Leorda wrote:

PONPONPONPONPON. Anyway, hi

General
* Using half-song for kiai is bad. I suggest you to begin at 00:17:295 no
* Ummmm, 2 diff with short MP3 is kinda boring, add 1 more diff? no
* Why there is no Kagamine Len BG? D: i think either can work
* I think "vocaloid" should add on tags... it's already in the tags ._.

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Normal
* AR +2 or +3? no

00:35:107 (2) - End this at 00:35:576. Just my feeling though no
00:45:654 (2) - 0,5x slider should be avoid in normal mode, because it makes newbies go confusing no

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Hard
* OMG!!! kanpakyin in the BG!!!

00:36:045 (1) - Remove new combo? ok
00:36:513 (2) - New combo? ok

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I can't find something wrong

EDIT : add some tags issue

Aleks719 wrote:

General
I get offset 2290 , (-5ms from yours) i'll wait until more ppl mod
Your kiai time longer than half of the song, imo it's too much :S that's how long the chorus is =.=
Ah, also you don't have a diff under 3 stars ;D normal is extremely easy and straight forward... star system is flawed

Hard
only one thing :
00:14:482 (3,4,5) - i thought it's 1/4 in the 1st try, it was a bit confused. But on the 2nd all was fine. Increase spacing a bit here, if you can ^^ no

Normal
Set slider tickrate 2, like in Hard, imo, fits better fixed
AR -1, AR5 looks so fast :S ok
00:49:404 - add note + clap? no
To be honest, I'm not sure in slowdown in Normal. Don't see a reason for it. because the vocals slow down on that part

Star

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-Tick rate 1? no
-half the song is kiai, perhaps remove some? no

Normal:

Fine

Hard:

-AR 8? no
-This seems quite hard for a [Hard] due to the jumps+streams, I'd recommend placing a diff in between.. the bpm is so slow... if i can DT this, i don't think it's an insane

00:14:482 (3,4,5) - for a [Hard], this seems out of place, perhaps space it out a bit? no

L_P wrote:

yeah, thanks for your mod

i strongly felt that you might need to edit the song....the beat is very loud haha

4.83
first slider got only one point...not saying ugly, but you can make it better. o_o
00:14:482 (3,4,5) - i hate this anti jump oh well
00:24:795 (1) - same thing with the 1st one ...
00:34:873 - add note, could make a jump also no
00:49:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - at first, to me that is weird. but for the second time it looks quite fine..but i remind you, it is still awkward spacing.

normal
00:14:013 (2) - this is a rare shape in normal not really...
00:38:857 (2) - something like this?http://puu.sh/5ZSl why?
00:49:170 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - for normal, i think that you could follow the clap, stacking the note. suggestion only no

generally, quite solid,nothing bad, but you HAVE to do your best to make a almost 5star diff. to make this being "concerned", right?
please star my map if you like it, something good will happen to you too haha

shikyu wrote:

hmm.... I think it's good enough, don'r see major mistake. But for hard spacings too hard even for slow song.

KingsAL2 wrote:

From WMF queue ~~~

=.=That song is tooooo short
And I can stat the only thing is

- The kiai time is over half of the song
^^^ That unrankable ^^^ The rules/guidelines page doesn't say it's unrankable.

Just change them and MAT plz =]

Good luck

merchat7 wrote:

As requested,
As there doesn't seem to be any errors in this map, I will try to give you idea to make your beatmap a bit more interesting.

[General]

Look fines, Normal feel easy enough for the easiest difficulty.

[Normal]

- 1.2x distant snapping will let you make more interesting patterns
- Generally not recommended to have a slider speed change in the easiest difficulty

00:07:920 (1,2,3,4) - Try a hexagon pattern http://puu.sh/61Pn Tweak it a little more so it look better than in the picture. i think the current pattern looks good
00:11:670 (1,2) - I like this more http://puu.sh/61PX. You will have to adjust the next combo through. i like the parallel pattern better
00:22:920 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/61Qp Nicer flow. maybe, but i prefer to have a pattern
00:26:670 (1,2) - Boring pattern, try something like this http://puu.sh/61QN no
00:49:638 (2,1,2) - Straight sliders, can you try something more interesting? i like it the way it is
00:52:920 (2,1.2.3.4) - Pentagon pattern instead, you will have to adjust the section a bit in order to do this http://puu.sh/61Rj. i like it the way it is

1.2x distant snapping would help make it easier to make interesting patterns, so consider it.

[Hard]

00:06:982 (3,4,5) - Make this jump smoother, something like this http://puu.sh/61RT. Better flow as well. i like it the way it is
00:07:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Similarly http://puu.sh/61Si Try something like this and tweak it a bit. didn't use your pattern, but changed it so that the spacing slowly returns to 1.00
00:14:482 (3.4.5) - Any reason why you want to keep this anti jump? If you want to keep this "feel." I suggest a repeating slider. If not, space it out / make it a jump. i don't really know why... i guess i'll change it since others question this too
00:22:290 (1.2.3.4.5) - Reduce the spacing just a little bit. Easiest way is using the scale tool (ctrl+shift+s) Reduce to 0.9x. reduced to 0.92x
00:51:045 (1) - Ugly slider, fix it to make your beatmap look nicer. what?

I don't really have any problem with the jumps except some could be smoother and one jump was a bit too much for my taste (all mentioned in my mod).

I'll star if you can come up with more interesting patterns in the part that i mention in Normal and make jumps smoother in Hard.
i didn't change normal so

Also, if you do not apply a mod, please tell me why not. For example, No, because (insert reason here). Good luck!
you're making my life more difficult rawr!

bmin11 wrote:

Song without an intro? weird

[General]
Huge gap between [Hard] and [Normal]. [Hard] is more of an [Insane] as well. I suggest you map another [Hard]. Shouldn't take you much time since the song is short. I also suggest mapping [Easy] if you have time. Always nice to have an easy difficulty I can several hard difficulties more difficult than this

[Hard]
00:45:654 (2) - It's hard to tell you modified the slider speed. I suggest you to increase the gap for those nodes so it's more recognizable If players can't tell the slider speed changed with 6nodes on such a short slider... disappointed

[Normal]
00:45:654 (2) - This slow down can really hurt those new players. Specially, this is the easiest difficulty. I really suggest you to lower the tick rate or map [Easy]. The slider velocity is slow to begin with... so the 50% decrease doesn't make a huge difference


That's all from me. Good luck!