht wirklich gestört, hab den aber mal weggemacht wenn er nicht passt
7. 01:42:362 (1) - passt visuell überhaupt nicht da imo hab's (hoffentlich zum guten hin) geändert

[Hard]

1. 00:05:518 (5,6,7) - die nach untern verschieben, so dass es auch horizontal symmetrisch ist? ayy
2. 00:14:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - iwie stört mich der 5er-stream ;_; zu overmapped iwie Ich hab die 2 entfernt, ist so das beste was mir auf anhieb eingefallen ist xd
3. 00:19:900 (1) - stack mal das slider-ende ordentlich mit 00:21:339 (3) ich hab's versucht xd
4. 00:46:509 (3) - fänds besser wenns ctrl+g wär, auch wenn das ds drunter leidet Ich persönlich find's so besser
5. 00:49:385 (4) - da ist ne whislte zu viel aufm slider-ende. find die whistles generell etwas weird ich mag whistles und claps Hab's aber entfernt
6. 01:15:514 (5,6) - wie wärs damit http://puu.sh/rhBJe/4dcb357835.jpg

ayy

gut hab eigentlich nur rum genazit . Gut! könnte vllt beim hitsounden helfen noch, wenns dir nicht zu 100% im moment gefällt Ja, bitte!

marshallracer wrote:

This map has been a meme since its submission

Rikers wrote:

marshallracer wrote:

This map has been a meme since its submission

Oh boy, has it really? ovò

viptwo wrote:

Sup

[Hard]

00:11:271 (3,4,5,6,1) - rotate those by -26° and adjust them so it looks a little more polished and triangle-y yes
00:21:099 (2,3,4) - unsure how i feel about this but i would refrain from hiding a circle behind a slidertrackchanged the pattern a bit
00:22:537 (9) - a little close to 00:22:058 (6,7,8) - , just move it a little further right and then stack 00:22:777 (10) - this ones end onto 00:19:900 (1) - reverse point changed due to previous pattern change
00:24:455 (2) - blanket maybe? yes
00:27:571 (1) - sloppy blanket, shame on you ):
00:32:366 (5) - grrr ^ ;_;
01:11:678 (3) - weird bezier, give the part after the hard angle a little bit of a better curve so it doesnt look so out of place since this is pretty much the only bezier you use (aside from 01:50:032 (1) - ) guess I made it better somehow
01:26:780 (1,2,3) - what's up with the spacing here? comparing to 01:24:863 (1,2,3) - it's way off and i dont see why it should be bigger. Consistency, my friend Idk what happened ): changed it though
01:53:868 (1) - uncomfortably close to 01:52:909 (5) - maybe just make the curve go downwards and sort of "blanket" 01:52:909 (5) - and then just mirror the thing again fixed


[Normal]

00:16:065 (1) - sloppy blanket grrrr FIXED
01:08:322 (1,2,3,4) - i'd rather have these start on 01:07:843 - to avoid sliderends on a big white tick fixed


6 YEARS GOD DAMN

Anyways this is looking very much ready, so, good luck!