Mr Color wrote:
Red text is unrankable.
Bold I heavily recommend changing.
Underlined I recommend changing.
neutral text are suggestions.
[General]
-That background is NSFW, I don't think it's good to keep it because of how gory it is. No it's not and it's not that gory it's just blood.
-There is a HUGE difficulty gap between Normal and Hyper. I know it's common in IIDX adapted beatmaps, but still. Well,err..... I can't force Faust to downgrade his awesome diff.
-Please change that white combo color. Done.
[Beginner]
00:14:666 (3) - Overlapping on an easy. Ugly and confusing for new players. Done.
00:15:999 (1) - ^ Done.
00:19:333 (2,3,4) - ^ Done.
00:27:999 (1) - ^ Done.
00:45:333 (1) - ^ Done.
00:58:666 (1) - ^ Done.
01:11:999 (3) - New combo? Done.
01:17:333 (3) - ^ Done.
01:19:333 (6) - Maybe move this somewhere else since it can throw new players off? Done.
01:25:333 (4) - ^ Done.
01:35:999 (1) - Same overlapping thingy. I HARDLY see any overlapping there but ok.
01:40:666 (4) - Bad spacing. Done, fixed.
[Normal]
Okay, if I pointed out everytime you overlap stuff I wouldn't be done until next month. Just telling that this is rather meh on a normal.
00:42:666 (1,2,3,4) - Ow ow ow ow ow. Please don't do that on a normal. With how high the AR is and the circle size it is guaranteed to be misread. That was my unique style but ok i guess T.T
00:47:999 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:50:666 (1) -Extend this 1/1 further and delete the circle. ok.
00:57:833 (3) - Delete this note? Done.
01:00:499 (3) - ^ Done.
01:09:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, too confusing. Please separate (1) and (4). Done.
01:18:666 (3,4,5) - Isn't that a bit hard for a normal? And at 180bpm... It's kind of gay to get rid of it, I actually enjoyed those >.>
01:22:666 (1,2,3,4,5) -^ Sigh.....ok.
01:27:999 (1,2,3) -^ Done.
[Hyper]
Apparently this is a guest difficulty, but I would suggest to compress the streams at least as much as they are on the Another, because the streams are actually harder than on the Another (and I'd like to remind you, you shouldn't normally use streams on hard difficulties, especially with such a bpm)
00:25:249 (7) - Delete this note?
00:45:999 (1,2,3,4) - Move this combo somewhere else, it's way too hard to read for a Hard.
00:53:666 (3,4) - Decrease the spacing, this is too hard.
00:54:166 (6,7) - ^
00:54:333 (7) - New combo?
00:54:666 (9,10) - Decrease the spacing, this is still too hard.
01:02:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stream then anti-jump - no. Please redo this combo because it will throw players off.
01:36:333 (3,4) - Decrease the spacing, this is still too hard.
01:36:833 (6,7) - ^
[Another]
00:01:333 (7) - New combo? Done.
00:01:999 (1) - Delete new combo? Done.
00:05:833 (4,5,6) - Please don't stack this with (2), we just got out of a spinner and this is barely readable. Done.
00:12:833 (9) - Unintuitive and hardly readable jump. Done.
00:30:583 (10) - Delete this note and add a kick to the slider? Done.
00:42:833 (2) - Notes on the center are barely readable just after a spinner especially with this AR. Done.
00:44:333 (8) - New combo? Done.
00:44:333 (8,9,10,11,12) - Horrible readability. Done.
00:47:166 (x) - Add a note here? Done.
00:49:666 (7) - New combo? Done.
The rest of the map is way too confusing and/or difficult for me to actually be able to mod correctly, but all and all this is not really fun to play. The constant stacks and overlaps make it insanely hard to sightread with the standard skin and the white combo color doesn't help it.
So all and all I'm pretty disappointed with this beatmap since I love the song, I hope changes will be made to make it more fun and readable. Maybe you'll get my star then. Ouch......