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YUI - again [Osu|OsuMania|Taiko]

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DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年4月5日 at 下午 02:28:52

Artist: YUI
Title: again
Source: 鋼の錬金術師 FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST
Tags: Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood FMA2 FMA bones opening Yia Loneight M_o_m_o Konei
BPM: 140
Filesize: 19688kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.42 stars, 91 notes)
  2. Hard (3.58 stars, 264 notes)
  3. Insane (3.87 stars, 300 notes)
  4. Konei's Normal (1.91 stars, 103 notes)
  5. L18's 4K NM - 4Key (1.96 stars, 457 notes)
  6. L18's 7K HD - 7Key (2.65 stars, 653 notes)
  7. Momo's 4K HD - 4Key (2.74 stars, 578 notes)
  8. Momo's 7K MX - 7Key (3.77 stars, 832 notes)
  9. Momo's 7K NM - 7Key (1.77 stars, 429 notes)
  10. Relaxing (2.01 stars, 152 notes)
  11. Yia's Muzukashii (2.25 stars, 269 notes)
  12. Yia's Oni (3.31 stars, 402 notes)
Download: YUI - again
Download: YUI - again (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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16th
Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood OP




Easy - Done by me (05/15/2014)
Konei's Normal - Done by Konei This Sky (05/25/2014)
Relaxing = Normal+ - Done by me (05/16/2014)
Hard - Done by me (05/16/2014)
Insane - Done by me (05/16/2014)
Yia's Muzukashii & Yia's Oni - Done - by [Kirisame-Marisa] (5/15/2014)
L18's 4K NM -Done by Loneight (05/16/2014)
Momo's 7K NM - Done by [ M o m o ] (05/29/2014)
Momo's 4K HD - Done by [ M o m o ] (05/29/2014)
L18's 7K HD - Done by Loneight (05/16/2014)
Momo's 7K MX - Done by [ M o m o ] (05/29/2014)
Skin - Done by S o a p (05/29/2014)
Last edited by DarknessAngel , edited 174 times in total.
I will be back
40 posts
Joined August 2010
I will be back



Music Track調到1或1.5會比較好~
不然剛開始太快OAO
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
Hi 鬼畜mapper DarknessAngel

General
- 感觉offset好不准
- tag加上s_h_i_o_n 和bones(骨头社)
- 换张漂亮的图 >:(
- 有mod了随时通知我~
- 稍后附上我的mod
- kiai time ends here: 01:24:260 or 01:25:974 (我的normal没加kiai 看你决
-combo 颜色非常混乱. 建议重排 (紧跟vocal 或者以jump分或者长的白线add new combo

Normal
- 这真的是normal吗?
还没做完 汗
索性不要了吧 后面个hard做的还好


Hard
00:15:695 (9) - new combo
00:16:124 (1) - remove new combo
00:26:195 (4) - new combo
00:55:338 (1) - remove this note please
01:10:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -这堆跳...能换么? 比如换成滑条什么的
01:14:409 (1) - 这里几个排的也不好。而且跳接在spinner后,太有压力了
01:22:874 (4,5) -
01:26:617 (4) - What's this green line for? Delete it if useless.


Insane
00:49:546 (7) - new combo please
00:52:975 (3) - ^
01:00:689 (8) - ^
01:26:617 (6) - Useless green line

Star~

Download: YUI - Again(TV size) (DarknessAngel) [S h i o n's Normal].osu

Download: hitsounds.rar
Last edited by S h i o n , edited 2 times in total.
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

S h i o n wrote:

Hi 鬼畜mapper DarknessAngel 哦草，我還覺得不夠觸說...

General

- 感觉offset好不准 這還是別人幫我算的...跟原版的差7ms，他說這樣比較準= =(我也這麼認為)
- tag加上s_h_i_o_n 和bones(骨头社) 哦哦，了解
- 换张漂亮的图 >:( ...我聽看看更多人的意見= =
- 有mod了随时通知我~ ...哦好
- 稍后附上我的mod 我期待著。話說，我還有個EZ要做，Normal快好了，預計這禮拜(Sat)完成

Star~
謝謝star0.0！
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

I will be back wrote:




Music Track調到1或1.5會比較好~
不然剛開始太快OAO
我也覺得剛開始太快而不知道怎麼解決呢
原來還有這個功能啊
聽你一說我才曉得
謝謝~
Breeze
osu! Alumni
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Breeze
Timing help

BPM/Offset

140/705

good luck
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

Breeze wrote:

Timing help

BPM/Offset

140/705

good luck
...offset還真的錯了啊
3Q了Breeze :)
(我不知道該不該給KD耶...)
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
Timing section and some hitsounds have been fixed after change of offset.

