Hey Kawayi Rika
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General]
- You should capitalize Little Busters! -
Ecstasy Ver.- considering all ranked map of this song does this and a google search show this as well. Also, since there's a full version of the song, please add short version somewhere. so like this Little Busters! -Ecstacy Ver.-
(Short Ver.) or like one of the ranked map Little Busters!
-Ecstacy Short Ver.- If you really don't want to, add it to tags atleast.
- Little Buster! EX is a 18+ game, so consider the following tags
hentai eroge. Also consider these as well,
visual novel galge gal game (if someone search gal or game, they will not find this song with current tags) and
visual arts (if you add visual novel, do not write visual)
- Maybe change slider tick rate of Ozzy's Little Taiko to 2 for consistency? But I'm not really sure what slider tick does to taiko so your choice.
I guess that's all, I don't check skin, sorry if I miss anything there.
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Busters!]
00:15:909 (1) - Perhaps map through this spinner? I feel like there is too many spinner here. If not, end it at 00:17:697. Feel weird to have a break between the two spinners.
01:18:094 (1,2,3) - I prefer a repeating slider here, especially since she is holding a note here.
http://puu.sh/94yM02:18:094 (1,2.3) - Feel really clustered together. I would make add a repeat to (2) and remove (3) then place something like this
http://puu.sh/94zS. If you can adjust it so that it doesn't overlap with 02:16:902 (4), would be much better.
02:24:849 (2,3,4) - Repeating slider, same reason as 01:18:094.
02:30:809 (3,4,5) - You should do something like 01:24:055 (3,4,5) .
02:32:796 (2,3,4) -
http://puu.sh/94AT Something like this if you can, you'll have to adjust the spacing so that this pattern work.
02:46:704 (1,2,3,4) - Curving all the slider seems nicer
http://puu.sh/94Ce.
Pretty nice.
[
Rin]
Nothing to mention, everything looks good to me.
[
Zero]
00:27:233 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would prefer compressed stream (0.8x/0.9x spacing) for this.
00:31:604 (1,2) - I like the feel more like this
http://puu.sh/94If01:05:776 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as 00:27:233, but I guess it's fine since this stream is curved ,so it play much nicer.
01:13:723 (3,4) - I feel it's nicer to play if you remove (4) and add a repeat to (3). No need to fix spacing. It also make the patterns here nice and symmetrical.
01:24:452 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Compressed stream (0.5x) feel much nicer to make it feel like a drumroll leading to a climax. Right now, I don't really get this feel.
http://puu.sh/94Jr and snap (7.8) to 1.5x distant snap
http://puu.sh/94K1.
01:35:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:27:233 (0.8x/0.9x) feel nicer.
02:24:253 (6) - I would make a circle (6) and a slider (7) instead and put a jump for (7) since the vocal feels like it. So like this
http://puu.sh/94KL.
All is suggestion, just not fond of the spacing of the stream, prefer compressed.
[
Rika]
00:24:849 (3) - I don't see a reason to do a jump here. If you want to do a jump, I suggest making 2 hit circles and doing this
http://puu.sh/94Ln. Fit nicer with the flow.
00:27:829 (10) - Feel like a new combo should be here, make it easier to see the stack as well.
00:33:591 (5,6) -
space out maybe? It's fine through
00:48:492 (6,7,8) - Like this? Stack (8) with (5). Sort of flow breaking to stack here
http://puu.sh/94N5.
00:53:657 (8) - This should be a jump imo, since the drum is accented.
01:03:988 (3) - Feel it should be a jump for similar reason. Perhaps 1.5x distant snapping and place here?
http://puu.sh/94NL01:08:160 (5,6) - Jump be on (6) and not (5). Since the vocal is accented at (6). I guess this?
http://puu.sh/94Ov.
02:39:551 (6) - Vocal is accented here, a little bit weird not to have a jump, perhaps this?
http://puu.sh/94PuJust make sure to put jumps at the right notes, I notice some jumps, you put the jump on an unaccented note so it felt weird.
No star since this map doesn't need it, but looks good in general.
Good luck!
all suggestions