1. Armin's Easy (1.29 stars, 133 notes)
2. Hard (4.63 stars, 371 notes)
3. Normal (2.72 stars, 191 notes)

KingsAL2 wrote:

- General
Kiai time is over 1/3 of the map. Remove some is okey. i'll change it later maybe

- Hard
00:43:569 (3,4,5) - This distance is bad
00:46:265 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^Same as
00:51:659 (3,4,5,6,7) - That not the same as 00:52:670 (8,9)
... (All of that are Unrankable)
01:11:041 (5,6) - Sapcing
02:58:569 (1) - Start at 02:58:400
all fixed

- All
Lovely STAR**

ziin wrote:

[video]
00:40:886 - http://puu.sh/3Qq2 find a better copy? The program had errors on compressing. I re-encoded it twice and it's good now. Thanks a lot

[normal]
00:35:816 (1) - boo to the anti jump that I missed.
00:37:164 (3) - nothing on the red tick here, make 3 into a circle on the end blue tick
01:28:400 (4) - ^
All fixed

[hard]
00:18:962 - add note Fixed
00:36:153 (2) - take off a repeat and move it forward 1/4 This would sound weird
see normal for the other 2 notes
01:28:400 (6) - delete I really don't like this
02:09:861 (1) - end this on the white tick, don't silence anything. Fixed

on the kiai, you might shorten all the kiais except for the last one so they just do the fountain. I have no ideea where to end them to fit the music...

Tony wrote:

I have no ideea where to end them to fit the music...

RandomJibberish wrote:

"When I dream of you, my dream is so fearless!"

General
Not having kiai on the last chorus is super awkward. The way I'd cut down on kiai is to not kiai the first two choruses (maybe just a kiai stream at the start) and putting kiai over the last double chorus.
Also, all of the kiai sections start a beat too early - move them 1/1 forward.


Hard
01:37:501 (3,4,5,6,7) - there aren't any other patterns like this in the map, so it kinda sticks out.
02:36:490 - I'd select from here to the end and flip horizontally - there's some awkward underlapping that can be avoided.

Normal looks fine
All fixed

RandomJibberish wrote:

Armin's Easy
All of your symmetrical sliders are super lazy but it looks ok I guess Agreed, but at the same time I cannot see big problems; if they look too ugly I may change them.
01:27:558 (1,2) - I'd prefer if this was just two beats - I think a new player would find this somewhat confusing. I bet this would be "challenging" instead, since I made this before the second chorus' start and considering that it's not too hard to hit.
01:46:265 (6) - Space out a little more so the ends don't touch? You avoided unnecessary overlaps nicely in the rest of the map. intentional stuff

James2250 wrote:

-I guess the 1 second audio lead-in is for the video yes

Hard:
-Why change the combo colors on this difficulty? my fault...fixed

Everything else looks good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank ok <3

James2250 wrote:

Armin's Easy:
00:17:277 (4) - would be nice if you could seperate out the button part of this slider so it is eaiser to read for beginners (especially for anyone on OpenGL etc) Yeah, I'm conscious that this will make rage someone, but I guess that it's okay and fun to play (since the slider velocity is slow too). Plus, the "shadows" on the slider may help a beginner with reading the slider (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/129607, the lighter area)
00:32:108 (2) - ^ same thing with the top part http://puu.sh/4hoC As above
01:51:827 (1) - doesn't really follow anything starting on the blue tick, start at 01:51:996 instead? That was intentiona but, yeah, fixed.
02:10:029 (1) - start at 02:09:861 Agreed.

UnderminE wrote:

I've just realized something.

Normal
01:29:411 (1) - Kiai starts and ends at the same time?
It not starts and ends in the same time. The kiai starts 01:29:411 and ends 01:29:749. That kiai section is for chorus start. In game play appears star fountain http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/129795

staar~

gorlum wrote:

Can't argue with that...
But why Mika Newton? D: We have much better singers :<

kaxaru wrote:

sorry,but this is shit

Blue Dragon wrote:

Very nice map, though I quite didn't like the 1/4 patterns such as 02:23:344 (3,4,5,6,7) . I liked it a lot though ~