Please download and cover for the original one.

No kud.

One more word, you should give Breeze 1kd.

Download: YUI - Again(TV size) (DarknessAngel) [S h i o n's Normal].osu
Gottwald
128 posts
Joined March 2009
Gottwald
hi :)

Insane AR+1

00:49:133 (4,5,6) - newcolor

00:49:562 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - newcolor

fight :)
I will be back
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I will be back
剛剛拿到的kd馬上就用掉了~

S-T-A-R~
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

I will be back wrote:

剛剛拿到的kd馬上就用掉了~

S-T-A-R~
謝謝STAR~ ><
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

Gottwald wrote:

hi :)

Insane AR+1 It would look bad if I do this :(

00:49:133 (4,5,6) - newcolor No

00:49:562 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - newcolor OK

fight :)
Thank you~
Gamu
Elite Mapper
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Joined December 2010
Gamu
hi- :)

[General]

  1. Tags : "s h i o n" remove. "shion" change please (that s h i o n, divided the tags)
  2. Title : Again (TV size) change (space!)
  3. Song setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 1 → 2
All suggestions

[S h i o n's Normal]

  1. 00:11:419 (1) - finish add (normal)
  2. 00:46:990 (1) - ^
  3. 00:53:847 (1) - soft → normal
[Normal]

  1. 00:46:347 (1) - finish add (normal)
[Hard]

  1. AR-1
  2. Wow. fine~
[Insane]

  1. AR+1
  2. 00:33:062 (2) - whistle remove
  3. 01:00:704 (8) - new combo add
Good map!!!!!!
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

-Gamu- wrote:

hi- :)

[General]

  1. Tags : "s h i o n" remove. "shion" change please (that s h i o n, divided the tags)OK
  2. Title : Again (TV size) change (space!)OK
  3. Song setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 1 → 2
I think 1s is enough

All suggestions

[S h i o n's Normal]

  1. 00:11:419 (1) - finish add (normal)
  2. 00:46:990 (1) - ^
  3. 00:53:847 (1) - soft → normal
All done
[Normal]

  1. 00:46:347 (1) - finish add (normal)
OK

[Hard]

  1. AR-1 No
  2. Wow. fine~
[Insane]

  1. AR+1
  2. 00:33:062 (2) - whistle remove
  3. 01:00:704 (8) - new combo add
All done
Good map!!!!!!
Thank you for your modding~:)
spboxer3
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= =我想幫你mod 但是你不給力阿
請重新上傳一次在PM我
我在幫你mod>_>
xsrsbsns
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xsrsbsns
Title should be "again (TV Size)"
A --> a
do not kudosu
Weez
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Weez

xsrsbsns wrote:

Title should be "again (TV Size)"
A --> a
do not kudosu
According to wikipedia, Again is right...
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

Weezy wrote:

xsrsbsns wrote:

Title should be "again (TV Size)"
A --> a
do not kudosu
According to wikipedia, Again is right...
:3
xsrsbsns
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xsrsbsns
>wikipedia
nope

from her homepage http://www.yui-net.com/
SPOILER
Breeze
osu! Alumni
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Breeze
and according to video
it should be "again"

DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

Breeze wrote:

and according to video
it should be "again"
[attachment=0:4e6e9]0.jpg[/attachment:4e6e9]


Weezy wrote:

xsrsbsns wrote:

Title should be "again (TV Size)"
A --> a
do not kudosu
According to wikipedia, Again is right...


xsrsbsns wrote:

>wikipedia
nope

from her homepage http://www.yui-net.com/
SPOILER

Thank you,guys~ :)
terametis
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terametis
Recheck!
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

terametis wrote:

Recheck!
Why...?I think it is no problem... :?
terametis
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terametis
Oh,really?
I cannot download.
I retry downloading later.
Weez
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Weez

terametis wrote:

Recheck!
Yepp not working


Full submit and it should be ok
Also I'm gonna mod this later, but I'll just ask now.....can i please make a guest diff I always loved this song >.<
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

Weezy wrote:

terametis wrote:

Recheck!
Yepp not working


Full submit and it should be ok
Also I'm gonna mod this later, but I'll just ask now.....can i please make a guest diff I always loved this song >.<

Yeah,welcome.You can do any difficulty,but I hope you can do a hard diff(5☆)
I got it. It has been fixed. :)
terametis
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terametis
Hi~ :)
These are all suggestions.

[Insane]
00:13:562 (7)　　　　　change whistle
00:14:419 (2)　　　　　^
00:14:633 (2)　　　　　remove finish
00:14:847 (3)　　　　　change finish
00:15:062 (3)　　　　　remove clap
00:15:276 (4)　　　　　change whistle
00:15:490 (4)　　　　　remove finish
00:15:705 (5)　　　　　change finish
00:22:990 (5)　　　　　^
00:23:419 (6)　　　　　add whistle
00:23:847 (7)　　　　　remove whistle
00:24:276 (2)　　　　　add whistle
00:24:705 (4)　　　　　change finish
00:25:133 (5)　　　　　add whistle
00:25:347 (6)　　　　　remove whistle
00:27:276 (3)　　　　　remove finish
00:27:705 (3)　　　　　add whistle
00:28:562 (6)　　　　　^
00:28:776 (7)　　　　　add finish
00:28:990 (7)　　　　　remove whistle
00:29:419 (2)　　　　　add whistle
00:29:847 (4)　　　　　change finish
00:31:562 (4)　　　　　add finish
00:32:205 (1)　　　　　change finish
00:32:062 (2)　　　　　remove whistle on the slider's rail
00:36:705 (1)　　　　　change finish
00:38:419 (8)　　　　　^
00:41:847 (5)　　　　　^
00:43:562 (6)　　　　　^
00:45:276 (3)　　　　　^
00:45:919 (5)　　　　　add finish
IMO.
I think ,clap sound's does not suit this music.How about looking for another custom sound?


I wish your map is Ranked.star~ :)
bye~
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

terametis wrote:

Hi~ :)
These are all suggestions.

[Insane]
00:13:562 (7)　　　　　change whistle
00:14:419 (2)　　　　　^
00:14:633 (2)　　　　　remove finish
00:14:847 (3)　　　　　change finish
00:15:062 (3)　　　　　remove clap
00:15:276 (4)　　　　　change whistle
00:15:490 (4)　　　　　remove finish
00:15:705 (5)　　　　　change finish
00:22:990 (5)　　　　　^
00:23:419 (6)　　　　　add whistle
00:23:847 (7)　　　　　remove whistle
00:24:276 (2)　　　　　add whistle
00:24:705 (4)　　　　　change finish
00:25:133 (5)　　　　　add whistle
00:25:347 (6)　　　　　remove whistle
00:27:276 (3)　　　　　remove finish
00:27:705 (3)　　　　　add whistle
00:28:562 (6)　　　　　^
00:28:776 (7)　　　　　add finish
00:28:990 (7)　　　　　remove whistle
00:29:419 (2)　　　　　add whistle
00:29:847 (4)　　　　　change finish
00:31:562 (4)　　　　　add finish
00:32:205 (1)　　　　　change finish
00:32:062 (2)　　　　　remove whistle on the slider's rail
00:36:705 (1)　　　　　change finish
00:38:419 (8)　　　　　^
00:41:847 (5)　　　　　^
00:43:562 (6)　　　　　^
00:45:276 (3)　　　　　^
00:45:919 (5)　　　　　add finish
IMO.
I think ,clap sound's does not suit this music.How about looking for another custom sound?


I wish your map is Ranked.star~ :)
bye~

all fixed... orz
Thank you for your modding~ :)
RikoShigeru
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RikoShigeru
how does this one got graved? is properly mapped
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

RikoShigeru wrote:

how does this one got graved? is properly mapped
Because I mapped too bad xD I'm remaking anyways.
Mikazuki
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Mikazuki
irc mod
2014-05-16 20:10 Mikazuki: i'm back
2014-05-16 20:10 Mikazuki: 先打hyper试试
2014-05-16 20:11 DarknessAngel: K
2014-05-16 20:12 Mikazuki: 为啥这么卡手..
2014-05-16 20:14 DarknessAngel: :O
2014-05-16 20:14 Mikazuki: 嗯，节奏应该都读懂你下的了
2014-05-16 20:14 Mikazuki: 某去edit试着指点不顺手的地方把
2014-05-16 20:14 DarknessAngel: 恩
2014-05-16 20:16 Mikazuki: 00:49:562 -
2014-05-16 20:17 Mikazuki: hyper
2014-05-16 20:17 Mikazuki: 为什么要接回转滑条..
2014-05-16 20:18 Mikazuki: 00:51:919 (6) -
2014-05-16 20:18 DarknessAngel: 如果接note感覺很單調 感覺也不大對
2014-05-16 20:18 Mikazuki: 之前那个直接五连呗
2014-05-16 20:18 Mikazuki: 然后这个
2014-05-16 20:18 Mikazuki: 感觉应该对齐最后那个滑条的末尾的NOTE
2014-05-16 20:18 Mikazuki: 你这样对着头很容易让人MISS那个滑条尾巴断尾
2014-05-16 20:19 DarknessAngel: 我轉一下整個趨勢的角度好了
2014-05-16 20:19 Mikazuki: 00:56:419 (4) -
2014-05-16 20:19 Mikazuki: 这个滑条 = =
2014-05-16 20:19 Mikazuki: 莫名极了
2014-05-16 20:19 Mikazuki: 某好像之前DT就是断这个
2014-05-16 20:20 Mikazuki: hmm
2014-05-16 20:20 Mikazuki: 总结下感想 就是这里很难读清
2014-05-16 20:20 Mikazuki: 00:58:455 (5) -
2014-05-16 20:21 Mikazuki: 这里和刚刚那个差不多
2014-05-16 20:21 DarknessAngel: 等會我改下
2014-05-16 20:21 Mikazuki: 感觉是你想做出冲击力之类的感觉，但是这么短滑条又超容易脱手
2014-05-16 20:21 Mikazuki: 因为之后还有NOTE，AR7下很容易直接看到所以会提前准备切指，这个短滑条就..
2014-05-16 20:21 DarknessAngel: 其實可以順勢滑出:P 我的想法是這樣
2014-05-16 20:22 Mikazuki: 嗯
2014-05-16 20:22 Mikazuki: 某其实看出来了
2014-05-16 20:22 Mikazuki: 但是这个短了
2014-05-16 20:22 Mikazuki: 你也许可以试试加长点？
2014-05-16 20:23 Mikazuki: 01:18:276 (4) -
2014-05-16 20:23 Mikazuki: 这里太近了感觉
2014-05-16 20:23 Mikazuki: ok 就这么多
2014-05-16 20:24 Mikazuki: 现在某去看看ano
2014-05-16 20:25 Mikazuki: 哦再说句hyper,虽然根据以往hyper diff的经验，这种图一般都是比较难读的(打的一般也是新手)，不过某觉得定位是hard的话，没必要让人觉得不舒服，140的bpm在那，这样的组合排列打的有点抑郁
2014-05-16 20:27 DarknessAngel: OK都改好了:D
2014-05-16 20:28 DarknessAngel: 應該有比較好 Another直接開始? 還是先給你看改得怎麼樣?
2014-05-16 20:28 Mikazuki: 某在找
2014-05-16 20:28 Mikazuki: 00:58:133 (4) -
2014-05-16 20:28 DarknessAngel: 好
2014-05-16 20:28 Mikazuki: 这里感觉不太好但是不知该怎么说
2014-05-16 20:29 Mikazuki: 太跟vocal了？
2014-05-16 20:30 Mikazuki: 01:08:955 (7) -
2014-05-16 20:30 DarknessAngel: 這個我再問問看其他人意見好了
2014-05-16 20:30 DarknessAngel: 2連感覺是有點不好打
2014-05-16 20:30 Mikazuki: 有点急促了
2014-05-16 20:30 Mikazuki: 二连某到不是不会
2014-05-16 20:30 DarknessAngel: 改成3連?
2014-05-16 20:30 Mikazuki: 单点单点二连单点滑条单点滑条
2014-05-16 20:30 Mikazuki: 这样就。。
2014-05-16 20:31 Mikazuki: 嗯，刚说的这个7改成三连会好不少
2014-05-16 20:31 DarknessAngel: 恩lol
2014-05-16 20:31 DarknessAngel: 不過最前面那個我還是保留好了
2014-05-16 20:31 DarknessAngel: 個人還挺喜歡這樣擺
2014-05-16 20:31 Mikazuki: 前面的某也不知道该怎么说
2014-05-16 20:31 Mikazuki: 就是不太喜欢把
2014-05-16 20:31 Mikazuki: 个人不喜欢短滑条
2014-05-16 20:32 Mikazuki: 心里阴影
2014-05-16 20:32 DarknessAngel: 恩恩
2014-05-16 20:32 Mikazuki: 嗯 就这些
2014-05-16 20:32 Mikazuki: 看了一遍感觉其他的都是可以比较简单读出来的
2014-05-16 20:32 Mikazuki: 哦对了
2014-05-16 20:33 Mikazuki: 建议上 140的这样排列的图
2014-05-16 20:33 Mikazuki: 还是AR8 OD7把
2014-05-16 20:33 Mikazuki: 应该会让整体打起来的感觉好很多
2014-05-16 20:33 DarknessAngel: 恩 打起來舒服點
2014-05-16 20:33 DarknessAngel: 好 記得/savelog貼到討論串 我給你KD
2014-05-16 20:34 Mikazuki: .
2014-05-16 20:34 Mikazuki: 好啊
DNA加油哦！
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

Mikazuki wrote:

irc mod
2014-05-16 20:10 Mikazuki: i'm back
2014-05-16 20:10 Mikazuki: 先打hyper试试
2014-05-16 20:11 DarknessAngel: K
2014-05-16 20:12 Mikazuki: 为啥这么卡手..
2014-05-16 20:14 DarknessAngel: :O
2014-05-16 20:14 Mikazuki: 嗯，节奏应该都读懂你下的了
2014-05-16 20:14 Mikazuki: 某去edit试着指点不顺手的地方把
2014-05-16 20:14 DarknessAngel: 恩
2014-05-16 20:16 Mikazuki: 00:49:562 -
2014-05-16 20:17 Mikazuki: hyper
2014-05-16 20:17 Mikazuki: 为什么要接回转滑条..
2014-05-16 20:18 Mikazuki: 00:51:919 (6) -
2014-05-16 20:18 DarknessAngel: 如果接note感覺很單調 感覺也不大對
2014-05-16 20:18 Mikazuki: 之前那个直接五连呗
2014-05-16 20:18 Mikazuki: 然后这个
2014-05-16 20:18 Mikazuki: 感觉应该对齐最后那个滑条的末尾的NOTE
2014-05-16 20:18 Mikazuki: 你这样对着头很容易让人MISS那个滑条尾巴断尾
2014-05-16 20:19 DarknessAngel: 我轉一下整個趨勢的角度好了
2014-05-16 20:19 Mikazuki: 00:56:419 (4) -
2014-05-16 20:19 Mikazuki: 这个滑条 = =
2014-05-16 20:19 Mikazuki: 莫名极了
2014-05-16 20:19 Mikazuki: 某好像之前DT就是断这个
2014-05-16 20:20 Mikazuki: hmm
2014-05-16 20:20 Mikazuki: 总结下感想 就是这里很难读清
2014-05-16 20:20 Mikazuki: 00:58:455 (5) -
2014-05-16 20:21 Mikazuki: 这里和刚刚那个差不多
2014-05-16 20:21 DarknessAngel: 等會我改下
2014-05-16 20:21 Mikazuki: 感觉是你想做出冲击力之类的感觉，但是这么短滑条又超容易脱手
2014-05-16 20:21 Mikazuki: 因为之后还有NOTE，AR7下很容易直接看到所以会提前准备切指，这个短滑条就..
2014-05-16 20:21 DarknessAngel: 其實可以順勢滑出:P 我的想法是這樣
2014-05-16 20:22 Mikazuki: 嗯
2014-05-16 20:22 Mikazuki: 某其实看出来了
2014-05-16 20:22 Mikazuki: 但是这个短了
2014-05-16 20:22 Mikazuki: 你也许可以试试加长点？
2014-05-16 20:23 Mikazuki: 01:18:276 (4) -
2014-05-16 20:23 Mikazuki: 这里太近了感觉
2014-05-16 20:23 Mikazuki: ok 就这么多
2014-05-16 20:24 Mikazuki: 现在某去看看ano
2014-05-16 20:25 Mikazuki: 哦再说句hyper,虽然根据以往hyper diff的经验，这种图一般都是比较难读的(打的一般也是新手)，不过某觉得定位是hard的话，没必要让人觉得不舒服，140的bpm在那，这样的组合排列打的有点抑郁
2014-05-16 20:27 DarknessAngel: OK都改好了:D
2014-05-16 20:28 DarknessAngel: 應該有比較好 Another直接開始? 還是先給你看改得怎麼樣?
2014-05-16 20:28 Mikazuki: 某在找
2014-05-16 20:28 Mikazuki: 00:58:133 (4) -
2014-05-16 20:28 DarknessAngel: 好
2014-05-16 20:28 Mikazuki: 这里感觉不太好但是不知该怎么说
2014-05-16 20:29 Mikazuki: 太跟vocal了？
2014-05-16 20:30 Mikazuki: 01:08:955 (7) -
2014-05-16 20:30 DarknessAngel: 這個我再問問看其他人意見好了
2014-05-16 20:30 DarknessAngel: 2連感覺是有點不好打
2014-05-16 20:30 Mikazuki: 有点急促了
2014-05-16 20:30 Mikazuki: 二连某到不是不会
2014-05-16 20:30 DarknessAngel: 改成3連?
2014-05-16 20:30 Mikazuki: 单点单点二连单点滑条单点滑条
2014-05-16 20:30 Mikazuki: 这样就。。
2014-05-16 20:31 Mikazuki: 嗯，刚说的这个7改成三连会好不少
2014-05-16 20:31 DarknessAngel: 恩lol
2014-05-16 20:31 DarknessAngel: 不過最前面那個我還是保留好了
2014-05-16 20:31 DarknessAngel: 個人還挺喜歡這樣擺
2014-05-16 20:31 Mikazuki: 前面的某也不知道该怎么说
2014-05-16 20:31 Mikazuki: 就是不太喜欢把
2014-05-16 20:31 Mikazuki: 个人不喜欢短滑条
2014-05-16 20:32 Mikazuki: 心里阴影
2014-05-16 20:32 DarknessAngel: 恩恩
2014-05-16 20:32 Mikazuki: 嗯 就这些
2014-05-16 20:32 Mikazuki: 看了一遍感觉其他的都是可以比较简单读出来的
2014-05-16 20:32 Mikazuki: 哦对了
2014-05-16 20:33 Mikazuki: 建议上 140的这样排列的图
2014-05-16 20:33 Mikazuki: 还是AR8 OD7把
2014-05-16 20:33 Mikazuki: 应该会让整体打起来的感觉好很多
2014-05-16 20:33 DarknessAngel: 恩 打起來舒服點
2014-05-16 20:33 DarknessAngel: 好 記得/savelog貼到討論串 我給你KD
2014-05-16 20:34 Mikazuki: .
2014-05-16 20:34 Mikazuki: 好啊
DNA加油哦！

3Q的說\:D/ !!
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
NavyYa
I'm poor modder with no ranked map..
My mod will not be helpful for you.sorry :cry:



[Basic]

Please delete break time?? I think TV size map don't need it..

00:48:705 - 00:55:133
00:55:562 - 01:01:990 << They are identical rhythm but have different slider velocity..

I think second part have to change to 1.75x

01:06:705 - feels empty? add slider like 01:05:847 (1)

01:13:133 - clap ?

01:22:990 (5) - I recommend this rhythm





[Advance]

00:27:705 (3) - delete and reverse 00:26:847 (2) ?

00:48:919 (2) , 00:50:633 (2) 00:52:347 (2)
1.75x sliders are confused.. how about changing them simply circle? :D




[Hyper]


00:12:062 (1,2) - a little far? I recommend stack

00:15:276 (6) , 00:18:705 (6) - - how about 2 circles instead of slider?

00:19:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think these notes are pretty, but too hard.. (6,7,8,9 are okay)

00:51:919 (7,1,2) - ^
00:57:062 (8,1,2) - ^




[Another]

Good diff. I can't find any problem :lol:


Give me kudosu I will use this map ~~ hehe
Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
Aye!

General


  1. Offset is actually 698.
  2. Disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks, there is no SB.
  3. The song ending is a bit weird, because it ends suddenly, but I think there is no problem lol.
  4. You don't have to use an Inherited point if you want to change "Soft" to "Normal", you can use http://puu.sh/8OFR8.png, with the selected object.

Basic



00:12:276 (2,3) - Move these to x252 y284, so you can stack with 00:09:276 (2) -

00:29:419 (3) - You should end with a note, sliders ending at a bit white tick is ugly ):

00:31:562 (1,2,3,1,2) - You can use more sliders here. *Suggestion*

00:38:419 (5) - You can move it to x303 y215, so you can overlap correctly with 00:36:705 (3) -

00:37:990 (4,5) - You can improve this blanket!

00:48:705 - This suddenly SV change is not good for new players, I would recommend to don't change SV in Easy diffs, keep this at mind for you next Easy map.

00:56:419 (2,1,2,1,2) - You should keep the consistence like starting with slider, then circle, slider, circle, and keep going...

01:02:847 (2,4) - I really don't like sliders like this, you can make a better pattern like http://puu.sh/8ODWw.png (:

Advance



Isn't the correct name "Advanced"? :!:


You can really improve in this diff, like making better patterns, better sliders, and etc...

00:14:205 (1) - You can do a better slider like http://puu.sh/8OEnt.png.

00:48:919 (2) - Sliders like these are not a good recommendation, a high SV change suddenly, and 1/4, because there is no 1/4 rhythm, only 1/2.

For the next Normal you map, keep at mind the things above (:


Hyper



00:00:705 (2,3) - You can improve the blanket with (2) and (3) http://puu.sh/8OEYh.png.

00:09:276 (2,3) - Same thing.

00:43:562 (9) - Ctrl + G Feels good, imo.

01:01:776 (3,4) - This pattern is a bit confuse you can make a pattern like 00:52:562 (1,2) - but with a higher spacing.

01:16:776 (2,3) - You can improve the blanket.

01:18:276 (4,5) - You can delete 01:18:276 (4) - and add a note in the white tick, or you can put (5) closer to (4).

01:19:990 (3,4,5,6,7) - You can improve this star pattern :c


Another



00:33:062 (1,2,3) - You can improve the blankts.

00:36:919 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as above about the star pattern, you can improve it.

You can improve another blankets in this diff.

Yeah, this is it, good luck ranking!
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
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00:53 DarknessAngel: 你好 ~
00:53 fanzhen0019: ahi o.o
00:54 DarknessAngel: 想跟你求個mod不知道行不行 :>
00:54 fanzhen0019: 什么曲子呢o.o
00:54 *DarknessAngel is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/423640 YUI - again (TV size)]
00:54 DarknessAngel: 這個~
00:55 fanzhen0019: wa
00:55 fanzhen0019: 哇
00:55 DarknessAngel: :D
00:58 DarknessAngel: 如果可以的話 謝謝了lol
00:59 fanzhen0019: 印象中你的图没什么挑的啊:o
00:59 DarknessAngel: :o
01:00 DarknessAngel: 我不敢這麼自信 還是請有經驗的mapper/modder檢查會更好:D
01:02 fanzhen0019: 你rank的图都比我多啦@.@
01:03 DarknessAngel: 不能那樣判斷 ~ 每個人會用不同角度看事情，找到不一樣的問題
01:03 fanzhen0019: w
01:04 fanzhen0019: 来吧
01:04 DarknessAngel: 不管什麼樣的modder我都歡迎來mod我的圖啊
01:04 fanzhen0019: 00:01:347 (3) -
01:04 DarknessAngel: 欸? IRC嗎?
01:04 fanzhen0019: 比较懒orz 就irc吧
01:04 fanzhen0019: 我也好久没有mod过了
01:04 DarknessAngel: 恩 那稍等一下
01:05 fanzhen0019: 所以给的都是建议:3
01:06 fanzhen0019: 00:01:347 (3) - 个人觉得的话 这里的stack比较奇怪 因为你这个难度别的地方没有这么叠着的梗
01:07 DarknessAngel: 恩 其實那種重疊看起來不會特別奇怪 因為我有時候會在我的圖上放這種排列
01:07 fanzhen0019: http://puu.sh/8OFKm.jpg
01:07 fanzhen0019: 我的建议是这么摆成对称的o.o
01:11 DarknessAngel: 可我還想要包住00:00:490 (1)做個blanket 但這樣的話flow就不大舒適
01:11 fanzhen0019: 或者你考虑1 2 3 4做一个五角星
01:13 fanzhen0019: or..
01:13 fanzhen0019: http://puu.sh/8OG8m.jpg
01:14 DarknessAngel: 嘛好吧 我改了另一種方式
01:14 fanzhen0019: 好的o.o
01:15 fanzhen0019: 01:05:847 (2,3,4) - 然后是这里感觉无序 按你的风格应该是不想摆成平行吧
01:15 fanzhen0019: 不过这么看起来太随意啦
01:16 DarknessAngel: 其實我有在角度上做一些想法
01:18 fanzhen0019: 诶
01:18 DarknessAngel: 1 3和2 4一組
01:18 DarknessAngel: 偶爾重疊感覺也無傷大雅 我覺得
01:18 fanzhen0019: 但是因为是交互的 你要是不提肯定看不出来o.o
01:19 fanzhen0019: 所以我说的都是建议啦 xD
01:19 fanzhen0019: 最后的决定权还是在你手上的嘛
01:19 DarknessAngel: 恩恩 我想留著這邊:>
01:19 fanzhen0019: 好的
01:21 fanzhen0019: 别的没什么了o.o
01:21 fanzhen0019: 音效的话 光soft-hitnormal太多了
01:23 DarknessAngel: 嗯? 有那種東西?
01:23 fanzhen0019: 就是啥音效都没有的底啦
01:23 fanzhen0019: 01:25:990 (8) - 比如这样
01:24 DarknessAngel: 喔喔 畢竟是只有人聲的地方
01:24 DarknessAngel: 有些時候是為了合小聲的背景音
01:25 DarknessAngel: 卻要跟vocal的時候
01:25 DarknessAngel: 我盡力下多點音效了的說lol
01:25 fanzhen0019: :o
01:28 fanzhen0019: 别的难度没啦
01:28 DarknessAngel: 咦 是這樣嗎
01:29 DarknessAngel: 那你覺得Another AR9 Hyper AR8怎麼樣?
01:29 fanzhen0019: 行啊o.o
01:29 DarknessAngel: 恩好
01:30 DarknessAngel: 好了的話就/savelog 貼我討論串 謝謝你的建議:>
01:30 fanzhen0019: 恩恩 :3

原来是老图remap!
加油!
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Natteke desu
As requested.
General :
Are you sure about diffnames? I think "insane" "hard" and etc. will fit better
[Another]:
Hitsounds ( btw, it applies to all diffs) :
00:14:205 (4) - finish on slider's head
00:15:705 (8) - your custom clap on slider's end
00:16:133 (1) - finish on head
00:18:705 (4) - finish
00:19:562 (1) - ^
00:20:205 (4) - and here
00:20:847 (8) - and here on first white tick
00:21:276 (1) - finish on head
00:34:990 (1) - yea, finish again
00:38:419 (1) - ^
00:41:847 (1) - ^
00:45:276 (1) - finish on head
00:48:276 (2) - try normalfinish here
01:03:062 (2) - claps on head and end
01:04:133 (3) - finish on head
01:04:776 (4) - clap on head
01:05:205 (5) - ^
01:05:847 (2) - finish on head
01:06:276 (3) - clap on slider's end
01:06:705 (4) - finish on head
01:08:633 (6) - ^
01:09:919 (2) - claps on head and end
01:10:990 (1) - finish on head
01:11:740 (3) - claps on head and end
01:12:062 (4) - clap on end
01:12:705 (1) - finish
01:13:776 (4) - ^
01:14:847 (7) - try drumfinish here
01:16:776 (2) - claps on head and slider's end
01:18:490 (5) - clap and finish on head plus clap on end
01:19:133 (6) - finish
01:19:562 (1) - finish on head
01:19:990 (2) - clap|slider's end
01:20:419 (3) - ^
01:21:919 (4) - clap on head
01:23:633 (3) - clap again
01:24:062 (4) - yea yea
01:24:705 (1) - drumfinish
01:25:133 (4) - whistle on head
01:25:776 (7) - whistle
01:25:990 (8) - finish

Other stuff:
00:26:205 (1) - well it plays a bit wreid because slider ends on white tic. Try use here two circles instead of slider here.

[Hyper]
00:19:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - real hard to read this with 7 ar
00:26:205 (5) - like I said earlier

Good luck!
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